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The problem is that it isn't anything except speculation on your behalf.
Nothing wrong with that, most of what we do here is speculation, that doesn't mean it can't be fun!

I don't have to admit any possibility, because EVERYTHING is possible.
But some possibilities are more possible than others. ; )
The burden of proof is on you to give convincing enough arguments, instead of giving exceptionally vague examples.
To give more than I have already would require a research paper, similar to the site Mr. Wong has put up, complete with full text quotes, screen caps, etc. Or an in depth essay. Who knows, it's a good idea, though I really didn't plan to do it right now, since the principle opposition (which would insist on it) seems to be based on nitpicking.

If the idea offends you, you don't have to accept it, nor do you have to accept my opinion as truth.
Maybe they inspired each other, maybe they were inspired by the same thing. You put much more weight in the first possibility and nearly none in the second, and say lots and lots of stuff trying to explain why it's not the MORE likely one.
Well, there's a reason for that. Let's use a little quick example from something else we might be more used to hearing about.

Torpedoes.

We know torpedoes exist in real life.

Star Trek uses "photon torpedoes." Okay, that's kind of a sci fi way of putting a ship/sub based weapon into use on a starship.

Star Wars (created 10 years later) uses another sci fi weapon called "proton torpedoes."

Both examples are big boomy weapons that glow brightly (unlike real torpeodes).

Obviously, Star Trek's weapon was inspired by "real life" with a sci fi spin put on it. Did Star Wars merely use real life torpeodes as an inspiration? Or did it take Trek's idea, and spin it a little bit, so its about protons now instead of photons (it even rhymes, and is spelled the same except for one letter, even looks similar)?

It doesn't take a boatload of research to see that similarity. And no, it's not impossible that indeed the similarity is just a coincidence, but I think its good enough for me. ; ) We're speculating about fiction here, and comparing it to other fiction, purely for fun and the sake of argument, true enough.

Yes, and they're so vague, and I said it over and over.

Vague, perhaps, if you haven't read the first three "Dune" novels and hav at least a passing familiarity with them. If you've only seen the two movies, it might be very confusing, and probably unconvincing (since the movies were made LATER and thus had try to keep up with precendents set by prior sci fi flicks).

Somebody who hasn't read "Outlander" and the other references to Sandpeople, and who hasn't seen "The Searchers" or any of the other sources I mentioned would similarly be at a disadvantage, not being able to see for themselves if I wasn't just bullshitting. True enough.

I guess I just have to hope that people contributing to the discussion have gone over those materials. And if they still don't agree, that's fine, it wouldn't be a discussion if I was just ramming my viewpoint down your throat. ; )

Like that both people like water, because it's hard to get and they'd die without it. Real people do it all the time when stuck in the middle of some desert.
It's not the same thing. How many people do you know go around forming war parties, and massacring villages in order to steal water, or incorporating it in religious rituals? These are very specific things that go beyond the "ordinary." Much like the desert example. Sure, there are people who live in deserts, but how many people live in the deep desert of a planet that is entirely made up of desert?

Nonono, you've got it all wrong. A work of fiction that borrows from another work of fiction can be considered

derivative. Fortunately, a work of fiction that borrows from real-life examples (so, what doesn't?) isn't at all derivative work. Unless you think that we're characters in a novel and the writers are going to sue us.
I am not about to make a proposal for Herbert's estate to sue Lucas's for copyright infringement. That was not the purpose of my posts at all. I might as well ask the creators (or more likely their estates and/or current owners) of Flash Gordon, Ford's films, Kurosawa's films, etc and everything else that Lucas used, that wasn't entirely in the public domain.

No, I don't have any problem whatsoever with Lucas borrowing ideas from sources he likes for his stories. I don't care if he borrows from history either, as many authors do it. There are all kinds of references to the American Civil War in AOTC for example. I would not try to argue that he's trying to rip off the movie "Gettysburg" or "Glory."

Saying that the Sandpeople are taken entirely from real life Arab nomads ignores the similarities between them and the Fremen, which real life nomads do NOT share. That is my point. To ignore that qualification is to make a strawman of my argument (and it's not really an argument, but it's turned into one).


That you say that if copying a book is derivative work, then copying real life is also derivative work.
Plagiarism is illegal, and unethical (by today's standards), but I'm not arguing for that. I'm arguing for inspiration, and for similarity. There's nothing inherently wrong with that. If it's okay to admit that Star Wars took inspiration from sources such as Flash Gordon, and serial cliffhangers, why is it wrong to say it took inspiration from other sources (such as Dune)?

The argument that all apparent references to Dune in Star Wars can be attributed instead to historical references alone is shaky at best, knowing what we know about the development of Star Wars in Lucas's mind (as he's told us) and as its developed in the course of the five (and eventually six) films (and the expanded universe, which of course is derivative of his original work).
You misunderstand. If you read the major part of the paragraph (the part without 'wrong' in it) you'll see that you find it more likely that one author takes a real-life example, adds a lot of stuff, and then another one copies it, except that it removes the extra stuff (thus leaving only the original real-life example) and adds his own stuff - than simply recognizing that neither of them invented the wheel.
I tried to use examples in which the Fremen and Sandpeople were alike or similar. Both live on a desert planet. No real life nomads that I know of live on a desert planet. I don't know about warrior societies, living in the deep desert that are as fanatical and violent about water preservation as those two fictional peoples. The relationship the two have with their surrounding communities, and their relationship with their desert animals helps to make them close kin.

In the movie there are very few banthas.
There are very few Sandpeople. Obi-Wan and Luke talk about them while they examine the wreckage of the Jawa sandcrawler. Obviously they have a reputation for riding Banthas into their violent raids (the tracks). Stormtroopers were either able to fake the Bantha tracks, or rode Banthas of their own.

Since most of the movie doesn't take place in the deep deserts of Tatooine, it makes sense that we wouldn't see many Tuskens or Banthas. But we do see them when Luke sets out to find R2D2 and is subsequently ambushed by them.

In Return of the Jedi we see a herd of wild Banthas in the deep desert on the way to the Pit of Carkoon (as I mentioned before, that big head that was added in the Special Edition reminds one of a Dune sandworm). The Phantom Menace doesn't show any Banthas that I recall, and we only see a few Tuskens taking potshots at racers (who appear to travel out past civilized regions of the area... perhaps its the Tuskens way of protesting the race in their territory? or just a chance to pick up some easy salvage). In the AOTC novelisation, it is mentioned that "Bantha poodoo" (which I guess they mean bantha droppings, even though the term is defined as "fodder" in earlier Star Wars movies) is covering some of the sensors... which indicates that the Tuskens are getting bolder and closer to the Lars compound, because where there are Banthas, there are Sandpeople...

I believe there are a few brief fly-overs in which we see Banthas in the city of Tatooine (in AOTC) but I'd have to look over them again more closely to be sure.
Ok two things:
* there's nothing odd about people who can't invent their own water to pillage for water. Bandits pillage for anything they can't get by other means. Food, women, whatever.
Sure. The Fremen and the Sandpeople are both established as *water* specific bandits, although the emphasis for the Sandpeople is less evident in the film itself (see the screenplays/novelisations for more canon details however).

* whatever book it was, I assume it's EU. You don't seem to understand that having some say in what gets published or not DOESN'T MEAN that Lucas writes this stuff and then mails it for other authors to publish. It's ludicrous to assume that.
I never claimed or assumed that Lucas wrote the EU material. But he does approve it, either personally or through his lawyers and subsidiary companies.

I don't think that Episode I Adventures is pure canon. It is based in PART on the screenplays/deleted scenes from the Phantom Menace and the novel, which are part of the canon. In all other aspects its EU (and therefore "quasi-canon" according to where it doesn't conflict with canon, as per the rules established by Lucas's companies and understood by this site). Outlander is EU, so is Darksaber. The TPM and AOTC screenplays and novelisations are canon, after the films.
Except that real-life examples already have most of your 'unique characteristics' in them, all at once. Don't nitpick on each of my arguments separately and out of context.
The fact that they both live in the deep desert of an all desert planet is something that they share that is not present in real life (obviously). The fact that they share other common characteristics just helps to complete the picture.

I could even argue that since the Fremen are based on "real life" nomads and tribesmen in harsh environments, whatever similarities the Sandpeople share with those real life nomads is due merely to the fact that they're inspired by the Fremen, and thus carry the same earmarks of these real life nomads.

However, I can hear the criticism now... "you're assuming what you're trying to prove." When looked at in the realm of literary science fiction, its not really much of a stretch. Dune shows us a desert nomad society of fierce warriors, obsessed with water, and bonded to hardy desert creatures. It is a success. Some time later, another science fiction success story appears, and it has some characters that remind us of the Fremen. If Star Wars had come out first, I would have had the same reaction to Dune, had the roles been reversed. Obviously, Herbert put a lot more time and effort into explaining the Fremen in detail, as they form the centerpiece for his stories. The Sandpeople are only minor background characters in Star Wars (so far) and so they are fleshed out less.

To me, they are kind of like the "klingons" of Star Wars (in that they've become something of a stereotyped one-note race). I don't mean that in an insulting way.

If Star Wars had been first, it would have made sense to note that first Lucas introduces a race of people and then Herbert borrows his idea and expands upon it, changing some things along the way. Instead, we have Herbert's idea, and Lucas using a similar idea, but not doing much with it.

As to the nitpicking, my own arguments are being nitpicked, so I don't see the problem there. Turn-about is fair play, I'm afraid.

I just put the "warriors" part in the same pot with all the other "want water", "protect from elements", "develop kinky feelings for their animals". Not to mention that most of these are in the EU which isn't George's work.
Of course, as we know, wherever the EU doesn't contradict the core canon, its part of the "official continuity." At least that's what people like Mr. Wong here have made convincing enough arguments for. I concur with that assumption. I've pointed out reasons why I still think that talking about the EU is relevant (by virtue of the "looking at same sources for inspiration" argument, and the POSSIBLE "consult Lucas on core characters/concepts for contradictions" idea).

It's more common in Sci-Fi to bring back archaic stuff (even in a futuristic way) than you seem to realize. Honestly, Dune's approach is more conservative (people still use combat knifes even when they pack heavy machineguns and other kinds of armament, and there are lots of knife-fighting duels even now). It's a bit like saying that when weaponry gets advanced enough people will stop throwing punches. Star Wars is much more blatantly "medieval swords and sorcery/swashbucklers" than Dune.
Both make use of medieval imagery and ideas. Although Star Wars borrows from many varied time periods (Roman Republic/Empire, Cold War, American Civil War, British Empire, American frontier west) in addition.

Dune's galaxy is ruled by an Emperor, and the great houses of the Landsraad (world's ruled by noble families), according to a revised "feudal" system, much like the one used in Europe during the middle ages. Swords and other bladed weapons are the elegant and necessary training of lords and ladies.

Of course we know that Star Wars has the whole swashbuckling society of the Jedi KNIGHTS and its share of princesses, queens, and its Emperor.

The Arthurian legends (and tales of other heroes, like Roland and Oliver, Charlemagne, etc) do more to popularize the middle ages than anything else, and inspire these kinds of things. The exploits of the Samurai also come to mind, and as portrayed in films like those done by Kurosawa.

Obviously there you have an example of something that is historical, but also fictional. The Arthurian legends are fictionalized accounts of real events (in some places) and outright fantasy in many others (combining characters, changing locations, names, and situations to make a better story). So to, I would imagine stories of the Samurai being. They wouldn't be read as straight history, but as entertainment and something to get moral lessons from.

On another side note, just so you don't think I'm being overly critical and attacking Star Wars (I love Star Wars, better than I like Dune). In the (much hated by fans) "Highlander 2: the Quickening," the Immortals are shown being from a planet called "Zeist" which appears to contain vast deserts (we don't know if its all desert or not) and there is a war being conducted by robe-wearing rebels, and both sides use mostly swords and other bladed weapons in battle (with a few slug thrower type guns). There is a scene that plays out in it remarkably like some of the ones shown in the two "Dune" movies. It came out in 1990, so I don't have any problem with labelling that part as being "inspired" by Dune.

Even the fact that the Immortals are said to come from "another time and place" rings true with the lost history of the Fremen, as being exiles, outcasted and wandering from their original homes.
Science Fiction, being a branch of regular Fiction, is allowed and even encouraged to borrow from all kinds of Fiction archetypes.
I agree. And what better way to celebrate that fact than by appreciating some of the things that have inspired the stories we love? Saying that X inspired Y shouldn't diminish our love for either. Yet it seems that I'm being told that I can't make a comparision in this case, and I don't know why.
Somehow you are managing to build a 100 km long chain with all those links you got from some evil race we see during 15 seconds in a movie!
Its in the spirit of a site like this to ponder such things. What would you rather talk about? Something that's already been done to death like the calcs for the destruction of Alderaan or how midichlorians work? Each of those things hardly takes up much screen time in the grand scheme of the movies either, and yet we have pages and pages written about it here and other places on the 'net and in fandom. It's okay to be a geek. ; )
You really really seem to think that EU guidelines are pretty much George Lucas writing all of the novels in advance and then sending it to authors for them to put their name on them and then publish it.
That's a strawman caricature of my argument, and you know it. ; )

While some of Star Wars's canon literature used ghostwriters (and its canon), the majority of it isn't. But we both know that somebody can't just publish a Star Wars novel without going through Lucas's lawyers or even Lucas himself. How specific those guidelines may be is anyone's guess. I welcome anyone with that information to post it here, it would be interesting.

But in order to have continuity in a "canon universe" as Star Wars attempts to do, you have to have some sort of agreement as to what fits and what doesn't. So if the writers dont' talk to Lucas, they at least have to talk to each other, to keep it all straight. I know that a lot of the EU has been thrown up in the air due to the prequels, but that's the past. The same kind of thing happens with a novel like "Splinter of the Mind's Eye" (having been written during the time before the classic trilogy was finished).

It sounds like you think that the lawyers thought of every single word/idea in each novel and then told the author to write it, instead of the author thinking up an idea and then asking the lawyers/Lucas if it's okay.
Another strawman falls over...

Let's imagine that you're an EU author. You write a book based on Boba Fett, and start getting inspiration of all Clint Eastwood movies for things for Boba to say and do. Then Lucas says it's not out of character or anything, and you publish it. Then I read your book, and begin telling everyone how Lucas borrowed his idea of Boba Fett from Clint Eastwood.
If I "see" Clint Eastwood in the original material, and it isn't denied outright by Lucas himself, then I see no reason why that can't be a valid hypothesis. Note you said it "wasn't out of character." If it were incorrect, it would surely by out of character, wouldn't it?

In your example, the Author doesn't even NEED to think that Lucas was inspired or not by King Lear! The author might just think that there are a few nifty things in King Lear that he can draw inspiration from, and then put them in his novel! Then you'll go to Lucas and start complaining that he drew inspiration from King Lear!
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I think were getting into an attack on my motives. I'm not trying to call Lucas a liar, or make grounds to sue him, I'm merely pointing out what I see as another (among the many) inspirations from previous entertainment fiction that built Star Wars. Since I'm not out to ruin Lucas or destroy Star Wars, why is it wrong for me to look for comparisons?
You make this big leap in logic because in RETROSPECTIVE you can say that everything may strengthen/weaken any argument you want, that this was inspired by that or that F.H. is a Nazi or whatever...
Again, making a comparison is not a leap in logic. I take the EU into account when making my argument, but rather than hurt the argument, it helps it. I honestly believe that. I am not sure what you're trying to nitpick about here, but it sounds like a nitpick, nonetheless.

You fail to realize that these authors are ADDING to Lucas' stuff, they're making their own decisions and borrowing from anything they want, as long as it doesn't CONTRADICT canon.
That is true, but we also know that they are (at times) being inspired by some of the same sources as Lucas (diliberately), and so its not incredible to see a case of that happening here.

You believe that contradicting Canon is so easy that it is a requisite to follow a rigid set of exact guidelines to write your stuff (to the point that most of it is pre-written).
Now that's definately a strawman. ; )
The easiest way to avoid polluting Canon is to write stuff that won't have any the slightest influence in Canon stories, like making an adventure about Chewie tring to have a zit removed!
I would think the easiest way would be to set your events as happening after all the movies (or way before), and involving brand new characters, not found in the movies. These approaches have been widely used, as we know, by EU authors, (some to great success).

Since Lucas owns the IP copyright on the characters, situations, and original stories, he has the write to maintain creative control over them. That means, that like it or not, he gets to put his stamp of approval on each and every product that touches his universe... even if he does it vicariously through his crack team of lawyer commandos. ; )

Somebody as wealthy and well-known an entertainment creator/owner as Lucas can't afford to let people screw around with his property without his permission (not when there's money involved).

Star Wars has its policies involving how the expanded universe works. I'm not going to get into specifics of what every author has to go through, since I don't have those facts in front of me, suffice to say, they have to go through Lucas to put the Logo on the cover and sell it, period.
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As I said, it's easy to judge stuff on RETROSPECTIVE.
I guess I'm not sure what you mean when you say "RETROSPECTIVE" here...
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I believe the main problem is upon any cursory glance...the Tusken Raiders and the Fremen have too many differences that are easily surfaced versus the whole idea that one is derived from the other.

Usually when one derives something from another piece of fiction you retain certain elements, which the Tusken Raiders lack a great deal of. You try to use the Banthas, and their group mentality but in comparison to that of Arab nomads or a fictional group most cursory glances would favor the nomads because the analogy from Banthas to camels and how the Tusken Raider village was formed(in AoTC) has far greater similarities then using Sandworms and Stieches.

Literally also saying he derived more work when even the author laughed at this notion does not help either.

Plus using EU as a defense towards a movie thought is a fallacy since it has been shown that Lucas cares not one whit and what he wants to change he will.
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Its not a fallacy when one considers that the EU is approved through Lucas and forms part of the "official continuity."

If the Sandpeople as portrayed in the EU contradict his official vision for them, then he could make them change it. He hasn't, so it must be good enough.
Literally also saying he derived more work when even the author laughed at this notion does not help either.
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Kurgan wrote:
The problem is that it isn't anything except speculation on your behalf.
Nothing wrong with that, most of what we do here is speculation, that doesn't mean it can't be fun!
There's a lot wrong with it. Read the "anything except" part, that means that you have absolutely nothing on your behalf except speculation. Speculation by itself is worthless. I can speculate that Frank Herbert ripped everything off from Romeo & Juliet and not provide a single shred of evidence for it.
I don't have to admit any possibility, because EVERYTHING is possible.
But some possibilities are more possible than others. ; )
Except that you haven't proved that it is. Try to understand that.
The burden of proof is on you to give convincing enough arguments, instead of giving exceptionally vague examples.
To give more than I have already would require a research paper, similar to the site Mr. Wong has put up, complete with full text quotes, screen caps, etc. Or an in depth essay. Who knows, it's a good idea, though I really didn't plan to do it right now, since the principle opposition (which would insist on it) seems to be based on nitpicking.

If the idea offends you, you don't have to accept it, nor do you have to accept my opinion as truth.
You seem to think that I'm offended by the possibility, but I'm not. I'd gladly accept any proof and wouldn't care either way. My problem with your argument is that you take a vague idea and extrapolate it to the infinite, and try to make it look like your speculation EQUALS tons and tons of proof.
Maybe they inspired each other, maybe they were inspired by the same thing. You put much more weight in the first possibility and nearly none in the second, and say lots and lots of stuff trying to explain why it's not the MORE likely one.
Well, there's a reason for that. Let's use a little quick example from something else we might be more used to hearing about.

Torpedoes.

We know torpedoes exist in real life.

Star Trek uses "photon torpedoes." Okay, that's kind of a sci fi way of putting a ship/sub based weapon into use on a starship.

Star Wars (created 10 years later) uses another sci fi weapon called "proton torpedoes."

Both examples are big boomy weapons that glow brightly (unlike real torpeodes).

Obviously, Star Trek's weapon was inspired by "real life" with a sci fi spin put on it. Did Star Wars merely use real life torpeodes as an inspiration? Or did it take Trek's idea, and spin it a little bit, so its about protons now instead of photons (it even rhymes, and is spelled the same except for one letter, even looks similar)?

It doesn't take a boatload of research to see that similarity. And no, it's not impossible that indeed the similarity is just a coincidence, but I think its good enough for me. ; ) We're speculating about fiction here, and comparing it to other fiction, purely for fun and the sake of argument, true enough.

Yes, and they're so vague, and I said it over and over.
The problem with your example, is that it's a lot easier for anyone who's watched both shows to think that they were inspired by ST's Photon torpedoes. Your Dune example, on the other hand, is as far-fetched as it gets.
Vague, perhaps, if you haven't read the first three "Dune" novels and hav at least a passing familiarity with them. If you've only seen the two movies, it might be very confusing, and probably unconvincing (since the movies were made LATER and thus had try to keep up with precendents set by prior sci fi flicks).
I've watched the Dune movie, I've watchd the miniseries, played the computer games, read a lot of information about Fremen on the internet, etc. On the other hand, the ONLY part you can use from SW to compare is the 15 or so seconds that the Sandpeople appear, whine, roar, hit Luke, begin stripping his car and run away after hearing Obi Wan's noise.

In those 15 seconds, there was no water worshipping, no reference to special cooling equipment under their clothes, no religious connection to the Bantha, etc.
Somebody who hasn't read "Outlander" and the other references to Sandpeople, and who hasn't seen "The Searchers" or any of the other sources I mentioned would similarly be at a disadvantage, not being able to see for themselves if I wasn't just bullshitting. True enough.

I guess I just have to hope that people contributing to the discussion have gone over those materials. And if they still don't agree, that's fine, it wouldn't be a discussion if I was just ramming my viewpoint down your throat. ; )
You still don't understand: "Outlander", being part of the EU, is an aftertought, written by SOMEBODY ELSE. That somebody else could be a big Dune fan or someone like you who thought he saw more than he really saw. Any references from the EU count for one thing and one thing only: bullshitting.
Like that both people like water, because it's hard to get and they'd die without it. Real people do it all the time when stuck in the middle of some desert.
It's not the same thing. How many people do you know go around forming war parties, and massacring villages in order to steal water, or incorporating it in religious rituals? These are very specific things that go beyond the "ordinary." Much like the desert example. Sure, there are people who live in deserts, but how many people live in the deep desert of a planet that is entirely made up of desert?
More EU bullshit, doesn't count for anything else.
Nonono, you've got it all wrong. A work of fiction that borrows from another work of fiction can be considered

derivative. Fortunately, a work of fiction that borrows from real-life examples (so, what doesn't?) isn't at all derivative work. Unless you think that we're characters in a novel and the writers are going to sue us.
I am not about to make a proposal for Herbert's estate to sue Lucas's for copyright infringement. That was not the purpose of my posts at all. I might as well ask the creators (or more likely their estates and/or current owners) of Flash Gordon, Ford's films, Kurosawa's films, etc and everything else that Lucas used, that wasn't entirely in the public domain.

No, I don't have any problem whatsoever with Lucas borrowing ideas from sources he likes for his stories. I don't care if he borrows from history either, as many authors do it. There are all kinds of references to the American Civil War in AOTC for example. I would not try to argue that he's trying to rip off the movie "Gettysburg" or "Glory."
I'm only talking about real-life suing us as an example, I'm not saying that you're trying to argue about grounds for sueing! Damn you really believe that I think that some invisible writer is going to sue us for copying real-life??
Saying that the Sandpeople are taken entirely from real life Arab nomads ignores the similarities between them and the Fremen, which real life nomads do NOT share. That is my point. To ignore that qualification is to make a strawman of my argument (and it's not really an argument, but it's turned into one).
Your entire argument is a huge load of nonexistent evidence. You take stuff from the EU, which isn't part of the original concept of Star Wars, which already renders your speculations worthless.
That you say that if copying a book is derivative work, then copying real life is also derivative work.
Plagiarism is illegal, and unethical (by today's standards), but I'm not arguing for that. I'm arguing for inspiration, and for similarity. There's nothing inherently wrong with that. If it's okay to admit that Star Wars took inspiration from sources such as Flash Gordon, and serial cliffhangers, why is it wrong to say it took inspiration from other sources (such as Dune)?
It is WRONG when BOTH the Original and the allegedly Inspired work could just as easily be based on the SAME real-life example! Arg, you made a movie about World War III! You were inspired from my idea of making a book about World War III (never mind that the existence of a WW1 and a WW2 point to the possibility of a WW3!)
You misunderstand. If you read the major part of the paragraph (the part without 'wrong' in it) you'll see that you find it more likely that one author takes a real-life example, adds a lot of stuff, and then another one copies it, except that it removes the extra stuff (thus leaving only the original real-life example) and adds his own stuff - than simply recognizing that neither of them invented the wheel.
I tried to use examples in which the Fremen and Sandpeople were alike or similar. Both live on a desert planet. No real life nomads that I know of live on a desert planet. I don't know about warrior societies, living in the deep desert that are as fanatical and violent about water preservation as those two fictional peoples. The relationship the two have with their surrounding communities, and their relationship with their desert animals helps to make them close kin.
Again:
People who live in a desert planet: check
Warrior society: if it's taken from EU, it's bullshit
Fanatical about water: if it's taken from EU, it's bullshit
Relationship with desert animals: if it's taken from the EU, it's bullshit
In the movie there are very few banthas.
There are very few Sandpeople. Obi-Wan and Luke talk about them while they examine the wreckage of the Jawa sandcrawler. Obviously they have a reputation for riding Banthas into their violent raids (the tracks). Stormtroopers were either able to fake the Bantha tracks, or rode Banthas of their own.
Bandits in the Old West rode horses. Maybe they developed a religious kinship with horses too? Horses leave tracks too. They also used them in their violent raids (maybe nobody will sell Old West bandits a flying saucer for their raids)
Since most of the movie doesn't take place in the deep deserts of Tatooine, it makes sense that we wouldn't see many Tuskens or Banthas. But we do see them when Luke sets out to find R2D2 and is subsequently ambushed by them.
Since the only other examples you give aren't in the movie at all, but from some other author, then this is all you get: a handful of Tusken fooling around trying to look busy.
In Return of the Jedi we see a herd of wild Banthas in the deep desert on the way to the Pit of Carkoon (as I mentioned before, that big head that was added in the Special Edition reminds one of a Dune sandworm). The Phantom Menace doesn't show any Banthas that I recall, and we only see a few Tuskens taking potshots at racers (who appear to travel out past civilized regions of the area... perhaps its the Tuskens way of protesting the race in their territory? or just a chance to pick up some easy salvage). In the AOTC novelisation, it is mentioned that "Bantha poodoo" (which I guess they mean bantha droppings, even though the term is defined as "fodder" in earlier Star Wars movies) is covering some of the sensors... which indicates that the Tuskens are getting bolder and closer to the Lars compound, because where there are Banthas, there are Sandpeople...
BULLSHIT. I guess that the human race also developed a kinship for bull, because we use expressions about bull excrement all the time.
I believe there are a few brief fly-overs in which we see Banthas in the city of Tatooine (in AOTC) but I'd have to look over them again more closely to be sure.
The funny thing is, even if we use the Prequel Trilogy we see none of your Bantha kinship BS. We only see Tusken taking potshots at some vehicle (maybe because it's fun), and the occasional ignored Bantha.
Ok two things:
* there's nothing odd about people who can't invent their own water to pillage for water. Bandits pillage for anything they can't get by other means. Food, women, whatever.
Sure. The Fremen and the Sandpeople are both established as *water* specific bandits, although the emphasis for the Sandpeople is less evident in the film itself (see the screenplays/novelisations for more canon details however).
Why not post them here yourself? That couldn't probably hurt your argument any more, could it?
* whatever book it was, I assume it's EU. You don't seem to understand that having some say in what gets published or not DOESN'T MEAN that Lucas writes this stuff and then mails it for other authors to publish. It's ludicrous to assume that.
I never claimed or assumed that Lucas wrote the EU material. But he does approve it, either personally or through his lawyers and subsidiary companies.

I don't think that Episode I Adventures is pure canon. It is based in PART on the screenplays/deleted scenes from the Phantom Menace and the novel, which are part of the canon. In all other aspects its EU (and therefore "quasi-canon" according to where it doesn't conflict with canon, as per the rules established by Lucas's companies and understood by this site). Outlander is EU, so is Darksaber. The TPM and AOTC screenplays and novelisations are canon, after the films.
You still can't get into your head that Quasi-canon is all fine and dandy for arguing versus debates, but it's painfully OBVIOUS that you can't use them to prove what Lucas was thinking or not! Damn my head is starting to hurt thanks to your illogic.
Except that real-life examples already have most of your 'unique characteristics' in them, all at once. Don't nitpick on each of my arguments separately and out of context.
The fact that they both live in the deep desert of an all desert planet is something that they share that is not present in real life (obviously). The fact that they share other common characteristics just helps to complete the picture.
It's common practice to take a single real-world terrain type and extrapolate it into an entire planet. See: lava planet, water planet, ice planet, forest planet, etc, etc, etc...
I could even argue that since the Fremen are based on "real life" nomads and tribesmen in harsh environments, whatever similarities the Sandpeople share with those real life nomads is due merely to the fact that they're inspired by the Fremen, and thus carry the same earmarks of these real life nomads.

However, I can hear the criticism now... "you're assuming what you're trying to prove." When looked at in the realm of literary science fiction, its not really much of a stretch.
I think it's called CIRCULAR LOGIC (I think I'd have to ask the guys to be sure), and it IS much of a stretch.

Dune shows us a desert nomad society of fierce warriors, obsessed with water, and bonded to hardy desert creatures. It is a success. Some time later, another science fiction success story appears, and it has some characters that remind us of the Fremen.[/quote]

Who aren't obsessed with water nor bonded to hardy desert creatures.
If Star Wars had come out first, I would have had the same reaction to Dune, had the roles been reversed. Obviously, Herbert put a lot more time and effort into explaining the Fremen in detail, as they form the centerpiece for his stories. The Sandpeople are only minor background characters in Star Wars (so far) and so they are fleshed out less.
And being less fleshed out, your attempts to make them look "inspired" are making up evidence from unrelated info (for this purpose, the EU *is* unrelated info)
To me, they are kind of like the "klingons" of Star Wars (in that they've become something of a stereotyped one-note race). I don't mean that in an insulting way.

If Star Wars had been first, it would have made sense to note that first Lucas introduces a race of people and then Herbert borrows his idea and expands upon it, changing some things along the way. Instead, we have Herbert's idea, and Lucas using a similar idea, but not doing much with it.
Wrong. If Dune had been after, only the most obsessive fans would try to make such an assumption. Being a minor character with little detail, there isn't anything to copy from except a bunch of freaks in the desert riding strange creatures and attacking people. Repeat it several times, and it doesn't sound that inspired. OTOH Dune creates an entire society and explains it to the smallest detail.
As to the nitpicking, my own arguments are being nitpicked, so I don't see the problem there. Turn-about is fair play, I'm afraid.
You confuse nitpicking with pointing out serious reasoning flaws and circular logic.

"Star Wars is inspired on Dune because it has similar characters. I know that the characters are similar because Star Wars is inspired on Dune."
I just put the "warriors" part in the same pot with all the other "want water", "protect from elements", "develop kinky feelings for their animals". Not to mention that most of these are in the EU which isn't George's work.
Of course, as we know, wherever the EU doesn't contradict the core canon, its part of the "official continuity." At least that's what people like Mr. Wong here have made convincing enough arguments for. I concur with that assumption. I've pointed out reasons why I still think that talking about the EU is relevant (by virtue of the "looking at same sources for inspiration" argument, and the POSSIBLE "consult Lucas on core characters/concepts for contradictions" idea).
Your argument is rendered invalid because you don't understand the basic difference between being able to take stuff from works of non-Lucas authors that also make up part of the same universe, and thinking that everything written in EU is part of Lucas' original vision.

It's called COLABORATIVE work. If Person A and Person B both contribute to an universe, if Person B is inspired by something doesn't mean that A was inspired by the same thing (specially because Person A didn't write any of that stuff). They both build up the same universe, but you think that their brains are getting squished together in some way.

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Honestly, I can't keep up with such an humongous amount of text, so I guess I'll just throw the towel. Think whatever you want, I don't care, my head hurts.
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I've watched the Dune movie, I've watchd the miniseries, played the computer games, read a lot of information about Fremen on the internet, etc. On the other hand, the ONLY part you can use from SW to compare is the 15 or so seconds that the Sandpeople appear, whine, roar, hit Luke, begin stripping his car and run away after hearing Obi Wan's noise.
The Dune movie was made in 1984 (as I've pointed out) and the miniseries in 2001 (IIRC), whereas they are based on a novel series that began in 1965, and continued through to until 1986 and Herbert's death. More recently his work has been "expanded" by Kevin J. Anderson and Herbert's own son, but I haven't read those.

So you admit you haven't read Dune? I guess all I can say is give it a read, it's a good book, and it makes all my points for me. Again, without a research paper presentation or you reading the book, I guess I can't convince you of anything.

The first three Dune books were written prior to Star Wars, with the fourth one being published before Empire Strikes Back.
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Honestly, I can't keep up with such an humongous amount of text, so I guess I'll just throw the towel. Think whatever you want, I don't care, my head hurts.
Concession accepted.
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Can you be any more annoying?
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I think this applies here:
Wall of Ignorance™. His impenetrable debate armour is known by many terms: such as "stone deaf", "invincible ignorance", and the "broken record syndrome". Some of the posters on my BBS have taken to dubbing it DarkStar's Wall of Ignorance™, which is as good a term as any. The technique is simple but effective: ignore your opponent's main points and repeat your original argument until he gets frustrated and either walks away (in which case you claim victory) or starts flaming you (in which case you claim "moral high ground", and thus victory through the "style over substance" fallacy).
I gave up because all you do is repeat the same argument over and over even if it's countered by something. If that makes you happy, well I suppose that's your arguing style.
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Hey, I tried to be nice, but I guess you would just rather quit and then say its my fault and take a passing shot at me on your way out.

Well, okay...
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Incidentally, I see you did both.. left, and then started flaming.

Well, I won't claim moral high ground, how about that? A person can quit a debate gracefully, doesn't have to mean you "lost."

Rather than slap a label on it, I could always accuse you of taking the "easy way out," but I won't. ; )
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And so far all you did is style over substance mixed in with a Wall of Ignorance.

You still have to show Canon that the Tusken Raiders are derived from the Fremen beyond your own subjective eyes.

All you showed is that EU presumes certain things but absolutely nothing in canon backs you up unless we look at it in your subjective POV.
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Just out of curiosity, how the hell did a friendly discussion about Tusken Raiders turn into a flame war without anyone catching it in time to do anything about it? I come back from the office and everything's gone to hell.
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Kurgan wrote:Incidentally, I see you did both.. left, and then started flaming.

Well, I won't claim moral high ground, how about that? A person can quit a debate gracefully, doesn't have to mean you "lost."

Rather than slap a label on it, I could always accuse you of taking the "easy way out," but I won't. ; )
Yes, I tried to quit "gracefully" or whatever you want to call it, which didn't mean that I conceeded to whatever you said and thought it was the truth. But you slapped your stupid "concession accepted" post á la Dorkstar. There can be no concession, because every time somebody said anything about your arguments you cried foul and defended that it was just your "opinion" and you were entitled to that. You can't have your cake and eat it too: either it's a debate to see who's right or who's not, or you say it's your opinion even if it's full of shit and not backed up by any evidence and say "nyah".

Here, let me sum up your arguments:

You: George copied the Fremen from Dune. They have a lot of things in common: *this* and *this* and *this*.
We: George didn't ever say that Sandpeople did *this* or *this* or *this*.
You: Yes he did, it's in this novel
We: George didn't write that novel, somebody else did.
You: Yes but it has George's seal of approval so it means George told him to write it like that
We: No he didn't. What EU authors decide to write about is their own idea, George merely decides if it's acceptable or not
You: Yes but still Sand People are like *this* and *that*
We: No, if it's not part of the movies it's not cannon
You: but you always say that the EU is official and it's valid for debates
We: They're not valid for debates about what George was thinking, because George didn't write them!
You: If you haven't read Dune then you can't see it the way I do!
We: There's no need to read Dune, we're taking what you say about Dune and Fremen as the truth, in fact that's an advantage for you because you can make up shit about Fremen and somebody who didn't know about it would have to believe it anyway! That's not the point, the point is that you say that Fremen are *a* and *b* and *c* and we know from the movies that the Tusken are NOT *a* or *b* or *c*!
You: It's my opinion! It's not a leap of logic! It's not circular logic because it's not a debate. Besides circular logic is alright in Sci-Fi.
Me: Ok I give up then, I can't possibly change your opinion
You: Concession accepted. I win the debate, whee!
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Master of Ossus wrote:Just out of curiosity, how the hell did a friendly discussion about Tusken Raiders turn into a flame war without anyone catching it in time to do anything about it? I come back from the office and everything's gone to hell.
Well I think it all started on page 3, when a statement was made about how the Sandpeople were inspired by Frank Whatshisname's Dune and then an impenetrable wall of ignorance was built around it.

This means that you spent a week in the office without looking around? ;)
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I guess that I missed this for a long time, then. Sorry about that, everyone.

Incidentally, for a really good example of a SW writer ACTUALLY ripping off Dune, read Jedi Search. Basically, everything in the spice mines of Kessel is straight out of Dune.
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That figures, since Jedi Search is KJA.
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