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I keep thinking i should stick my art all in one topic instead of posting multiple topics.. perhaps next time i'll just make a general AnimeJet art topic o_O

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The elven archer is obscenely skinny, i don't like that.. it was an accident, i swear! Oh well, C&C >_<

AnimeJet wrote: The elven archer is obscenely skinny, i don't like that.. it was an accident, i swear! Oh well, C&C >_<

It is still better than anything I can hand-draw at the moment.


Both chicks look hot......you're headed in the right direction.

WOW.

That's really very good, hon. Nice work.

Crazy good.

The one on the rock...her boobies looks weird.

Good. Better than I can draw. Trust me.

RogueIce wrote:The one on the rock...her boobies looks weird.

It's probably the bikini.. thing.

In retrospect, i should have cropped the image more on the left and then moved the moon to the right a little more, would have been better composition.. oh well.

Thanks for the comments so far.

RogueIce wrote:The one on the rock...her boobies looks weird.

It's an anime rack. Perfectly normal.

Good job.

That's excellent work you've got right there.

I actually really like the archer. The mermaid's face looks a bit odd in profile like that - or maybe the outlining was too dark, I think it looks a bit odd.

Regardless, fine work.

The elven archer's face seems a bit flat, but otherwise I like it.

AnimeJet wrote:I keep thinking i should stick my art all in one topic instead of posting multiple topics.. perhaps next time i'll just make a general AnimeJet art topic o_O

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The elven archer is obscenely skinny, i don't like that.. it was an accident, i swear! Oh well, C&C >_<

Very nice. The archer looks very young (probably because she's so skinny), and the pose for the mermaid is pure T&A

You have some very good drawing skills AJ, very good.

YAY! Elven mermaid!

Melikes.

Yea, i'm trying to work on the different angles of the face, so i draw them more often, wooh. Thanks for all the comments and critiques

And a belated happy 18th birthday, Yoshi.

Thanks.

Shinova wrote:

RogueIce wrote:The one on the rock...her boobies looks weird.

It's an anime rack. Perfectly normal.

But they look detached, like they're floating in front of her..

I think the problem has more to do with the bikini (choker? not down with fashion) top, rather than any intrinisc fault of the boobs themselves.

Bob McDob wrote:I think the problem has more to do with the bikini (choker? not down with fashion) top, rather than any intrinisc fault of the boobs themselves.

It's the placement of the arms, they isolate and push together the breasts, plus the pose itself doesn't help.