A render of my Azraelian Strike Cruiser, with new Fighters

Fuzzy Modem · Post by **Fuzzy Modem** » 2004-02-19 05:41pm

http://www.angelfire.com/dragon/fuzzymo ... proach.jpg

Critz?

Shinova · Post by **Shinova** » 2004-02-19 05:45pm

I see two problems:

1. The planets/moons are too plain.

2. The upper-left cruiser's engine glow washes out the rest of the vessel and makes it look pastel-like.

Spanky The Dolphin · Post by **Spanky The Dolphin** » 2004-02-19 05:54pm

The planets are fine, I think. But I'd get rid of the one in the right corner, or move it further out of frame.

Also, Shin, you should keep in mind that sometimes, artists want stuff like that to happen.

Shinova · Post by **Shinova** » 2004-02-19 06:38pm

Spanky The Dolphin wrote:Also, Shin, you should keep in mind that sometimes, artists want stuff like that to happen.

Bah. If an artist wants critiques, I'll give him all the critiques I can think of.

Though it's up to him to decide whether to do something about it or not.