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Alaric is ignorant about the Fall of the Eldar, and it is implied that only Inqusitors (at least of the Xenos Ordos) may know anything about them biologically or historically."I forget, human, that you are not well versed in our ways. Some of you have studied us, I understand: the biologists of your Inquisition. The better to kill us, of course. But not you."
Page 146-147
Alaric is told about the Fall. Interesting in that it implies the Eldar Empire back then was similar in scope to the Imperium, which makes sense and that the "better part" of the Eldar race was lost, rather than a tiny fraction surviving. It does make some sense, given the scope of the galaxy compared to the Eye of Terror - you'd think alot more Eldar would have survived than not."Long ago, my kind ruled the galaxy." continued Kelhedros," 'much as your kind claim to rule it now. We were artists and aesthetes, while you are soldiers. We took worlds and made them beautiful instead of merely inhabiting them like insects in a nest."
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"From the sinful pride of my people was born… one of the great powers of the warp. I cannot speak of it. It plagues us still and reaps its toll among humankind, too."
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"Then why tell me?"
"Because I see it on this world, too, and in your Imperium." Kelhedros looked up from his chain-blade. "The Fall killed the better part of my species. Only those who saw it coming escaped it in their world ships. My kind, so far advanced compared to yours, was almost wiped out. Think what another Fall would do to you. Do not think that you will see it coming, or that it has not already begun. You are living through the death of your species at this very moment and you do not realise it."
"I cannot believe that." said Alaric. "There must be hope."
Kelhedros arched an eyebrow. "Why?"
"Because without it we are lost."
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"Perhaps everything you say is true and these are the death throes of the human race, but even if that was true, I would not lose faith. There must be hope, and I must fight for my Emperor against Chaos and its servants. That is just the way it is."
Also interesting is how it is implied that the humans are heading for another Fall, if you pardon the pun. This Echoes what the Hydra Cabal and the Illuminati/Eldar force hinted at in the Inquisition War Trilogy - given that, I wonder if the Rhana Dandra (Eldar battle of the apocalypse) is supposed to be foreshadowing this.
Also I like this quote because it is fundamentally anti-grimdark, and shows why I like Alaric - he still goes for the positive side of things and demonstrates why. Despite all he has seen and suffered, he is strong because he believes it has a purpose. It also echoes some of the writings of earlier 40K authors from novels like Eye of Terror or Pawns of Chaos.
Page 149-150
Alaric and the Eldar talk about the Orks while watching. This shows two things. The first thing is it shows that, despite being a joke race and sometimes under-valued, the Orkish culture and its inherent adaptability can be quite formidable no matter the situation, especially with a Leader to take charge. It wouldnt surprise me if even now Ork spores were infesting the planet.. imagine how THAT would turn out!"They are just turning on each other." said Kelhedros
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"Wrong," said Alaric. "Watch."
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"That one," said Kelhedros, "he's in charge."
"Exactly."
"But it is the way of the animal. The strongest rules."
"And he is using that. He's training them, toughening them up."
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"One-ear has a plan, which is more than most of the humans here. Think about it, the best way for
the orks to survive on Drakaasi is to make themselves essential. That way they can be sure that Venalitor won't throw their lives away. The better they fight, the better a show they put on for the crowds, the longer they will live."
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"I hate the ork just like any other Emperor fearing citizen, but the fact remains that One-ear has a better grasp of the situation, and a sounder plan for surviving it, than most of the slaves here. I thought the same as you, Kelhedros, and assumed that an ork was just a fighting machine that couldn't even think. Then I took the time to watch, and I found I was wrong."
It also shows how clever the Orks can be when the situation warrants, at least when a leader is present. Again Ork adaptability ta work.
The second point is underscoring how perceptive Alaric is even in less than ideal conditions. He doesnt exactly respect the Orks or like them (He is a Space Marine after all) but he does not let that hatred or disgust cloud his judgement the way the Eldar does.
Page 160
Alaric reflects on yet another Khornate chaos city.. first we saw the farm, now we see the factories. Again even a Khornate world has its own sort of economy, because to make war you need resources, and those resources have to come from somewhere.Only Chaos could create a place like Gorgath, thought Alaric, and only the followers of Khorne would do it with such blunt, literal brutality. Columns of robed cultists and wild mutants marched on either shore of the blood river, following armoured champions towards Gorgath's endless battle. Alaric could hear the sound of its devastation, and could even make out the outline of a feral Titan as it lumbered around firing indiscriminately. Everywhere were the scars of war: bones poking from the barren soil, the foundations of long-fallen fortresses, monuments and mass graves. This was where the army that had taken Sarthis Majoris was first blooded. It was a factory for war, a machine for churning out armies, where the dregs of Drakaasi were fed into the battlefield and transformed into instruments of Chaos.
Alaric could see hundreds of thousands of them. Gorgath was an obscenity. It was a celebration of war for its own sake, death without purpose, a dreadful hollow slaughter that offended Alaric to the core.
I also like Alaric's response, showing why the place is Khornate and why it offends him.
Page 163
They don't capture only people.Two smoke-belching tanks stood ready to pull them apart on lengths of chain. Alaric recognised the tanks as Leman Russ battle
tank variants, no doubt captured and brought to Drakaasi in one of the lords' slave raids.
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At least some forms of murder are illegal in the Imperium. Echoes alot of what we learn in Guns of Tanith, I think. Given Gearth's fear in responding, his crime seems to be one he's particularily afraid to admit, especially to a symbol of Imperial authority."Those are prison tattoos...
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"Murder." said Gearth.
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"Who did you kill?"
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...that was a question Gearth obviously feared.
"Women." he said.
Page 164
a rather interesting, and ironic, parallel. Not unlike the Emperor Sanctioned Death Cults and blood worship (well at least sanctioned by some...)On every Imperial world there was some diversion for the citizens, and adoring followers accompanied the most famous fighters or sportsmen everywhere. Drakaasi's arenas held the same position on Drakaasi, on a far larger scale. The idea that Alaric could have devotees seemed as pathetic as the slave looked.
Page 167
Examples of mutants, how psykers are treated on a Khornate world, and that not all cults to Khorne are warriors (some seem to be effectilvey suicides.) Of course that's obvious, since spectators and shit are part of the whole world and its economy (such as it was.)There were brute mutants three times the height of a man, tentacled subhumans, and hated psykers, chained up and herded before the armies to make sure they died first. Whole cults of the Blood God stood in their robed finery, desperate to die beneath the eyes of their god.
Oh and they let the psykers fight with psyker powers.
Page 172
I find this totally ironic and appropriate. Khorne of course wouldnt' give a damn as long as slaughter happens, but those in power want to stay in power, so unorganized bloodshed is a bad thing.The lords would be angry. There was plenty of blood, of course, and Khorne would have his due, but a free-for-all wasn't what the lords of Drakaasi had wanted. Alaric's riot was an insult to the planet's ruling order
we also amusingly see the two-faced nature of Chaos in this, because Alaric's actions have inflamed a crowd of bloodthirsty populace, and they will even turn on their own lords in a frenzy if driven far enough. Such is Chaos, and its another nicely handled part of the story.
This also represents the first time (and step) in Alaric's greater plan to destroy an entire Daemon world, by realizing and exploiting this sort of fundamentla weakness (Chaos will turn on itself if given a chance.)
Page 182
Again we see Alaric is not your typical MArine, but this is a quality to be respected. It also highlights again one of the underlying themes of the Gray Knights novels, and one of Counters favorite themes - the nature of Chaos and how one confronts (or defeats) it."What quality do you possess that can win you victory if not a Grey Knight's willingness to fight?"
"Imagination."
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"It is the understanding that there is more than one way to fight."
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"Yes, I learned that against Ebondrake. I cannot fight them as I would any other enemy, not this whole planet. Even if I win, every drop of blood I spill is a victory for them. It has to be something else."
Page 187
Artistry in the Imperium and the (typical) scope of recognition. Again the idea seems to be small islands of sectors scattered throughout the larger Imperium.It was a work of genius. The artist would have been one of the greatest of his generation on any Imperial world, perhaps good enough to gain sector-wide recognition.
Page 190
Alaric had been impaled through the chest by a sword. It shows that even when taking a major injury, a Space Marine, especially a GRey Knight can fight on, even if hampered.Alaric tested his body for injuries. It felt comforting, because it was part of his training. There was still enough Grey Knight left in him for him to act like a soldier. He had the familiar cacophony of pain from hundreds of minor injuries. His chest was the worst. His breathing was hampered, and one of his hearts was wounded. He could still move, and fight if need be, but it was a major injury, even for a Space Marine, and back on Titan he would have been sent to the apothecarion to recover. On Drakaasi, he would just have to fight through it.
Page 191
More on the extent of Alaric's injuries, and the scope of the healing methods on this world."It was a real mess in there." continued Haggard. "One of the lungs won't work. One of the hearts is looking shaky, too. Your spine made it, that's the main thing. There were splinters of metal in there as long as my finger. It was only by the Emperor's will that none of them severed your spinal cord."
..
Alaric tried sitting up again. This time he bit down the pain. A few of Haggard's crude stitches burst, and fresh blood ran down his chest. He saw that he was wearing the armour in which he had been fighting at Gorgath, with the breastplate removed. The wound on his chest was huge and ugly. No one but a Space Marine could have survived it.
It's interesting that a Khornate champion cares at all about medical care of any kind... but slaves and fighters are a resource, and even Khornate champions are wise not to squander them. Again, economy, so a medic makes some sense.
Page 191
Despite being against "Sorcery" we learn Khornates apparently have their own means of manipulating the warp to suit their ends, including I gather pocket dimensions."These are Venalitor's chambers."
"Here? The ship isn't big enough."
Haggard shrugged. "Physics only works here out of habit. If Venalitor wants to bend it to give himself a place fit for a duke, then he can."
Also a PDF surgeon knows something about physics. So much for "ignorant populace"
Page 197
Chaos Champion knows nerve centers and pressure points, I guess.Venalitor knew the ways in which a human body could be made to feel pain. The tip of the blade hit just the right point, and nerve
endings caught fire in agony. Alaric could not move, only spasm on the altar as pain washed through him.
Page 199
War on Sarthis Majoris seems to be ongoing, and Chaos is trying to disrupt itself.The Thirteenth Hand, since returning from their failure to disrupt Venalitor's armies on Sarthis Majoris, had taken up residence in a huge and filthy tangle of entrail sewers beneath Karnikhal.
Page 199
Again peculiar Khornate rituals.. technically magic I guessEventually, the Wrath had reached the heart of the fortress, and had enacted a ritual that brought life back to the organs that had hung dead for many centuries of Karnikhal's lifespan. A few of the Wrath made it out, while the Hand was drowned in filth, or dissolved by digestive juice
Page 200
We see politics on a Khornate world.. it also shows the difficulties in herent in creating the sort of cooperation needed to launch a Black Crusade of any kind.Drakaasi had seen many such wars. In a way, they were a part of its machinery of worship, for the aggressors were ultimately fighting for Khorne's recognition. However, they took place away from the arenas and altars, far from the eyes of Drakaasi's lords, filthy shadow wars and rolls of assassinations. Most of Drakaasi's lords had reached their positions by eliminating a rival in such a war, and all of them had survived such aggression from rivals jealous of their position. That was how power worked: aggression and annihilation. Khorne's patronage ensured that on Drakaasi it always took the form of naked violence.
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Lord Ebondrake's pronouncement had demanded that the lords of Drakaasi work together to create a vast army to conquer worlds for Khorne in the wake of the Thirteenth Black Crusade. That did not allow for open conflict between the lords, and when Ebondrake took his lords to task, the results could be bloodier than any battle they could fight between themselves.
Page 207
Some sort of magic scrying mirror which would duplicate the effects of viewing or sensory devices that Duke Venalitor is using to watch the progress of battles he is waging....the bloody events shimmering on a great sheet of crystal that dominated
one wall of his audience chamber.
Page 220
Anti magic wards of some kind. Interesting thta a Khornate champion can bind a tzeentchian daemon as well. Razzie must be corporeal in some fashion since he actually stays in realspace for a long, long time.Raezazel collapsed, defeated, but Venalitor did not despatch him. Instead he was taken to the Hecatomb, imprisoned behind doors marked with the most powerful anti-magical wards, and bound by ancient daemon oaths to accept Venalitor as his conqueror and master.
Page 222
REad into this what you want."Raezazel!" yelled Alaric."'Daemon! A Grey Knight never knelt before witchcraft, and I shall not be the first!"
Page 236-237
Heh. Clever actually, as a way to get around possession, and the daemon realizes it obviously. It's interesting in several ways. It is a confirmation of Alaric's essential humanity - without his usual defenses, his conditioning, and usual mindset he can't endure everything he has gone through, suffered, and had to do - it would scar him. He's not some soulless, mindless automaton who can just ignore things because he's a SPACE MARINE - he ignores and copes with them because, like a human, he has mechanisms and (even deceptions) designed to make things easier to deal with (deceptions which he cannot keep around a daemon of lies, obviously.)"I am not a Grey Knight. How could one such as I see what I have seen and keep my mind?"
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With Alaric's psychic shield still protecting him, there was no way that the horror of such things could affect Alaric as they would a normal man. However, with the Collar of Khorne removing that shield, Alaric's mind was vulnerable, not just to creatures like Raezazel, but to Alaric himself.
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He was the Hammer, he was a Grey Knight. He grasped that idea and clutched it to both his hearts. It was all he would have left.
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Alaric let all the horror hit him at once: everything he had seen, everything he had done, the friends he had lost, and the lives he had taken.
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Alaric lost his mind.
What's more, madness is the obvious escape, when you think about it. They want him to "fall" to chaos, to be corrupted... but corruption basically requires a willing acceptance - a choice - to turn. It can be compelled, bribed, seduced, but the choice still has to be made. A crazy man cannot make a choice, cannot be held liable for their actions, and probably isnt someone that a daemon would want to inhabit. What makes this even more clever is that Khornates don't mind madmen, but who is to say a madman is truly devoted to Khorne, deep down? As we know Khorne doesn't care so long as slaughter and devastation happen.
At this point Alaric has, more or less, won. The daemons can break his mind, they can obliterate it, they can drive him insane, but he will never, ever serve. And if he is corrupted well.. he will do what is needed to handle that.
Page 243-244
We see that Alaric still has at least part of his mind intact, compartmentalized even if the rest of it has "broken" or gone insane. Or rather, it seems liek he's given his animal nature free reign, and kept the rest of him (The Space Marine part) hidden and protected, camouflaged by the larger and darker part let loose. It is rather clever, and part of me wonders if this is because of Space Marine augmentations (something perhaps related to the Catalepsean node, or Sus-an membrane) or if this is something peculiar to Alaric's mind alone.Alaric was still there. It was a very small part of him, a fragment of lucidity, and it was trapped. The rest of his mind was a dark ocean....
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He was the Hammer. The prayer kept him intact. He had a duty, encompassed by the prayer, and that duty was his reason for existing.
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Slowly, he tried to drag himself up, piece by piece, memory by memory.
What begin are sereis of "blacking out" and coming to, discovering he's become something of a berserker, an Arena champion while passed out.
From this point on til when he comes to, Alaric struggles to survive madness and come to terms with is situation. Here things hit that gray area - has he turned, has he fallen, has he become a minion or a champion of Chaos? He himself wonders and even fears it as he tries to struggle to hold to his perceived duty and do what he must to survive, and achieve his goal (the destruction of daemons and those who serve Chaos.)
He also must fight against his own desire to surrender due to what is being asked of him. Again it is a tricky question - how much must be endure, or is he willing to go through, to see his duty to the end? It's a conflict between his refusal to give in and his refusal to submit to Chaos.
Again its one of those interesting points in the book where Counter tries to deal with Chaos, and its better handled than it is in other books (EG Soul Drinkers.)
Page 255
Technology, at least nonmilitary technology, seems to have backslid on this particular Khornate world. not surprisingy really, since the nonmilitary has no real value. Then again they had to capture Russes to, so it may be that their ability to fabricate things is limited (arms, ammo, etc.)The skyship was one of the small fleet that remained on Drakaasi, relics of an earlier age, and Ebondrake owned them all. It looked like a galleon loosed from the ocean, sails spreading out horizontally like the wings of a dragonfly.
Page 258-259
Once again we see the means and difficulties in trying to maintain control and unity of a Chaos force, both of the mortal champions and the daemonic (In this context Ebondrake threatening Venalitor and one of the Daemonic allies.) Once again as well we see that "corporeal" daemons and the warp-bound daemons are also apparently separate factions despite being the same sort of entity or even serving the same god."I have no wish to waste more of my troops, and Arguthrax will not risk angering the warp by sacrificing its daemons trying to kill me."
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"If you and Arguthrax continue to waste this planet's armies on killing each other then I will
finish the job for you. I will kill you both. You are not too proud to be flayed into a banner, Venalitor, and Arguthrax is not too great to avoid a banishment to the coldest wastes of the warp at my behest."
Page 262
Ebondrake and Venalitor discussing Alaric. They seem to believe he has broken, and this somehow equates falling. This seems to confirm the idea he has, but this is simply their point of view. Chaos, and their minions, are hardly omnisicent or infallible, and its not the first time Chaos has been fooled (Eye of Terror, for example.)
"He was introduced to an ally from the warp. His mind did not survive the encounter."
"I would have heard of this from the warp. Flaying the mind of a daemon hunter would be a matter of great celebration among Khorne's daemons."
Page 264
Possession is a two edged sword. merging with someone like that means both minds are open, and I would wager that it is the strength of will (or psychic power) of one or the other which determines dominance and acess. Daemons (usually) can be stronger, but it is not an absolute. Especially for a Daemon of Tzeentch.Alaric, finally saw everything that Raezazel had tried to hide from him.
In attempting to possess Alaric, Raezazel had let his mind touch Alaric's. In that mind was locked the secret of Raezazel himself, of Drakaasi and of the Hammer of Daemons.
Page 268
Once again Space Marine durability.Alaric looked down at his arm, from which the waves of pain were emanating. His consciousness had kicked off the endorphins in his brain, which were dulling the agony, a typical physiological response for a Space Marine, but the pain was still tremendous.The skin of his forearm had been slit and pulled open from the wrist to the elbow, and several pins were sticking from the exposed muscle, piercing nerve centres with such precision that there was no room for any more pain.
Alaric tried to speak. He gasped dumbly. His nervous system wouldn't respond properly. An unenhanced body would have died of shock, he thought vaguely. One again, he was alive because he was a Space Marine.
Page 274
Which is true, but it remains true for anyone on this planet, much less throughout the galaxy. War and killing will inherently strengthn Khorne regardless, its just the degree that matters (someone who does it willingly for them, rather than just in general, probably rpvodies more strength as it is an act of wroship, rather than just an act of emotion.) And remember Khorne (and many of his minions) care less about who dies than they do about the fact that someone dies. If we used "killing someone" as the sole benchmark for being a worshipper of Khorne, that also means that anytime someone tells a lie they worship tzeentch, or if they catch a cold they must be favoring Nurgle. Nevermind anything tied to Slaanesh...He must have won great glory for Khorne. He must have taken dozens of skulls for the Skull Throne.
Page 275
Again quite true. Most of the shit he does in that arena probably pales in comparison to shit that has been done beofre in the name of the Emperor - planets destroyed, populations purged - the carnage caused amongst the Balurians and Sisters in Greey Knights to stop a Daemon are a good example of this - but what matters (at least to Alaric and whether or not he fell) is the why, and that is what determines his fall (he's not doing it to appease Khorne, nor does he like the fact doing it strengthsn Khorne... he does not delude himself in any of this, or that he is suffering corruption in the act, but he has not turned willingly to Chaos either.)"I was not myself for a while. Venalitor tried to have one of his pet daemons take control of me. I did not cooperate, but resisting cost me my mind for a while."
"You did some terrible things." said Haggard.
"I know, but then that was true before I ever came to Drakaasi."
Page 277-278
Khorne has no psykers or sorcerers, but he does have priests. Which probably explains the source of his abilities. (They're not magic, they're miracles.. just as any ritual, summoning, etc. is a "miracle" for Khornate religion.) Again, objectively it probably all can be considered psychic power or sorcery, but such is the paradoxical nature of the warp and its variations. Also, Khornate divination.The priests of Khorne wet the hems of their bronze-threaded robes as they wandered among the
sacrifices. They scraped through the pooling blood with their ceremonial blades, and pored over loops of entrails. They examined the angles at which the soldiers' swords had pierced their bodies. They lifted the visors of their helmets, taking careful note of the final expressions on their mutated faces. For several hours, they pursued their divinations, until swarms of insects descended on the fresh corpses, and the blood began to congeal in fascinating patterns on the surface of the bronze shield.