"Portal" Fanfic

Master of Ossus · Post by **Master of Ossus** » 2003-07-08 01:49pm

Warspite wrote:Nope, definately, I can't pass the first chapter. The characters are all so... out of character...

Does anyone has confirmation on some rumours (heard it a while ago), claiming that he wrote Portal just to piss-off SW fans?

I can't confirm that, but it wouldn't surprise me.

Death from the Sea · Post by **Death from the Sea** » 2003-07-08 03:04pm

Master of Ossus wrote:
Warspite wrote:Nope, definately, I can't pass the first chapter. The characters are all so... out of character...

Does anyone has confirmation on some rumours (heard it a while ago), claiming that he wrote Portal just to piss-off SW fans?
I can't confirm that, but it wouldn't surprise me.

Come on there are two sides to every story and he just happened to pick that one. Aside from the whole tech deal, he portrays the characters incorrectly and that is why his fic sucks.

YT300000 · Post by **YT300000** » 2003-07-11 09:07pm

Sorry to bring back a thread that no one has responded to in days (gasp), but I found a perfect Graham Kennedy smiley:

consequences · Post by **consequences** » 2003-07-12 03:49pm

Nice Smilie.

I'm going in to finish the fic people, if I don't post in the next day or so, presume that I'm dead or worse.

consequences · Post by **consequences** » 2003-07-12 04:22pm

I think the onslaught of crap has numbed my brain. I know I should feel angry, but I don't. Words fail me, they truly do.

T-1000 · Post by **T-1000** » 2003-07-15 02:39pm

Even I had a pretty hard time swallowing all the Trek bias. That being said, I still thought the story was well written, creative, and had some extremely fun and enjoyable battle scenes.

Grand Admiral Thrawn · Post by **Grand Admiral Thrawn** » 2003-07-15 02:47pm

T-1000 wrote:Even I had a pretty hard time swallowing all the Trek bias. That being said, I still thought the story was well written, creative, and had some extremely fun and enjoyable battle scenes.

What?!

Chapter after chapter was "Watch ST kick SW ass" the battles were boring and poorly written, and Vader and Palpatine were replaces with Islamic Fundies![/i]

T-1000 · Post by **T-1000** » 2003-07-15 02:57pm

Grand Admiral Thrawn wrote:

What?!

Chapter after chapter was "Watch ST kick SW ass" the battles were boring and poorly written, and Vader and Palpatine were replaces with Islamic Fundies![/i]

The battles were fun to read in that a lot of people got killed, there was a lot of destruction and much blood!!!!

I didn't really care for how he wrote Vader or Palpatine, but I never said the story was perfect.

consequences · Post by **consequences** » 2003-07-15 08:27pm

You know, the truly sad thing is that he grants the GE the industrial capability to build at least one more DS1 in total secret, and A, doesn't think they can overrun the Federation on sheer numbers, and B, thinks they wouldn't install a freaking Grating over the exhaust port at the very least after the flaw was revealed.

Kurgan · Post by **Kurgan** » 2003-07-16 08:27am

No, he just said that some extra gun emplacements would be put up around the exhaust port.

Spanky The Dolphin · Post by **Spanky The Dolphin** » 2003-07-16 04:46pm

I only read the first few opening paragraphs (I don't think I got past the part where the E-E takes out all the first ISD's weapons), but only because I found it to be boring, uninspired, and way to smug in its actual mediocre quality...