Alien Starship: DeathStroke Planet Killer
Posted: 2004-03-11 12:58am
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Less than a year after the war between the Curnali Empire and the Terran Hegemony ended in 2970, the Curnali were brutally wiped from the face of the galaxy by a still unidentified vessel.
This ship, now dubbed the 'DeathStroke' entered the Curnali solar system and promptly destroyed the entire Curnali defense fleet, sustaining no detectable damage itself. This done, the vessel proceeded to shatter 6 of the 14 planets of the system, including the Curnali homeworld. This level of destruction was achieved by a subtle manipulation of space-time that our best scientists can only guess at.
After the destruction of each planet the DeathStroke dove deep into the resulting debris field, into the still flaming remains of each planet's core. Here it collected a small orb of unknown origin and material, one from each destroyed planet.
With the 6 orbs now in they're possession the aliens left known space and have not been seen in over 400 years.
I spent about an hour and a half on this and, asside from any changes you may persuade me to make, I consider it done.
Crits?
Less than a year after the war between the Curnali Empire and the Terran Hegemony ended in 2970, the Curnali were brutally wiped from the face of the galaxy by a still unidentified vessel.
This ship, now dubbed the 'DeathStroke' entered the Curnali solar system and promptly destroyed the entire Curnali defense fleet, sustaining no detectable damage itself. This done, the vessel proceeded to shatter 6 of the 14 planets of the system, including the Curnali homeworld. This level of destruction was achieved by a subtle manipulation of space-time that our best scientists can only guess at.
After the destruction of each planet the DeathStroke dove deep into the resulting debris field, into the still flaming remains of each planet's core. Here it collected a small orb of unknown origin and material, one from each destroyed planet.
With the 6 orbs now in they're possession the aliens left known space and have not been seen in over 400 years.
I spent about an hour and a half on this and, asside from any changes you may persuade me to make, I consider it done.
Crits?
It will be nice though to see some textured pictures, with some background.
. Not to say it's not an original design, but it is reminiscent of the vorlons.
