Starship: Original design: Azraelian Strike Cruiser

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Starship: Original design: Azraelian Strike Cruiser

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An afternoons worth of distraction. I really like modeling starships.

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In my opinion the fins make it look a little tacky, but I think it's better than that other human starship you posted. Nice work overall.
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I agree that the fins could go. Other than that, I really like it.
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I agree with the fins, if they contain lots of missile hardpounts (which is what it looks like) maybe they could bechanged to those missile launchers like on the B5 Warlock.
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Post by Einhander Sn0m4n »

I'm usually a wings kinda guy, but the other guys are right: the fins are meh. Try sweeping them back to something in the region of 30 to 45 degrees leading-edge sweep. :)

I LOVE the engines tho. They're to die for. May i suggest you extrude the central two out slightly, maybe about a quarter of an engine diameter? Or try angling the peripheral thrusters outward about 5 or 10 degrees. Otherwise, she's a good ship! :D
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Actually, it might work better to just reduce the size of the fins, like by about two-thirds.
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The fins are for cooling both the engine and the large guns at their tips. I'll consider reducing their size and angling them.
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I'd go against changing their angle.
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That is fucking awesome!
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Looks a bit like a Homeworld corvette.
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Looks like the ship from Titan AE.
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Do you have any good tutes that you could recommend so that I could give it a go?
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Very impressive.
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