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Re: Machinegun guy

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Hmm, his trigger-hand is really quite off, at a peculiar angle.

His boots/feet aren't too convincing for his position too.

Linework and colouring = fabtacular, though.
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Re: Machinegun guy

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I agree completely with Rye, here. Quick overpaint with suggestions.

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Re: Machinegun guy

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Thanks Feil, that will help immensely!
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Re: Machinegun guy

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I wouldn't base your re-draw on his lines, personally. His feet should roughly be pointing in the same direction as his torso and face. I would probably erase his legs completely and work out where they should go by checking where his spine is.
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