About plausibility issues for tech disparity, it´s unlikely to be a problem. Think about todays earth? Especially in the last decade, depending on where you are, a guy riding a donkey in the middle of a desert, enroute to a straw hut home might be using a mobile phone or a laptop to chat online...Technology
We don't see a lot of this in the story, and what we do see has a rather wide range of sophistication, a possible plausibility issue. The navies of Windhaven are composed mostly of multi-masted cannon armed ships similar to late 18th century ships-of-the-line. The major nations have a dozen or so ironclads each; the ones we see look like enlarged (three times the displacement) versions of the Monitor and the Virginia. Deajan commanded a unit armed with rifled muskets; at one point Lyozar mentions stealing blueprints for a prototype 'self-loading volley gun'. In various interiors we see candles, globes, pickled specimens, in the richest areas gas lights. The nations of Windhaven seem to have made less progress on global mapping than Earth did with the same technology; possibly because the stronger storms make crossing the wider stretches of ocean more hazardous (for both ships and bird-shifters). From the ease with which they start shooting at flying monsters, it seems that Windhaven navies are used to having to open fire on enemy bird-shifters, although the prospects for bringing one down with grapeshot out of late 18th century naval artillery seem somewhat limited.
Technology is very much not linear.
Are you sure you want ironclads of that style? They were very much a paranthesis and an exception in history and unlikely to ever become something "normal".
( The Virginia style by the way is called a casemate ironclad )
And the main reason for that is because their seakeeping sucks terribly. With storms more common and with open sea being the norm, either of those ships makes for likely shipwrecks very quickly. They are coastal or river vessels only. (and coastal only in reasonably calm conditions)
For a world with so much open water and storms, you either go for something like La Gloire or HMS Warrior if you want "ironclads"(Warrior is technically allmetal, but it´s the same style at least), or you go with the pre-dreadnought style or possibly in the direction of armoured cruisers.
There´s also what you might call a hybrid style, like the Huáscar:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hu%C3%A1scar_%28ship%29
Or the Devastation class floating battery(the original ironclads, but not really ships even if they did spawn the later ironclad ships much as a result of the experience with these):
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lave
A "Monitor" style ironclad made seaworthy looks pretty much like an armoured cruiser. Compare with Erebus and Terror.
You should also probably decide wether anyone has come up with the idea of a torpedo yet.
You may want to consider some magical way or something to keep the hydrogen safely apart from everywhere else, because steam engines mixed with hydrogen may be a big risk due to open flames and sparks. Or simply even get rid of the hydrogen. Good side of magic is that it can do what you want it to do.By far the most advanced things seen are the airships, which look like first world war Zepplins. They are powered by lightweight steam engines, filled by hydrogen, exist in relatively small numbers and are considered
valuable enough that major nations hesitate to risk them rescuing populations from monster attacks. They are able to carry hundreds of people and probably use lots of magically enhanced components beyond the engines.
As a sidenote i might mention that there were a few historical airplanes meant to be powered with lightweight steam engines, uncertain if any flew, but the problem was more one of funding and development rather than being impossible.
Difficult but may be something for nations with problems getting access to easier sources.How about a much higher incidence of ocean floor nodules than Earth?
Easily useful enough at least. It was never really an issue in real history and as such never developed, but it´s perfectly doable at a relatively low tech level.Are there also practical oceanic sources for fabric fibre? I know kelp-based fabrics exist but not how practical they are.
It´s not quite as good but it´s good enough to be used.
Glass is a very useful material, not to be underestimated. It´s also surprisingly strong.I imagine sharpening bits of ancient scrap would be preferable for weapons but I agree that mass-production of ceramics should be an even larger part of the industrial revolution than it was on Earth.