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Posted: **2004-01-03 02:12pm**

I've been working on this picture for two seperate people. Yeah, two, since the first one saw the original pencil drawing and decided to go in a different direction, so I turned it's use for someone else. I don't normally draw anime style, since deformed features like the super narrow waists bother me, but that was what was asked.

Anyway, her is my leprachaun lass.

It doesn't have a background as of yet and I was going to put a bounding circle around her which she can burst out of. Right now, I just want comments on her.

Posted: **2004-01-03 02:14pm**

It looks good, but the lines between the colors differing seem too rough to me. You might try softening them with a 3px, about 50% hardness brush. Otherwise it looks too much like vector art confused with anime.

~ver

Posted: **2004-01-03 02:14pm**

You need to caption it: "A cross-breed between Zelda and a leprechaun."

But it's well done.

Posted: **2004-01-03 02:19pm**

verilon wrote:It looks good, but the lines between the colors differing seem too rough to me. You might try softening them with a 3px, about 50% hardness brush. Otherwise it looks too much like vector art confused with anime.

~ver

That's because it is vector art confused with anime, I made it with Photoshops pen tool.

I could blend the colors and see how it looks, and see how it looks.

EDIT:
Here is what it looks like with the edges blurred a bit.
http://www.el-hazardonline.net/gilhamilton/zanddy1.jpg

Posted: **2004-01-03 02:43pm**

I like the shading either way, but i think the wrist of the hand making the peace sign is a little off, and her open eye looks a little confused, but otherwise, really cool.

Posted: **2004-01-03 02:59pm**

Yes, the open eye looks sad.

Posted: **2004-01-03 03:03pm**

Gil Hamilton wrote:
verilon wrote:It looks good, but the lines between the colors differing seem too rough to me. You might try softening them with a 3px, about 50% hardness brush. Otherwise it looks too much like vector art confused with anime.

~ver
That's because it is vector art confused with anime, I made it with Photoshops pen tool. I could blend the colors and see how it looks, and see how it looks.

EDIT:
Here is what it looks like with the edges blurred a bit.
http://www.el-hazardonline.net/gilhamilton/zanddy1.jpg

It looks better, to me, the second way. -shrugs-

~ver

Posted: **2004-01-03 03:44pm**

I'll see what I can do about the eye.

*mutters about why can't anime arts just draw almond shaped eyes, which are beautiful and perfect on girls*

EDIT:
Here is the change to the eye, it's a bit rounder, so she doesn't look as sad.

Posted: **2004-01-03 04:27pm**

But then the eye brow on the eye makes her look distressed of confused x_x, anime places alot of focus on the eyebrow and eye placement/shape, one must be very careful

Posted: **2004-01-03 04:33pm**

I suggest curving the eyebrow up a bit and bringing it a little farther down towards the nose.

Otherwise, a pretty Irish lass

Posted: **2004-01-03 05:18pm**

Draw a naked version.

(Speaking for the masses.)

Posted: **2004-01-03 05:48pm**

OK, played with the eyebrows some more.

Oh, and DP?
My friend Suzy, who is much more the manga-ka than I, is over right now as I type this. This is our dialogue when we read your comment.

Me: That's how this board is. All they care about it the T&A. Miscreants and savages, all of them.
Suzy: Give 'em what they want, man. Make that elf girl spread that pink!
Me: You'd have me draw my dear sweet fae lass naked and whoring it?
Suzy, Damn right, Dave, damn right.
Me: Maybe I should give her a pair of Glocks, double Ds, and a shit eating grin while we're at it and her being banged by an Ent?
Suzy: Couldn't hurt.

Just thought I'd share that.

Posted: **2004-01-03 05:53pm**

I like Suzy.

Posted: **2004-01-03 05:59pm**

DPDarkPrimus wrote:I like Suzy.

How old is Suzy is the question to be asked.

Posted: **2004-01-03 06:00pm**

Captain_Cyran wrote:
DPDarkPrimus wrote:I like Suzy.
How old is Suzy is the question to be asked.

seconded.

Posted: **2004-01-03 06:17pm**

I think her left arm looks kinda off. Maybe straighten out the bulge on the left side and round the right side a bit more to even it up.

I also think her ass should be rounded a bit more, and the fingers on her right hand could use a bit more definition.

So when is Suzy going to register?

Posted: **2004-01-03 06:37pm**

Yes. You must get Suzy here. Our predatory nature demands it.

Posted: **2004-01-03 07:19pm**

Gil, that looks ten times better.

Posted: **2004-01-03 07:22pm**

Sorry to nitpick (again), but make the eyebrow look like this: ^

That is a happy connotation. Other than that, the overall image looks good.

~ver

Posted: **2004-01-03 07:28pm**

Gil Hamilton wrote:OK, played with the eyebrows some more.
*snip pic*

Oh, and DP?
My friend Suzy, who is much more the manga-ka than I, is over right now as I type this. This is our dialogue when we read your comment.

Me: That's how this board is. All they care about it the T&A. Miscreants and savages, all of them.
Suzy: Give 'em what they want, man. Make that elf girl spread that pink!
Me: You'd have me draw my dear sweet fae lass naked and whoring it?
Suzy, Damn right, Dave, damn right.
Me: Maybe I should give her a pair of Glocks, double Ds, and a shit eating grin while we're at it and her being banged by an Ent?
Suzy: Couldn't hurt.

Just thought I'd share that.

Cool. Is she signing up?

And the leprecaun looks good.

Posted: **2004-01-03 07:32pm**

Darth Yoshi wrote:
Gil Hamilton wrote:OK, played with the eyebrows some more.
*snip pic*

Oh, and DP?
My friend Suzy, who is much more the manga-ka than I, is over right now as I type this. This is our dialogue when we read your comment.

Me: That's how this board is. All they care about it the T&A. Miscreants and savages, all of them.
Suzy: Give 'em what they want, man. Make that elf girl spread that pink!
Me: You'd have me draw my dear sweet fae lass naked and whoring it?
Suzy, Damn right, Dave, damn right.
Me: Maybe I should give her a pair of Glocks, double Ds, and a shit eating grin while we're at it and her being banged by an Ent?
Suzy: Couldn't hurt.

Just thought I'd share that.
Cool. Is she signing up?

And the leprecaun looks good.

Not is, dude. WHEN?

~ver

Posted: **2004-01-03 08:01pm**

Just because verilon thought it was a good idea.

And guys? Put yer cocks down, please, and stop congesting the thread with questions about my friend.

Posted: **2004-01-03 11:19pm**

Remember, if it weren't for me, she wouldn't have cared.

Posted: **2004-01-04 06:17am**

Cool! Looks like a female version of Link with the Oracle of Seasons stick-thingy he has on the cover (never played the game

). Her belt seems to be a bit too big for her, but maybe it's just there for the looks

.

Posted: **2004-01-04 09:04am**

I'm really digging the way it looks now, Gil.

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