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Shira Calpurnia novel series analysis thread

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I decided I might as well go ahead and throw this out too. Hell what are another thread or two? :lol:

So now we get to Matthrew Farrer's Shira Calpurnia novels. They fall, for me, into the 'interesting' category because they aren't Space Marines, they aren't war. They're more in common with Inquisitor-type novels. That is, they take an organization from 40K, and they show us how the 40K society looks and operates from the eyes of that organization. In this caes, the arbites. The first novel highlights several facets of the Imperium from the view of the ARbites: The Navy, the Ecclesiarchy, and the nobility on Hydraphur. Hydraphur, if you recall, is the Naval headquarters for Segmentum Pacificus. This means it's an important location, and with the first novel we get a good glimpse at the insides of how it (a hive world) works, as well as the naval and reliigous aspects. We even get peeks into how the Genetor aspect of the AdMech is (and Sanja is one of those rare 'likeable' coggies at that.) We of course get a view of the Arbites, but that is perhaps the least interesting. Calpurnia herself is from Ultramar, which means she's pretty simple, straightforward, uncomplicated.. and totally unsuited to the subtle, political enviroment she gets thrown into. Its an interesting contrast, but Calpurnia is really the least interesting aspect of the book. What is interesting is how she interacts with, and reacts to, the enviorment she is put into. Despite (some) development of the character, the series has more in common with Ian Watson's works (in the sense it highlights how things in the Imperium work, and different aspects) than it does as an acutal story. Book 2 and 3 will carry this forward (Rogue Traders and astropaths respectivley.)

Of course, since its a 'lawman' book we also do have a mystery to solve, which also adds some interest, since that will overlap with the various other organizations. It's this interplay amidst the mystery that really carries the book for me, more than the character itself.

Also a yearly religious festival where people have to flagellate their backs bloody with razor edged flails. I wish I were kidding.

Anyhow, on we go:

Page 9
Here in his own domain, in the very shrine of the Adeptus Mechanicus in the Adeptus district in what was supposed to be the safest enclave of the capital hive of the fortress world of Hydraphur, Cynez Sanja had found himself under siege.
Hydraphur is defined as a "Fortress world", yet also having a hive. Fortress worlds are places like Cadia, which means it is both a hive world of the middle categories, quite probably a highly industrial world (as most hives are), a naval headquarters, and a major recruiting/tithing center for the Guard.

Page 10
Sanja glowered and cycled the tiny augmetic layers in his skull through a precise series of adjustments, but the walls still muffled the sounds to the point where he couldn't pick out much more than a rhythmic, concussive hammering and the faintest traces of hoarse shouts. He wondered again why nobody had thought it necessary to raise the void shields.
A peculiar form of AdMech augmetic. Not sure what the "layers" are for, but it is implied some sort of auditory or simialr sensory function. Also, the facility appears to have its own void shields.

Page 10
The forechamber was a shortened rectangle, its measurements calculated to within a millionth of a millimetre to mimic the proportions, if not the size, of the forechamber of the high genetor's own shrine on the Mechanicus heartworld of Mars.
Precision of the chamber measurements. No real way to gauge how impressive or not it is objectively that I can think of, but it sure sounds cool.

Page 11
Behind them were four skitarii, the dedicated templar-soldiers of the Machine cult, their burnished carapace armour pierced with cybernetic cables and leads and their poweraxes held at arms. Flanking each skitarius, two guardian servitors, mindless vat-grown automata hung about with mechanised implants of their own, weapon-muzzles pointed demurely down.
- Skitarii in carapace armour that has openings for cybernetic cables and leads to the power axes they wield. Also mentioned are "mindless vat grown" servitors agrain reminding us the AdMech appears to have some measure of cloning tissues or growing their own troops (in addition to recycling existing bodies.)

Page 16
"In formal greeting I use Ultramar protocol. The family name is second, the private third. Here I am Shira Calpurnia as you are Cynez Sanja."
Shira Calpurnia comes from the realm of Ultramar as an Arbitrator. She's a looong way from home, so its obvious that the Arbites are not afraid ot ship someone halfway across the galaxy if it serves an important purpose. This would makr Arbites (along wit Inquisitors and other high ranking officials, and probably AdMech) one of the few factions whose travels can encompass more than a subsector or sector of space.

Page 16
The relics on the crimson altar-cloth - centrifuge, injector-glove, inscriptions of the gene-codes of Mechanicus saints etched into scrolls of paper-thin steel - reflected the mellow golden lamplight.
Genetor artifacts/tools for performing an immunization task.

Page 16
Calpurnia saluted the altar from the doorway and then walked to the kneeler without further hesitation, unclipping her half carapace as Sanja faced her from the far side of the altar. Chaim took and held her armour as she unfastened the top of the uniform bodyglove, holding it against her chest but shrugging it down to leave her shoulders and back bare.
- Shira Calpurnia is described here as wearing "half-carapace" By which I gather is an analogue to "half-armour" or a kind of armor that provides protection only to key areas but may leave others uncovered (torso covered but perhaps forearms and legs uncovered.

Page 17
Her composure was still good, but Sanja was looking at her now through the eyes of the luminants as well as his own, and in the mosaic of images being fed into his augmented cortex her apprehension showed in her breathing her body temperature, the acidity of her skin, her brainwaves. The luminants moved down the row of servitors, dendrites clicking as they took and loaded the vials of biotic fluid and extended their injectors, then glided silently to station themselves behind Calpurnia's shoulders, dendrites extending a glittering fan of needles.

Sanja murmured a brief High Gothic blessing, then switched to machine-code and guided the luminants down. Calpurnia's breath caught for a moment as the hypodermics went home, and then the luminants rose into the air again and it was done.
The injection process. Rather alot of ritual and stuff just to get stuck iwth a needle, but this is 40K and things are always overdone.

Page 17
"The movement will help the anointments to integrate faster. Chaim will have given you the
tokens—" She held them up. "Good. The Iron Wheel and the Caducal Helix are strong talismans of the Mechanicus. Grip them well and they will make your blessing a powerful one."
..
"I would venture to suggest, Arbiter Calpurnia, that this was not the first time that you have had a rite of vaccination performed. You seemed to know your part in it as well as I did."

"My career has taken me through postings across the Ultima Segmentum and now to here, magos. Most of those moves have been across sufficient distances for me to need fortifying for my new position, although the ceremonies were never this involved. They were usually done on board the Arbites ship by one of our own Medicae staff, with a junior genetor overseeing, and they did not involve these…"
- I find it amusing that simple vaccinations for offworld visitors (long term) require the use of talismans (mention of the Iron Wheel and Caducal Helix) - I'm still convinced the AdMech does much of this to scare people into nto messing with technology outside the purview of the AdMech.
Thein again when the warp is involved who knows, it is possible belief will hav ea psoitive influence on this shit.

Also the "Rite of Vaccination." and Calpurnia comments on previous experiences she had experienced.

Calpurnia also seems to have made a habit of moving her way across the segmentum (bit by bit) from Ultramar to her new posting. Rather interesting, that.


Page 18
"The luminants? They are relics as well as servants, perhaps not common on smaller worlds with less distinguished Mechanicus traditions. The honour of continued service to the Machine God after one's organic death is not earned every day."
..
"They can act by themselves?"
"I am appointed as their instructor as I am the instructor of my servitors. That privilege accompanies my rank here. The luminants assist me with my work and my studies. Their precision and senses are all that one would expect of idols of the Machine God.
Normally such a rite as yours would not require more than one, but for you to have come so far and to a world like Hydraphur, to which viral and bacterial strains from all across the segmentum are brought, you needed a far more rigorous treatment and I called both of my luminants accordingly."
"And they are also monitoring my chemical spoor and behaviour to make sure I am who I say I am and that I carry no psychic or hypnotic taint to cast doubt upon your safety in admitting me."
The last bit about Calpurnia being "monitored" for security purposes is interesting because she intimates that whilst she has not seen luminants before, she has undergone similar observation in the past, so that other methods of such observation are employed by the AdMech and others (on a lesser scale.) In fact, it may be a semi-common security measure.

The Luminants are intersting in that they seem a bit like servitors, but much more aware/intelligent than a mere servitor... something of a higher order type perhaps.

Page 19
"I am sure the arbiter majore will not regret sending for you all the way from, Ultramar, was it? A long journey. It's a compliment to you."

"I grew up on Ultramar. lax. But my last post was at Ephaeda, north-west of there. But still across a lot of space. I'm a long way from home"
yes she is. We're talking literally halfway across the galaxy or more. Pity we don't know how long she took.

Page 19
"You have not reacted adversely to our anointments, and their eyes show that your body is accepting the inoculations. The preliminary rites and treatments you had before your arrival here laid the groundwork well. My arts are more sophisticated than those of the medicae, and the process will have completed itself within a day or two more. An envoy of mine will visit you tonight and instruct you in the correct prayers and readings to close the day and open the morning tomorrow to ensure this."
I kind of like how they lbend the religous/mysticism with something that sounds plausible in this book.

Page 21
The first bullet hit her shoulder at a bad angle, ,whirred off her carapace and strruck a spark off the temple wall...

..

The second bullet struck her helmet over the right eye, not penetrating but cracking the armour and staggering her backwar in a daze.

Pistol fire against Calpurnia's half carapace. Helmet armour takes a hit and cracks, but also fails to penetrate (although its an eyepiece so that may be a weak point.)

Page 21
As she lurched to her feet, groggy and shaking her head, their shields juddered under two more shots and one pitched over backward as a third shattered the cheek-guard of his helmet against his jaw.
Pistol fire harmless against Arbites shields, but the cheek guard of the helmet cracks again.

Page 21
They held the foot of the ramp in a textbook Arbites firing line: one row kneeling, shotguns locked through the gunports in their shields to pump out a steady, suppressing fire; the second line standing behind them firing more carefully, aiming shots over their heads.
- Arbites shields have gunports (for stabilizing the gun and for firing while using the defenses.) Makes sense really, given their doctrine.

Page 22
As that movement parted them for a split second, a third bullet whipped between their shields and scraped Calpurnia's carapace with an impact she felt all down her ribs.
Yet another impact stopped by the carapace.

Page 22
A bullet cracked into the armour on her shoulder and she staggered and cursed...
...
This was small-calibre ammo, handgun slugs. And there was no one remotely in handgun
range.
How small "small calibre" is I dunno. But her shoulder takes a hit, and it hits hard enough that she reacts to it or gets knocked around.


Page 23
She ducked to one side instead of standing to shoot and it saved her life. The bullet gouged the side of her helmet and knocked it askew - a second earlier and it would have punched through her top lip. She wrenched off the helmet...
..

With no polarising filters over her eyes the refractor fog set every light to glittering and sparkling.
Calpurnia just took her damaged helmet off, so apparently there are "polarising filterS" in Arbites helmet. Also before taking the helmet off, she takes another glancing hit, although it apparently damages the helmet for her to take it off. Hlmets seem to be a weak point in Arbites armor.

Page 23
A third [shot] smacked into the heavy wood and she put three booming stub-shots through the space where she thought she might have heard firing. She had been careless about placing her feet and the recoils slammed her through alomst a quarter-turn; as she turned it into a backward jog to regain her balance there was a roar as three shotguns opened up to supportt her.

...

The giant-bore stub pistol she ad been issued with was a commander's weapon,a shock-and-terror weapon, something for a senior arbitrator to use for great, ruinous shots at high profile targets to terrify a crowd of rioters, showing Imperial authority in brutal terms while other Arbitrators and sharpshooters did the actual combat shooting.
Incidnetally, the stub-gun she fires carreis at least seven shots, indicated by the quote above. And they're large caliber (.50 cal or more?) for pshyoclogical value and lethality. Arbites make use of all kinda of solid slug weapons it would seem. Rather interesting considering in older fluff they had lasguns and grenade launchers as well.

Page 32
"The Mechanicus have helped us with these kinds of problems before." Nakayama went on, "Although not often. Their genetor-magi have the finest tools and arts for stripping knowledge out of evidence, bar none, better than our own verispex laboratoria."
- The Admech have better forensic facilities than the Arbites verispex laboratoria, unsurprisingly.

Page 32-33
"Sanja was sure they'd missed something at first, but they've cast their best augurs and instruments over our friend and there's still next to nothing they can tell us. Was he a mutant? Yes. A trained psyker. That was how he blocked himself from sight. Was he augmented? Of course. His eyes and the motor parts of his brain were massively enhanced, specialised quick-shooter stuff. Is he traceable? Not a chance. His death triggered a toxin implant in the small of his back which caused massive damage right through his tissues. Sanja invoked his secrecy prerogative pretty quickly when I wanted to get to details, but it's clear we'll never get a usable gene-print. Anti-tracing measures like that need a lot of skill and resources, and they're illegal to boot. On an assassin whose psyker nature put him under an automatic death warrant in any event, they add up to a hell of an investment on a single agent and a single attack.
First, some psykers can make themselves invisible to other people by blocking themselves from sight.

Second: augmentations mentioned that can enahnce the eyes, motor parts of the brain - identified as "specialized trick-shooter" stuff.

Additionally, its possible to implant someone with a toxin that can cause massive damage "right through to tissues" - this prevents an individual from being "Traceable" via gene print or similar measures. anti-tracing measures like this need both skill and resourcees, and they are illegal in the Imperium.

Also Sanja invokes a "secrecy prerogative" to avoid telling the Arbitrators certain details - likely a manifestation of the Admech independence from the Imperium proper, which means it can extend even to the Arbitrators in this case.

Page 33
"But you have been in the system for, what, two weeks? And Hydraphur itself for a matter of days."
I dont know if this means it took two weeks to reach the planet from orbit (or why), but she's been on planet less than a week.

Page 34
The Mass of Saint Balronas pulls in visitors from all over the system and a dozen I can think of from across the subsector. For all we know it could be some minerals baron from Stahl-Theta who's avenging an estate impoundment ordered by one of our colleagues four systems away."
Religious festival seems to draw in crowds subsector wide from over a "dozen systems" in the subsector, and that's not even all the planets in the subsector. In any event it shows of some level of inter-connectedness if the ARbites find it plausible events many systems away could cause them trouble here.

Page 34
She was beginning to suspect that one of the truths of a career like hers was that you never did get used to the wandering from one world to another. From one place to another on the one planet was easy, and within a small realm was easy too: her parents had both had senior duties to the governance of Ultramar and she had travelled more than most before her induction into the Arbites.

The training station at Machiun had been bearable because she had been there with seven hundred and ninety-nine other frightened inductees, but her first garrison post at Drade-73 had been much worse.

MG-Dyel, Hazhim, Don-Croix, Ephaeda. She was sure she had exhausted the court libraries in each one by the time she had been reposted, but she couldn't remember any treatises about that wrench that came from being dropped into an unfamiliar world where you couldn't take your most fundamental assumptions about things for granted. Perhaps one day she would write one herself.
...
"I shall recite my own experiences in passing from Ephaeda to the world of Hydraphur…"
A bit of Calpurnia's past before coming to hydraphur. We see the variety and scope of worlds, and how much coping she has to do. She has to get used to things being much different on Hydrapuhr, as we soon see, and her blunt, striaghtforward manner sod ensot mesh in well. I rather like that about this series - Calpurnia adapts in a way, but she never becomes particularily adept at the sort of thing the rest of the arbites take fo rgranted.

Page 37
"If these people have forgotten that the reach of the Emperor's own Adeptus is absolute, then I believe that a roundup of all of those party attendees by Chastener squads would send the message much more effectively. How could it hurt to have so many potential troublemakers penned up for a few days? It would be the lesson that some of these people seem to need."
..
"The principle of your advice is perfectly sound, Arbitor Calpurnia," he had replied mildly. "As to its exact application, well, the affairs of Hydraphur are perhaps more complex and rarefied than that of your previous postings, the position of the Arbites more fraught and delicate. We calibrate our actions to our circumstances." Seeing her expression, he added, "And our actions here are quite sufficient. We already signalled our intentions when Arbitrators broke up the last of that morass of unraliness that this young man thought he presided over, and we signal them afresh now. The elite of Hydraphur are accustomed to being invited to a diplomatic audience by an Arbites herald, with plenty of notice and due regard for their rank and with any questions we have couched in a dozen layers of protocol. This boy brought here and openly questioned, with none of their own retainers on hand, will have exactly the psychological impact of the roundup you proposed, without the side-effect of stirring up so much hostility to us among the nobility and other Adeptus that any traces of the attack upon you become impossibly kicked over."
A comparison of how Arbitrator methodology can vary from world to world. Politics, as usual, can alter the level of "brutality" employed in the Imperium, despite what the "Grimdark" propoganda claims. In this case Calpurnia is a representation of the hard, unyielding and "neccessary brutality" side - the one that will club down someone for obstructing her Emperor-given duty, or not hesitate in shooting people if the situation warrants it. Leandro (her talking companion) like many of the ARbites here, have a more lax view of things, and tend to play politics more to make thigns easier. Which clashes with Calpurnia's way of doing things. It shows far bette rthe diversity and differences that can exist in 40K,a nd how even with just human cultures, things can be very alien and bizarre from our perspective - which works better than that hamfisted "skulls and supersition" approach.

Page 41 -
The bodyguard servitor stood a head taller than Hallyan; Calpurnia, helmet and all, would barely have come up to the family crest embossed on its chest-plate. Between the augmetic plates and cables its flesh had the sickly, slablike cast of muscles grown in a vat and maintained by gene and hormone commands rather than exercise and use. Clone-grown skin and filigreed armour shone slick with ornamental perfume-oil, but as Calpurnia reluctantly drew closer she realised that underneath the spicy scent it had the same smell that almost all servitors had, the smell of a fresh-cleaned hospital corridor, antiseptic but somehow still faintly sickening. The vision slot in its extravagantly-worked gold visor was shadowed and there was no way to tell where it was looking.
Aristocrat's defense servitor. Note the vat grown (EG cloned) muscle, and that muscles can be maintained by "gene/hormone" commands rather than exercise.

Page 42
As she stood there she could feel the faint prickle at the back of her neck from the energgy shields on the other side of the window. Having all Bosporian see an Arbitrator senioris driven into hiding woudl be disastrous, so armoued shutters had been out of the question, despite Armour Thekir's pleas. In truth, she was still a little overwhelmed by having an energy curtain brought to her chambers - before Hydraphur, she had seen a void shield exactly once, during a putsch on Don-Croix when elite enforcer squads had come out with the pick of their arsenal to seal the streets to the Capitol Mount.
Calpurnia's aparmtnet is screened by energy shielding. Void shielding of a sort. Rather interesting as this implies they have portable (in some fashion) forcefields that can be either used in the field (the other caes where Calpurnia saw shields, and considered the "pick of their arsenal) or applied to augment existing defenses (EG Calpurnia's apartment.

Page 43
The precinct commander at the Vastener's Spur over in the Nobles Quarter reported a spat between two cartel families from the mill-hives on the far coast over accommodation precedence in the tower they had co-rented for their stay.
Hydraphur has a "coast", which in addition to the general way the people seem to be out and about around in the open of the hive suggests this is not one of the overly polluted shithole hives we see in fluff.

Page 44
Now Kvan kept trying to park an air-sled over the Cathedral in defiance of airspace laws and Canoness Theoctista was adamant that they would not, as a matter of principle, let Kvan disrupt the girl's religious duties with even a visit.
- mention of an "air sled" - some sort of airbonre transporrt vehicle on Hydraphur. not specified as being antigrav per se, but it does indicate that the Imperium has some sort of "hover" technology available, antigrav or not (or even if its just ducted air/VTOL like a Valkyrie/Vulture.) available. Of course, being a Rogue Trader (Kvan, that is), he may have acess to tech others generally don't.

Page 44
Those were just three that had been thought worth bringing to an arbitor senioris. There would be more mundane plots and feuds, petty violence or sedition that the Judges at each fortified precinct courthouse would handle themselves, and the cases that would not even reach the courthouses, the lowest of crimes: defacement of Imperial property, malingering, drunkenness, public affray, killings or injuries among the giant hab-stacks where Arbitrator patrols rarely ventured and used the simplest summary street punishments when they did.


Scale and scope of the crimes "typically" dealt with by the Arbites. Curiously, Hydraphur seems to have no enforcers (or if they do noone mentions it), so the bulk of this seems to fall on the arbites. Probably helps to explain the odd way in which they handle things.

Page 44
The month before the Mass saw the place packed with dignitaries: every branch of the Adeptus, Rogue Traders and powerful merchants, officers from the powerful naval dynasties with their spaceborne estates and fief-fleets.
An example I suspect of the "passenger" traffic from out system that acn happen.

Notice as well tha tthe Navy have their "fief fleets" - I'm not sure if these ar warp capable starships of the Navy, or if these are separate, independent forces under local family control (The space based version of private armies.)

Page 45
Families controlling wealth equivalent to a whole planet's production would haggle and trade favours for the itniest change in positions at one of the Kathismas' banquets;
Scope of the wealth and politicking/trading that goes on on Hydraphur. If we took the agri world in "cRimson tears" for a sample, we're talking billions, if not trillions of "credits" (or perhaps throne gelt) in "wealth."

Page 45
She prowled to the window again, ignored the buzzing that the power field made at the base of her skull as she looked out. Her chambers faced away from the Cathedral and out over the slope of the hive as it dropped to the great flat city-plain. She was not new to the great artificial hives that Imperial worlds sprouted when their cities grew too big and concentrated for a simple conurbation to contain. There were no hives on Ultramar, but two had grown up around the orbital freight-launcher silos on Hazhim, and Don-Croix's position astride three well-travelled warp currents had given it a population that had cultivated a respectable twelve hives, jutting up from its ravine-cut surface like tumours.
Conditions and requirements for hives to evolve from regular cities. As noted in Battlezone Cityfight and other sources, there seems to be no absolute definition or criteria for a "hive" world, and the distinctions cna blur or overlap.

Also 12 "hives" is considered respectable in number for a world.

Page 45
Bosporian was a modest little affair against the mind-numbing scale of hives on Necromunda or Vanaheim. In fact, technically, it was barely a hive at all, more a place where the sprawl that had paved over the entire alluvial plain below had reached a spur of the mountain ranges edging it and crawled up its slopes. Bosporian was on bedrock, not artificial, hollow,a nd packed with people as a true hive was.
Another Necromunda-like hive, Vanaheim, is mentioned. Hydrpahur's hives are much more smaller, modest affairs, possibly even mere proto-hives or minor hives.

Page 46
Dropping away directly below Calpurnia's window was the Wall, tall and wide and with enough room in its towers and bastions to house a city and hold off an army on its own. It joined the Augustaeum wall at the towering Justice Gate, swelled into the imposing fortifications that housed the commanders' homes and chambers and the supreme courthouses, then ran down into the thirty-floor-high ridge of rockcrete and adamantium, sprouting towers that were entire precinct fortresses unto themselves, running all the way down to the foot of the hive to one last monolithic keep and gate.

The Wall held trial chambers, interrogation rooms, execution and penance cells, armouries, barracks, training halls, chapels, transmitter towers, generatoria, hangars full of Rhino APCs and Repressor riot-tanks, libraries of paper books and data-arks so vast that searching for a single old record might be a life's work. Around each gate glimmered the camp-lights where supplicants waited weeks or months or years, however long it took for the wheels of the Adeptus Arbites to grind out a judgement or pass on word of the fate of a loved one held in their walls. Breaking up queue wars was a regular feature of gate duties in any precinct house of this size. Calpurnia had even known Arbites who had been born and lived the first few years of their lives outside the gates of the courthouses they grew up to serve in. In most garrisons they were considered good luck to have on a squad.
The Walll, the main Arbites fortress on Hydraphur. Note the usual "supplicants to arbites hhave to wait a fucking long time" to be heard. I suspect in part they may do this to deliberately have a viable recruiting pool for their officers.

Page 46
However alien Hydraphur felt now, soon place-names would take on meaning. People would stop being faces she passed and names she had to be reminded of. She would start to know who was meticulous and who was slapdash, who could take a broad perspective and who would get lost in details. She would know who backslid in upholding the sacred Lex Imperia, and at the other extreme who hid their own deficient judgement behind paralysing dependence on the letter of scripture. She would know the ones who were devout and truly understood the doctrines they practised, and the ones for whom ''for the Emperor'' was nothing more than an empty phrase to shout before they swung a power-maul down on some random innocent's skull.
Calpurnia ruminates on the spectrum of Arbites she might be forced to deal with. It's rather interesting that she herself does not seem to favor the mindless sort of obedience or brutality some arbites (and fluff) might portray - and it is one of the more forgiving aspects of her own rigid application and general grimdarkitude, methinks.
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I interpreted the description "half-carapace" to mean the armor can be detached/disassembled into halves (likely breastplate and backplate), for ease of putting on and taking off.
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If the artwork for her series of books is any indication, the half plate analogy is probably what they're going for, even going for the "classic" less is more female version (the armour is really high up and leaves the midsection open). Though carapace doesn't have to mean plate, there has been flak vests with plates that's still called flak, it usually is portrayed as hardened formed pieces of armour of a superior material to go on top of whatever is standard underneath.
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depending on context it could be one or the other or both. The artwork is one example how she's shown to wear armour - although this being artwork I'm inclined to believe it should be taken with a grain of salt so that may not be accurate. Her carapace is also commonly treated as 'clip on', in which case the half-carapace refers to the ease of attachment/removal (which may be of use for an officer type, or in replacing damaged plates.

In either case the ideas are not mutually exclusive - 'carapace only covering portions of her body (EG just a breastplate) could yield pices that re lighter and far easier to clip on than full carapace.
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Another Calpurnia update. This time: Calpurnia. In. SPACE!


Page 54
They stopped at an intersection and took stock: an Arbites checkpoint occupied the central rockcrete island, where a belt-fed heavy stubber nosed the air and cyber-mastiff handlers flanked it, ready to move under the stubber's support. Knots of Arbitrators stood at each road surveying the traffic and stopping random travellers for papers and questioning. The setup was repeated at every junction they had passed since leaving the Justice Gate, and on every thoroughfare and public space across the hive, and Calpurnia was pleased with what she had seen so far. Arbiter Nakayama's lockdown had been quick and expert.


- Arbites weapons crews employing belt-fed heavy stubber emplacements. Also note the ubiquitous cyber-mastiff.


Page 56-57
Up in the square the two men had already been locked into heavy strait-capes that covered their heads and pinned their arms to their waists, and were being dragged away.
...

Flushing, Madulla supervised as the two prisoners were stowed on the Rhino, the rings on the backs of the strait-capes clipped to the hooks on the tank's chassis, their feet dangling off the ground. It was a way of transporting and displaying prisoners Calpurnia had not seen before coming to Hydraphur.
- mention of the use of "straight-capes" straightjacket like devices that cover the heads and pinned arms to wasits. In addition the strait-capes are hung by rings on the back of the capes to hooks on Rhino APCs, allowing prisoners to be transported while publicly displayed at the same
time.

Page 58
She took her mind off it by concentrating on Leandro's talk of the Artisans Quarter, which had
its privileged place in the Augustaeum through the patronage of the Cathedral and the devotional materials and religious art it made, which was bought by connoisseurs and the devout throughout the subsector.
Artisan's quarter, basically I'm guessing the place where the skilled craftsman who don't do mass production shit reside... and probably a major source of off-world income, givne that they seem to do a fairly brisk subsector-level trade.

Page 59
Up here she could look out over the whole sweep of the capital: the towers and roofs of Bosporian, the carpet of industrial city that covered the plain, the mountains behind the Cathedral and the vast ochre sweep of the sky. Even in the daylight, she could look up and see that sky sparkling with the crisscrossing lights of the ships and the great Ring of Hydraphur.
Once again: though there is nothing specific I can point to indicating this, and while there is a degree of pollution, Hydraphur doesn't seem to be the "ash-filled poison wasteland" type of Hive that others like Necromunda are, or even Armageddon (which has parts of the planet still semi-habitable.)

Page 59
(Those at least she had expected to draw comfort from, knowing Navy traditions from senior members of her own family, but Battlefleet Pacificus dress used far more lavish and complex insignia than Battlefleet Ultima and medals she didn't
even recognise.)
Segmentum appear to have their own medals and awards. Or at least they exist in the Imperium in such variety that they aren't immediately or easily recognizable. Given the sheer variance of how Adeptus can operate between sectors, the way governments and even military forces can vary between sectors, this isn't surprising.

Page 59
she saw skins that had been inlaid with gems or shimmering electoos,..
Ah, the good old Electoo...

Page 60
After the fourth such encounter, as a group of middle-aged men in particoloured cloaks made into swirling wings by implanted memory-wires extravagantly waved them past, Leandro confirmed her suspicion.
Implanted memory wires. We see these in another novel used as weapons. HEre, they seem decoration.

Page 61
Calpurnia supposed that there were blast-shutters and defence gates - the Adeptus Ministorum was a warrior church and its sacred buildings were supposed to be military strongpoints - but they seemed to be retracted and sealed and they stood before an open arch.
Calpurnia notes that Ministorum churches ar as much fortresses as places of worship. Which could probably mean they have armouries as well (for the Frateris).

Page 62
These were warriors of the Cathedral's guard, Adepta Sororitas, battle sisters of the Order of the Sacred Rose, stern and proud in sleek white power-armour and black surcoats, gold-embroidered with the fleur-de-lys of the Ecclesiarchy. Their bolters were trained on the Arbites, as unwavering as their gaze, until a hooded sister superior stepped through the line of her squad and gestured for them to put up their weapons.
We never get specific numbers in the book, aside from hints there are far more than two or three squads of them (noted later), but the fact they could spare squads in those situations while assisting the ARbites in providing guard duty around the Ministorum related stuff would suggest they have quite a bit more than that, for this mere subsector. If there are tens of thousands of subsectors in the Imperium, and the Sororitas presence in each is similar to here, we're talking a good 40-60 thousand squads at least... or 400-600,000 Sorortias.

Page 63
...their nameless guide steered them down a long narrow hall walled in dark tapestries, parked them under a stained-glass mural of Saint Sabbat and bade them wait.
Knowledge of the Sabbat Worlds crusade appears to have reached Hydraphur, and Calpurnia seems at least passingly familiar with it.

Page 63
Such a hub of the Adeptus is not the sort of world where a handful of Arbites can do their job walled up in a precinct fortress that they only ever leave to break a riot. Wait until you get started on introductions to the Navy authorities. There are a great many more of them - Hydraphur is effectively their system, after all.
This implies that (unoficially at least) the Navy has control of some systems, much as the Guard and other Adeptus (and allied factions) do. The ones directly in the Adeptus TErra are the ones I tend to think of as being "Imperial' worlds - worlds directly administered and influenced by the Adeptus Terra, and thus the most loyal, stable, and probably technologically sophisticated.

Page 63
"The goodwill of the Ecclesiarchy will be essential then if we are to continue our hunting, Arbitor Calpurnia. Their edicts regulate even other Adeptus, and their dispensation will allow us a freedom of operation that your conspirators, whoever they may be, might be
expected to lack."
Politics again. This time we see one of the powers the Ecclesiarchy can wield in politics and such.

Page 65
"I want to make it clear that the Arbites will have the full weight of the Adeptus Ministorum behind them in whatever measures they - well, you - take on the matter. Legal, diplomatic, force of arms, anything you require. Canoness Theoctista has stepped up the Cathedral Guard and the Eparch has conferred with his witch hunters. Your work in keeping order within the hive has been excellent; now I think it is time to pick up the trail."
The "canonness" is technically a Canoness Preceptor, which IIRC means she has something like hundreds of SisterS (upwards of a thousand perhaps) stationed here. Hydraphur is a major appointment, so that makes sense. Of course if this were typical of subsectors we'd be talking millions of troops easily, if not tens of millions. Hell even if only 10% or 1% of that were true, we're still talking many hundreds of thousands of Sororitas.. and I'd stillb et on millions just givne Astarted numbers probably.

Page 66
Baragry walked with them as far as the chamber door where a deacon waited - not their earlier guide, but a sallow looking sub-vicar with an electoo on his scalp that projected holograms of religious maxims into the air over his head.


An interesting electoo with holographic projection capability.

Page 68
"The kinds of augmetics he was using were delicate, top-notch stuff. The kind that have to tune themselves to their user over years of training. He was part of a stable, not some alley-trash wyrd who earned a favour from an outlaw medicae."
Difference between low grade (simple but adaptable/reliable) augmetics and higher-end, sophisticated but more complex augmetics.

Page 79
The long rockcrete spine of the Central Dock ran from the main entrance to the Wall barracks out through the middle of the space, splitting it into two half-kilometre hangar floors. Along each side dozens of Rhino and Repressor tanks were lined up like suckling piglets, anchored to the dirty grey walls by fuel lines and maintenance booms. From the walkway on top of the dock, Calpurnia could look down on their roofs as men, women and the occasional servitor scrambled in and out, stopping to peer upwards and salute her as she passed.
The Wall's hangar facility.. at least dozens, if not hundreds of Rhinos and other tanks. This suggests there are many hundreds, if not thousands, of troops Garrisoned in the Wall alone.

Page 83
The recorder servitor would have to be the inquisitor's property - it was not made to any pattern Calpurnia had seen before. The stumps of its arms ended in bundles of shrouded data connectors and data-arks hung at its waist, enough to make it a walking library.
Depending on the size of the "documents" and how big one defines a library, this could imply a fairly hefty storage capacity. although exact comparisons are hard.

Page 85
"Thank you, Luxom," said Calpurnia, taking it from his hand. "Am I looking for similar tampering here?"

"Those, uh, lines directly across the edges there. Through the sealant residue. That's right, that's one. We may need a microvisor check to be absolutely sure, I, uh, haven't had the time to do one yet."
- mention of a "microvisor" - apparently some sorrt of optical magnification device in visor format (Verispex gear, I imagine)

Page 88
"I believe Inquisitor Zhow resides somewhere in the Hydraphur system. They're supposed to have turned old Admiral Invisticone's estates into their own outpost."
Admiral Invisticone was a character in Barrington J Bayley's Eye of Terror novel. The Inquisition seems to have requisitioned his assets and turned them into a headquarters (rather efficient and pragmatic of them.)

this tends to lend credence to the fact that at least the broad strokes of the story, if not quite all the specifics, are canonical and did occur.

Page 89
"Most arbites generals of my acquaintance have requisitioned a vehicle for their personal use and have had certain improvements applied. Sound dampening for one, so that the officer in question might conduct briefings and operational discussions on the move."
Like most Imperial institutions, vehicles, especially those run by officers, can be modified or adapted for special use or roles. Probably with the blessing of the AdMech in such cases (or using an approved pattern of such) as opposed to the impromptu, off the cuff modifications that field Guard (or Astartes) units might employ.



Page 99
They rode in the Arbites Indictor-class fast cruiser Judgement's Clarion, a squat, blunt-prowed slab of armour and drives around a fat-bellied enginarium, her decks home to a dedicated garrison whose precinct house was their ship and whose specialty was the boarding and sacking of outlaw spacecraft.
- Arbites Indictor-class fast cruiser Judgement's Clarion. Looks idfferent (possibly heavier) than the Punisher class Strike cruiser from Execution Hour. It may be more of a "traditional" combat ship - designed for independent, long term operations rather than for more specialized roles like the strike cruiser.

Also note the existence of arbites dedicated to zero gee/space operations - even the Void Born need the Emperor's Justice.

Page 100
Nakayama had spent nearly his whole career aboard the Arbites fleets that roamed their light-years long patrol beats back and forth across the Imperium, ready to reinforce a beleaguered planetary precinct.
Described as the "more paramilitary side" of the Arbites and mention of entire fleets of craft. I suspect that each sector has their Arbites analogue to a battlefleet, but probably on a smaller scale (a couple ships per subsector, for example. That would still be countless tens or hundreds of thousands though.)

Page 101
"The Aurum Sanctus." He indicated a malignant-yellow fixator icon. "A bonded trader craft operating under direct charter from the Adeptus Ministorum, captained by Vardos del Biel, formerly an officer of the Munitorum bonded-merchant fleet until he was disgraced in some kind of disciplinary matter. Three years after that he showed up on the passenger roster of the Aurum Sanctus at the Ecclesiarchal docks at Avignor and was listed as captain for its recent voyages to Hydraphur."
Technically a Ministorum ship, I suppose, although rented/borrowed/cooopted by the Ministorum into doing their tasks.


Page 101
"The major constant seems to be the Navigator, one Peshto Vask Zemlya, who has been
confirmed by Adeptus Astra Telepathica records as having been that ship's Navigator for at least the last hundred and twelve years."
Navigators can reach 112 years and remain functional.

Page 101
"For the last decade the ship's trading charter has been underwritten by the Adeptus Ministorum. Four times over the last two and a half years the Sanctus has invoked special Ecclesiarchal charters to avoid or greatly reduce inspection protocols. The ship has also had more than its share of clashes with the Navy, repeatedly invoking Church sanction for things like course-plan approvals, quarantine audits and access to docks."
More discussion of the political powers and protections the Eccelsarichy can bring to bear, especially against other ADeptus. Predictably, not everyone obeys or likes it (such as the Navy, whom the Ecclesiarchy clashes with often.)

Page 102
"From 874.M41 to 912.M41 three other members of the Zemlya family were implicated in a well-established contraband ring within and between the Obscura, Pacifica and Solar Segmentae. They worked through puppet captains and contractual trickery that made them seem innocent dupes, but the craft themselves were traced back to Zemlya holdings in nearly every case. They transported physical contraband through the barriers imposed by quarantine and warzone interdictions, and letters of credit and transaction that allowed them to siphon resources from one system and sector to another and bypass most Adeptus monitoring protocols. A great deal of wealth ended up with some very wrong people. Backtracking data-trails and interrogations of informers suggested that it may have been going on for as much as a century. The ring was broken by the Adeptus Arbites, Battlefleet Pacificus and the League of Blackships in 915.M41 and the captains and crews were ceremonially executed by Arbiter Majore Dayn Finegall the following year, but the Zemlya themselves were Navis Nobilite and untouchable."
An interesting bit of Arbites history.. we can see that it is possible, even if rare, for criminal and other illegal operations to spread beyond the sector/subsector level.. hell in this case, beyond the segmentum level to some degree, and exist for quite some time. The really interesting bit is the implied inter-connectivity of it, both on the market/economic side (shifting resources between systems/sectors illicitly) and the fact that the scope of things implies a significant number of warp-capable starships involved in the act (Either legally owned or operated suborned into illicit activities, or perhaps smugglers/pirates/etc from outside the Imperium.)

Also, despite the difficulties of successfully carrying out and maintaining effective communications and coordination over such a scale, there are still "data trails" (electronic version of a paper trail) and other traces that remain to be tracked down.


Page 102
"For the last two days a carrier battlegroup attached to the Battlefleet Pacificus has been conducting fighter-bomber formation drills in the asteroid fields around the Psamathian Gate. Six hours ago the Sanctus appealed against an Arbites directive to change course for interception by the Praetor Katerina, citing the usual raft of Ecclesiarchal immunities by proxy. At this point Captain-Commodore Esmerian approached us through the Naval envoy's offices in the Augustaeum and volunteered to redirect his squadrons to blockade the Sanctus until we could catch up. Captain del Biel has been trying to bully his way through that blockade for the past hour, but he was forced to shed just about all of his velocity when Esmerian threatened to have his bomber wings start an attack run. At this point it's over to us."
..
"There will be a klaxon at thirty minutes to interception, and you have until then to finish muster and weapon checks."


More politics, although in this case it manifests a more direct and nasty consequence. Also note the existence of "carrier battlegroups", at least in Segmentum PAcificus (or its particular battlefleet.)

Also implication that 7-8 hours or so for Calpurnia's ship to reach the asteroid fields and investigate. Assuming the distances are equal to Earth aSteroid fields We're talking well over 100 gravities in that case. But even at 1 AU (or a fraction of an aU) we're still talking at least tes of gees, even across a mere 15-20 million km.

PAge 104
They were going in with the second wave: Aedile Senioris Phae, Calpurnia, Zhow, eight Arbites from the Clarion's garrison, two augurs from Zhow's personal staff and six of his troopers, bulky in fully-pressurised carapaces and toting shotcannon and man-high flak-slabs that they used to box in Zhow and his armour-swaddled assistants in a way that would have been comical if it hadn't slowed the team down so much.
- Inquisitorial retinue wearing "bulky, fully-pressurised carapaces" (eg self contained) as well as carrying shotcannon and "man-high flak slabs", the latter used presumably as shields and mobile armor to protect more vulnerable charges (IE the Inquisitor.) I'm guessing the flak slabs are made of the rigid flak armor stuff, which may be a sort of IG shield device (Storm shield?)

Page 104
At the cry over the vox band another double file stormed down the passageway past their own branch, then another.
..
The communication torc built into the collar of her armour carried no talk, no red Engagement runes. So far, so good.
- the arbites (and Inquisitorial retinue) are all using their own personal voxes (mounted in the helmets, presumably.) Shira is equipped with a "communication torc" built into the collar of her armour. In addition to voices, it apparently will transmit signals or data (such as runes indicationg engagements of specific troops.)

Page 105
Phae had an inertial auspex out and Calpurnia, who hadn't seen the need for one, now understood how damaging to the sense of direction that wrench between gravities could be
- "inertial" auspex. Presumably standard issue for boarding parties (at least Arbites boarding parties) given the reasons.


Page 105
They had broken in two-thirds of the way down the Sanctus's two kilometre crenellated hull, between the engines and the bridge; Nakayama would oversee the move to the stern, the holds and engineering sector while Calpurnia, Phae and Zhow pushed in the other direction to the squat ziggurat that housed the bridge.


- the bonded merchant trader being boarded (called the Sanctus) is two kilometres long. That puts it in the escort/small cruiser scale of things.

Page 106
The outer wall, the one that faced the hull and space, was covered in scriptural banners and purity
seals to ward off the dangers of the warp, and gave off the smell of old parchment and stale incense.
Possible psychic/protective measures against the warp.

Page 106
Then wordless yells and the clash of metal, and the fizzing cracks over the vox band that meant that power-weapons were discharging too near a transmitter.
Power weapons will create static/intereference with vox/comms transmitters.

Page 106-107
Calpumia had loaded her stubber with the special low-velocity frangible rounds that the Clarion carried for shipboard operations, but she had checked a shotgun and shield out of the ship's armoury as well - in their haste to get spaceborne she had not had the chance to load up on her own kit. Now as she got in formation beside Phae she felt the satisfying chunk of the shotgun locking home into her shield's gunport and watched the red spark, designating an Executioner shell, appear in the corner of the vision slot.
- Shira's stubber is loaded here with "low velocity frangible rounds" - presumably to minimize the risks of penetration or damage aboard ship. Not the first time such rounds have been used - Servitors in Black Tide used them on board as well (Although the tips were implied to be.

mention again of Arbites shields having gunports (the guns appear to lock into them physically.)

The weapon is apparently linked to the shield by some electronic means, as a red rune indicator on the vision slot of the shield (or perhaps Shira's helmet, its not explicit) lights up indicating the kind of ammo being used (in this case Executioner rounds.)


Page 107
Half the squad had formed a rough line facing the thing as it had waded through the
other half and now they caught it in a loose semi-circle of shields. This was a shock-team, suppressor charges built into their shields, and their strobing discharges knocked the creature forward into the staggering Arbites it had been tearing at, then the
spark-burst of a maul sent it back the other way.
- Arbites shields in so-called "shock teams" have suppressor charges (some sort of electirc stun/shock device, or perhaps a power field like a maul.)



Page 107
By this time the cadre were close enough to see it, a lumbering pale shape whose sickle-tipped arms swung and scissored about it with inhuman quickness, until three point-blank shotgun bursts tore it open and sprawled it, limbs and innards, across the deck and wall.
- three point-blank shotgun bursts "tear open" an Arco-flagellants. It apparently survived in some fashion until another volley kills it.

Page 107
Arcoflagellants were not vat-grown but made, made from condemned heretics who had their bodies engineered with drags and augmetics into pain-proofed murder machines and their conscious minds ripped away, leaving only a predatory animal's instincts and utter loyalty to the Ministorum.
Arcoflagellants described. I guess this sort of makes them a servitor, since some servitors ar emade from criminals or heretics. They probably are more of a higher level type of servitor despite their specialized nature, because they aren't stupid or act stupid.

Page 108
One of them managed to get a shot off that turned it in mid-air, and it was off-balance when it hit the shields. The Arbites were ready and shouldered their shields into it to knock it back out of the air even as the electrowhip bundles sprouting from the stumps of its forearms scored tracks over the rims of the shields and across their helmets and armoured backs.
Arbites armour and shielding seems ot offer some protection against shock. Not surprising considering their own mauls.



Page 108
...the flak-slabs swung wide and the shotcannon boomed. It twisted and leapt as they opened up and was actually in time to evade the first two bursts before a four-second volley shredded it.


- a "four second volley" from the shotcannons of the Inquisitorial guards shreds a second flagellant.

Page 109
"But they'd still need to come out to see to the flagellants - reconsecrate their machine-parts, make sure their human bodies are fed and properly maintained."
Maintenance requirements of arco-flagellants. I suspect servitors have similar, and it shows that tehy can't exist forever/perpetually.

Page 110
The Arbites took each blockade apart almost without slowing down: the shock-teams advanced with lasfire sizzling on their shields, fired a briefsuppressing volley through ported guns or tossed a grenade while the second rank got their aim in, then the defenders were broken by quick, precise bursts of shot and any survivors picked off with Executioner shells.

..
Phae, running through the doors a moment later, dived down beside her and pumped
three bursts of shot at the armsmen who were clustering behind the servitor and firing spindly laspistols.
- las-weapons used aboard ship. Also, Arbites shields are reisstant to sustained lasfire (laspistols mentioned later)

Page 110
Calpurnia popped up beside her and rapped the grapple-claw with her maul to short the mechanism, leaving the machine waggling its paralysed claw as if giving idiot benediction.

A moment later it tottered and crashed down as Phae shot its organic body apart, and the armsmen fled, yelping. Across the aisle a second servitor was smashed apart by krak grenades and a third began spinning in a mad circle and gouging great strips out of the walls as some minor injury to its organics threw its blank vat-grown brain into confusion.
Arbites are also using krak grenades to defeat/destroy heavy combat servitors. (or at least heavy servitors adapted to combat.) - presumably form grenade launchers, as two supporting arbites are noted to be doing this in a "methodical rain", which implies a weapon.

Power/shock mauls can generate effects that interefere with the systems of a serivotr.

Brains can be vat grown.

PAge 111
The crew had not fled far, but their ambushes were half-hearted and their aim appalling: a lasbeam or an autopistol burst would ring off a shield in the front rank, then there would be a quick shotgun boom and sometimes a single cry.
Shields again are virtually immune to autofire or las-fire. At least, from small arms.

Page 112
The cowled figure was grotesquely tall, the shoulders beneath its
purple and gold cloak too slumped and narrow, the fingers of the hand it raised too long and thick.
A Navigator. And probably a mutie.

Page 112
Although the two of them stood in front of Zemlya as a mark of trust, two proctors held their weapons on the hulking Navigator from behind where the warp eye in his forehead could not affect them if he should suddenly unmask it.
The Navigator's Warp Eye is line of sight.

Page 112-113
The ride was uneasy - the beautifully artificed and quiet structure around them was eerie enough, but the Navigator was simply wrong. There was no natural proportion about him: it was as if each measurement had been randomly twisted for longer or shorter. His chin tapered too much but the bulge of forehead under the low cowl was too blunt. His fingers were thick but his hands and wrists slenderer than Calpurnia's. But even over and above his physique, his swaying stance, his wheezing breath and his odd, acrid, smoky smell, there was just a presence about him, something that rankled their thoughts and senses.
Navigator and its physical appearance again.

Page 113
The bridge itself was equally disorienting, in its own way. It was not the forbidding, harshly-lit bunker of an Arbites ship but a stately marble belvedere with armourglass windows framed in graceful arches of precious metals and wirework.
Arbites bridges would seem to be more heaivly armored/protected.

Page 114
Zemlya swept his arms out for silence, arms that Calpurnia uneasily noticed were of different lengths and set too low on his torso.
More of the mutation of the Navigator.

Page 115
The religious trappings in the outer halls, the relic cases they had fought their way through. A bridge crew of disgraced officers, surrounding themselves with beauty that they cut themselves off from. Perfumed air stopped with nose plugs, beautiful, luxurious uniforms but chafe-cloth scoring their skins underneath…
"It's a penance ship." Calpurnia had said the words out loud before she thought about it, but Zhow nodded approvingly and spoke as if the rest of the crew weren't there.
"You know of the concept, then? It explains the turnover of officers and the arco-flagellants in the outer passageways. Presumably crew are assigned on and off as their expiations begin and end."
Gotta love the Ministorum's approach to things.

Page 115
"But the Navigator families are outside almost every law in the Imperium, sir, and can do what they will. You have no need to fear the Church, and the Church considers you a freak whose existence the Navis Nobilite charters barely make tolerable."
Scope and extent of the Navigator Houses in the Imperium. Pity they didn't

Page 116
"The wretched feud of Belisarius and Ferraci, your own brethrens' pogrom against the D'Kark, all created turmoil amongst our breed that the Zemlya thought opened the gate for them."
More name dropping. Belisarius from The Bill King Space Wolf novels.

Page 117
"The senior clergy at Chiros and Ophelia managed to get Baszle into the eparchal throne here as a loyalist to the stricter Terran factions, but the Naval curates all hate him now because he was shoehorned in here instead of one of them. Any communication he wants to make out of the system would normally go through one of the Navy's Asttopath stations or aboard a Navy craft. Even sending envoys out by civil ttaffic wouldn't escape the Navy's notice."
We see that politicking can even divide an aDeptus, such as the conflict here between Ecclesiarchal factions.

Note as well mention of "Navy Astropath stations" - whilst all are probably owned (in part) by the Adeptus TElepathica (or at least the psyker part is), the Navy seems to operate their own (possibly in conjunction - the navy runs the physical side of things while the psykers do their thing.

Page 119
It was after that that the cyber-mastiffs and their controllers began to comb the decks, armed with gene-traces from the preachers' dormitories and bundles of high-gain snooper auspexes.
Cyber mastiffs have uses for detection as well as combat. Also note the "high gain" snoooper asup

Page 119
And as the last hours of the day ebbed away Calpurnia, Nakayama and Zhow took ship for Hydraphur again, empty-handed and all in filthy moods.
Again, less than a day to get back to Hydraphur from the asteroid belt.
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Re: Shira Calpurnia novel series analysis thread

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I've decided to polish off Crossfire so that next time I can do Legacy. Which I'll cover in a single update so I can get through this and move onto blind, and then move onto other things. I still aim to get started (at least) on Horus Heresy and hopefully either FFG or 5th edition before summer, and I want to get through Zou's Bastion wars, the sisters of battles novels, and the Salamanders stuff before I dig in there. The closer I get to finishign the more impatient I get, so anticipate more 'big' update randomness like this.

This time its more Sisters of Battle oriented, a glimpse at the Famulous, etc.



Page 119
Calpurnia sat with her chin in her hands in a window-gallery on the inner face of the Ring, the great adamantine girdle that hung above Hydraphur's equator. Its wall curved away to either side of the window, studded with turrets and docking towers, glittering like the city that the Ring effectively was. The crinkled face of Hydraphur spread out below them, but the window ran high enough that she could also look beyond it to Galata, Hydraphur's moon, a peach-coloured ghost from the surface but stark and ice-silver from space, studded with glittering clusters of defence stations.


- the "Ring" - some sort tof station or yard/orbital dock that surrounds Hydraphur like a ring - similar to the one that Kuat has in Star Wars. Like Inivisticone I believe this originates from the Eye of Terror novel.

PAge120
Keeping a construct the size of the Ring from being pulled to fragments by the tidal patterns of the sun, Galata and the rest of Hydraphur's bizarre double ecliptic was a challenge that had surpassed even the building of such a thing in the first place: sections of it tens of kilometres long were built to flex and slide, allowing the Ring to gently distort instead of remainign rigid and shattering. At great intervals the band of the Ring passed through great square bastions, the most heavily fortified and protected parts of a construct that was itself a giant fortress, housing the gravitic field generators that helped smooth out the roughest of the stresses without interfering with the gravity on the Ring's decks.

Someone had told Calpurnia on her way to Hydraphur that the Mechanicus adepts trained there were renowned through the Segmentum for their grasp of gravitic engineering, simply from the experiences of managing the Ring.
Description of and composition of the Ring

Page 120
Captain-Commodore Esmerian, on the other hand, had been in a fine humour once he had heard the reports of the Sanctus boarding and had immethately ordered a dromon runner-ship to carry them back to Hydraphur at top speed. The dromonae were in-system boats, cramped and stuffy and with none of the soaring spaces of the interstellar ships, but that had suited Calpurnia's mood just fine.
Dromons. Seem to be run by (or commandeered by) the Navy.

Page 121
"That ship was in service to the Cathedral, which is to say to the High Reverend Eparch Baszle, the highest clergyman on Hydraphur. Now, the Eparch in reality has authority only over the world of Hydraphur itself, and some of the oudying civilian-controlled dockings and gates. Which is to say, just a pocket in the middle of the system. That makes the priests attached to the Naval squadrons a powerful force: they are answerable to their own military-religious hierarchy and have their own chain of command up to the Pontifex Militas aboard the Admiral's ship. "Curates of the flag", they've known as, although the title is a vernacular one with no formal Ecclesiastical currency. A powerful faction in the system since their positions can cross the divide between Naval and civil zones better than most. And because they recruit and appoint their own successors, they're self-perpetuating."
More on Ecclesiarchal politics, and the scope of their power and influence (and territory) in the Hydraphur system. That's what you get when you cram so many faiths and creeds under one banner.

Also note mention of "Naval/Civil" zones, which may be a reference to Naval/Civil/Merchant fleets from Space fleet.

Page 121
"When Lord Admiral Invisticone was assassinated." Zhow told her with a reproving look, "the Ministorum on Terra took very swift action. At that juncture the appointment of a new Eparch was about due and with no formally appointed Lord Admiral they saw the opportunity to get one of their own in, someone who had a hard-line view about traditional Ecclesiarchal authority and would be a wedge against the curates of the flag, who in the cardinals' view have taken on a little too much Navy culture to be entirely trustworthy.'"
- Again mention of Lord Admiral Invisticone.. mentioned in the Eye of Terror novel by Barrington J Bayley. Some measure of continuity, I suppose, but its an itneresting reference.

By the way, Calpurnia is being told all this by an Inquisitor, meaning that the Inquisition as well has its hands in the political situation. What's even more is that the scope of Segmentum politics, at least in a place like Hydraphur (which is important on the galactic scale) can draw influence even directly from Terra - one of those rare cases of micro management. The more visible and important the planet, the more highly advanced/protected it likely is.. but the more subject to Imperial authority (EG the High Lords) it can be as well.

Page 122-123
"...and there are how many hives here?"

"Eight on Hydraphur, not counting the smaller conurbations and the fortified shrines and forges. About twice that through the rest of the system, again not counting fortification clusters, Navy complexes and spaceborne settlements."

...

"Twenty-five hives, who knows how many other communities, sixteen planets, hundreds of space-docks and fortresses, more than forty billion people. That's the permanent population. The Naval and civilian shipping through the system can boost that by anywhere from one to ten per cent."
The scope of human habitation in the Hydraphur system - lots and lots of territory occupied both on the ground (SIXTEEN planets?) and space. What's more, there's a transient population (military and civilian alike) anywhere from close to half a billion (400 million to be precise) to 4 billion people. Hydraphur can hardly be considered typical in terms of the scale of such traffic, but its not the first time that "out-system" traffic is a fraction of the permamant population (esp 10 %) although I don't remember the exact sources at this time.

40 billion isn't huge for a system, much less for a single world (especially a hive world) but its importance may not be in numbers alone.

Page 124
Outside the port the sky was still crowded with hundreds upon hundreds of moving points of light, each one a giant centuries-old warship or defence fortress.
hundreds of warships and defence fortresses in Hydraphur.

Page 127
The microwire cutter, mounted in a bracelent and designed ot flick out of a sleeve and back in a microsecond. The toxin wand to detect poison-snoopers and auto-immunisiers and select just the right cocktail to bypass them. The quarrel launcher with its deadly flare-winged skewers which could glide along a target's pheremone trail for an hour before they accelerated in for the kill. And the long-barrelled subsonic pistol, quiet-accurate, deadly.
Types of weapons made on Hydraphur by the planet's weapons manufactuers.

Page 129
There in the unfolded display racks sat another set of killing tools: a heavy augmetic eyepiece, mounted on a steel plate with a skull-fitting curve, trailing the filmanet sthat had joined it to the man's nerves; a coronet sutdded with perceptor spines and inward-pointing wires that had fed and sped the brain; and finally, sitting on a rack of its own, the pistol itself, skeletal and long-barreled with a swept-back handguard like Navy sabres, studded as the other two were with feeds and interfaces that had embedded the thing into its wielder.
the equipment/gear of the psyker assassin who tried to kill Calpurnia earlier.. lots of linkability to the human body, as well as some sophisticiated visual and detection apparatus to back up that pistol.

Page 129-130
Two of them, a journeywoman in a filigreed facemask and a man who had been introduced to her as House Elder Makriss Tudela, with a shock of white hair and a discreet dusting of tiny platinum nuggets across the shoulders and sleeves of his tunic, bent over the weapons to caress them with tiny aug-metic microbrushes in their fingertips, taking exact measures and tasting the weapons' forging and composition. The other Tudela looked on solemnly from the rich cloth hoods that stood high above their heads. The augmetics they carried were stardingly delicate and elegant, silver like Makriss's rather than brass like those of the Artisans Quarter.
Interesting augmetics.

Page 130-131
"Tudela are the cream, the best boutique weaponsmiths in the system, which means in the
sector and maybe the segmentum. They're so respected they've been able to maintain their position without affiliating to one of the mercantile syndicates."
....
"Battlefleet Pacificus command commissions Tudela weapons to present to its officers as battle honours if that gives you any idea. And yet he looks at that gunman's kit and says that they're so foreign he can't even pick the archprint they used or what school the designer followed. I don't have quite his expertise, but I can see that these display pieces they've brought in are examples of most of the basic Hydraphur design schools, and that weapon doesn't have much in common with any of them."
A bit more on economics and industry, at least in and around Hydraphur, although there is implications beyond that scale obviously if Tudela can be well known outside the sector and acros sthe Segmentum. That sort of fame (no doubt enhanced by their ties to the Navy) probably helps them get by without subordinating themselves to any larger mercantile group (doubtless the Naval ties themselves would be a boon there.)

Also we get a bit mentioned on "archprints" and design schools (which I discuss below, but seem to represent the plans/models showing how things are built, as well as what modifications or unique touches might be added.)

Page 131
"On behalf of the family Tudela we confirm that the weapons and devices are of the kind that we construct - cousins to our own craftsmanship, as it were. But we have bent ourselves to a search lest they bear traces of the archprints bequeathed by the beneficent Mechanicus, or lest they even should reveal trace s of our own smiths or even, should I not be too bold in making such a reference, those of our rivals."
...
"Tudela has inherited certain design axioms and privileged archprints which I will not detail, but to which your weapons do not adhere to. As to those occupying our own line of craft? There are only a handful whom I would consider capable of handiwork of this quality. Of those, the Zaphraoi are bonded to Kraegen-Medell for metals and use steels provided by that cartel; there was none of their distinctive taste to the metals we inspected. Durska-Haggan can produce sighting augmetics as fine as this, but their expertise in actual firearms is shallow. To bond the pistol mechanism and the augmentation of its wearer requires a grasp of both mechanical and biometric mysteries that I know to be beyond them."
"archprints" probably refer to the specfiic "pattern" of weapon used in a given area/sector of space. The bequeathing, no doubt, references some sort of licesning approach (in return for allowing someone to use the design/tech the AdMech holds, they get some sort of recompense that benefits the AdMech as a whole.) which we have seen/heard referenced elsehwere (Necropolis, for example.)

Such designs are broadly similar, but there are subtle differences in construction and design (and capability, likely) that can differentiate between different manufacturers, and these differences are distinct and well-known enough (at least to one knowledgable about the subject) to be identifiable. We also see that various manufacturers may engage in specialization - some are better at certain things (EG visual or sighting augmetics, ballistics, etc.) than other areas.

I also suspect there is certain implication that those patterns or designs (or variations) may be counterfeited for some purpose or another, and that counterfeits can be distinguished from the original copy.


Page 132 -
"The weapon shops at the Bescalion Dock - these are operated directly under Navy control in the Gyre Marmarea, you understand. They would have the finesse to produce these, I think, being presided over directly by Mechanicus inductees. But all the major fabricatories at Bescalion operate in zero-gravity. Their micro-engineering processes quite depend upon the fact. And all the components of your specimens here were crafted under gravity."

"You can tell that?" Calpurnia asked him.
"Certain minute biases in density and balance correspond exactly to equivalent weapons made by ourselves - that means your specimens were made in Hydraphur-equivalent gravity. Those biases are what gravity-free forging is specifically intended to counteract."
The Navy, unsurprisingly, has its own Manufacturing facilities separate from the civilians,a dn they seem to operate off planet, which gives them their own unique properties.

"micro-engineering" processes is interesting, although I'm not sure how to interpret it beyond "precision engineering/manufacturing" - it may possibly suggest the processes by which they engineer super-materials.

Naval engineering seems to be able to quite easily match or exceed anything in the civilian market as well, save perhaps the most impressive/best designers/manufacturers.

Page 132
"It rules out the Navy almost totally."' put in Nakayama. "They like to keep their ships and stations a fraction below standard Hydraphur gee. Nothing you'd notice, but it would show up on the sort of scales I imagine Master Tudela uses."
AG used onobaord naval ships. I'm betting its terra standard, which suggests Hydraphur might have a slightly heavier gravity than Terra.

Page 134
The transmission chamber was set into the topmost rampart of the fortress, beneath the dome itself, one of a forest of metal fingers that carried encrypted vox and pict transmissions, anchored the fortress's void shields when they were raised, or were simply dummies to throw off attackers and saboteurs. The chamber itself was meant for private transmissions by senior Arbites, or as a bolt-hole for an arbitor or two to seal themselves in and keep transmitting if the rest of the fortress was somehow overrun.
"Transmission tower" - seems to be both used for sustaining/maintaining void shields as well as for communications purposes - the two may be related (needing to control or lower/redirect voids to allow comms to pass through, for example.)

Page 135
There was a pause, long enough for the link to begin crackling and fizzing again. Calpurnia could even make out the faint buzz and clink of the Mechanicus prayer-wheels among the vox gear.
Cogs, no dobut. Whether it is part of the function or just mysticism I don't know.

Page 138
"Are you familiar with the family Tudela? They maintain a fabricatory spike in the city plain and have a hereditary charter to use certain Mechanicus weapon archprints and lay machining techniques."
"Charter" would probably be license, since the AdMech does nothing for free.

Page 140
Casting her mind back over the last few days was almost dizzying: the Cathedral to the
Aquila Gate to the Aumm Sanctus and back.
Again it seems that the transit back and forth from the Eccleseiarchy-registered starship took far less than a day.

Page 141
After a pair of triumphal obelisks commemorating long-dead admirals, workers were shrouding in dark drapes and carefully fitting with auto-launchers that would shed the mourning cloth and fill the air with fireworks...
Auto launchers are older fluff.. although in this case used for nonmilitary purposes.

Page 143
Calpurnia approved of rules and order, and in her junior Arbitrator positions had been very suspicious of the importance that her trainers and commanders put on intuition and the feel of situations. That was a judgement she had been forced to re-evaluate, and she had made an addition to her list of the chief weapons of the Arbites: awe and fear; the shock-maul and grapplehawk and Executioner shell; the Rhino and cyber-mastiff and the Book of Law…
- Grapplehawks mentioend here- some sort of servitgor or machine (akin to a cyber mastiff?) that is equipped with a suspensor field and designed to capture fugitives. It is remote controlled and seems to have an animal imprint the way Titans do. We learn about these more in Legacy, this is just what I'd pulled off the net at the time of reading.

Page 143
The feeling got stronger on the second redirection. Their new street was completely blocked with a caterpillar-tracked streetcrawler, parked in the middle of the road and supporting a thick web of scaffolding braced against the walls. Their lead driver was alert enough to veer off while there was still a turnoff between them and the workers, but Calpurnia was peering down the street through a darkvisor as they turned.
Tracked civilian vehicle, I guess? Also darkvisor - night vision gear I'd guess.

Page 144
"Open the top hatches on your Rhinos and get the pintie weapons up and loaded. What are you carrying? Shotcannon, stubbers…? Storm-bolters."


- Calpurnia orders the Rhino drivers to get out their pintle mounted weapons and asks whether they have "shotcannon, stubbers" or "storm-bolters." showing the differnet kinds of weapons that can be top mounted. apparently they can even adjust them. It also shows the kinds of weapons the Arbites use (whcih again shows a preference for projectile weapons.)



Page 145
Every door in this city should have an Arbites override on its seals. Yes? Good. We're getting inside this building and coming out well, somewhere, wherever we can break out into or behind that scaffold. We'll need a decent number of shockgrenades
- Every door in the hive has an Arbites override built in (to allow easy acceess.)

Page 145
Calpurnia did not yet have a key-signet, but the proctor's signet was enough to override the locks and send the security shackles clanking back into the walls.
Calpurnia's ring (along with other rings of folk of her rank) can override Hydraphur's locks (all of which seem to be electronic mostly.)

Page 148
"ADEPTUS ARBITES!" Calpurnia declared into the pickup on her vox-tore. In the small-hours quiet of the street her own lungs were adequate enough, but her voice was also picked up and fired out of the little voxcasters clipped to the shield-rims of the Arbites behind her.
The comms units of Arbites have an internal as well as an extenral (And amplification) capability.

Page 148
The rearmost [Arbites], holding the lights, kept the torch-beams playing over the ambushers' faces.

Those further up wedged their backs against the building and braced their shields in front of them, brought their shotguns to bear through the ports and began a steady suppressing fire.
Arbites tactics against ambushers.

Page 149 -
A frag grenade went off above the ledge and shrapnel crackled against shields and helmets - two Arbitrators were dislodged by the blast and toppled, yelling, into space.
Arbites carapace and riot shields provide some protection against the nearby detonation of a grenade, though the blast knocks two Arbitrators off and makes them fall.


Page 149
Ware shocks!' came from behind Calpurnia and she hunched and jammed herself home as best she could as three grenade-tubes chugged behind her. There was a moment for the grenades to arc up and in, and she could clearly hear them ringing and bouncing into the gantry, and then there was the flat ka-whapp of shock-grenades that compressed her ears even through the muffles on her helmet and more rings and clanks as stunned bodies dropped down through the gantry to the street.
shock grenades. Some sort of stun/incapaciatation device, presumably like a flashbang. (the fact that they produce loud noises and concussive effects that can render people unconscious, albeit with blood streamign from nose and ears, suggests this.)


Page 149
he
Arbitrators behind her were moving forward a little more slowly, keeping their shields up and firing around her. They had loaded clips of homing Executioner rounds, and now their shots passed Calpurnia with their distinctive buzz as they curved into the scaffold to seek out their targets.


Executioner rounds being used.

Page 149
A grenade whistied past, pinked off an Arbitrator's shield behind her and exploded in mid-air. Knocked forward by the blast, Calpurnia used the momentum to grab another railing and swing down onto a steel-mesh platform. A bandolier of grenades still hung from a utility hook there; the man with the launcher had retreated to the web of beams below it and was peering up at her as he worked the slide.
A second grenade bounces off a riot shield and detonates again, with little effect aside form buffeting the arbites. I'm guessing its concussion grenades, since Shira doesnt get peppered by fragments.

Page 150
With the Arbites on the ledge still in shadow and the Executioner shells homing in earnestly, the firefight became a rout, the last of the ambushers leaping and swinging downward like startled primates, shouting in fear or anger, one or two still bothering to fire wildly until cruelly accurate bursts from the Rhinos' storm bolters blew them apart. Two more landed on the streetcrawler and made to flee until a shock-grenade sent them reeling with blood welling in their nostrils and ears.
Storm bolter blows people apart, shock grenades seem to work like a flashbang or concussion grenade of some kind. executioner rounds seem self homing.

Page 150
one of the injured ones on the ground gripped the hellpistol that had been slung at his neck and took the front of the woman's head off before three streams of shrill white fireflies from the storm bolters hosed every living thing off the streetcrawler deck.
Rather interetsing that a hellpistol, a rather rare, expensive and high end laspiece, seems available to common sorts, at least on Hydraphur. Blows off front of woman's head.

Page 155
She resignedly clipped her carapace back over her bodyglove and then followed him away.
Shira's carapace, and this isn't the first time, seems to easily attach/detach to her body glove, not unlike the Sapi/Esapi plates of modern body armor, except perhaps far more protective (then again we've only seen it against pistol grade weapons.)

Page 156
Beyond it the sun was just lifting its lower rim off the horizon: the
bright pinpoints of the lower, brighter orbitals and the silver stripe of the Ring pricked and slit the apricot-coloured dawn sky.
Perhaps the best indicator that Hydraphur is still vaguely habitable - they can see the sun and stars.


Page 157
"Well, the Ministorum and this hot-blooded campaign by the Eparch to get control over the Naval investitures is the current flashpoint, but it's turned the whole role of the Adeptus on Hydraphur into a sore point again. Hydraphur looks like an Imperial world like any other when you're on it, but don't let that fool you. It's a Navy system, and the Navy have never been happy with having the primary planet denied to them. It's been that way since the Age of Apostasy, of course. The mark that Bucharis and his cohorts left on this whole segmentum was profound. Here, the Administratum's decree of partition was an attempt to create a civilian counterweight to Navy authority in the system and balance them out against one another."
More on Ministorum politics as far as the Navy has been concerned, and how it brings other factions in (like the Adminsitratum). It keeps thing from beign decisively done but also keeps things in check, I suppose.

Page 157
"The planet was where the non-Navy presence had always been, what there was of it - a dedicated Ecclesiarchy shrine, an Adepta Sororitas convent, a way station for Navigators, that kind of thing. Even a lot of what the Navy did here wasn't military. Farms to supply the better class of provisions for the officers, estates for the better officer dynasties."
Non-Naval holdings on-planet, as well as nonmilitary Naval holdings (At least til Invisticone got fragged)

Page 158
"The Navy had holdings on Hydraphur right up until Lord Admiral Invisticone was assassinated about two hundred years ago. After he was dead the Inquisition took over the fortress he had occupied in the other hemisphere and since then the planet Hydraphur has been the pocket of non-Naval authority that it was meant to be.'"
Navy got booted off after the Admiral from Eye of Terror kicked the bucket.. This means the EoT novel took place well over 200 years or so in the past.. which would be around the time of the Sabbat Worlds crusade and well before the Eisenhorn/Ravenor novels.

Page 158
Civilian shipping increased, there's a far greater Adeptus presence, the Navigators and the Scholastia Psykana have a much bigger permanent base at the Blind Tower, and the Cathedral has become quite an important centre of power in its own right, the junction of a whole series of pilgrimage routes from the northern sectors through to Gathalamor and points south.
..
All it did was give the Navy the excuse to insist on even tighter control of the rest of the system.
They covered the other worlds and all the major orbital paths in both ecliptics with fortifications and shipyards - as is their right, of course, their perfect right, but the terms of the partition allowed them to ran all that territory with even more autonomy than before."
More politics. to compensate the Navy exerts its influence on the rest of the system (and noone, apparently, can gainsay them... which shows you how tightly delineated various parts of the Imperium are, and why the politicking is so vehement.. one faction is constantly trying to infringe on the territory of another to expand, which causes friction with the continued fight over authority. Scale downwards to sector, subsector and planetary levels for similar cases. Throw in infighting, politcking and competition in the actual organizations themselves, all the feudal stuff and there's your 'modern' Imperium.)

Also of note is how variable Adeptus presence can be (which likely determines the authority of the various factions on the planet, who claims or controls it, or who at least influences it the most, and its relative importance to the Imperium.) Te blind tower (Seen in the third novel) seems to be jointly a Astropath and Navigator enclave (probably due to prejudices about mutants and spykers.)

We also see that pilgrimages can be a big tool in the Ministorum's hand, especially when it comes to long-distance travel.


Page 159
"Each syndicate is nominally sponsored by interests outside the system under Administratum charters. That provides the access to civilian shipping that the Navy doesn't have, the access to commerce and travel off-planet that the on-planet aristocrats are forbidden, and the navigational privileges and letters of passage that only the Navy can provide and the other two need."
...
"To the outsystem cartels the syndicate relationship isn't so all-defining, and for the Naval families getting too close to the whole thing is a little gauche"
"outsystem syndicates" I suppose reflects inter-sector/subsector mercantile activity (possibly at higher levels) which seems to be independent of direct naval control (again possible reflection of the whole civil/merchant/military fleet divisions) but which also permits access to things the other factions (like the Eccelsiarchy) needs. And the "commerce and travel" off planet.

Page 168
There was no time to redraw the shotgun, let alone to lock it back into the gunport so she could fire it one-handed with the shield to steady it.

..
She had to bound backwards to soak up the momentum and leave it to faith that there was nothing waiting behind her while she drew her stubber: the reassuring feel of the lock-glove clicking together around its grips was instantaneous and it took a second for her to plant one foot behind her to fire.
Shield gunports provide stability and i suspect recoil compensation for the shotgun. I suspect the "lock glove" is akin to the Dark Heresy/Rogue Trader recoil gloves which provide recoil compensation and firing stability.

Page 168
-the gunport was good for point-blank shots and suppression fire, but now she was going to need two hands to aim. Even with her helmet visor darkening to counter the lights, she was still blinking from the change in illumination when the floor began to move.
Limits of the shield gunport, which in turn suggests that ARbites might work in teams (shield crews providing close range support and suppression fire, whilst others provide precision fire. Also helmet visor offers flare/glare resistance.

Page 170
Calpurnia stood on the transparent slab of the platform behind the bank of controllers, watching the emplacement raining high-speed paint rounds on a gaggle of Arbitrators who were trying to work their way forward through a graveyard of simulated Rhino wrecks to fire grenades into the mechanism.

...

From around them in the dimness came more noises: the bang of firearms and the doublecrack-screech of bolters, the crack-sizzle of power weapons, sirens, voices, and the ceaseless ramble of the heavy chains, pistons, belts and cables under the floor and over their heads that operated it all. Walls and floors moved, attacks were sprung by automata, servitors or practice hulks lowered on chains, areas filled with smoke or were showered with water, light, artificial hail, blasts of sand or disorienting noise.
...

It had been far too long since she had trained in a Klavier Maze, and she realised this was the most relaxed she had felt since she first touched down on Hydraphur.
Arbites training


Page 177
Outside she could hear the droning of the savants processing their financial algorithms, murmuring the numbers and trigger-phrases that would feed each piece of data through the complex formulae hypnotically implanted into them.
Finance servitors or agents or some sort of pseudo-mentat thingy.

Page 179
She had spent an eighteen-month round trip on a transport carrying penal legionnaires from Drade to suicide battalions mustering on the border with the xenos tau, and had finished her tour at Don-Croix as a section leader aboard one of the Arbites picket-ships that kept guard over the hellish in-system prison worlds.
Penal legions and suicide battalions.. again yes cnanon fodder. Used against the tau (yeah good idea that.) Rather interesting that it took 18 months to do it all.

Also arbites picket ships.

Page 180
The Penitential Calculus was its proper name. Hydraphur held its prisoners in a long chain of camps strung across the planet's face, on two giant space stations that stood out from the Ring in heavily-guarded pockets of space, and aboard an endless circuit of shuttles and runner-ships that kept them all linked in carefully patternless migrations. Governing that system was the Calculus, a code, a maze, a cat's cradle of encryptions, double-blinds and randomisations. A cipher for a prisoner here, for a cell or a penal ship there, sentences and transfer times and locations all swimming deep in a lightless sea of false data and ever-shifting codekeys. Even had the Grand Pro vost Marshal stirred from his palace on Earth to demand the whereabouts of the least of the prisoners held in Hydraphur, he would have had to wait until the name had been passed through the calculus and a coded report brought back out to know whether the subject was a prisoner in Hydraphur at all.
...
With them were the finest logisters the Adeptus Mechanicus could craft and three
families of savants and lexmechanics whose children were indentured to the Calculus at birth. The codes and formulae had grown so intricate with the passing of time that now each generation of savants began their training and mind-conditioning almost from the moment they could talk and count, and the officers who took food and messages into the oubliette were hereditary positions too, oathbound and guarded in turn.
An arbites orbital prison. What it has in complication it makes up for in imagination. I would guess the complexity is what makes it a good prison, althoug heaven help the arbites if they lose the codes. Also note what I suspect are more mentat-like savants governing those codes.

This sort of thing, no doubt, is what gives the Arbites its reputation for glacially slow justice - security matters more than speed.

Page 183
"The Eparch wanted some senior men of the Adeptus Ministorum to be able to move out of the system without Navy knowledge. There's an Ecclesiarchal penance ship in orbit to carry them out of the system, but the carriers who could bear these people up to the Ring are all known and watched. And so who better to use than a family with access to orbital lifters, a record of ties to the Ministorum, and who are desperate to re-earn favour with the Church?"
we see again that politics can render alot of the absolutist declarations (like "The Navy controls nearly all the starships in the Imperium" irrelevant.

It also highlights a more subtle sort of Grimdark.. the way the Ecclesiarchy is willing to ruin lives and families and other people just to play its political games, as the poor family who shipped for them ends up suffering the consequences of their politicking. That the ecclesiarchy can have utter dicks in it is of course no great shock.

Page 186
No answer. Calpurnia wondered if Fochs had been damaged somehow in the cells. She frowned on head wounds during interrogations - they affected the reliability of testimonies.
How caring.

Page 195
Their Sororitas escort, Sister Iustina, was handing out little half-loops of wire with murmured blessings. Calpurnia stared at hers, and at the intricate little globes on the ends, until she saw the others looping theirs around their heads and followed suit. There was a brief, disturbing moment as the beads writhed and fitted themselves to her ears; the sounds around her grew tinny but no less distinct.

"A tech-arcanum provided by our companions in the Adeptus Mechanicus," Leandro told her as Sister Iustina unchained the stairway and motioned for them to follow. "Certain sounds are filtered and certain ones permitted. You will see why in a moment."
The beads are needed to dampen the noise of the massive Cathedral bells. Some sort of stummer technology I suppose?
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Part 2 and we're done. Next time, Legacy.


Page 201
Both ecliptics of the Hydraphur system swarmed with Navy fortifications, from the Ring itself, through the necklaces of orbital fortresses that every world in the system wore, the free-stations surfing the shifting gravitic tides between the ecliptics, the lumbering battlegroups of the Squadron Hydraphur prowling the system like panthers in a cage, the tiny sentinel stations and free-floating hardpoints tucked into the curling asteroid belts, the clouds of deadfall torpedoes in the system fringes, and the bunkers and citadels spread across every world and cut into the crust of every moon. But the bulk of the Navy's second-line facilities, the fief-planets it controlled, its forges and shipworks, the Navigator stations and telepathica metrices, the four giant Naval academies and the luxurious spaceborne estates of the officer-aristocrats, were concentrated in the Gyre Marmarea, the larger elciptic that tilted towards the borders of the Segmentum Obscuras.
Orbital fortifications of Hydraphur, including the defenses.

Page 202
When the ship's astropaths and logisters tried to authenticate their respective halves of the code with the Naval patrols above the Ring, it registered as correct for the first pass and the dromon was cleared to close. Halfway through its approach the code transmissions, despite the layers of security and elaborate fault-tolerance procedures, abruptly began to clash and contradict and the runner arced gracefully into the path of Highcaster, a cargo barge accelerating away from the Ring towards an outbound Navy cruiser.

The dromons were designed to double as system defence boats in an emergency, and the ship had enough agility to turn and glance off the barge and enough structural toughness not to break up immethately. Its starboard side a mass of furrows, bleeding oxygen from its decks and plasma from its drives, the dromon spiralled slowly away as klaxons screamed through the Ring and tugs and emergency boats scrambled through the launching-gates. The barge was less lucky, knocked directly toward the Ring with its back broken by the impact. The roared commands of the Gunnery Control commander for the fortress batteries to wait bought it enough time for about a third of the crew to reach saviour capsules, but the rest, or as many of them as had survived the collision, were incinerated with the ship when the Ring gunners decided they had no more time.
Naval security measures, and more on the defenses.


Page 203
He walked into the command dome at almost the same moment as two members of the Naval Adjudicature, there with a team of Naval Security invigilators to make their own formal report.
Naval Security forces (seen in Eisenhorn) seem to encompass more than just guns and troops,

Page 205
She waited to reply to him until they were well on their way back to their cutter, tramping loudly through corridors of tarnished, raw-looking iron whose walls were run through with heavy girders and studded with great rivet-heads twice the size of Calpurnia's fist.
Inside the Ring. Rivets. Probably the magic rivets that supposedly early iteration Space Marine armour uses. Then again we know lots of other things can get riveted too. Rivets are very gothic and grimdark after all (It wouldn't be surprising if they had more of an ornamental or religious function rather than practical either, the same way everything technical seems to involve cogs and gears in some fashion..)

Page 206
"But doesn't it worry you that the inner gate, that's what you call that ring of wayfortresses
just outside maximum orbit, isn't it, the inner gates? Right. The inner gate which might be implicated is the nucleus of the squadron that gave that runner its clearance..."
The "inner ring" are the orbital defenses.. the last line of defenses I imagine. Each ring seems to have its own mobile forces.

Page 207
If only the Judgement's Clarion had still been stationed at the Ring, but the little carrier had been called from the Aurum Sanctus interception to a suppression operation at the edge of the Gyre Aurucon and would not be back at Hydraphur for weeks.
This seems to imply perhaps that the Arbites ship might be sublight, since the various "gyre"s seem to be in the same system as Hydraphur.

Page 208
In the systems Calpurnia had served in on the south-eastern fringe, the fortresses that rode vital positions in the system's ecliptic were known as points; in Hydraphur they were known as gates. They rode the gravity well at points where the heaviest traffic tended to pass, where it was easiest to slingshot from one Gyre to the other, or to skirt around the largest gas giants or past the dense asteroid belts that looped and twisted through the system. That made the stations gates in more than name - nearly every ship that wanted to pass into the system by a safe and stable route would at some point have to pass through space that a gate station controlled.
It makes traffic orderly and predictable, and it quite probably saves fuel. Space Based arbites forces can operate from fixed locales as well.

Page 208-209
The Inner Charisian Gate was one of the smaller ones, not a self-contained fortress but part of an array of platforms and stations that stood out from orbit to form a second, dispersed Ring of guns and attack-craft bays. Small it might be by the standards of the giants further out, but it still filled the cockpit window when Calpurnia slipped forward to watch their approach. It wove and tilted in front of them as their pilot threaded them through the stacked minefields and the fire-lanes of the outrigger turrets.

..

Soon the gate had spread to fill every corner of the port, a fat pitted egg of an asteroid, glittering with windows, ringed with void-shield spines and docking gantries and with great tiered steeples of reinforced adamantium jutting above and below it.
System defence fortress. And they apparently get bigger.


Page 210
Lights over the top of its door clanked on and glared at them, and Calpurnia had
to take her helmet from Bannon and don it; once behind the polarising lenses she was able to get a good look at the group in the
carriage.
- mention of "polarising lenses" in Shira Calpurnia's helmet.


Page 210

He was flanked by two ratings, faceless in heavy rubberised work-ponchos and hoods, carrying heavy-duty chainblades on the ends of bulky fighting shafts, blades to cut through wrecked bulkheads, tangled cables or enemy flesh with equal ease. A Naval Security trooper in a uniform that was almost a mirror of the Arbitrators' rounded out the party, flamer held ready with the igniter jet lit.
Naval Security troopers, arbites analogue here rathe rthan storm troopers. Flamers and chainblades used in boarding actions (weapons which seem to double in tools.)

Page 210-211
His sabre and a heavy Naval pistol were hung at his sides and the right half of his jaw was augmetic steel that glittered in the lights.
..
The man's speech was odd, the synthetic lip on the artificial part of his jaw not quite able to do its part in forming words.
Interesting augmetics.

Page 212
...but their grudging host instead took them to a double shuttered door flanked by two more ship's security troopers, holding fat-barrelled hellguns on the corridor.
Here we go... security troopers with hellguns.

Page 214-216
"I have witnessed judgements of officers of the Navy and of the Imperial Guard and of planetary and system governors. I have twice helped to pass sentence on men and women of both those organizations, some of them more highly ranked than you, gate-captain."
...
"How much do we have in common, do you think? How much do I have in common with some woman who marches onto my own station, the station of which I am the duly appointed captain, to demand that I jump to her tune? Every last one of the crew of this gate would walk out of the airlocks if I ordered it, because a captain, on his ship, and this gate station is my ship, Arbitor, embodies final authority."

"If you do not feel you're answerable to the Arbites, de Jauncey, then fine. You can argue the exact points of law with the savants and locutors when they arrive on my heels. We can all meet back in this chamber and explain your position to you. If you still want to resist the will of the law then, well, I think I mentioned that you won't be the first renegade Naval officer I've helped to take down."
...
"That was a threat, Arbitor Calpurnia. You threatened me. You came onto my gate and you stood there and you threatened me."
"Yes, gate-captain, that is exactly what I did. I'm fed up with dancing around and mouthing fancy words to get the co-operation I should expect by rights. I have the authority and the justification to threaten you and I am using it."
...
"The Crusader Ascendant is due to dock at this gate within six hours. I refer, for your information, to the flagship of Commodore Hayl Omenti, commander of the Fourth Hydraphur Squadron and Warden of the Inner Gates. Do not doubt that he will have something to say about the way some," ' he made a dismissive
gesture, "some little Arbitrix came scuttling aboard in a planetary-orbit cutter to try to subvert a gate-captain's authority."
We see both politics again muddying the waters as far as authority is concerned. And we see Calpurnia has no tact whatsoever. That siad, the following events stemming from these prove that there are others both in the Battlefleet and Arbites who are both more political and more tactful.

Page 220
Now humming and spitting with power, her maul didn't need a big swing to do damage and she feinted low with it then swatted his hands when he tried to block. She had upped the setting a notch and the crack of power blew the truncheon out of me man's hands and took off the tips off six of his fingers.
...
Calpurnia, in no mood to be merciful, tilted her shoulder in and made a sharp downward chop that shattered his collarbone and left a scorched, ruined weal from his shoulder to his belly. The maul bucked in her hand as it hit and the man crashed backward, slid along the wall and down it to jitter on the floor.
Variable settings on power mauls, higher setting has explosive effects.

Page 226
Apart from the commissar, each side's retinue of legal savants and clerks had withdrawn to the corners of the room.
Legal savants.

Page 233
She had a little experience with duels in Ultramar, where such wasteful infighting was considered contemptible, and Arbites internal laws on duelling were iron-hard. But she knew about the reverence that ceremonial duelling was held in elsewhere and knew this was an earnest event,
Duelling laws. Like most things in the Imperium they aren't univeresal.

Page 235
Stripped to boots, breeches and singlet like his opponent, he carried a single-edged hacking-blade, part falchion and part hatchet, the blade flared and weighted at the head to
allow vicious, limb-severing strokes.
...
De Jauncey was fending him off with something longer, a ludicrous-looking weapon that put Calpurnia in mind of a double-handed axe with a bizarre tuft of hair like that on a comic tumbler in a circus. It wasn't until she had watched them trade lunges for at least a minute that it clicked home from a long-ago weapons seminar: it was a shipboard weapon, the whippy bristles on the end needle-tipped fibres that drew a charge from a power pack in the counterweight at the far end of the shaft. It was a weapon for boarding action when quarters were too close for firearms or flamers, designed to swing and cut into the enemy or to be thrust forward so that at least one or tow of the bristles would find their way through a weak point in the heavy reinforced suits and hoods that ship-to-ship boarders wore for protection.
Interesting sorts of naval boarding weapons.

Page 236
De Jauncey's technique was classic aristocratic fencing, emphasising poise, skill and finesse, and Modjeska's was the classic Commissariat style, designed to make a political point as much as win a fight: an assertion of the commissar's savage authority to impose Imperial discipline by whatever means necessary.
Commissarial combat style... pretty much in line with their purpose and weaponry.

Page 236
...swatting the electrified quills away with the baton in his left hand. It must be ceramite or plastic, Calpurnia thought, watching sparks spit between the quills but nothing come down the baton
to the commissar's arm.
Ceramite must be a good insulator.

Page 238
"I think I managed to achieve sufficient rapport with the commodore and to consider myself informed, and I can inform you that Omenti has strengthened his views on the matter. You may have noticed that the most respected commodore has a different attitude on co-operation with the Arbites than does a certain gate-captain under his command. Said gate-captain is considered to have brought quite enough disrepute to his battlefleet, never mind unfavourable attention from an order of the Adeptus who, as you have apparentiy pointed out to the gate-captain, is capable of exacting perfectly legitimate penalties from the Navy should it see the need."
As I said, the higher ups in the little conflict were more political and generally tactful on the matter than Calpurnia and De Jauncey were. Like I've continually said we see that simply having the authority is not enough to get things done, and politics means that the use of authority has to be weighted against potential consequences... such authority is more a symbol than a tool,

Page 239
Pale and tired, he sat in a padded chair by a half-metre thick window of armour-glass that looked out over a cluster of lance muzzles and the dim shapes of two docked dromoni.
Half metre thick armourglass window.

Page 242
"Their behaviour is odd - yes, I know, but even for astropaths it's odd - bodily twitches, facial tics, false starts at conversation directed at thin air."
..

"They told me that these are the symptoms of a psyker-trick," de Jauncey went on, "a mind-command bored so deep into the brain the victim himself may not know of it. These can be built subtly by an experienced psyker to make the catspaw almost impossible to detect, or they can be hammered into an otherwise untouched mind full-force. Such a command will echo inside the mind and soon burn out the one it has been forced into, but until that happens it will be irresistible.
Interesting psyker trick against astropaths.

Page 245
These must use parchment of the type decreed by the Ministorum and perfumed
with the required incenses, and be sealed with plaswax tablets given out by the priests.
I cna't help but cynically think there is a economic reason for this, given how everything else on Hydraphur is political. "Use only ministorum approvied candles and incense for maximum sanctity!"

Page 246
One hour from sundown, all citizens should present themselves at a chapel with the blades for their scourges for the following day. These must be blessed and ritually sharpened by a member of the Ministorum or Sororitas. Children too young for scourging should assist in sharpening their parentsʹ blades as a way of preparing them for the age when they will participate. Those who have not begun to fast must do so after their blades have been blessed.
Ouch.

On a more sierious note that the Sororitas is considered equal to a "member of the Ministorum" at least for the purposes of this task. Also at least they set a minimum age to the scourging.

Page 247
They came bulleting back from the Inner Charisian Gate with the engines on the Geodess open to the fullest, unable to converse for the noise over the voxcasters. The magos overseeing the plasma core had declared this was an ill-omened time for high-speed, high-output engine settings and his congregation of tech-priests were broadcasting their chants through the entire ship in an effort to keep its anima appeased against the strain.
Plasma engines seem to be variable performance, not unlike (I think) VASIMIR engines.

Page 247-248
They had been careful to keep all their astropathic communications as routine as possible, but it was not possible to disguise the the code-red overrides that had yanked normal traffic out of their way. If there were still astropaths in the Ring implanted with Dwerr's deep-buried commands, commands they themselves would not know they carried, they could not be allowed to know something was amiss.
it's possible for astropaths to transmit things without being aware of what they transmit, much less understanding it.


Page 248
Some kind of autogyro had tried to take off from a landing-shelf halfway up the citadel's northern wall only to be shot down by a stream of rocket-grenades from the very shelf it had taken off from, and it had then steered itself around and rammed its own launching-pad rather than crash
Auto-gyro, shot down by rocket greande.s

Page 249
The Lyze household guard had commanding positions, good weaponry and, at least at first, determination. Arbitrator weapons tended to be for crowd suppression and storm actions rather than the building-levelling artillery of the Imperial Guard, and so the cordon had retreated from the walls, particularly when precinct records showed that at last inspection there had been two layers of minefields under the gap and deadfall grenades built into the walls' undersides
Arbites, unsurprisingly, don't seem to use much artillery. Note the "building levelling artillery" refrence as well.

Page 253
She had to wait for a minute for Leandro to answer, through a bark of static and then the distant sound of voices and the distinctive clinks and buzzes of an Arbites command holo-tank updating its display.
Arbites command holotank.

Page 257
The replacement aquilae were often little more than silhouettes scraped on with ash or burned on with a hand flamer at low setting.
..
Beneath it was the smell of flamer gases and the thicker, greasier stink of burning meat. And
around the pyres were the congregation.
Variable setting flamers that run on some gas.

Page 257
On the other, likewise half consumed, a spindly figure with the high cranium of an Astropath and the glint of metal plugs and neurocere\bral augmetics still visible through its blackened flesh.
Astropath implants.

Page 258
Page
Two women, both hard of eye and regal of bearing, had been leading the singing in clear, powerful, trained voices.
..

Both wore holy aquilae around their necks, and the fleurde- lys insignia of the Adepta Sororitas. These were not the power-armoured Sisters Militant of the Order of the Sacred Rose who guarded the Cathedral; rather, they wore the elaborate gowns, cloaks and veils of the Order of the Sacred Coin, one of the Orders Famulous, appointed by the Ecclesiarchy as teachers, chatelaines and spiritual overseers to the great families of the Imperium across the galaxy.
Rebellion against a noble house lead by Orders Famulous, which is one of the roles of their order.

Page 258-259
The Haggan syndicate, they told her, had attracted the suspicious eye of the Sororitas a hundred and fifty years before when the Inquisition found cause to purge one of its families' holdings towards Hydraphur's southern pole. And within the Haggan syndicate, the ruthlessness and declining piety of the Lyze had prompted quiet but increasingly urgent efforts by the Order of the Sacred Coin to contain it as two generations of Sisters Famulous found that efforts to inculcate Imperial faith and ideals were less than successful. Gallans and her own mentor had begun their own subtle manoeuvres twenty years before. They had dilligently worked to counter the expansion of the Lyze power-base into space by nurturing relationships with planetary families with impeccable religious records, and quietly redirecting as much of Lyze's economic efforts as they could into ventures that involved contact with Ministorum officials. When the Lyze had begun acitvely courting astropaths as allies and contacts the suspicious Sisters, in careful collaboration with their counterparts elsewhere in the city, had begun to lay a fifth column, arranging marriages of lower-level retainers with devout deacons and ex-missionaries who moved inot the Lyze fortress and began to inoculate the population of the citadel with loyalty to the Golden Throne and the Holy Emperor above its masters' loyalty to themselves and their coffers.
..

Sister Superior Gallans had politely asked paterdomus Therion Lyze whether she should report Dwerr's visit to the Administratum and the Adeptus Arbites, as was the requirement on Hydraphur, and was told that that had already been seen to by Therion's own staff despite Gallans' own informers telling her to the contrary. At the same time word reached Mimetas that the family was preparing some kind of secret bolthole for Dwerr. That was when Gallans had begun overseeing discreet thefts from the House armouries to her own chambers, and the Sisters had used the schedule of religious observations dictated by the Vigil to assemble and arm their own partisans, ready for their signal.
The end result of all this was that when the ARbites and sisters of Battle attempt to force entry to the facility, the rebellious defenders find themselves facing off against Imperial loyalists within the Lyze's own staff, lead by the Sisters Famulous, which facilitates the entry of the Arbites and Sororitas. It just goes to show you how udnerhanded and dangerous the Ministorum can be.



Page 262
She found him standing at the foot of the metal fold-down steps to the extended-chassis Legatuspattern
command Rhino with its forest of transmitter vanes, looking benignly out at the crowded, chaotic Arbites encampment that
the Lyze main gates had become.
...

Leandro had donned a surcoat of heavy ballistic cloth over his judge's robes as a precaution....
- Arbites Judge adopts a surcoat of "heavy ballistic cloth" over his robes.

Page 262
Leandro said as he watched the first of the aquila-marked prisoners submitting to
fingermark scans, eye-readings and stinging blood-samples.
self explanatory.

Page 263
They were sitting in the lord's litter, a slender carriage on a gravitic cushion a metre above the ground, with a
driver at the front and a shelf-seat for Hallyan's giant guard at the back.
..
...which now at a gesture of Hallyan's created a shimmering privacy field that blanked them out from anyone outside.
...

..Calpurnia could feel the slight rocking of the seat beneath her cushion as the team of elegant, stilt-legged servitors tugged the carriage into motion.
- Hydraphur noble has supsensor-equipped carriage (pulled by some sort of paired servitors)

Page 264
"An Ecclesiarchal curfew is in place as well as your judicial one, and there are bans on dining and drinking-houses, gaming, theatrical entertainments, any manner of public association other than certain religious processions."
Entertainments available on Hydraphur in non-religious or judicial circumstances.

Page 265
Hallyan made as though to look out of the litter's doorway, although there was nothing to see except the shifting, depthless greys of the privacy field.
Privacy field, for stealth and privacy purposes.

Page 265
Augmetic plates with a certain pattern of flesh-clips and filaments, half of a phylacterial headband rathating slender perception spines. And a long-barrelled assassin's
pistol with a swept-back grip.
We learn these are devices held by (at least certain) noble families for private wars.. its rare stuff but not unheard of, so it is of Imperial manufacture, just high grade civilian.

Page 269
The privacy field faded into a sudden rush of sound, and the two Arbites climbed wordlessly out of the litter and walked away to the command post.
Privacy field again.

Page 269
"And yet he had the privacy field between him and it - there was no way to activate the thing verbally. There had to be a more advanced signal that he could activate through the field."
more on privacy fields.

Page 270
"Just an aristocrat custom, such as is found all over the sector and I have no doubt further afield still, in different forms. The custom of setting about a task, whatever it may be, in an inefficient way as a matter of deliberate choice, the intention being to present and emphasise the symbolism of that inefficiency."
..

"You rub everyone's noses in the fact that you're too privileged to have to worry about being practical. You're right, it happens everywhere. The deep-space foundry masters at Hazhim used to wear loose robes that were impossible to work in if you were weightless. That was how they advertised that they were above menial work."
An interesting little quirk that may explain some of the bizarre habits and atittudes in the Imperium as a whole.

Page 270
"The true cream of the elites won't even put in autoreactor commands, you know. One could walk up and punch them in the teeth and the guard would stand there and watch you until they actually told it to kill you."
Servitors have to be programmed in with auto-react commands (for self defense)


Page 271
"There are enough conflicting judgements and precedents and decrees for an army of counsel-savants to weigh and debate on, and every shipment of new volumes of the Book of Law from Terra adds more of them."
Imperial "Law" would seem to be more of a living document than anything, much in the same vein as the Tactica Imperialis. The Imperial Cult seems to be much more literalist (though adaptable in its own way.)

Page 273
...and the small blades blessed the previous day should already be bundled on the end of the scourge lanyard ready for the prayer to end. The scourging should bring on collapse by the time the confessions are burned away, and those too physically or morally weak to achieve such a state in time may plead assistance from members of the clergy who will be patrolling for this purpose.
Again. Ouch. See this is the kind of fucked up shit that seems appropriately 40K... 11 out of 12 months are fairly normal, but then you have this one month of prayer, fasting.. and a day where you flail your back bloody with razor blade scourges.

Page 283
Somehow she wasn't surprised. The creatures had sped up slightly too, and… yes, the swarm was definitely growing. It was broader, denser than when it had first poured down the side of the statue. Calpurnia had an idea of where the mass from the stripped grass and earth had gone, but how could anything reproduce that quickly?
..
A frantic shake of her foot dislodged the grabs that had crawled onto it, but each had left a part of itself, a head that kept drilling and champing at her armoured instep.
..
Now the black of the carapaces shot through with streaks of grey and silver and she thought she could see different shapes of creature - worms, grubs, ants, flies - as they came after her again, close to running speed now.
- a new sort of weapon.. a self-replicaitng swarm of bug-like machines that will consume most available matter (rock, metal, carapace armour, organic stuff, etc.). Used as a weapon to attack enemies. It seems to operate on scent-based targeting, but others might be possible. It can also (as mentioned) self replicate from any matter it consumes. Not exactly micromachines or nanotech - they seem to tiny machines though (bug size, worm size, etc) and take varying forms (various forms of insects, worms, etc.)

Page 285
The bolt shell yowled overhead and slammed into the wall behind her. The Sister snapped again:
"Open your eyes, woman, I've shot you a handhold but it's only going to buy us a moment."
The pain in her foot was searing now but she spun, ran two paces and jumped to hook the edge of the little crater in the wall with
her fingertips.
- Sister's bolter fires a single shot that puts a crater in a rock wall. The crater is big/deep enough that it can be used as a two-handed handhold (At least temporarily, and even if just by fingerrtips)
That would suggest its at least a good 3-4 inches across, if not twice that. I'd guess a few tens of grams would be more than sufficient to blast out such a hole, but you might get by with a few grams (which would also blwo a head/fist sized hole in the target.)


Page 285
"You saw them, some kind of predatory creation, self-reproducing. Alive? No, I don't think so, Because look at what got into my flesh. Here. That's metal. Those things were built. Some kind of killing device. They moved faster the longer they were… out, or there, or whatever. They tracked me, but ignored the Sister."
Again the magic device was self replicating and artificial.

Page 287 -
The Sororitas Rhino's interior was a copy of the Arbites transports Calpurnia had ridden in for nearly twenty years, but different too. It felt weirdly spacious with no lockers, racks of stub guns, mauls, grenade and net launchers, grapplehawks, shotguns, shields, no riot gear stowed around the walls and ceiling. But it had been designed with power armour in mind: narrow benches, friction-taped to stop armoured bodies sliding on the metal, the seat-backs studded with couplings for armour connections. Those had made the benches unbearable, and Calpurnia had soon given up on them and wedged herself into a standing position by the transport's rear ramp-door. The wrong size and shape for seats designed for broad armoured shoulders, the other Arbites were all squirming and jolting as they slewed around corners, sped up and slowed down at intersections: the crew were coupled into the controls and drove faster and more brutally than any Arbites crew could.
- Arbites rhinos are equipped with lockers and racks for stub guns, mauls, grenade and net launchers, ,grapplehawks, shotguns, shields, and riot gear.

Page 287-288
Romille had already loaded her silver-filigreed bolter and latched a sarissa to its top, a short heavy
power-spike with a razor tip.

That tip was now scabbarded and braced against the floor as Romille sat with her forehead resting on the stock, eyes closed.
Sarissa bayonets.... which are power weapons. Also these bolters have stocks, which are rther different from many boltguns.

Page 288
She had matched actions to words and charged her sarissa: the speartip was surrounded with a hazy blue power field, and Calpurnia thumbed her own maul into life so its energies cracked and spat
Again power weapon bayonets. Probably better than Astartes weapons.

Page 291
The muscles of the lower chest and upper stomach are important to the breathing. On its lower settings the Arbites power-maul, when tapped lightly against the solar plexus, will carry just enough charge through a layer or two of clothing to painfully convulse those muscles for several seconds.
Low charge setting on power maul. The "stun" setting basically (contrasted with the higher "blow apart the bad guy's hand or crush his bones" setting.

Page 299
"You'll get your chance, Shira. Nakayama's good at his job and he has a taskforce of almost a thousand and a Level Five delegation."
There's at least a thousand arbites in Hydraphur. Quite possibly all fleet based, since that is largely Nakayama's bailiwick. I'd think the other three Arbites majoris/Senioris have similar numbers.. and the ground based arbites probably are far more numerous. Thousands, if not tens of thousands of arbiters for an entire system would seem a good minimum. Large neough to take control or overthrow a corrupt or defiant commander, but not so much that they can conduct more than a "limited" war.

Page 300
The same quirk of the immaterium - the Shodama current, I think it's called - that brought you to this Segmentum so quickly allows message traffic to come the same way, of course, and it is customary to share dispatches among Arbites of a certain rank. Your background has certainly not escaped my attention. The Calpurnii are not well known here, but then we are almost on the other side of the galaxy to your home.
- mention of the "Shodama current", described as a "quirk of the immaterium - brought Shira from her prior posting to Hydraphur "so quickly" - and also serves as a reliable conduit of traffic. Apparently its long lasting and reliable enough to probably serve as a major commerce transit point. Alternately this may suggest that factors that hamper or block warp travel will hamper astropathic transmissions (EG astrotelepathy has to follow "routes" of a sort mcuh as starships do. Considering warp storms and warp actiivty can distort astropathic signals, this makes some sense.

Of course it could refer to something like courier traffic.

Page 306
Two edgy Arbites in the lift foyer and another twenty Sisters moving around the floor. The two women gave their orders and moved on and upward. By the sixtieth level they had fifteen people apiece and Calpurnia began spacing them back along the corridors, fearing that things would get too unwieldy if there were trouble.
At least 20 sororitas here. Far more than that really, given stuff that happened later and there's a whole "convent" here.

Page 307
The drill teeth buzzed against the ceramite as the fat little pintle-stubbers on its shoulders whined and tracked and spat bullets out of barrels no longer than Calpurnia's little finger. It seemed to be squealing, but Calpurnia realised it was coming from her vox-tore. Something was jamming their transmission band.
Combat servitor capable of tearing through at least 3-4 Sisters of Battle and perhaps a Squad of Arbites.

Page 310
Nomikros took the cushion you had sat on in my litter to get a pheromone trace of you into the garden for the nest of machines to pick up. A tech-arcanum that is beyond our production now, you know. One of the few left in the whole sector, the only one my family had at its disposal...
The aforementioned self-replicating metal bug attack swarm. It's also confirmed that it tracked via scent. Naturally its lost-tech (At least in this region of space.)

Page 315
Hallyan looked at her, paralysed and seeming to only barely understand, as she took careful aim and shot him once between the eyes.
..

Calpurnia watched as Lord Hallyan's body, its head gone above the bottom lip, tumbled off the gallery and away...

Shira's Stub pistol blows apart the aristocrat's head. OH yes a laspistol or lasgun could do this, I am betting.

Page 318
Unrolling it awkwardly in one hand - the arm shattered by the servitor's claw had been rebuilt on grafted bone but it was still strapped to her body while it healed.

Page 319
Her new maul, presented by Dvorov from his own armoury to replace the one the servitor had crushed, the one that she had first been given at Machiun.
That had been a classic Ultima pattern maul, short and heavy, unadorned, best for choppy strokes. The new one was a Hydraphur style, longer, lighter, and slenderer, with a spiked handguard that made it impossible to perform the grip-reverse manoeuvres she had been trained in. Her old maul had been blunt and powerful, effective as a truncheon even without the power field, a ble to break bones with choppy strokes; the new one carried less weight of its own and needed greater finesse, almost a fencing technique, lightly jabbing with the tip and letting the power field do the rest.
There are different designs/styles or patterns of power maul, which also affects their fightng style. Shira's pattern tended to suit her personality more, methinks.
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Re: Shira Calpurnia novel series analysis thread

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Second Book of the Calpurnia trilogy now.... LEGACY. I can't say I liked this one as much as I did crossfire. Mainyl because it does away with any pretense of 'detective story' in return for 'rogue trader' story... and its got a very fucked up ending. I mean it does fit with the general theme of 'other parts of the Imperium from ARbites POV' and its kinda fun to explore Rogue Traders in depth (who so rarely get touched on) but the whole book is one big pile of grimdark, and that tends to bring it down for me. Especially since Calpurnia is such a small part of the overall novel (despite being the title character.) and she takes blame for the shit of other people.. which is just all kinds of fucked up. yah yay I know Imperial Justice is supposed to be all Judge Dredd and retarded but there are limits.

Anyhow, the rogue trader aspect is fairly interesting if but its defintiely the low point in the series from my POV. So I'll cover this as the current usual: two part single update.

Part 1:

Page 11
By each man sat a little tripod bearing a brass casing no bigger than a pistol-clip, and from each casing a single unblinking metal eye stared. Each was fixed on a different cage, and every man on the bleachers had had their right eye replaced with a receptor for the cable feed; the flesh around the sockets was still raw from the newness of the graft.

..

The mechanical eye keeps a pictrecord - that’s kept in the Cathedral permanently - but the controlling elements are members of our own clergy, not servitors. That’s important. Before anyone in the cages is deemed absolved and brought down, the Warden watching his cage has to confirm that they have not compounded their sins in any way.
Yep. They cage you up high in the air, exposed to elements and away from air, for your sins. Note that they have sensors/recorder thingies mind-linked to Ministorum people watching.

Page 13-14
"The ones down the bottom have committed trivial offences - careless misconduct during a religious service, minor disrespect to an officer of the clergy, you can guess the sort of thing. All we require from them is a short oath of contrition. Most of the time they’re able to call it out to the priests’ satisfaction on the first pass and they’re down from the cage within a couple of hours. A little longer for the ones who are tongue-tied or have trouble speaking up. There was a throat-fever in Phaphan one season, and I remember that even the most lightly-sentenced penitents spent days in the cages before the priests reported that they had heard contrition."

...

"And, hypothetically, someone who’d stood on the High Mese for an hour screaming blasphemies against the Emperor and all the Saints and primarchs while giving the fig to the Cathedral spire with one hand and wiping his behind on the Litanies of Faith with the other."

"..would be confined in the highest cages." Simova finished, pointing at the speck that Calpurnia had been looking at herself earlier on.

"Where it wouldn’t actually be humanly possible to be heard at all, I’d think. I can barely even see them up there, and didn’t you tell me that the cages on Phaphan were hung even higher?"

"The ones we used for the most serious of crimes, certainly."
As much as I want to call them dicks for this, I have to say its damn sneaky, and I kind of admire that. On a more serious note, its interesting, if troubling that the Ecclesiarchy has its own "courts" and laws that people can be imprisoned for. Yet more complication and potential for conflict on Hydraphur - no wonder the Arbites have to play politics.

Page 15
"The girder supports are driven an arm’s length into the rockcrete. I’m told that we could safely hang one of the holy Sisterhood’s Rhino tanks up next to each cage. You don’t have to fear anything falling on you."
An indication perhaps of the strength of the chains.. whcih are at least fist sized or bigger.

Page 15
"The only significant blemish on the whole affair was one particular inhabitant of the upper stack levels, who insisted on an above-market rate of payment as well as the granting of Ecclesiarchal indulgences in exchange for the privilege of driving our bolts and rings into the walls of his building. You can see him in that cage there, the one third from the edge."
Yes. The Ecclesiarchy will imprison you for impiety if you try to overcharge them for doing work. Still the fact they even think its possible to grant indulgences is.. interesting. It wouldnt surprise me if they sell those here.

Page 16
The blimp coming down the avenue was about fifty metres long, bulbous and dirty. The metalwork along its scooped nose was a clumsy attempt to duplicate the lines of an Imperial warship’s prow, and clusters of auspexes and magnoptic emplacements jutted
from the long gondola.
...
"The identification numbers on the sides there are from the nautical traffic directorates down past the lagoon. It’s one of the blimps they use to monitor sea traffic off the coast and report to the harbourmaster. Haven’t you seen them out over the bay?"
Sensor equipped blimp for observational purposes.

Page 17
"Give me a magnoc, or bring up a reader so we can look at what that idiot in the blimp is-"
...
"There is always supposed to be a sighting device available at the cages for members of the priesthood..."
...
"Use mine if you wish, reverend." Calpumia passed across a stubby tube, smaller and plainer than the ornate Ministo-mm devices Simova was used to. He conscientiously said a small benediction for its machine-spirit and put it to his eye.
Magnoculars/observation devices. The Arbites seem to have their own version on its hand . Note that Eccelseiarchs here will use Omnissiah benediction without qualm.

- Mention of magnoc or reader, both being described as "sighting devices." No clue beyond that what a "reader" does, but it implies some sort of recording function.

Also "readerS" must be some sort of sighting device.

Page 20
..more chasteners, massive and broad-shouldered in heavy carapace armour, hefting shotguns and grenade launchers. The tramp of their boots was countered by the metallic tik-tik-tik of cyber-mastiff feet as the dog-like attack-constructs paced beside their handlers, and the last two chasteners carried shining steel grapplehawks in their heavy launching-frames, the suspensors in their ribcages whining as they warmed up
- Arbites chasteners, mentioned as wearing "heavy carapace armour" as well as wielding shotguns and grenade launchers. Several are also flying the grapplehawks as well as some cyber mastiffs. The grapplehawks are mentioned as having suspensors and were something I borught up in the previous book. Recall that Fischig from Eisenhorn was also a chastener.

Page 21
The stranded cage was still a good four hundred metres away, and she
upped the pace a little.
Upper limit on shotgun range.. 400 metres.

Page 21-22
Three hundred and fifty metres. There were more figures around the cage now, busily working at it. Her detectives had reported that the clique had bought an oxy-cutter with false credit and doctored authorisation, and stolen breaching-charges from a shipment to the Monocrat’s personal militia.

..

Three hundred and ten metres. Vox came in, simple and coded. Anchors both locked. The saboteur teams that had blown the chains loose had all been rounded up. That was where most of the breaching-grenades had gone, she would bet.

..

Two hundred and sixty metres. No one had been able to give her a sure guarantee that the bridges would take the weight of a Rhino, so the strike force spread out on foot, the cyber-mastiffs on the flanks, the grapplehawk tenders in the centre. Two hawks, one for Symandis, one to recapture Stroon

...

Two hundred and twenty-five metres. The targets’ discipline was excellent. They had to have seen the force of chasteners, and she was sure they knew the saboteur teams had been taken. But they bent to their work still...
...
"Helmsman!" cried Culann from a pace behind her, but they were close enough now that the vox-torcs in their carapaces had picked it up as well. "Helmsman! All Arbites, we have Helmsman and Captain! Helmsman and Captain!"

..

They would not have expected the Arbites in such force or so soon, perhaps not at all. Calpurnia gritted her teeth. Their orders were not to open fire until her mark, and she trusted her Arbites to hold that order absolutely, but she hoped that the rescuers would not start shooting before..
- shortly after the distance between the arbites and their targets is stated to be 225 meters (with the arbites rushing towards their targgets.) and it is mentioned that the ARbites are under orders "not to fire" until the command is given. Given that only a few short lines of dialogue separate the distance and the mention of the order, it is heavily implied here that Arbites Shotguns have a potential range of several hundred meters, at least under the right kinds of circumstances. This probably depends heavily on the ammo used (ie Executioner rounds or some sort of solid-slug ammo.)

Page 23
They carried punch-daggers, home-machined blades, little foldaway laspistols and stubbers you could hide from the crude traffic-control auspexes if you knew the trick of it. But the Arbites’ armour was tough and their wills were tougher: they began weaving as they ran to spoil placed shots to armour-joins and held their guns in a high shoulder position that kept an armoured vambrace over the half of their faces the helmets didn’t cover. Not a man so much as staggered as they ran towards the crack and pop of the enemy’s small-arms, and then two grenade launchers chugged and the fire stopped completely even before the heavy double-wham of the shock grenades.
- "foldaway laspistols and stubbers" that can be hidden from "Traffic control auspexes" if the trick is known - indication of concealable weapons as well as weapons control measures on Hydraphur. its also noted that the above weapons (stubbers and laspistols) would only be effective at penetrating exposed portions of the helmet (the lower part) and armor jouints.

Page 24
...the first grapplehawk went screeching out of its frame, weaving on its suspensor as its handler thumbed the studs on the controller to steer it forwards. It only took a few seconds for its cortex, patterned on the preying instincts of the Avignoran black eagle, to lock onto its prey, and then send it swooping with metal hooks and taserspikes unsheathed.

Calpurnia swore as Symandis spun at the sound of the suspensor and shore it in two with a stroke of a crackling power-axe.
- description of Grapplehawks. Note the "taser spikes and metal hooks" for capturing prey, as well as their "cortexes" being patterend on the preying instincts of the Avignoran black eagle (akin to the machine spirits of Titans being patterend after feral creatures.) I gather "cortex" refers to its cogitator/machine spirit. Whether they have actual organic material from these creatures, or they just have some electronic/psychic imprint of such into an artificial receptacle, I don't know. I suspect the Imperium does both, and uses them in different purposes.


Page 25
Running ahead of them, armoured boots sparking off the pitted and uneven paving, Calpurnia resisted the urge to draw her pistol: the mega-bore rounds would wipe out any hope of capturing the wretch alive.
Calpurnia's stubber creates such big wounds in a person that they would be invariably fatal. We saw this in Crossfire when it blew apart a human head. One presumes they would do various things, punch large, messy holes that disrupt organs, possibly severs the spine (or can't but help to hit a major vein or artery) or amputates limbs, or something similar.


Page 26
I want you to put a missile in his path every time they make for one of those gaps. Frag load. Well ahead of the pack, we’re trying to deny him ground, not kill him.’ She nodded with satisfaction at their confirmation - missile launchers were certainly not regular Arbites field kit, but the gunnery teams were turning out to be well worth the trouble she had gone through to borrow them off Arbitor Nakayama’s armoury echelon.
- the ARbites are using several missile launchers equipped with frag grenades. Its mentioned that such weapons are not "standard" arbites field kit for ground forces, but the orbital/fleet based ones (the Nakayama reference IIRC) do seem to carry them as standard.

Page 27
Then the mastiffs clamped onto his wrists, razor-teeth retracted but jaws as powerful as ever, and that, finally, was that.
- Cyber mastiffs can retract their teeth to capture or immobilize without injury.

Page 29
When they had spilled down to the flat pedestrian concourse along the stack wall a choke
grenade burst on the rockcrete and filled the space with smothering vapour. None of the Arbites even needed to clip rebreathers into place: the cyber-mastiffs didn’t need air to pull down the three of Stroon’s bodyguards who had managed to stay on their feet, and the grapplehawk didn’t need air to glide in on Captain himself. Jittering from the taser-hooks, hoisted up by the hawk’s suspensor so that his bare toes just scraped the ground...
Choke grenades. Cyber mastiffs are unaffected by them. Grapplehawks can fly without air (breathing or lfying through, I dont know.) Suspensor is just powerful enough to sustain hawk plus its captive.

Page 29
It was the end of Hydraphur’s wet season, cool enough to make people want to move around a little to keep warm but humid enough to make you sweat as soon as you did.
Hydraphur has weather that is wet or humid, but won't strip, melt, corrode or burn the flesh from your bones.

Page 30
The choke fumes had left yellow stains on the rockcrete that would take days to fade.
Side effect of choke grenades.

Page 32
The giant fortress known as the Wall formed the Arbites barracks and courts for all of Hydraphur and whole systems around.
The wall, it would seem, forms the nucleus of command for Arbites presence in the Hydraphur system as well as others. As a rule a Segmentum naval base makes sense as such a headquarters. I wonder if it is implying just subsector level command, or perhaps sector level (or greater) command. either way it would make sense why one of the major arbiters is assigned to their space based elements (Nakayama) if this is the headquarters - they probably dispatch/deploy the Arbites fleet on its patrols or where it needs to go from here.

Page 33
The cable car was passing over one of the high-roofed drilling concourses. Sixty metres below her, squares of infantry, a hundred arbitrators to a side, stamped and clashed through a weapon drill, whipping heavy Vox Legi-pattern shotguns out of the scabbards on their backs and aiming from the shoulder, from the hip, kneeling, then into the scabbard, out, kneel, shoulder, turn, kneel, scabbard, turn, hip, kneel.
Multiple "squareS" of infantry, a hundred to each side. (meaning 100x100 = 10,000 arbiters) - tens of thousands of arbites in training.

Page 37
"Are we overseeing the Naval judicature, or Administratum, or the Monocrat and planetary authorities, or our own, ma’am? I’ve not studied the underpinnings of Letters of Marque in the Lex Imperia."
...
"Imperial letters of marque, ma’am."

"That’s right, and why this isn’t one. We’re dealing with something a little over and above the usual planetary governors’ marques or the Adeptus wildcat warrants. I’m talking about the true rogue trader charters, the old decrees for the captains who used to fly right clean out of Imperial space, often as not. They would go to places where they never knew what they would find or what they
would have to do to survive, so they were given the power to do whatever they needed to."
- there are evidently varying degrees of "Rogue Trader". The "true" charters are all the very old ones, many dating back as far as the pre-Heresy era, some signed by the Emperor himself. "newer" charters are all referred to as being "planetary governor's marques" or "Adeptus wildcat warrants." The latter are apparently more common, but much less powerful/more restrictive (and subject to alteration) than the older charters - the older ones are much more powerful and much broader in scope of the application of that power (within the dictates of the charter, at least.)

This tends to fall in with various rogue-trader related stuff in recent years.. the Rogue TRader RPG of course from FFG, but also from other novels like Farseer and the Eisenhorn/Ravenor series.

The scale or importance of the Rogue trader seems to depend on who assigns the chater and its limitations - Traders who are assigned for a specific duty, or to specific areas of space (Sector/subsector/segmentum) are less powerful than the "true" Rogue traders - the Emperor/high Lord bestowed ones which may give the truly galactic power.

Page 37
"My home was on the Eastern Fringe, you understand. Wild space zones and the Imperial frontier were a lot closer than they are here."
"Wild Zones" and the frontier - basically unexplored space or the fringes of civilised Imperial space, are seemingly more common on the Eastern fringe and in ultima segmentum as a rule. Makes sense, given that we've also been told that the closer to terra you are the more sophisitcated and densely populated the Imperium gets (and probably, relatively more safe and settled.) This probably leads to the contradictions of relatively "Stable" Sectors like Scarus and Calixis compared to the ones that go into uproar (like around the Maelstrom zone)

Page 37
"There was another one who struck a pact with the Ecclesiarchy to transport a missionary taskforce out beyond the Imperial border - the accounts said they loaded an entire prefabricated temple into the hold of his largest ship to deposit whole onto the first habitable world they found, if you can believe that"
The Imperium can prefabricate and deploy structures of any size. Reminds me of the bastion/fort tactics used in planetstrike.

Page 38
"So these are the rogue traders. The real ones, the grand old ones, the ones that these little pissants with a decommissioned Munitorio hauler and a life warrant from a local governor want to be mistaken for when they boast they’re a rogue trader."
Pretty much seems as I said above, there's quite a range of "Rogue traders" in existence nowadays, and their powers and influence scale depending on this and other factors.

Page 39
"It’s related to the way the hereditary charter works. There seems to be a different principle in operation to the usual Imperial laws of heredity."
...
"Most offices where the Imperium gives a decree of heredity transfer instantly when the previous holder dies. I know that there’s often a ceremony or something to cement the transition in, but not like the one that’s going to happen here."
...

"It’s a quality of those charters, the grand old charters you mentioned, ma’am. No two of them are alike. We police the way governors issue charters far more strictly now, so they never contain anything too outrageous, and the wildcat warrants the Administratum gives out are churned out by a hundred servo-scribes at a time according to templates laid down by the Adeptus, with a space for a name at the top and a stamped-on seal at the bottom. But the old ones, well, they were tailor-made for whatever circumstances led to a rogue trader being necessary at the time. So there were some that gave the traders power to raise troops and make pacts with the Astartes."
..
"...and some that appointed them as de facto officers of the Ecclesiarchy, like the missionary you described."
..

"And there were some that bound the charters, their bearers I should say, to particular areas of space." Culann went on, feeling a little more sure of himself. "Possibly to make sure the new rogue trader remained in the area where his influence and skills were needed, or so one might think. And those clauses in the charters have never been amended or repealed, or at least not in most cases, because the charters were originally drawn up by the warmasters, or sometimes by primarchs or members of the Emperor’s court or His crusades. So there’s no one senior enough to repeal or amend them, and they don’t expire on the bearer’s death like most of the new ones do."

"Hence all the rather disreputable folklore on the subject." Calpurnia said, "Stories of rogue trader charters being stolen, or sold, or forged, or gambled with, which is a disgusting thought."
The "old" rogue trader charters are again mentioned. No two are alike which makes policing them harder. Modern Adeptus (implied specifically the Arbites) regulate the manner in which governors issue charters more strictly (so they do not get "too outrageous." or rival the old ones.) Given all the variation and limitations implied above, it seems like that the sturcture of Rogue-Trader-ing was changed post HEresy along side everything else - they replaced quality with quantity (EG mass producing) and used the charters as an excuse to fufill certain roles or purposes (or political expediences, or as a reward) - it's become basically another tool in the Imperial arsenal (for good or bad.) It also seems like (again the Post-Heresy analogy) they wanted to deliberately limit the potential power (and threat) that a Rogue Trader represents - like Warmasters and Space Marines, they seem to hem them in with restrictions and limitations whenever they can. They cannot revoke, remove or override the "Old" charters, esp the ones granted by the Emperor - but they can limit the number of people who are truly that powerful.

It also makes me think that virtually every other organization despits its theoretical power have similar restrictions (officially or unofficially) placed on them - even the AdMech or Inquisition, which leads to all the interesting and seemingly contradictory stuff we observe in the fluff.

Page 40-41
"All I was going to add was that the intent of the succession clause was that this charter can only ever be legally transferred in a ceremony conducted within the boundaries of the Hydraphur system. So no matter where else in the Imperium their interests take them, every generation, the Phrax family have to come back to Hydraphur so that a new rogue trader can be appointed."
..
"This charter is for all intents and purposes an Imperial decree and the Arbites oversaw the actual drafting of it, from what sense I’ve been able to make of the records. Hydraphur was on the very edge of Imperial space back then, and apparently the intention was to use rogue traders to push forward towards the Rim so that the Crusade itself could travel on to Caliban. That was when the line of Phrax was granted its eternal rogue trader charter, bound to Hydraphur. I suppose that the plan was for a few generations of Phraxes - Phraxae? - to have civilised the fringe domains through trade by the time the Crusade returned ready to take them into the Imperium itself."
..
"A Crusade-era document." Culann said. "I had seen accounts that mentioned its age, but I didn’t think about what that meant until now. Ten thousand years. Imagine what the document will be like to look at! Imagine what it would have been like to be there when it was signed! To see, who? Ma’am, do we have a record of whose hand the charter is signed in? One of the Crusading Saints, or the original Lords Militant? Maybe Lord Marshal Wiertalla, they say he was one of the very founders of the whole order of Arbites!"

..
"But all the later references to the charter in all the old data-arks that Zbela dug up seemed to point to confirmation, so I’m taking it as true. And who are we to question the received word of our predecessors and betters?"

...

"Think back to all the legends and scriptures and gospels and sagas and paintings and pageants you’ve ever seen or heard about the Great Crusade. Who’s the constant, Culann? If the Crusade was resting in Hydraphur at the time that the very first Rogue Trader Phrax was appointed, then who is the one person we can say for absolute certain would have been there to put their hand out to sign it?"

..

"That’s right, Culann," Shira Calpurnia said. "Him."
- many clauses in the old charters are not or cannot be amended or repealed in "current" times because the person who wrote them up was (at the time) too poweful or influential (such as the ones issued by Primarchs or the Emperor.) Basically,there is (currently) noone senior enough to appeal or amend them, and the old charters do not expire with the death of the bearer the way "newer" charters do. This probably gives yet another justification why "modern" charters are so limited compard to the older ones, its a form of control or restraint.

The succession clause is an interesting way to limit the power too - it balances between the needs of power and influence such a rogue trader needs, but limits the potential devastation it can cause even if he goes out of control. I wonder how many other such restrictions were placed on similar charters (say like the ARcadius one in Hoare's Rogue Trader novels.)

We also get a bit more indication about the uses and purposes of Rogue traders - they seem to have been used mainly in a supporting/privateering/mercenary role alongside the Crusade/expedition fleets - mopping up, picking up the pieces or doing the organizing and setting up of commerce and trade and all the other messy details Astartes probably don't want to bother with. I imagine such has not chnaged much even with the "wildcat" charters

Page 43-44
At Shexia, the flotilla of Hoyyon Phrax came into port to take on certain supplies, make certain arrangements, purge the old trader’s possessions and ceremonially kill his concubines.

Disposing of Hoyyon’s not especially large harem was a matter of routine for the flotilla and its acting masters. It had been flotilla custom since time well out of mind to greet a new heir with none of their predecessor-parent’s possessions of significance. It had been the custom for almost as long for the Phraxes to take concubines - the first that the flotilla histories officially recorded had founded her harem late in the thirty-second millennium - and if the whole flotilla could be considered to be essentially the personal transport, homestead and entourage of the current Rogue Trader Phrax, as the wording of the charter indicated, then it seemed logical that the members of the flotilla who entered the harem of the trader should go one step further, become literal possessions, and be disposed of as such as part of the funerary routine.

So the thinking went, at any rate, and only the occasional malcontent saw any problems with it. Of course, the practice was seen rather differently by the Imperial citizenry at large, whom the flotilla people referred to as ’’tikks’’ (the origins of that term had been lost to memory, the contemptuous way in which the flotilla people used it had not). The fact that almost every tikk who
heard of the custom reacted with shock or disgust irritated the flotilla no end.
We are introduced to the hereditary flotilla in question, an dalready we see they are an insular, backwards and rather gruesome people. You can tell this is going to end up well. They are also, in modern 40K parlance, "void born" in which they exist purely onboard their ships and within the confines of the flotilla, with minimal to no contact with the outside world(s).

Page 44
While the tikks saw the Emperor as some kind of distant but demanding god, the people of the flotilla tended to view Him as a benevolent former patron, the source of a very valuable signature on a document.
And they're full of their own little brands of heresy. Something the Eccelsiarchy must tolerate from the AdMech and AStartes, but not from some freaking rogue Traders (although this charter might be able to avoid any official purge. This, along with the other weird customs (like burning alive a dead Trader's harem) without a doubt contributes to the madman's own god complex.

Page 44
...a reminder that one of the few things the Phrax Charter did not grant immunity from was the Imperial Inquisition.
This is interesting, considering that at the time of the Heresy (as per the HH novels) there was no "true" Inquisition per se. They never explain this (Beyond there being bolter craters, suggesting the Inquisition has invaded them before) so it would be intersting to know how the Inquisition supersedes this immunity - is it written into the charter, or is this just assumed given the status and nature of the Inquisition itself (EG its theoretical omnipotence in the execution of their duty?)

Page 45
It had been the private estate of successive Phraxes since the thirty-seventh millennium when Olendro Phrax had decided that sharing any of his other ships with pilgrims (even the fabulously wealthy, ostentatiously pious pilgrims he was doing rather well out of transporting) was beneath him.
We get indication that pilgrimmage travellers can vary in status, power and style. Again the cynical part of me, given that a Rogue TRader is involved in these activities, cannot help but find material or economic purposes in the "pilgrimmages" - in a sense the Ecclesiarchy is not just the Imperium's religious arm, but also its travel agent and the pilgrimmages of those who can afford it amount to propoganda-laden vacations.

Page 45
...their doomed passengers wrapped in shrouds woven with refractor-wires that created fuzzy shadows over each stooped form and painted face.
"refractor wires" that are blurring or distorting faces. Not unlike privacy screens, really.

Page 45
The air was quiet and solemn as for any unpleasant but serious duty - similar, perhaps, to
Marking Day, when all the babies who had been born in the flotilla over the past year were rounded up to be presented to the trader and receive a ritual brand across their stomach.
Yet another cheerful Phrax Flotilla tradition.

Page 46
The elaborate and gruesome ceremonies of earlier generations had been dispensed with, and the concubines knew their role. None fought, in the end, and after their ashes were fired into space they formed for a while a faint haze over the Bassaan before vacuum and momentum dispersed them.
...
It was not unheard of, of course. Concubines recruited from outside the flotilla had a particular tendency to flout tradition and try to ran, although most of the flotilla people did not understand it. Concubines, no matter the gender no matter the age, were always given plenty of time to prepare themselves. Fighting or fleeing seemed ungrateful, not to mention graceless and unprofessional.

The flotilla had even dispensed with the old rites of live spacing or slow incineration: the concubines had been sent after their owner with a slender needle of instant-acting neurotoxin, as a mark of compassion. It wasn’t as if the flotilla were savages, after all.
Yes, As if things weren't grimdark enough, we find out that the modern Phrax flotilla are filled with their version of progressives. You really have to wonder what sort of family the Emperor gave this sort of power to, and if he knowingly did it or cared.


Page 47
Karmine Mitrani was an orbit-clerk in the service of the Shexia Dockmasters’ Guild, and he was good at his job. He should have been - selective augmetics, deep hypnotic therapy and conditioning for fifteen of his most formative years, and repeated physical and chemical surgery to carefully selected areas of his brain, had hardwired and super-sensitised his social reactions. His sense of mood and nuance was uncanny, his ability to grasp and understand odd customs and adopt them seamlessly was confounding. He could keep up hours of the dry, borderline-abusive banter that the farmship syndicates from the Novanjide sub used to test anyone they planned even the smallest commercial dealings with, or remember every tiniest detail of the family affairs of a fiduciary courier who had last come to the system five years ago, and ask after them in the man’s own planetary and continental accent, reproduced so perfectly as to bring his guest to tears of homesickness. He could count on one hand the number of times he had had to deal with people whose ways he truly did not understand.
We come to the Imperium's favored tendency to alter, enhance, or otherwise mutiliate the human form of its various clerks, menials, servants, slaves, etc. performing certain roles with vairous bionic, chemical, surgicla or augmetic procedures to further enhance their capabilities.. at the cost of making them less human and probably more isolated from their fellows. It is simultaneously impressive and more than a little depressing.

Page 48
"They belong to the flotilla. They are its property, which is to say ours. I’ve been tasked to make sure they die as they were intended to, and to forfeit three square centimetres of skin from the back of each of my hands without numbing-drugs if I have not done so by the time we cast off for Hydraphur. I wouldn’t expect you to understand."
Or expect the reader to, I imagine. Slavery seems to be something few in this region of space understand.

Page 48
Petronas untucked an infrascope from the oversized cuff of his elaborate uniform tunic and scanned the platform underneath them again. Mitrani thought he saw a slight tremor in the hand holding the scope that Petronas couldn’t quite control. Or maybe it was the heat-haze spoiling the infrared view of the platform that made him grunt with annoyance and stuff the scope crudely away again.
Infrascpe.

Page 49
In the better light the orbit-clerk got his best look at the ensign’s face since they had left the ornithopter...
40K is full of ornithopters on planets.

Page 49
He knew about the intensity of emotions within families, and there were times when he had visited client ships and seen families together that made his own feelings ring like a bell, but he himself had been taken from a foundry creche at five to begin his conditioning and could not imagine what such a life might be like from the inside.

Master Paich liked to amuse himself by locking Mitrani away by himself every so often, where the lack of human company was torture as the clerk’s heightened social cognition starved for input.
I feel sorry for the poor bastard, not having a family per se (creche? Is that like an orphanage or a Progenium alternative?) and working for an sadistic asshole of a boss who exploits his subordinate's enhanced capabilities for his own amusement (no doubt damaging the valuable merchandise in the process. Something tlels me the Adminstratum would not like this.)

Page 53
Behaya had charge of the network of ’’friends and correspondents’’, as the flotilla referred to its spies and informants through the major systems of a dozen sectors.
hints of the scope and scale of the reach and influence of the Phrax dynasty.

Page 54
"There was talk at the time of a major migration into the worlds beyond it in the Deunoff Subsector after the second Hadekuro Crusade cleared the orks out. Full Imperial colonisation and reconstruction edicts, very profitable for rogue traders providing we moved in time. Hoyyon wanted to make sure there was a way in for us if we needed it, so he left Varro and his
mother there so the boy could grow up making some good contacts."
Crusades, it would seem, can be seen as an economic boon to those with the power and resources to exploit them. Given the damage that can be wreaked by the Imperial war machine in conquest, it's small wonder that this might be profitable to anyone with long distane shipping, as large numbers of colonists (and/or repair/work crews) and great quantities of mateirals (for repairs) would be needed to rebuild a recently claimed sector.

Page 58
..and when she still refused, walked around behind her, put the hellpistol to her head and pulled the trigger. Then he stepped away, faced the alley wall,
It does not explicitly say either way, but the implied fact that blood/brains and all that stuff didn't go flying about everywhere, especially considering that a guard holding the woman shot had her own head nearby, would tend to rule out an.. "explosive" result. Of course drilling a hole through the head would be fatal enough too, especially if it cooks the brain.

Page 60
And so he walked down the ramp from the speaking room, weaving slightly every so often or
adjusting his gait without conscious thought as the ship’s gravity didn’t quite cancel out the ship’s manoeuvres. As the flotilla powered away from Shexia and out to where they would break warp...
On this ship at least, artificial gravity seems to double as their inertial damping.

Page 61
In the heart of the tallest spire he sat on a stool of pink and grey marble while thrumming augmetic drones analysed his scent, gene-print, walk, breathing patterns, brainwaves.
Augmetic drones and scanning capabilities.

Page 61
In a steady voice he began reciting each of the oaths of loyalty he had taken to the line of Phrax, begun on his tenth birthday and added to in each of the twelve decades since then
Verbal response cues for security as well.

Page 62
The book was held in a neutral gas formulated to prevent the material from ever decaying; the stasis field that filled the room whenever there were no visitors made sure of it. It had acquired scuffs and creases in its days as a working document, but it would acquire no more. Fine wires rested between the pages and in theory the machine could turn the book to whatever clause a reader needed to look at.
Preservative measures for the all important Charter.

Page 65
"There are all sorts of edicts about what flora you can transport to where, of course, and the Imperial mercantile controls are pretty strict. One of my best agents in the Kozya sub has told me that he won’t be able to send me specimens any more, because the whole quarter has been closed off by some kind of quarantine. But with the family charter, you see, well, what’s the limit on what I can do?"
Powerful charters can sometimes overrule quaranties and "local" laws and matters it would seem. This can be dangerous if those quaranties are there for a reason (EG such as the plague of unbelief)

Page 65
The sides of his head had been implanted with vox-receivers, the receptor vanes incorporated into ornamental frills that ran from his face around to the nape of his neck. Domasa thought them tacky beyond words, but Rikah was obviously tremendously proud of them - he had confided to her that when Varro had the charter he was hoping someone on the flotilla would put in augmetic muscles that would let him flex the frills up and down.
Augmetic muscles and augmetic communications implants.

Page 66
This was the kind of conversation she was used to having in sealed rooms that had been swept for auspexes and spy-flies, wrapped in privacy fields with an astropathic choir drowning them out to any scrying or spellcraft. But she was proud of her adaptability.
- mention of "spy flies" and "auspexes", and (again) Privacy fields. The auspexes are interesting becuase it implies that detection technology for the Imperium can be miniarutized quite extensively, and is not exactly rare or lost-tech (even if it is likely expensive or unusual.)

Page 66
...like most of the Navis Nobilite her physique was skewed in more ways than just the warp eye in her forehead - her hands had only three long fingers each. It was the only oddity of her appearance she was really self-conscious about the others were all invisible under her gowns and robes, and most other Navigators didn’t care about them.
Navigator mutations of a fairly simple and subtle kind.

Page 69
his glittering suit included suspensors just powerful-enough to let him dance on his toes and turn oddly slow-motion backflips.
Civilian "running suit" equipped with suspensors. Hard to think these things are so rare if they can be used for civiilan "sports" Also those suits could be damn useful for enhancing mobility (akin to a jump pack)

Page 74
"The spacefaring class is one of the oldest in the Imperium," she said after a pause. "The Navigators, the rogue traders, the officer classes of the Imperial Navy and the explorators and others. The regrettably spreading habit of granting low-level charters and so called "wildcat warrants" is creating a callow breed who don’t really grasp the ventures they’re tak ing on, but I believe the core of the Imperium’s essential travelling aristocracy remains. We remain because we. understand things. We have values like tradition. Continuity. Order. We believe that there is a way of doing things."
Spacefaring class, I suspect, might beanother term for "void born" Interesting that Navigators and rogue traders and the Navy all got grandfathered into that category here, although that could be just a self-serving lie. Alternately, it means those higher echelons whose scope and interests range across the whole Imperium, rather than a small region of it, and has nthign to do with whether someone lives wholly in space or wholly on the ground or whatever.

Page 83
...thirty-two years on arbitrator strike teams, including eight on an Arbites intercept cruiser until a shipboard accident had cost him both his legs.
- mention of Arbites "intercept cruiser" - no idea if this is a vague description or a specific classification.

Page 83
"Received by communique sent by flotilla astropaths from Shexia system, repeated again at Antozir Proxima."
..
"Shexia and Antozir-Prox are successive steps on the route to Hydraphur from the border sectors where the old man died. Time-stamps on each of them show the flotilla making good time."
..
"Don’t know much about that direction firsthand but I’ve heard it’s not hard to hurry through. They’ll have an easier time of it than that other poor fellow. Fearful rough it gets coming up the well past Knape and straight out from galactic centre."
Implies perhaps that they are tens if not hundreds of light years away. Implied fairly rapid communication time over that distance, although no indicator givne here of how long. Exceppt we're probably tlaking weeks or months tops.

Page 84
"A representative of Navigator House Dorel visited him and he was making tracks out of the system within twelve hours. Rather a lot got spent to make sure he had a ship in a hurry. More than we think Varro can afford, although he’s not badly off."
Navigator ship deploys for warp travel within 12 hours.

Page 86
"It’s the exact things about the old charters that make them so sought after - antiquity, tradition,
exalted legal status - that make them so hard to interfere with. And they’re next to impossible to amend. I don’t think alterations to any of the really old charters have ever even been considered."

"Whose mark do the oldest charters bear?" asked Calpurnia, and the question hung in the air for a while. For a citizen of the Imperium, a subject of the Emperor, a worshipper at the altars of the Adeptus Ministorum, how could the idea even be countenanced? How did you set yourself up to rewrite and tinker with words penned and sealed by a walking god?
More on the difficulties the truly old charter bears, and we see again (as we did in REd Fury and Black Tide) a sort of blindness created by the religious and theological underpinnings of the Imperium. Faith in the God Emperor may unite them, but it makes it hard for them to question anything pertaining to him, even if questioning it may be in the best interests of the Imperium as a whole. You get similar problems with Primarchs, saints, etc.

This is of course why the Imperium also needs, and probably tolerates to some degree, radicals of all stripes in all organizations.. its the radicals that keep the Imperium from wholly stagnating.

Page 91
..and the ship carrying it broke warp at the edge of Hydraphur yesterday. It should be here within the week.
Week long travel to get inssystme. Either starships break warp around hydraphur really far out (due to the star, peculiar warp conditions, or a security measure) or they ned up suffering alot of long delays in getting in system. Or, quite possibly, both.

Page 91
"I know I’ve spoken to you all about my desire to make Hydraphur the brightest beacon of the
Imperial faith in all the sectors around. Hundreds of worlds and billions of souls, all looking back to us as we reflect the Emperor’s light to them as Luna shines the sunlight down on holy Terra."
Mention of the Hydraphur system and the sectors around it encompassing "hundreds of worlds" and "billions of souls"

Page 95
Gunarvo lay at the edge of a band of perennial riptides and whirls in the immaterium that followed the line of worlds trailing out of the Broadhead Cluster. To accurately scry and catch those tides was work for a skilled Navigator, and most craft that left the system took on extra supplies and endured a ten-week haul through real space before they broke warp where the conditions were
calmer.
One of the perpetual oddities and problems of warp travel - it seems that in some places travel may require returning to realspace, hauling ass across realspace for some distance, and then reentering the warp to continue a journey. This seems to be the choice of more conservative ship-handlers or those without navigators (or skilled navigators at any rate.)

skilled navigators can "scry and catch" the tides that allow them to carry through safely, although not without risk it would seem. Hell the tides might provide neough propulsion to push them through even faster.


Page 98
...Special Administratum-trained couriers who were hypno-conditioned to remember nothing of what they heard and recited.
Courier ability.

Page 98-99
She knew that Maghal, the Adept Prolegis who was second-in-command of the Administratum delegation, was already trying to negotiate with Varro to attach a ship to the flotilla under an Administratum charter. The ship would have a captain appointed by Maghal or his superiors and its relationship with the rest of the flotilla would be governed by contract - it would collect tithes of populations, resources and data from the Imperial worlds the flotilla visited and the Administratum adepts on its crew would have a voice in determining the flotilla’s itinerary. And in return, subsidies and favoured-trader status on merchant routes all through the subsector. Ksana could well imagine what they were planning: get Varro fat and comfortable on a regular run across routes the Administratum already controlled, use his charter to flout the vigilance of the Arbites, use him to venture into the wild space south of Gunarvo where the prefect desperately wanted tithe-paying Imperial rule to spread again.
More politics. We see that a major event like the passing on of an important Rogue Trader charter can accompany significant politcking, becuase of the advantages to specific organizations it can draw. already we have the Navigators and now the Administratum jockeying to gain influence over the prospective heir for their own purposes, and because of the immunities and authority such a charter can bestow upon a Rogue Trader and his allies (or his puppeteers, as the factions are angling for here.)

We also learn that the adminstratum has sigificant controls ships "under charter" (From whom we don't know) as well as controlling merchant shipping or warp routes (likely because they control such data.) And also for extending (conquering) territories in wild space to expand their economic power (more worlds to tithe from.)

It also seems the Administratum wants to use the Rogue Trader as a means of better collecting/assessing tithing of the subsector (resources, manpower and data) - makes sense as they can't have much direct means of doing so usually (they don't have any native starship assets.)


Page 101
Domasa glared at him and slipped her sleeve back. A bundle of fine golden rods rested against her forearm and the back of one malformed hand: her long fingers were curled around a trigger-grip and the ammunition tank was anchored at the inside of her
wrist. Cherrick sniffed.

...
"...this is much better for taking him alive but incapacitated, which I’ll thank you to remember is our priority."
..
"You’re the one with the non-lethal weapon, after all. Are you really going to let me laz him full of holes?"
It's later mentioned that this is a needler. Its also apparently capable of lethal and nonlethal modes, which makes sense.

Also the lasweapon Cherrick uses (A hellgun) seems highly penetrating but not particularily explosive (in that it doesn't blow things apart so much as poke holes in them.)

Page 104
"Our great flotilla could travel the galaxy for a long time on our own resources..."
...

"Perhaps a lifetime. But there come times when we must conduct rites of engineering or medicine or other things that are simply beyond us. The Adeptus Mechanicus knows this. And even as we have need of their services, there are things that we offer in turn."
...
"Our contract with the Adeptus Mechanicus is a simple deed of exchange, with no date of expiry." said the woman in the shawl, pinching each word off with her lips as though she resented having to expend the energy on it. "We have the right to call upon the services of the Mechanicus to meet what needs our own lay techmen are incapable of meeting. In exchange, the magos errant.. travels with us."
Rogue Trader flotilla, as a whole, has resources for perhaps decades/generations of operation, and only return for certain things (maintance/engineering things, medicine, etc.) They have a deal that has a Magos travelling with them (for their own purposes, as well as support) but the flotilla has no organic AdMech assets other than their "lay techs".

Also it seems like a standard arrangement for Rogue traders to allow organizations to attach "representatives" for various purposes in order to gain access to something they need. This may help explain why Inquisitors, Guard, or even Space MArines may operate within a rogue Trader flotilla, even under nominal command of the Trader (it benefits the parent organization somehow.)

Page 104-105
"And its charter allows this flotilla to travel in places that might attract attention or be simply forbidden. There are certain discoveries that my ancient and holy order consider are better studied in privacy."
..

"There will be the occasional need, for example,’ Dyobann went on, his face centimetres from the ensign’s, "to ensure that a.. setback for the Imperial military does not lead to the loss of rare and consecrated technology. There may be times when a traveller of independent means such as a trader flotilla comes into contact with devices fashioned at xenos hands, or specimens of value to
our Order Biologis, which it is prudent to extract and place into Mechanicus custody as a priority. Fortunately the flotilla has permitted the construction of excellent laboratoria aboard the Gyga VII, over which our treaty allows me full control. Or perhaps there is an artefact of our own construction, lost in the way that so much of what the Imperium once was has become lost,
rediscovered by our scouts and agents or by purest chance."
More advantages of the Charter, and how it may be used. IT seems that, a rogue trader charter is a good way (if a double edged sword) of circumventing the normally plodding and sluggish bureacractic and military monolith that is the Imperium - much in the same way Inquisitors and Warmasters are a means of doing so.

Page 107
"How many of the other potential subjects actually survived the dosage anyway?’"
...
"Four. To all practical purposes, none. Two are comatose and fading fast, their metabolisms have lost the ability to process nutrients. They won’t last two more days. One will probably be gone by the time we get back. Every single cell in his body seems to want to become a tumour. And there’s one last one, Omya, another young officer. He has developed some rather interesting instabilities. The magos and I are going to keep him on the Gyga as long as we can, out of curiosity."
Some experimental process to genetically "alter" someone to become a fake heir and a figurehead for the flotilla officers themselves. Sounds a bit like shapechanging (EG polymorphine) to me.

Page 107
"He hurt a couple of Cherrick’s troopers but we flushed him out with a microshock grenade and gave him a needling for good measure."
- mention of "micro-shock" grenades and the aforementioned needler.

Page 108-109
"He didn’t have any weapons, nobody but the ship’s own complement is supposed to carry
weapons during a warp-voyage.."

...

"But psykers don’t dare work their wills too hard on a warp voyage either, there’s only the
thickness of a Geller field between them and the Worst of Seas."
..
"But still, grabbing up power with your mind on a ship at warp is like firing krak missiles
back and forth when you’re sitting in a shuttle. That was why we waited until we broke warp to go after him, except we got to the Psykana dome and found he’d already gone scuttling off."
[/quote]

Ship procedures on warp voyages prevent weapons from being carried - makes sense given that its possible someone might get possessed or go crazy.

Also psykers as a rule tend to stay passive and quiet during a warp voyage, so as not to attract attention to themselves, or the ship. This isnt an absolute of course - it is known that in some cases, or sometimes, that a psyker may send messages whislt in the Warp, albeit it being rather dangerous for the reasons stated.



Page 109-110
"He sent an astropathic transmission just as we passed the cometary zone. Not enough of the signal was caught by anyone actually loyal" her speech turned into a spit for a moment, "for us to know about it word for word. But we know that our friend Symozon here has been harvesting information on our voyage and our ship’s complement, and he was careless enough to leave some ghosting around the telepathica chair he used that one of our loyal astropaths was able to catch before it evaporated, so we know at least some of the names in the transmission."
Astropathic-related intrigues. Apparently theres alot of astorpathic "back and forth" going on between the intriguing factions, and that also means lots of spying to find things out.

Page 112
...Domasa, raising her needier. One of her elongated fingers curled around to work a stud on the trigger-grip nestled in her narrow palm.

"Lethal dose," she said briefly, and lowered her arm. There was a tiny sound, no louder than a sniff, and Symozon slumped forwards. As Varro watched, his gorge rising, he saw the little sliver of crystallised toxin that had embedded itself in the back of the astropath’s high-crowned head melt and soak the rest of the way into his skin. He dropped back into his seat as the strength
seemed to go out of him.
As I noted, the needler has lethal and nonlethal options.
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Part 2 of Legacy


Page 114
Some long-ago Arbitor General had decided that the Arbites presence on Hydraphur could not be crippled by a decisive strike on the Wall: pockets of strength were carefully cached around the planet and the system so that, should the unthinkable ever happen and the four thousand year-old citadel at Bosporian fall, the surviving precinct houses would not be without their most essential tools: weapons, personnel and the Lex Imperia. The fortress at Trylan was one of those specialised bases...

..

..and while the tor had its garrison of arbitrators guarding the walls, crewing the sentry posts on the surrounding tors or patrolling the interdiction zone in armoured flyers or snub-nosed submersibles, most Arbites on Trylan spent their time by lamplight in honeycomb of tiny reading cells in the lower levels of the central bastion.
Meaning that the strength of the arbites in the place is by nature spread out across the planet and throughout the system. The majority may be stationed at the wall, but clearly not all of it.

Page 115
Judges were the most common, bent over bound papers or flickering data-arks as they explored ten millennia of ever-expanding, ever-complicating Imperial laws. But there were chasteners there, too, standing out from the rest in their bulky uniforms and brown tunics, usually posted to Trylan to build their knowledge of the rarer and more obscure treatises on the capture, handling and breaking of prisoners. Verispex officers came to wade through the forensic notes of cases a thousand or more years old. Garrison preachers studied the texts of their forebears, sharpening their understanding of their religious duties to their fellow Arbites. And the arbitrators themselves would go down to the reading levels when they were not walking the walls with magnocs in hand, to read about techniques the Arbites of generations past used to break a crowd, or a bunker, or a seditious parade; the weak points of a house, a palace, a tank, a cargo-dray, an unarmoured rioter; how formations of arbitrators could best work to lock down a hab-block or bring it down in rubble, storm a spaceship or commandeer one, defend a power-plant or detonate it from within.
Various departments/forces in the Arbites described. Clearly they're all just examples, but it gives a board idea of the scope of capabilities (and duties) of Arbites officers.

Page 118
Sanja had nothing against the Arbitor Senioris, and his willingness to help was genuine. But for a moment he could not help but be amused. While its control over its own jurisdictions was absolute, the Mechanicus had little ability to simply move in and overrule other arms of the Adeptus as the Arbites did, and he suspected that such impasses happened to him more often that they did to her.
I like Sanja. he's a rather interesting AdMech character and overall not an asshole. It's also intresting that the AdMech has no direct authority to infringe on the other Adpetus and factions, they can (through their control of technology) exert quite a bit of influence.. it is of a more indirect variety (but that can have advantages too) whereas the Arbites are more direct (if they choose to be.)

Page 118
"Where are the engineering functions of the fortress carried out, arbitor? Do you have tech-priests ministering to your systems, or laity?"

"Laity. It’s the same here as in our other fortresses, there are lay tech-adepts granted indulgence by your priesthood for the duty."
Like the Rogue Trader flotilla, the Arbites have "lay" techs... which I guess are just other organizations versions of Tech Marines, only less capable.

Page 122
Nobody in the flotilla knew if the gene-treatments Dyobann had designed had been tried before, anywhere, ever. The magos had based them on scriptures he had found in the wreckage of an explorator ship that had been studying a mercenary xenos breed, combined with treatises on the transformative gene-seed of the Astartes that no one outside the bio-forges of Mars was supposed to own any more. But the treatments themselves were an unknown quantity and they had needed an inconspicuous way of exposing their candidates to the trigger-serum.

...

But contesting the succession in a court of the Adeptus meant they would have to
produce not just a tissue sample but a challenger whose blood would show gene-traces of Hoyyon Phrax himself. He supposed, then, that it could be expected to hurt when artificial viruses and alchemic serums were working their way through his metabolism, twisting and rewriting his fundamental blood-print to show that he was the son of someone whose son he was not.
Interesting origins for this little "gene-treatment" process.. especially since it gives somhe parallels to gene-seed. Especially in the bit about "artificial viruses" and such, which echoes some earlier fluff about "viral machines" used in Astartes creation. Part of me wonders if it is some sort of micro-or nano-tech machinery. If so I'd bet on micro and being more bio-mechanical or quasi-organic (like the astartes themselves.)

Page 126
Behind the herald was arranged a single rank of white-armoured Adepta Sororitas, Sisters of the Order of the Sacred Rose that Simova must have drawn from the Cathedral garrison back in the Augustaeum, in full-face Croziat-pattem helms that hid their faces from the
stiff sea-breeze.
Sororitas with helms.

Page 126
Calpurnia leaned over the holographic pict-relay and watched the scene as it was captured by the sentry-post’s opticons, eyes narrowed with anger as the little holographic Simova jabbed a finger at the miniature arbitrator in front of him. There was a sound pickup at the post, but the wind on the tor and the natural noise of the transmission swamped the voices into incoherence.
The Arbites fortress has sentry opticons and pict relays.

Page 126-127
"Then Ammaz told him that if they flew into the interdiction zone without express grant of passage and an escort they’d be shot down before they’d gone two kilometres...."

...
"His tore is active but he’s got a helmet pickup that the priest can’t hear too."
2 km range on at least some weapons.

Page 127
"Have one of the patrol fliers prepared too, for a trip out to that sentry post."
Patrol fliers part of the Arbites inventory.

Page 128
Jarto dutifully slid the bronze measuring rods into place and charted the co-ordinates of the sighting, called them up the speakertube to the Opticon Intendant’s control cabin high above him, and punched them into a grey card that was sucked into the slotted mouth of a gargoyle on his viewing-deck’s central pillar and carried smoothly to the gate’s archive stacks. He never thought any more about it, as he never thought any more about any of the tiny warp-flares he recorded. Everyone knew Hydraphur was too well fortified and too deep in the Imperium for hostile traffic-
More Naval opticon stuff of a less technical nature. still interesting though.

Page 129
Despite an invitation, then a request, then a demand that it halt one hundred and fifty kilometres out from Coronet Triatic MRA-47 to await escort, the flotilla grudgingly dropped its velocity to
a little under cruising speed and set a course that would take them between Hydraphur’s two ecliptics, around the star and toward the planet itself. Offended by the flotilla’s rudeness and unimpressed by the repeated and unsubtle references in its communiques to the privileges the charter granted it, Traze took the opportunity to give his squadron a little live close-manoeuvring drill.

So the observers on the flotilla decks were startled to see the high, crenellated prows of half a dozen Battlefleet Pacificus warships bearing down on them, fast enough for some of the more nervous flotilla commanders to issue orders to brace for collision. The Navy formation speared into the side of the Phrax flotilla and the, in a beautiful display of piloting and discipline, the powerful warships wheeled around onto the flotillas course, effortlessly matching speeds. The flotilla crews, used to looking out of their viewports to the comforting sight of other flotilla ships blazing with light, now looked out at the pitted grey hulls of the battlefleet vessels, their arched gunports and the venomous, hulking shapes of lance turrets.
Rogue Trader Flotilla vs Navy. Again theoretical power vs practicla power varies, depending often on the number of guns you have (such as this case.) Note "half a dozen" Battlefleet pacificus warships on station, setting a lower limit (a very lower limit) on the garrison. They may also be accelerating pretty damn fast to pull off a manuver like that.

Page 130
Navy pilots would come aboard with data-plaques and voxlinks to guide the flotilla through the maze of minefields, sentry gates, gravitic tides and patrol squadrons that would, it was made very clear, wipe out every one of the Phrax ships if they tried to fly into Hydraphur on their own
The navy (predictably) uses its own pilots/navigators and data links ot guide certain out-system ships into the system. I expect this is pretty standard practice, for security reasons.

Page 130
The Navy, as a rule, did not like rogue traders much.
self explanatory. lol.

Page 138
Looking into the immaterium from real space was more difficult than from a ship that had broken warp, and Domasa had only recently caught the trick of it.

...
Santo Pevrelyi stood in a relatively small disc of clam warp space: In some places the weight and movements of planets seemed to roil the immaterium on the other side of the membrane to them, in some places such as this the effect was the opposite.
Apparently looking into the warp from real space is harder than looking into real space from the Warp. Also we see that gravity *(or the presence of planetarey bodies seems to have peculiar influences on the warp and its own turbulence.) This does nto make warping into realspace inside a system impossible of course, just more dangerous (esp given the inherently unpredictable nature of 40K warp as it is.)


Page 138-139
Every Navigator, it was said, saw the immaterium in a different way: some as clouds, some as swirls of colour like bands of glowing ink floating in clear water. The great Ayr Shodama had described it as a brilliantly lit room full of thick steam, swirling this way and that. Others ’’saw’’ it in ways that presented to their senses as patterns of sound or even music; others saw nothing at all when they unveiled their warp eyes, but were overwhelmed with tactile sensations and perceived the movements of the warp as breezes or cloth or fingers against their skin. For some the warp even manifested itself as an elaborate dream, their minds presenting what their warp eye saw as a detailed landscape of jungle, or city, a treacherous mountain range, or an underwater reef through whose bright coral a ship had to make its cautious way.
The usual "Navigators perceive the warp differently" bit.



Page 140
"What caused it?" asked Domasa. "Do we know?"
Yimora had given her an odd look. "You’re old enough to know that there’s no easy answer to that. The idea that for every little stir and gust in the warp you can point to a single thing and say "that did it" is a myth for the warp-blind. Waves and echoes have been rebounding back and forth through the immaterium since the Emperor Himself was in swaddling robes. Every thought that every living creature has adds to them, or interferes with them, or breaks them, or makes new ripples of their own. Who can disentangle what does what? I’ve been checking the logs and speaking to some of the others around the high docks. It’s been growing steadily over the past few weeks - just chop and eddy to begin with, but there have been tides coming up from the Rasmawr Gulf that have fed into the thing and been trapped in it. It’s been building up energy ever since. Three days before we came into dock it sent out a shockwave that unhinged a dozen of the more sensitive astropaths in the Pevrelyi Psykana station and gave nearly everyone on the
planet screeching nightmares."
The inherent complexity of the warp, which of course has implications for navigation and such. Again seagoing analogies come to mind, and its quite obvious that Navigators (and other organizations) keep some eye on and pay attention to "weather" in the Warp (warp storm activity, and the like) and hopefully adapt to it somehow.

Page 143
He peered at it one way and another for the time it took them to walk down the passageway and down the forward well, where a wide curl of ramp led down through three layers of passenger decks, all deserted after Domasa’s syndicate had taken exclusive charter of the ship.
Navigator house "charters" a ship. From who they did, we don't know. But again if its possible to rent or borrow ships they can't be all that rare. (at least of some quality.)

Page 144
"My associates have a fast warp-runner ready to go, something that has enough power in it to skirt the worst of that storm and still make it to Hydraphur within ten days."
We dont (yet) know the exact distance, but 10 LY in 10 days would be some 365c and 10,000 LY or so (close to across a segmentum) would be 365,000c. Figure it falls somewhere in that range :D

Page 157 -
The Helispex Engine was about to begin its operations, calling down the mind of the Machine God into its circuits and nanostacks, bringing the unknowable intellect of the Arch-Mechanicus to bear.
Soem sort of sophisticated data-engine used by AdMech Genetors on Hydraphur is described as having "nanostacks" - exactly what is "nano" about it (storage, or whatnot?) we aren't told.

Page 158
"Genetors come from three sectors on pilgrimages to this shrine,"
...
"Seven months ago the archlexmechanic of the Twelfth Tech-Guard Fleet came here with gifts of servitors and scriptures and machine-parts blessed on Mars itself, for the right to pray at the foot of the dais for one hundred minutes and look upon the engine itself."
Tech Guard fleets. I guess rare technology can be a financial boon to a group of AdMech.

Page 158
The clarity of the engine's communion with the Machine God is such that it can perform seventy-six billion calculations and observations in a second, and process them in five seconds more.
The data engine here is designed specifically for genetics work, and seems to be a fairly important/high end example of such technology (at least in the region of Hydraphur.) How to inteprret it, I have no idea. 76 giga-somethings or others. Its not just calculating though, its observing (cogitations?) and the processing speed is 1/5th that. I suppose it is useful for giving a rough idea of 40k computer tech, either way, and its not exactl a lower limit.

Page 159
Dancing through the image was archive-data, the parallel records back through every generation of the Phrax bloodline. The engine remembered every operation it had ever performed, every petition that had ever been made to it. It had known it was being asked to look once again at the bloodline of Phrax, and so now the knowledge of the tests it had done on the family’s every generation blossomed silently in the backs of the magi’s minds as the blood-print of this new heir danced through the fore of their consciousness. Gene-prints, chemical analyses down to the molecular, down to the sub-molecular, microchemical forensics that showed every influence and impact on the heir’s blood from the genes he had been born with to the food he had eaten, diseases he had had, the kinds of sunlight he had been exposed to, the kinds of vaccinations...
The Data engine at work. It does sound more than a bit self aware.


Page 160
...Dyobann flicked a curt, silent message to one of his servitors which snapped a stiletto out of one of its utility-arms and stepped forward. The blade punctured the priest’s skull five times in two seconds and then the car doors were closing behind him and they were on their way up to the surface.
Action time about 2/5th of a second.

Page 161
Dyobann gave thanks that the shrine was not one of those that extended kilometres down.
Some AdMech shrines can reach kilometres belowground.

Page 162
"So this is the Magos Dyobann,"
...

"A scavenger-rat in a red robe, a smuggler and thief? A murderer and a consorter with murderers? A friend of the xenos, the alien whose form mocks the pure genetics of the human template? One whose contempt for what is sacred leads him to poison a sacred engine of the Mechanicus with lies and betray the trust its keeper placed in him?"
Sanja is pissed off.. it shows here the internal politics of the AdMech itself rather nicely, along the "radical/puritan" lines Inquisitors often face. Sanja is more conservative, while Dyobann the more radical.

Page 164
In his heart Magos Dyobann knew that Sanja was right. He wondered if he had ever had a chance: those short minutes coupled into the data-stream had shown him the sight of the Helispex was clearer and more powerful than he had ever anticipated.
Length of time Dyobann spent inside the Helispex observing and (IIRC) manipulating things before he was caught. It would seem AdMech capabilities are not too far off the engine itself (within an order of magnitude or two at least.)

Page 164
But the genetor’s own weapons were just a few strides away now, three heavy servitors, cloned muscles reinforced by layers of exoskeleton, iron plates carved with the Machina Opus or leering gargoyle visages grafted to the front of their skulls where their faces had been. Chainfist blades rumbled and revved; a drillspike spun so fast it was just a blurred length of shining metal in the yellow light of the lamps.
Combat servitors with "cloned muscle."

Page 165
The second servitor hurdled the body straight into a tight-burst haywire pulse that blew out its cybernetics and sent it into a mad jerking dance. Its exoskeleton smoked and froze. The weapons in its limbs accelerated past their tolerances and began to burn out.
"tight burst" haywire pulse.. I wonder if its some sort of directed EMP effect.


Page 165
There was a tiny crack as it [chaff pellet] exploded and then the doorway was full of metal-dust, heated by a tiny melta-charge and throwing out magnetic static. The sentry-servitors built into the pillars on either side of the door had been shut down as a mark of respect for Dyobann's position, something that Sanja was probably bitterly regretting now. And now, even if he reactivated them they would be blind and uesless.
some sort of micro-EW system. Mini blind grenade. Intresting also in the miniaturized melta charge. You can scale those down to tiny pellets or up into huge torpedoes.

Page 166
In the second it took Sanja’s machine to adjust, Dyobann’s servitor had hamstrung it with a
low sweep of a wire-fine blade that slipped out of a finger. A homing-dart flew from the tip of one of Dyobann’s outthrust tentacles - it hung motionless in the air for a split second before it lunged forward. For a moment a third layer appeared in Dyobann’s already doubled vision: the sight of the gap between the servitor’s face and shoulder plates growing wider and wider as he guided the dart home. His vision flashed white, then dropped to black, and he snapped the connection back from his servitor as his dart - its outer layer of microflechettes, inner core of pyro-acid - burst deep in the last enemy’s abdomen. Smoke and the stink of evaporating flesh shrouded the wreck of the servitor as it fell.
- Pyro-acid filled dart with a layer of "microflechettes" that is actively guided by a Magos' own senses (some sort of communications linkup allowing him to remotely guide it.) Laser guided dart weapons are pretty neat. And a "wire fine" blade some sort of vibro or power weapon I suppose.


Page 167
Red figures poured out into the forechamber, moving with quick, deadly precision. Their flak-gowns and cowls were a dark, dusty red and bronze augmetics glinted and flashed where their garments did not cover: Skitarii. Tech-guard. Not servitors but the elite military of the Cult of the Machine.
Three of them threw short, slender carbines to their shoulders and banged off quick bursts that broke against the subcutaneous flex-plates that armoured Dyobann’s torso and against the servitor’s back as it hacked at the doors.
Skitarii and tech guard treated as synonymous here, or perhaps the Magos is just talking about the Skitarii as a subset of the Tech Guard (the way storm troopers are a subset of the IG in some ways.) Also dyobann has what amounts to sub-dermal body armor, while the Skitarii are using "flak gowns" here (possibly becuase its lighter and more mobile than carapace.)

Page 167
They wwere using lightweight shatter-rounds, slugs whose breakable design could not damage the forechamber but which also robbed them of stopping power against the armoured bodies of Dyobann and his servitor.
Frangible rounds I suppose.. good for unarmoured bodies but useless against body armour.

Page 167
Dyobann lunged forward to bring the two nearest Skitarii in range of the one-shot microflamer in another tentacle-tip, but the burst of white-hot vapour only splashed across the front of their gowns. Both men dived and rolled to efficiently snuff the flames..
"micro flamer" used against the flak gowns - which resisted the attack pretty well. One assumes it was meant to create at least severe second or third degree burns (hundreds of kj per person, say) but it provided protection against that. (not that it neccesariyl means much against lasers or similarly focused weapons, but the more severe "cremation" style flamers would be another story.)

Page 168
By the time the haywire detonated over the prone servitor the luminants had arced up four metres in the air and swooped smoothly down again.
Luminants seem to have either superhuman leaping ability or antigrav.


Page 168
There was noise in Dyobann’s ears, noise that hit the translator augmetics and unfolded into data: the luminants were broadcasting a simple packet of code, over and over, three times a second: nothing more than the data-seal of Genetor-Magos Cynez Sanja, so that Dyobann would know who was watching through their eyes as they delivered sentence.
Broadcast rate of 3 times a second.

Page 169
There was barely time for pain; the power pulse coursed through the tendril and through the webs of micro-augmetic filament spread through the magos's cerebellum, flashing them to white heat and incinerating Dyobann's stunned, disbelieving brain.
"Micro agumetic" filaments flares white hot and cremates the brain.. call it 4-5 MJ at least.. iwth the implication that the augmetics in the brain endured this.

Page 176
Domasa Dorel had felt it in her warp eye, like a finger jabbing into her forehead, and she had covered her brow with a phylactery containing hexagrammic inscriptions by House soothsayers on Terra, written in tattoo-ink on strips of her own cloned and cured skin. It usually helped. It didn’t now.
"cloned" skin again.. and some sort of warp charm to resist atttacks/assaults on the warp eye, I guess.

Page 176
The ship began to tumble as Yimora desperately looked for a way through and the Geller field ippled as the riptide struck it, closed on it, seemed to bite at it. It bowed further and further inwards and then, for less than a hundredth of a second which set off klaxons and bells
throughout the Gann-Luctis’s besieged hull, it flickered out.

Death came in through that tiny gap, while Varro Phrax stood in the doorway of his stateroom and watched his wife hold down their yelling, thrashing son. Even the most ignorant ship’s labourer knew in a basic way that the immaterium somehow resonated with emotions: drawn by them, feeding off them, feeding them in turn.
hundreth of a second flickering of a Gellar field (which can apparently be substnatial enough to flex/bow against warp "pressure", if such terms apply) allows a daemon through. Sensors also pick up that flicker, giving an idea of reaction times.

Page 177
Warp-dreams were bad, but Varro remembered from his days on the flotilla that for a young mind they were worse. For a young mind that did not understand to expect them they must be far worse still.
Younger minds are more vulnerable to the warp than adults.

Page 177
It had found itself born through no conscious effort of its own: in the moment the field had flickered, its essence earthed itself quickly and painlessly into a mind inside like a spark jumping across a circuit-gap and then it was in a dry, cold, glaring straightjacket of a universe, surrounded by minds imprisoned in meat that jabbered and flapped. It didn’t like the way the meat behaved, so it did certain things that its instincts suggested and the meat took on new shapes and patterned itself through this horribly constricting cell of dimensions differently and then there was no more behaviour. It did not like the way that there were ways in which it could not move, but it found it could do things to change the little physical universe it found itself in. It could unravel things and part things, and it found that rending and breaking was far more delicious here than manipulating the soft stuff of the warp. And so it went looking for more meat to break, meat whose little droplets of spirit would puff so exhilaratingly into nothing when it pushed on them.
The daemon inside the ship. Note the daemon does not create a body from the warp or thin air - it takes existing matter and either consumes it (adding to its mass) or it reshapes it. It needs a corporeal body to affect the material plane.

Page 179
They were standing in one of the V-shaped defensive buttresses of the Arbites fortresses on Galata, Hydraphur’s moon. This was Calpurnia’s second attempt at a place for the hearing, after ornithopters and air-sleds with Ecclesiarchal markers had started circling Trylan Tor just beyond where Arbites flyers were authorised to engage them. Then sea-platforms carrying squads of Sororitas had begun to appear around the tors at the borders of the interdict zone, and nervous proctors at the sentry posts had started to ask for extra squads and ammunition. Then Arbites informants in the portion of the Ring orbiting above the tor reported that more Sororitas had begun commandeering launch bays and hardpoints, and were clashing with the Ring’s military crews over control of two of the giant barrage-cannon barbettes.
More politics.. and the Ecclesiarchy being jerks and assholes and (predictably) trying ot drag the Sororitas down with them. Nothing wrong with intimidation tactics, not at all, especially when it spills over into conflicts with the Navy (no doubt further souring the Navy-Ecclesiarchy relations)
Note the "barrage cannon" barbettes, which suggests they have some sort of artillery designed perhaps for orbital bombardment roles (supporting the planetary defence forces, maybe or putting down uprisings. Or possibly just to give the Navy a means to intimidate on-world holdings.)

In short, the Ecclesiarchy is doing much to try to pressure Calpurnia to hand over the Charter (which being signed by the Emperor, makes it a holy artifact to the Ecclesiarchy.)

Page 180-181
The street justice of the arbitrators was bent on brutal control and swift consequences, but the long, slow work of the Judges focused on enacting the most insignificant letter of the least of every law, as decreed by the High Lords in the name of the Emperor. Every arbitor knew the sight of the great camps stretching away from the gates of a precinct fortress, where supplicants lived out the months or years it took a Judge there or on some more distant world to decide their case. Some went into the decades as books of precedent and case histories had been shipped in from a thousand other worlds to make sure the verdict stood foursquare on the rock of Imperial law. Calpurnia had even heard of Judges and advocates who had had been given leave to raise a new Arbites on a case so successive generations could take over the arguments when their originators had died: mere mortality would not slow the great engine of Imperial justice.
An interesting contrast between the differnet kinds of "justice" administred by the Arbites.. one swift and brutal and even arbitrary, yet another slow and methodical and relentless. Again kinda silly but, the Arbites as a rule seem to favor caution and thoroughness and conseratism over speed or efficiency. It probably makes the American legal system look brisk and simplified.

Page 184
"All available able-bodied hands have been ordered to hunt this thing down." he went on. "One of the oldest shipboard disciplines there is." Cherrick eyed Varro and Rikah’s short-barrelled lasguns as he spoke, his words underlined by the clanging alarms in the corridors around them.
They earlier mention getting what is stored in the shipboard lockers rather than using any weapons they'd brought, so we have an example of lasweapons being drawn from shipboard stores. YEt again.

Page 185
...as if on cue there was a momentary shudder as the ship bucked in the warp flow faster and harder than the gravity plates in the deck could smooth out.
Again artificial gravity used in an inertial-damping role.

PAge 185
Cherrick nodded with grudging respect, wheeled and strode to where the ship’s soldiers, overhearing them, were going over their weapons once again. Most wore bulbous combat bridles holding the targeting visors over their eyes, vox pickups at their jaws, and dangling amulets and purity seals at their temples; their faces, what could be seen through all the hardware, were grim. Cherrick knew they had been trained and conditioned to trust in one another, and having to follow him and Domasa around was galling.
- Once again: Shipboard troopers of a sanctioned (commercial?) Liner are equipped with lasguns [we find out later] The really interesting bit is all the targeting hardware they seem to have.

Page 187
Two more ship’s troops ran past, one toting a flamer and one pulling an outsized fuel-cylinder on a trolley.
"man portable" flamer.

Page 188
It had been unfamiliar with the limitations of the meat it had somehow become snagged in at first, and by the time it had learned that the pitiful little extremities the meat owned were supposed to move only in certain ways most of its joints had been broken or dislocated by the inhuman will moving its muscles. There was a point when if had wanted to pass through a hole it had managed to make in a bulkhead that the meat had to run around, but the hole had been barely wide enough for one extremity to fit through, so it had crumpled the hard little bone frame the meat was strung up on and fed itself through the hole like a snake. The frame had not reassembled on the other side, and trying to hold it in place through will was tiring. Now its skeleton was a mass of bone fragments and splinters all clicking and grating as it moved. Its feet either splatted on the metal with the sound of raw meat or clicked like a dog’s foot from the bone jutting through the sole.
Back to the daemon, trying to moprh its body to pass through smaller holes. This seems to suggest shapeshifting and self-repair/regeneration is dependent upon knowledge or experience with possessing organic bodies.

Page 189
With a crackle of tearing flesh it shot out an arm, the skin popping as the limb distended, and
a hand that looked like a cudgel spiked with bone thudded into the back of one of the rearmost crew.

..

Suddenly more bone splinters sprouted through its skin: first just their points like droplets of hard white sweat and then their whole length like bloodied cactus-spines, and it took the screaming crewman into its embrace.
The daemon is learning.

Page 191
This time her aim was true, and the arm turned into a blood-spray that painted the ceiling and wrecked the half-broken lamps.


Shotgun obliterates the daemon's arm.


Page 191
The thing in its coat of blood watched them silently, the single black ball of an eye catching the light of the las-bursts as they struck it. They did not knock it backward: normally even a laspistol shot would feel like an impact as explosive vapourisation of part of the target's surface imparted backward momentum. But the shape in red stood there, its jaw hanging slack on broken and dislocated hinges, as shot after shot burst puffs of vapour off it. They did not seem to be penetrating as they would a human body, they simply cratered its front, as though something were binding its meat into a barrier far more dense to the bursts of incinerating light.
This suggests lasguns operate at least (parly) by explosive vaporization rather than purely thermal (burning) effects, although the "bursts of incinerating light" tends to suggest at least some partial thermal effects as well. This may mean they are designed to rapidly create steam explosions for combined thermal/explosive effects. We also learn that the effect creates a "knockback" which may explain some cases where lasgun create "knockback" effects, like implied here. I would assume, though, that such effects depend largely on the design and power setting of the weapon, since not all lasguns have knockbacks either.

Assuming a "knockback" of a few centimeters for an 70 kg man is 1.5 kg*m/s (less than half the momentum of a pistol or some assualt rifle rounds) KE would be 700 joules for that "knockback" assuming an expansion velocity of 1000 m/s, and 1.4 grams of flesh vaporized for 3.5 kj. I kinda doubt a "knockback" of one inch is going to be much or very noticable. Assuming a few inches of knockback we get 5.6 kg*m/s momentum (8 cm/s velocity) 2.8 kj (for KE from expansion velocity) and 5.6 grams of flesh vaporized - 14 kilojoules. as a rule I'd probably say double digit kj at least is reaosnable.

there is also "incinerating" - assuming 3rd degree burns. Assuming a 15 cm deep hole and a flehs density of 700 kg*m^3, the diameter of the wound would be about 1 cm or so. 3rd degree is 50-100J per square cm, which means 2.8-5.6 kj.

Also the daemon apparently can "enhance" its mortal structure, making it more resistant to lasfire (at least) - which maks it harder to calc this.


Page 192
The shotgun did better work. Under cover of the lasfire around her the crewwoman crept forward through the wrecked and tumbled benches, clamped the stock to her shoulder and sent three more booming, flaring shots ripping into the already stippled flesh.

..

The shotgun was what it needed: lasfire was a weapon for living creatures, a way to inflict trauma on a live metabolism to the point when it could not continue to function. But to fight something like this you needed a weapon that could not only break up a body but demolish it, physically rip it apart until the knot of will that held the flesh together was exhausted.
Interesting how the daemon is less protected against the shotgun. The reasons given are interesting - that las-weapons inflict damage via "truama on a live body" - which I take to mean something like shock, blood loss, burns, etc. But it does not physically oblieterate or tear things apart. This is interesting compared to some other las-weapons, which can and do explode things (blowing apart parts of heads, blowing the head apart entirely, blowing off limbs, etc.)

Page 192
The barrel of Varro’s gun was smoke-hot and icons were flashing down the length of the case: power cell low, mechanisms overheating.
Varro's hellguns has visible indicators showing the status and power cell of the weapon.

Page 192
Its other eye had taken a hit and ruptured; its front had been cooked black as the bolts hit it, and Rikah saw places where the bone had started to show.

..

The thing stood there, flesh sizzling and crackling, and didn't waver or fall.
Lasfire is starting to erode the daemon, but its mostly badly burnt and not suffering as a reuslt. Assuming a 2x1 metre surface area for the daemon and 100 j cm^2 we get 2 MJ at least. REmember the daemon is considerably tougher than normal people, so this is perhaps a lower limit. Assuming 1000 shots have been fired.. thats 2 kj per las-shot.

Page 192
...he spat, and his saliva sizzled on the heat-sink fin of his custom-crafted hellgun as he ejected the spent cell, kicked it away across the floor and slammed in another.
Cherric's hellgun has a "heat sink fin" for cooling. Rather interesting, considering that you wouldn't want to get that too close to your body (radiating heat) but it doesnt seem to be very large, and spitting on it will cool it off. This suggests las-weapons (at least high end ones like hellguns) have very good, prboably unrealistically good - efficiencies and do not overheat very rapidly. (contrast that 90% effiiency is considered phenomenally good for a laser. For a 5 kj shot you'd generate 500 j of waste heat. For 50-100 shots thats 25-50 kj of waste heat per powerpack.

Page 195
The thing's head split open like a lamprey and sprayed hot blood and flechette-sharp fragments of skull with every bit the force of the shotgun blasts. The fountain of red decapitated the crewwoman and three slivers of bone went through the face of the trooper behind her: both pithced backward..
Daemon creates and fires a bone shotgun. It's not defenseless, and it is quick to learn.


Page 196
...Varro jumped forward with a yell and jammed his gun into the dripping stump. The barrel sizzled in the meat and then he began to pump the trigger as Rikah and Cherrick both tried to drag him
away.

Varro was lucky that the cell of his gun was so low, because when the clogged and overheated barrel finally hit flashpoint and exploded there was little enough power behind it to be soaked up by the warp-thing's body. The thump of power was still enough to send him staggering back, though, his face, chest, and hands painted with blood.
Lasgun explodes, implied that had the power cell been higher it might have done serious harm to him. How erious? we don't know. Assuming 1st or 2nd degree burns across the face and chest (10-20 J per sq cm) and a 40x40 cm surface are for chest (20x20 cm area for head call it about 2000 sq cm total) 20-40 kj of energy towards VArro, half that to the creature.. 40-80 kj. And at least 1-2 kj per las bolt (assuming 40 shots.)

Page 196
There were three quick las-shots in succession that sent bursts of reeking steam up from its skin, then it leapt again.
Las shots create steam on impact, probably burning and shallowly cratering with steam explosions.

PAge 197
The flamer crew were both screaming at them to get aside, and as Varro passed them they managed, finally, to produce a spurt of white heat that lit the assembly area ferociously and brought the stink of melted plastic to the air as three benches slumped down into pools of slag.

...
then Cherrick took careful aim and snapped off a single hell-shot.
He hit exactly what he was shooting at, the weak spot where the hose coupled the flamer to its reservoir. There was a tiny flare as the seal was breached and then Cherrick flung himself flat as a roaring orange-white cloud filled the room. The flamer crew didn’t scream - they didn’t have time. But something howled as its flesh was incinerated and the latticec of thoughts it had tried to hold togehter was left with nothing to anchor them.
The Warp creature inhhabiting a human body (as well as possibly several otehr flame roperoators) were incineraed by the detonation of a flamer fuel tank (mentioned to be a reseve tank earlier.)
Depends entirely on how one defines "incinerate"

Page 201
Above the Promise in turn loomed the grey bulk of the Punisher-class cruiser Baron Mykal, keeping watch with gun bays open and batteries armed. The rest of the flotilla had been herded by the Navy to dock at Hydraphur’s Ring, putting almost the whole of the moon between them
and the fortress, and Naval patrols combed the space in between.
- Hydraphur is station to at least one Arbites Punisher-class cruiser. Has "gun bays" and "batteries" both.

Page 203
"The Eternal Gate. Hmm." Calpurnia sorted through her memory for a moment until it hit her. "One of the Orders Pronatus. They’re a minor order, or a minor range of orders. Their responsibility is tracking down and obtaining relics and sacred items to bring back into the Ecclesiarchy’s care. I knew I recognised."
Its a Sororitas order, dedicated to the duties described above.

Page 205
..the Arbites were underdressed to the point of being comical in their simple carapace and flakcloth and their impassive mirror-visored helmets.
- ARbites troops here are described as wearing "simple carapace and flakcloth" and "mirror-visored helmets". Given that the ground-based Arbitors seemed to have some exposed helmets, its possible that the mirrored helmets identify the shipboard arbites.

Also "flakcloth" may be referring to the undergarments below the hard plates (possibly even the uniform.) Which has precedents for other units (EG the Guard, which has full body flak but often only rigid plates for the upper torso and head. As well as greatcoats.)

Page 208
Their presence had seemed like a true blessing at first, a mercy mission. There were plenty of systems where mission-ships circled the outer reaches ready with healing and spiritual strength for crews coming in from bad warp-passages, and Varro had been delighted to find one here.
The Ecclesiarchy aren't assholes in all systems, and actually do decent acts.

Page 208
...but he had felt a chill when a sharp-eyed, shaven-headed Sister Palatine had followed him and he saw the pistol bolstered under the shoulder of her purple-black robe, its grip and barrel matching the gunmetal grey of the aquila at her throat and the chain of office around her waist.
- mention of a "Sister Palatine" who wears robes but goes about armed with a pistol. This tends to suggest that not all of the militant orders fo the Sororitas neccesarily wear power armour (or at least not all the time.) Then again, it could be that the militant orders transfer sisters to other order to another for varrying reasons.. all Sorortias receive some degree of combat training and can carry arms - evne the Hospitallers.

Page 211
The fortress used deck-plates to boost the moon’s weak gravity, but they were still a little below Hydraphur gee.
AG tech - "deck plates" used to provide supplementary gravity to enhance the moon's weakened gravity. Possibly some variation/applicaiton of suspensor tech.

Page 212
"The Ecclesiarchy tried to bail up the flotilla while it was in orbit over Mayinnoch about a century and a half ago, and had a confessor and a quasi-independent order of warriors called the Fraternal Order of the Aquila try and demand the charter. The Arbites garrison stopped that attempt in its tracks."
Yet again we see the Ecclesiarchy has tried to nab a prominent rogue trader charter under the guise of an artifact. Dickish as it is, it makes sense from their POV. And probably engenders yet another reason why some Rogue Traders and clerics do not get along. (examples shall remain nameless)

Page 212
"But the verdict was that while there’s a pretty damned complicated stew of law and tradition that allows the Ecclesiarchy a heavy hand in acquiring sacred objects, this particular sacred object contains express direction as to how it is to be disposed of and controlled. Express placement in the hands of temporal law and the Arbites takes precedence over its origins including it in the broad subset of things that mostly-implied law gives the Ecclesiarchy control over."
In other words, the Law does not automatically bolster the Ministorum, which is probably a good thing. We see again the sheer complexity of laws and restrictions and politics that comprise th entity known as the Imperium of Man.

Page 217
He was followed by two retainers in heavy armoured shipsuits and a slender shape in a deep-cowled rust-brown gown that Calpurnia took to be one of his Navigator backers.


- mention of "heavily armoured shipsuits", presumably the sort of armour borrowed from the Sanctioned liner attacekd by a daemon as mentioned before. (And this representing the sort of body armour shipboard crews might wear/employ. Some White Dwarf articles on naval ratings in ground war have alleged similar as I recall.)

Page 217
Three junior flotilla ratings, in simple bodygloves with blinker-harnesses and mouth-stitches to show their indentured status, pushed in a medicae carriage on silent suspensor cushions.
Suspensor cushions, and mutilated indentured ratings of the crazy train flotilla.

Page 224
They had hidden magazines full of low-density undetectable rounds for their ceremonial rifles, but there was no time to load them as they closed in on the flotilla masters,
Autorifles with special undetectable ammo. They apparently also don't have any sort of chemical or propellant, or else you think the Arbites sensors would pick them up.


Page 225
Two shining flaps of micormesh chainmail dropped out, set with odd ridges of metal, then Halpander made fists and the ridges snapped into rows of spines along his now-armoured knuckles.

Next to him, little long-faced Galt flipped up the end of his staff and there was a shimmer in the air as a micron-thin carbon-blade took the head off the man next to her.

...

... before the microblade in Galt's staff took his arm off.
Hidden weapons of the Rogue Trader flotilla.. micron-thin blade weapons (another power/vibro weapon?) and "micro mesh" chainmail with sharp ridges.

Page 225
Then she was in a crouch and powering forward and her dagger punched through the flakcloth layers under Halpander's coat, sendimg him over backwards to sit and gape at the hilt jutting from his sternum.
More flakcloth body armour tpye stuff. In this case not very resistant to knife thrusts.

Page 226
He flung himself flat, high-bore autostubber already whining and clicking as
the loader cycled up.
Autostubber.. I'm guessing this means the cylinder is self rotating, or something weird.

Page 227
Kyorg pistoned out both hands in front of him and his ornate rings flared with energy. Zanti, wise about hidden weapons, backed and turned away in time, and the two hindmost armsmen were protected by their visors. The other two caught the full blast and staggered away, howling and clamping their hands to their faces. Another ring spat a needle-fine laser that lanced through the third man’s throat just below his helmet’s chin-strap and sent him reeling and choking against the walls.
Needle-laser from a digital weapon slices through throat.

Page 228
...Zanti pinched the front of her floor-length coat firmly in her fingers and flicked it out.
The braids of memoy-wire woven into the hem curled up for a moment and then whipped savagely back, trying to regain their original shape, and the metal weight in the hem cracked the guard's kneecap. As he lurched and stumbled the second flick hit him between the eyes with more force that any movement that brief should have been able to muster, and the third connected solidly with Kyorg’s temple with a sound like an apple hitting concrete. As both men sagged to the floor, Zanti plucked the shotcaster from the guard’s limp hand, fired it into the guard’s face, checked the load, sighted on Kyorg’s head and emptied the rest of the magazine.

Memory wire weapons with weights on the end, and the autostubber I'm guessing is a shotcaster.

Page 228
Beheya ripped off her heavy uniform medallion and hurled it away, hearing the crack as the casing fragmented then the hiss as filaments from the xenos weapon they had captured long ago, the filmanets it had cost hte lives of two techs to extract from the teleporting warrior's strange gun, popped clear.

They touched and tangled and, ,when the Arbites tried to brush them or pull them away, they cut and bit through armour and into flesh.
Probably monofilamnet from an Eldar warp spider's weapons. either way it shows its quite effective at cutting through the Arbite's armour.


Page 229
But three armsmen had fallen to Executioner shells already, and as Behaya ran forward two more were punched off their feet. She raked a hand down the front of her coat, ripping off ornamental buttons, and scattering them to one side as she ran: a couple were dummies, but more exploded in white heat. Two arbitrators died instantly, arms and faces incinerated and their bodies flash-cooked inside their carapaces; three more staggered and flel as the lethal heat sucked the oxygen out of their lungs. In a few seconds more the tiny incendiary pellets had burned out and Behaya ran on through the smoke and the cauterised blood on the floor.
Incendiary pellets.. assuming both arbitrators suffered severe third degree burns or worse we're talking Megajoules of energy apiece, especially to "cook inside" their armour.

Page 229
The first Executioner round came arcing through the smoke and caught her in the small of the back. The impact thrust Behaya’s hips forward, then the second round hit the base of her neck and sent her to the deck in an ungainly sprawl of dead limbs
Executioner rounds. again seem relatively self-guided, but they also rely on impacts to do their damage, rather than som eexplosive or warhead effect. They also seem to behave like solid slugs.

Page 233
A moustached man dressed in a flotilla master’s uniform stood staring at them, the loader
on his autostubber whirring. A shell from one of the Sisters' freshly reloaded bolters took him in the solar plexus, lifting him and carrying him backwards through the air and over the steps before it detonated inside him half a metre above the hallway floor.
Another autostubber. Bolt round carries the guy half a metre into the air and who knows how far backwards before detonating (meaning, this is momentum). I'd say that the momentum is many times that of a 50 calibre round... except that if it penetrated inside him why didn't it just punch out the other way? Body armor of some kind? If so why did the armor fail on the front but not the back, when the round still is powered enough to lift the guy off the ground?

One possibility is that the guy was wearing soft armor that wasn't penetrated, but it wasn't rigid enough to stop the bolt, and the body underneath it caved in. The round may still have fialed to penetrate completely, and the guy gets lifted up, but its still "inside" him.

Page 234
His helmet was askew and there was a single neat las-burn in his cheek, opening a cauterised tunnel up into his cranium.
This was evidently made by a pistol, the weapon mentioned later on. Assuming a finger-wide (2 cm diameter) las wound 15 cm up into the brain.. 3rd degrere burns might be 5-10 kj. Drilling the hole would be a couple of kj or so quite easily.

Page 238
To Rikah, it suddenly seemed as though a freezing wind laced with sleet and vapour was scouring at him. There was roaring white noise in his ears, and the metal ridges on his head seemed to burn. The augmetic receptors buried in his ears burst into life, registering static that sounded like keening voices, and in his vision the woman’s warp eye grew and grew until it filled his sight with purest blackness.

It took a second and a half for her gaze to blow out every synapse in Rikah’s brain and send him spasming to the floor. She put a foot on his wrist to make sure the gun could not flail up at her and go off, and waited for the last twitches to subside.
Navigator eye.

Page 238
Just as she was emerging from the stairs all the viewports were lit up with a dazzling yellow-white light as the plasma shells from the Bassaan's cannon began to burst around them..
Plasma shells from a naval warship.

Page 240
As she fell forward onto her knees Calpurnia stepped forward and fired
another round into the back of her head, bursting it and sending the metal augmetic plugs popping out of their mounts and scattering across the floor.
Once again, Calpurnia's stubber is powerful enough to blow a human head apart.

PAge 240
"Memory wire and weights," she said. "Popular blueblood weapon on Hazhim. YHou can put a pock-mark into steel palte if you're good enough with it."
Page 241
The Voice of the Seraph, a Furious-class grand cruiser whose gun batteries rivalled those of some battleships, opened up first, using barely half its firepower to cripple the Proserpina Dawn outright. As the sleek container craft that had been Halpander’s home for nineteen years coasted away from Galata at a drunken angle, bleeding burning air from the wounds in its hull, the light cruisers which made up the Voice’s squadron-mates equally deftly scythed through the Sounding of Aurucon’s
enginarium with a co-ordinated lance salvo that sent plasma from its drive room coursing through ruptured bulkheads and incinerating three-quarters of the crew.
- A Furious-class Grand Cruiser is mentioned as having gun batteries rivalling those of some battleships.

Page 242
The Gyga VII, the fat nugget of a ship that had housed Magos Dyobann’s secret chambers, wrapped itself in layers of void shields that not even the flotilla masters had known it possessed and opened its engines, trying to accelerate through the middle of the flotilla formation and past the Navy ships. But by putting up its shields it made itself a target to one of the few vessels that could both keep pace with it and do it damage. The Kovash Venator, a spear-slender Long Serpent-class cruiser with powerful engines, sped out to intercept the Gyga and flanked it for another hour, battering at its shields with plasma and macroshells. Finally, its hull crumpled and drives damaged and with another Navy squadron closing in from its patrol route on an intercept course, the Gyga accepted its fate, burned retros, dumped off its velocity and prepared to be boarded.


- A Long Serpent class cruiser takes an hour to batter down the shields of an AdMech ship of unknown class (using "plasma and macroshells") The ship itself is not severely damaged and heaves to for boarding after its shields fail.

Long serpents are from BFG magazine mainly as I recall (a quais-canon source I suppose) so this may mean they're an actual design that is canonized. Who knows.

Page 242
The Magritta’s Arrow tried to ran too, followed by the little escort-sized Kortika that had been Zanti’s home and domain. Kortika, not built for speed, tried to skim over the surface of Galata to hide behind the moon’s curve, Her captain realised that Galata was as fortified as every other body i n Hydraphur when a great battery of plasma silos in the surface swatted the shields off his ship with contemptuous ease and a trio of giant lance turrets came to bear to finish what the guns had started. Kortika blew out in a storm that sent static and interference screaming through unshielded systems for twenty kilometres around.

On the other side of the planet, torpedo bays had slid open their shutters in artificial rift-valleys and six mammoth spikes of adamantium tore through space after the fleeing Magritta’s Arrow. Two burst as they tried to fly through the heat of its exhaust, and another disintegrated under fire from the Arrow’s point-defence arrays, but the final three plunged into its hull like lethal hypodermics, exploding deep in the layers of decks they had torn through. The dark, smouldering hulk that had been Magritta’s Arrow tumbled on through space for another seventy thousand kilometres before four Firestorm escorts drew alongside it and methodically broke the wreck down with their batteries into fragments no bigger than the pulpit Calpurnia had stood on in her
courtroom.
Some indication of the defences of Hydraphur, especially the lunar ones (plasma cannons and lance turrets) as well as shielded and unshielded electrical systems.

Also what seem to be kinetic impact torpedoes launched from some other source (planet, maybe?)

Page 244-245
"We’re picking up power to the drives, ma’am. They’re getting ready to move and there’s a signature that the auspex crew tells me is consistent with power to the warp coils. We think they’re going to try and jump out of the system from here."

Impossible. That was her thought. She had seen the reports of the state the ship had been in when it came into Hydraphur. And now it was undercrewed, and did they even have a Navigator left after that last voyage?
..

"You of all people know that its not survivable. This far in-system? With this amount of damage?"
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Again the risks and dangers, (especially under these conditions) of a warp jump in-system.. its not impossible (to an extent) but the closer in system one is, the more risk there is.
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Re: Shira Calpurnia novel series analysis thread

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The most recent book in the Shira Calpurnia series. Whether there will be more, I can't say. This book follows on the steps of Legacy. Calpurnia is basically a penitent criminal for failing to handle the Rogue Trader lunatics from the previous book. In the course of her penance she is forced back into her old job (with a watcher) in order to deal with crimes onboard Hydraphur's main Astropath facility. This is actually an improvement over the last book, since its 'Calpurnia dealing with crime, since she's a cop', but it also gives us an intriguing look into a rarely-explored aspect of 40K - the astropaths (the only other book being so was 'Outcast Dead' currently.) for that reason if no other 'Blind' has some value. This is brought down by the silly and needlessly grimdark way in which Calpurnia herself is handled throughout the book.

Anyhow, two postings in one update. I got more books to do!


Page 7
It is far out from the star, here. The blaze that brings warm yellow daylight to Hydraphur is too far away for warmth here. An observer could stand at a window in the Tower and eclipse the sun with a single tine of a dining fork, and there is no opticon on the Tower powerful enough to detect the tiny glint around that star that is Hydraphur itself.

However, aboard the Tower there are other ways of seeing.
The blind tower, astropathic relay and communications nexus for Hydraphur system. It is far enough away for even the star to be visible. It's implied that Astorpath sight/scrying is more powerful/effective than optical sensors/opticons.

Page 10
Tech-priest Guaphon, his torso uncoupled from his spindly steel legs, sat in the throne-socket in the little Munitorium. He could feel the pulse vibrating through the layers of suppression engines and ranks of warp-attuned sensors, charting the energy pulses from above him in exquisite detail. The machine spirits sent up their own beat, signalling their readiness to him in streams of
machine-code.
Suppression engines and warp-attuned sensors that monitor and scan the astropathic signals being sent and received.


Page 10-11
The mane of cables linking into his cranium was unlike Qwahl’s: the connections were
thinner, some thread-fine. A single thick cable from the very top of his head shot straight up into the ceiling, towards the eyrie.
..
The voices came through the warp, through space, and through the circuits of the column itself, swirling through Angazi’s own consciousness ...
...
He knew the melodies of the astropath trance from his own days in the eyries before he’d been appointed cantor. The white fire that the Soul Binding had hammered deep into him flickered in sympathy, and his mind surrounded and enveloped the thick power-flow of woven harmony welling up from the choir galleries surrounding the column’s base.
...
Angazi checked them with a thought, and used his own focus to bind the choristers’ voices tighter. He rippled his consciousness across them to soothe and direct them. Their note shifted and the intensity of their power changed. The harmony reached up through Angazi as he marshalled the choristers and directed them to their new parts. He rested his own mind on the psychic voices of those who were too far gone; too burned to understand what was needed, and steered them into their new melody.

He knew his work, was sure about it. As Qwahl’s spirit pushed deeper into the warp and further out from the eyrie where his body twitched, Angazi tuned the choir’s melody to him, fuelling him, bolstering him, giving him the power-stream to ride on and shelter in, and keeping him safe.
Astropathic implants, as well as the reception process for astropathic signals. A bit like the psychic equivalent of catching a fast-thrown ball, or trying to catch an animal/insect in a net. This seems to require alot of effort, alot of support from fellow members of the choir, and risking the dangers of the warp (in an out of body experience) to receive the message.

Also burnt out astropaths have some use, even if they cannot knowingly/willingly direct their powers, they can be persuaded into joining in.

Page 12
The detector vanes that carried the psychic impulses to Guaphon's Munitorium carried them futher, down the column deep into the keep, to a tall asymmetrical chamber buried off-centre below the astropath cloisters; the Bastion watch-hall. In that great, angled space, the voices of the choir were birthed into the air as actual sounds; a complex layer of notes and cries from vox-speakers. Harp strings and metal plates engraved with sensitive wards, tuned to translate the intricate psychic harmonics, fed into them. The shift in the choir’s song arrived in the ears of the watch-hall attendants as a rapid string of chimes.
..
A skilled watchmaster could read the sounds of the Tower as skilfully as they read the psychic signs...
...

Chevenne twitched his psychic attention away from the sounds and let it drift. As he passed to each new zone of the hall, his mind registered which region of the Tower it represented. He made sure that nothing was wrong, nothing was tainted, that no power was being overused, and no mind overloaded. Unstable psykers who might trigger one another were kept apart by quick orders to their attendants. Minds that were palpably weakening were directed into the cloisters to be meshed to a choir, to cover them with power while they recovered.

The Bastion’s watchmaster, hanging in his bronze cage in the centre of the watch-hall, was the constant attendant of the Bastion’s pulse. He made sure that the psychic flows never built up here, petered out there, or let a taint spread over there.
Astropaths need someone to coordinate things and keep it flowing smoothly (like a real choir, or an orchestra.) The detectors seem to be actually picking up Astropathic signals and transmitting them for some kind of translation. Given also mention of psychic music instruments translating the signals into music it seems likely.

Page 14-15
Qwahl tightens the skeins of the net, turns the cobweb filaments to something harder, and starts to reel in the message.
...

Angazi led the choir in a change of song, loosening the mesh of minds so that it was no longer a bullet, a psychic pile-driver pushing Qwahl onward. They wove a net, a cloak, surrounding him and warming him, helping to take the strain of the message that had just been sucked into his consciousness, lighting the way back down out of the warp into his body once again.
..
The message finally reeled in and contained, Qwahl releases his grip and lets his mind fly loose, and pull back.
..
He gropes blindly for his choir, for Angazi. Fleeing back towards his own body, he is dropping into the beautiful cold sanity of the materium.
..
The Astropath's mind slammed back into his body like a fist into an open palm.
..
Dernesk bent over him, shouting out phrases keyed to the deep hypnosis triggers that Qwahl had designed for himself. He tried to help the astropath force his mental defences down
on the burning and the strain.
- here again Astropathic message reception (And possibly some sendings) is likened to a form of astral projection/"out of body" experiencee type thing. Basically the astropath's spirit/soul has to leave its body to find/recover the message (and the method by which it is caught implies that unless the AStropath searches dilligently, throws his 'net' wide, and holds onto it with all his will, a message can get away')

Just to clarify, Dernesk is some sort of attendant fo the Astropath (Qwahl) - he monitors life signs (and can apparently tell when the message is recieved by monitoring the physical condition of the astropath), provides verbal and other sensory stimuli obviously designed to help the Astropath return to their body, etc.

Astrotelepathy also seems to involve shutting down the mental defences/barriers that shield an astorpath, so they need someone to use hypnotically implanted command words to restore them once the message is acquired.

Page 16
Once they had left the eyrie, it would take hours to get Qwahl’s mind relaxed to the point where
he’d be able to rest for his next trance.
...
Dernesk knew Qwahl, knew how the man thought and associated. He began to whisper trigger-phrases again, fragments of rhyme or scripture or song he knew Qwahl would respond to, his attention dancing between soothing the astropath’s mind and manipulating it, gratified when he heard the responding thought-motifs and speech patterns begin to shape Qwahl’s talk.
"hours" seems to be a standard down time between message receptions. This might give a lower limit "lag time" on sending messages - the need to compose, code and decode, as well as the need to let astropaths rest between sending or receiving signals (esp if you don't have extras) may limit ro slow down effective "signal speed"

PAge 16-17
The scrip recordings pouring away from the archive-servitor were being fed down the eyrie’s data-sluices, down into the keep, into the maws of the logic mills and data-looms of the tech-shrine where the fortress’s cogitators had once turned auspexes out into interstellar space and plotted trajectories and firing grids.

The thick braid of code lit up a bank of chattering cogitators under the watchful eyes of enginseers deputed to the Encryptors’ hall.

They spooled out under the machine-spirits' precise manipulation, inot shipping reports, tithing statistics, demographic data, financial movements, crimes and trials, baptisms, Administratum memoranda. REam after ream of numbers chronicled the pulse and governance of Gantia for the past month in minute detail. By the end of the month, the Encryptors would have broken down the data to be transmitted to the Administatum at Hydraphur, by bursts small enough to be taken in the astropath's stride. Some of the data would be transmitted on sublight data frequencies, or coded into data-arks. Some would be transcribed onto printouts and carried in-system by a dromon. To break that mass of data down into transmittable parts would take a week. To transport it from Gantia to Hydraphur on paper would have needed a library lugged in the belly of a transport cruiser.

Other data-skeins had detached from the mass and come in on their own, pulsing angrily with secure-keys and warning codes. Some were classified Administratum, some Arbites, and some Ministorum. The occasional low-level Battlefleet communique was hived off to the Navy offices. There was one strand of note: an Inquisition report bound up in venomous coils of encryption forged to trap and break any unschooled mind that tried to look too closely at them. It was pushed out of Qwahl’s mind first, to save his sanity, and carried to the Bastion’s autists with hushed respect. The Bastion communed with an Inquisitorial astropath at Hydraphur every twelve hours - now they would have something to give him, and good riddance to it.
the Astropath bastion was formerly a Naval defence facility, and it its mentioned that the fortress had held "cogitators that turned auspexes out into interstellar space and plotted trajectories and firing grids." - Computer assisted, if not controlled, gunnery.

in addition to astropaths seeming to take transmissions in massive "bursts" or packets rather than continuous feeds, Astropaths will receive the messages of multiple adeptus (Arbites, Ministorum, Administratum, etc.) in a single transmission (which probably explains why its so difficult to intercept, since in this case it takes a week to do all this.) The inquisition's messages are included too (though the encryptions used in them are considered to be dangerous enough to break the mind of anyone who peeks too much at them.) Decoding, sorting, and transmitting all this stuff through the system seems to be yet another time consuming activity that can delay message reception/or delivery

This is a pretty strong contrast with how astrotelepathy is handled in some other sources, like the rogue trader RPG and such - where you have astropathic signals transmitted from astropathic station to station until it gets where it needs to (because astropaths have only short ranges in isolation.) It isn't a contradiction per se, just different approaches with different advantages or drawbacks (the method in this novel may be faster, but it can't send messages very quickly due to astropath strain, and can require large numbers, and may put them under greater risk. Whilst the second method may be slower, but it is more reliable and versatile and requires fewer astropaths to transmit but more to pass along the message.)

Also note the regularity of astropathic communication with Inquisitorial forces.


Page 17
The hypnotic commands had begun the work of gathering up his energies, and his scorched mind was slowly collecting together again. Qwahl was largely beyond coherent thought and would be for hours...
Again, astropaths apparently have a "down time" here

Page 18-19
The wall that passed his fingertips was alive in his inner senses: he felt the swoops and angles of its carvings as if the air around him had nerves of its own.
Overlaid with the physical layer were the traces and trails of his brothers and sisters,
...
Those traces were always there, permeating every part of the Tower where the psykers went...
...
...he passed a scrap of memory left by Senior Astropath Sacredsteel, a brief sound of the old woman’s papery voice in his psyker’s non-ear, and a sharp stab of resentment left in the air.
...
Kappema felt Sacredsteel’s half-day-old outburst of cursing start to form on his own lips. Then he passed the place where the print was strongest, and a reflexive calming exercise helped the outburst slip out of his mind.

With that gone, Kappema was able to focus on a long stream of thought-trail that had the strange dancing cadence of Mehlio’s thoughts. Mehlio’s focus was good and her discipline strong, and it was unusual for her to leave such a profound sense of herself where she passed. There was apprehension here - Mehlio was unnerved by the envoy where Sacredsteel was angry - but there
were tints of disorientation and an almost excited anticipation.
Astropathic decor.. they're big on other senses (touch, especially) and they can pick up the empathic/emotional traces that other people have left behind (and divine info from it)

Page 20-21
Behind him, the soles of his boots padded and muffled so as not to distract the astropath, came his vitifer. His heavy helm and mesh visor hid the scars on his shaven head, mind conditioned out of everything but patience and watchfulness. He shuffled placidly, two paces behind Kappema, a short-barrelled hellpistol in his hand, ready on a moment’s warning to take the astropath’s life.
Vitifier guards, armed with hellpistols. I think they're almost like servitors, or at least heavily lobotomized or surgiclaly modified to resist warp and psychic attack.

Page 22
...it was still fitting that the high personnel of the fortress, its officers, commissars and preachers,
should have strategic high points.
The Bastion Psykana (astropath lair) still has its own complements, including priests and commissars. Naval crew perhaps?


Page 27
In the sub-equatorial deserts of Kleizen Onjere (Shira Calpurnia read from the data-slate), the planet’s millennia-old soil conditioning has decayed beyond the inhabitants’ ability to restore it.
Imperial terraforming, I guess. Arbites history.

Page 27-28
The Adeptus arbiters, whose polar training compounds and orbital docks make Kleizen Onjere a nexus point for fleet movements across three sectors, also keep watchtowers across the mesa chains.
...
If there was any question of those weights being equal, the dusty, gasping figure in front of its carriage would be marching into the maw of battle in a Penal Legion uniform, or lying in a red pool in front of an Arbites firing squad. No, the men in the desert were petty criminals.
Cheery. Also note the Arbites seem to watch either a naval (or arbites fleet) nexus for three sectors.

Also Arbites seem to hold criminals for penal legions (or distribute them.)

Page 31-32
"My duty and my orders, given to me in the name of the law by my Emperor-chosen superiors, were to preside and judge on the inheritance of an Imperial Charter."
..
"The hearing failed. I was overconfident and I was careless. I failed to plan and I failed to enforce. On Selena Secundus, the very Court of the Arbites broke in bloodshed and mutiny. It succeeded because of my failure. The Battlefleet Pacificus and the Adeptus Ministorum witnessed it, and the law was diminished before them, because of my failure. The Charter was lost and its Emperor chosen succession ended, because of my failure. Loyal and pious Arbites had their lives ended because of my failure."
..
"I declare myself weak in vigilance, weak in resolve and weak in sternness. That I was not vigilant against the treachery and mutiny of the heirs, blinded by the mask of mourning and duty that they wore, shows my weakness in vigilance. That I was dismayed by the disorder and violence that overcame the hearing, and judged rashly and hastily, not allowing the law to speak through me, shows my weakness of resolve. That the lawbreakers and mutineers were brought to heel and stamped out by the Navy, where the fist of the Arbites should have been seen by all to crush them, shows my weakness in sternness.’"
I really consider this to be pointless grimdark in the novel. Alot of the early part of the Calpurnia stiff is grimdark arbites crap that I thought of including but just decided to gloss over. Sufficed to say, as harsh as they are on other people, they are even harsher on themselves. That's consistent, I suppose, because this is how the Arbites are supposed to be (or at least, how some have depicted them.) but I feel it runs contrary to what has been established up to now (and kinda ruins it.)

I also cannot help but cynically feel as if Calpurnia were blamed just because she made tha Arbites look foolish, what with all the "we looked bad in front of the Navy and Ministorum" crap. which for me only heightens the absurdity of these parts of the novels stemming from the events in Legacy.

To his credit though, Farrer does build a rather credible story around the grimdark, and the story manages to recapture many elements of the first novel - it actually FEELS like a Calpurnia novel, and the Grimdark doesn't occupy the story too completely. And where it does intrude, it at least fits into Calpurnia's mindset. And despite the looming trial left unresolved (thus far), it also has a somewhat positive ending (by 40K standards.) I suppose it also follows Farrer's pattern of showing many facets and aspects of Imperial society not normally explored or defined (EG nonmilitary) - in the last book we saw Rogue Traders and Navigators, in the frist book we saw a Hive world, Navy and Ecclesiarchy as well as the ARbites. Here we have yet more arbites (the detective/investigative side) and are dealing with astropaths. Hardly anyone (up to Outcast Dead and the rogue trader RPG) dealt with Astorpaths in any detail.

Oh yes, and Dast, her chastener, is an exceptional dick. The Arbites preacher isn't too bad, though.

Page 38
"I should have integrated all the basic precepts into my case. The overall shape of my argument hasn’t changed much from my initial premises, but there are rulings and precedents from courts in this segmentum that I’ve had to familiarise myself with."
...
"My case will be a true witness against myself, presenting my failures as seen through the eyes of the law, so that both my strengths and weaknesses can be found wanting. The voice of accusation is the voice of the Emperor made concrete through law. It is not for me to "defend" anything."
Yeah that's right. Calpurnia is prosecuting herself. That takes some dedication and some brainwashing that does. It shows just how determined ARbites (and by extension, sisters of battle or Storm troopers) could be made to be.

it is also, in its way consistent with Calpurnia's character, so I can't fault the book for this.

Page 39-40
"If we’re being diverted from a course bound into the system then it means that we’re staying out on the fringes, and that means shipboard action or Navy installations."
..
"Are we on our way to a mutiny, a xenos quarantine..."
..
"Were being diverted into the path of the Witchroost, and we’ll dock with it when we rendezvous in three days’ time."
3 days to the Blind Tower.. not sure quite where they are, but the location can tell Calpurnia something about what the ARbites might be dealing with.

Page 42
He put a hand out to steady himself as the dromon adjusted its trajectory, and the internal gee took a moment to compensate.
Internal gravity takes time to adjust to accelerations.

Page 42
"The astropaths don’t have operational command of the docks, master chastener." Calpurnia corrected him. "The Navy supplies crews and junior officers to do that. The Telepathica officials may not even know about the order."
The Navy does control the docks, so that probably explains where the preachers and Commissiars come in.

Page 44
Belnove gripped a short-ranged shotcaster in one hand. It was a powerful weapon, monstrous at two metres and useless at ten. His face was slick with blood and sweat - he’d been creased by a Navy flechette at some point after they’d rushed the hangar locks.
Mention of someone injured by a "Navy Flechette". given later mention of flechette guns this might be a separete weapon or it may be the kind of ammo used in a naval shotgun. Then again a shotcaste rmight just be a pistol version of a shotgun, as the shotcannon is a scaled up one.



Page 45
He didn’t want to look at poor Ostelkoor, lying headless by Laddershaft Four, the victim of some horrible improvised explosive-thrower.
Mutineer weapon, presumably.

Page 45
He adjusted his grip on his long-barrelled slugpistol, listening to the soft whine fo the loading motor. As soon as the first head came over the top of the latter-shaft, the motor would spin the cylinders fast enough to put eight hollowpoints through it in less than a second.
The shotcaster again. Apparently a revolver with an automated cylinder for automatic fire.

Page 46
Roos worked the speed-loader and flicked the cylinder motor down to two-shot as three more men came up through the holes at him.
...
Roos staggered, bounced off a bulkhead and managed a second two-shot through his enemy’s thigh, pitching the man over as the shattered limb gave way.
- the aforementioned, motorized stub-pistol apparently has multi-shot settings, as it is mentioend to be set to "two shot" here.


Page 47
Belnove jammed another cartridge into his shotcaster and spared a glance for the brawl around the bottom of the stairs.

Someone was throttling the young officer on the steps, while a free-for-all surged around them, fists, bludgeons and blades, and from somewhere in the mess, the dry chatter of a flechette gun.
- mention here of a "flechette gun" - apparently naval crews do use those, although it could be just a shotgun with specialist ammo.

Page 48
The big man - an arbitor, Roos registered fuzzily, in chastener’s black and brown - fired his shotgun from the hip, catapulting a cleaver-armed docker off his feet and down a laddershaft.
Self explanatory.

Page 49
That was as far as he got before the upward stroke of a high-charge power-maul blew the shotcaster out of his hands and sent it pinwheeling into the ceiling. Belnove howled and dropped to his knees, looking at the cooked flesh of his stricken hands, and while the enormity of it was still making its way up his nerves, the maul was in motion again. A low shot, and a man tumbled, his
knee exploded and unable to hold him. Another shot, and someone made an agonised noise that wasn’t quite a scream, because the shock to his sternum had stolen his breath.
Calpurnia and her Maul of Justice strike again! Hand cooked and an exploded knee and stunned sternum muscles.

Page 51
There was a moment’s silence. Then the sound of a shotgun being cocked as the chastener loaded an Executioner shell.
Presumably the shell with the insane momentum behind it was an executioner shell.

Page 52
They rode away from the docks on a glide-truck, a long electric corridor-crawler of a kind that Calpurnia had seen in fortresses and space stations across the galaxy. It was little more than two running boards down either side of a long central rail, the whole thing tipped with a sharp-nosed driver’s compartment, and rolling forward on thrumming electric wheels.
Movement system inside the Blind Tower.

Page 53
"These chambers used to accommodate the Battlefleet Commissariat,"
Mention of sector level commissariat for the Navy. Like all organizations in the Imperium it organizes itself along the different 'levels' (system-subsector-sector-segmentum-etc.)
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Re: Shira Calpurnia novel series analysis thread

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second part of Blind, and last for now for Calpurnia.


Page 54
They stood in silence, listening to the buzz of the vigil-auspex built into the gates as it read their skin-scent and eye-patterns.

It was some time before the auspex was satisfied, but finally the buzzing ratcheted to a halt, and somewhere, the machine-spirit behind the auspex stirred itself to turn the lock for them.
Arbites security systems.

Page 55
A long scriptor-tapestry hung on the opposite wall, and that was far more used. The thick woven fabric hung heavy with circuitry, and the touch-reactive surface was alive with images and letters. Some were obviously uploaded from the data-arks that hung from the tasselled docks along the tapestry’s edges, while others were added by touch-stylus in two or three different hands.
Calpurnia saw pict-images in that display, and data-runes that would play snatches of vox-recordings captured from spy-circuits.
An interesting bit of spy technology that the detective-arbites chick uses for her job. Both sophisticated yet archaic looking.

Page 56
...Aedile Majore Joeg Bruinann and Master Detective-Espionist Lazka Rede, in her plain arbitrator uniform and the slender red collar that marked her true rank. Rede was the ranking arbitor
aboard the Bastion Psykana. Bruinann, her figurehead, soaked up any outside attention, while Rede presided over her spy-flies, communications taps, webs of informants, and her hypno-conditioned deep agents. It was a common enough arrangement anywhere that the detectives needed a major presence, but Calpurnia was curious to find it aboard the Bastion.
..and apparently effective at even fooling pskyers, given the location they are running this espionage racket. The role seems to combine both the police detecitve roles as well as that of spymaster and espionage.. basically an intel division of the arbites.


Page 59
They looked into flickering data-slate displays, and pored over output from Rede’s menagerie of pict-thieves and eavescopes.
Spyware employed by the Detective-espionist.

Page 60
All anyone knew for certain was that he had passed into the astropath cloisters - the next sign of him was when the scrying arrays in the watch-hall had picked up a mental cry, alarm, anger or fear.
"scrying arrays"

Page 61
"These are people," said Calpurnia, "whose vision, by the Emperor’s grace, can look through stone and steel, and tracts of space whose distances we have trouble even understanding. Not one of them thought to direct their attention to where these damn ripples were coming from? Nobody was watching what went on in there?"
Calpurnia's comment seems to allude to some long distance clairvoyance/clairaudience type of scrying I suppose, which can scan space from vast distances away (effectively FTL detection, as hinted in other sources.)



Page 61
"The old fortress walls have been lined with a psyk-cage that’s melded into the wards and earths that ran through the whole fortress. They’re specifically made to contain psyker emanations. They carry them off, fuzz them, and dilute them so that they’re not a threat. My understanding is that they’re like cooling fins on a hot machine, or earths to carry away electrical power. Get waves of power coming out of their heads and sloshing back and forth in the tower, it gets. overpowering, volatile. They lose control. I’ve got records from places like this where they lost control. They can unbalance each other, cook one another off like bullets in a fire, or leave themselves open to,
well, to...."
"..things not spoken of lightly," said Calpurnia.
- matieral known as "Psyk-cage" which is designed to act as a sort of "cooling fin" or "earthing rod" against psychic energies.

Also the arbites seem to know about the true nature of Chaos, but not to speak of it openly.

Page 63
Orovene carried a little reliquary box in cupped hands, a cloisonne cylinder holding scraps of a scroll of decree personally scribed by Grand Provost Marshal Lunkati. Dast had insisted that Orovene bring it from the precinct’s chapel, and had been careful to stay
within a half-dozen paces of it.
The arbites seem to have their own preachers, or at least their own version of the Imperial Cult, and their own saints/heroes/artifacts. Orovene is a Garrison preacher, but also seems to serve in a battle capacity. This represents perhaps a variation on the Imperial cult, although whether it is more orthodox (approved by the Ecclesiarchy) or has its own special (disapproved of) flavour (like the Marines or AdMech) we don't know. We do know (at least) that the Arbites consider the Emperor divine, so that would lean more towards orthodoxy.

Page 66
These were junior, less puissant than the man they had passed earlier, with a retinue to
himself. They were choristers, not full astropaths. Their green robes were little more than tunics, and their surgery had been brisk and savage, heads cocooned in containment circuitry like bronzed birdcages, held fast by armatures screwed directly into their skulls. They shuffled along, each with a hand on the shoulder of the one in front, the leader holding a rope that an attendant trailed
behind him.
"apprentice" astropaths, in other words, but still used to help in communications. That probably means that any numbers for astropaths are a lower limit, because they only refer to the offiical astropaths and probably not the junior/novice/apprentice ones, since they are still learning how to do all that fancy stuff.

Likewise, I doubt it includes the "burnt out" ones or the servitorized ones (hinted at later), which seem to have only limited utility.

Page 67
"Witchcullises," Brainann told her,
...
"Part of the defences for when one of them loses control. The cullises stop them from roaming and hurting too many other people by unbalancing one another. They also cage them if something. taints them."
..
"Cage doors, as I say, wards and protections that turn psykcraft back on itself. The same as what lines the walls under that ’crete. Magos Channery and her priests do the forging."
Anti-psyker defences.

Page 70-71
"Prayer-papers? Is that what these are?"
...

"It’s a form of meditation for the astropaths who still have enough function left to perform it. They use dense inks that make it easier for a psyker to perceive the words and track them with their minds. It is very slow work, very precise and hard to do without their eyes to guide them. It
focuses them, and calms them down when they need it."
An astropathic hobby, I suppose.

Page 72
The outer defence was a witchcullis like the ones they had already seen, its spikes hung with prayer slips and ceremonial charms.

Inside that was the auspex arch, the walls carved into gargoyle faces with sniffers and sensors for eyes. The nozzles of flechettespitters and acid-misters jutted from mouths, and were clutched in sculpted claws.
More security/defenses, especially against psykers gone crazy.

Page 72
The final door was a great armoured shutter on its oiled and noiseless slide and hinge. It was an oval slab of adamant, thicker than a hand could span, its surface worked with blessings and wards, crystalline psyk-earths, silver eagle inscribed with holy texts, mag-locks and sliding bolts.
..

"It locks physically, with those bolts, as well as magnetically. The Mechanicus has built an engine into the locking mechanism whose spirit can animate a stasis field: the bolt can’t move until the correct codes allow the engine to rest. The moving parts are worked with the same witch-wards as the rest of the door and the cullises. The patterns are machined so that when they turn to the locked position, their wards mesh with those of the door and compound the strength of the defences."
A rather sophisticated security/locking mechanism. Not only is the door about 10-15 cm thick (depending on "span" or hand size - I used my own of course) and has a bunch of anti-psyker wards, but it also has magnetic and physical locking bolts with a bult in stasis field.. and the locking bits synchronize (By design) with tthe other wards.

Page 72-73
"Something you can put your faith in." said Orovene. He caught Bruinann’s look. "I’m not making fun, aedile. ’The works of the Machine come to us by Imperial grace, exactly the way my own sacraments do. The engine-spirit obeys His rule just as the human one does. The Emperor protects."
Whatever Orovene's creed teaches, it's a hell of alot more flexible than typical Ministorum thought.

Page 73-74
...the powerful closing mechanism that could slam this giant slab shut in moments.
...
The door had taken less than four seconds to close, start to finish.
Closing time of the door.

Page 74
"The witchcullises drop in about half the time it takes for that door to close..."
2 seconds, in other words.


Page 83
"He turned on a lumen, sir. To show his way, I think."

"Thought so," said del’Kateer. "I tasted a change in the air. There’s a feel to light, when you know the trick of looking for it."

Acquerin wondered if that last had been for his benefit, if his surprise at the blind astropath noticing the light had been that obvious.
The two astropaths were turning towards him as the thought crossed his mind, and the identical small smiles that flickered across their faces showed that he’d allowed the thought to radiate.
An interesting aspec to f psyker abilities - they can psychically "feel" light. That ranks right up there with "reading" words by feeling/sensing the ink.

Page 85
"Otranto’s body is barely cool and his echoes have barely died away. Whatever’s left of him is still flying home to the fire." The twitch of Brom’s finger looked like a random gesture to Acquerin,
walking behind him. Del’Kateer, with senses the young attendant did not possess, knew his friend was pointing Earthward, into the light of the Astronomican.
Astropaths can detect the Astronomican, and apparently on death, are recalled/returned to it. Or, perhaps more accurately, returned ot the Emperor. Such is the belief anyhow, and in 40K that can be quite true.


Page 86-87
The Firewatch Eyrie was so-called because it was most commonly used to speak with the astropathic stations lying towards the Segmentum Solar. It needed its astropath’s attention to be turned in the direction of Holy Earth and the great god-furnace of the Astronomican. The Green Eyrie, sitting closer in towards the keep, was so-called because for a long time it had been devoted
purely to Naval transmissions...
...
The raw young or the exhausted old, on the other hand, went to the Eyrie of Echoes for their work. Its column stood rooted in old ordnance workshops that had been refitted to hold the extra-large choirs that a less confident mind, or one with a punishing transmission to endure, needed to give it strength.

The Lantern Eyrie, far out by the secondary docks, had some of the best-forged mechanisms, and was the best for freeing its occupant’s mind from any static or mental wash from other transmissions.
That was the place for astropaths standing the Silent Watch, a constant, open listening for transmissions, unscheduled distress calls or warnings, or the trauma of an overloading connection by another astropath.

Then there was the Eyrie of Bones. At the same time that the Green Eyrie had drifted from Navy use to become a workplace for all the Bastion’s astropaths, the Eyrie of Bones had begun to fall from favour as a personal eyrie for the Master of the Tower. The Astra Telepathica law that the Master of a place like this had always to be a fully capable astropath in his own right, and to perform his duty regularly, was a given, always.
The various "Eyries" or listening/receiving stations for AStropaths, and their various roles/features.

Also there is a certain measure of advanement and power even for Astropaths in the Imperium, due to their abilities (someone has to speak for and coordinate them, and who better than one of their own?)

Page 88
He had come out of the Soul Binding, carrying that white fire deep in him, his vision scorched black, but his mind still clear, and his memory too, by the Emperor’s grace. Grace it was, and grace with a purpose. So many astropaths had their memories, even their higher cognition, burned away by the trauma of the Binding, but if the Emperor had left Thujik with his skills, wasn’t that a sign?
Soul Binding described. apparently not only will it burn out sight and possibly other senses and scramble your mind, but it can burn out memories as well.

Page 88-89
The astropathic message with Santo Pevrelyi was expected some time in the next two hundred and fifteen hours.
...
Somewhere below, the Encryptors would be in the last stages of coding and weaving the data to go out to Santo Pevrelyi. They would be encoding it for him to transmit. Then out across space to the waiting minds, in their mountain fort on Pevrelyi’s highlands.
A hint of the time and variatin of astropathic messages... although we don't know how long it takes exactly and how far it travels.

Page 89
It was an old back vent raking downwards from what had once been gun batteries around the
middle tiers of the keep. They had once sucked away exhaust gases from the gun decks and the ordnance launching cradles.
The exhaust could be anything, but I'll fully admit the first thing that popped into my mind was some sort of propellant (that could be from rockets or missiles though, of course.)

Page 89
For over three hours, she’d struggled to reel in a maddeningly faint message from the Telepathica matrices at Caruana. She’d strained to snatch compacted notes of thought in her mental fingers and swallow them into her brain. She pushed them firmly enough down into her mind so
that she could be sure they wouldn’t dissipate like smoke when the trance finished
...
She had imprisoned the melody firmly, and let it out again as words and codes into the ears of the transcriptors and vox-captures as her mind settled back down into the eyrie walls and the bone vault of her skull.
3 hours spent trying to snatch/read a message over unknown distance, which hints at the ambiguity of messages sent via astrotelepathy. This puts a different spin on message sending (or perhaps just a different kind) as she seems to be trying to 'read" the distant message through interference of the warp (implying its more or less realtime, but may not be easily read) and perhaps trying to memorize or burn the memories into her head (through her training perhaps, which accounts for the strain/pressure on her mind.) rather than a phyiscla signal/transmission being esent through space. It would be like being up in a crow's nest trying to read signal flags or distant signs or light flashes or some other signalling device.

It could be that all the variation (or contradiction, take your pick) is because Astropaths interpret the warp and their powers differently the same way Navigators do. This "subjectivity" could influence their powers in terms of how it can be used and what sorts of abilities it gives.

3 hours in 10 LY could be tens of thousands of c, and 1000+ LY would be millions of c (10K LY tens of millions of c)

Page 90
...(the sensation had gradually died out of her upper body ever since her Soul Binding: her head and shoulders were almost totally numb, but her feet felt the cool water perfectly well). She was dimly aware of the perfumed smokes and steams she was passing through as she
walked, but to sharpen her perception of them she would have had to augment her failing sense of smell with psychic perceptions.
Soul binding again and its aftereffects. PSychic senses can imitate or substitute for other senses than just sight.

Page 90
On one path-bank, shoes rattling in the pebbles, her attendant walked, with the boxy mechanical vox-ear that Channery had consecrated for her. It sucked in the sounds around them and transmitted them to the aug-metics that hung from Sacredsteel’s ears like vines. They fed the sounds to her atrophying aural nerves.
40K hearing aids.

Page 92
She pushed her psyk-sense out to perceive the woman bowing and loping off down the garden.
Psyk-sense in use.

Page 99
They turned and made their way through the narrow tunnel through the buttress, under the metal
stripe in the ceiling that was the lower edge of a seven-tonne shutter-door.
shutter door weighs seven tonnes. assuming 2 m tall, 1 m wide, and 10 cm thick would imply something on the order of 35,000 kg*m^3 density 15 cm thick would be 23000 kg*m^3 density. Either way it seems pretty dense.

Page 99
They were coming into the techmens’ quarters, where the lay artisans lived who performed whatever tasks the Mechanicus priests saw fit to delegate outside their own orders. Their workshops surrounded Channery’s sealed Enginarium.
Tech/lay aritsans do the shit the AdMech dont want to do, and the facility has its own workshops.

Page 105
It was odd to see stretcher-beds arrayed along walkways or conveyor racks that had once hefted
giant shells for the weapon batteries or flak canisters for the point-defence turrets.
They used conveyor racks to haul shells for the anti ship weapons or the flak fo rpoint defense guns.. either assisting the living crews in loading, or is a form of automated loading.

Page 105
They watched Astropath Ankyne, groaning and lurching, come out of the Green Eyrie, after she had
sent a tentative connection southward towards Gathalamor, and had been hit hard by an unexpectedly tough, warp turbulence coming the other way. They saw three members of a choir being rushed into one of the apothecaria, after a momentary spike in an energy flow caused a witchcullis to slam down on them.
...
Their minds walked nearly every day in an otherworldly hell storm whose nature Calpurnia barely pretended to understand.
Going by 5th edition map I'd guess Hydraphur to Gathalamor would be 10-15 thousand LY. Context wise we're talking sending/receiving messages within a day, and more likely a matter of hours. 500,000-600,000c at the VERY least, and millions to tens of millions of c more likely as the minimum.


Page 106
She might as well scatter a clip of shock-grenades among the enginseers who tended the caged sun at the Bastion’s core.
Bastion runs on either a fusion or plasma reactor. Also shock grenades again, they seem an arbites thing.,

Page 109
"The wound in the corpse is that of a blade, a deep and narrow stabbing." said Rede. "We read from that and the bloodstain that the weapon came up at an angle, too steep for a projectile unless the killer lay on the floor at his feet. No scorching or blast residue on Otranto’s clothes, no projectile in the wound, no scent of gun smoke or las-burn - the sniffers in the air vents system would have
picked that up."

"There are assassin weapons that can strike just that way," said Dast.

"True," Rede answered, "But I have eighty-seven informants under my thumb on this station, and spy craft besides, and I don’t believe that any such weapon could have been fired in here...."
...
Rede knew her ring of spies and informants through the Tower was sub-par for what a detective-espionist of her rank could be expected to muster...
discussion of wound characteristcs.. note the "las burn" - Calpurnia novels treat them as heat rays. Also indications about the scope of the spy ring a Detective type should amass.

Page 110
"Will it notice that someone in the room has a nurture-mask, or a rebreather mouthpiece?" demanded Dast. "There are records of assassins entering trances until they wake themselves up and start their work. How many of this station’s people - the subjects of your precinct, Bruinann - have been trained by our own holy Adeptus in how to control their bodies and minds?"
"nurtuer mask" some sort of breathing apparatus I guess. Also Assassins in a trance (buried memories I'd guess, or just remaining unaware)


Page 118
"Ehlin has asked for Astropaths Slocha and Weth to support him," the woman went on, "but Astropath Golan has come out of the Firewatch Eyrie, and from his reports Ehlin will need a full choir behind him to push through as far as Xu. Cantor Angazi is assembling choirs on the third and fourth seclusion decks. Two small choirs will be in communion with the relay at Bescalion, and
will shift their attention to Hydraphur proper at the turn of the hour. Astropath Pharnele will spend the second hour in the Eyrie of Echoes to be ready for ciphers coming in from the Obscuras border."
They mention at least six more astropaths, including the ones we've met already. Which brings it up to around ten or so, at least in this place. Probably doesnt include the supporting choirs. Not much useful for calcing, since we dont know where in Obscurus they receive transmissions from, and Hydraphur is right on the Obscurus border.


Page 122-123
"From here, mamzel, I watch us: the astropaths and the Bastion. My role is patterns and balances. The watchmaster must make sure that the symmetries that build up in the Tower are rare, and controlled, and coaxed away from the destructive. It is subtle work."
..

"You’re familiar with the work of the senior enginseers of the Priesthood of Mars? The ones who tend the plasma furnaces that warm ships and stations like this one?"
"I know a little."

"My understanding has always been that the balance of forces inside those plasma cages is a delicate thing. There is both a craft and an art to running it smoothly."
The guy who manages all the astropaths in the Bastion.. the watchmaster, and his parallels to guys tending a reactor (plasma reactors.) Apparently they are as delicate as other reactors.


Page 125
"The watchmaster directs the movements of psykers, and their placement in the eyries and the choir halls."
..

"He senses the astropaths’ minds and moods. He warns where concordiasts may be needed to soothe, and where the physical proximity of too many astropaths needs to be regulated or broken
up. He senses where the distribution of psyker-minds through the Tower is inadvertently forming a pattern that will build reverberations, distil destructive humours into minds, or attract. attention. Astropaths must concentrate on controlling their own minds, keeping their footing on the raft, if you like. Their attention is directed inwards. The watchmaster looks the opposite way."
Elaboration on the Watch master's abilities again.

Page 126-127
Most of his physical senses had been deadened many years ago, driven out of his nerve-endings by the great white fire. However, his psychic touch was subtle enough to pick up a hint of scent from the collar of Ylante’s gown, the gleam of Calpurnia’s carapace, the texture of her hair, and a faint
tracery of ghost-pain from her forehead, arm and hip that was so old that she probably didn’t even feel it any more.
Psyk senses again - detecting taste, sight, touch, and empathic senses.

Page 128
Chevenne had taken for granted that Calpurnia was here to seize the Bastion and rale it until the crisis was over - everyone knew that was part of the remit of the Arbites. Telepathica dictates about the Mastership going to an astropath be damned - the Lex Imperia could trump that, and Chevenne’s masters could say nothing on the subject. He’d heard the stories of Arbites blowing open ancient Adeptus positions when the law told them that those positions had been incompetently filled.
Arbites authority, and its apparent ability to trump everyone (except an Inquisitor, no doubt.)

Page 129
Not many officers of Kyto’s rank had the clout to requisition a servitor-adjutant, so it was a useful reminder to anyone who saw them out in public.
an aware person is a "servitor adjutant".

Page 134
"He was killed in a station full of seers and psykers who can listen to a pot boil half a sector away, but who haven't one word to say about the killing of one of their own-"


Calpurnia again suggests that Astropaths have some FTL detection that can scry many tens or hundreds of LY away.

Page 135
"If you arrested an astropath and dragged him right off the station, maybe. Even the incarceries in the Kuiper belts might be too close. One of the inner stations, or Galata, might work. Even Hydraphur, they say the Inquisition has a place there where." He grunted and peered at a telltale. "The details don’t matter. Do it far away from here, is all. No matter how sealed you think you are, something will leak out, like a match into a promethium refinery."
Dangers of interrogating psyskers and the difficulties of shielding those signals.

Page 136-137
"A psyker creates a haze around himself. The stronger ones can keep it inside their heads, or hearts or wherever the hell it is that the witch gift touches them, but it’s always there. Like sweat, or body heat. An individual, a few of them together, you won’t notice much, especially if they’re properly controlled and damped. I’ve been to our own astropaths’ tower in the Wall back on Hydraphur, which I don’t know if either of you have. no?" Calpurnia and Orovene shook their heads, "You’ll barely feel anything there, anyhow. Here, we’re well over the critical mass. Even with the rebuilding and the wards, and the watchmasters making sure they don’t collect too heavily or move the wrong ways, that spirit-haze drenches everything. I won’t try to explain it except in terms of the effects I can see and understand as a medicae, but there’s a. a volatility you get in that haze."
...
"Most of us on the station are on a knife-edge because of it, even non-psykers. It’s like an ague, or pollution-sickness. A good hard shock like a psyker being tortured is going to touch off something you really don’t want."
..
"The nightmares you might have had when you last embarked on a warp voyage might have frightened you, but they’re a shadow of what a psychic shock will do in a place like this. The arbitor general was right to pick up on my talking about matches. Why do you think that the astropaths take every step at gunpoint? Even the strongest of them can succumb if they let down their guard, or if they’re caught by something out there that’s stronger than they are. The vitifers are there to put an end to any whose energy gets out of control, before half the witches aboard the Tower go off like bombs, or before something.." he took a breath, "something goes bad inside them. The smaller enclaves don’t need vitifers, but a station this size, funnelling this much power? There are people in the eyries, every moment of every day, arbitor, the power might die down but it never stops."
Side effects of large qantities of psyker activity, such as on astropathic towers. This may explain why they tend to be high up on planets, in orbits, or far away from inhabited places. Nevrmind all the other security measures they talk about. It also explains the security precautions and the need for watchmasters. Astrotelepathy is complex business, at least in any regulated, clockwork manner. (Contrast with Codiciers and other powerful Librarians)

Page 138
"I mean it’s against all the laws of the Astropathica to speak with one, or hinder them. I suggest you bear that powerfully in mind, mamzel, if you find yourself in command and needing to make decisions over the Adeptus Astra Telepathica authorities on board."
Makes sense, considering their key job is to execute any Astropath who suffers adverse reactions from the warp, or may be possessed. Even the theoretically unlimited remi t of an Inquisitor or Arbites shouldn't be allowed to endanger people that blatantly.

Page 147
"There’s also one remote drone with one of the lay arbitor-techmen from our shrine. Here, eat." She put a platter of oily breadballs and heavy grey nutriate strips on the table between them.
...
"This drone, it’s come to us from the Mechanicus? How long has it been since its spirit was in service to them, not us?"
..
"but I think it can be trusted. I was at the ceremony when the Tech-priests forswore the thing over to the Arbites."
- the Arbites received a spying drone from the AdMech. Calpurnia wonders at its loyalty, and the Detective mentions that she was at the ceremony which the AdMech foreswore it over to the Arbites. Of course, only the AdMech knows just how such thiungs work, and the AdMech could still (and probably do) Have the thing record and report data to them.

The drone also has an operator, which may hint it is remote controlled rather than autonomous.

Page 148
"So, the concordiasts," said the detective, "attendants, keepers, interpreters. Their job is to know the astropaths well enough to be able to calm them down after their trances, interpret the messages, and talk them back into their own bodies after they’ve been,
you know, out there."
Explanation of astropath attendants. Note the emphasis on interpretation of messages.. given the problems humans can impose on interpretations that can lead to.. interesting problems.

Page 148
"The astropaths’ metabolisms are so unhinged by what happens to them that as far as I can work out, they’re effectively sexless."
In other words Astropaths rarely have sex. Or at least the good/skilled ones don't.

Page 150
..influence peddling from an Adeptus office was a crime on multiple levels, and allowing it at all
was something that Rede would have to answer for. There was such a thing as taking pragmatism too far.
And yet, politics still happens, which includes influence peddling. Such is the Imperium. I guess it is only okay when you're of higher authority than the person accusing you of it.

Page 152
"Can Lagny keep the drone on him?"
"How hidden do you want it to be?" Rede asked by way of a reply. "It’s the size of my fist. It can stay up on the ceilings and not be too obvious in the low light, but the faster it has to move to find him the worse it’ll fare."
Stealth capabilities of the drone.

Page 156
"Torma Ylante! We're here to keep you safe!" shouted Hasta Rhiil, and then immediately danced three steps sideways, scanning the hangar through the tiny dark-light monocular that Rede had issued to her. A long-barreled silenced dartcaster jutted from each sleeve, the spots of light from the black-laser targeters skittering back and forth over the bay, visible only to her.
Also mentions the monocular feeding Rhiil a "lilac-tinted image." - this is one of Rede's arbites agents I believe. note the "black laser" targetres.

Page 157
She ran a few silent paces forwards, but the second assassin had been ready for her and the las-shot exploded in Rhiil’s shoulder, spun her around in mid-stride and mid-air, and dumped her hard on the metal deck as her vision went from purple-shaded dark to utter black.

Ylante heard the crack of the las-round’s superheated trail and then the ugly sound of a human body falling.
Las shot explodes against shoulder, knocks over. But doenst blow shoulder/arm apart.

Page 159
Oraxi and his five arbitrators prowled forwards in three pairs, beams from their shoulder-lumens criss-crossing. The lead arbitor in each pair was ready to volley scattershot, and the man behind him had a body-seeking Executioner round loaded.
Bastion Psykana detachment of Arbites. Body seeking executioner round suggests it is perhaps heat seaking, or that it homes in on bio-signs (specific biosigns? unknown)

Page 160
The screams of the guided shells passing over her were gone almost before she heard them, but Ylante would remember the sound of them thudding into the meat of the dead kidnapper’s carcass, for the rest of her life.

The corpse stopped the shells.
Corpse stops executioner shells. apparently they don't overpenetrate targets.

Page 165
When they were in the dark, their bodies had been the soft black of the shadows. When the lights began to come up, their forms had started to ripple with the same grey as the half-light around them, and now.

They skirted a lifter pillar, and the yellow and black livery of the engine flickered briefly across their bodies. They passed the pulpit, and yanked her over a bundle of power conduits that swarmed up a buttress towards the ceiling. Traces of the conduits’ red coating flamed around their feet and shins for a moment before it passed away. Now that they were getting close to the Road, its fat support arches processing away before them, their bodies were picking up the yellowish cast of the Road’s lamplight.

Ylante had heard ships’ tales of xenos who cloaked themselves in mirror-shard colours and vanished into the air of the strange worlds they called home, but the fragments of those stories didn’t stay in her head for long; not when she looked at the faceplates the figures wore, and saw the chameleon colours fading around them. She had seen that design before, in her old days in the Hydraphur system. She did not think any xenos would ever wear one.
- soldiers (rather Inquisitorial agents here) are mentioned to be wearing some sorrt of shape-light-shifting camoflage stuff. Linkened to Eldar holo-fields ("Xenos who cloak themselves in mirror-shard colorus") as well as being "chameloeon" like. Something more sophsticated than cameleoline, then.

Page 166
Her forehead met his, but his was shielded by the dull ceramite of his faceplate.
...
"..as long as you full-mask your vox and switch to your silent channel before you utter another
misbegotten word."
Also they apparently are vox-masking their voices, which is what the vox mask is I bet. Also ceramite faceplates.. which I presume are at least partly trnasparent.

Page 171
..she took the first las-shot on her shield.
- again Arbites riot shields prove highly reisstant to las-fire.

Page 171
It was a pellet-bomb, not enough to knock her flat, but the concussion was out of all proportion to the bomb’s tiny size, and the shock left her off-balance.
Pellet bomb, sme sort of concussion weapon.

Page 172
Three Executioner shells chased it as it dived, but their trajectories swayed in the
air, their target-sense blunted. They punched the hangar wall instead, and the snaking blur disappeared in among the mechanisms.
Executioner shells can be spoofed.

Page 181
"There is a difference between a seal and a rosette. A rosette can be carried by Inquisitorial agents as a badge of authority from their master, but you'll never see a seal on any finger but an Inqusitor's."
Differences between Inquisitiorial seals and rosettes, at least in theory. Misinteprretation/mislabelling still happens, I suspect.

Page 185
"Rybicker was going off in the senses of a lot of the astropaths, it seems, but the only psyk-scryers that would have seen him were over on that side of the keep."
..

"Why were the psyker-scryes in the cloisters unsuccessful in reading Otranto’s death exactly?"
"The way that the wards and sinks blurred the traces, they drain away the prints that the witches leave, and - Ah."
"psyk-scryers" seem to be a specialized sort of astropath, for detection "reading" purposes - the psychic sensors Calpurnia alluded to I'd gather.

Page 188
"I said that hot-burning rockets of officers weren’t hard to come by in Hydraphur." Renz said, defeated. "I said that the Daradny academies churn them out by the thousands every generation."
"thousands" of naval officers created every generation (20-25 years) Meaning hundreds each year. This doesnt mean they all go to ships (or are commanding officers) - there are always fixed installations/stations, various outposts, and system defense/substellar ships ot man.

Page 191
Like Thujik and Otranto, and a handful of others among the thousands of astropaths who lived and died around them, the work had cured him like leather, and tempered him like metal.


- its mentioend here that "thousands" of astropaths live in the Bastion of Hydraphur. That clarifies my earlier assessments. I imagine this is of varying qualities of AStropaths though.

Assuming that the numbers were accurate to within an order of magnitude (hundreds or thousands) per world, we're talking maybe hundreds of millions or billions of astropaths at a minimum.

Page 194
The Scriptorium had once been a hangar for the Fury interceptors housed in the station. The fighters had roosted on adamantium shelves around the walls, lifted to the launch bay by crane. Now, those shelves, each the width of an Arbites drill-square, were crowded with narrow lectern-desks.
Fury interceptor bay. Assuming that a "drill square" is at least 100x100 man strnegth it suggests a fighter might be 50-100 metres long.

Page 194-195
An autist-scriptor was bent over each, the overhead lights glinting off their shaved scalps and
optical augmetics. Data-sluices hung in clusters and tangles from the ceiling, and trailed out to each lectern, spewing readout onto green-glowing screens, or up cables and straight into the autist’s brain.

This was the antithesis of the hushed, solitary work of the astropaths. Every deck bustied as scribes frantically fielded the information pouring down the sluices. The information chattered into transcription slates or ribbons of printout..
...
Some data came from attendants in the eyries, frantically scrawling on slate-screens or tapping keys. All astropaths transmitted and received messages differently. For many, the information came across as symbols, images, sensations - while others would relay strings of words or numbers. It was meaningless to them, but recorded by the nimble pen-fingers of an archive servitor and fed into a cogitator, real information would emerge.

The most demanding and dangerous transmissions came through the Encryptors’ Chamber, vital messages wrenched out of the immaterium by the most skilled and powerful astropaths working in choir, carried down through minds groaning with the strain.
The dudes who receieve, decode, analyze, and relay the data.. the oenes who process it and stuff.

Page 207
...through the sluices, pouring data changed from warppatterns to electron-patterns...
Transformation of astropathic messages into something more conventional.

Page 212
A warden dodged around the vitifer, who had his pistol levelled at Chevenne’s head, leaned in and clicked a wand home into one of the watchmaster’s skull-plugs. The twisting patterns up the wand’s length began to glow as it drained off the saturating warp-energy whirling around Chevenne’s brain, and after a moment, the palpable haze around the watchmaster began to dissipate.
Warp-earthing practices of the warders.

Page 212
He flicked his hand out and let his net uncurl in mid-air. It was memory-wire, coded to its shape at molecular level and imbued with nano-particles of psyk-resonant crystals. As it snapped into position, the particles assumed their proper symmetries.
some interesting sort of memory wire net with magic crystal stuff. That's some pretty fancy engineering right there.

Page 212
the wardens were near identical under their dark coats and armour. Their visors, like the vitifers’, were made of layers of filigree, breathtakingly fine, that made up hexagrammic symmetries in three dimensions.
Warders, another group like the Vitifers who serve a vital role in the Bastion. And likewise they are warded thoroughly.

Page 216
"Choristers are the small cogs.... ...On their own, their powers are limited. It’s en masse
with their song poured into another psyker’s trance that they’re powerful."
...

"Too weak, or too exhausted, or their mind or sanity has been too damaged by their Binding. An astropath’s spirit has felt the tread of the Emperor, ma’am, and the Emperor does not tread lightly."

Choristers are basically second tier astropaths, the assistants and support for the major ones. So probably those "thousands" may mentioned before are lesser tier astropaths (the assistants) rather than all full-fledged ones, or they may refer to acutal telepaths and the choristors (and the burnt out ones) are a separate issue. They may include the novices though.

Either way, even the ones who burn out from the binding or go cray or burn out through their duties still can be useful.

Page 216
"So if there’s a bond between their bodies and minds." Calpurnia began, frowning.

"So there is," said Ylante, "but not an equal one. Their bodies can become an afterthought to their minds. The old ones can be almost hollowed out by it. They need powerful wills and containing, and constant attention from their concordiast, to stay anchored in their bodies at all."
"The older they are the worse it gets?"

"Once in the Adeptus, yes, but also the young ones whose gifts have started to eat into them before they can be trained to contain it."
An interesting side effect of the Astropathic gift, which has the side effect of the stigmata effect mentioned later. In short belief in 40K can manifest tangible, physical effects which is a key aspect to this book.

Page 218
"Seance images are rarely like your detectives’ pict-captures. You can’t make a clear portrait out of them. If you know in advance the man or woman you’re scrying, you can bring them into focus, because your own knowledge of them, your memories of them, provides a kind of lens."
..
"Vedrier once described a seer becoming a still pool: something attuned
to event-echoes - the finer the seers’ control, the narrower the set of events they can attune themselves to. They also have to let those echoes imprint on their consciousness. Do you understand? Let some of that echo into them. It takes an excellent mind to withstand that for scry after scry. Most psykers who attempt seeings do it in choirs, or through a focus like the Imperial Tarot, and with the most puissant prayers and blessings, they can surround themselves with. Scrying can hurt. Even a soul-bound astropath isn’t immune."
..
"Scrying isn’t passive, arbitor. It’s not like an eye taking in light that’s fallen on an inanimate book. Astropaths exert power in scrying, and what they look at isn’t lifeless.
It must have been explained to you why the structure of the Bastion’s been engineered to break up psyk-traces? It’s so that sensitive psykers don’t travel across a point where something terrible happened and look into it accidentally, experience it all over again in their minds."
Seances and scrying events (Astorpath verison of FTL deteciton basically) described and discussed.

It occurs to me that this probably also applies to seeing events in the future as well, perhaps even more so.


Page 219
"Things become apparent in it [scrying] that would not be so for the rest of us: emotions, power, patterns, relationships, symbols, change, all in intersecting layers. One of my old astropaths once tried to explain it to me. He said, ’’Take the incident you’re scrying, interpret it in a many poetic, allegorical, symbolic ways as you can, put each of those into a stained-glass window, put all those windows in front of each other and shine a stablight through them. Now, stand in front of that array and look at all the pictures at once, try to untangle them and arrive at a
meaning."
The kinds of things scrying can pick up on and detect. Like astrotelepathy of this brand it is not neccesarily a straightforward thing.

Page 220-221
"There are some in the Astropathica, not many, but there are many in the Navy, and the Ecclesiarchy around Chiros is rotten with them. It’s said that it’s a growing blight in the Inquisition too, with Tonnabi’s monograph spreading like a brushfire. Vedrier even said he’d met the master of another Black Ship at Coellow Quintus who’d fallen in with them."
..
"Polarists: believers in the polarity between human and psyker. The monograph by Eparch Kvander Tonnabi is being spread by some in the Missionaria Galaxia, if you care to read it, but promise me you won’t swallow his ravings."
...
"The Emperor, so they say, is divine, transcendent. The only place where human and psyker can meet is in the Godhead, and He holds humanity and witchery in his hands as proof of His godhood. In any mortal, the combination of human and psyker is a mockery. The polarity must be enforced: either a human is a human, and walks and talks, and prays; or it’s a psyker and it can’t be allowed to have any humanity at all. Astropaths that Polarists get their hands on are trepanned, lobotomised, reduced to no more than servitors. They say that the poor ones who’re brain-burned by their Soul Binding are the right ones, that that’s what the Emperor means to do. The ones who come out still proud and strong are the aberrations, and we must serve the Emperor by completing His plan and reducing them to..."
...
"They can barely make a choir. Ciphers are pumped into their heads and some idiot blunt plays them like an organ. Orders them around like a servitor. All that holiness and knowledge gone: just a lump of meat on an eyrie couch. They can’t handle a millionth of the work someone like Chevenne could, but the Polarists say it’s the Emperor’s will."
The Polarists described and their "goal" - showing the potlical and personal beliefs impacting the practical running of the Imperium (eg fanatics wnating their fanatical views portrayed.) They basically want to make all pskyers like choristers, or like the Transmat link psychic servitors mentioned that the AdMech use (which this greatly reminds me of.) This lends some of the strongest credence to the existenc eo fthe AdMehc Transmat link, and it shows that psykers can be made into useful servitors to serve certain purposes (artificial sensors, comms, etc.) It's likely these ciphers/servitors are more numerous than astropaths or even Choristors (Tens/hundreds of billions, trillions?) because alot more psykers will burn out or fail... but they're also infinitely weaker (especially if we take the "millionth the work" bit literally.. 1 million ciphers to equal one astropath is not a favorable exchange rate.) so they cannot completely replace astropaths.

ciphers/psychic servitors could be an explanation for non-astropathic FTL sensors or comms we periodically have mentioned or observe in 40K, however. They may also be a more reliable (and cheaper) short range comms system avialable ot use (like say, by chartists). They also (seemingly) are more stable and safer - not having a brain or persoanlity is, as we know, a good protection against the warp.

Page 234
"It was vivid, almost alive. So vivid that it printed itself on his mind, and because a psyker’s mind suffuses his body so powerfully, it printed itself on his body, too. You’re a concordiast, Renz, you must know about image stigmata. A psyker can be made to relive something, or imagine it, so powerfully that they experience it."
The stigmata described and explained. Again, the warp is such that strong enough belief, especialyl manifested by a psyker, can have tangible, physical effects, and this shows how tangible they can be. It also shows just why they have such a hate and fear of psykers, and why they go to such insane lengths to guard against them, hate them, discirminate against them, harsh and cruel as it is to treat a human being - any human being - that way.

Page 237
A point of scarlet light flicked into existence on Dechene’s temple. Rede’s sight had come on as soon as she’d drawn her own gun,...
The detective Espionist's gun has a laser sight.

Page 237

Rede was trapped here, sealed in this tomb, so far out that she could barely see the sun she missed so.
The Bastion Psykana is far out enough that Hydraphur's sun is barely visible.

Page 240
"If you wanted to lose me in some ridiculous battle-fantasy, Dechene, you never had a hope. Did you think that would sit properly in the mind of anyone who’s ever really held a gun?" She put spite into the words, and tried to hold his attention on her voice while she shuffled forwards, "A boy drooling over a Commissar Cain propaganda-poster, maybe, but me?"
Context-wise, Calpurnia had just gotten a psychic illusion of her doing a really silly action-hero type fight between herself and other Arbitrators, including over-the-top wire-fu style gunslinging acrobatics. Which of course, is part and parcel of Cain's legends. That said I like how Farrer always slips in references like this, it really makes the universe seem bigger than just his own novels. (Like the references to Eye of Terror from earlier novels, or Sabbat Worlds Crusade, etc.)

Page 241
...truggling up a silica slope on Hazhim under the hard low constellations of the orbital forges, until the shell hits her and cracks her carapace apart. She’s airborne for whole seconds before she drops into the scorching dust and..
Orbital forges, and some kind of shell hits and cracks the carapace (enough to send her flying, somehow.)

Page 251
Inquisitorial troopers in stern grey cloaks filled the hangar - everything that moved did so under
the scrutiny of red-eyed targeters and pale ceramic faceplates, like the ones Lohjen’s chameleon-armoured agents had worn.
The same faceplates that had built in mics and external vox.

Page 251
Two stood back with long ceremonial sarissae crossed over the ramp; the rest
surrounded the stasis-cage that carried Antovin Dechene onto the ship.
STasis cage to hold a rogue psyker.

Page 252
"They say that not even the Black Ships see every one of them."

...
"I’ve heard stories of witches who make it into the Administratum, the Guard, who knows where else.. They can go for years without being discovered."
Rumors pertaining to rogue psykers and how they can (theoretically) infiltrate the Imperial government. Possible, although I doubt they'd get into higher levels. The other thing is, it may not be "getting in undetected" - some psykers simply don't manifest until later in life, or may not manifest until something triggers it, and some of those are almost certainly going to contribute to the afroementioned rumors.

Of course its perfectly true that the Black Ships cannot possibly snatch every psyker, they're imperfect after all. And there is always the criminal element... smuggling of or trade in illegal or black market psykers of all stripes - an activity we know eixsts and does go on.
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