"An Agreement" - New Colored Image (pg 6)

Feil · Post by **Feil** » 2006-07-12 11:34pm

I don't much like fantasy, I seldom like manga, and I don't like bishi, but this is excellent artwork and comicishness.

One thing that would make it easier to read for me is making the little bubbles with 'Yes...' and 'But...' at the top-left of the main bubble, rather than at a random point on the left of it.

Keep up the good work.

Incidentally, why does the son have breasts in the frame with the white-on-black text bubbles?

Pick · Post by **Pick** » 2006-07-12 11:36pm

Noble Ire · Post by **Noble Ire** » 2006-07-12 11:38pm

Excellent.

Even if they are fast works, they're very high quality. The hand on the first page is especially good.

Is "tyro" a slang term for a Llanellian grunt?

Pick · Post by **Pick** » 2006-07-12 11:47pm

Noble Ire · Post by **Noble Ire** » 2006-07-12 11:56pm

Pick wrote:"Tyro" is English...

Huh, you're right.

For some bizarre reason, I've never even heard that word before.

Vicious · Post by **Vicious** » 2006-07-13 12:16am

Why does dear old dad strike me as very, very familiar?

*cue Uraniun's "Ominous Cat"*

Anyways, very nice work, though I'd agree that the chat bubbles could be smoothed a bit, unless you did that intentionally. Either way, it promises to be very cool!

Darth Raptor · Post by **Darth Raptor** » 2006-07-13 12:20am

Did he use his own eyes?

Pick · Post by **Pick** » 2006-07-13 12:34am

Darth Raptor · Post by **Darth Raptor** » 2006-07-13 12:36am

Pick wrote:I dunno. I just kind of thought it looked cool.

I assumed it had something to do with the Bands' ability to "see" threats and targets.

Pick · Post by **Pick** » 2006-07-13 12:38am

Darth Raptor wrote:I assumed it had something to do with the Bands' ability to "see" threats and targets.

You're thinking more than I am on this one

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Duckie · Post by **Duckie** » 2006-07-13 12:42am

I would say how cool I think the pages are but it would just serve to denigrate them by expressing it in crude things such as words.

And ew, blood. Squick. Eyes are soft and bad to hurt.

Vicious · Post by **Vicious** » 2006-07-13 01:02am

Pick wrote:
Vicious wrote:Why does dear old dad strike me as very, very familiar?
Uhm, because everyone I draw looks the same?

Well, let's just say that if I were right, it'd be possibly one of the biggest plot twists in history and would make the Vader/Anakin thing seem shallow and pointless.

I can PM you with what struck me, if you like. I won't say it here though, in case I scored that 1 in 1,000,000 shot and am actually right for once.

Pick · Post by **Pick** » 2006-07-13 02:57am

Ford Prefect · Post by **Ford Prefect** » 2006-07-13 06:16am

Dammit Pick! That's too awesome!

Pick · Post by **Pick** » 2006-07-13 06:24am

Ford Prefect wrote:Dammit Pick! That's too awesome!

It's fucking killing me to use short, concise dialouge. Nooooooooo!!!

TheMuffinKing · Post by **TheMuffinKing** » 2006-07-13 06:31am

Simply stunning!

Ford Prefect · Post by **Ford Prefect** » 2006-07-13 08:00am

Pick wrote:
Ford Prefect wrote:Dammit Pick! That's too awesome!
It's fucking killing me to use short, concise dialouge. Nooooooooo!!!

There was a goddamn one word reply! Holy shit!

Darth Raptor · Post by **Darth Raptor** » 2006-07-13 08:16am

Pick wrote:I get to use sparkles. Because.

They're... spell effects! Yeah!

Noble Ire · Post by **Noble Ire** » 2006-07-13 12:29pm

Wow, the... um, Black King looks so... healthy.

And the sparkles suit him.

Darth Raptor · Post by **Darth Raptor** » 2006-07-13 04:39pm

Noble Ire wrote:Wow, the... um, Black King looks so... healthy.

Back then he actually had a shadow, instead of just... shade.

Pick · Post by **Pick** » 2006-07-13 05:18pm

Noble Ire · Post by **Noble Ire** » 2006-07-13 05:22pm

That's Desunius? She gets quite bulked when the wars actually going, it seems.

And no accent?

Pick · Post by **Pick** » 2006-07-13 07:33pm

Post by **Kuja** » 2006-07-13 10:02pm

Awwwwwww, he called her Dez!:luv:

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"An Agreement" - New Colored Image (pg 6)

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