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darthdavid
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This is a basic idea for a sig banner that i'm tossing around. How does it look?
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Post by Psycho Smiley »

While it isn't the easiest text to read, this is due to the flame effect, which is quite nice. So I say it's good.
An Erisian Hymn:
Onward Christian Soldiers, / Onward Buddhist Priests.
Onward, Fruits of Islam, / Fight 'till you're deceased.
Fight your little battles, / Join in thickest fray;
For the Greater Glory / of Dis-cord-i-a!
Yah, yah, yah, / Yah-yah-yah-yah plfffffffft!
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Post by KhyronTheBackstabber »

It looks pretty good, although I would make it a little less wavy. Not much, just a little less, so you can read it easier.
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MM's Zentraedi Warlord/CF's Original Predacon/JL's Mad Titan
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How's this?
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And while i'm at it, does anyone know of a good tutorial for making gunshots with the gimp? wingimp.org's confuses me. I think they may have left out a few steps because it never seems to make sense to my simple little brain.
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I think (assuming you're going for realistic flame effects) that the second one looks too streaky. It doesn't look like fire/lava anymore. I do, however, like the adjusted font itself better.
An Erisian Hymn:
Onward Christian Soldiers, / Onward Buddhist Priests.
Onward, Fruits of Islam, / Fight 'till you're deceased.
Fight your little battles, / Join in thickest fray;
For the Greater Glory / of Dis-cord-i-a!
Yah, yah, yah, / Yah-yah-yah-yah plfffffffft!
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