StarDestroyer.Net BBS

yes when I next work on this that will be the first thing I fix before anything else.

Grammar Punctuation etc.. it was late at night I was bored and itching to do something so I cranked that out.

i still have to research military structure for both sides i kept forgetting the name i made up and looking back was slowing me down. when I get time to redo this I am going to create a command tree on paper so I can glance at it anytime I need to remember a station or crew member name I just finish...

I realize that now I was avoiding using them since I tend to overuse them. reviewing others works I see they are used often and realized (duh it not over using when used properly

I am going to work on cleaning it up on Sunday!

I am definitely aware of that. I have horrid grammar. Laziness mostly. Either way I was bored last night and the stuff I read on here motivated me. I do a lot of day dreaming but never put anything down on paper. I will work on cleaning it up. I probably should have cleaned it up first but I was tir...

I decided to try my hand at some fan fiction. I am not skilled at this kind of thing so I am probably going to have to revise it quite a few times to clean it up grammar spelling etc.. Be gentle :-) this is just one short story a "battle fic" if you will of an encounter between a starship ...

is there a book for sale of this entire story?