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A render of my Azraelian Strike Cruiser, with new Fighters
Posted: 2004-02-19 05:41pm
by Fuzzy Modem
Posted: 2004-02-19 05:45pm
by Shinova
I see two problems:
1. The planets/moons are too plain.
2. The upper-left cruiser's engine glow washes out the rest of the vessel and makes it look pastel-like.
Posted: 2004-02-19 05:54pm
by Spanky The Dolphin
The planets are fine, I think. But I'd get rid of the one in the right corner, or move it further out of frame.
Also, Shin, you should keep in mind that sometimes, artists want stuff like that to happen.
Posted: 2004-02-19 06:38pm
by Shinova
Spanky The Dolphin wrote:Also, Shin, you should keep in mind that sometimes, artists want stuff like that to happen.
Bah. If an artist wants critiques, I'll give him all the critiques I can think of.
Though it's up to him to decide whether to do something about it or not.
