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Hovertank

Posted: 2003-07-07 01:41pm
by Shinova
Horrible lighting, coloration, and those jagged lines aside :mrgreen: here's my first real work, a hovertank:




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Posted: 2003-07-07 04:18pm
by kojikun
agh. my eyes :P

i suggest you go here http://www.ap3d.com/betterspace/ and try to make the whitestar at the bottom of the tutorials section.

Posted: 2003-07-07 05:55pm
by Howedar
More polygons are good.

Posted: 2003-07-07 08:18pm
by thecreech
its a nice basic start but more polys are needed

Posted: 2003-07-07 09:40pm
by kojikun
if you want good opinions, go to scifi-meshes.com and post to their BB. just dont be even slightly mean to anyone, theyre not as nice and freethinking as we here at SDN can be.

Posted: 2003-07-07 09:55pm
by Shinova
Well, here's an update:



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Posted: 2003-07-07 10:37pm
by StarshipTitanic
Hehe, neat. Looks like something out of Tron.

Posted: 2003-07-07 11:32pm
by Howedar
kojikun wrote:if you want good opinions, go to scifi-meshes.com and post to their BB. just dont be even slightly mean to anyone, theyre not as nice and freethinking as we here at SDN can be.
Thats nonsense.

Posted: 2003-07-08 01:56am
by kojikun
Howedar wrote:
kojikun wrote:if you want good opinions, go to scifi-meshes.com and post to their BB. just dont be even slightly mean to anyone, theyre not as nice and freethinking as we here at SDN can be.
Thats nonsense.
You know its true. I sarcastically called something Flood did unoriginal and I got banned. BANNED. Then agian, I was on probabtion from a previous ban, but sarcasm shouldnt be punished.

Posted: 2003-07-08 02:59am
by Howedar
So in other words, you accused him of plagerism. I'd ban you too. And you'd already been banned once. God, there's a fucking shocker.

If they weren't nice and freethinking, you wouldn't have had the second chance.

Posted: 2003-07-08 03:28am
by kojikun
Howedar wrote:So in other words, you accused him of plagerism. I'd ban you too. And you'd already been banned once. God, there's a fucking shocker.

If they weren't nice and freethinking, you wouldn't have had the second chance.

no, i said planar shockwaves were unoriginal. i never accused him of plagiarism.

Posted: 2003-07-08 05:58am
by Kenny_10_Bellys
He's got a point, planar shockwaves are unoriginal. I can point you to tutorials dating back several years that will show you how it's done, probably dating from when it had it's first big outing in ST:VI. Plagarism is an entirely different thing, an altogether more heinous crime I've been the victim of in the past. To ban someone for saying something is unoriginal is a tad harsh, if it were out and out hatred or flaming for no good reason then by all means shut the loudmouth down, but not for expressing an honest opinion.

The tank is coming along nicely for a first model, I already passed on my comments to Shinova on another forum concerning it so I wont bore you all here with the details. Keep it up, Shin...

Posted: 2003-07-08 06:37am
by NecronLord
It looks a little like the Plasma Light Tank from Dark Reign. That is a good road to go down.

Posted: 2003-07-08 06:49am
by Warspite
Those edges, they are too... knife-edge. :wink:
Some bevel would do wonders for them.

Posted: 2003-07-08 01:24pm
by kojikun
Kenny_10_Bellys wrote:He's got a point, planar shockwaves are unoriginal. I can point you to tutorials dating back several years that will show you how it's done, probably dating from when it had it's first big outing in ST:VI.
You think old tutorials are bad, wait till you see the 3DSMax tool that is specifically MADE for planar shockwaves, allowing you to manipulate everything. I suggested to Floodcasso outside the message board that he should make a realistic spherical shockwave since it would be new and interesting, but he shrugged me off.

But anyway, the tank is interesting. Honestly, it needs a lot of work, but its an idea.

Shinova-- Two this: list all the things a hovering tank needs (forward propulsion, lift systems, weapons, etc) then build it from there.

Posted: 2003-07-08 02:04pm
by Kenny_10_Bellys
Here's an even better idea, dump it and move on. Build another, and another, or build something else entirely. You will hate this thing after a few days, as your skills will advance rapidly and you'll see so many ways it could be improved. Building stuff is the best way to learn how to build stuff, so get cracking and dont waste too much time on what is pretty much your first model. The next one you build will be twice as good because of the practice you've had.

Posted: 2003-07-08 02:07pm
by Einhander Sn0m4n
Kenny_10_Bellys wrote:Here's an even better idea, dump it and move on. Build another, and another, or build something else entirely. You will hate this thing after a few days, as your skills will advance rapidly and you'll see so many ways it could be improved. Building stuff is the best way to learn how to build stuff, so get cracking and dont waste too much time on what is pretty much your first model. The next one you build will be twice as good because of the practice you've had.
And practice on those spherical shockwaves, too. ;)

Posted: 2003-07-08 03:14pm
by Warspite
kojikun wrote: You think old tutorials are bad, wait till you see the 3DSMax tool that is specifically MADE for planar shockwaves, allowing you to manipulate everything.
That tool rocks! You're jealous because LW doesn't have it! :P

Too bad I think planar shockwaves suck, are over used, and generally tend to give away it's digital-ness, oh yes, and they suck.

Posted: 2003-07-10 01:13am
by Crown
Well I for one am going to compliment you Shinova,
it's far better than I could do!

Posted: 2003-07-10 01:37am
by Shinova
Crown wrote:Well I for one am going to compliment you Shinova,
it's far better than I could do!
Hey, that was done in around 8 hours, in my first try, right after building a bowl by following a tutorial step-by-step.


Lightwave is MUCH easier to use than it seems.

Don't be discouraged. :D

Posted: 2003-07-10 02:57am
by Crown
:shock:

This, bowl you speak of ...
It wouldn't be a vase siting on a wooden bench,
behind a tile covered wall would it?

I only ask because I am just about to start this tut myslef...
8)