I ran out of time to edit the document, so I'm reposting. The document was briefer than I expected, and much sloppier. Putting my counter-argument here.
It is over a year since cases of sexual abuse of children and youth by priests and religious at the Canisius School in Berlin were made public. A year has followed that has plunged the Catholic Church in Germany into an unprecedented crisis. The picture emerging today is very mixed. Much has been undertaken to do justice to the victims, to respond to all the wrong that has been done, and to search out the causes of abuse, cover-up, and double standards within the Church’s own ranks.
Not going to bother disputing this as even the Catholic Church doesn't dispute most of it. There is an exception though- the crisis is NOT unprecedented. There have been similiar scandals before.
After their initial horror, many responsible Christians, women and men, in ministry and outside of ministry, have come to realize that deep-reaching reforms are necessary.
Argument ad populorum.
The appeal for an open dialogue on structures of power and communication, on the form of ecclesial office, and on the participation of the faithful in taking responsibility, on morality and sexuality have awakened expectations, but also fears. Could it happen that what might be the last chance for a departure from paralysis and resignation be missed by sitting out or minimizing the crisis? For some, the disquiet of an open dialogue without taboos is not a comfortable prospect – especially since the papal visit [to Germany] will soon take place. Yet the alternative would even be worse: a “peace of the cemetery” because the last hopes have been extinguished.
A reasonable argument for the Church being open- but no evidence for why the Church should cede any of it's power. It isn't even theological- Peter is the rock on which the Church is built, not the faithful as a whole!
The deep crisis of our Church demands that we address also those problems which, at first glance, are not immediately linked to the abuse scandal and its cover-up that lasted for decades. We recognize our responsibility to contribute to a truly new beginning: 2011 must be the year of a new departure for the Church.
The document does not demonstrate any link whatsoever- this is rhethoric, not theology. 'New departure' is a cliche, not a reasoned argument.
In the past year, more Christians than ever before have left the Catholic Church. They have officially terminated their public membership, or they have privatized their spiritual life in order to protect it from the institution. The Church must understand these signs and must itself depart from ossified structures in order to recover new vitality and credibility.
This is a strong argument that something must be done- it is NOT an argument for theological reform.
The renewal of church structures will succeed, not with an anxious separation from society, but only with the courage for self-criticism and the acceptance of critical impulses – including those from the outside.
Although this comes close to the holes in Catholicism, I should note that Catholics would believe that they, especially senior members of the Church, have grace from God making them likely to be better than others. They have God's true theology as a bedrock for their deliberations- outsiders do not. Especially without any reasoned argument, nothing here applies.
This is one of the lessons of the last year: the abuse crisis would not have been dealt with so decisively without the critical accompaniment of the larger public. Only through open communication can the Church win back trust. The Church will become credible only when the image it has of itself does not completely diverge from the image others have of it. We address all those who have not yet given up hope for a new beginning within the Church and are committing themselves to this. We build upon the signals of a new departure and dialogue which some bishops have given in recent months in speeches, homilies, and interviews.
Again- a well-made argument for reforms of institutions. It is NOT a well-made argument for theological change.
The Church does not exist for its own sake. The church has the mission to announce the liberating and loving God of Jesus Christ to all people. The Church can do this only when it is itself a locus and a credible witness for the liberative good news of the Gospel. The Church’s speaking and acting, its rules and structures – its entire engagement with people within and outside the Church – is under the claim of recognizing and promoting the freedom of human beings as creatures of God. Unconditional respect for each person, respect for freedom of conscience, commitment to the law and justice, solidarity with the poor and oppressed: these are the theological foundational standards which arise from the Church’s obligation to the Gospel. Through these, love of God and neighbour are made concrete.
1- Freedom has never been part of the Church's message- not in the modern sense. The Christian God wants total submission.
2- Respect for 'human dignity', sure. But unconditional respect? Where does that come from?
3- Commitment to the law and justice perhaps, but what evidence do they have for this being a core view?
4- Yes the Church should do this. Why should it be a core thing?
Off the top of my head, I would suggest that spreading the Gospel in order to save souls and helping Catholics live good lives at the least should be there.
Finding our orientation in the biblical message of freedom implies a differentiated relationship to modern society. In many respects, it surpasses the Church when the recognition of each person’s freedom, maturity, and responsibility is concerned.
I've already covered freedom. As for maturity and responsibility, the Church respects the traditional idea of such- that Christian adults should be mature and responsible, but that to be responsible requires being a good Catholic.
The Church can learn from this, as already the Second Vatican Council emphasized. In other respects, critique of contemporary society from the spirit of the Gospel is indispensable, as when people are judged only by their productivity, when mutual solidarity is crushed, or when the dignity of the human person is violated.
The Church is not a vehicle for traditional leftism- if this were all the Church advocated, what makes it any different from a secular socialist group? The Anglican Church is a good example of where this route could lead.
It remains the case in every instance, however, that the Gospel’s message of freedom is the standard for a credible Church, for its action and its social shape. The concrete challenges which the Church must face are by no means new. And yet, it is hard to make out any traces of future-oriented reforms. Open dialogue on these questions must take place in the following spheres of action.
'Future-oriented' is a mere cliche. The Gospel's message is not fundementally one of freedom in the modern sense. This is all rubbish.
1. Structures of Participation: In all areas of church life, participation of the faithful is a touchstone for the credibility of the Gospel’s message of freedom. According to the ancient legal principle “What applies to all should be decided by all,” more synodal structures are needed at all levels of the Church. The faithful should be involved in the process of appointing important office-holders (bishop, parish priest). Whatever can be decided locally should be decided there. Decisions must be transparent.
1- Once somebody becomes a priest, they CANNOT stop being a priest. They can retire and stop practising, but they are still a priest. Even if you merely choose amongst ordiained priests, this means a lot go to waste.
2- If ordinary take control of the Church's structure, they may begin to distort it's theology and its essential message. If the people were more conservative, this proposal might have a point.
3- If people choose their priests, priests will be tempted to pander to their audience- overlooking their sins in order to stay popular with them. The same is true of bishops.
2. Parish Community: Christian communities should be places where people share spiritual and material goods with one another. But the life of the parish community life is eroding at present. Under the pressure of the shortage of priests, ever larger administrative entities (“XXL Size” Parishes) are constructed in which neighbourliness and sense of belonging can hardly be experienced any longer. Historical identities and social networks achieved over time are given up. Priests are overburdened and burn out. The faithful stay away when they are not trusted to share responsibility and to participate in more democratic structures in the leadership of their parish communities. Ministry within the Church must serve the life of the communities – not the other way around. The Church also needs married priests and women in ordained ministry.
Up until the last sentence, this is somewhat reasonable- the Church DOES need to encourage more community. However, no reason is established why this means it should break centuries of tradition and clear statements from the Gospel of Paul and the Church Fathers to allow women priests. Married priests perhaps (as that doesn't break the Church's divine constitution), but that should be a desperate measure- a priest by his nature must be devoted to his mission without distractions (backed up by Paul's gospel).
3. Legal culture: The recognition of the dignity and freedom of every human person becomes evident especially when conflicts are worked out fairly and with mutual respect. Canon law deserves its name only when the faithful can truly make use of their rights. It is urgent that the protection of rights and the legal culture within the church be improved. A first step is the creation of institutional structures of an administrative justice system in the Church.
Human rights are a modern concept alien to Church traditions. A better administrative system might be useful- other than punishing abusers, however, there is no reason for a rights culture.
4. Freedom of Conscience: Respect for individual conscience means placing trust in people’s ability to make decisions and carry responsibility. It is also the task of the Church to support this capability; this task must not revert to paternalism.
Have these Pelagians even read Augustine? Going from Augustinian theology, humanity is permanently reduced and dependent upon God and will always need Him. The Church is paternalistic for the same reason the government of modern times is paternalistic- in it's view, the paternalism is needed.
It is especially important to take this seriously in the realm of personal life decisions and individual life styles. The Church’s esteem for marriage and for the unmarried form of life goes without saying. But this does not require the exclusion of people who responsibly live out love, faithfulness, and mutual care in same-sex partnerships or in a remarriage after divorce
So you're refuting thousands of years of tradition, explicit quotes from the Bible, the statements of the Church Fathers, and more with what? The claim that it's 'paternalistic'? Pathetic.
5. Reconciliation: Solidarity with “sinners” presupposes that we take seriously the sin within our own ranks. Self-righteous moral rigourism ill befits the Church. The Church cannot preach reconciliation with God if it does not create by its own actions the conditions for reconciliation with those whom the Church has wronged: by violence, by withholding law, by turning the biblical message of freedom into a rigorous morality without mercy.
A rigourous morality is what the Church NEEDS- the path to Christ is a 'narrow road'. Other than that, reasonable but no argument for theological change.
6. Worship: The liturgy lives from the active participation of all the faithful. Contemporary experiences and forms of expression must have their place in it. The Eucharist and other celebrations of the sacraments must not become frozen in traditionalism. Cultural diversity enriches liturgical life; this is not compatible with a tendency toward centralized uniformity. Only when the celebration of faith takes account of concrete life situations will the Church’s message reach people.
There is a limited degree within Church theology to which rituals can be changed- but outside its natural limits, the sacrament becomes INVALID and useless. Uniformity helps to emphasise the unity of the Church- cultural diversity may look interesting, but comparing and contrasting not only distracts from the message but from the unity of the Church.
The dialogue process that has already begun in the Church can lead to liberation and a new departure only when all participants are ready to take up the pressing questions. Through a free and fair exchange of arguments solutions have to be sought that lead the Church out of its crippling preoccupation with itself. The tempest of the last year must not be followed by a period of rest! In the present situation, this could only be the “quiet of the grave.” Anxiety has never been a good counsellor in times of crisis. Christian women and men are compelled by the Gospel to look to the future with courage, and walk on water as Peter did, spurred by the word of Jesus: “Why do you have fear? Is your faith so weak?”
Jesus has been taken out of context here- he was trying to get Peter to have the faith to do miracles, not trying to get him to change theology. No real argument here.