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Digital painting: Random girl

Posted: 2003-08-30 01:43am
by kojikun
Opinions please. Constructive criticism is good, but be harsh. Be brutal. Then fuck off. ;p

Painted over this sketch from Computer Arts magazine.

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Posted: 2003-08-30 01:50am
by Einhander Sn0m4n
Looks like my drag queen friend Dominique DeLorean.

Posted: 2003-08-30 02:32am
by kojikun
Einhander Sn0m4n wrote:Looks like my drag queen friend Dominique DeLorean.
lol Does Dominique come preinstalled with a Mr. Fusion/

Posted: 2003-08-30 02:47am
by StarshipTitanic
Looks like that whale on MTV...

Posted: 2003-08-30 02:52am
by kojikun
StarshipTitanic wrote:Looks like that whale on MTV...
I'm not sure I want to know..

Posted: 2003-08-30 02:54am
by Utsanomiko
'Drag Queen' sums it up nicely; murky appearance, uninspired, and possibly reveals a lack of appreciation of the original picture or the vurtue of minimalism in general.

C-

Posted: 2003-08-30 02:56am
by kojikun
Darth Utsanomiko wrote:'Drag Queen' sums it up nicely; murky appearance, uninspired, and possibly reveals a lack of appreciation of the original picture or the vurtue of minimalism in general.

C-
Uh scuse me? Lack of appreciation of the original sketch? The original sketch was not meant to be minimalistic, it was created for the PURPOSE of being painted in digitally.

Posted: 2003-08-30 02:59am
by Utsanomiko
kojikun wrote:
Darth Utsanomiko wrote:'Drag Queen' sums it up nicely; murky appearance, uninspired, and possibly reveals a lack of appreciation of the original picture or the vurtue of minimalism in general.

C-
Uh scuse me? Lack of appreciation of the original sketch? The original sketch was not meant to be minimalistic, it was created for the PURPOSE of being painted in digitally.
Yes, but your coloration does not work with the original in a proper manner. It somehow manages to remove the depth and sharpness of the original lineart.

How long did it take you to do?

Posted: 2003-08-30 03:03am
by kojikun
Darth Utsanomiko wrote:Yes, but your coloration does not work with the original in a proper manner. It somehow manages to remove the depth and sharpness of the original lineart.
I noticed that afterwards. I was basing it off of their coloration. It was my first attempt, gimme a break :p
How long did it take you to do?
Eh.. an hour maybe? I dont know.

Posted: 2003-08-30 03:05am
by Utsanomiko
kojikun wrote:I noticed that afterwards. I was basing it off of their coloration. It was my first attempt, gimme a break :p
I did give you a break. I first considered giving you a D. :P

Posted: 2003-08-30 03:08am
by kojikun
Darth Utsanomiko wrote:I did give you a break. I first considered giving you a D. :P
Yeah well this is art, you should know that there is no absolute value with art. :)

Posted: 2003-08-30 03:30am
by StarshipTitanic
kojikun wrote:
StarshipTitanic wrote:Looks like that whale on MTV...
I'm not sure I want to know..
Anna something.

Posted: 2003-08-30 05:10am
by Fuzzy Modem
What proggie was this made in?

Posted: 2003-08-30 12:39pm
by Warspite
Meh, I can also draw a red "X" on a white background... :P

Posted: 2003-08-30 02:22pm
by kojikun
Fuzzy Modem wrote:What proggie was this made in?
Photoshop. There is a tutorial in the CA mag I got the pic from but it required software I didn't have, and I wanted to make something without using tutorials. :) ::glomps fuzzy::

Warspite: Sorry about that, my server shut down for some reason last night and it doesn't automatically return to windows so my server stays off until I put it back on.

Posted: 2003-08-30 02:59pm
by Warspite
You need some darker tones to enhance shadows and give volume to the face. (Ok, now I can fuck-off...)

Posted: 2003-08-30 04:01pm
by kojikun
added some shadowing. the compression is down alot so there might be some nasty artifacting.

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Posted: 2003-08-30 04:03pm
by Warspite
Much better!
Now for the left cheek and the chin... :)

Posted: 2003-08-30 04:24pm
by kojikun
Warspite wrote:Much better!
Now for the left cheek and the chin... :)
Bah. I don't know what to do, honestly. I'm not much of a fine artist. :p

Posted: 2003-08-30 05:05pm
by StarshipTitanic
Better, but she looks like she stores nuts in her mouth.

Unless it's Anna, which would be accurate.

Posted: 2003-08-30 05:31pm
by Warspite
kojikun wrote:Bah. I don't know what to do, honestly. I'm not much of a fine artist. :p
Don't stress out, I can't even draw a straight line with a ruler! (I'm exagerating, of course.)

You've managed a pretty good pic, drawing any part of the human body is very hard, just keep on drawing, you'll end up getting it right.

Posted: 2003-08-30 09:57pm
by Utsanomiko
kojikun wrote:
Darth Utsanomiko wrote:I did give you a break. I first considered giving you a D. :P
Yeah well this is art, you should know that there is no absolute value with art. :)
. . .

ME: Koji, your artwork messes up the original.
KOJIKUN: It's supposed to mess up the original.
ME: Koji, your artwork isn't very good.
KOJIKUN: It's not supposed to be very good.
ME: Koji, your artwork sucks royally.
KOJIKUN: Because all artwork, in truth, sucks royally?

Only yours Koji; only yours. :P

Posted: 2003-08-30 10:24pm
by StarshipTitanic
It's probably the time for you to "fuck off" now. :D

Posted: 2003-08-31 12:47am
by Fuzzy Modem
You really need to tone down the makeup. WAAAAAY to much.

I really like the nose. You got that just right. Right on the nose. :P