Pebkio wrote:The first thing I noticed is the most obvious: This is not an essay. I was being naively kind to this 108-page grouping of forum posts. Jim Raynor spent (on-and-off) six months of his life typing arguments at a video review. This is not an intricate insightful response to what he claims is babble. He's babbling right back, and the only reason why it was 108 pages is because he babbled about every tiny thing that Plinkett babbles about in the video. It was tripe that was on the very same level intellectually as the review itself.
Oh this is funny. I
directly addressed each of Stoklasa's points, providing extensive quotes as well as the
specific times in the video when he said those things. I brought up evidence and provided numerous other quotes from the movies. I spent a lot of time explaining Qui-Gon's characterization, supported by yet more details and quotes. When Stoklasa had rather simplistically dismissed him as "stern" and nothing more.
Yet I wasn't "intricate" or "insightful" enough for this Pebkio guy. Whatever.
Well, there's my thoughts about the Plinkett Review in general: I thought that the Plinkett Review was tripe that wasn't very intelligent.
Well, at least you didn't call
his review "insightful," which too many people on the internet have.
And if I were arguing for the movie, I would not use this 108-page waste-of-time to support those arguments. I am personally disappointed in this entire thing, because I see all the time spent as potential for clear-minded counterargument... then seeing that all it features is some guy's manuscript of what he was mentally yelling at his monitor.
You wouldn't use a point-by-point rebuttal that quotes each point and cites the times, in a counter-argument to the very thing that I was refuting...
When the question of why the Trade Federation looks and acts like a military (not like a conglomeration of merchants and trade unions), Jim explains that it's because they're the direct threat and need to feel like an oppressive force of evil. Fine sure, but that's why the Storyteller would want them to be a militaristic group, not why the logically would be a militaristic group.
What "logic" are you talking about? The Trade Fed has some military muscle behind it. Which makes it no different than lots of big bad businesses in lots of other movies.
When the point that Obi-Wan is making up shit to get the Gungans to cooperate, Jim explains that the character's motivation was to get the Gungas to cooperate. The story called for it, so that's what Obi-Wan did. But that's why a director tells an actor to do something, not why a person in any real-life situation would do anything. No matter the medium used for telling a story, the characters in that story aren't supposed to follow the direction of the pages (except in extremely artsy stories like Heinlein's "The Cat Who Walks Through Walls"), they follow their own motivations based on their personalities.
This is just funny now. Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan are sent on a
mission to help the Naboo. The Trade Federation does not negotiate with them, but rather tries to
kill them. The Jedi see the invasion army, and on the ground some droids from that army tries to kill them again. Qui-Gon goes to the Gungan city, rather explicitly because Jar Jar told him that the Gungans could help. At the end of that scene with the Gungan leader, Qui-Gon uses a mind trick to secure that help. It's
pounded into the audience's head that the Jedi are there to get help for their mission.
Yet Pebkio here acts as if the Jedi didn't have sufficient "motivations based on their personalities" to want something as simple as
some help. As if there's some personality type out there that wouldn't want some help against the people who just tried to kill you. His wording also makes it seem as if he didn't think that Stoklasa was being dense by acting as if the Jedi were "making shit up" for thinking that there was an invasion
after seeing the invasion.
Now, I didn't want to directly argue against a point that Jim made, but this was just wrong. He portrays the Jedi Council as stupid. More than stupid, he assumes that the Jedi council is trying so very hard to be cold that it'll drive them to making poor choices. This section (pages 74-75) puts forth the idea that the Jedi council is uncaring to the point of evil by not saving a woman from slavery. A child's parents will always represent a personal attachment. The personal attachment could be very weak if the child was taken at age 2 and never-ever allowed to see the parents again, but it would still be there. Which, by the way, brings up as to why would anyone in a democratic-republic would ever give their children to such an evil organization as the Jedi Order who basically kidnap the kids - never to be seen again.
It's
explicitly shown in the movie that the Jedi are disapproving of Anakin's (perfectly natural) personal attachment to his mother. And again, I'd like to know of real-life government agencies that go out of their way to buy off slaves (and finance human trafficking) in other nations.
Your comments in this post of yours are what's tripe.