Search found 8 matches
- 2009-05-14 11:33pm
- Forum: User Fiction
- Topic: Thus Spake Zarathustra: A Fantastic Apocalypse-A WIP
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2667
Re: Thus Spake Zarathustra: A Fantastic Apocalypse-A WIP
1. Read the rules. On the Annoucement page. 2. Note the banner. Read that third piece after *and*. 3. Really, throwing up information and going "What do you guys think?!" is inviting critism. You are honestly painting a target on your head and the material is poorly executed and concieved...
- 2009-05-14 11:16pm
- Forum: User Fiction
- Topic: A Grim Stagnant World:An Earth Gone Horribly Wrong- A WIP
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2705
Re: A Grim Stagnant World:An Earth Gone Horribly Wrong- A WIP
Take a protip from an actual history student (Finishing my degree in the fall) your world makes no sense. Sit down and try to understand the way the world worked and the WHY the world worked. Japan and American were never allies until Japan was beaten by America in WWII, in fact the offical Canadia...
- 2009-05-14 10:30pm
- Forum: User Fiction
- Topic: Thus Spake Zarathustra: A Fantastic Apocalypse-A WIP
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2667
Re: Thus Spake Zarathustra: A Fantastic Apocalypse-A WIP
I'm not an idiot and though I'll admit that my grammar sucks and the premise behind my other thread is in need of a Heavy overhaul I'm open to positive suggestions and if you want this problem of mine to go away (since the only way I'm leaving this forum is if I get banned and I want to stay) then h...
- 2009-05-14 10:08pm
- Forum: User Fiction
- Topic: Thus Spake Zarathustra: A Fantastic Apocalypse-A WIP
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2667
Re: Thus Spake Zarathustra: A Fantastic Apocalypse-A WIP
This gentleman comes from the United States. That doesn't mean anything, English still could be his second language. But, seeing this and his other WIP, I do not think his problems stem from poor English skills at all, but rather, from a different source entirely. Have a very nice day. -fgalkin I'l...
- 2009-05-14 10:05pm
- Forum: User Fiction
- Topic: A Grim Stagnant World:An Earth Gone Horribly Wrong- A WIP
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2705
Re: A Grim Stagnant World:An Earth Gone Horribly Wrong- A WIP
yeesh no need to be jerks I admit I didn't put enough detail into the initial post but I'll explain the map and worlds history as best I can 1.the date for the map is supposed to be earth early 21st century and the reason for why this world map is so screwy is A.) while I have a decent knowledge of ...
- 2009-05-14 12:06pm
- Forum: User Fiction
- Topic: A Grim Stagnant World:An Earth Gone Horribly Wrong- A WIP
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2705
Re: A Grim Stagnant World:An Earth Gone Horribly Wrong- A WIP
okay so I didn't know you weren't supposed to do that and my name has already been changedfgalkin wrote:Where is Russia? Also, are you aware that you share a name with one of our admins?
Your map is also too big. Please resize it so it doesn't break my screen.
Have a very nice day.
-fgalkin
- 2009-05-14 03:05am
- Forum: User Fiction
- Topic: A Grim Stagnant World:An Earth Gone Horribly Wrong- A WIP
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2705
A Grim Stagnant World:An Earth Gone Horribly Wrong- A WIP
This is a world where starting with multiple astronomical disasters in the late 1860's have led to a world of cruel and mighty empires, and wars fought with weapons of impossible science, monstrous creations that spit in the face of The Almighty, and forces beyond human knowledge and sane reality Ma...
- 2009-05-14 02:40am
- Forum: User Fiction
- Topic: Thus Spake Zarathustra: A Fantastic Apocalypse-A WIP
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2667
Thus Spake Zarathustra: A Fantastic Apocalypse-A WIP
A series idea of mine with art by kainsword17 that came from a challenge on another forum(The Insidious Bogleech) to create your own series and after writing out the outline below I asked another member of said forum who's a skilled and productive artist to do art for some of the characters for my s...