A starship design of mine

Lord Revan · Post by **Lord Revan** » 2005-12-17 04:08am

ok this just the basic form with very little details (basically just the engines)

and resemblence to existing designs is unintentional

but anyways what do you think of it so far, is it worth developing or just pure crap?

NoXion · Post by **NoXion** » 2005-12-17 04:13am

Engines are too small. Make them bigger so as to look more powerful.

Also, I don't know how thick the "wings" are going to be, but it might turn out a bit flimsy looking. If it's much larger than a fighter you might want to bulk it out a bit.

But otherwise, it looks deadly.

Lord Revan · Post by **Lord Revan** » 2005-12-17 04:27am

NoXion wrote:Engines are too small. Make them bigger so as to look more powerful.

Also, I don't know how thick the "wings" are going to be, but it might turn out a bit flimsy looking. If it's much larger than a fighter you might want to bulk it out a bit.

But otherwise, it looks deadly.

it a cruiser and "wings" are the FTL drive.

as engines, I've tried to keep them as small a target as possible.

Lord Revan · Post by **Lord Revan** » 2005-12-17 04:41am

ok engines are a bit bigger now (as like keep ships at least semi realistic I don't want make them too big)

NoXion · Post by **NoXion** » 2005-12-17 04:43am

What kind of details are you planning to add to it?

Lord Revan · Post by **Lord Revan** » 2005-12-17 04:48am

NoXion wrote:What kind of details are you planning to add to it?

I don't know yet, I'm open to any suggestions (like Ein I use MSPain(t) so keep that in mind)

Lord Revan · Post by **Lord Revan** » 2005-12-17 06:20am

added a rear view.

Lord Revan · Post by **Lord Revan** » 2005-12-17 09:16am

the position of the main weapons (there's 3 beams (none of which are visible in the thumbnail(ok they're visible if you look really carefully)))

Bounty · Post by **Bounty** » 2005-12-17 09:21am

Looks like a Norexan with bent wings.

Might I suggest some more detail in the nose ? It looks a bit bland, shape-wise.

Gildor · Post by **Gildor** » 2005-12-17 10:00am

Well, I personally think the design is stealthy and interesting. Very deadly-looking.

Lord Revan · Post by **Lord Revan** » 2005-12-17 10:39am

Bounty wrote:Looks like a Norexan with bent wings.

Might I suggest some more detail in the nose ? It looks a bit bland, shape-wise.

there's absolutly no details in the hull (apart of the engines) atm but there will be (not much though as this is meant to be a stealth cruiser).

Bounty · Post by **Bounty** » 2005-12-17 11:50am

there's absolutly no details in the hull (apart of the engines) atm but there will be

I actually meant in the hull shape. Y'know, small ridges, subtle hammerhead design, something to give it a bit more character.

However, if you're going for the stealth look, I can see how you'd want to keep it smooth

Ford Prefect · Post by **Ford Prefect** » 2005-12-18 12:45am

I've always liked Revan's ship designs. So sleek.