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Man what a mouthful... anyhow since I decided to starta ll the OTHER books.. I decided it was time to just start up the SWC stuff, since I'll probably get around to covering the Ghosts and shit at some not too distant future point. Actually I may just start with Brothers of the snake because a.) I dont care for the novel much, so its a good intro and b.) I really didnt know where else to put it. I can at least fit Titanicus and Double EAgle somewhere in the middle probably. :P

Anyhow, Gaunt's Ghosts and Dan Abnett. Even though you can say Space Marines are maybe 'iconic' of 40K (although ddepending on the faction one favours they might disagree. I know I do.) Abnett is perhaps one of the best known, longest running, and highest quality writers in the Black Library stable. That isnt to say there aren't any other 'good' authors - good is a relative term after all - but I think Abnett has the best blend of action, character, story, and just world building/scope. He has, singlehandedly, constructed whole regions of the 40K galaxy that have - to varying degrees - proven more definitive than many other writers or authros (except maybe Graham McNeill.) And he's done it over multiple editions, at that. And unlike something like the Horus Heresy series, he has done this (more or less) singlehandedly.

What is it that appeals to Abnett? I suppose many peopel would have their own reasons. For me its that he knows, first and foremost, the diffrence between 'grimdark' and 'actual grim drama'. Whereas some might think MORE SKULLS and a higher killcount means its more dramatic, Dan (like many of the good BL writers) realizes that you need to do contrasts, and you need to make it personal. The best 'grim darkness' actually come when the character has something to lose.. and they lose it. Tragedy, not silliness. Abnett writes the sort of 'serious' grim drama that 40k aspires to (at least as a game) and so often fails (devolving into unintentional comedy.)

The Sabbat Worlds is his child, and one of his more enduring creations. It rivals the Scarus sector for establishement -heck it rivals FFG's efforts at worldbuilding and I consider those to be damn good - and over the course of the series it, and the characters in it, have grown, evolved, changed. more than just the characters, the scope and direction of the series has changed, as has the language. Its continually evolving (the term 'las men' we get from Salvations' reach is a good exampel - thats a recent introduction and I suspect is the 40k version of 'rifleman'. But the definifitve stuff like the Ghosts using stubbers and autocannon support weapons, tread fethers, flamers, etc.. also arises from this transitional period.)

The interesting thing is, the Sabbat Worlds Crusade is merely a backdrop for the actual stories, by and large. They take place within a muhc larger sandbox (which is itself part of an even bigger sandbox.) Mucho f the main action occurs offscreen, with the stories focused largely on the Ghosts and their piece of the war. That is what gives the series its charm. Its not so much about the war, as it is about the Ghosts and how they cope/survive within the War. moving from battle to battle, many of which often involve osmething new and different (from trench warfare to ship to boarding actions to defensive wars and invasions.) and each time the outcome may be different. Sometimes they come through with minor losse,s whereas others.. they'll be heavily devastated (Jago and Verghast coming to mind.) Also, despite the name, the story is not just about Gaunt.. its about all the named characters. Corbec, Rawne, Larkin, Bragg, Caffran... the ones who join post Necropolis - Koela, Soric, Criid, Daur... and more once we get to the bElladon. They all have a place.. and even stuff from the earlier books can come back to play a role later on (previous characters like Merrt, or previous references/relations.. its part of Abnett's gift for worldbuilding, I think.)

Most importantly though, and I think this is the key when it comes to playing up the drama and tragedy rather than mere grimdark - Abnett is not afraid to inflict losses. Charactes die in the stories. Characters we like. And they don't always die well. I think that is the best and worst part of the series, it makes me both like and hate it... having characters I grew attached to die... i hated that.. but I liked it because it demonstrated to me how well Abnett had written the story. He got me to suspend disbelief and care. He conveyed to me that war can be horrible, dehumanising and cruel.. there is no 'heroes save the day' neccesarily.. and thats rare, and good, writing. But there ar ealways more characters to come to the fore.

I have covered the Ghosts serie sup to Necropolis before, the 'first' arc of the series. Abnett describes his works as 'sequences' (Although I didnt pick up on that term til much later, so you hear me using other terms to describe it.) The First Sequence is 'The founding' and it is more or less setting the story up - letting us tget to knwo about the ghosts, and to establish the Crusade and their role in it. The real story begins in 'The Saint', where we have a new sub-arc with its own themes and ideas and concepts leading up to Herodor. Then there is 'The Lost' which features a different, and darker, approach to the stories.. more tragic than the last, but still quite good for its diversity and in contrast with the Saint. And the current 'sequence' is 'The Victory'.. of which two books have been made.. things are starting to come to a head, we're learning more about the Past of the series.. but the themes are still a bit nebulous. Its a bit ironic, I think, because I've basically re-read the stories up to the current point just to prepare for this, and with the prior sequences it was easier to discuss theme and stuff because I had a complete 'set' to work offof. I dont for Blood Pact and Salvation's Reach, so I may have to approach those gradually as the next couple books in the cycle come out (whenever they do.)

We also have spinoff novels in 'Double Eagle' which features the Phantine from Guns of Tanith coupled with the Pardus (or some of them) from Honour Guard, and covers a war zone in another part of the Crusade. And there is Titanicus, which is TITAN WARFAre on a pseudo-forgeworld, but also set in the Sabbat Worlds region.

so I'll leave the intro at this, and treat the novel sstarting as separate. :D
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And we start off the SWC stuff with.. brothers of the snake. to be honest this isnt so much a Sabbat Worlds story I think, inasmuch as that the Iron Snakes are a chapter Abnett made, originating (I believe) from a bunch of short stories. indeed much of this novel is basically a repeat of those short stories in a collected form.. so this is more an anthology than a novel (not unlike Firsta nd Only and Ghostmaker really.) But as Is aid I dont know where to put it, so it can go here.

BotS is about Squad Priad of the Iron Snakes and his myriad adventures (many involving ridiculous killcounts of Dark Eldar or Orks). I can't say that I really cared for the series as much.. it didn't engage me (although many like it.) It IS a good rebuttal for 'Dan Abnett can't write Space Marines' - which people usually say when they thnk he doesn't make them kill enough people (I think some people take the Movie Marines stuff too seriously.)

Standard two post update.

Page 12
Hanfire listened carefully, and then made the man repeat the story while the little metal golem at the foot of the First Legislator's wooden throne recorded the account on a clattering hand press.
A servitor record keeper I guess.


Page 13
They had never seen such important men in the flesh before, nor such finely garbed soldiers or such magnificent vehicles. They had never seen tailored clothes, or laslock rifles, or anything as inconceivable as the little metal golem.
The retinue of a man known as a "Receiver of Wrecks" - who evidently deals with stuff that crashes onto the planet form space, like spaceships. I wonder what they do for Space hulks.


Page 15
"Simple folk fear things." the Receiver told Hanfire as the coaches rattled onwards. "It is their way, as we might expect."

...

"They would flee their homes? Run off into the night?"
...

"You wouldn't have summoned me if you thought so." replied the Receiver, going back through the pages of the report his golem had produced during the day. "You did the right thing, of course by sending for me. I admire your worldliness, sir."

..

The Receiver looked up, peering through his half-moon spectacles. "It's quite clearly a ship. A vessel that has foundered and crashed, just as you surmised. In the name of the High Legislator and the God-Emperor who preserves all, we must locate the site and secure it."

"Is it dangerous then?" Hanfire asked.

The Receiver took down a zinc box from the luggage rack. It was a measuring device of some type and it had been clicking like a cricket for the past day and a half.

..

The Receiver adjusted a dial and the clicking became louder and more intense. "Residue." he said. "Contamination. It has permeated this landscape. Probably the spill from a drive system. Once we've found the site, the area should be confined."

"You've done this before?" asked Hanfire.

"I am the Receiver of Wreck." the other man said. "This is my job. Things fall from the heavens all the time, and thanks to men such as yourself, they are brought to my attention. There are fabulous treasures to be secured, in the name of the High Legislator. Technologies. Devices. Precious metals. And if it is a vessel of our Holy Imperium, there may be good human people in dire need of rescue."

Hanfire had been very much enjoying his journey into the hills with the Receiver. It was a welcome change for him to spend time in the company of a learned, finely educated man, but now he felt some alarm. He was out of his depth. The Receiver was so much more cosmopolitan than he was. He knew such things. He knew of wonders beyond the mortal sphere. He knew of space and its mysteries. He spoke of them matter-of-factly, as if they were commonplace.
More clarification about the Receiver and his job, as well as the reaction of people from a relatively low end planet to the crashing of an unknown starship. Radiation seems to be a constant hazard. PArt of me wonders if the guy is part of the 'adepta' system (Imperial assigned to the planet) or if its a local position.



Page 16 - the Reciever of Wrecks was born on another planet named Eidon, but came to this planet as a child. They know about Xenos as well, including the guard detachment (who, we learn later is under orders to eliminate any Xenos if there.) example of off-planet immigration/emigration, at least at relatively local levels.



Page 17
The fleet coach came to a halt, and the entire procession stopped around it. Hensher raised the window blinds and called out a command.

The retinue of twenty men-at-arms hurried forward and assembled outside the coach, snapping to attention. Receiver Hensher had brought them with him from Fuce. They were very excellent men indeed, tall and strong, plated in quality field armour of khaki metal. They bore the finest and most modern laslocks that Hanfire had ever seen.
The armor includes visored helmets. I guess they're supposed to be 'modern' troops by these standards.


Page 17 - the upper levels of the planet do seem to know about Chaos, the Greenskins, etc. but only as stories.


Page 18 - the upper levels also know about the Iron Snakes chapter, although not about Space Marines per se - they're regarded as little more than a myth, even though it is considered that they are the "best" defense against outside aggression if the planet is attacked. It has also been over six centuries since they last visited.


Page 19
It was high time they stopped for the night and rested the teams of quadruped servitors drawing the coaches.
Servitor-drawn wagon. I suppose its not a bad way to travel if you can servitorize animals, but I doubt many can maintain such devices except the wealthy (or perhaps only the planetary governor, even.


Page 22 - others in the retinue are armed with repeating rifles.


Page 23 - the receiver of Wrecks has a vox caster


Pages 30-32
The plinth was made of ebony, or some black stone that was warm to the touch. It was surprisingly small, and gave off a faint scent of energised heat, like an astropath enclave. Old systems, still ticking over. Antoni felt the surfaces of the plinth carefully, wiping away the accumulated dust with the corner of her cuff.

Antoni had brought the codex with her. She took the small, brass-clasped volume out of her coat pocket, opened it, and began to read. No one had performed this action in a very long time, and nobody had even practised it. Some court procedures were rehearsed on a regular, formal basis, but not this one. For a moment, Antoni felt a brief connection to the last person who had taken this codex out of the palace library and opened it: another primary clerk, his name (without doubt, he had been a he) now lost, six hundred and thirty-three years before.

The instructions were fairly simple. Antoni laid the codex open on the top of the plinth, and saw how the leaves naturally fell apart on the right page. Fabric memory. Her predecessor had pressed the book open, and laid it just where Antoni had now done, so as to be able to consult it.

She took off her signet ring, and fitted it into the seal reader. The double-headed snake motif locked in and turned like a key. A rectangular panel slid open in the front face of the plinth, allowing more warm air to escape, and revealed a small, finger-touch keypad and several other small controls.

The codex contained a list of numeral sequences to type in, with their corresponding meanings. Antoni spent a moment deciding which was the most appropriate. She settled on a general request for assistance, and nervously tapped in the designated code. Then she carefully followed the rest of the instructions.

The final touch. A simple, recessed button, edged in brass. Antoni hovered her index finger above it for a long time, and then pressed it.

She wasn't sure what to expect, though she anticipated something impressive. There was a click, then a silence, then a low groan that gathered force until it became a lingering murmur that hung in the air. Heat radiated from the black plinth. The chapel lights dimmed for a second, ever so slightly. Then there came another sound, so deep she felt it rather than heard it. She backed away from the plinth, slightly alarmed.

The sounds all died away and silence returned. The plinth went dead, except for one, slow, blinking blue light.

Antoni picked up the codex and read on. There was nothing else. She was done.
The Snake-signal. I guess the Iron Snakes established beacons or warning signals in every system they're meant to protect. It's also basically faster than light, because its bloody unlikely that they station Iron Snakes in every single system. So how they made it FTL is also up for debate. Is it some sort of psychic servitor creature (or basically a device that uses a psyker brain to send a signal?)



Page 32
Two months later, a star appeared in the western sky.

For three hours, it glowed against the curdled, grey, dawn clouds, and those citizens of Fuce who had not by then fled for the south, leaving their properties boarded and locked, regarded it as an ill omen.

...

The star grew brighter and larger. It divided into three points of bright light, then came closer still, and revealed itself to be a dark shape upon which three bright lights were mounted.
It was a ship.
Arrival of the response to the Snake-Signal. Basically a ship arrives in system, dispatches the response 'force', and then departs. Blatant evidence that the beacon/signal can't be lightspeed, or else it would have taken years to reply instead of a few months.. At the same time the thing is clearly not an astropath, so they had some mechanical or biomechanical means of sending a signal - at least short distances (subsector scale or less perhaps.) We know its at least possible to have psychic servitors (or what is close to it) but they aren't very powerful.

Whatever the signal is. assuming a 10 LY distance from the Iron Snakes homeworld, and allowing for the response to arrive it can't be slower than 60c. Much faster probably, since its unlikely the distance is greater (although probably less than a sector-level response), allowance for the passage of the ship to deploy the aid, etc.



Page 35
He was a giant, cased in armour that was gunmetal grey, edged in red and white. His head was bare, a heavy skull on a broad neck, black hair pleated in coils around his crown. He seemed two or even three times the mass of an ordinary adult male, and even the tallest men-at-arms in Antoni's retinue would only have come up to the giant's chest.
We don't know if they mean in or out of the armor, I'm guessing in the armor, although this is just an estimate. We're probably talking 200-300 kg or so at least.



Page 38
"In the last six months, my company has been engaged in a sporadic contest with the dark el- with primul factions in this stellar neighbourhood. A number of skirmishes on half a dozen worlds. We scattered them, and now my battle group is occupied hunting the remnants of them down and mopping them up. The Chapter House relayed your signal to my battle-barge. We were just a few systems away. It was deemed convenient to drop me off as we came by. Primary clerk, how do you suppose we answered your signal so quickly?"

"Quickly?" she replied. "It's been two months!"
two months is a quick response time in the Reef Stars region. This implies the signal, however it was conveyed, was actually pretty quick. One assumes also that if the signal reached the Chapter House (programmed?) it probably was psychic and was also psychically relayed.
Also being 'several systems away' suggests the signal travelled far farther than I assumed. It also suggests that the bulk of the time was spent on the Iron Snakes answering the call. Assuming 10-20LY per system we're talking maybe 20-60 LY crossed in two months we're talking between 120-360c at least. That's not unusual for 'short range' transit as estimated in Abnett novels, but it assumes instant response time (if they've been involved all across the Reef Stars engaging the Dark Eldar, it follows they can't immediately break off and reply to a new threat, much less drop everything and respond at once.) and a generally straight line course. And good warp 'weather' conditions



Page 39
"Well, Perdet Suiton Antoni... you are clearly an educated woman. How far away do you suppose Ithaka is?"

"I don't know." she confessed.

"To the nearest parsec, maybe?"

"I don't know what a parsec is, sir."

The giant nodded. "Ithaka is a long, long way away, primary clerk. It would take the Iron Snakes ten or twelve months at the minimum to get here from there. We were in the neighbourhood."
Ithankta is apparently a good year or more distance from wherever in the Reef Stars this planet is. While we dont know the actual geography, it still suggests they either have slow-ass drives, the conditions of the warp in the region are particularily adverse, or something similar.


Page 39
"And the Reef Stars alone are so vast that it would take a year to cross from Ithaka to Baal Solock?"
"No time at all, where space is concerned. It would take three and a half years to cross the Reef Stars group, and that is just a small part of the whole Imperium. Galactically speaking, Ithaka is close by. A bright, yellow star, which you might see in summer time, close to the western horizon."
More on the distances involved.



Page 40
On the left side of the hold, a section of wall retracted, revealing equipment, armour and weapons hung from secure brackets. Antoni saw long, copper lances, a pair of shields, and an enormous firearm that she knew, just by looking at it, would be too heavy for her to lift.
Bolters are too heavy for a normal human to lift.


Page 41
The giant considered the maps, blinking from time to time. Each blink was matched with a click.
"What is that?" Antoni asked.
"I'm simply storing data."
"Your eyes are like a camera?"
"Yes. I suppose you could think of it that way." His eyes clicked again. Now he was looking at her.
"You recorded my pict?" she asked.
"Yes, primary clerk. Target recognition. I'd hate to shoot you by accident."
Space Marine speed reading and memory recall.


Page 44
He looked at her, and there was another click as he blinked. "Battery source, upper left hand pocket. A communicator or a recording device. "Pict recorder, hip pocket. Battery source, collar and spine of overcoat... a heating element, I'm guessing. Charge pistol, lower coat pocket. Las?"
The Iron Snake apparently can scan and detect the powersources on the clerk's body. the stuff she's carrying is rather interesting, too.


Page 45
He paused. "I smell black powder, and trace fyceline from ignition caps."
Another hidden weapon on the clerk. a percussion pistol.


Page 52
She reached her hand into the dirt pile the dig was exposing, and then drew it back immediately, in pain, Something had sliced the ball of her thumb, so deep, so sharp, black-ruby blood came up out of an invisible slit.

She licked it, and took out her knife, using the tongue of the blade to excavate instead. In less than a minute, she'd dug up a sharp, shiny object, angular and no bigger than a coin.
Splinter rifle barb (round?) It may give an idea of the mass or dimensions, I'd guess we're talking several grams maybe. Given that splinter weapons have been noted as being hypersonic/hypervelocity, we're probably talking on order of 1500-2000 m/s at least. Call it 3-4 kj at least.



Page 53
He squirted a spray of filmy lacquer from the flask which coated her thumb.
"Skin-wrap, in aerosol form. Let it dry."
Some sort of magic bandage. Also apparently Dark Eldar can scan blood.


Page 53
"I've done a tactical scan around the site. I read hot bones in the ground. This place is a riot of colour to me: weapons discharge, heat-spill, burned bones."
"Heat-spill. You mean blood?"
Scanning abilities of the Iron Snakes armour.


Page 55
Then came an even louder noise, a series of violent, booming reports that drowned out both the clattering and the pitch of the straining engines. The sounds slapped her like solid punches, and hot smoke stung her eyes. The speeder seemed to stumble and chug, as if its advancing speed was being arrested by a series of hammer blows.
A line of trees on the bend of the road ahead shredded in a huge, splintering concussion.
Implied recoil of a land-speeder cannon of some kind. I'm guessing assualt cannon or something like that.


Page 56
The speeder lurched again. The violent changes in velocity over the previous few seconds had made Antoni deeply nauseous and served only to baffle her senses. She swallowed back the nausea. She so hated being sick.
Implied duration of the velocity changes from recoil.



Page 63
She took out the spare black powder cartridges that she hadn't had time to unpack. There were ten of them, each a measured load for her discarded handgun.
..
Carefully, she laid out a sheet of the writing vellum, and emptied out the ten charges into it, piling the fine, black powder in a heap.
...
The vellum burned quickly. She barely had time to throw the parcel before the black powder charge ignited.
The force of it hit the lunging primul in the chest. There was a blinding flash, a whizzing hiss that ended in a deafening bang, and the creature was thrown backwards across the grove. Antoni ran towards it, ears ringing. It wasn't dead, not even close...
- black powder charge consisting of the powder from 10 cartridges from the percussion pistol. The Dark Eldar goes flying but is largely unharmed by the explosion.


Page 64 - Iron Snake Priad takes down 5 Dark Eldar in 3 seconds with a sword and shield.


Page 64
Another bounced off and decapitated a nearby sapling. As the third bullet hit, the giant deftly tilted his arm very slightly, and ricocheted it off sideways straight into the face of the fourth primul. The creature's head split like a blood-fruit and the primul was savagely thumped backwards, off the ground, its legs wide. It landed, spread-eagled, on its back.
Dark Eldar pistol wepaon (probably splinter). Gotta love how Priad just shrugs and redirects the bullet right into another DE. One thing we get used to in this novel is that DE become utter fodder for Space Marines, as if it were a forge world book :D


Page 65
Before the third primul could fire its pistol again, the giant whipped his right arm over and threw his sword like a lance. It struck the primul through the chest, lifting it off its feet with the force of the throw, and impaled it to an olive tree's trunk, its feet dangling and twitching.

The remaining primul, wicked blades in both hands, was dancing round behind the giant. With his free right hand, the giant grabbed the heavy firearm that had been knocking at his hip on its long strap, and shot the primul twice, in the face and the chest. The double boom of the massive gun was so loud it made Antoni cry out and cover her ears. The force of the shots tore the primul apart, and slammed its mangled body across the grove. It bounced sideways off a tree trunk and fell into the bracken.
Priad throws his sword hard enough to send DE flying back and the effect of bolter on Dark Eldar.


Page 69
"I need to give you a shot. This area is irradiated very badly. You need this, or you'll suffer the consequences of exposure."
Amusingly that Princeps, the dog, is resistant to this sam eradiation (some hunting dog accompanying them) - the dog is also able to fight with a Dark Eldar (grab its neck in jaws before reacting, etc.) The DE come off badly in this novel (which seems to be rather predictable for alot of novels.)

Also the radiation inoculation. :P


Page 76
The primul lay on the ground, mangled and torn. It had lost the better part of both legs and one arm. Fused bones protruded from the shattered armour and blistered, tattered meat. The white ash around was stained almost black with its blood. Weakly, it raised its narrow, lean head and looked at her. Its white flesh was spattered with crimson blood. One of its leering eyes had burst.
It looked around, its head unsteady, and saw the casket. Nothing remained of the box itself - just a wide, smouldering crater in the ground where the ash of the forest inferno had been blown back to expose a bowl of seared, raw earth. The jaw-bone had also been destroyed. All that remained were a few of the chisel teeth, littered on the ground, steaming.
Effect of an Astartes-scale grenade.

The box was described as being big and heavy enough to need two hands to support, and to carry a jawbone that was from a "giant" - bigger than the Space marine. I believe it was an ork skull, but I dont remember for sure.


Page 79

- Priad notes here he's merely a junior battle brother of the Iron Snakes. Even more humiliaton fot eh Dark Eldar.


Page 84-85
The salt-pan glows like milk in the sunlight. Visor tints and nictitating bionic eyelids dim the glare to a bright blue translucence. The brothers are silent as they skirt the littered rocks along the edge of the depression, moving single file through the shadows.

...
No words are spoken or needed. Visor arrays are matched by sharp senses. Ranges are judged and logged; terrain is assessed and scanned. Brother-Sergeant Raphon uses his auspex to watch ahead.
Iron snakes vsior and sensory capability.


Page 86
Raphon sees it for the first time. Rosetta Excelsis Refinery Nine: a ten kilometre-square edifice of riveted black metal and orange pipe work, looking like a wasp crushed into the desert by a great heel. Oily girder work laces the structures and pouting, soot-mouthed stacks vent dark fumes and the occasional flame-bellied belch of smoke into the crystal-blue desert sky. Raphon looks at it for a while - a few seconds probably, but for him an eternity of contemplation. He knows, for he has been told, that this is a vital facility, sucking black fluid out of the porous rock buried deep beneath the salt-pan. Ten weeks ago, the pipelines that run from here to the cargo port at Alpha Rosetta sputtered dry. The precious supply of fuel had been staunched. Without its flow, the armoured battalions of the Imperial Guard on half a dozen neighbouring worlds had ground to a halt.
I guess the Reef Stars is pretty conflict-heavy given how many worlds in close proximity are at war. Rather interesting that the conflicts rely on a steady, constant supply of fuel from this refinery rather than relying on stockpiles.


Page 88
Raphon fires twice. One drops without a head; the other reels, his spine removed in an explosion of blood, gristle and bone shards.
Bolter fire vs cultists.


Page 88
Chilles and Xander catch a dozen of the enemy as they panic. They impose a crossfire that pulverises all. More emerge, firing back with lasguns and autocannon. A searing shot marks Xander's shoulder guard with a denting scorch. Memnes moves in around them, setting up a third part to the crossfire. Like the three suns with their inescapable shadows, the three tracing lines of their bolter fire pummel into and explode corrupted bags of flesh. Memnes chuckles as he does the Emperor's work.
Cultists vs Bolters mk 2.


Page 89
Calignes moves from bunker to bunker, slaughtering. Through one doorway, he turns to face the stained features of a screaming heathen who opens up on him with an autocannon. Thumped backwards three paces by the succession of impacts to his carapace, Calignes grunts. His boltgun has been blown from his fist and his smallest finger has been vaporised. The autocannon cycles suddenly on empty, and as the cultist gropes for a reload, Calignes rushes him, exploding his head with a clap of his augmented fists.
Man portable autocannon does only modest damage to power armor.


Page 89
Maced is rushed by twenty cultists who stream over him like ants, bludgeoning him with girder strips and wrenches. He laughs as he kills them, crushing necks, splintering limbs, punching his fists through bodies.
Contrast this with what happens in Gray Knight.


Page 89
There is a hole clean through his torso, a hole that passes right through him. As his legs give out, Chilles screams in rage. He was not finished. His face hits the grille deck, denting it.
They all feel his death. Through the rapport of inter-fed life signs, they all feel it.
Space Marine bolt fire. Apparently the members of the squad get a visual relay of Chilles last thought.



Page 90
Priad bowls the primed grenade in his hand with such fury it smacks the Dark Tusk off his feet as it strikes him in the gut. He falls, almost comical, spread-eagled around the impact. Then the grenade ignites.

Priad is drenched in mauve fluid.
Grenade > CSM power armor.


Page 90
Raphon kills it. He squeezes the trigger of his boltgun until the entire sickle clip is empty and a hurricane of rounds have hammered the Chaos Marine into a heap of organic and metal wreckage wreathed in a mist of blood.
Between this and what happneed to Chilles, the Astartes boltguns seem far more effective (penetration and raw damage) than the man portable autocannon.


Page 91
Maced is dead. Poisonous splinter barbs from some inhuman Dark Tusk gun have blown his legs and lower torso to shreds. A dirty, toxic knife has silenced his screaming rage.
Dark Eldar weaponry?


Page 91
As he strides forward with Priad, Raphon uses his auspex to judge the deployment of Damocles. The surgical precision of their strike is melting as the men turn back to avenge their fallen brothers. The assault is hesitating.

Raphon will not allow this. Keying open his comm again, he barks off a string of orders that redirects and fortifies the ebbing wash of his men's advance. He quotes the motivational sermons on the use and abuse of vengeance in battle that they all heard during tactical indoctrination on the fortress-moon, Karybdis.
Iron snakes command and control.


Page 92
Xander takes a hit that rips a thermal waste dissipater off his backpack. In return, he puts a bolter round in through the Dark Tusk's left visor socket. As the Chaos servant falls, thrashing, Andromak roasts him slowly with his plasma cannon.
Another CSM goes down hard.


Page 93
The Tusk gets a hand around Priad's wrist and hauls him over, but this is a mistake. It has cleared the shot. Though still gripped, Priad fires twice, the point-blank shots shattering the Tusk's helmet and skull and igniting its power pack.
Bolter vs Helmeted Astartes skull.


Page 97-98
Pindor works to complete the stowage of the explosives. He is stripped down to the waist to allow him access to the cramped space under the bore-head, his armour stacked nearby. Fluid-heavy feed lines cross his naked carapace from the belt mount, held in place by flesh staples. His shoulders bear the old scars of punishment rituals carried out on Karybdis. Pindor always scored low on morning firing rites, but his expertise at close-fighting and explosives have made him indispensable. Scar tissue, puffy and pink as coral, bunches and twists as he works.
Self explantory I suppose.


Page 106-107
Imperial Guardsmen - a massed force of three hundred thousand, mainly Leoparda stormtroops and Donorian light armour -had been deployed to Eidon in the first months to effect a liberation. They had failed, ground to a standstill.
Dark Eldar incursion onto a planet. Note the use of storm troops and 'light armour' regiments. I gather they're more grenadiers and less "Storm troopers"


Page 108
Inside the tent was a vast, round table, the surface of which was a glass plate illuminated from beneath by moving lights that showed the contours and arrangement of the city and the disposition of the troops. Guard officers stood around it, and they all looked up and stepped back solemnly as the distinguished warrior and his retinue entered.
IG strategic map, I suppose.


Page 109
Corson led Petrok to the table. The Librarian looked down at it, his sharp eyes clicking as they took in every detail, every flickering unit light-point, every drifting rune. Those eyes fed the data back into his brain, his greatest weapon, where they could be composed, considered, analysed, dissected.

He smiled.

"Master?" Rodos asked, noticing the expression.

"Three point fluid dispersal along two insertions. Typical of dear Captain Phobor. Just as he did on Tull."
Librarian Petrok's ability to analyze tactical information.


Page 109
Rodos had a long way to go before he would master the techniques of memory and comparison that allowed a great tactical mind to take in all battle assessments at a glance.

But the real reason Petrok had allowed himself to smile was not his immediate recognition of Phobor's favourite tactic. It was a simpler thing. The table reminded Petrok of the strategium board where he had learned his craft long ago from his old, beloved master, Nector. It was a whimsy, but it pleased him to enjoy it. He had, as he liked to remind himself, a soul.

"These here?" he asked, tapping the table-plate with his fingertips.

"Three battalions of Leoparda, in reserve." The major general's voice was hollow and scared.
more on Petrok's ability to assess battle info.


Page 110
Petrok put his hands on the tabletop and leaned down, looking deeper, no longer making a tactical, forebrain assessment. He was reaching out with the darker, more profound parts of his mind. He was using his gifts to see beyond the now, into the when and the if, to sense the fortunes of the battle.

A chill fell on the tent enclosure. Frost formed on the tabletop glass around Petrok's hands. One of the junior Guard officers fainted and was bustled away out of sight. The bearers began to murmur and bark, until Rodos quieted them with a savage look.

Petrok ignored them all. He was locked with the patterns of past, present and future. He was seeing behind reality, watching the way the structures moved and meshed.

It was... perfect. Phobor's ploy had been entirely appropriate. The vanguards and support lines were placed correctly. Eidon City would fall within four hours, with minimal losses on their part. His report would convey little to Phobor except to bolster his confidence.
Except... something. Something small and awry.
Its worth noting the "awry" thing was a single Astartes squad about to face trouble, and Petrok's assessment let him know of this danger fairly rapidly and precisely. It's an example of using precog to anticipate and influence combat.



Page 111
"The chart doesn't show it."

"I feel what glass and electrocrystal patterns do not. Damocles is in danger."
He senses a disturbance in the force.



Page 113
"You think I don't know!" bellowed Andromak, fussing at his hot weapon, replacing a feed line that was about to melt out.
Replacing a (ammo?) feed line on the plasma gun. I guess he carries spares.



Page 114
He surveyed the blistering firelight through the enhanced optics of his helmet. None had fallen so far. Andromak and Pindor were buffered in the gully. Calignes, Illyus and Xander were pinned in the open. Natus, Scyllon and Rules were ranged out behind the position he and Memnes shared.
I'm guessing telescopic sight.



Page 114-115
Priad flicked out the data-slate from his thigh pouch and checked again across the detailed light map of the city's eastern approach. He studied the ground's swell, the access points, the fortifications. The Imperial planners had built it well.
And these dark eldar had taken it in a night.
Curse them! Damocles would do the same in an hour!
He slid a stud on the side of the slate and overlaid the structural data. It showed the density and thicknesses of the rock walls, the hard points and pilings of the defences. It betrayed the actual physical weaknesses of the land and buildings they fought for.
Something... something...
There was indeed something. Priad switched the overlay back and forth, matching and rematching. According to the old charts, there was a section of the east wall built of compacted rock shards rather than ferro-concrete as an expediency during construction.
Priad felt his palms dampen with anticipation inside his gauntlets. He rolled onto his backside, his shoulders against the rock, and began to copy the data from the slate into a vox-message for Andromak. Dark eldar splinterfire stitched the green rock around him and covered Priad and Memnes with a fine, lime green dust.
"Andromak!" Priad rasped over the helmet vox to the squad's standard bearer. "Open your data-link and stand by to receive!"
Andromak responded, a clipped atonal bark over the metallic vox. A red light on Priad's armour cuff glowed darkly to show that the link was open, and Priad sent the vox-pict.
"I see it, brother-sergeant!" Andromak's tinny voice came back. "You want me to hit it?"
Assessment of map/tactical data and relaying it from data slate to another Marine.



Page 116
On four, Andromak swept up out of cover and sent a blazing blue spear of plasma energy down the gully with pinpoint precision. Green rock exploded in a vomit of flame, brighter and louder than the white heat crisping and fountaining along the horizon.
Damocles moved. The Space Marines broke from cover, firing as they went, gunning up at the walls.
Smoke washed across them.
They made ten metres, twenty.
Then Priad saw the wall. It was unbuckled, unbroken, still standing despite the oozing, molten burn Andromak's plasma gun had inflicted upon it.
Plasma gun effect on a wall. Not easy to calc.



Page 116
A splinter shot clipped Scyllon's leg and spun him down.
Kules faltered as glancing shots whipped around him.
Natus went down, crying out, as his left arm came away raggedly at the shoulder in a spray of fire and blood and armour shreds.
Splinter fire on Space Marine armor.



Page 117
A smoking hole had laid Illyus's visor open, and blood was dribbling out. Illyus had lost an eye and a cheek to a rebounding splinter round. Priad crawled over, pulling out his medical field pack, spraying jets of wound-sealing skin-wrap into the helmet hole. Illyus was still conscious. His fortitude was astonishing, even for a Space Marine. He mumbled some poor joke to his brother-sergeant, though half his face was gone.


Page 117
He glanced down and saw the raw, black-edged hole in his thigh. A splinter round had punched right through his armour and through the meat of his leg. There was no pain. Adrenaline was washing the agony away - that, and the augmented systems of his body.
Later, there would be pain, but that was not his chief concern. He hoped his Astartes physique would be enough to fight the venoms and filths with which the Dark Ones coated their weapons.
But the wound had self-cauterised. He would not bleed out, at least.
Splinter fire vs Face plate.



Page 121
Brother Andromak swung back out of cover again and sent a boiling spear of plasma fire across at the wall. It blistered and scorched the Eidon City fortifications. As soon as the blast stopped, the enemy renewed its shooting. A blitz of splinterfire and las-rounds hosed the approach. Rock and earth threw up in thousands of individual impact geysers. The green boulder sheltering Xander fractured and exploded, sending him scrabbling for better protection.

Again, Andromak!' Petrok cried over the vox-link. "Strike again."

Andromak did, staying on his feet and taking a glancing deflection to the shoulder as he triggered his massive weapon.

Something shivered as his plasma fire touched it. A split low down branched up into jagged cracks. It was like watching a leafless tree grow. Andromak blasted again for good measure.
A section of wall buckled and tore down, spilling dark, shattered bodies with it. A further explosion blew the wall out. Debris rained down, and a tidal wave of green dust choked its way down the approach.
"Now! For Karybdis!" Petrok cried.

Enhancing their optics against the wall of smoke, Damocles squad advanced behind him towards the breach.
Assaulting the wall with sustained plasma fire again



Page 123
Priad hit it with a bolter round that exploded in the middle of its chest and blew it across the chamber where it dropped, squealing, limbs thrashing in a death frenzy. Its blood painted semi-circles across the wall above it.


Page 124 - one of the Iron Snakes gets separated and slays an unknown number of Dark Eldar who ambush him in 5-6 seconds.



Page 124
Kules's spent bolter was glowing white-hot as he used it to cudgel an assailant before throwing it aside and laying in with his blade.
Bolter glowing white hot but apparently not melted.



Page 124
Memnes half-carried Illyus forward, and the two of them laid down a crossfire that slaughtered the eldar things in a haze of thermite smoke and blood.
Space Mareins using thermite in some manner.



Page 126
Andromak was beside his commanders, lancing his plasma beams into the choked confines, slaughtering dozens of the foe as they charged and panicked.
His plasma gun seems to have a large ammo capacity.



Page 126
"It is done, Priad. We have slain a thousand over and again."
Priad pulled off his helmet and cast it to the ground. It floated away a few yards on a stream of enemy blood that gurgled down the hallway. The air was too close, too full of smoke and blood vapour. They had expended virtually all of their ammunition and most of their physical strength, but they had killed infamous numbers
A small number of Spac eMarines slaughter huge numbers of aliens. Seems rather against DE doctrine normally though.


Page 137
The bodies of the fallen cultists, some six hundred or more, had been stacked in an outlying granary and torched with flamers. The pungent scents of burning filled the air, despite the heavy rain.
There are forty Astartes there.



Page 137
"They call themselves the Children of Khorne." Mabuse had said, his lofty voice faltering just slightly as he was forced to pronounce the dark name. "We can presume the pun is lost on them. My investigation has shown that the taint was brought in from off-world. Nybana is the main lift-port, and a large proportion of the population are indigent freight handlers and cargo-men from a dozen other planets. Some vermin coven, practising the foul ways secretly in their midst, carried the poison here and set it loose into the population."
Ha ha! humor! Also apparently we have a chaos cult from off-planet, carted in from other places along with other workers.


Page 139
It took Priad and his squad a full day's hard drive across the rainswept land to reach Nyru, and a further day to confirm it was free of taint. Another day's trek brought them to Yyria, which also proved to be clean, though the fear and resentment of the townsfolk kept them suspicious and prolonged the search.

Another day and a half s drive through fallow uplands followed, and the wet season greeted them with low storms, squalls of bloody vapour and hard, red rain. They approached Flax on the seventh day after leaving Nybana. By then, reports had drifted in from the other two roving squads. Pliades squad had found cultists in the township of Broom, far to the south, and had been engaged in a running street battle for a day and a night. Manes squad had uncovered another nest of evil in a township called Sephoni, and had been forced to put it to the torch.
Damocles reached Flax farmship.
7 days of constant driving. We're bound to be talking covering many thousands of km (assuming top speed) which is quite a range for Astartes vehicles.


Page 140 - Priad speaks with the main base at the main township .. by now they've covered 3 townships out of the 4, so they are at least a good 6000 km away.



Page 142
Priad flexed the long, segmented fingers of the metal glove, and watched as blue sparks hissed from digit to digit. The claw weighed close to seventy kilos and was three times the size of a human hand. But even without the strength-enhancing mechanics of his Mark VII power armour, Priad would not have been tested by the weight. He was of the Adeptes Astartes. He was a post-human titan, gene-forged to serve the Emperor of Terra from birth to death. Stripped of his armour, he was still a force of destruction, many times a man. Armoured, his face hidden behind the expressionless visor of the Space Marine helm, his limbs encased in electric-motivated ceramite plates, his senses magnified a thousandfold, he was a god-killer.
70 kilo lightning claw. That is... heavy. Insanely heavy. Also 1000x better senses inside power armor.


Page 144 - again one of the Snakes is partly unarmored to allow for more ease of movement (this time driving the Rhino) they re-armor prior ot arriving at their locataion about ten minutes out.



Page 145
The fan of Iron Snakes spread down the main street of the farmship, scanning to all sides with their auspex units, weapons braced ready in armoured hands.
Apparently the auspex aren't handheld, if they're carrying weapons.



Page 147
Memnes snapped open the faceplate of his helmet and slid it up so that the red drizzle flecked his bare face. Had any other member of Damocles done such a thing without permission, Priad would have reprimanded him for presenting a target
I guess for the Iron Snakes not wearing a helmet or exposing your face is a no no.



Page 147
They switched to night vision and saw the place in a ghostly green phosphorescence.
Night vision mode in the helmets.


Page 150
But the statue of the Emperor, holding a sword in one hand and a ploughshare in the other, had been decapitated, and the altar rails blasted into matchwood by more gunfire.

..

Priad raised his bolter, swung around and blasted the deformed statue and the corn-doll into fragments with a burst of explosive rounds.
Bolter fire demolishing a statue.



Page 150
A small white dot showed on his auspex suddenly, moving and jinking in a disordered pattern. Fifteen paces off, behind the row of agri-shops and smithies.
"Contact!" he reported.

Calignes and Pindor saw it too, and the trio swung around to address the buildings on the left side. Memnes crossed to them, readying his boltgun.
15-20 m or so range ofr auspex at least.



Page 151
The pair made a parallel course to Xander and Memnes, marking the blue dots of the Space Marines on their auspex scanners. The white dot blinked ahead, between the two fronts.
Space Marines show up distinct from the target in the scanners. Some sort of beacon probably.



Page 151
The light was bad and the rain heavier. The swirling black clouds seemed to be right down low over their heads. Even with night vision optics, visibility was poor.
Night vision optics again.



PAge 153
Priad tuned up the Rhino's main auspex and hunted for Pindor, chasing the tell-tale trace of his armour, the identifying signal. There was nothing. It was as if Brother Pindor had simply vanished.
Rhinos have auspex as well.



Page 153-154
"'I simply won't accept that he's just vanished." Priad cast a dour look at the Rhino's auspex unit. "You felt life here, and we haven't found that on our scopes either."

"I felt something, brother-sergeant. It may have been that thing."

"You felt fear, old friend. That thing faced down four Iron Snakes and took one of them as a trophy. It was not afraid."

"True. So we cannot trust the auspex."
"No, indeed!" said Priad. "Something's blocking it - something that's hiding Pindor, the locals... and that thing."
"Except at close range. Xander drew us to it when he got a fix."

Priad mused. "Adamantium sometimes blocks auspex scans."

"There's none of that here, I fancy. Nor do I know of any local substance that can kill Imperial scans. If the auspexes can't be trusted, it's because of... of witchery. The talents of the dark to lie and befuddle."

"Aye, I thought as much. All our instruments are blind. You were the only one who even glimpsed it."

"My visor was raised." noted Memnes.

Priad opened his own visor and turned to the men. "We hunt a great evil that is invisible to our instruments. Open your visors. Use your eyes well."
An interesting commentary on the limits of sensors and other electronic instrumentation in power armour. apparently even the auto senses can be futzed by the right sort of Chaos trickery.. but not the mk1 eyeball. Funny that. Also adamantium can block auspex scans (At least of certain kinds) which may say something about its properties.
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Page 155
Illyus and Scyllon found them in the basement crypts of the Ecclesiarchy temple at the north end of the main street. Three hundred and fifty farmers and family members, cowered terrified behind locked and barricaded doors. Why the auspexes hadn't sensed them, none of Damocles could say.
Again weird auspex fuckery here.


Page 157
All that they had surmised was true. The thing that stalked Hekat was only visible to naked sight. Mechanics and bionics, auspexes and scanners were worthless.
As I said...



Page 157
Kules emptied his clip into the monster. It was busy killing Illyus and thus formed a stationary target for an instant. If it hadn't paused to rip Illyus asunder, it would have been moving too fast for Kules to see.

He blew it apart with a dozen placed shots. Tissue and bloody matter exploded into the downpour.
I'm not sure if speed is the reason its invisible, but I doubt it. Either way it goes down to a dozen rounds.



Page 159
Kules slammed down his visor and waded into the chamber, percussive rounds pinging off his power armour. He opened fire, swinging his boltgun, exploding one cultist after another.
Cultist gunfire useless against Marine armour. The same can't be said for Marine boltguns.



Page 159
Hekat and its people, all converted to the Khorne belief, wanted an Astartes as a sacrifice. If they could ritually spill the blood of one of the Emperor's own, they could vouch a spell that would crack open the heavens and let loose an avatar of damned Khorne himself.
Apparently Space Marine lives can mean more than normal humans. It could be something to do with them being perceived as the Emperor's "Champions"


Page 160
Their armour and their bolters were a match for the superior numbers of the cultists, but barely.
Andromak lost a finger to an auto-round.

Xander fell and was beaten half to death with ploughshares before Natus pulled him free.

Scyllon took a scythe blade in the arm and bled for weeks.

The rampaging cultists overwhelmed the Rhino in the main street. Calignes, weak from blood loss, had almost passed out. They set it ablaze and ripped him limb from limb.
Memnes fell, without a sound, a bullet through his exposed face.
They ended up killing 470 cultists, so having some more mundane firepower batter through eventually isn't surprising.



Page 174
Chapter Master Seydon was just a shadow: robed, mysterious and towering. His cloak was made of broken, polished wyrm-horn pieces linked together like a jigsaw puzzle by gold wire. Slow respiration throbbed from the exchanger tanks under his cloak. His head was cowled, but there was a suggestion of inner light coming from where his eyes should have been. He was a good metre taller than Priad.
Iron Snakes Chapter Master.



Page 191
He put his hands to his face. His nose was broken, and his left cheek bone too. The blow would have crushed a normal human skull.
Toughness of Space Marine skulls.



Page 196 - Space Marine flamers are effective against daemons.


Page 208
Priad slowly tore his gaze away from the desiccated landscape flashing by below and consulted the luminous red screen of the data-plate above his window. Bearing, height, airspeed, time to set-down...
data screen in some kind of lander.



Page 208
"Two minutes," he said. "Activate armour"
A series of low whines answered him as ten M37 dorsal-mounted power units woke up.
...
"Ninety seconds."
Power systems on Astartes units take less than 30 seconds to power up. Whether it's a battery or a reactor we don't know.



Page 208
"Is vital monitoring satisfactory, Brother Khiron?"
"I have ten steady life-beats, brother-sergeant," replied the squad's Apothecary promptly.
Space Marine vitals data linked to the Apothecary.


Page 209
Priad's own helmet clicked into place and abruptly he was breathing cool, internal air-supply and seeing everything through the bright green display of his visor optics.

"Auto weapons check." Priad instructed, his voice an electronic murmur carried by the intersuit vox. The individual data-plates before them scrolled with diagnostic reports fed from their racked arsenal.

"Run auto-sense target trial." he said.

The plates flickered with rapid test patterns that measured and calibrated each Marine's targeting systems. Through his visor optics, Priad locked up six vari-range practice icons as they appeared on his data-plate, freezing each one in turn with a hard, white graphic cross. Satisfied, the plate responded by displaying a default aquila symbol. He muttered a prayer of thanks.
More power armour preparations, particulariyl the targeting/weapons stuff.


Page 209
Priad switched his visor display to access the view through the lander's forward pict-readers. He saw emerald crags and a lime-green sky rushing past him, overlaid with rapidly changing graphics of trajectory, contour and flight path prediction. A column of numerical data crawled up the left side of the panorama. Priad knew the emerald rocks were really pink, and the lime sky really smoke-blue, but when the city came into view at last, he longed to know what colour that truly was.
receiving visual feeds from other sources.


Page 215
The bio-engineered metabolisms of the Astartes warriors could go without conventional rest or regular food for weeks. If pushed, a twenty-minute restorative nap, which could be taken upright with armour locked, and an intravenous nutrient pack, could prolong their operational capacity.
Space Marine endurance.


Page 217
The furs and gold that clad him were worth the annual economy of some frontier colonies, and were so heavy, teams of silver-painted children had to carry the train. Naldo himself floated on a suspensor plate that surfed him across the tiled floor.
Suspensor plate propulsion I guess.


Page 217
His majesty's face was a pale green blob in Priad's optics. Unbidden, automatic target graphics framed Naldo's visage with white crosshairs. Priad dismissed his visor's treasonous suggestion and the icon vanished.
More targeting data.


Page 218
Priad spent his time fixing and logging faces. His optic gaze wandered through the thickets of the crowd, blink-recording and tagging each face and figure he saw and adding them to his suit's internal memory. Not only persons, but the structure and dimension of the hall, the number and site of the exits, the position of the band. A warrior of the phratry was taught to assess and catalogue his location for tactical purposes wherever possible, usually a quick matter of key points. Now he had time to waste.

The number of valves or strings on each instrument. The number of frets. The number of buttons on a jacket or gemstones on a gown train. The number of facets on a wine glass. The number of beads on the chandeliers.

He logged and identified the robust commander of the local PDF, flamboyant in red satin robes. Five subsector governors and their staffs. Lord Militant Farnsey, two Navy commodores and a cluster of Guard officers who, like Damocles, had been sent to the coronation to represent their institutions. The Princess Royal of Cartomax, a beautiful young woman with a surgically perfect face framed by the gauzy fields of a personal force-veil, and perfect breasts pushed up and out in a balcony of diamonds. The Imperial Hierarch, Bishop Osokomo, his bulk supported on grav plates, his extravagant mitre three metres tall. A ranking emissary of the Navis Nobilite wearing a holographic face to hide his unseemly third eye. Nine senior adepts of the Guild Astropathicus. The chief clerk of the Administratum Iorgu, with sixteen higher recollectors. Six merchant princes.
Earlier its noted there are some 5,000 people here, so one imagines Priad is logging them all, which I suspect would say something about the speed of data capture and the memory storage. Note the Subsector governors mentioned.

Again use of grav plates to support overweight bastards. Especially priestly bastards with huge hats. Also force feils and holographic eyes.



Page 219
The outer passageway was dim and quiet, though Priad's optics saw into the shadows as if it was day.
More night vision stuff.



Page 221
Warily, Priad followed the inquisitor into an alcove between thick basalt columns where light reeds fizzled and glowed. Mabuse raised his golden hand again, and the little finger detached with a tiny click and hovered beside them at shoulder height on a beam of repulsor energy. Priad's visor-view suddenly fogged and scrambled.

"Open your visor." he heard Mabuse say, his words dulled by Priad's armour.
Priad undid the magna-lock and removed his helmet, looking down into Mabuse's eyes.

"Don't worry," Mabuse said, gesturing lightly to his hovering digit. "It's generating an anti-vox./pict field around us so we can speak openly. There is danger here, Priad."
Privacy field.


Page 226 - water cannons used on riots to disperse them.. ie nonlethal methods



Page 227
On Priad's behest, Kules had made contact with their orbiting battle-barge. The transmitted picts he had received in answer were troubling. Six satellite towns around Iorgu City showed signs of rioting and civil unrest. Whole stretches of desert had bloomed with unseasonal foliage and bright flowers, turning the pink landscape green and white for thousands of hectares.
Satellite feeds and orbital data transmission.


Page 228-229 - intersting that the Lord militant attneding here thought he could order Damocles Squad around. Maybe he's just that stupid or arrogant.


Page 230
"Here!" cried Scyllon, reading off his auspex. In a private side bay sat several of the lift-litters and repulsor barges used in the coronation procession. Amongst them was a long-hulled land-yacht of luxury-build.
Repulsor vehicles I imagine.



PAge 231
She gave an indignant shriek and shot him. Point blank, with a micro-laser from under her furs. The blast scorched his chest plate and flashed warning sigils across his visor-scope. Scyllon and Aekon had their bolters aimed at her in a heartbeat.
Digital laser.



Page 234
Mabuse was waiting for them under the lintel of the wide doorway. He held a laspistol in his real hand, and the fused unrecognisable remains of several corpses sprawled on the flagstones around him.

Mabuse raised his golden hand and the roaming digit flew up and snapped back into place.

"Come on." he said, turning to move into the Mound. Priad saw he carried what seemed to be a heavy knapsack on his back.

Would you care to tell me what's going on?' Priad asked.

"There isn't really time." Mabuse replied curtly.

"Those bodies... who did you kill?"
That must be a powerful laspistol. ASsuming it inflcited third degree burns on them we're talking hundreds of kilojoules to several MJ per shot (depending on exact severity of burns and surface area.) OF course, he is an Inquisitor. If we figure flash burns (2nd to 3rd degree) just on the face/torso area alone (200-400 sq cm for face, 600-900 for torso maybe.. call it 800-1400 sq cm total) you get at least 20 kj to 70 kj at the very least, and possibly twice that for more severe burns.


Page 235
As if to underscore his words, a salvo of autogun fire whipped down the entrance tunnel from within, the large calibre shells ricocheting off the stone floor and low roof. Natus cursed as several rounds struck his armour.

Priad ran into the gunfire, his bolter juddering in his fists. On his visor, the ammo tally dropped.
The target cross jumped and flickered as it searched the green gloom for a body.

A flash of muzzle discharge, hot white against the emerald background.

The cross locked.

Priad fired and a human figure tumbled out of cover with such force it bounced off the wall behind it.
Bolter targeting.


Page 236
Mabuse leaned over Priad's shoulder and reached out with his golden hand. The ring finger projected a thin, searing fusion beam almost a metre long that grotesquely peeled the corpse's flesh away from his forehead. Priad shuddered as he saw the rune branded into the front of the skull.

"Cultist." Mabuse said, switching off the fusion beam. "The inner brand, the bone-burn. In all my years of hunting these devils, I've never found out how they do that. How they brand the mark into the bone without blemishing the skin over it."

"I've never seen its like." Priad admitted.

"It's the mark of a powerful and ancient cult," said Mabuse matter-of-factly. "I've terminated their activities on three other worlds. I was dismayed to find them at work here."
That's one damn useful hand. Also with a built in fusion beam. Also we see some pretty fancy means of Chaos branding.


Page 237
" Some great evil was here... had been here since before the rise of man. The Iorguan first comers vanquished it and built this mound over it. The treasures are the components of a stasis system that keeps it dormant."
stasis tech.


Page 239
The gout of fire wrapped itself around Priad and his armour sang out an imperilled series of alarms. Priad strode through the flame and laid in with his bolter and his power claw. Three cultists fell to the spitting gun and two more to the venerable claw-weapon.
Flamethrower does shit to Priad.


Page 248
How long now? Sixteen minutes. He'd been counting carefully, but those in the phratry who knew such things said it was easy to lose count. After seven or eight minutes, despite the closed function of an enhanced pulmonary system, despite osmotic oxygen exchange, despite metabolic toxin dispersal, the mind would begin to cloud. Poison accumulated in the bloodstream, adding to the effects of temperature and pressure. Errors would start to creep in.

If he had miscounted, even by a half minute, if his mind had clouded, then it was already over, and he was dead. And a fool.

Some in the phratry had warned of the narcosis dreams. The calm serenity that overtook the unwary or the ill-prepared. The dreams were comfortable, they said. Beautiful. They made a man believe he was fine, and that he could last down there forever. They were the symptoms of a death already half-complete.
Bottom of some trench.. its dark.. so I'm guessing pretty deep (hundreds or thousands of meters?) Astartes can handle at least 16 minutes underwater.


Page 249
Seventeen minutes. His eyes, rendered responsive to optic-therapy since his fourteenth year thanks to the occulobe, read shape and form in the lightless depth.
Seventeen minutes now, also comments on Space Marine vision.



Page 257
"You must have made a count. How long?"
"Twenty-six." Aekon said.
"Not possible."
"I'm fairly sure. Twenty-six. Give or take ten seconds. My count did slip, but it couldn't have been less than that."
"Your count was wrong." Khiron said. "No one manages over twenty-three."
Limits on Space Marine ability to hold breath. At least for the Iron Snakes.


Page 258
A searing pain shot through the meat of Priad's left calf. He breathed in, not making a sound, and slowly turned his head to look. In amongst the roots around his legs, a green-back viper, two metres long, had made its hidden nest. Disturbed, it had sunk its fangs into his leg under the back of his knee where the sides of the greave met. Its bite was still in place, pumping venom into his flesh.

Priad did not move. His leg began to burn, as if a heated poker had been rammed into the marrow of his shin-bone. A pulse began to thump in his throat and in the base of his skull. Local hunters in the Isthmus used green-back venom to tip their ape-arrows. One scratch would kill a full grown simian big enough to feed a village for a week.

The pulsing and the fire grew worse. Priad remained still. The viper disengaged, its sacs spent, and coiled away into the root bole. Priad could see the glistening red puncture wounds where the blood was weeping out, refusing to clot. He remained calm, allowing his enhanced system to cope. His implanted haemastamen began its rapid ministry of his enhanced blood, altering its constituent make-up to fight the venom. His secondary heart and oolitic kidney started their conjoined detoxification work, pumping and filtering his tainted bloodstream. Larraman cells sped to the wound and, on contact with the air, formed a skin substitute to close it, overwhelming the anti-coagulant properties of the snake venom.

For a long thirty seconds, Priad felt weak and nauseous, deafened by the blood thumping in his ears.

Then the burning discomfort eased. The pain passed away. The only signs of the injury that remained were the scab-tissue on his leg and a swelling of the Betcher's glands in his hard palate.

Rather than neutralising the deadly toxin, his sophisticated body systems had captured it and taken it for storage to the glands of his mouth.

A good omen. Now, for a time, this Iron Snake brother could bite like his namesake. As a rule, the Chapter did not actively practise use of the glands, deeming it unmanly and crude. But when accident made it possible, it was considered a benediction from the God-Emperor. To be envenomed by snake bite was lucky, a singular omen craved by every member of the phratry.
Space Marine poison immunity kicking in. The interesting thing is how the Betcher's gland here will not manufacture its own poison but apparently can 'recycle' toxins they are infected with, although it is not actively employed by the Snakes.



Page 275
"Brother, what is the number?" Priad asked as his comrade came over.

"Twenty-five squads." Strabo said, unable to disguise the excitement in his voice.

"Twenty-five?" Priad had not known the Chapter field such numbers in his lifetime. Not in one place. In the great age of the Reef Wars perhaps, but in modern times? Even at Eidon they'd raised only six.
It seems like company level formations are unusual for the Iron Snakes. They seem more adapted to small-unit tactics and dispersion.



Page 281
One by one, the men reached Priad. The drill was simple enough: each man had to hack out a block of ice with his axe, then run with it down twenty kilometres of the glacier. Who came first and who last was not the question. The block simply had to weigh in excess of thirty kilos by the time it was measured at the finish. There was no weigh-in at the start. Each man had to gauge the weight of his block by eye and common sense, allowing for that part of it that would be lost to melt during the course of the drill. Underestimate, and the block would be less than the crucial thirty kilos by the time it was delivered. Indeed, on the first day, Aekon's inexperience led him to cut a slab that couldn't have been more than twenty-seven kilos to begin with.

But overestimation was a handicap too. Cut too much of a margin of error, and the runner would be labouring under far more weight than he needed to manage. On his second run, Aekon compensated for his initial error, and brought back a block that was over thirty-eight kilos. He had barely been able to stand by the time he arrived.

Failure to meet the thirty-kilo cut-off required a candidate to repeat the drill, alone if necessary, as many times as it took for him to get a pass.
Space Marine tests and trials.



Page 294
"A massive set of jaws." said Petrok, rising slowly to a sitting position and holding a deep laceration on his chest together. Priad realised he wasn't talking about the bear.

...

"I don't think it was. But you were there. And there was a massive set of jaws. As big as the bear's. But the teeth weren't sharp. They were blunt. Does that mean anything?"
Petrok apparently survives a massive bite to his chest that tears his chest open. Also this is a reference to a vision Petrok had I believe.. referencing Ork skulls (being as large as a bear)



Page 295
They had come, not swift and vicious in the night as was the way of the malign primuls, but bold and loud and slow. Their ships, if such cumbersome machine monstrosities deserved the name ships, had arrived like lost moons, slowly tacking in through the outer magnetic fields and taking up low orbits like wayward, lumpen meteors, visible to the naked eye.

They made no effort to conceal themselves, or even to effect a fast deployment. Surface batteries around some of the northern cities began firing on the menacing objects, but though hits were recorded, no damage seemed to result. The greenskins didn't much seem to care if a few fresh pits and craters were scored into the hulls of their lumbering craft.
Da Boyz are back.



Page 297
Then the greenskins - or the Painted Ones, as they had become known by that time - rallied. In fact, they didn't even seem to rally as such. The line of them, thirty deep, towering monsters twice as tall as a man and thrice as broad, just seemed to flex, like a muscular arm, and throw back the Dragoon files. By the time the city fell, witnesses reported seeing lizard mounts, some weighing half a tonne, carried forward as trophies, skewered on the pikes of the foe.
If they're 3x wide and 2x tall, that implies perhaps at last 6x more volume, and possibly more mass. And they're damn strong too.


Page 298
In their cases of armour, polished to a steel-glass finish, the Iron Snakes seemed like gods to the local men. Their voices and manners were strange, their weapons and wargear frightening. They smelled curiously of oils and unguents, and each one of them was twice the size of a regular human.
Size of Iron Snakes relative to normal people.


Page 299
Seydon gave none immediately. The greenskins were numerically superior, five to one. Seydon formed his Snakes into a battle line around the ramparts of the uplands, and waited. He had reduced planets into cinders in his time. He would choose his moment. Such was the luxury of an assured commander in formal war.

After three days of bellowed mockery, the greenskins began an assault. Most of their charging front echelon died, pulped and split like over-ripe pumpkins under the steady bolter fire. Bruised, and thwarted for the first time since making planet fall, the greenskins set up a keening lament long into the night.
Orks vs Marines.



Page 306
"How far out are we?" Priad asked.
"A day, perhaps a day and half. I sensed you were close to animation, so I prepared the draught. The others will wake in an hour or so. There's food too, if you desire it."
A day or a day and a half to arriving at their destination. We dont know the distances or whether it's still in warp or in system, or how long in-system, unfortunately.



Page 307
But Petrok had ordered them to deanimate to keep the newcomers fresh. A voyage of undertaking, especially one such as this where combat was inevitable, could fatigue the spirits of the inductees, and encourage them to over-train and overstretch themselves as they battled the twin menaces of tedium and anticipation. Better they should sleep and awake on the eve of war than spend nineteen days pacing and fretting and impatient. Such worn-out souls were no use in war.
Use of suspended animation facilities for long term journeys.



Page 309
One by one, the Snakes returned to life, ministered to by their Apothecaries. Priad left Khiron in charge of the animation, and wandered down to the barge's embarkation hall, where the teams of armourers and servitors were laying out the preparations. In long, burnished rows, the cases of Mark VII power armour stood on their racks, gleaming in the lamp light. Weapons were being cleaned and oiled, and munitions laid out across the scuffed deck to be sorted and counted. Boy slaves ran the munition lines, marking out tallies in chalk on the floor.

Hammers and drills sounded along the wide bay as final refits and alterations were made to plate sections and mechanisms. The Techmarine Suprema and his apprentice checked and blessed every item of wargear, from the smallest digital components of gauntlets to the massive Rhino transporters as they were cradled up onto the deck, klaxons hooting from their hoists. From hidden practice ranges came the rattle of test firings. Servitors ran back and forth, conveying each man's weapon in turn to the practice ranges for certification.

Steam presses thumped, and sparks billowed in the heat-wash of portable forges. The air was filled with the scents of hot metal, coals, oil and pumice, thermite, exhaust fumes and human sweat. Priad breathed it in. It was the smell of war, and he revelled in it. He walked over to his own armour, and ran a bare hand across the polished grey ceramite. It shone like glass, and in its surface, he saw the bustling activity of the embarkation deck reflected.
Maintenance and preparation of the Marine equipment and vehicles inside the battle barge's own forges.


Page 310
"Most certainly. I'll brief all the sergeants presently, but this you should know. All hell's shaken loose on Ganahedarak. I've been monitoring the transmissions. Our brothers are cut off, and surrounded. The greenskins number more than we can imagine."
This implies they're in-system rather than in the warp.


Page 311
The battle-barge Temerity put into high anchor and surveyed the bright face of Ganahedarak and the multitude of dark satellites that drifted like beetles in its lower orbits. Upwards of twenty hulks and crag-craft circled the planet like vultures.
The orbital situation around the planet.


Page 315
Petrok brought the relief force out in front of the city's clay wall, and fixed a position along a trackway at the head of the cultivated land. A single line: Pelleas, Ridates, Damocles, Laomon and Nophon. The Snakes stood like steel statues in the hard afternoon light, watching the dust approach. Inside their armour, the brothers flexed massive limbs tight-bound with straps of leather and linen, dusted with fine powder and anointed with oils. Apart from those men who bore specialised weapons, every warrior carried a bolter and a combat shield, as well as a sheathed warblade. The teams of armourers and attendants, all in loose, light armour, waited behind the line with munition reloads and bundles of sea-lances sharpened for war.
Space MArines preparation for the Ork assault.


Page 316
They were vast creatures, every bit as big and robust as the giants facing them. Priad felt a knot of wonder that for the first time in twelve years, for the first time in his life, he was squaring up to an enemy that matched him, kilo for kilo, muscle for muscle.
Orks seem to be as large/massive as Space Marines, which suggest they are in exess of 150-200 kilos. Also implies roughly similar magnitude of strength.


Page 317
In their beringed fists: cleavers and axes, pikes and halberds, mauls and bitten blades rank with dried blood, the pommels and hilts streaming chains of beads and human fingerbones. Some carried firearms - crude bolters and broad-nosed cannon.
Ork weaponry.


Page 317
Shots tore past the waiting Snakes. Missiles shrieked in the air. Hard rounds burst and shattered off armour and shields, denting and tearing the smooth curves of perfect, polished plate. The random flash and spark and crack resembled a munitions store accidentally touched off.
Twenty metres. Ten.

"Aim for the heads! And fire!" Petrok cried. The fifty ready guns of the phratry let rip into the oncoming tide.

Bolters chattered. Plasma guns whined and spat. Flamers retched and spewed.

Death rushed out to greet the storming greenskins. The front of the line went over, tumbling, thrashing, ichor spurting into the air from bursting bodies. Those in the second rank trampled the bodies of the first underfoot until they too were brought down by the relentless fire and met the same fate under the hobnails of the third rank, and the fourth.
I have to say, I think this is pretty dumb of the Iron snakes. For such a tactically competent force, why fdo they wait til they're 10 metres away before opening fire? Bolt guns have a range of hundreds of metres. Hell bolt pistols do.

What's more they draw spears to engage once they get into melee range.. so we basically have Space Marines emulating 300.


Page 320
The veterans accepted this tight, frenzied combat. Their breathing and pulses slowed as they closed focus, concentrating only on the next jab and the next, expertly determining the vital order of priority with which the raving targets needed to be addressed. Not simply the closest, but the ones with the longest reach. Orks with firearms or pikes took precedence over frontrunners with cleavers. Their visor displays selected and prioritised targets, flickering and switching.
Iron Snake close combat with their harpoon spears. Even in melee they have targeting reticules.


Page 320
Shields deformed as blows rained upon them. Hatchet blades broke and remained stuck in place. Impacts glanced off chest plates and shoulder guards, leaving great dents and gouges. The first lances began to break and crack.
Effect of Ork onslaught on Space Marine defenses.


Page 326
In the camp, the Apothecaries were mending wounds while the armourers serviced weapons and set to the repair of damaged plate. All around, brothers were being stripped down by the slaves, damaged segments of case unbolted and handed to the warsmiths to be hammered true again, or patched and heated back into form with fusion lamps. A smell of hot metal filled the air.

...

The armourer had now removed Priad's vambrace and gauntlet. The shorn teeth of a chain axe or some similar weapon had torn entirely through it and punctured the flesh of his forearm. Clotted blood drained out of the armour segment as it came away.
AFter battle rituals.


Page 327
A slave was attempting to apply skin wrap to a laceration on Petrok's cheek, but the Librarian brushed him away.
Medical skin wrap, non aerosal edition I'd guess.


Page 327
Priad nodded. 'A massive set. With blunt teeth. The jaws of some greenskin, I'm sure of that now. Now I've seen them in the flesh. Like the bite of the things we've slain here. But bigger. Bigger than any beast we met today.’
Ork jaws/skull.



Page 328
"They were destroyed? You're sure of that?"
"Incinerated by a grenade."
Space Marine grenade destroyed the skull (incinerated - cremated?)



Page 328
Laetes had finished his work, and had sprayed skin wrap on Priad's torn and bruised forearm to assist the natural healing process. The jagged saw-teeth lay bloody in a steel bowl beside Priad.
I guess the skin wrap is aerosol again.


Page 329
Kules was waiting while an armourer worked a fusion lamp over his left shoulder plate on an anvil. The shoulder plate had been almost torn in two by some monumental blow. Attendants were approaching, bearing fresh combat shields to replace those ruined in the battle. Others collected up the brothers' short swords to take them to the squealing whetstones grinding at the edge of the camp.
More combat repairs.



Page 330
The information was threadbare. Somehow, the greenskins, possibly by means of crude devices in their orbiting hulks, were jamming general transmissions across most of the vox bandwidth.
But contact with Seydon and the twenty-five squads had been established. Scratchy, broken voices crawled out of the relief force's vox-caster, like phantoms searching for release.
Orkish jamming.



Page 331
Petrok showed them the coloured display against the flapping chiton, a patchwork chart composed of the interlocked unitary scans made by their descender ships on the passage down. The sergeants and their seconds saw plain land, hills with graphic contour overlays, the white threads of rivers and water courses.
Orbital map composite, I think.


Page 332
"From the writings of our illustrious brethren the Ultramarines, experienced as they are in the habits of the orks, we know our enemy to be miserably internecine."
Iron Snakes are descended from the Smurfs. Insert 'Spiritual Liege' jokes here.


PAge 333
"There are no twenty-five squads." said Petrok, his voice stiff and bleak. "Parthus is gone, entirely. Proud Veii at half numbers. Across the units in Seydon's command, more than fifty of our brothers have been sent on to the next world. Virtually all that remain are wounded to some degree. The fighting has been ferocious."
'Fifty...' Lektas murmured.
Casualties from the conflict with the Orks


Page 333
"Probably not." Petrok replied frankly. "I have sent to Karybdis and to the Sector Governor to raise fleet strengths. This nightmare might be finished in the void, ship to ship... or ship to hulk... if we're lucky."
Apparently Reef stars is something akin to a sector. And the sector governor has a fleet reserve.


Page 334
Through their locked visors, the pre-dawn read as luminous green. Ahead stood the crags of the valley mouth, registering cold and black to their sensors. Beyond, a sea of heat showed up as lime green warmth, interspersed with hot points of white. The ork hosts, filling the land from horizon to horizon, spread out around their pit fires.
More night vision.


Page 335
They came out onto a plateau overlooking a vast camp of greenskins, so close they could smell the cookfires and rank stink when they opened their helmet filters.

Petrok waved them down to a crouch on the lip of the plateau. In less than thirty minutes, mayhem would explode ten kilometres to the north-west as Seydon began his exodus.
They can open helmet filters to gain aaccess to external air. Or use their senses, I suspect.


Page 338
And then they were in the thick of it. Petrok led the way, reaping down the Painted Ones with his famous sword. Bodies began to pile up in his wake, split and severed. Ichor gushed out onto the ground and transformed it into a pungent marsh. Psyker light strobed and crackled around Petrok's hood, screwed down tight as it was into the bones of his skull. Every few steps, he convulsed and expelled a sizzling bolt of power from his left hand, decimating the enemy, frying them to charred bones.

As each gout of power left his fingertips, it was pure and bright and white. As it lanced into the greenskins, it was hot and yellow, and it set them ablaze, shrieking like pigs.
Petrok in combat. multiple MJ at least to fry Orks.


PAge 338
The momentum of the Iron Snakes' charge began to ebb, as the momentum of the orks had done the previous day outside Pyridon. A wall of monsters rose up to block them, blasting with firearms and swinging blades. The first man fell. Braccus, of Pelleas, his head exploded by an enemy missile. He fell on his front, down in the slick mud, still and dead.
Orks return fire.


Page 339
Priad snapped his boltgun off its magnetic couplers and began to fire. His first shots made sure the gargantuan ork was dead. Then he dispensed head shots, a flurry of blasts, walloping ogres over onto their backs.

Heat gushed. Bearing the Damocles standard, Andromak raked the ground with his plasma weapon, turning orks into dust, into vapour, into stinking piles of cooked meat.

...

Scyllon, lance master, cast his second spear long and hard. It whistled over the heads of the nearest rising rank, and struck clean through the body of a towering creature that had reared up, a chain sword in each fist. Scyllon watched in dismay as the creature got back onto its feet, and dragged the lance out of its chest. By then, Scyllon had his bolter freed, and he blew the thing's head off.
Astartes gunfire on Orks as well as one lance strike. Note the plasma gun cooking and vaporizing orks (MJ range again)



Page 340-341
An explosive round streaked in and blew Natus's bionic arm away at the bicep. Natus yelled out, and staggered aside, sparks kicking out from the shorn-off wires and useless armature.

He turned, firing with his good hand, and quickly took two more rounds in the breast plate.

Stumbling backwards, blood seeping from the blackened craters in his chest, Natus kept shooting, kept screaming "No! No! Nooo!"

A massive ork, fully three times the mass of a Space Marine, pounced on Natus, mashing him back, flat, into the mud. Pinning his remaining arm, the ork bit down with its gigantic jaws, crushing Natus's helmet with such awful force that the visor lenses shattered.

Screaming, Dyognes blasted ten rounds into the ork's torso and smashed its corpse off Natus. Natus's helmet came away with it, clamped in the ork's mouth. Revealed, Natus's face was bruised and torn, the cheek and brow bones shattered and malformed. He had lost both eyes.

"Get up!" Dyognes yelled.

...

His voice cut off. An ork pike suddenly transfixed him from behind. The tip of it had splintered out through his chest plate and his blood was now gushing out around the shaft.
Space Marine durability. Also some orks are several times more massive than Marines.



Page 341
Half-heard, the signal came through. To the north-west, Seydon and the twenty-five had begun their breakout. Fighting there was savage, but the greenskin host had been properly misdirected by Petrok's daring assault.
10 km range at least on comms based on earlier quote.


Page 344
The chieftain staggered back, salvaging the broken halves of the war-axe so that he now spun a battle-cleaver in each paw. He raised them both overhead to split Priad like firewood. Priad jabbed the muzzle of his bolter up under the chieftain's sagging dewlap and blew out the back of his skull.
More bolter head-exploding.


Page 345
Khiron tore open his narthecium, and brought out instruments of brass and toothed steel. He had feared he would need his reduc-tor to unceremoniously recover Dyognes's precious progenoid glands, but the boy was miraculously alive. The pike had ruptured Dyognes's secondary heart and both his natural lungs, as well as cracking his ribcage front and back. But the worst problem was blood loss.

With the injuring weapon still in place, Dyognes's struggling metabolism was failing to seal the wounds. Khiron drew his short sword, braced the pike, and lopped the head of it off with one sure stroke. Dyognes groaned aloud. Without hesitation, Khiron yanked the headless shaft of the pike out through Dyognes's back. Blood gushed free in a ghastly downpour, and the boy rolled limp. Khiron levered open Dyognes's chest plate, used sterile clay from his narthecium to pack both entry and exit wounds, and then sprayed both with skin wrap to expedite sealing. He took out an inoculator and fired potent doses into the young Ithakan's bloodstream to stimulate coagulation and spike Dyognes back to consciousness.
Space MArine battlefield medicine. After this, the wounded Marine gets up and starts firing.


Page 346
Khiron turned his attention to the miserably maimed Natus. He strapped bandage tape around Natus's broken skull, and glued it tight with skin wrap, then he locked Dyognes's helmet over Natus's head. For the most part this was an effort to brace Natus's skull and keep it held in one piece, but Khiron adjusted the headgear settings as he reconnected the suit systems.

Natus raised his gloved hand to the side of his head.

"I can't give you eyes, old friend." Khiron yelled above the din of fighting, "but I can boost your hearing." He'd notched the helmet's auditory systems up to maximum gain. Though it now plucked at his pain threshold, Natus could hear every excruciating detail of the war around him. Sounds assailed him. He could distinguish between the grating hum of Astartes power armour and the jangling ring of greenskin mail. He could hear and feel howls and thundering footfalls as they washed in. Khiron pushed a reloaded bolter into Natus's hand. Immediately, Natus shot two charging orks apart.
More Space Marine battlefield medicine and the fact space Marines don't need eyesight to deliver accurate gunfire.


Page 348
He whipped his seven remaining men up onto the plateau, and in those final moments of retreat, that seven became six as Brother Meglos was blown limb from limb by a screaming rocket.
Ork rocket.


Page 349
Andromak at last had to dump his beloved plasma weapon, for it had become so overheated it was in danger of critical misfire. He blessed it as he set it down, smoking, on the steep incline, then drew his bolt pistol. Twenty metres back, he put a bolt-round into the abandoned power cell and blew the ancient weapon up in the faces of the advancing greenskins. A ball of blue light engulfed them, hurling painted bodies into the sky, some of them fused or scorched or denuded of flesh by the extreme heat.
Effects of an exploding plasma weapon. The AdMech would no doubt cry to see such a precious weapon treated such.


Page 350
The swineguard were true monsters, each one of them a giant the size of a mature warboss. They wore polished mail linked with black gold and human bones, some of them carrying murder trees of black iron spikes on their shoulder harnesses. Clusters of human skulls, glowing white in the smoke-stained sunlight, rattled and clattered, pinned on the iron barbs of the murder trees as career trophies. The swineguard warriors were daubed in white body paint, banded with streaks of pink and red. Their throats were deeper, their roars more gut-shaking and bellicose than anything the phratry had yet heard. They eclipsed the war horns with their howling. Natus shuddered and stepped back, fumbling to remove his helmet, one handed.

The swineguard began to assault the slope. Every one of them carried a chainblade of some description and a heavy bolter. Priad knew just by looking that some of those weapons would have been a true test for even him to lift, but in the ghastly, oversized fists of the swineguard they seemed like toys. The boss leaders, larger even than the elite warriors they commanded, wore barbed helmets, or bronze skull-pots adorned with magnificent antlers four metres in span.
Ork elite guards.


Page 353-354
The five squads had carried as great a quantity of explosives as they could bear with them over the pass the night before: just about every demolition charge they could muster from the landing ships. As they had advanced into the fight, they had seeded the explosives in their wake, inert but primed.
The charges had been prepared for sowing by Pindor, whose skill with such materials was without peer. The devices were on a lapse trigger that would be keyed by the detonation of marker charges.

...

The slope came apart in a shockwave of fire and dirt. The magnitude of the backwash was so fierce that some of the Iron Snakes on the plateau were thrown over. Below them, swineguard monsters were torn apart, or hurled into the air, or simply vaporised. A retching column of boiling fire and smoke rose up above the plateau in a mushroom cloud.

In shuddering series, the lapse triggered charges continued to fire, detonating right back down the slope and out onto the plain where they had been sown. Whole phalanxes of greenskins were obliterated in blooms of flame, and war wagons hurled over, disintegrating in showers of sparks and outflung scraps of metal and armour plating.

With a noise like the Emperor's own thundering voice, part of the valley face came away in a colossal landslip, and buried thousands of greenskins under a tide of churning rock that obeyed no master except the force of gravity. An inferno retched up the slope, consuming the few, struggling ork survivors in the canyon. Torched ork munitions, some of them the payloads of fighting vehicles, exploded sympathetically, adding to the holocaust.

As the booming echoed away and the veil of dust and ash began to clear, the five squads saw that an almost endless sea of raging greenskins still occupied the plains below, screaming and howling in outrage. But in the canyon slope and the foreland beyond, only devastation remained, a wild storm of fire and swirling smoke, lifting embers into the air. Vehicles, smashed beyond all recognition, burned and collapsed, their chassis disintegrating. Thousands of scorched corpses littered the incline at the mouth of the valley.
Orks obliterated in a massive pyrotechnics display.


Page 360 - there have been 18 chapter masters before Seydon. I'd guess it means the Iron Snakes have existed for thousands of years, eaisly.


Page 362
"This is no longer a matter for warrior brethren." said Seuthis. "A fleet must be gathered. This is a duty for warships, in formation."

"Seuthis is right. Where infantry has failed." said Sardis of Lystra, "we should take our vengeance by fleet action!"

"Burn the orks and the worlds they tread upon!" cried Phanthus.

"Should we burn Ganahedarak?" asked Petrok.

"If that's what it takes to rid the Reef Stars and fulfil our undertaking!" Sardis replied curtly.

"Burn all those people...?" Petrok sighed.

"They're dead anyway!" Phobor muttered.
Space Marines contemplate going a-Exterminatusing to purge the Orks.


Page 364
'When a Librarian dreams." Autolochus rumbled, "it pays to listen. If I'd listened to Nector, I wouldn't be four tonnes of scrap metal."
Weight of a dreadnought. And he's one of the most likable dreadnoughts this side of Brother Jarold of the Black Templars.


Page 367
He paused. "How long to Baal Solock and back, Librarian?"

"Forty days." replied Petrok.

"Forty-five." contradicted Autolochus.

"Fifty days, then. After that, I raise a fleet to full deployment of the Chapter House, death or glory."
40-45 days to the planet from the first story from where they are.


Page 367
Dyognes was a shadow of his former self. Once a virile youth as robust and energised as Xander, he now walked with aching steps, his breathing chopped and curtailed, his skin sickly. It would take many months of recuperation, as well as augmetic and bionic surgery, to restore him to battle prime, and even then that recovery was not guaranteed. There was a chance that Dyognes's career as a phratry warrior was done, and he would spend the remainder of his days amongst the ancillary staff of Karybdis.
fate of a badly wounded Space Marine.


Page 368
Natus was in better spirits. There was something eternally vital about Natus, a wellspring of vigour that had seen him through many wounds in the past, including the loss of his original arm. No augmetic refit had been made yet, but a skull cap of grey iron had been cased around his head, surgically screwed to the bones, to preserve the integrity of his healing skull. Before scar tissue could cover the ruptured nerves of his ruined eyes, Khiron began a preliminary round of reconstructive surgery during the first few days of the voyage, installing the neural plugs and socket brackets for augmetic implants. The eyes themselves would be connected on Natus's return to Karybdis, once the initial work had healed favourably. For the rest of the voyage, Natus wore a blindfold of bandages around his eye sockets. But Khiron had run relay leads from the nerve meshes inside the sockets and connected them to a simple ocular scanner, providing Natus with basic monochrome vision and depth perception.

Natus wore the scanner on his forehead, attached to his skull cap by a magnetic coupler.
A b it on augmetics for marines and tjhe preparations.


Page 369
Andromak had been brought an old but functioning flamer from the ship's magazine stores to replace his lost plasma weapon. Priad hoped that on their return to the fortress moon, Andromak might be granted custodianship of another heirloom plasma gun, and thus restore Damocles's heavy bite.
I guess the Snakes can't make plasma weapons (or at least not very quickly). makes you wonder why Andromak blew up the old one? you'd think he could just magnetize it to his armor or something.


Page 375
"You sent for me?"

"I sent a psychopomp."

"A what?"

Petrok sighed, as if the explanations were a struggle. "I sent a guide to bring you to this other place. It probably took the shape of that black dog of yours."
Given Petrok's explanation it seems to be some sort of spirit or mental projection, but the latter events in the book might hint at it also being some sort of spirit (Priad's black dog actually seeming to manifest)


Page 384
Priad walked to the air gate and settled himself into the cabin of the lander. The flight systems were fully automated, and governed remotely by the skill of the Bullwyrm's chief pilot on the cruiser's bridge.

Priad sealed the hatches, blew the air ducts and fuel pipes, released the clamps, and settled down as the cabin lighting dimmed and his arrestor chair rotated back into descent mode.
..

There was a bang. A multi-G lurch. A rush
Remotely piloted/automated lander.


Page 385
His auspex read heat signatures ahead, and automatic target crosshairs lit up across his vision. He blinked them away. The hot spots were pockets of body heat, and the glow of gun batteries, concealed in the bastion wall ahead.
Auspex and targeting crosshairs again.


Page 393
"My damn eyes! So weak and old." She rubbed her hands together. "I have lived a very long time, by the standards of my people." she said. "Did you know that? The physicians are at loss to explain it. I've outlived two husbands. I never bore a child. The physicians suspected that the exposure to contamination left me sterile. That has been a sadness to me. How could that be, though? Left barren by the poisons of the enemy, yet cursed with a long life?"

"I protected you." he said.

"With drugs. I remember that very well. They made me awfully sick. But they can only have been temporary."

"No." he said. "I gave you a measure of my own blood, so that you might share my immunity."
An interesting side effect of Space Marine blood, it seems. Not only does it inoculate against the radiation of a DE craft, but it prolongs the lifespan of a normal human. That could have very.. interesting medical properties. Indeed it could be seen as a commodity in trade for the greedy, or a tool of control by the unscrupulous.


Page 397
He left the inner vaults and the bobbing lights of the candles and made his way back along the main hallway, his helmet display reading and graphing the topography in the gloom.

He heard something, and moved his hand to the grip of his bolter. Targeting graphics lit up across his vision and hunted for something to condemn. He was cautious. He didn't want to execute some blundering servant or Treasury guard.
More targeting stuff in the helmet.



Page 399
There were shadows in the shadows, dark shapes that resolutely refused to become visible, even when subjected to the amplified scrutiny of his visor systems.


He heard a chittering noise, like rats or grinding teeth.

Time slowed down.

Priad ripped his bolter out and up, freeing the lock, and began to fire as the shadows rippled towards him. He blasted one shape to his right, and heard it bounce with recoil and fall, then swung round to slam two more shots into the shadows to his left. Two more shapes flew backwards in the darkness, flailing and writhing. Dark blood splashed across the red and black marble.

Something struck his chest plate hard, and drove him back a step. Then a second object plunked heavily off his shoulder guard and ricocheted into the wall beside him, chipping the stonework. He heard the unmistakable buzzing of splinter weapons.
They came for him. Shadows coiled forward out of the walls, out of the darkness of the ceiling. He squeezed his trigger and kept it squeezed, firing a sustained burst, ripping the darkness to pieces wherever it moved. His aiming graphics jumped and flickered, delineating target after target. The muzzle flash of his weapon was so bright, the after-image became a slow-fading ghost on his optic systems. Enemy fire chopped and tore into him, gouging his plate and leaving craters and gashes of bared metal.
Priad vs Dark Eldar, round two.



Page 403
One of them suddenly burst in an explosion of gore that misted the air with blood droplets. Another, turning, lost his head to a howling bolt round. The others buckled and twisted as they were cut down.

Xander strode down the hallway, boltgun smoking. To his right came Aekon, to his left Rules.
Bolter fire once again explodes the Dark Eldar.



Page 410
Using the dark and calcifying teeth - which High Legislator Antoni had finally discovered, two days after the end of hostilities, in the bowels of the Treasury, locked in a small casket labelled 'other' - the Apothecaries and flesh smiths of the phratry fashioned a copy of the relic. They crafted it from inert organic matter, lacing the artificial bone with the genetic codes extracted from the original teeth. This work, though ingenious, was a simple extension of the genetic applications they had mastered through the ritual creation of altered humans. The relic was grown in a vat, fed with minerals, its shape slowly defined by the template writ within the teeth.
They basically fabricate an organic Ork 'skull' clone from teh teeth to put off the Orks. I dont remebmer the exact details but it was a sneaky trick.
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Connor MacLeod wrote:The retinue of a man known as a "Receiver of Wrecks" - who evidently deals with stuff that crashes onto the planet form space, like spaceships. I wonder what they do for Space hulks.
Hope that the hulk doesn't crash into the planet? They're really big and full of monsters, after all.
More clarification about the Receiver and his job, as well as the reaction of people from a relatively low end planet to the crashing of an unknown starship. Radiation seems to be a constant hazard. PArt of me wonders if the guy is part of the 'adepta' system (Imperial assigned to the planet) or if its a local position.
The radiation hazard may be because the (dark eldar) ship was badly damaged in the crash, which is probably not unusual. We already get traces of plutonium from satellite reentries in real life, and that's just because of piddly little radioactive thermal generators.

Also note that this planet is really, deeply primitive and ignorant by 40k standards. The Receiver of Wreck is probably one of the few people on the planet who has something comparable to a modern scientific education- although that could still make him a local position.
Arrival of the response to the Snake-Signal. Basically a ship arrives in system, dispatches the response 'force', and then departs. Blatant evidence that the beacon/signal can't be lightspeed, or else it would have taken years to reply instead of a few months.. At the same time the thing is clearly not an astropath, so they had some mechanical or biomechanical means of sending a signal - at least short distances (subsector scale or less perhaps.) We know its at least possible to have psychic servitors (or what is close to it) but they aren't very powerful.
I wouldn't rule out the idea that there are (extremely slow/short ranged) methods of FTL travel or communication in 40k other than psychic/warp effects. How (if at all) do the Tau communicate FTL? Do they use couriers?
Ithankta is apparently a good year or more distance from wherever in the Reef Stars this planet is. While we dont know the actual geography, it still suggests they either have slow-ass drives, the conditions of the warp in the region are particularily adverse, or something similar.
It is also possible that the Reef Stars are a long, roughly linear formation, which artificially exaggerates the distance required to fly along their length.
"And the Reef Stars alone are so vast that it would take a year to cross from Ithaka to Baal Solock?"
"No time at all, where space is concerned. It would take three and a half years to cross the Reef Stars group, and that is just a small part of the whole Imperium. Galactically speaking, Ithaka is close by. A bright, yellow star, which you might see in summer time, close to the western horizon."
More on the distances involved.
Which undermines my case, because there's a practical limit on how far away you can see a G-class star. The sun would not be visible from more than about 60 light years away, not to the naked eye. On the other hand, it's possible that Priad has greatly superhuman low-light reception in his eyes (no, really? :D)... in which case he probably sees orders of magnitude more stars in the night sky than a normal human would, and may be forgetting this.
Page 40
On the left side of the hold, a section of wall retracted, revealing equipment, armour and weapons hung from secure brackets. Antoni saw long, copper lances, a pair of shields, and an enormous firearm that she knew, just by looking at it, would be too heavy for her to lift.
Bolters are too heavy for a normal human to lift.
Marine bolters are, anyway. It's not unreasonable that if you have a supersoldier who can carry truly massive equipment, wearing power armor that further enhances their strength and makes carrying a heavy load less of a burden, they'd upscale the personal weapons into what would be a very massive thing in human hands. A big beefy Imperial Guard trooper would probably be able to haul one around, but Antoni is a clerk.
Space Marine speed reading and memory recall.
That... is a really useful thing to give a soldier, often forgotten in 'supersoldier' descriptions. Being able to memorize the maps of a whole city, or something like that, would be powerful.
Dark Eldar pistol wepaon (probably splinter). Gotta love how Priad just shrugs and redirects the bullet right into another DE. One thing we get used to in this novel is that DE become utter fodder for Space Marines, as if it were a forge world book :D
Not all Dark Eldar are created equal; perhaps this is not exactly their varsity the Snakes are dealing with.
"I need to give you a shot. This area is irradiated very badly. You need this, or you'll suffer the consequences of exposure."
Amusingly that Princeps, the dog, is resistant to this sam eradiation (some hunting dog accompanying them) - the dog is also able to fight with a Dark Eldar (grab its neck in jaws before reacting, etc.) The DE come off badly in this novel (which seems to be rather predictable for alot of novels.)

Also the radiation inoculation. :P
The shot may contain some kind of weird biological stuff that encourages the body to attack and break down damaged cells- Antoni's unexpected lifespan suggests this. As to the dog, sure, Priad shrugs and says "dogs are resilient." That may mean the dog is radiation resistant... or it may just mean Priad is trying to get them moving and out of the area, has neither the medical supplies nor the inclination to do anything for the dog, and is trying to keep Antoni from objecting. Not that Priad hates dogs, but I'm pretty sure a 40k Space Marine would not hesitate to shorten a dog's life expectancy for the sake of accomplishing a mission.
I guess the Reef Stars is pretty conflict-heavy given how many worlds in close proximity are at war. Rather interesting that the conflicts rely on a steady, constant supply of fuel from this refinery rather than relying on stockpiles.
Between the Dark Eldar, the orks who are at least somewhere in the neighborhood, and local rebellions, I'm not surprised. Bear in mind, "ground to a halt" has multiple interpretations. For one, it's been ten weeks, so a stockpile of fuel designed to last for a few operations may have run dry. For another, if I were commanding a mechanized unit whose long term fuel security was endangered, I'd immediately start doing things to conserve fuel. I'd cancel training missions, possibly call off any fuel-intensive operations where I wasn't sure of being able to get replenishment afterwards, and so on. My forces would still be functional, but offensives would stop and long term viability would be harmed- I would have "ground to a halt."
Page 89
There is a hole clean through his torso, a hole that passes right through him. As his legs give out, Chilles screams in rage. He was not finished. His face hits the grille deck, denting it.
They all feel his death. Through the rapport of inter-fed life signs, they all feel it.
Space Marine bolt fire. Apparently the members of the squad get a visual relay of Chilles last thought.
Do they? Or do they just know he's dead.
Page 91
Maced is dead. Poisonous splinter barbs from some inhuman Dark Tusk gun have blown his legs and lower torso to shreds. A dirty, toxic knife has silenced his screaming rage.
Dark Eldar weaponry?
It sounds like these chaos people are at least partly Nurgle-affiliated, and it's not like the Dark Eldar have a monopoly on poisons. This could just be a shotgun loaded with poisoned ammunition of some sort, not that you'd normally see much need for that.
Page 126
"It is done, Priad. We have slain a thousand over and again."
Priad pulled off his helmet and cast it to the ground. It floated away a few yards on a stream of enemy blood that gurgled down the hallway. The air was too close, too full of smoke and blood vapour. They had expended virtually all of their ammunition and most of their physical strength, but they had killed infamous numbers
A small number of Spac eMarines slaughter huge numbers of aliens. Seems rather against DE doctrine normally though.
This is almost the ideal position for a force to kill disproportionate numbers: a small well armed blocking party, with well-defined lanes of fire into an enemy that is retreating rapidly and (probably) lacks coordination. The Dark Eldar mined the place, sure, but I don't think the retreat was well planned.

Also, as noted, I don't think this is the Dark Eldar varsity.
The fan of Iron Snakes spread down the main street of the farmship, scanning to all sides with their auspex units, weapons braced ready in armoured hands.
Apparently the auspex aren't handheld, if they're carrying weapons.
Since the armor seems to have sensors available to give them information at the drop of a hat, you're probably right, but this isn't a new capability.
An interesting commentary on the limits of sensors and other electronic instrumentation in power armour. apparently even the auto senses can be futzed by the right sort of Chaos trickery.. but not the mk1 eyeball.
Another possibility: different trickery has different effects?
Connor MacLeod wrote:Page 196 - Space Marine flamers are effective against daemons.
Tiny demented gremlin ones, anyway.
Page 237
" Some great evil was here... had been here since before the rise of man. The Iorguan first comers vanquished it and built this mound over it. The treasures are the components of a stasis system that keeps it dormant."
stasis tech.
Although "stasis" here may just mean "system for keeping things the way they normally are," not any kind of magic time-suspension.
Bottom of some trench.. its dark.. so I'm guessing pretty deep (hundreds or thousands of meters?) Astartes can handle at least 16 minutes underwater.
Since Astartes swimming speeds are probably at least vaguely normalish compared to human (not ten times faster or anything), I'd bet on hundreds of meters. Also note that the trench is close off-shore.
It seems like company level formations are unusual for the Iron Snakes. They seem more adapted to small-unit tactics and dispersion.
Given that they've been the sector's equivalent of a grand-strategic SWAT team for centuries, no surprise there.
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I have to say, I think this is pretty dumb of the Iron snakes. For such a tactically competent force, why fdo they wait til they're 10 metres away before opening fire? Bolt guns have a range of hundreds of metres. Hell bolt pistols do.

What's more they draw spears to engage once they get into melee range.. so we basically have Space Marines emulating 300.
Yes. The Snakes are very deliberately ancient Greek-inspired, the vocabulary (phratry) is thus inspired, they are basically Spartans with machine guns. The only vaguely justification-shaped idea I have is that Petrok knew perfectly well his Marines could overcome that number of orcs, and decided to do it 'with one hand tied behind his back,' both to conserve ammunition for later and to build up the confidence of the newbie Marines in his force.
Page 360 - there have been 18 chapter masters before Seydon. I'd guess it means the Iron Snakes have existed for thousands of years, eaisly.
Latest codex says they were a Second Founding chapter that branched directly off the Ultramarines shortly after the Heresy.
They basically fabricate an organic Ork 'skull' clone from teh teeth to put off the Orks. I dont remebmer the exact details but it was a sneaky trick.
Move the orky relic around, and eventually plant it on a Dark Eldar world so the Orks get pissed at the Dark Eldar and WAAAGH! their planets. Pretty cunning.
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She gave an indignant shriek and shot him. Point blank, with a micro-laser from under her furs. The blast scorched his chest plate and flashed warning sigils across his visor-scope. Scyllon and Aekon had their bolters aimed at her in a heartbeat.
Digital laser.
Personally, the next part is one of my favourite scenes.
"Lady", a voice boomed. The golden digit now hovered between the Princess and Priad. Mabuse had boosted the volume to its vox speakers. "I advise you to run away now. Right now. Do as the Brother-Sergeant instructs you." The little hologram glared at her.
"Why? Why" she choked.
The holoform of Mabuse shivered and dissolved. It was replaced by the hard-light of a crest-insignia. The rosette emblem of the Inquisition.
"Thats why."
She ran, wailing.
A salutary lesson, Priad thought. Even someone haughty and thick-skinned enough to be unafraid of the Astartes hides in terror from the Inquisition.
That just speaks volumes about the fear and power of the Inquisition, more than any other scene I've read.
You've also got to wonder how they inspire such universal fear. Do they put up billboards of every street corner, "Spot a heretic, inform the Inquisition. If we find out you didn't, we'll peal of your skin."
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Connor MacLeod wrote:The retinue of a man known as a "Receiver of Wrecks" - who evidently deals with stuff that crashes onto the planet form space, like spaceships. I wonder what they do for Space hulks.
Hope that the hulk doesn't crash into the planet? They're really big and full of monsters, after all.
The "really big" aspect of the Space Hulk will ensure that any collision between the planet and the Hulk will result in the "Receiver of the Wreck" becoming a Flattened Victim of the Wreck along with the rest of the planet. :D
Not that Priad hates dogs, but I'm pretty sure a 40k Space Marine would not hesitate to shorten a dog's life expectancy for the sake of accomplishing a mission.
Or the dog is really just a resistant breed of some sort. I kinda doubt Priad would do something to hurt the dog, given that he basically ignores every argument to make him think until Petrok basically goes "Look Priad! PUPPY!"
Yes. The Snakes are very deliberately ancient Greek-inspired, the vocabulary (phratry) is thus inspired, they are basically Spartans with machine guns. The only vaguely justification-shaped idea I have is that Petrok knew perfectly well his Marines could overcome that number of orcs, and decided to do it 'with one hand tied behind his back,' both to conserve ammunition for later and to build up the confidence of the newbie Marines in his force.

...

Latest codex says they were a Second Founding chapter that branched directly off the Ultramarines shortly after the Heresy.
More than that, KNF pretty much confirms that the Iron Snakes were in fact originally an Ultramarine Company that fought on Calth. Funnily, it has a cameo of Damocles (for whom Priad's squad is named) discussing with a newbie on the most effective theoretical way to kill Orks. Round count came up very quickly as one of the most important factors.

That being said, going "300" against the Orks does kinda mesh with the theme of the book about how the Marines may need to start *gasp* thinking their way out problems. I'm surprised that Connor doesn't like the novel so much despite this, since it makes Brotherhood of the Snake the "anti" Space Marine novel.
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Connor MacLeod wrote:
Page 360 - there have been 18 chapter masters before Seydon. I'd guess it means the Iron Snakes have existed for thousands of years, eaisly.
Latest codex says they were a Second Founding chapter that branched directly off the Ultramarines shortly after the Heresy.
Actually, they aren't as much as mentioned in the latest SM Codex. As far as I know, the Iron Snakes' lineage has never been explicitly confirmed, but Abnett pretty much does everything but say it outright in Know No Fear (as the Ultramarines 6th Company (a formation equivalent to a modern Chapter) is led by a Captain Damocles, and has the same figure-eight serpent heraldry as the Iron Snakes). We don't know, for definite, who their Primarch is, but it's almost certainly Guilliman (rather as, from what information we had on them, the Death Spectres Chapter seemed to be descended from the Raven Guard - which Deathwatch (the novel) confirms). This isn't like the Soul Drinkers, where we genuinely don't know who their Primarch might've been (although six of the loyalist Primarchs can be eliminated for definite, and the remaining three are various degrees of unlikely).
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Zinegata wrote:
Simon_Jester wrote:
Connor MacLeod wrote:The retinue of a man known as a "Receiver of Wrecks" - who evidently deals with stuff that crashes onto the planet form space, like spaceships. I wonder what they do for Space hulks.
Hope that the hulk doesn't crash into the planet? They're really big and full of monsters, after all.
The "really big" aspect of the Space Hulk will ensure that any collision between the planet and the Hulk will result in the "Receiver of the Wreck" becoming a Flattened Victim of the Wreck along with the rest of the planet. :D
Possibly. Not all wrecks are that big.
Not that Priad hates dogs, but I'm pretty sure a 40k Space Marine would not hesitate to shorten a dog's life expectancy for the sake of accomplishing a mission.
Or the dog is really just a resistant breed of some sort. I kinda doubt Priad would do something to hurt the dog, given that he basically ignores every argument to make him think until Petrok basically goes "Look Priad! PUPPY!"
Er... what do you mean?

Also... Just going into combat, let alone against space elves with poisonous shotguns, is bad for a dog's life expectancy. I think Priad may be either:
1) Dismissing the threat of radiation sickness to the dog, as less important than that to a human being.
2) Having an incorrect faith in the dog's innate resilience

Rather than this being some kind of radiation-proof doggie, which seems unlikely on a planet that has no advanced technology, and hasn't seen advanced enemies in centuries.
Yes. The Snakes are very deliberately ancient Greek-inspired, the vocabulary (phratry) is thus inspired, they are basically Spartans with machine guns. The only vaguely justification-shaped idea I have is that Petrok knew perfectly well his Marines could overcome that number of orcs, and decided to do it 'with one hand tied behind his back,' both to conserve ammunition for later and to build up the confidence of the newbie Marines in his force.
...
Latest codex says they were a Second Founding chapter that branched directly off the Ultramarines shortly after the Heresy.
More than that, KNF pretty much confirms that the Iron Snakes were in fact originally an Ultramarine Company that fought on Calth. Funnily, it has a cameo of Damocles (for whom Priad's squad is named) discussing with a newbie on the most effective theoretical way to kill Orks. Round count came up very quickly as one of the most important factors.

That being said, going "300" against the Orks does kinda mesh with the theme of the book about how the Marines may need to start *gasp* thinking their way out problems. I'm surprised that Connor doesn't like the novel so much despite this, since it makes Brotherhood of the Snake the "anti" Space Marine novel.
Yeah. The observation is that while Petrok's 50 Marines can 300 their way past hundreds if not thousands of orks, the 300 marines (and yes, 250, plus 50, minus casualties) on the planet cannot possibly 300 their way past all the orks.

So instead of just killing orks until his men are overwhelmed, Petrok actually uses a bit of strategy (even if the tactics are kind of weird and dumb) to cut a hole in the ork lines and allow the rest of the Marines to get away, then they pull back and try to find another solution to their problem.

How often do Space Marines win by the indirect approach?

Maybe Connor's dislike comes more from other factors. Like how the orks and (especially) dark eldar are portrayed as very weak, and easily slaughtered by the Marines. Or, well, Priad isn't exactly a cerebral guy. There's a conversation something like:

Khiron: "Maybe this is the end of the time of brawn, and the start of the time for brains"
Priad: "I hope not, for brawn is all I have."

Petrok really does come out of this looking like the designated driver of the Iron Snakes; he's the one who knows how to really think.
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Lost Soal wrote:Personally, the next part is one of my favourite scenes.
Brothers of the Snake has literally sat on my Hard drive for years largely ignored. I hadn't even realized I still had it there until I checked, and by now I'm too lazy to revise it. Its really kind of a stand alone story anyhow, but it did have lots of good moments. I think my favorites were the Iron Snakes Dreadnought.
That just speaks volumes about the fear and power of the Inquisition, more than any other scene I've read.
You've also got to wonder how they inspire such universal fear. Do they put up billboards of every street corner, "Spot a heretic, inform the Inquisition. If we find out you didn't, we'll peal of your skin."
Reputation and psychology. They are in a position to control and influence information and knowledge, after all, so they can dictate how and why they are perceived. Also, like the Astartes, they've had a long time to allow their presence to be felt. Not as much as Space Marines perhaps (esp given the Astartes have some help from the Ecclesiarchy propoganda pushing them as ANGELS OF DEATH.) but that sort off stuff can very easily become entrenched.

It may even be partly a result of the warp, given the whole 'thought and emotion influence the warp' - it wouldnt surprise me if the Inquisition were knowledgable in manipulating such phenomena to some degree. I've actually got this notion that the Warp's interactions with reality are more fundamentla and complex than I typically give it credit for (partly because its so hard to measure) but it can shape so many aspects of 40K, where symbolism is a huge fact in every part of life.
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Connor MacLeod wrote:Brothers of the Snake has literally sat on my Hard drive for years largely ignored. I hadn't even realized I still had it there until I checked, and by now I'm too lazy to revise it. Its really kind of a stand alone story anyhow, but it did have lots of good moments. I think my favorites were the Iron Snakes Dreadnought.
Man I love Autolochus. He's like the Han Solo of the Iron Snakes chapter, always ready with a deadpan one-liner and not afraid to mouth off to a chapter master.

Seydon rose. 'The devil is in you, boy,' he said, stopping towards Petrok.
'Then let's hear what the devil has to say for himself,' a low, grating voice echoed from the shadows. Seydon looked round and sighed. He sat down again. 'You're awake then, master Autolochus?'
'I'm always awake,' the voice replied. 'Noise you idiots make, it's hard to slumber.'

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since this is lengthy I'll only reply to stuff I disagree with. If I don't address it assume it means compliance :P
I wouldn't rule out the idea that there are (extremely slow/short ranged) methods of FTL travel or communication in 40k other than psychic/warp effects. How (if at all) do the Tau communicate FTL? Do they use couriers?
Originally the TAu used couriers. 4th edition (having just reviewed it prior to viewing 6th) had hints of fTL communication in it. 6th more or less outright stated it, and White Rabbit told me one of the shadowsun short e-stories had the Tau communicating across some 150 LY (from their homeworld to the firnge of their empire) in a matter of hours IIRC. The latter was some weird gravity something or other.

Whether or not the Imperium does that or its something else we don't know. Ostensibly they're only supposed to have 'psychic' FTL, but that's the only reliable method of short term FTL communication dependign on how we interpret it. Lots of novels have them understanding Necron signals (even the supposedly FTL ones) which points to some non-psychic comms, and a few sources point to them having the ability to (passively) detect tachyons (which may or may not be tied to the warp.)

On the other hand its quite possible that some of the non-astropath FTL is simply a psychic brain in a box. We've had hints of psychic servitors, and even (I think) psychic machine spirits/cogitators (wihc in some interpretations are organic tissues in a machine.. lol) AI and computer tech in 40K can be... complicated to deal with.. since the warp can even infect AIs and computers and shit (you can even have daemons made out of machine code, IIRC.) Its not even that improbable - astrotelepathy is only notable/special for the range and speed at which it transmits.. which is why some Librarians can d uplicate it. Most psykers can duplicate such abilities on non-interstellar levels, and may form a vital part of a non-electronic communications network (in case of jamming) for the military and civilian forces.

I often tend to think the 'non-astropath' FTL may be something like Honorverse grav pulse. EG it travels very slow (a few times faster than light) which menas that in certain limited (in-system) cases it might be FTL (or shorten the time between planetS) but still not compete with astrotelepathy in most cases. This could apply whether its 'psychic brain in a box' or something mor technological.

It is also possible that the Reef Stars are a long, roughly linear formation, which artificially exaggerates the distance required to fly along their length.

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Which undermines my case, because there's a practical limit on how far away you can see a G-class star. The sun would not be visible from more than about 60 light years away, not to the naked eye. On the other hand, it's possible that Priad has greatly superhuman low-light reception in his eyes (no, really? :D)... in which case he probably sees orders of magnitude more stars in the night sky than a normal human would, and may be forgetting this.
We know Astartes vision can see further and (IIRC) in different lighting conditions (perhaps even wavelengths, I'm not sure) compared to normal human sight, so its not improbable. Really though, its more likely just the sheer number of variables involved in warp travel, and the fact we don't have enough information. For all we know Priad was simply dropped off as part of a routine circuit or as a detour to some other major conflict. Just becuase they get the signal never guarantees an instant response - a single Marine Chapter can't be everywhere and they have to prioritize.

Abnett actually carries this idea forward when we get Space Marines in action i 'Salvation's Reach' - he's very fond of the idea of showing how Badass and impressive Space Marines are by how rarely they are deployed in large numbers, and how few are needed to be effective (if used in certain ways.)

Marine bolters are, anyway. It's not unreasonable that if you have a supersoldier who can carry truly massive equipment, wearing power armor that further enhances their strength and makes carrying a heavy load less of a burden, they'd upscale the personal weapons into what would be a very massive thing in human hands. A big beefy Imperial Guard trooper would probably be able to haul one around, but Antoni is a clerk.
Well someone like Bragg can carry Heavy bolters, so that's not impossilbe (I should have probably thought that quote out better in hindsight.) but its not impossible for humans to use astartes scale weapons (bolt pistols for example, at least.) But the whole 'Astartes vs human' weapons is one of those little variable things and the notion that Astartes weapons are intrinsically bigger is more a recent artifact and largely of the non-codex materials (at least to my memory.)

That... is a really useful thing to give a soldier, often forgotten in 'supersoldier' descriptions. Being able to memorize the maps of a whole city, or something like that, would be powerful.
Not only that, but their ability to alter perception (eg to perceive things slower than they actually act/think) are also impressive. The ability to analyze/assimilate data and formulate plans is a huge advantage. As is their reaction/response times.

Marines really aren't notable for their strength alone, even though it ssuperhuman there are lots of ways to cybernetically or genetically (or even just evolution, like Ogryns) match and exceed that, and brute force isn't really their primary goal. Their mental abilities, coupled with their endurance/resistance to damage and enviromental adaptability are what relaly make them stnad out. They can assess and plan and react rapidly, they can go for days (or longer) without food and rest (and even then can subsist on any number of things), they can shrug off minor injuries - don't have to worry about bleeding out, or most forms of trauama or pain, etc. and endure enviromental and temperature extremes... those give them far better advantages for their given role than mere 'physical strength' could ever compensate for.



]The shot may contain some kind of weird biological stuff that encourages the body to attack and break down damaged cells- Antoni's unexpected lifespan suggests this. As to the dog, sure, Priad shrugs and says "dogs are resilient." That may mean the dog is radiation resistant... or it may just mean Priad is trying to get them moving and out of the area, has neither the medical supplies nor the inclination to do anything for the dog, and is trying to keep Antoni from objecting. Not that Priad hates dogs, but I'm pretty sure a 40k Space Marine would not hesitate to shorten a dog's life expectancy for the sake of accomplishing a mission.
IIRC they mention later in the book that Antoni basically got an injection of astartes blood or something like that. Which was basically what you described. It says more interestin gthings about the nature of Space MArine 'enhancements' than anything to me though, it may be a reflection of some of the 2nd edition stuff said about the Space Marine creation process.
Do they? Or do they just know he's dead.
I probably should have noted 'felt' rather than 'visual'. not sure why I got stuck on visual, but its rather obvious they're getting some sense of his actual death. Given MIU linkages and stuff (which can be hardline or wireless) its not terribly suprrising. Space Marine autosenses and power armour is a form of MIU linkage after all.
This is almost the ideal position for a force to kill disproportionate numbers: a small well armed blocking party, with well-defined lanes of fire into an enemy that is retreating rapidly and (probably) lacks coordination. The Dark Eldar mined the place, sure, but I don't think the retreat was well planned.

Also, as noted, I don't think this is the Dark Eldar varsity.
It actually may make more sense now that 5th edition has come out, and we learn that Dark Eldar can be reborn/resurrected, and that they make extensive use of cloning to thicken their numbers. maybe the Dark Eldar were lead by their version of Zapp Brannigan and the troops were hopped up on some sort of super combat drugs/stimms. Its certainly possible.
Yes. The Snakes are very deliberately ancient Greek-inspired, the vocabulary (phratry) is thus inspired, they are basically Spartans with machine guns. The only vaguely justification-shaped idea I have is that Petrok knew perfectly well his Marines could overcome that number of orcs, and decided to do it 'with one hand tied behind his back,' both to conserve ammunition for later and to build up the confidence of the newbie Marines in his force.
It could be Marine arrogance or it could just be fixation on their way of waging war. Despite all the worship of Space Marine tactics and how superior they are at making war, its not beyond them to become dogmatic or inflexible about things. There's supposed to be a certain irony about that WRT the Codex Astartes, after all. (HH series makes it clear Guilliman never intended it to be taken as dogmatic or a 'bible of warfare', even though thats how its come to be regarded by the Ultramarines and many spinoffs.)
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Kuja wrote:Man I love Autolochus. He's like the Han Solo of the Iron Snakes chapter, always ready with a deadpan one-liner and not afraid to mouth off to a chapter master.
Autolochus engendered in me the same sort of enjoyment that the Venerable Dreadnoughts from 'Battle of the Fang' and Brother Jarrold from the Armageddon novels engender. I sometimes wonder why it is that the Dreadnoughts become the biggest characters in some of the Space Marine stuff.
I liked Double Eagle. I think I actually liked it better than most of the Gaunt books in the 'Saint' cycle. The bumbling Tom Cruise expy was entertaining and the action was pretty good. One thing I like about Abnett's writing is that he's good at painting a fair range of characters. He does it in the Gaunt books and he does it well in Double Eagle, too. You get the drunk priest, the wounded vet, the ambitious chick, the kid, the civilian, etc. It makes the books a little more memorable than stuff where most of the characters are just X name in Y position.
Abnett has a gift for reusing stuff from previous things to build on future stories, and its one of the reasons that the Ghosts series still has staying power. That and his willingness to kill off characters to introduce new ones, I think. Even when old characters we like die, he often manages to introduce a new one that becomes interesting to us, and the fact that the focus of the series is not just on one character all the time helps here. Even Gaunt is not always a dominant figure in the series.. he only evolves as a character a bit by bit over the whole course.

Double Eagle was good IMHO for the way Abnett is wililng to play around with the 40K setting and try out new ideas. The Phantine air regiment is a good example of that, as it plays on a gray area that allows for Guard AIRFORCES without totally rewriting the whole Navy/Guard separation of powers. Some people don't like deviations from the GW materials, but I always consider that a good thing. 40K is meant to be played with and experimented, and the studio material could benefit from doing more of this.

The problems with the Saint arc, I think, is that it had a strong beginning, strong finish.. but there wasn't much in hte middle to support it, so it really drags getting from beginning to end. Whereas the founding was a constant buildup, and the Lost was pretty much a slide into hell.
Hurgh. I have mixed feelings about Titanicus, personally. I enjoyed most of the book, but some of the side plots don't really go anywhere or just exist for gratuitous grimdark. The ending felt rushed too, and that bugged me when most of the book had a pretty good pace.
Maybe its because it really has no connection to the larger series other than 'it happens in the Crusade'. Double EAgle had some connection to the larger conflict in various ways, whilst Titanicus just feels much more stand-alone. I actually liked parts of it, although as a rule I'm not terribly interested in Titans. Titanicus was really sort of an AdMech story more than just Titans.. and I think it was meant to bring forward some of the concepts introduced in the HH into the 'modern' timeline (like the whole religious schism, which was really what drove the story.) I think its that there was so much combat in there it sort of detracted form the main story (the Ghosts normally use the bigger war as a backdrop.)

I didn't mind the subplots so much (like the PDF forces) because Abnett always likes to introduce certain 'random elements' as a sort of glimpse into warfare like that.. I can see how it detracts from the story by not contributing to it, but I do see it adding to the atmosphere. 'War being horrible and pointless' is a pretty strong theme in the Ghosts series, after all, and its not the first time he's incorporated a meaningless death to emphasize that.
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Connor MacLeod wrote:Autolochus engendered in me the same sort of enjoyment that the Venerable Dreadnoughts from 'Battle of the Fang' and Brother Jarrold from the Armageddon novels engender. I sometimes wonder why it is that the Dreadnoughts become the biggest characters in some of the Space Marine stuff.
I think it's because with a dreadnought there's a sort of unwritten license to go hogwild. Dreadnoughts are a combination of '800-pound gorilla' and 'veteran that's seen everything twice' so there's not really much in the way of conformity that they need to respect. As a result you get the larger-than-life badasses like Bjorn, Tankred (TANKRED ENDURES) and Autolochus because a dreadnought is one of the very few characters in 40K that's not concerned even with the kind of propriety and limitations that keeps other marines in line. They just plow ahead with whatever the hell they want and entertain us with the results.

Like Jarrold falling out of orbit in a busted drop pod. Just shrugs, walks it off and starts filling orks full of holes.
The problems with the Saint arc, I think, is that it had a strong beginning, strong finish.. but there wasn't much in hte middle to support it, so it really drags getting from beginning to end. Whereas the founding was a constant buildup, and the Lost was pretty much a slide into hell.
I have to agree on the strong ending, but I think my biggest problem with the Saint arc is summed up with two words: Lijah Cuu. I can't stand Cuu. He just drags. Every time the book lingered on him I just wanted to kick the story in the ass and get it moving. He's boring "i r teh evul" character and my god I was pleased when he got offed so that the series could dump his dead weight. He's the total opposite of a character like, say, Pontius Glaw. You can't pluck Glaw out of the Eisenhorn trilogy without the whole story collapsing. It's been awhile since I reread the arc but I don't recall Cuu ever contributing anything meaningful that couldn't have been handled with a Chaos character here and there getting in a kill.

Admittedly though, it was entertaining to see him get trashed on occasion.
Maybe its because it really has no connection to the larger series other than 'it happens in the Crusade'. Double EAgle had some connection to the larger conflict in various ways, whilst Titanicus just feels much more stand-alone. I actually liked parts of it, although as a rule I'm not terribly interested in Titans. Titanicus was really sort of an AdMech story more than just Titans.. and I think it was meant to bring forward some of the concepts introduced in the HH into the 'modern' timeline (like the whole religious schism, which was really what drove the story.) I think its that there was so much combat in there it sort of detracted form the main story (the Ghosts normally use the bigger war as a backdrop.)

I didn't mind the subplots so much (like the PDF forces) because Abnett always likes to introduce certain 'random elements' as a sort of glimpse into warfare like that.. I can see how it detracts from the story by not contributing to it, but I do see it adding to the atmosphere. 'War being horrible and pointless' is a pretty strong theme in the Ghosts series, after all, and its not the first time he's incorporated a meaningless death to emphasize that.
I didn't mind Titanicus being a mostly stand-alone novel since I quite enjoyed it for its own sake. The parts that annoyed me the most were the way it rushed through the last battle (hey the narrative is kinda setting up the possibility for some orbital bombardment, oh wait no here's a page-long ground fight) and the feeling at the end of the whole Samstag plot was "well, that did nothing and had no contribution to the plot, thanks Dan." I guess you can make an argument for window-dressing, but it really just felt like padding. If it had at least affected something I wouldn't have minded the amount of time spent on it, I liked the little plots with the toymaker and the gardener even though they didn't really go anywhere, but the amount of time devoted to the Samstag plot just felt like it should have accomplished more.
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Kuja wrote:I think it's because with a dreadnought there's a sort of unwritten license to go hogwild. Dreadnoughts are a combination of '800-pound gorilla' and 'veteran that's seen everything twice' so there's not really much in the way of conformity that they need to respect. As a result you get the larger-than-life badasses like Bjorn, Tankred (TANKRED ENDURES) and Autolochus because a dreadnought is one of the very few characters in 40K that's not concerned even with the kind of propriety and limitations that keeps other marines in line. They just plow ahead with whatever the hell they want and entertain us with the results.
True. It may also simply reflect that anyone picked for Dreadnought hood is more or less, by default exceptional compared to most Marines. not unlike the officers really. So having a Dreadnought be more characterful than your average bog-standard Marine is not unusual.
Like Jarrold falling out of orbit in a busted drop pod. Just shrugs, walks it off and starts filling orks full of holes.
that was good, but my favorite parts are where he bonds with the Steel Legionnaires. Its very ADB-esque in its own way, which is also what made Helsreach so good (or the Night Lords series, or pretty much everything ADB writes. human/post human interactions form a major part of many of his stories.)
I have to agree on the strong ending, but I think my biggest problem with the Saint arc is summed up with two words: Lijah Cuu. I can't stand Cuu. He just drags. Every time the book lingered on him I just wanted to kick the story in the ass and get it moving. He's boring "i r teh evul" character and my god I was pleased when he got offed so that the series could dump his dead weight. He's the total opposite of a character like, say, Pontius Glaw. You can't pluck Glaw out of the Eisenhorn trilogy without the whole story collapsing. It's been awhile since I reread the arc but I don't recall Cuu ever contributing anything meaningful that couldn't have been handled with a Chaos character here and there getting in a kill.
I could see that. Cuu was sort of set up to be a Hakeswill-type character. someone on their side who is just evil and demonstrates that not all the Guard are WONDEFUL HEROIC types. I think his presence was a necessary part of that arc in that respect (both for the atmosphere and the way it shaped the attitudes/interactions of the Verghastites and Tanith, esp in Guns of Tanith,) but I can see that it would drag because of how prominent he was in that series. I guess I never noticed it because when he wasn't being a bad guy I largely tuned him out, but the parts where he was bad were the significant ones, drama wise.

I also think we were supposed to hate Cuu. He's not supposed to be a Glaw or Molotch - that was closer I think to what Rawne was. Cuu embodies the ugliest parts of the Guard, the horrible yet acceptable 'price' paid for the way it amasses forces and wages war.

I'd say Meryn is/was the closest to a Glaw that the Ghosts get, and by now even he's getting overused (he's basically stepped over into the Cuu category.)
Admittedly though, it was entertaining to see him get trashed on occasion.
Yes. Much the same with Meryn. They're supposed to be hated the same way you're supposed to like Caffran or Tona or Bragg.

I didn't mind Titanicus being a mostly stand-alone novel since I quite enjoyed it for its own sake. The parts that annoyed me the most were the way it rushed through the last battle (hey the narrative is kinda setting up the possibility for some orbital bombardment, oh wait no here's a page-long ground fight) and the feeling at the end of the whole Samstag plot was "well, that did nothing and had no contribution to the plot, thanks Dan." I guess you can make an argument for window-dressing, but it really just felt like padding. If it had at least affected something I wouldn't have minded the amount of time spent on it, I liked the little plots with the toymaker and the gardener even though they didn't really go anywhere, but the amount of time devoted to the Samstag plot just felt like it should have accomplished more.
It wouldn't be the first time Abnett included a plot point that didn't go anywhere (Guilder Worlin from Necropolis), but I suspect in Titanicus it really comes down to how you view the story, or what you think Abnett intended. I tend to view Titanicus as being more like Ghostmaker or the Cain novels, its a sort of sandbox telling lots of individual stories that sort of tie together, but don't neccesarily have to go anywhere. We're getting lots of little glimpses of the overall war from the eyes of different people. For me it kinda worked (although I'll agree the story did lack a strong driving focus compared to some of his other works like honour Guard or Sabbat MArtyr.) but I guess it really comes down to what you think about Abnett and his goals. he's a writer who likes to experiment with it. Sometimes (usually?) it works, but he does have his share of misses, but I'm willing to put up with it because that experimentation generally is what sustains the series and that the outcomes have generally (for me) been more positive than negative.
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Connor MacLeod wrote:True. It may also simply reflect that anyone picked for Dreadnought hood is more or less, by default exceptional compared to most Marines. not unlike the officers really. So having a Dreadnought be more characterful than your average bog-standard Marine is not unusual.
I agree.
I could see that. Cuu was sort of set up to be a Hakeswill-type character. someone on their side who is just evil and demonstrates that not all the Guard are WONDEFUL HEROIC types. I think his presence was a necessary part of that arc in that respect (both for the atmosphere and the way it shaped the attitudes/interactions of the Verghastites and Tanith, esp in Guns of Tanith,) but I can see that it would drag because of how prominent he was in that series. I guess I never noticed it because when he wasn't being a bad guy I largely tuned him out, but the parts where he was bad were the significant ones, drama wise.

I also think we were supposed to hate Cuu. He's not supposed to be a Glaw or Molotch - that was closer I think to what Rawne was. Cuu embodies the ugliest parts of the Guard, the horrible yet acceptable 'price' paid for the way it amasses forces and wages war.

I'd say Meryn is/was the closest to a Glaw that the Ghosts get, and by now even he's getting overused (he's basically stepped over into the Cuu category.)
True. My problem with Cuu wasn't really him being a bad guy, just how bland he felt. Every scene with him was entirely predictable, everything he felt totally stock, and with the amount of screen time given over to someone about as interesting as gravy just drove me up the wall. Maybe if he had been a tad more nuanced or perhaps a bit more ambivalent at first, but as I recall you could pretty much peg him in his first appearance and he never really went anywhere.
It wouldn't be the first time Abnett included a plot point that didn't go anywhere (Guilder Worlin from Necropolis), but I suspect in Titanicus it really comes down to how you view the story, or what you think Abnett intended. I tend to view Titanicus as being more like Ghostmaker or the Cain novels, its a sort of sandbox telling lots of individual stories that sort of tie together, but don't neccesarily have to go anywhere. We're getting lots of little glimpses of the overall war from the eyes of different people. For me it kinda worked (although I'll agree the story did lack a strong driving focus compared to some of his other works like honour Guard or Sabbat MArtyr.) but I guess it really comes down to what you think about Abnett and his goals. he's a writer who likes to experiment with it. Sometimes (usually?) it works, but he does have his share of misses, but I'm willing to put up with it because that experimentation generally is what sustains the series and that the outcomes have generally (for me) been more positive than negative.
Yeah, I can't really fault a person for enjoying the plotline since there was really nothing bad about it, and I get why it was tossed in there. I just wanted more stuff with the Titans, maybe more stuff with the skitarii. I kept expecting that part of the book to tie into...something. And it never really did, it felt a bit like someone had chopped up a short story that was taking place concurrent to the novel's timeframe and jammed it in here and there to space things out.
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Kuja wrote:Man I love Autolochus. He's like the Han Solo of the Iron Snakes chapter, always ready with a deadpan one-liner and not afraid to mouth off to a chapter master.
Once you're a Dreadnought, you don't have much to lose. :D

Seriously, the Iron Snakes as portrayed have a huge institutional need for designated drivers: people who can think, who have judgment and wisdom and not just violent skills. They make good soldiers, and good noncoms, and even good company and field-grade officers (people who handle tactics). What they lack, and this may be an institutional weakness of the Astartes, is strategists.

For the Iron Snakes, Petrok may be the closest they have to a true strategist, and I think part of the institutional, traditional role of the dreadnoughts MAY be to encourage senior Chapter officers to listen to the strategists.

One thing to remember is, a typical Marine chapter is thousands of years old. They don't get that old by being pushovers, or by lacking the ability to cope with a crisis. If a given feature of how they operate LOOKS dumb, then realistically that chapter probably has some kind of institutional bypass or safety valve that keeps it from totally wrecking them in an emergency.*

Probably. Not always, of course, since some chapters are just too dumb to live (i.e. Soul Drinkers)
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Simon_Jester wrote:Seriously, the Iron Snakes as portrayed have a huge institutional need for designated drivers: people who can think, who have judgment and wisdom and not just violent skills. They make good soldiers, and good noncoms, and even good company and field-grade officers (people who handle tactics). What they lack, and this may be an institutional weakness of the Astartes, is strategists.

For the Iron Snakes, Petrok may be the closest they have to a true strategist, and I think part of the institutional, traditional role of the dreadnoughts MAY be to encourage senior Chapter officers to listen to the strategists.
I think the Iron Snakes' problem, more realistically, wasn't that they were dumb but rather complacent. Compared to many other areas of 40K's galaxy the Reef Stars are kind of quiet and it seems like the Iron Snakes got used to the same old, same old. Orks poking at the front door, go kick them off the property. Dark eldar scratching at the back door, go shoo them off. Chaos got a toehold, go stamp it out. The Snakes got used to handling problems that they could just smack around.

Except then one day a GIANT FUCKING ORK WAAAGH showed up thanks to the dark eldar and their pranks and the Snakes were caught with their metaphorical pants down, trying to kick the orks off their property the way they'd gotten used to doing. As I recall once Priad and Petrok got the key in place they actually did a pretty good job fucking with the orks and even planted the teeth the orks wanted on a dark eldar world to counter-troll them. They just needed that metaphorical moment to shake themselves out of their complacency.
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Kuja wrote:True. My problem with Cuu wasn't really him being a bad guy, just how bland he felt. Every scene with him was entirely predictable, everything he felt totally stock, and with the amount of screen time given over to someone about as interesting as gravy just drove me up the wall. Maybe if he had been a tad more nuanced or perhaps a bit more ambivalent at first, but as I recall you could pretty much peg him in his first appearance and he never really went anywhere.
Cuu was pretty much just a killer. That's all he's presented as, and that's all he was meant to be. He embodied the worst aspects of the Guard and played up as a personal antagonist for Larkin to deal with - he only existed really to develop Larkin as a character I suspect. Not all Ghosts get the same level of development or depth. That's one of the problems Abnett always has, its a bit of a juggling act to handle the different characters - how much time to give to them and for how long, etc. I mean look at Merrt - his whole gimmick is 'shot in the mouth, can't shoot' and that pretty much was what carried him forward.

In fact you cna probably say that the vast majority of the Ghosts characters are really shallow if you focus on them in any single detail, but the appeal of the story is less in individual characters than it is in the regiment as a whole, how different characters interact, and how they are shaped by (and shape) the setting they are in. I mean heck, Gaunt is perhaps the most developed character, and that only results from him being in virtually every novel and even then much of that development has only happened over the last sequqnece and a half.

Thats one reason I dont feel you can really compare the Inquisitor stuff with the Ghosts. Eisenhorn for example focused entirely on Eisenhorn, with only superficial development of other characters as it pertains to Eisenhorn. Ravenor is a bit in between (and thats where it, in my mind, suffers.. it straddles the line between Eisenhorn and the Ghosts.. not the 'shallow but diverse' of the Ghosts, or the 'Deep but narrow' of Eisenhorn.. and it sort of suffers as a result of that, although I think much of my dissatisfaction for Ravenor stemmed from the last novel... I actually like the first one, and the second one wasn't bad either.)

Yeah, I can't really fault a person for enjoying the plotline since there was really nothing bad about it, and I get why it was tossed in there. I just wanted more stuff with the Titans, maybe more stuff with the skitarii. I kept expecting that part of the book to tie into...something. And it never really did, it felt a bit like someone had chopped up a short story that was taking place concurrent to the novel's timeframe and jammed it in here and there to space things out.
I think that can be part of the problem sometimes. Abnett is just so prolific and he can try to experiment in so many different ways, its easy to get into a rut of thinking and then when he tries something different it just.. feels off.

Also, IIRC it wasn't long ago where he was having those medical difficulties, so he had a period (Legion for example, but I think Titanicus was there too) where you can see a noticible difference in his writing. I imagine with the worries he had, any author might be... distracted. :P
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[quote="Simon_Jester"Possibly. Not all wrecks are that big.[/quote]

Given that a lot of starships are kilometers long we're probably looking at extinction-level events anytime one collides into a planet.
Er... what do you mean?
Sorry, that was a bit of an in-joke between me and my 40K friends. Priad basically shows very little "warm" emotions except towards the dog, so we tend to joke that "PUPPIES" is the only way to get Priad to care about something.
Maybe Connor's dislike comes more from other factors. Like how the orks and (especially) dark eldar are portrayed as very weak, and easily slaughtered by the Marines. Or, well, Priad isn't exactly a cerebral guy. There's a conversation something like:

Khiron: "Maybe this is the end of the time of brawn, and the start of the time for brains"
Priad: "I hope not, for brawn is all I have."

Petrok really does come out of this looking like the designated driver of the Iron Snakes; he's the one who knows how to really think.
Yeah, and later on Priad hammers the point in home by saying "I would like to use my brains for once. I envy Brother Medes for not needing one".
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Now we actually delve into the series with.. First and Only. First book in the Ghosts series, and also the biggest analysis I'll be doing. So much so you can figure on close to four or five updates. For reference, look here for old thread.

The Ghosts series has been called 'Richard Sharpe ins pace' or 40K Sharpe or the liek (much as Cain is flashman etc.) but at least in the Ghosts/Sharpe case I'd say its less a direct parallel. The feel of the series, and the writing, certainly feel Sharpe-ish. The Ghosts themselves feel alot like the 95th Rifles, but the similarities really kinda end there. GAunt is no Richard Sharpe. He is - if not quite noble born - alot better well off and comes from a Schola background (Sharpe was barely literate until taught at a later age by an officer.) and had to 'rise in the ranks' to his role, whereas Gaunt is literally OUTSIDE the chain of command as a Commissar, until bestwoed his rank by fiat. Gaunt shares some of the charisma, the 'lead by example' and the relaxed attitude of Sharpe, but where Sharpe fights for his friends, for pride, and because its all he knows, Gaunt still has the fundamental devotion every Commissar has, although he also fights for his Ghosts as much as for the God Emperor and the success of the Crusade. He is less selfish and more loyal/zealous than Sharpe ever was. If anything, Sharpe as the character has been 'broken up' and had his character qualities scattered amongst various Ghosts. Corbec has some 'Sharpe-like' qualities (in his leadership, although I'd also say he's more Harper-ish.) whilst Rawne seems to gain the lion's share of 'bad traits' from Gaunt.




The first two books of the Ghost series are actually collections of writings from Inferno!, although the first reads more like 'Execution Hour' - in that its a bunch of short stories strung together in a way to make a larger story, whilst Ghostmaker feels more like an 'anthology.' done by the same author (lots of little separate stories covering the individual ghosts.) These two books (actually I include Necropolis in my mind because the 'feel' of the series is more 'early book' than with stuff we get in Honour Guard) are sorts of 'introductions' to the universe.. they are technically separate from the later 'arc' in that they don't follow or build on it as much sa the latter books do, but they serve to introduce us to Gaunt and the Tanith and to sort of lay the foundations for what is to come from Necropolis onwards. The story is also quite different in other ways, I feel. Much of the stuff we get standardized in latter Ghosts novels technically and otherwise is not present here (for example the Ghosts use meltas and very few projectile weapons which changes with Honour Guard. Likeiwise the regimental structure apparently changes post Vervun and this will be commented on later as well.) Its kinda hard to explain in detail, but its just alot of 'little' changes early on that become noticably different with the latter novels, and I suspect they reflect a change in attitude/writing of the Ghosts (Abnett may not have had a clear 'vision' in mind when he started writing, but later on he decided how he wanted to go and the changes reflect that.)

Anyhow, I'll discuss Ghostmaker more when that book comes up, but for now we deal with First and Only. First and Only is primarily about Gaunt as a character, with the Ghosts being sort of supporting (although we get introductions to all of them.) Its about Gaunt's past, his role in this Crusade and how he has grown up and been shaped by it, and what drives him We won't hear much about Tanith and what happened to it or how it shapes the Ghosts just yet (Ghostmaker will cover Tanith.) but we get a nice introduction to that as well. The story is Gaunt-centric, and alot of the themes - why he is as he is, why he is with the Tanith and treats them as they do, stem greatly from his own personal past I believe.

Page 7
“The high lords of Terra, lauding the great Warmaster Slaydo’s efforts on Khulen, tasked him with raising a crusade force to liberate the Sabbat Worlds, a cluster of nearly one hundred inhabited systems along the edge of the Segmentum Pacificus. From a massive fleet deployment, nearly a billion Imperial Guard advanced into the Sabbat Worlds, supported by forces of the Adeptus Astartes and the Adeptus Mechanicus, with whom Slaydo had formed co-operative pacts.
A discussion of the scope of the SWC conflict. one hundred worlds on the edge of pacificus (which is different than what is depicted in the SWC guide, which puts it in Tempestus for some reason.) And a billion guard intiial deployment, although one assumes that by now they've grown to occupy a much bigger, multi-system conflict.

Page 9
The saffron haze of the nebula called the Nubila Reach hung as a spread backdrop for them, a thousand light years wide, a hazy curtain which enfolded the edges of the Sabbat Worlds.
Which implies the Sabbat worlds might be quite large. Assuming its 'straight' in the traditional cubic fashion you might be 1000 LY. If we figure its circumference (or at least half a circumference) would be 318 LY, which is still larger than a sector. Of course thats still an approximation. Figure the SWC area is between 200-1000 LY, possibly bigger because it hasn't been officially 'coordinated' yet.



Page 9
Each of these patrol interceptors was an elegant barb about one hundred paces from jutting nose to raked tail. The Faustus were lean, powerful warships that looked like serrated cathedral spires with splayed flying buttresses at the rear to house the main thrusters. Their armoured flanks bore the Imperial Eagle, together with the green markings and insignia of the Segmentum Pacificus Fleet.
Faustus class patrol interceptors. 'Pace' can have several different meanings. 30 to 36 inches (.76 metre to 1 metre) or ninety cm (3 feet), or athe roman 'pace' (58.1 inches, or 1.48 metres). Which yields lengths ranging from 76 metres to 148 metres or so, making it a very large fighter or a very small starship (of the parasite sort mentioned in Space fleet.) Median length of course would be 90-100 metres. :P



Page 9
Locked in the hydraulic arrestor struts of the command seat in the lead ship, Wing Captain Torten LaHain forced down his heart rate as the ship decelerated. Synchronous mind-impulse links bequeathed by the Adeptus Mechanicus hooked his metabolism to the ship’s ancient systems, and he lived and breathed every nuance of its motion, power-output and response.
The pilot has MIU links and life support functions tied into the ship, not unlike some Titans or starship captains (obvious parallels technology wise.) Helps with detection, maintenance and control. Also the 'hydraulic arrestor struts' may be some sort of acceleration thingamajig, but it suggests they don't have inertial damping (or at least, not perfect ID.)



Page 10
"..The astropath’s instructions are to sweep down the edge of the gas clouds for a final look, and then it’s back to the fleet.”
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Hundreds of filament leads linked the astropath’s socket-encrusted skull to the massive sensory apparatus in the Faustus’ belly.
..
The astropath’s brain was constantly surveying and processing the vast wave of astronomical data which the ship’s sensors pumped into it, and psychically probing the Warp beyond. Small patrol ships like this, with their astropathic cargo, were the early warning arm of the fleet. The work was hard on the psyker’s mind, and the odd moan or grimace was commonplace. There had been worse. They’d gone through a nickel-rich asteroid field the previous week and the psyker had gone into spasms.
The Faustus are patrol interceptors, and thus have an Astropath, presumabl for detection/scrying (at least of the warp) as well as communication/relay purposes. I imagine this isn't typical for most attack craft, but as they're an 'early warning' system its important here.
It also seems unlikely a ship that small has a warp drive. They might, we don't know for sure whether or not, but the only ships that size I've known of were Rogue Trader or Inquisitor craft. Its equally likely they're on the edges of a system too.



Page 10
“Tail turret, aye!” crackled back the servitor at the rear of the ship.
“Flight engineer ready, by the Emperor!” fuzzed the voice of the engine chamber.
Comment on crew and armament. Servitor seems more aware than most. At least 3 crew, which is rather a few for such a large ship, even if it is an interceptor.



PAge 11
Vermilion was the highest clearance level used by the Crusade’s cryptographers. It was unheard of, mythical. Even main battle schemes usually only warranted a Magenta. He felt an icy tightness in his wrists, a tremor in his heart. Sympathetically, the Interceptor’s reactor fibrillated.
Comment on clearance levels and security. Also the interceptor has a reactor tied to the commander's heart (again, not unlike titans.)




Page 11
A routine day had just become very un-routine.
Implying that they took a day or less to get where they are. Possible with sublight drive, less likely to be warp drive given Abnett's depcition of inter-sector warp drive times.



Page 12
They’re coming in fast!” the observer repeated. “Throne of Earth, but they’re moving!” LaHain looked across his over-sweep board and saw the runic cursors flashing as they edged into the tactical grid.
“Defence system activated! Weapons to ready!” he barked. Drum autoloaders chattered in the chin turret forward of him as he armed the auto-cannons, and energy reservoirs whined as they powered up the main forward-firing plasma guns.
We dont know how fast they are, but they're apparently right on the edge of 'effective' interceptor detection range. Interceptor has autocannons (rear turret, servitor controlled), chin turret (we learn they're heavy bolters), and plasma cannons. Oddly no missiles or lascannon. Attack craft has autoloaders too.




Page 12
The other Interceptor was coming at him at close to full thrust. LaHain’s enhanced optics, amplified and linked via the canopy’s systems, saw Moselle’s ship while it was still a thousand kilometres away. Behind it, lazy and slow, came the vampiric shapes, the predatory ships of Chaos.
Implied sensor range of at least 1000 km against other attack craft, and optics magnification covering that range. optics are linked to canopy systems, suggsting the canopy is more than just glass or glass-analogue.



Page 13
The sleek fighting ship blinked forward, thrust-drive roaring blue heat. LaHain rejoiced at the singing of the engine in his blood. He was pushing the threshold tolerances of the ship. Amber alert sigils were lighting his display. LaHain was slowly being crushed into the cracked, ancient leather of his command chair.
Again, implying thta the fighter craft either have no inertial dampers, or its not perfectly efficient (it onyl damps a percentage of acceleration, or it has a slight delay in achieving full compensation.)



Page 13
In the tail turret, the gunner servitor traversed the twin auto-cannons, hunting for a target. He didn’t see the attackers, but he saw their absence: the flickering darkness against the stars.
The turret guns screamed into life, blitzing out a scarlet-tinged, boiling stream of hypervelocity fire.
Enemy fighters seem to be just on the edge of visual range. figure perhaps a few tens of km. Also autocannons are hypervelocity, which implies (conservatively) at least 1000 m/s, and more probably several km/s (or several tens of km/s). assuming a 100-300 gram shell and 2 km/s call it at least 200-600 kj per shot. At tens of km/s it woudl be considerably stronger.



Page 13
Indicators screamed shrill warnings in the cockpit. The enemy had obtained multiple target lock.
Multiple target locks on Faustus, which are detected (Active target locks)



Page 13
The chin turret spat a thousand heavy bolter rounds a second. The plasma-guns howled phosphorescent death into the void. One of the shadow-shapes exploded in a bright blister of flame..
Which is a fairly insane rate of fire for a heavy bolter if its single barreld. If its multi barreld (gatling mount) we might be figuring it could approach that, although even that would be insane (miniguns reach something like 100-200 rounds per second usually.) Probably more like a mega bolter. Heavy bolter implies 25mm round Assuming velocity similar to autocannon and 100 grams (200 kj at least) that would be 200 MJ to severalG



Page 14
LaHain scored a second kill too. He ripped open the belly of another attacker, spilling its pressurised guts into the void. It burst like a swollen balloon, spinning round under the shuddering impact and spewing its contents in a fire trail behind itself.

A second later, a rain of toxic and corrosive warheads, each a sliver of metal like a dirty needle, raked the Faustus end to end. They detonated the astropath’s head and explosively atomised the observer out through the punctured hull. Another killed the Flight Engineer outright and destroyed the reactor interlock.
Two billiseconds after that, stress fractures shattered the Faustus class Interceptor like it was a glass bottle. A super-dense explosion boiled out from the core, vaporising the ship and LaHain with it.
The corona of the blast rippled out for eighty kilometres until it vanished in the nebula’s haze.
Effect of Chaos gunfire on Faustus. Reactor overloads and vaporizes ship in a couple nanoseconds. Assuming a 100 ton fighter made of rion we're talking 760 GJ, possibly in the exawatt range (though not joule, since its fraction of a second implied.) Whether the fuel or just the reactor exploded is up for dbate.
Also, given that the explosion covered 80 km (diameter or radius) it suggests a lower limit again on the engagement range, as the Chaos fighters aren't anywhere in range. If diameter, 40 km. If radius 80 km. Both minimum ranges. Likewise, the implied range/velocity is high single/low double digit at least, as the time to strike is probably a couple seconds or less (the destruction of LeHain's interceptor suggests approximately a second.) high tens/low hundreds is also possible, and either would fit in 'hypervelocity' quite easily. Upper limit of course is the 1000 km, suggesting the shells travel far less than that.
If we figure 100 gram shell at 20-40 km/s we get 20-80 MJ (for autocannon or bolter shells). At heavy bolter rates of fire that ups to double digit GJ for KE easily. If its 80 km/s and we figure a .3 kg shell its 960 MJ (or triple digit GJ. I'll note that one big limiting factor would be recoil, although we don't know exactly how massive the fighter is. I'm guessing its at least comparable to a Marauder/STarhawk/fury, which suggests hundreds of tonnes, but it could be bigger than that. But given the implications of acceleration and the probable mass and rates of fire, its unlikely that either heavy bolters or autocannon coudl be much bigger than 100-300 gram shelsl, plus greater than 80 kms, AND ROF approaching 1000 rounds per second. We might fudge those for individual weapons (Autocannons having lower velocity, or rate of fire but higher mass, heavy botlers firing lower mass bullets faster and at a greater rate.)
In defense of this, we do know from 'Greatre Good' that recoil for cannon on fighters and attack craft imprats not-inconsiderable recoil to the craft that has to be compensated for by thrusters, so high MJ/low GJ range guns is not unreasonable either.



Page 16
The victory mattered, not the glory. As a commissar-general, his authority was well liked, and no one doubted his loyalty to the Imperium, his resolute adherence to the primary dictates, or the rousing fury of his speeches to the men. But he believed war was a simple thing, where caution and restraint could win far more for less cost.
He had seen the reverse too many times before. The command echelons generally believed in the theory of attrition when it came to the Imperial Guard. Any foe could be ground into pulp if you threw enough at them, and the Guard was, to them, a limitless supply of cannon fodder for just such a purpose.
That was not Oktar’s way. He had schooled the officer cadre of the Hyrkans to believe it too. He had taught General Caernavar and his staff to value every man, and knew the majority of the six thousand Hyrkans, many by name.
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They were brave boys. He would not waste them, and he would not have the officers waste them. He glanced down from his half-track ...
Hyrken commissar has a half track. Also we get comment on the 'way' Oktar, Gaunt, and the Hyrkens wage war, and how it difers framatically from many other Guardsmen (EG not attritional.) ACtual rarity of such officers is not discussed, but one figures that since Oktar is one of Slaydo's bunch, he wasn't totally uncommon (Slaydo was pretty anti-attrition too as I recall.)
It just really underscores how variable the Guard can be in its approach to warfare, both in terms of application of those theories/training, and the poltiical/glory aspects of it (EG Dravere.) The Guard way is, fundamentally a double edged sword.



Page 17
He knew their strengths and weaknesses to a man...
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He valued each and every man for his abilities in the field of war. He would not waste them. He and General Caernavar would use them, each one in his particular way, and they would win and win and win again, a hundred times more than any who used his regiments like bullet-soaks in the bloody frontline.
Men like Dravere. Oktar dreaded to think what that beast might do when finally given field command of an action like this. Let the little piping runt in his starched collar sound off to the high brass about him.
Again Difference between the 'attrition' types like Dravere and Okatar's approach to war. The differences between the two is a rather strong recurring theme in this novel, but also throughout the series (Gaunt being functionally unwilling to just sacrifice troops under his command, for example.)



Page 18
They knew they were going to lose this war before it even started, but still they tried to break loose from the Imperium. The sergeant knew that Oktar admired them. And, in turn, he admired the way Oktar had urged the chief staff to give the rebels every chance to surrender. What was the point of killing for no purpose?
HERESY! actually not because its a Commissar doing it. I imagine tis something Ciaphas Cain would do too, so that makes me think it probably would be forgiven... so long as it gets results and good propoganda. And it also demonstrates that, with the proper officer, teh Guard will be diplomatic and accept surrender rather than fanatically butchering TEH HERETICS without question. Although its farily obvious folk like Dravare wouldn't follow this logic.



Page 19
Still, the sergeant had shuddered when the three thousand pounder had fishtailed down into the communications bunker and flattened it.
1.36 ton bomb blows up bunker.


Page 21
Gaunt took the webbing belt and set the timers on all twenty grenades.
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Trooper Walthem moved up. Gaunt knew he was famous in the regiment for the power of his throw. He’d been a javelin champion back home on Hyrkan.
..
Walthem hefted the belt of grenades with a tiny grunt. Sixty paces down, the corridor disintegrated.
A Hyrkan (and a rather strong one) can throw a belt of 20 grenades 60 feet. That could be anywhere from 8-10 kg (for a half kilo grenade more like modern ones) to 20 kilos (if its like those bigger 'mills bomb' grenades mentioned in the Munitorum Manual.) I'm actually banking on the former though. 60 paces, as noted before, is varaible an could mean anywhere from 45 to 90 metres or so, which is rather damn far (and impressive strength) for throwing a heavy grenade belt no matter how you swing it. The man must be Bragg like in hs strength.



PAge 21
..the rebel leader, lying dead with his mouth fused around the barrel of his lasgun.
Lasbarrels apparently get hot enough to melt/burn/cauterize flesh - at least on firing.


Page 22
The temperature in the hallway itself seemed to drop. At once, the breaths of all of the men steamed the air. It smelled heavy, burnt and metallic, the way it did before a storm.
Psyker powers side effects. Pretty common across various sources. Exactly why the temp drops happen isn't specified. Is it a side effect of opening a warp portal to draw on it (energy drawn in), or does the psyker tap into surrounding temperatures to draw energy for channeling the warp (thus resulting in a reduction in temperature? I belive in real life supposed psychic activity has advanced this theory to explain how they achieve psychokinetic feats.)



Page 22
The cracked old voice bubbled out of her quivering lips. “The Warp knows you, Ibram.”
Another recurring theme of the series. Gaunt, and the Ghosts, are impleid to be central players in a much bigger 'order vs chaos' conflict. Later on in novels like Straight Silver and Sabbat Martyr, we get further hints of this, once the Saint returns and Gaunts ghost visitation. Or heck, even Larkin's angel in Ghostmaker (if its real.)



Page 26
..Mad Larkin, the first squad’s wiry sniper, was cooking up something that approximated caffeine in a battered tin tray over a fusion burner.
Fusion burner. Whether that means pyrum petrol or 'melta' stove (portable microwave hahaha) or 'fusion' as in nuclear fusion, its up for debate. Either way its unlikey its promethium (unless we're talking DIESEL fusion, of course.)


Page 30
...gesturing over his shoulder to the green glow of the tactical communication artificer, built into the muddy wall of the command burrow.
Gaunt has some sort of codifier/cogitator/whatver fancy wod they use for a 40K computer. It may be part of a bigger network or just the terminal access, or even just a communications node. ITs not really clear here. Its also not quite clear if this is a permanant or temporary structure. But it shows that at least some elements of Guard warfare is most distinctly not just merely WW1/WW2.



Page 31
A shell whinnied down low across his position and dug a hole the size of a drop-ship behind the rear breastwork of the trench.
ASsuming something as big or bigger than an Arvus lighter, we're probably talking 8-10 metres at leas, which I'd anticipate is something on the order of 90-200 kilograms of TNT equivalent, assuming a hemispherical crater, and quite possibly bigger. Now, that said we have absolutely no freaking clue what causes it, except its Shriven artillery of some kind



Page 33
The crack of lasguns and needle lasers began to whip around them from the armoured loopholes on the trench head.
'needle lasers'. They seem to be the early term Abnett used to define long las sniper rifles. Part of me wonders if he confused 'needler descriptions from early fluff and figured it was a needle-thin laser rather than a 'laser driving a toxic dart'. Oh well, I prefer laser sniper rifles myself anyhow. Presumably it refers to beam diameter, although what kind of needle isn't specified. Knitting needles go from between .5 mm IIRC up to 25 mm (an inch ro so.) Hypodermics are ~3mm IIRC, and a sewing needle can be a mm or less. a few mm is the desired spot diameter for 'exploding' shit, and we've seen long las with both penetration and a propensity for exploding shit, so it would fit.



Page 33
There was a sizzling thicket of las-fire a hundred paces deep and twenty kilometres long where the advancing legions of the enemy met the Imperial Guard regiments head on.
Implied range of lasfire. again could mean as little as 75 m or 150 m.



Page 35-36
..once the hydroelectric industrial heartland of Fortis Binary...
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...a workforce of nineteen billion in the production of armour and heavy weaponry for the Imperial war machine.
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..in fortified factories, worker habitats and material store yards, the enemy was dug in — a billion strong, a vast massed legion of daemoniac cultists. Fortis Binary was a primary Imperial forge world...
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No one knew how the Ruinous Powers had come to corrupt it,...
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The master-factories and tech-plants of Fortis Binary were too valuable to be stamped flat by an orbital bombardment.
Whatever the cost, for the good of the Imperium, this world had to be retaken a pace at a time, by men on the ground: fighting men, Imperial Guard, soldiers who would, by the sweat of their backs, root out and destroy every last scrap of Chaos and leave the precious industries of the forge world ready and waiting for re-population.
Forge world's size and population, as well as the scope of the enemy they fight against. 19 billion isn't unusual for a forge world (There was one such in the Cain novels too) but a billion enemies is. Presumably unless Guard ratios are truly retarded (Eg 100:1 kill rato, which seems unlikely) there are at least tens if not hundreds of millions of them total.
Also suggests that nearly 5% of the population being openly alligned with Chaos is unusual, indicating that the ratios, such as they are, tend to be far lower. At least for major worlds like Forge worlds.
Also hydroelectric power, implying they have (intact) oceans that probably aren't total industrial sludge.
Lastly, Fortis Binary is deemed 'too important' to simply blast the enemy via orbital bombardment to defeat them, because of the collateral damage it would inflict. So they need to send in troops to do it the hard (and inefficient.) way. Mind you the 'hard way' is not always guaranteed not to fuck upt he world any less than orbital bombardment (EG Vraks) but there's at least the chance the enemy will be beaten long before conventional firepower can demolish the place, I suppose.


Page 36
" But by a turn of fate, he has achieved a regimental command. Warmaster Slaydo granted him the command of the Tanith on his deathbed."
Slaydo made Gaunt an officer, indicating Warmasters have powers over even Commissars (unsurprisingly.) Its commented on earlier that commissar-officers are rare, even though Gaunt's mentor was a Commissar-General



Page 39
There was Trooper Klay as well, but he was dead. The fierce crossfire had cauterised his face before he could reach cover.
'cauterised' a face. Presumably its lasfire, but we dont know how many shots, why it didn't blow the face apart (lasfire in the novels, even in specific novels can vary from thermal to mechanical or even a combination of effects. Variable setting or someting perhaps.) It might be a heavy weapon too,b ut most heavy energy weapons (plasma, melta, lascannon) woudln't just cauterize the face, they'd blow the head apart adn probably the upper torso as well.
Anyhow, aassuming a 20x20 cm face and betwen 50-100 j per sq cm flash burns you get between 20-40 kj. If its a dozen shots you can get single digit kj per shot, whilst a single shot is of course implied double digit kj.



Page 40
“There’s mud in my firing mechanism, sir. I can’t free it.”
Feygor snatched the lasgun from the younger man, ejected the magazine and slung back the oiled cover of the ignition chamber, so that it was open and the focus rings exposed. Feygor spat into the open chamber and then slammed it shut with a clack.
To be honest I dont know of any RL lasers that use something that could be remotely described as a 'focus ring' - particle beams could, maybe, but not lasers. I suppose it might be something like this or referencing fibre optics, but my instinct is to say that the ghosts lasguns are not normal lasers. Given how they act later in the series this is probably reasonable. They may be some sort of magical raygun or they may be a form of particle beam weapon.


Page 41
Almost at once las-fire started to sear down the trench towards them. Varl was hit and his shoulder vanished in a puff of red mist. He went down hard on his backside and then flopped over clutching with the one arm that would still work.
Lasfire destroys Varl's shoulder. We learn in this novel and Ghostmaker and later on he basically has an augmetic shoulder - the shoulder blade and joint had to be replaced, but the arm is still natural, indicating the scope of the destruction basically severed the limb. I'm figuring this means that the Scapula and the joint connecting to the humerous (possibly itself) but not the ribs were shattered/destroyed by the stroke.so I'm guessing maybe at least 5-15 cm 'wide' areas, and at least several inches 'deep' destroyed. Although the lack of shrapnel mentioned is either story oversight or it was vaporised. I'll assume it wasn't mentioned. Assuming a laser-death ray style 'blaster' (luke campells site, of course.) with 5mm spot diameter, 10 microseconds between pulses, you need 10 kj in a single pulse to shatter nearly 5 cm worth of bone thickness. Anything bigger than that gets into tens of kilojoules easily, and its not really easy to shatter. It could be that the shrapnel damaged the shoulder blade, but we dont know quite how badly it was damaged either so I'm hesitant to go beyond 'arm was probably severed' I wouldnt rule out single digit completely, since I've heard of assault rifle bullets (A couple kj) being able to purportedly sever arms (although not to my knwoeldge destroying shoulders, but I can hardly claim absolutes here.)
On the other hand, 10 kj pulse would assume the whole laser is a single pulse, and that gives absolutely SHIT penetration (slightly less than an inch) in bone, so we're probably talking multiple pulses. Even if I am wrong about the pulse size and it was only a few kj per pulse (2 kj could cause maybe 3 cm diameter injury) it would still probably be close to or at 10 kj total per 'shot' simply because of the multiple pulse and aspect ratio issues. This does become less a problem if we're talking something more like a particle beam (quite possible to argue given GG style lasgun performances in latter novels) and it could quite possibly be that a few kj delivered in a sufficiently penetrative manenr COULD destroy the shoulder, but I'd still bet on at least 10 kj to account for the joint and shoulder blade being damaged, in all probability.



Page 42
Gaunt raised his bolt-pistol and blew the masked head into vapour.
Gaunt bolt pistol headsplosion. He has multiple rounds so we dont know what kidn this is. I'm presuming Mass reactive.


Page 44
Gaunt had kept the nature of the orders from his men. Unlike Dravere, he understood the mechanisms of morale and inspiration. Now they were taking the damned trenches, almost in spite of Dravere’s orders rather than because of them. His laughter was the laughter of fury and resentment, and pride in his men for doing the impossible regardless.
Gaunt is a commissar in the 'traditional' sense. he leads by example and inspiration rather than fear and intimidation and 'blam'. Which is how I like it. he's not as manipulative or psychological as Cain, but his straightforward, down to earth approach has its own charm, and its one of the more obvious ways he 'feels' like the 40K Version of Richard Sharpe (the two really don't have much else in common, though.)



Page 45
Caffran found himself flying, lifted by a wall of air issued from a bomb blast that created a crater twelve metres wide.
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As far as he knew, Neff, Major Rawne, Feygor, Larkin, Lonegin, all the rest, were dead and vaporised.
12 m wide crater this time, which by ADC cratering shoudl be 300 kg. If it simply 'blasted' the squad apart (or half a squad or whatever) we're probably talking 8-12 MJ per person, so thats 80-120 MJ tops. Tens or hundreds of kg of TNT. Of course literal vaporization means hundreds of MJ to thousands :P



Page 46
..after consulting the tightly-scrolled fibre-light charts, they were advancing into support trenches behind the Shriven main line.
fibre light chart. I dont know wheter its a rigid chart/mapslate/dataslate thingy with a fancy light attached, ro some werid scroll thingy for Gothic effect, but its interesting either way.



Page 46
The electro-magnetic aftershock of the ceaseless barrage was scrambling their communications, both the microbead intercoms that all the officers wore and the long range vox-caster radio sets.
I'm not sure if conventional explosions can screw with electromagnetic stuff or creates an 'EM' aftershock - whatever that means, but this may suggest the Shriven artillery isn't just conventional. That doesn't say anything about yield mind, we know the Imperium has pure fusion weapon technology, and the big advnatage of that is that it scales well - you can easily make 'less than kiloton' grade weapons (fourth generaiton nukes I've read are precisely this.) And of course there are always 'plasma' and 'melta/fusion' munitions which we know are sub-KT and could do just this so... I say it says more about the nature of the munitions than the yield, but its still interesting for the side effects it creates. I imagine that if it screws with communications it probably screws with sensors as well.
Also, microbeads are restrited only to officers (and possibly the sergeants, not quite sure there.) rathe than everyone in the Ghosts having them as we learn later. Rather odd, that, but meh.


PAge 46
No orders were getting through, no urgings to regroup, to rendezvous with other units, to press forward for an objective, or even to retreat.
In such circumstances, the rulebook of Imperial Guard warfare was clear: if in doubt, move forward.
Guard doctrine when you are out of contact? GO FORWARD. That way you're more likely to be killed and be less of a problem to the Munitorums pesky logistics and you might actually do damage to the enemy. Or push them apart. I'm sure there might be some kind of logic to this but it eludes me.



Page 46-47
The Shriven had no qualms about the use of poison agents, foul airborne gases that would boil the blood and fester the lungs.
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The men behind him put guns at ease and pulled respirators from their webbing. Colonel Corbec buckled his own respirator mask around his face. He hated the loss of visibility, the claustrophobia of the thick-lensed gas hoods, the shortness of breath that the tight rubber mouthpiece provoked. But poison clouds were not the half of it. The sea of mud that the bombardment was agitating and casting up into the wind as vapour droplets was full of other venoms: the airborne spores of disease incubated in the decaying bodies out there in the dead zone; typhus, gangrene, livestock anthrax bred in the corrupting husks of pack animals and cavalry steeds, and the vicious mycotoxins that hungrily devoured all organic matter into a black, insidious mould.
...
He knew that nearly eighty per cent of the fatalities amongst the Imperial Guard since the invasion began had been down to gas, disease and secondary infection.
Shriven on forge world are using what probably amount to chemical and perhaps biological agents, and hence the need for gas masks. Even if it wasn't for that, the enviroment is clearly shitty and lethal to your average trooper. Which is pretty ironic given we discovered they simply can't flatten the place cuz its a forge world of great value to the Crusade. Makes you wonder if Chaos deliberately fosters shitty enviorments such as this (Vraks would say 'YES') both because it benefits Chaos (through Nurgle) and it makes things just that much harder for the Guard. I mean its not like Chaos gives a shit whether its more lethal to its own troops. Of course Dravere is in charge here, so that same appellation is likely to apply becuase he's Zapp fucking Brannigan.



Page 47
Two of his sharper-eyed vanguard moved in front, using magnetically sensitive wands attached to heavy backpacks to sweep for explosives and booby traps. It seemed that the Shriven had pulled back too rapidly to leave any surprises, but every few yards, the column stopped as one of the sweepers found something hot: a tin cup, a piece of armour, a canteen tray.
Mine detection gear. Given its tendency to detect metal (metal armour at that) it suggests they are magnetic/electromagnetic in nature. I wonder what would happen if they had non-ferrous/nonmagnetic materials used in the mines? Makes you wonder if shit like plasteel might be ferrous/magnetic in some way too. Or Ceramite. Or maybe they're just too valuable for mere 'mines'.



Page 47-48
Sometimes it was a strange idol made of smelt ore from the forge furnaces that the corrupted workers had carved into some bestial form. Corbec personally put his laspistol to each one and blew it into fragments. The third time he did this, the wretched thing he was destroying blew up in sharp fragments as his round tore it open along some fault. Trooper Drayl, cowering a few feet away, was hit in the collarbone by a shard, which dug into the flesh.
Sadly we don't know how big the idols are, except they are big enough to be carved. We also don't know how many shots for Corbec to destroy the statues. Even assuming its a fairly spindly statue (2-3cm wide at midpoint and shit and made of copper (softest metal I could figure for the clac) you'd figure at least a good 3-5 kj per shot (and that asusming not many pulses or penetration) to simply slice the portion spoken of in half. It wouldn't 'blow it into fragments'. Something like that would be much bigger I figure, and evne then I'd figure its worth at least a few grams of TNT per shot (say 10 cm diameter area blown apart, assuming iron. Playing around with the ADC means double digit kj is a lower limit for a single pulse even with soft metals so..)



Page 48
They reached a section of trench where a monumental shell had fallen short and blown the thin cavity open in a huge crater wound nearly thirty metres across.
30 m crater this time. If plugged into the ADC, figure 4-5 tons in the ground mayhap (or at least an ordr of magnitude thereabouts). Its worth noting that as comparison the schwerer Gustav made a ~10 diameter crater with 700 kg of explosive, although I'd note the 'High capacity' shells of the Iowa's 16' 'high capacity' shell can make a 15 m wide crate rwith only ~160 kg of explosive which is quite a bit less than the 4-5 tons I estimate, but it also doesn't facotr in explosive effects or others (sub surface vs surface).I'ts still far less than 2 OOm, and there's plenty of wiggle room, but still its a good indicator of why you don't always want to take these numbers as precise or absolute. I suppose we can figure the shriven artillery as a whole is at least tens or hundreds of kg of TNT equivalent, which is still impressive.



Page 49
He took out the ground sheet from his own bedroll and rolled the pitiful corpse in it so that no one would see. He could not bring himself to incinerate the soldier, as he had done with the shrines.
Specifically a flamer had been used to burn the chaos shrines, although not the metal bits. One infers that the flamer could be used to cremate the corpse (proper burial and all that), although we dont know how much fuel would be used. I mean its possible they'd use up a whole tank (say several tens of kg of fuel at most) but I kinda doubt that. Technically speaking you could 'cremate' a body with as little as a few hundred MJ and 6-10 litres of fuel could achieve that, but you'd need near-perfect efficiencies. As I've noted in the past flamers in the Ghosts novels are hard (insane) to calc because of this and because you may need closer to a GJ or more to burn them (crematorium grade IIRC) We could infer flamers are magically efficient, incredibly energetic, or both to account for this, but I've also long suspected that they may create some sort of magic 'spontaneous combustion' effect to feed on the living body. We know of similar incendiaries (EG Vindicare ammo, Perturabos' gun shells) that can do the same, but how common such tech is is another story. Based on what we know it could be argued either way, or both. I prefer both to cover all angles, because its unlikely that you can just assume flamers routinely carry tens of kilos of fuel around or expend the vast majority for cremation. Then again maybe Promethium is magic gas that has an energy density more akin to a nuclear isomer :P



Page 52
The Dragoons approached in a long and carefully arranged formation of at least three hundred men. Gaunt could see that they were well-drilled, slim but powerful men in some kind of chain-armour that was strangely sheened and which caught the light like unpolished metal.
..
their unusual body armour was made from a toothed metallic mail which covered them in form-fitting sections. It glinted like obsidian. Their helmets were full face and grim with narrow eye slits, glazed with dark glass. Their weapons were polished and clean.
..
Zoren slid back the visor of his helmet to reveal a handsome, dark-skinned face.
Vitrian dragoons. Their armour is noted to be 'chain/mail', mesh and flak as well as other stuff at varying points. Mesh is by 40K standars sci fi 'mail' armor just as Carapace is plate, and its construction and properties have some similarities to flak, so we might view it as a more sophisticated sort of flak with both flexible and rigid components. Also full-faced helmets. We also learn they wear gauntlets of similar construction, suggesting their armor may be fully body, and quite possibly self-contained.



Page 53-54
...They rode on Chimera personnel carriers that lurched and reeled across the slick and miry landscape. The Patricians were noble soldiers,....
...
He had two columns of vehicles with upwards of ten thousand men scissoring in to cut into the flank of the Shriven ...
Jantine Patricians. Seem to be a rather large and fully mechanised regiment. Or at least 10,000 men's worth of mechanised troops. Not quite as large as the Jouran Dragoons perhaps, but bigger than alot of mecahnised regiments (Cadians from Cadian Blood or the Valhallans from the Cain novels.)



PAge 54
Lord General Dravere believed in acceptable losses, and had demonstrated this practicality on a fair few number of occasions without compunction, but Flense wasn’t about to commit suicide.
Draveere is basically just the opposite of Gaunt and his mentor. Although 'Acceptable losses' is for Dravere just a polite term for saying 'I'll fight like a Vraksian Krieger for my own ends until I achieve vicotry.' A nice way to say he wastes mens lives for his own ego and glory.



Page 58
The poison.
Canny, for orks. As if realising their untenable position, the orks had tainted the food and drink reserves in the last few days of their occupation. Taster servitors had sniffed most of it out, but that one stray bottle.
Rare bit of Orkish kunnin, although it might just reflect their innate desire to wreck shit as well.


Page 62
They hugged the walls of the trench and assumed fire pattern formation, crouching low and aiming in a sweep above the head of the man in front.
..
Corbec waved two fire teams forward on either flank..
Ghost tactics. We dont know if 'fire team' means the same thing in the Cain novels, but it seems intereting nonetheless.



Page 63-64
Skulane’s head exploded. He dropped like a sack of vegetables onto the ground, the impact of his body and the spasm of his nervous system clenching the trigger on his flamer.
..
Skulane had been hit from behind by a las-blast to the head.
..
. A sniper, he thought, one of the Shriven guerrillas lurking in this disputed territory.
..
.Trooper Drayl, who stood with his lasgun held loosely and a smile on his face.
single lasbolt headsplodes one of the Ghosts. It was thought to be a Shriven weapon (which is also Imperial based) but it was a Ghosts rifle, so presumably they would be capable of similar. At least single if not double digit kj. We get lots of 'headsplosion' calcs and similar, and they often depend on parameters such as the tissue type (which can vary according to hit location), depth and diameter of the wound, the actual parameters of the weapon (is it a heat ray, pulse, and how much energy per pulse vs how many pulses, as well as pulse duration, etc.) It can vary by many effects, including the balance between thermal and mechanical (some are purely thermal, some are a mix, and some seem to have little to no thermal effects at all, so lasweapons can run the gamut rather nicely.) and any other number of factors. It could depend on tradeoffs between depth and diameter of the wound (penetration vs damage.) and other factors.




PAge 65
..the first shot seared down the length of his back and broke his belt.
Slumping into the ditch, he felt dull pain from the bubbled flesh along his shoulder blade. There was no blood. Lasfire cauterised whatever it hit.
Oddly not explosive, the grazing shot just leaves severe thermal damage Assuming a 1-2 cm (finger wide) wound about 40-50 cm wide (from shoulder blade to belt) we get between 40-100 sq cm depending on how generous/conservative you figure on being. If we figure 50 j per sq cm (third degree burns) it would be at least 2-5 kj on thermal effects alone. Its not inconcievable its more - 125 j would be 'ignition' temps and might cause charring burning style 'catuerize' wounds which would be closer to 5-12 kj per shot.
I suppose we might infer the lack of explosive effect could be accounted for it being just a graze. Then again who knows, it might just have grooved a line down the poor guy's back since it did burn through the belt. :P


Page 65
As others scrambled to get out of his way, he turned his gun to full auto and blazed at them, killing five more, six, seven.
Assuming a second or so duration (which is likely given noone has reacted or shot him down yet or fled) the ROF would be 5-7 shots per second on full auto. Mind you, if its 2 seconds we're loking at about the same ROF as the uplifitng primer, so it could be less (and that would be more consistent.) but the Ghosts novels (particularily the latter ones) have emphasized much bigger ROFs as a rule.




Page 65-66
Something insidious and appalling was blistering and seething inside the sack of his skin. He rose, first from the hips and then to his feet. By the time he was standing, he was twice human size, his uniform and skin splitting to accommodate the twisting, enlarging skeletal structure that was transmuting within him.
...
He didn’t want to see the bony thing which was erupting from Drayl’s flesh. Watery blood and fluid spat from Drayl as the Chaos infection grew something within him, something that burst out and stepped free of the shredded carcass that it had once inhabited.
..
It stood four metres high, a vast and grotesque skeletal form whose bones seemed as if they had been welded from tarnished sections of steel. The head was huge, topped by polished horns that twisted irregularly. Oil and blood and other unnameable fluids dripped from its structure.
Ah the old 'giant skeleton' bit 4 m tall, implied to be of metal.. blah blh. The obvious thing is that while its a daemon (an IRON WARRIORS daemon) and it resulted from the infection of a single trooper (drayl, hit in the neck by Chaos idol shrapnel when Corbec was blasting them) it shows how insidious and dangerous dealing with Chaos can be - anyone could be an enemy if corrupted. I expect its not something that can be easily replicated (else you think you'd see such statuary making chaos troops more often.) but the simple threat of such can be effective as well.
There is also the obvious question of how a squishy human grows a 4 m tall metallic skeleton. I dont think its a case of matter magically growing out of thin air, I suspect the material is pulled out of the ground or surrounding debris or similar.



PAge 66-67
Corbec fell on his back and tried to aim the rocket launcher...
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The thing reached down towards him and hooked him by the tunic with its metal fingers. Corbec was lifted up out of the channel, dangling at arm’s length from the abomination.
...
He squeezed the trigger mechanism again and the blast took the beast’s head off at point blank range.
Presuming a half metre to metre skull diameter.. figure between half a kilo at least, possibly as many as 5 kilos total. Whether its frag or krak we don't know. Presumably the Skeleton outweighs Corbec significantly if he can be picked up without budging the skeleton (albeit with chaos who can tell) so we migth figure its a couple hundred kilos at least.


PAge 67
Sergeant Grell was right behind with a dozen men that he had roused out of their panic with oathing taunts. They stood around the lip of the culvert and fired their lasguns down at the twitching skeleton. In a few moments, the sculptural, metallic form of the beast was reduced to shrapnel and slag.
I've done a calc on this before, so I'm not really going to repeat that from my previous anlaysis and I redid it [url=http://bbs.stardestroyer.net/viewtopic. ... &#p3601341]here[/url[ not too long ago. Just out of boredom I'll figure a 2 me tall torso 20 cm across, 2 m long arms 2 cm diameter, and 2 m tall legs that are 3 cm across. Oh and 90% empty space (it is a skeleton after all.) you'd get 50 kg. If we figure between 50 and 500 kg (solid and nealry empty) and its melted at iron temps we're figuring 60 to 600 MJ. There is still the shrapnel thing of course, so it could be beteen 10% and 100% melted as well. Assuming 50-100 shots per lasgun and 13 men thats 650-1300 shots. And assuming 13 men and 2-3 seconds its 26-39 seconds. 6-600 MJ yields results slightly under 4.6 kilojoule per shot to 9-10 kj per shot on the low end, and 460-900 kj per shot on the higher end. The results make assumptions about thermal effects (with 'fully melted assuming a purely thermal weapon), but I'm wagering more towards the low end than higher, despite my previous assumptions. and the fact we don't quite know what kind of effect. As noted before, double digit kj could quite easily blast big holes, so we might figure that works well for this quote. Indeed, the fact its shrapnel and slag suggests hybrid suggests the higher end is probably overly generous since its quiete clearly not 'purely thermal in the least.
As it is, the quotes stand pretty well as the 'variable' outputs lasguns might be capable of depending on assumptions.



PAge 68
Lord Militant General Dravere had assured Gaunt and the other commanders that three weeks of carpet bombing from orbit by the Navy had pounded the enemy artillery positions into scrap metal, thus ensuring comparative safety for an infantry advance. True enough, the mobile field batteries used by the Shriven to harry the Imperial lines had taken a pasting. But they clearly had much longer range fixed batteries higher in the hills, dug in to bunker emplacements impervious even to orbital bombardment.
Use of orbital bombardment in a limited sense to assist the ground assault, by taking out artillery. This indicates that when one holds orbital superiority and your guns aren't shielded or otherwise hidden, artillery is less than useless more or less. The Shriven manage to hide their heavy guns from orbital bombardment, although it must be noted the Guard are mentioned to be acting under constraint due to the value of the planet, so it would clearly limit just how heavy a bombardment they can unleash.





Page 68
The weapons that were throwing the shells their way were leviathans, and Gaunt was not surprised. This was a forge world after all...
..
They had been spawned among the engineers and artisans of Fortis Binary, trained and schooled by the Tech-Priests of Mars. They could make all the weapons they wanted and they had had months to prepare.
Implying that the Shriven's fixed artillery are Imperial technology, just repurposed.



Page 69
Gaunt had hoped the wretched Jantine Patricians or perhaps even some of Dravere’s elite Stormtroops might have been sent in to flank them..
'elite' Storm troops. Whether that means storm troopers or what we don't know. But it its implied that the Jantine may be close (grenadiers perhaps.) although not neccesarily as nicely equipped.




Page 69
The electro-magnetic and radio interference of the huge bombardment was also cutting their comm-lines. There was no possible contact with headquarters or their own frontline units, and even short range vox-cast traffic was chopped and distorted. Colonel Zoren was urging his communications officer to try to patch an uplink to any listening ship in orbit, in the hope that they might relay their location and plight. But the upper atmosphere of a world where war had raged for half a year was a thick blanket of petrochemical smog, ash, electrical anomalies and worse. Nothing was getting through.
Again EM/radio' interference. Suggests vox works on similar principles, but exactly why the bombardment causes it is up for debate. In addition to my previous comments re 'nuke or nuke analogues', there's also the possibility its simply a result of all the debris and shit kicked up into the atmosphere (mud, particulates and the like) that is hampering transmissions. Heck it may or may not be the case, depending on how you interpret the second part.



Page 69
They sat huddled in small groups, camo-cloaks pulled around them against the chilly night air. Gaunt had forbidden the use of stoves or heaters in case the enemy range finders were watching with heat-sensitive eyes. As it was, the plasteel-reinforced concrete of the manufactory would mask the slight traces of their body heat.
It's interesting to speculate whether the cameleoline cloaks actually block heat. We know of certain kinds (at least amongst the Eldar as per Path of the Warrior) and we knwo from the necromunda novels that the Delaque had thermal blocking cloaks, but it's not always obviously so with Imperial Cameleoline. Certainly human bodies should register in the enviroment if the enemy had IR sensors or Preysense gear of any kind if they could pick up stoves and such (or just the differences in temperature.) The maunfactory would help block, but I wouldnt call the human body 'slight' traces, unless it was partially or mostly obscured somehow (like a cloak) so it seems a reasonable supposition.



Page 70-71
The Tanith had all put fresh power clips in their lasguns, checked and replaced where necessary their focussing barrels, and adjusted their charge settings to half power as per Gaunt’s instruction.
...
Camo-cloaks were pulled in tight and the Ghosts divided into small units of around a dozen men, each containing at least one heavy weapons trooper.
Bayonets fixed too, of course. The preparations are interesting because the Tanith apparnetly carry extra focusing barrels. We know from the Uplifting Primer that at least one extra is carried, but one wouldn't think the Ghosts use their lasguns so extensively that they need to replace them as a preparatory measure (rather than due to damage.) indeed such would be suggestive that the Ghosts lasguns behave more akin to a long las, which have to replace their barrels afte ra certain number of shots due to the strain. It may be that the settings or powerpacks used strain the weapons more rapidly (sort of like marksmen rifles.)
Also the Ghosts are interesting (or odd) in having 'squads' of a dozen, unless the extra two are heavy weapons/special troopers. If so that would suggest that the Ghosts have rather a large percentage of heavy/special weapons in their regiment. Or their regimental composition is so flexible, they can reform into variable sized, squads at the top of the hat. Ghosts use their lasguns at half charge to preserve power.




Page 70
..as clean and sharp-edged as the famous glass-filament mesh armour they wore..
..
..Zoren asked, buckling his mesh gauntlets back in place.
Again 'mesh' armour to describe what hte Vitrians are packing,



Page 71
Gaunt observed the preparations of the Vitrians. They were drilled into larger fighting units of about twenty men each, and had fewer heavy weapons. Where heavy weapons appeared, they seemed to prefer the plasma gun. None of them had melta-guns or flamers as far as Gaunt could see.
..
The Vitrians attached spike-bladed bayonets to their lasguns, ran a synchronised weapons check with almost choreographed grace, and adjusted the charge settings of their weapons to maximum.
Vitrians seem to prefer rather large 'units', although whether thats squad or platoons we don't know. They have plasma guns, unlike the Ghosts who pack meltas and flamers. Also unlike the Ghosts they prefer max settings on their guns. Variable settings and all that.




PAge 71
Then, again in unison, they altered a small control on the waistband of their armour. With a slight shimmer in the darkness, the finely meshed glass of their body suits flipped and closed, so that the interlocking teeth were no longer the shiny ablative surface, but showed instead the dark, matt reverse side. Gaunt was impressed. Their functional armour had an efficient stealth mode for movement after dark.
The Vitiran armour has some interesting stelath function by being able to flip from glittering to nonreflective. One wonders how they flipped. I presume its not something simply mechanical or hydraulic or clockwork or whatever, becuse it would be a freaking maintnance nightmare, nevermind the extra weight it would add. Something more exotic maybe, but I'd be at a loss to say what. One possibility is that it simply 'flips' up or down.
I also wonder if that affects hte properties of the armour in any way. Also, does this qualify as some sort of 'powered' armor? :P





Page 72
"I see you have instructed your men to set charge at maximum,” Gaunt said as an afterthought.
“It is written in the Vitrian Art of War: ‘Make your first blow sure enough to kill and there will be no need for a second.' "
Why the Vitrians use max-charge settings.
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Back to First and Only (yes Cain is older, but there are fewer updates and I can get to that later.)

Page 72-73
“The Byhata, the Vitrian art of war. It is our codex, the guiding philosophy of our warrior caste."
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“The Byhata contains the practice and philosophy of warrior-hood. All Vitrians study it and learn its principles, which then direct us in the arena of war. Its wisdom informs our tactics, its strength reinforces our arms, its clarity focuses our minds and its honour determines our victory.”
...
The Vitrian unbuttoned his flak-armour tunic and showed Caffran the top of a thin, grey pouch that was laced into its lining. “It is carried over the heart, a work of eight million characters transcribed and encoded onto mono-filament paper.”
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“The filament paper is gene-coded to the touch of the trooper it is issued to so that no one else may open it. It is also written in Vitrian, which I am certain you cannot read. "
Sounds like it was written by Guilliman. lol. Anyhow its interesting that they can cram so much information onto such a tiny bit of mono whatever paper. I wonder how they read it though.
Oh and the gene code bit is interesting too.


Page 73
“But you have quite a reputation,” the Vitrian said.
“Have we? Yes, the sort of reputation that gets us picked for all the stealth and dirty commando work going, the sort of reputation that gets us sent into enemy-held hives and deathworlds that no one else has managed to crack. I often wonder who’ll be left to do the dirty jobs when they use the last of us up.”
Caffran on the Ghost's reputation. An interesting sort of 'elite' status, and it also implies they're qualified for Deathworlds (or at least someone just wants to get them killed. Given the way the books go either is possible.)



Page 76
..before greenish explosions lit the sky about six kilometres to their west.
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The commissar pulled his scope round and the milled edge of the automatic dial whirred and spun as he played the field of view over the distant buildings.
Implied range of some sort of 'automatic' scope.


Page 76
“Those buildings were taken out with krak charges, standard issue demolitions.”
Krak 'demo' charges. Whether its a grenade or what, or some sort of dedicated dmo charge, I dunno.



Page 77
Zoren called his communications officer to join them and Gaunt wound the channel selector on the vox-set frantically as he repeated his call sign into the wire-framed microphone. The range was close. There was a chance.
..
A tinny voice was repeating a call-sign, chopped and fuzzed by the atrocious radio conditions.
Implies a lower limit on vox casters, but it also suggests an upper limit on the micro beads Gaunt and Zoren have. Its interesting/odd in the sense we know from 'His Last Command' that voxes have a range in excess of 10 km. So either they have diffenret comm beads (possible, since we know other ranges are merely 1 km from FFG and 5 km from Rebel Winter.) or the range or function of the micro beads is hampered by the EM/atmospheric effects.



Page 78
Were they already swinging three tonne deuterium macroshells filled with oxy-phosphor gel into the gaping breeches of the vast Shriven guns, as range finders calibrated brass sights and the sweating thews of gunners cranked round the vast greasy gears that lowered the huge barrels a fractional amount?
Size of the shells the Shriven artiellry uses. Again thats' very much 'Schwerer-gustav' scale, a bit lighter. Or possibly starship grade ordnance by some lower interpretations of macro-shell size. Again this is probably indicative of how big/powerful Imperial artillery can get (at least fixed weapons)



Page 79-80
Colonel Flense was a man who’d modelled his career on the principle of opportunity.
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But Flense wanted to be ready to move the moment it stopped or the moment it faltered. The land out there after such a bombardment would be ash-waste and mud, as hard for the Shriven to hold as it was for the Imperials. The perfect opportunity for a surgical armoured strike.
By six that evening, as the light began to fail, Flense had a strike force ready in the splintered streets below a bend in the river. Eight Leman Russ siege tanks, the beloved Demolishers with their distinctive short thick barrels, four standard Phaethon-pattern Leman Russ battle tanks, three Griffon Armoured Weapons Carriers, and nineteen Chimeras carrying almost two hundred Jantine Patricians in full battledress.
..
..the vox-caster operator from the watchroom entered with a sheaf of transparencies that the cogitators of the orbital Navy had processed and sent down.
They were orbital shots of the barrage.
Even the bad guy soldiers in the Guard (or at least those serving the bad guys) will exhibit initative and sense when the situation rquires it (and this guy serves Zapp Dravere.) Also 'surgical strike' as opposed to mere attrition.
The interesting thing here is that the Jantine apparently either have tanks and artillery as well as Chimeras, or they can have them seconded/attached. And depending on fluff it could go either way.
The other interesting bit is that the Navy provides orbital surveillance.




Page 80-81
Taking his lead from the navigation signals transmitted from the fleet to an astropath in his lead tank, Flense rumbled his column out of the west, along the river road and then out across a pontoon bridgehead as far as he dared into the wasteland.
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Flense ordered his vehicles on. At maximum thrust they tore and bounced and slithered over the mud and into the Shriven heartland.
Astropaths used to relay tactical information from orbit, sort of like a psychic GPS. Also Flense's forces are all apparnetly moving at 'maximum thrust' and keeping up togethr. Considering it includes Griffons and Chimeras as well as regular Russes and Demolishers implying that they're either urnning at Russ/Demolisher top speeds or Chimera top speeds. I'm acutally inclined to think the latter, given Chimeras and Griffons can run much faster, and you wouldn't get much speed from a Demolisher at max.



Page 82
“Word came that Tanith was to raise three regiments for the Imperial Guard. It was the first time our world had been asked to perform such a duty, but we had a large number of able fighting men trained in the municipal militias. The process of the Founding took eight months, and the assembled troops were waiting on wide, cleared plains when the transport ships arrived in orbit."
Origins of the Tanith Guard troopers. Rather odd that the founding took nearly a year, it couldn't have bene just training, unless they were trying to be really thorough. Still, it beats out the Clone Army for time. Besides maybe they had extra time because of how long it would take the Imperium to rustle up support.



Page 82
"We were also told we would probably never see our world again, for once a man had joined the service he tended to go on wherever the war took him until death claimed him or he was mustered out to start a new life wherever he had ended up. I’m sure they told you the same thing.” Zogat nodded..
Mention of the usual 'You can never go home' Guard spiel. Generally its true, but its not always so.




Page 83
"The navy’s picket duty had not done its job, and a significantly-sized Chaos fleet, a splinter of a larger fleet running scared since the last defeat the Imperium Navy had inflicted, slipped into the Tanith system past the blockades. There was very little warning. The forces of Darkness attacked my homeworld and erased it from the galactic records in the space of one night.”
Given a navy 'picket' was meant to stop them, I suspect it might not be a terribly huge battlegroup, especially if its a splinter of a larger force.. a handful of vessels or a couple dozen at most, and probably only cruisers and escorts at that. Assuming a dozen ships and 12 hours and between 1e8-1e9 megatons, we're talking an average of 190-1.9 GT/s per ship. Even if its over a hundred ships you'd still get several tens or hundreds of megatons a second at least. And if the destruction was much more severe, it could be much more.



Page 83-84
Zogat’s eyes were bright in the darkness. “You hate him.”
“No! Well, yes, I do, as I would hate anyone who had supervised the death of my home, anyone who had sacrificed it to some greater good.”
“Is this a greater good?”
“I’ve fought with the Ghosts on a dozen warfronts. I haven’t seen a greater good yet.”
“You do hate him.”
“I admire him. I will follow him anywhere. That’s all there is to say. I left my homeworld the night it died, and I’ve been fighting for its memory ever since. We Tanith are a dying breed. There are only about twenty hundred of us left. Gaunt only got away with enough for one regiment. The Tanith First. The First-and-Only. "
Part of the discussion reveals that Caffran (and the other Ghosts, we discover) hate Gaunt as much as they respect him for what he did, dragging them from their homeworld rather than letting them die their with their people. The relationship between Gaunt and the Ghosts has always been a complex one, and its one of the good things about the series. Just as Gaunt is driven by his own personal, private reasons for his actions, the Ghosts have their own feelings and the reasons for them as well.
Also Gaunt pulled 2000 ghosts or so from Tanith, which is interesting becuase we learn thats how many Ghosts there still are, suggesting that up to this poitn they've taken relatively few losses despite what seem to be years of service -they're not exactly a 'new' regiment at this point, after all.



Page 84
Lower, in the wide valley and the trench lines, the accumulated smoke of the onslaught, which had now been going on for just about twenty-one hours, dropping two or three shells a second, curdled like fog, thick, creamy and repellent with the stink of cordite and fycelene.
2-3 shells a second implies hundreds of thousands of shells each second. Assuming they're each several hundred to several thousand kg (as implied before) the Shriven would have dumped at least several tens to several hundred kilotons, perhaps megatons of Explosive equivlaent (asuming each shell was 50% full of TNT at least)



Page 84
..eighteen had been deafened permanently by the air-burst. The Imperial Guard infirmaries over the lines would patch ruptured ear drums with plastene diaphragms or implant acoustic enhancers in a matter of moments.
IG surgical procedures to deal with deafness (At least from artillery.)



Page 86
“Maglev line,” said Feygor, who had done all he could to augment his basic engineering knowledge with off-world mechanisms. “Still active. They cart the shells from the munitions dump and lower them into the bay, then load them onto bomb trains for fast delivery to the emplacements in the hills.”
Shriven have maglev lines. Feygor clearly has some technical/engineering understanding to be able to recognize it.



Page 87
The commissar ordered a ten minute rest, then sat on the edge of the platform and compared his sketch with area maps of the old factory complexes from the slate’s tactical archives.
Gaunt's slate has 'tactical archives' which includes map



Page 87
"So why are they still shelling? Who are they firing at? It’s exhausting their shell stocks, it must be. They’ve been at it for over a day."
Implying that they must have used up a significant portion, if not the majority, fo their artillery.




Page 89
It was an automated train of sixty open carts, painted khaki with black and yellow flashing. Each cart was laden with shells and munitions, hundreds of tonnes of ordnance from distant bunkers destined for the main batteries. As the train rolled past on the magnetic-levitation rail, slick and inertia free..
automated maglev train auling hundreds of tonnes of ordnance. You have to wonder how long it takes them to use that up. assuming 3 tonne shells we're probably talking dozens, if not hundreds of guns.



Page 89
“Domor!” he called, and the trooper hurried over.
“Back on Tanith, you and Grell were engineers, right?”
..
“I was apprenticed to a timber hauler in Tanith Attica. I worked with heavy machines.”
“Given the resources at hand, could you stop one of these trains?”
Gaunt asks him about stoping the maglev train, suggesting familiarity with that (or at least with electrical and electromagnetic principles in general.) Again at least some of the Ghosts have some fairly good understanding of and working knowledge of technology.



page 90
“may I examine your body armour?”
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Zoren peeled off a gauntlet and handed it to Domor.
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"Is this surface tooth made of glass bead?”
“Yes, mica. Glass, as you say. Scale segments woven onto a base fabric of thermal insulation.”
Again the gauntlets are scaled like the rest. Its mica scale segments on thermal insulation. This might suggest that the thermal resilience (or armor resilience is similar to silicon of an unknown thickness. For example, a inch or so might resist a single 10-15 kj blaster pulse, although if it were a 'pulse train' of 6, 200 joule pulses would not be stopped. Maybe its magic mica :P Although that doesn't include the thermal insulation. Its possible that, as mesh, it has properties to dissipate the damage over a wider area, so it may be harder to penetrate than I am assuming Its more than just scales sewn onto a fabric backing after all, because they can switch between normal and 'stealth' mode after all.
Alternatley it might be optimized for thermal rather than mechanical damage, not all lasers are neccesarily mechnaical, and silica is good at resiting melting and vaporization. It would also resist electrica attacks pretty well.
As an aside, if the gauntlets and presumably whatever leggings they have can all flip to 'stealth' mode must mean that those components are 'linked' when worn to the same contraption, agian suggesting that the suit is probably all-enclosing.



Page 91-92
"Maybe a jacket — and it may not come back in one piece.”
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Domor had wrapped the Vitrian major’s jacket over the rider-rail ..
..
.. Domor untied his makeshift cord and handed the jacket back to Zoren.
Parts of the glass fabric had been dulled and fused by contact with the rail, but it was intact. The Vitrian pulled it back on with a solemn nod.
Body armour resists most of the electircal current that is capable of running a maglev pallet capable of carrying hundreds of shells, we'd be talking a shitload of energy which isn't seriously harming the coat, which isn't trivial, although this only tells us its extremely electircally resistant. Measuring thermal properties would be harder. although it would be nice if you get hit by a lightning bolt, I suppose.



Page 92
He opened his belt pouch and pulled out a fresh drum-pattern magazine for his bolt pistol. The sixty round capacity clip was marked with a blue cross to indicate the inferno rounds it held

Gaunt's packign 60 round clip of inferno rounds.



Page 94
There was the whine of the Tanith guns on the lower setting and the stinging punch of the full-force Vitrian shots. Gaunt had forbade the use of meltas, rockets and flamers...
...
...Mad Larkin and a trio of other Tanith snipers with the needle-pattern lasguns..
They also avoid using the meltas and rockets and flamers because thos weaposn would cook off the munitions. Lasguns apparently do not (or they can't penetrate the hulls around the shells or whatever. reference again to the heavy/special weapons of the Ghosts.
Also the needle-pattern lasguns are probably referencing long-las, since Larkin is using them, although it might be a marksmans variant too for all we know.



Page 94
Trooper Bragg had an assault cannon which he had liberated from a pintle mount some weeks before. Gaunt had never seen a man fire one without the aid of power armour’s recoil compensators or lift capacity before. Bragg grimaced and strained with the effort of steadying the howling weapon with its six cycling bands, and his aim was its usual miserable standard. He killed dozens of the enemy anyway. Not to mention a maglev train.
Try Again Bragg using an assault cannon. This is unliekly to be 'astartes' grade despite what Gaunt says, ecause we know 'Astartes' grade weapons are bigger and heavier, but it means Bragg is as powerful as a normal human in powered armour wielding a minigun. Figure Bragg must weigh at least several hundred kilos simply not to be knocked over by it, but the sheer recoil that would be involved with this probably explains why he misses so much (Even superhuamns would have trouble controlling such a weapon with meat and bone.) One presumes he uses short bursts. If we figure -20 round bursts, and something like a assault rifle cartridge (3-5 kg*m/s) we're talking in excess of 60-100 kg*m/s, and probbly half again or more for propellant. If its full powered cartridge (7.62mm nato), or if the rate of fire is even higher (30+ rounds per second) it would be even more insane, but unless the gun has fucking suspensors I have doubts even Bragg coudl be handwaved into firing it. There's only so far one can bullshit conservation laws without technology handwaves when it comes to projectile weapons.



Page 94
..Gaunt ordered up his meltas, flamers and rocket launchers, and began to scour a path, blackening the concrete strips of the ramps and fusing Shriven bone into syrupy pools.
Again the Ghosts use meltas. We won't see this ever again, however. while I can't calculate 'melting' exactly, it does suggest the rockets (incendaries?) and flamers are comparable in power to the meltas. Given that flamers cremate sometimes this isn't suprrising.


Page 95
His ancient, ornate boltgun spat death into the Tanith ranks. Sergeant Grell was vaporised by one of the first hits, two of his fire team a moment later.
Iron Warriors space Marine. Figure the bolt shell (implied a single, but it might be a burst) blowing apart a body (literal vaporization would be insanely bigger it goes without saying.) would be easily worth at least a grenade if not several grenades. Per shell. Which while not literal vaporization si still bloody insane given a bolter shell - even Astartes grade, is going to weigh many times less than a grenade. And when you also figure a bolt shell has to have rocket propulsion as well, the minaiturization implied (and the powre of the convenitonal explosive) is even mor eimpressive)
Of course these are CSM and givne what we know now, its quite possible what we're seeing here is the Vengeance rounds (micro fission FTW). Thats always one fo the messy problems with bolt rounds, you never quite know what they're packing.



Page 95
The Chaos Marine proceeded to punch butchering fire into the Vitrian front line. Then he exploded. Headless, armless, his legs and torso rocked for a moment and then fell.
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Gaunt nodded his grim thanks to Trooper Melyr and his missile launcher.
Rocket launcher blows apart part of the upper torso of Space Marine. The rocket does about as much damage as the Chaos bolt shell did.



Page 95
he swapped the empty drum of his bolt pistol with a fresh sickle-pattern clip of Kraken penetrators.
Gaunt has kraken penetrators in a different magazine.



PAge 95
“How much ammo have you left?”
..
“Half gone already,”
..
"Instruct your men to alter their settings to half-power.”
“Why, commissar?”
“Because they’re exhausting their ammo! I admire your ethic, colonel, but it doesn’t take a full power shot to kill one of the Shriven and your men are going to be out of clips twice as fast as mine!”
Why Gaunt has his men go on half charge. Half charge is still lethal to (unarmored or lightly armored) humans, overcharge is overkill. Which is indicative that max charge is for something more than human (EG space Marine.) or heavily armoured humans (as we see later.)
This does beg the question of how many settings there are. Uplifting primer says two, although 'half charge' suggests its not minimum setting, but maybe medium, suggesting there are three (at leats.) one might figure low power is unarmored humans (or suppressive fire) or to incapacitate. Medium range is against lightly armored humans and tougher targets. While full power is for the really nasty stuff. That sort of 'variable setting' (like what Only War indicates) may, given the novel, dictate why some IG forces more easily take down Space Marines compared to others. If others have lasguns with no charge sliders or charge sliders with fewer/less powerful settings. (To put it another way, three setting sliders might be equal to a low powered cartridge like a SMG or carbine, medium might be full powered or assault rifle, whilst max might be full powered or AMR grade output just as a arbitrary comparison. TWo charge settings may only use the first tow but exclude the third. Given that Only War and Black Crusade indicate that max setting on 'variable settings' adversely affects the lasgun's performance, this may be a valid reason. Indeed by FFG rules or the triplex rules from Inquisitor, 'max' charge would be comparable to a hellgun shot in power, although ti still lacks the penetration.)



PAge 97-98
..a second Iron Warrior Chaos Marine lunged out at them.
..
It was preceded by a bow-wave of the most foetid stench, exhaled from its grilled mask..
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The beast’s chain fist, squealing like an enraged beast, pulped Zapol with a careless downwards flick. The Vitrian was crushed and liquefied.
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...lunge with his chainsword, driving the shrieking blade deep into the Chaos Marine’s armoured torso.
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His prayers were answered. The rearing thing was struck once, twice… four or five times by carefully placed las-shots which tore into it and spun it around. Gaunt somehow knew it the sniper Larkin who had provided these marksman blasts.
On one knee, the creature rose and raged again, most of its upper armour punctured or shredded, smoke rising and black liquid spilling from the grisly wounds to its face, neck and chest.
A final, powerful las-blast, close range and full-power, took its I head off.
..
“I went against orders, I’m afraid,” he began. “I reset my gun for full charge.”
Vitrian lasguns decapitates Space Marine on full pwoered setting. We dont know if this means he blows apart the head, or if the Space Marine was wearing a helmet (but even if so, its possible he hit a weak point like the flexible neck/shoulder joints so it may not matter.) or simply blasted through the neck, but I imagine it doesn't make a huge difference.
Assuming headsplosion we're probably talking at least double digit kj to blow apart the skull as big as a Space Marine (many times bigger AND tougher than normal human), probably lots more if he has a helmet. Even if its just 'decapitating' I'd figure at least 5-10 kj to sever the bones of the spinal column (nevermind penetrating to the neck and such) of a normal human, I'd imagine its at least several times greater for space marines. Probably/possibly much more.


Page 99
He crossed to the control suite where Feygor and a Vitrian sergeant named Zolex were attempting to access data.
...
But Gaunt knew how to use him and his skills, particularly in the area of cogitators and other thinking machines.
Again Ghosts with rather innate technical knowledge, this time of 40K computer analogues.


Page 101
Zoren had collected the mica armoured jackets of more then fifty of his men. Now he fused them together as neat as a surgeon with a melta on the lowest setting.
variable setting meltas.



PAge 110
He sailed into the room on a wheeled brass chair that supported a suspension field generated by the three field-buoys built into the chair’s framework. His mutilated body moved, inertia-less, in the shimmering globe of power.
Inertia-less-ness provided via suspensors, although what that exactly means is, of course, up for debate.


Page 111-112
“Uncle… I mean, General Dercius said you would look after me, now my father has gone.” Boniface froze, before swinging around to face Gaunt. His harshness had gone suddenly, and there was a look of — was it affection?—in his single eye.
“Of course we will, Ibram,” he said.
..
“How may I ask the Emperor what he owes of me?”
“When all I owe is to the Golden Throne and by duty I will repay,” Gaunt returned. “The Spheres of Longing by Inquisitor Ravenor, volume… three?”
Partly I quoted this for the Ravenor reference, but also because its nice to see a Progenium dude (tied to the fucking Priests) who actually is kind and compassionate. Its also a bit more on Gaunt's past, and his upbringing. He meets Blenner (who was still a braggart as he is in later life - he claims his father was a Space Marine lol.) and has been put in the Schola by (I imageine) Dercius. The reasons why become important later in the book, but I like noting that Dercius and Gaunt have a past, and are fond of one another. That plays a role later as well.



Page 112
“Scholar Blenner’s family were killed when their world was virus bombed during a Genestealer insurrection. Blenner was off-planet, visiting a relative. An aunt, I believe. "
Genestealers virus bombed. Presumably an exterminatus. Also off-planet relations. Which may suggest nobility, given we know Imperial nobles typically span multiple worlds to preserve genetic lines (a trick of the famulous)



Page 113
It was winter season in Cracia and the sky was a dull, unreflective white like an untuned vista-caster screen. Snow fluttered down out of the leaden sky to ice the gothic rooftops and towers of the old, grey city...
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But it was warm down here on the streets. Under the stained glass-beaded ironwork awnings which edged every thoroughfare, the walkways and concourses were heated. Kilometres below the city, ancient turbines pumped warm air up to the hypocaust beneath the pavements, which circulated under the awning levels. A low-power energy sheath broadcast at first floor height stopped rain or snow from ever reaching the pedestrian levels, for the most part.
The levels of Imperial society with wealth and probably those that support them have it good, obviously. This reflects at least the Imperial upper classes, but it may also be what passes for the Imperium's middle class, given there are cafes and shit catering to Guardsmen (who are hardly the 'best class' even at the best of times.) The heated air from belowground is one interesting bit, but the magic shields to deflect snow and rain is even moreso.


Page 115
he Regiments have been given four days recreation in this city, but that recreation is contingent on several things. Reasonable levels of behaviour, so as not to offend or disrupt the citizens of this most ancient and civilised burg. Restrictions to the use of prescribed bars, clubs, wager-halls and brothels.
And a total ban on Imperial Guard personnel leaving the heated areas of the city. The cold zones are lawless.”
...
“Yeah… but there are five hundred thousand guardsmen on leave in Cracia, dogging up the star-ports and the tram depots. Each one has been to fething hell and back in the last few months. Do you honestly think they’re going to behave themselves?”
That they're given recreation at all makes sense, but the Munitorum has not been known for consistent sense. Also we get reiteration that the 'heated' areas have entertainments (including brothels, suggesting prostitution is legalized on this planet if not this portion of the Imperium) proving this one planet is more progressive than America itself is. And again, this probably suggests the 'heated' areas constitute not just the upper classes but the 'middle' classes that support them and the industry of the planet, particulariyl given that the poorest areas are effectively lawless (and the Guard are forbidden to go there. Again the Guard as a rule are harrly the highest echelons of Imperial society, by and large. The Ghosts certainly aren't.)
And there are 500K troops on planet, implication strongly that they all served on Fortis Binary. If that really WAS the sum total of the troops, they must have expected a greater than 1000:1 kill ratio in the favour of the guard.



Page 115-116
Blenner had always been a tale-spinner, even back in their days at the Schola Progenium. Gaunt always looked forward to their reunions. Blenner was about as close as he came to having an old friend..
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But Blenner was also a terrible boast, and he had become weak and complacent, enjoying a little too much of the good life. For the last decade, he’d served with the Greygorian Third. The Greys were efficient, hard working and few regiments were as unswervingly loyal to the Emperor. They had spoiled Blenner.
Ciaphas fellow Commissar and comrade Blenner. Blenner comes across as another sort of Ciaphas Cain, albeit one less heroic/proactive, less manipulative, and generallly lazier. But as we learn he is still a commissar, and that's the important thing, because it demonstrates yet again that Commissars come in all stripes rather than the 'overly fanatical zealot who shoots his own people to motivate them.'



Page 116
The exchange was as warm and friendly as a pair of automated range finders getting a mutual target lock.
For the analogy to work one would assume such devices exist, although what they're used for ansd where we have no idea :P



Page 117
Milo fetched a small data-slate out of his thigh pocket and presented it. “This came through the vox-cast after you’d gone, sir. "
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“All I know, sir, is that it’s a personal communiqué delivered on an encrypted channel for your attention.."
...
Gaunt studied the gibberish on the slate. Then the identifying touch of his thumbprint on the decoding icon unscrambled it. For his eyes only indeed.
Given the slate message is encoded and only decodes on gaunt's thumbprint, it suggests the message was delivered to the slate or uploaded to it at some later point.



Page 119
Even as a skeleton, Geel would have been a huge man. But upholstered as he was in more than three hundred kilos of chunky flesh he made even Bragg look undernourished. Major Rawne knew full well it would take over three times his own body-mass to match the opulently dressed racketeer.
Rawne was also totally unafraid.
While it may refer to an obese man (certianly does later on) the implication between Rawne not being afraid, the fact hte guy is ambulatory under his own power, and the comparison to Bragg suggests he's just a really big, burly guy (albeit one even bigger than Bragg, but perhaps not by much. ) Again with the 2 m tall people, the Imperium has some fucking huge people, which makes you wonder how the biological/cardiovascular and related issues are dealt with (magic would be my guess, or more precisely a benevolent mutation of the sort that permits OGryn and Space Marines to exist rationally.)


Page 119
Then he lifted the decanter and drained the other litre of liquor without even blinking. He knew that it was a rye-based alcohol with a chemical structure similar to that used in Chimera and Rhino anti-freeze. He also knew that he had taken four anti-intoxicant tablets before coming in. Four tabs that had cost a fortune from a black market trader, but it was worth it. It was like drinking spring water.
Interesting if actually true (also indicating Rawne has some awareness of chemical structure.) in any case there exists 'anti intoxicant' tablets which help prevent getting drunk, which has to be useful to someone in the Imperium.



Page 120
“Hocwheat liquor. Smokes. Text slates with dirty pictures. Everything you asked for,”
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“Now, to the money. Two thousand Imperial credits. Don’t waste my time with local rubbish.
Two thousand Imperial.”
Mention again of 'Imperial' currency. Credits are the most common reference across multiple novels, but thrones have been used as well. I assume they're interchangable. What's more, the unit of currency is apparently physical as well as electronic/intangible.



Page 120
And pulled out a laspistol.
The first two shots hit Geel in the face and chest, smashing him back down the alley.
With practised ease, Feygor grinned as he put an explosive blast through the skulls of each outraged bodyguard.
Laspistol rounds have knockdown power. Whether it just makes people stumble back i involuntary reflex or sheer momentum we don't know. Also the blasts are described explicitly as 'explosive' although juts how explosve we're not told. Possibly an indicator that laspistol/rifle shots create bursts that can create pulsed energy projectile like effects.


Page 123
The cold zones like this were a grim reminder that society in a vast city like Cracia was deeply stratified. At the heart were the great palace of the Ecclesiarch and the Needle itself. Around that, the city centre and the opulent, wealthy residential areas were patrolled, guarded, heated and screened, safe little microcosms of security and comfort. There, every benefit of Imperial citizenship was enjoyed.
But beyond, the bulk of the city was devoid of such luxuries. League after league of crumbling, decaying city blocks, buildings and tenements a thousand years old, rotted on unlit, unheated, uncared for streets. Crime was rife here, and there were no Arbites. Their control ran out at the inner city limits. It was a human zoo, an urban wilderness that surrounded civilisation. In some ways it almost reminded Gaunt of the Imperium itself — the opulent, luxurious heart surrounded by a terrible reality it knew precious little about. Or cared to know.
Again mention of the cold zones, reflecting the utter stratification of Imperial society and how it can differ (EG lot sof people living in shitty conditions.) The perverse thing is it implies only those in the city are true 'Imperials' whilst everyone else outside it.. isn't. Or if they are Imperials, they're of lesser quality. That distinction has appeared sometimes and always interest sme given the whole definition of 'Imperial' worlds and suchlike. This suggests that not every human in the Imperium is truly 'Imperial' or at least a Imperial Citizen. Also, Gaunt's analogy to the Imperium is morbidly amusing and accurate.



Page 126
“Two nights ago, associates of mine here in Cracia intercepted a signal sent via an astropath from a scout ship in the Nubila Reach. It was destined for Lord High Militant General Dravere’s Fleet headquarters. Its clearance level was Vermilion.”
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“The data is stored on this crystal. It took the lives of two psykers to capture the signal and transfer it to this. Dravere must not get his hands on it.”
We dont quite know how far away nubila reach is from Pyrites, but the SWC guidebook BL put out has maps that give a vague impression its at least several tens of LY (several planets away) and I'd guess 100 Ly or more, but its hard to be precise without maps. Even if it was acros sthe sector the astorpathic signal is pretty slow tens or hundreds of LY in 2 days would be tens of thousands of c at least. Moreover, they can transmit actual schematics or other data, which isn't really surprising given its all symbolism, but its usually more precise data than is ascribed to astrotelepathy.



PAge 126
"I contacted my offworld superior, and he told me to await a trusted ally."
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"Whoever you are, friend, you are held in high regard. You are trusted. "
Suggesting perhaps 3 astropathic messages were made in 2 days, meaning its more like a matter of hours for a message and response. We dont quite know offworld where it is though.



Page 126-127
He began to say something.
The wall behind him exploded in a firestorm of light and vaporising bricks. Two fierce blue beams of las fire punched into the room and sliced the man into three distinct sections before he could move.
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From his vantage point at the door he watched as two armoured troopers swung in through the exploded wall. They were big, dad in black, insignia-less combat armour, carrying compact, cut-down lasrifles. Adhesion damps on their knees and forearms showed how they had scaled the outside walls to blow their way in with a directional limpet mine.
They surveyed the room, sweeping their green laser tagger beams. One spotted Gaunt prone in the doorway and opened fire. The blast punched through the doorframe, kicking up splinters and began stitching along the plasterboard wall.
Lasguns with stighting lasers/or red dot laser sights slice a guty in half with raking fire. Presumed duration is a fraction of a second, as the guy has no time to speak, scream or otherwise react (nor does Gaunt.) We don't quite know diameter, except that for a RL laser it might have to be around a cm or so to go completely through a torso.
Assuming 10 shots through the body each would have to have a wound diameter of 3-4 cm at least you could figure on 10-20 kj per 'shot' at least, with a combined yield of 100-200 kj for the burst (however long it lasted.) Probably a bit more, since you need to sever bone, cause thermal wounds, etc. If its 20 shots to sever, we'd be talking ~2 cm wound diameter roughly, you could probably get away with 3-5 kj per shots although its still 60-100 kj per 'burst'. It might be fewer shots, but the wound diameters would get bigger and its debatable we're talking 'fist sized' based on context. Atomic rockets implies a 'fan beam' effect could be done with perhaps lower energy, but Its a bit hard to interpret how to work that, and in any case its not a fan beam anyhow.
Another way to calc it is the lack of blood. Assuming 50-100 j per sq cm roughly and the two halves being cauterized by a isngle beam (20x35cm for both halves of the torso lets call it) it would be at least 70 kj per beam, over however many shots it takes. IF we figure a 1 cm diamete rbeam along 35 cm wide, 20 cm deep it would be 100 sq cm at 400 j per sq ccm 4th degree 'flaying' wounds it would be 40 kj.
I'll note Atomic Rockets claims a 'fanbeam' laser could cut througha torso with the energy that goes into a full power rifle round (~2.5-3 grams of powder) which is around 8-12 kj at least, more if its a powreful bolt action cartridge. I dont know if a raking/slicing beam can achieve a 'fanbeam' effect (perhaps if it sdelivered in a millisecond or so) but its another conservative possibility.
Then there is the brick wall. A single directional limpet charge blows a rather sizable hole int he wall (big enough for a human to pass through) and presumably is at least as thick as a brick (8-10 cm?) how a single charge manages to do that I dont know, but its damn impressive for the controllability if not so much for the yield. So since I'm not gonna do literal vaporization again,a nd I'm not sure how else to go about measuring it... well I'm just gonna leave it.

Also lasbolts pretty effortlessly punch through doorframe, although beyond being wood we dont know much (thickness, etc.)


Page 127
The gun was small, but the odd design clearly marked it as an ancient and priceless specialised weapon. It had a kick like a mule and a roar like a Basilisk.
The first shot surprised Gaunt as much as the two stealth troops and it blew a hatch-sized hole in the wall. The second shot exploded one of the attackers.
A little rune on the grip of the pistol had changed from “V” to “III”. Gaunt sighed. This thing clearly wasn’t over-blessed with a capacitous magazine.
It must also be a miniature stub gun with bolt rounds, because the thing freaking blows people apart. Thats grenade level damage in pistol bullet sized packages. Almost certainly its a high end spy weapon, rather than something citiciznes or other 'common' sorts would have, but its nice to knwo what a high end projectile weapon MIGHT be capable of still, especially since it again points to some pretty hefty explosives. If we figure a 20 gram bullet with about 10-12 grams of explosive in it, and roughly torso blown apart (call it 500 kj) you'd maybe be talking 40-50 MJ per kg at least, which is at least an order of magnitude better than modern explosives. This doesnt neccesarily mean IMPERIAL military explosives grade, mind, but even as higher tier stuff thats pretty amazing as this is basically what FAEs pull off. Who knows, maybe it is thermobaric :P


Page 127
The footfalls on the stairway got louder and three more stealth troopers stumbled up..
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Gaunt dropped to a kneeling pose and blew the head off the first. But the other two opened fire up the well with their las-guns and then the remaining trooper in the apartment behind him began firing too. The cross-blast of three lasguns on rapid-burst tore the top hallway to pieces. Gaunt dropped flat so hard he smashed his hand on the boards and the gun pattered away down the top steps.
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Some of the shots had punched up through the floor and carpet a whisker from Gaunt’s nose, leaving smoky, dimpled holes.
Stub round blows off human head, and we get short term effects of lasfire. Again not sure how to quanitfy it, aside from being messy and the fact that las shots coming up the stairway seem able to punch through the stairs into the floor next to gaunt, whch again implies considerable penetration.


Page 128
When the trooper from the apartment poked his head round the door, a cubit of hard-flung Tanith silver impaled his skull.
A cubit is roughly 45-46 cm, so we're talking nearly half a metre of steel. Thats not a knife, thats a fucking short sword. To put it another way, a gladius is maybe 60-70 cm long, and a bowie knife was more like 20-30 cm traditionally (although nmodern bowie can be shorter.) This blade falls somewhere between those two extremes, and would core straight through a guy (or his head) and stick almost for twice its length out the blade.
Mass wise its probably not much far off a bowie knife or gladius (call it around a kilo or so.) More if it were literally silver (which it almost certianly isn't.)



Page 128
Blenner climbed the stairs into view, carefully stepping over the smouldering bodies, a smoking laspistol in his hand.
Implying Blenner's laspistol partly ignited his targets. If we figure a 20x20 cm area on both targets (800 sq cm) and 125 j per sq cm thats 100 kj total. If divided amongst 20-30 shots (full pack for a laspistol) we're talking between 3-5 kj per shot for thermal effects. This is largely conjectural though, as we dont know how much of the body (per shot) actually smouldered.






Page 129
Blenner chuckled. “I’m loyal to the Emperor, Gaunt, and doubly loyal to my old friends. What else do you need to know?”
..
Blenner leaned forward, earnest for the first time in years. “Look, Bram… I may seem like an old fogey to you, grown fat on the luxuries of having a damn near perfect regiment… but I haven’t forgotten what the fire feels like. I haven’t forgotten the reason I’m here. You can trust me to hell and back, and I’ll be there for you.”
Again its easy to underestimate Blenner. He just saved Gaunt, and now he makes a declaration of support. Whatever his personal habits are, he's still very much a soldier and even a Commissar, and that really enhances that 'Cain like' quality.



Page 132
His intended friendly slap was hard and stinging — Varl had still to get used to the cybernetic implant shoulder joint the medics had fitted him with on Fortis.
As I noted earlier, Varl had his shoulder joint augmetically replaced, which impacted my calcs as noted before.



Page 136
Benthlay didn’t even have any arms. He would point to the lights with his buzzing prosthetic limbs and patiently explain that if Ibram’s father had been coming home, they would have had word in advance.
..
But Oric, the cook from the kitchen block, had a broader mind. He would lift the boy in his meaty arms and point his nose to the sky to catch a glimpse of every ship and every shuttle. Ibram had a toy dreadnought that his Uncle Dercius had carved for him from a hunk of plastene.
..
Every time he put the boy down and returned to the kitchens, Ibram wondered about the buzzing noise that came from under his long chefs overalls. It sounded just like the noise his tutor’s arms made when they gestured.
..
When they heard Uncle Dercius’ voice, Ibram had leapt down and run into the parlour. He hit against Dercius’ uniformed legs like a meteor and hugged tight.
..
Dercius looked a thousand metres tall in his mauve Jantine uniform. He smiled down at the boy but there was something sad in his eyes.
...
Uncle Dercius did a strange thing: he crossed directly to Oric and embraced him. “Good to see you, old friend.”
“And you, sir. Been a long time.”
This is more 'background' but its a rather interesting bit, because it offers a complex view into Gaunt's past and his relationship with Dercius (which will be elaborated on later.) The General (who puts Gaunt in the Schola) clearly cares for the boy, and even cares for his men (or at lest some men.) who are clearly old soldiers and all. I'll get more into this later, but its mainly interesting to note Dercius 'then' as a contrast to the man later. Oh and the toys, one of which made by Dercius (another sign of his regard for the boy.)



Page 140
Firearm-screening fields meant there was no bolt pistol in his holster on the door hook, but he took his Tanith knife.
There are firearms/weapons screening fields in the ship, which are meant as a security measure.



Page 141
A dome of transparent, hyper-dense silica a hundred metres in radius, it was the most serene place the structure offered. Beyond the glass, a magnificent, troubling vista swirled, filtered by special dampening fields.
'hyper dense' silica window domes, and special damping fields to protect viewers from the worse effects of viewing the warp aboard an AdMech vessel. They don't seem to be common use (as in other ships the viewports would be blocked/closed or otherwise secured during warp travel.)




Page 141
..the Mass Cargo Conveyance Absalom...
..
One of the ancient transport-ships of the Adeptus Mechanicus, a veteran vessel. The Tech-Lords of Mars had sent a massive retinue to aid the disaster at Fortis, and now in gratitude for the liberation they subordinated their vessels to the Imperial Guard.
...
From the shuttle, he’d seen sixteen solid kilometres of grey architecture, like a raked, streamlined cathedral, with the tiny lights of the troop transports flickering in and out of its open belly-mouth. The crenellated surfaces and towers of the mighty Mechanicus ship were rich with bas-relief gargoyles, out of whose wide, fanged mouths the turrets of the sentry guns traversed and swung. Green interior light shone from the thousands of slit windows.
The current vessel Gaunt and his crew is travelling on. We know ships can easily get as big or bigger now, but even now this is damn impressive.. its roughly Executor sized, possibly quite more massive given the blockiness of Imperial construction, and its merely a glorified troop carier, although its size and AdMech provenance mean it can probably be formidably armed.

It's also implied (rather interestingly) it was deployed directly from Mars to the edge of Segmentum PAcificus, a journey implied to be maybe 25-30 thousand LY at least by the 5th edition maps.



Page 141
Gaunt’s flagship, the great frigate Navarre, had been seconded for picket duties to the Nubila Reach so Gaunt had chosen to travel with his men on the Absalom.
Gaunt has his own frigate, whether because he is a Commissar, or he serves a special role, or because he was tied to Slaydo in some way we don't know. The frigate we learn in ghostmaker also carried his men. Interesting either way, gaunt having access to a ship.




Page 142
The Absalom was a different breed of beast, a behemoth. Its echoing bulk capacity allowed it to carry nine full regiments, including the Tanith, four divisions of the Jantine Patricians, and at least three mechanised battalions, including their many tanks and armoured transport vehicles. Fat lift ships had hefted the numerous war machines up into the hold from the depots on Pyrites.
Its probably a lower limit. Its implied that the Jantine outnumber the guard 4 to one later, so we might be talking 'four divisions' being 8-10 thousand troops, although if its a RL 'division' we might be talking 40-60 thousand. AT least 'three mechanised battalions' although we can't measure those in size (Except maybe scores or hundreds of tanks.) plus however many extras. Its at least tens of thousands of troops, possibly more.

That does seem low for a troop transport, but remember that this isn't normally a Guard transport, its simply being used as such as a favor to the Guard and normally carries Mechanicus forces (including Titans.


Page 142
Now they were en route - a six-day jump to a cluster of war-worlds called the Menazoid Clasp,
Six days from Fortis Binary to the Clasp. again its hard to know distances, but the map implies several tens of LY (at least 30-50 is my guess) if the guesses mean anything. If we figure between 20-200 LY (inter sector distances roughly) it would be at least 1200c to 12,000c. Assuming a striaght-line transit.


Page 143
The Glass Bay was one of three Immaterium Observatories on the Absalom, allowing the navigators and the clerics of the Astrographicus Division visual access to the void around. In the centre of the bay’s deck, on a vast platform mechanism of oiled cogs and toothed gears, giant sensorium scopes, aura-imagifiers and luminosity evaluators cycled and turned, regarding the maelstrom, charting, cogitating, assessing and transmitting the assembled data via chattering relays and humming crystal stacks to the main bridge eight kilometres away at the top of the Absalom’s tallest command spire.
The looking bay doubles as an observation point as well as some sort of emergence point for some sort of detection gear. Whether these are warp based sensors of some kind, or used by the astorpaths/navigators - or both - we dont know. 'aura' and 'luminosity' shit does suggest warp based to me, at least. It might be tech just devoted to reading/interpreting the warp, of course, and may not have much use in realspace.



Page 146
There was something strange about him. The way his mouth was set in a determined grimace while his wide eyes seemed to be. pleading? The rating flipped up onto his feet with a scissor of his back and legs, and coiled around in a hunched, offensive posture, the knife held blade-uppermost in his right hand.

How could a deck rating know moves like that? Gaunt worried. The practised movements, the perfect balance, the silent resolve - all betrayed a specialist killer, an adept at the arts of stealth and assassination. But close up, Gaunt saw the man was just an engineer, his naval uniform a little tight around a belly going to fat.
Gaunt being assaulted by a guy being mind controlled/puppeteerd by another psyker. The control is such that even an out of shape, untrained invidiual can move like a trained killer, at least in Gaunt's estimation. Not unlike 'waring' Ravenor uses.



Page 146
The blade was short and leaf-shaped, shorter than the rubberised grip it protruded from. There was a series of geometric holes in the body of the blade itself, reducing the overall weight whilst retaining the structural strength. And it plainly wasn’t metal; it was matt blue, ceramic, invisible to the ship’s weapon-scan fields.
described as a 'tech knife' its interesting, but the main thing is that its undetectable by the weapon fields. That suggests they primarily rely on the detection of ferrous or magnetic materials.




Page 147
Though the mouth moved, the voice was not coming from it. The lip movements barely synched with the words. He’d seen that before somewhere, years ago. It looked like. possession. Gaunt bristled as fear ran down his back. More than the fear of mortal combat. The fear of witchcraft. Of psykers.
Again there is a psyker 'riding' the person, although Gaunt calls it possession.




Page 148
The touch of a stud on the grip had caused the ceramic blade to retract with a pneumatic hiss and re-extend through the flat pommel of the grip, reversing the angle.
Tech knife has a reversable blade. althoguh I suspect it simply has two blades and it can alternate which one is sticking out at any given time myself.



Page 150
The rating got up again.

The man wriggled back on his knees, rippling the pool of blood around him, and then swung his body up straight, arms swaying limp at his sides.
..
His face was blank, and his eyes were no longer pleading and trapped. They were gone, in fact. A fierce green light raged inside his skull, making his eyes pupilless slits of lime fire.
...
There was no more blood, just a shaft of bright green light poking from the wound. With a sigh of finality, Gaunt knew that the psychic puppetry was continuing. The man, who had been a helpless thrall of the psyker magic when he first attacked, was now reanimated by abominable sorcery.
The psyker can control a dead body as easily as a living one, just with more glowy shit to indicate its an animated zombie.




Page 151
Two las-shots slammed it sideways. Another tight pair broke it open along the rib cage, venting an incandescent halo of bright psychic energy. A fifth shot to the head dropped the thing like it had been struck in the ear with a sledgehammer.

Colm Corbec, the laspistol in his hand...
lastpistol ruptures side of a human torso, at least shattering the ribs. Ignoring penetration of flesh and deeper into the body (number of pulses) and just focus on shattering bone its at least 1.5-2 kj, althoguh if there are any number of pulses (say 5-10) we could easily be dealing with high single/low double digit kj.




Page 152-153
Six Imperial Navy troopers in fibre-weave shipboard armour and low-brimmed helmets exited in a pack and dropped to their knees, covering the trio with compact stubguns. One barked curt orders into his helmet vox-link.
..
Six stubgun muzzles swung their attention directly at him. The detail’s weapons were short-line, pump-action models designed for shipboard use. The glass shards and wire twists wadded into each shell would roar out in a tightly packed cone of micro-shrapnel, entirely capable of shredding a man at close range. But unlike a lasgun or a bolter, there was no danger of them puncturing the outer hull.
Naval armsmen. I'm not sure if the 'stubguns' are actually stubbers or just a weird name for shotguns, but they either have shotguns hells or some sort of fragmenting/flechette/cannister ammo which sounds both nasty and messy. Oh and they have helmet vox.


Page 155
On dull steel shelves in bays around the rooms were ranked fat, glass-stoppered bottles with yellowing paper labels, mostly full of treacly fluids, surgical pastes, dried powders and preparations, or organic fieldswabs in clear, gluey suspensions. Racks of polished instruments sat in pull-out drawers and plastic waste bags, stale bedding and bandage rolls were packed into low, lidded boxes around the walls that doubled as seats. There was a murky autoclave on a brass trolley, two resuscitrex units with shiny iron paddles, and a side table with an apothecary’s scales, a diagnostic probe and a blood cleanser set on it.
Med facilities the Ghosts have access to on the Absolom.




Page 155
Dorden had patched the wound in the commissar’s shoulder with sterile dressings, washed the whole limb in pungent blue sterilising gel and then pinched the mouth of the wound shut with bakelite suture clamps that looked like the heads of biting insects.
...
"I’d wrap it in false-flesh if I could find any, but besides, the wound should breathe."
More medical stuff. What's particularily notable here is the clamps (I've heard of similar before somewhere) and the 'false flesh' stuff, whatever that is.



Page 157-158
[qoute]"I’ve spoken to medics with other regiments. At the field hospital on Fortis, for instance. So many of them say their commissars don’t care a jot about their men. They see them as fodder for the guns. Is that how you see us?’"

"No."

"No, I thought not. So, that makes you rare indeed. Something worth hanging on to, for the good of these poor Ghosts. Feth, you may not be Tanith, but if assassins are starting to hunger for your blood, I start to care. For the Ghosts, I care."[/quote]

Dorden's commentary again notes Gaunt is unusual in his treatment of the Ghosts, compared to other commissars. At least in his experience, as we know that they can exist.




Page 161
All forty surviving platoons, a little over two thousand Ghosts, were billeted here.
2000 ghosts in 40 platoons is about 50 per platoon, although it might be a bit less if we figure the platoon makeup must be not just infantry squads but command and special weapons squads and such. Although its also posisble that the 'little over' bit is that extra.



Page 161-162
They had been training in the exercise chambers, and each one carried one of the shock-poles provided for combat practise. These neural stunners were the only weapons allowed to them during a crossing. They could fence with them, spar with them and even set them to long range discharge and target-shoot against the squeaking moving metal decoys in the badly-oiled automatic range.
Training facilities aboard absalom. The stunners are interesting both for their nonlethalness as well as for their ranged ability. That would enable them to be used even in live-fire exercises, if the regiments were allowed to mix.




Page 163
“And that weasel Macaroth got it,” Corbec said with a rueful grin.

“That’s Warmaster Weasel Macaroth, colonel,” Gaunt corrected. He let the men chuckle. Good humour would make this easier. “Like him or not, he’s in charge now. And that makes it simple for us. Like me, you are all loyal to the Emperor, and therefore to Warmaster Macaroth. Slaydo chose him to be successor. Macaroth’s word is the word of the Golden Throne itself. He speaks with Imperium authority.”
Gaunt again demonstrates his atypical approach to Commissaring, which includes making jokes (and allowing the troops to make jokes and vent opinions.) even though he doesn't treat it seriously. It reflects the way Gaunt will allow small things to slide (rather than calling them out for the slightest breach of discipline) whilst holding them to the important stuff (not being a cowardly shit in front of the enemy.)

It's also interesting, given what we've learned with the new Sequence (Blood Pact and Salvation's Reach), how the Ghosts (and Gaunt) treat Macaroth here. The attitudes towards the guy (and represents) have soured quite a bit compared to this point in time.
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Rounding out my massive infodump attack is a twofer on Gaunt's Ghosts. Yes, we're closing out First and Only and moving on. We only have a dozen or so more novels to go, an anthology, several short stories and a couple spinoff novels to cover :P

Page 166
"...there are over four times our number of Patricians aboard this vessel on the other barrack decks."
As noted before, the Jantine outnumber the ghosts 4:1 which suggests there are more than 8000 of them, which fits closer to the 10K figure being the total of the Patricians (whether totla regiment or what, we don't know.) EAch division would thus be 2500 troops roughly, which is far smaller than what a real life 'division' is. This may suggest that terms like 'battalion' and 'brigade' or even 'division' when applied to the guard are simply used as qualifiers to further subdivide very large regiments (alrger than the 6000 troop size 'common'.) It keeps regiment-like 'formations' in a larger group without breaking from the Munitorum's beloved adminsitrative/logistical abstractions of 'regiments being equal.'




Page 170
“Too old, too damn old! Feth, I thought I had it!”
...
“The clearance levels remain the same, but they revise the codes required to read them at regular intervals. Dercius’ ring would certainly have opened a Vermilion text thirty years ago, but the sequences have been overwritten since then. I should have expected Dravere to have set his own confidence codes. "
At first I thought the ring would have decoded it (I haven't read the books in awhile so I forgot alot of little detials like this), and it would reflect a massive security breach in the way the Imperium works (having a thirty year old decoder ring still decoding old shit.) In a way it sort of still is, I suppose, but not as big as I thought, since you need both the codes AND the security clearance. Besides how likely is it a little boy is to get their hands on something like that except from a corrupt and indulgent 'uncle'? And to be fair the Imperium is depicted as 'stagnant' that it didn't strike me as that improbable, whic maybe tells you something about the Imperium or how it can be perceived. LOL

Speaking of Gaunt and Dercius, part of this seen has Milo getting a little glimpse into Gaunt and his past. Gaunt is basically tearing his possessions apart to find the ring, and Milo sees lots of little tidbits - an old toy battleship, a pack of what I take to be playing cards that have the initials D.O. (indicating its Oktar) from Gyalntus Decimus (where Oktar wsa poisoned.) a cap from the Hyrkens, and Ork Teeth, etc. It shows that Gaunt is something of a sentimental sort, albeit one with a very sad past depicting how people have very suddnely been taken from him (his mentor Oktar, his father, etc.) It marks him out as being quite different from the typical depiction of a Commissar because of that emotinal/sentimental part of him, but I suspect that is also what makes him such a great leader by inspiration despite lackign the psychologically manipluative gifts of Cain.

Gaunt is also something of a private man, in that Milo is one of the few to get this glimpse into Gaunt's life, and even he doesn't grasp the full implications of them. Few do, I suspect. But all these little glimpses, these hints in the past show how Gaunt has been shaped, and I suspect dictate precisely WHY he treats the Ghosts the way he does in the series. They're another thing that gets 'taken' from him in a way (the way they were nearly taken on the day of the founding) - by the war - but he's also determined to save as much as he can, I suspect, and that becomes a major driving force in his life. He isn't going to let anything - or anyone - take something he cares about from him again.



Page 172
The figure at the windows stepped slowly down to face him. Flense, two metres tall without his jackboots, found himself looking up into the darkness of the cowl.
...
Inquisitor Golesh Constantine Pheppos Heldane sniggered again. He reached up with his ring-heavy fingers and turned back his cowl. Flense blinked. Heldane’s face was high and long, like some equine beast. His wet, sneering mouth was full of blunt teeth and his eyes were round and dark. Fluid tubes and fibre-wires laced his long, sloped skull like hair braids. His huge skull was hairless, but Flense could see the matted fur that coated his neck and throat. He was human, but his features had been surgically altered to inspire terror and obedience in those he… studied. At least, Flense hoped it was a surgical alteration.
Heldane makes his appearance. I actually read about Heldane in this novel first, rather than reading Eisenhorn as I recall, so I think I did it backwards. He's still horse faced and even uglier than before. HE was the psyker controlling the puppet who tried to kill Gaunt earlier. he's also considerably taller than flenses' 2 metres. Get used to seeing '2 metre or taller' guys in these novels quite a bit. Abnett loves em. :D





Page 173
Those present were standing in one of the Absalom’s astropath sanctums, a chamber screened from all intrusion. The walls were null-field dead spaces designed to shut out both the material world and the screaming void of the Immaterium.

Sound-proofed, psyker-proofed, wire-proofed, these inviolable cocoons were dedicated and reserved for the astropathic retinue alone. They were prohibited by Imperial law. Only a direct invitation could admit a blunt human such as Flense.
Astropath sanctums. Two way 'sound' proofing, both auditory and psychic it seems.




Page 173
A psyker’s word for the non-psychic. Blunt.
...
“I have no prejudices, inquisitor.”

“Yes, you have. I can taste them. You detest mind-seers. You despise the gift of the astropath. You are a blunt, Flense. A sense-dead moron. "
Blunt. Psyker term for non-psyker humans. Flense pretends not to be prejudiced but its pretty pointless lying to a psyker, and Heldane ridicules him for it. Its quite likely Flense does not want to piss off an Inquisitor by admitting to his prejudice (one rather common in the Imperium, the whole 'witchcraft' thing) but Heldane knows better and makes him suffer for it (by tormenting him physically and mentally.) Its a pretty jarring scene honestly, with Heldane torturing Flense, who is reduced to begging and pleading, and the astorpaths laughing and enjoying Heldane tormenting Flense. What makes it jarring is how it is driven by essentially human, very negative feelings. That very tribal hate and fear and revulsion of what is seen as 'diferent'. the blunts hate the psykers and vice versa. And yet, they're dependent upon each other for survival, although the vast majority of 'psykers' are treated as virtual slaves (or worse, components to be expended/sacrificed/used.) except for the rare few like a psychic Inquisitor. What must that do to a person to know that but for luck, you might have turned out enslaved? How would you feel towards the people who inflicted these things upon you simply because of bad luck when it came to genetics? Its easy to understand WHY they might hate, but at the same time its horrible because its the fault of hte culture, not of an individual like poor Flense, and Flense is really just an excuse.

At the same time I suspect Heldane is doing it more because he's an asshole. HE was a bit of one in Eisenhorn and has only gotten worse, especially by Hereticus. He seems to have fully stepped off the crazy train and gone from merely full-bore Radical (EG wanting a daemonhost) to outright heretical (or more heretical, depending on yuor view of daemonhosts) so I suspect he simply enjoys tormenting for the sake of torment, although one must wonder what has happened to shape him this way, too.



Page 175
By extension, all of his platoon, all fifty of them spread out patrolling the perimeter of the Ghosts’ barrack deck in squads of five,..
Which confirms ym earlier assesmsent, the platoons are of fifty men. Although how many infantry squads that means, and if it includes the specialist/command squad, is up for debate still.)



Page 175-176
Rawne thought, as he often did, of Gaunt. Of Gaunt’s motives. From the start, back at the bloody hour of the Founding itself, he had shown no loyalty to the commissar. It had astonished him when Gaunt had raised him to major and given him the tertiary command of the regiment.
..
Rawne’s background had been select. He didn’t talk about it much, but Feygor knew enough to know that that Rawne’s family had been rich, merchants, local politicians, local lords.
...
Just… bitter. Bitterness was what had ruined him, bitterness was what had scalded his nature early on.
..
One day, Feygor thought, one day Rawne will kill Gaunt and take his place. Gaunt, Corbec, any who opposed. Rawne will kill Gaunt. Or Gaunt will kill Rawne. Whatever, there will be a reckoning.
Rawne and Feygor add their insights to the situation. Rawne and Gaunt have perhaps the most complex relationship of all the ghosts, and it becomes more so over time in some ways, but less so in other ways as well. He does hate Gaunt, and even wants to kill him, but there's more to it than that. Feygor by contrast is pretty straightforward - he's a criminal and opportunist, pure and simple. although even he goes through some changes over time, especially between him and Rawne.

Rawne will be explored more in Ghostmaker, especially in relation to Gaunt.




Page 177
With a savage turn, using the moves that had won him respect in the backstreets of Tanith Attica, he wheeled, kicked the legs out from under another and took a knife-wielding hand off at the wrist.
A bloody knife that hacks through a wrist pretty easily it seems. Given how big the 'knife' is this may not be all that unbelievable - it seems to have the mass behind it at least, although it amy still say something about the sharpness of Tanith blades to do that, even with bone.




Page 179
"... our mutual friend needs to nurture the support of those elements of the Imperium he deems uncorrupted. Rooting out corruption and taint in Imperium-sponsored bureaucracies, he can’t trust the Administratum, the Ministorum, or any ranking officials who might be part of the conspiratorial infrastructure. He told me that he always found his best allies in the Guard in those circumstances, in men drafted into crisis flash-points, plain soldiery who like as not were newcomers to any such event, and thus not part of the problem."
...
"The Famine Wars had been orchestrated by a government faction with ties into the Departmento Munitorium. They were able to field two regiments of Imperial Guard turned to their purpose."
...
" I had no idea Imperial corruption was behind the Famine Wars.”
..
"Such information is often suppressed. For the good of morale."
Despite the post-heresy division between the military forces to purportedly prevent easy corruption and limit the damage of treason, we see that there are still loopholes, much as we saw in Eisenhorn's Xenos. It doesn't do much to curtail ambition and political infighting and the damage it can cause, as the FAmine Wars point out. Heck, Dravere's own little attempt at a coup demonstrates this, and his actions have the potential to disrupt the entire war effort. Of course, without knowing how the Imperium would do without those restrictions, and what would happen if thing scould be micromanaged better, its hard to say things could be better in the 40K galaxy as well. For all we know better comms and FTL would have enabled a 'Reign of Blood' like situation more eaisly and made it harder to resist/topple, so the efficiency tradeoff that the separation of military powers entails may still be owrthwhile.




Page 180
It was clear the Imperial covert agent trusted Commissar-Colonel Ibram Gaunt more than almost anyone in the sector. More than myself, Zoren thought.

“I know this much, Gaunt. A group of high-ranking conspirators in the Sabbat Worlds Crusade High Command is hunting for something precious."
This might imply the Sabbat Worlds region is indeed a sector, as I've speculated in the past, but it could also just mean that there is one or more sectors in the sabbat Worlds region.





Page 185-186
Through reinforced metal cables that grew from the deck plates under his throne and clung like thick growths of creeper to the back of his chair, Grasticus felt his ship. The data-cables, many of them tagged with paper labels bearing codes or prayers, spilled over the headrest of his throne and entered his cranium, neck, spine and puffy cheeks through sutured bio-sockets. They fed him the sum total of the ship’s being, the structural integrity, the atmospheric levels, the very mood of the great spacecraft. Through them, he experienced the actions of every linked crewman and servitor aboard, and the distant rhythm of the engines set the pace of his own pulse.

Grasticus was immense. Three hundred kilos of loose meat hung from his great frame. He seldom left his throne, seldom ventured outside the quiet peace of his private strategium, an armoured dome at the heart of the busy bridge vault, set high on the command spire at the rear of the Absalom.

One hundred and thirty standard years before, when he had inherited this vessel from the late Lord Captain Ulbenid, he had been a tall, lean man. Indolence, and the addictive sympathy with the ship, had made him throne-bound. His body, as if sensing he was now one with such a vast machine, had slowed his metabolism and increased his mass, as if it wanted him to echo the swollen bulk of the Absalom. The conveyance vessels of the Adeptus Mechanicus were not like ships of the Imperial Navy. Immeasurably older and often much larger, they had been made to carry the engines of war from Mars to wherever they were needed. Their captains were more like the Princeps of great walking Titans, hardwired into the living machines through mind-impulse links. They were living ships.
The Commander of the ship. Aside from his obese size, its interesting that he's intimately connected to the ship like a Titan princeps. It seems like its not uncommon amongst the AdMech, but despite what this says its not uncommon amongst the navy either. Ramas of the Drachenfels in the Rennie novels being a prime example, but even in the Ghosts series we learn of another cpatain who is .Heck we know of a guy who is tied into a whole hive city in Necropolis. What makes this one so particularily interesting is the close, sympathetic realtionship shared - almost like the awareness goes other way, and the Captain is influenced as much by the ship as the ship is by him (strengthening the titan analogy, actually.)



Page 187
Grasticus disliked Lekulanzi. The whelp had been transferred to his command three months earlier on the orders of the Adeptus after Grasticus’ acting warrant officer was killed during a Warp-storm.
Lekulanzi is, we learn, a plant by Dravere, meaning that the aBsalom has been at least in the region for 3 months or so.





Page 187-188
Through his data-conduits, Grasticus felt the waft of the psychic truth-fields that layered and screened his strategium. The man was speaking honestly; the Tanith commander — a… Gaunt?—had indeed struck him. There were lower levels of inconsistency and falsehood registered by the fields, but Grasticus put that down to the man’s nervousness about approaching him directly.
...
Again, Grasticus felt a hint of deceit in the flow of the astropathic truth-fields, but once more he put this down to the disarming awe of being in his presence.
Mentnion of psychic 'truth fields' to detect the intentions and honesty of a person. Nifty. Clearly astropath based, although where the astropath is in relation to this I have no clue.




Page 189
He raised himself up on his ham-like elbows to study Gaunt, hefting his upper body free of the leather for the first time in fifteen months.
Which implies he might have spent a year in transit from mars. He is mentioned before as not having left it very often, and he's been in the Sabbat Worlds area for at least 3 months (for Dravere to slip an agent in) but thats as best as we cna tell. Implies average warp speed of at least tens of thousands of c.




Page 195
A battered old exotic bolt-action rifle with a long muzzle and ornately decorated stock, and a worn but serviceable pump stubgun with a bandolier strap of shells. Neither were regular issue Guard pieces, and both were much lower tech than Guard standard-pattern gear.
bolt action rifles (at least in the PAcificus/Sabbat worlds) region are considered lower tech than Guard issue gear, as are the stub guns. Whether this means projectile weapons are more advanced (in being automatic, or in the nature of the ammo or whatever) or if it says anything about performance (Eg lasguns being more powerful than a bolt action rifle) we don't know.





Page 195
All soldiers collected trophies like these, stuck them away in their kits to sell on, keep as mementoes, or simply use in a clinch. Corbec knew many of the Ghosts had their own… but they had dutifully handed them in with their issued weapons when they’d come aboard.
Recorded as 'souvenirs' or spoils of war, for various purposes. Spoils are the unofficial rewards of the guard, and a workaround (also unofficial) to the logistics problem sometimes.




Page 197
Bragg lifted the crumpled form of the dazed trooper and threw him ten metres down the vault-way. He landed hard, broken.
Indicator of the strength of Bragg. The man in armour and gear must weigh at least a good 80-100 kilos, which should be hard (impossible) for many normal men to do, or even some fairly strong ones. I'd imagine you'd have to be a weightlifter to pull that off, and even then I'm not sure you could just effortlessly throw them over thirty feet like that.




page 203
The Kheddite had not expected them to move in winter, but the High Lords of Terra’s Imperial Guard, whose forces dwelt in seasonless ship-holds plying the ever-cold of space, made no such distinction between campaigning months and resting months.
The off planet nature of the Guard apparently means they' can be 'all seasons', although whether thsi refers to them actually dwelling on and deploying from ship is up for debate. Troops garrisoned on a planet for any length of time are, of course, likely another story.




Page 203
Their column of Chimera troop transports, ski-nosed half-traks commandeered locally, Hellhounds and Leman Russ tanks with big bulldozer blades, made fast going over the sculptural ice desert, snorting exhaust smoke and ice-spumes in their wake.
Jantine vehicles, although whether part of the same regiment or two separate we don't know. Note that they commandeer some local vehicles to fill out the vehicle pool, which is SOP guard practice as per other novels, and helps offset the otherwise shitty logistics (although still a less than ideal situation, it beats troops riding on the fucking tanks.)



Page 204
The Sentinel scouts, stalking as swift outriders to the main advance...
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.. so he could sort through the sheaf of flimsy vista-prints the sentinels had brought back.
Sentinels which seem to provide recon pictures. Presumably they took them somehow and brought back physical copies (or at least they brought bakc the data, from which physical copies were printed. On the move, apparently.)



Page 207-209
It will be good to see Ibram, Dercius thought. What’s it been… thirteen, fourteen years? He’s grown up since I last saw him, grown up like his father. Served with the Hyrkan, made commissar.

Dercius had kept up with the long-range reports of Ibram’s career. Not just an officer, as his father intended, a commissar no less. Commissar Gaunt. Well, well, well. It would be good to see the boy again.

Despite everything.
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“Ibram…” Dercius said with a slow smile. “How long has it been?”
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“Ah… so did I, Ibram! It’s a joy to see you.” Dercius held his arms out wide.

“Because I am, as my father raised me, a fair man, I will tell you this, Uncle Dercius,” Gaunt said, his voice curiously low. “Four years ago on Darendara, I experienced a revelation. A series of revelations. I was given information. Some of it was nonsense, or was not then applicable. Some of it was salutary. It told me a truth. I have been waiting to encounter you ever since.” Dercius stiffened. “Ibram… my boy… what are you saying?”
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Gaunt unsheathed his chainsword. It murmured waspishly in the cold air. “I know what happened on Kentaur. I know that, for fear of your own career, my father died.”
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“Now I am a commissar,” Gaunt continued, addressing Dercius, “I am empowered to deliver justice where ever I see it lacking. I am empowered to punish cowardice. I am granted the gift of total authority to judge, in the name of the Emperor, on the field of combat.” Suddenly realising the implications behind Gaunt’s words, Dercius pulled his own chainsword and flew at the commissar. Gaunt swung his own blade up to block, his grip firm.

Madness and fear filled the Jantine commander… how had the little bastard found out? Who could have known to tell him? The calm confidence which had filled his mind since the Khedd campaign began washed away as fast as the dying light was dulling the ice-glare around them. Little Ibram knew. He knew! After all this time, all his care, the boy had found out! It was the one thing he always dreaded, always promised himself would never happen.
Gaunt kills his 'uncle' basically. The underlying motivations in this scene are fascinating. Despite all Gaunt's commissarial protestations, this is basically him seeking revenge for his dead father from Dercius, and he's using his rank to cover up the personal motivations behind it. And while Dercius is clearly going mad/upset that Gaunt found out... its also quite clear that the man did care for Gaunt, wathced out for him and tried to do well by him. Carved him toys, gave him gifts, got him an education and followed his career.... those aren't the actions of someone who is just trying to hide a horrible secret, but rather a man full of guilt at his actions and trying to make amends in some way.

The tragic thing is Gaunt doesn't seem to reailze that, or seem to care - he only wants to kill the man he thought betrayed his father. Not very commissarial if you ask me, and the consequences from this action haunt him later. But overall this is a very, very sad scene for me, because I feel it was rather unneccessary except for Gaunt's NEED for vengeance, and it reflects how things he cares about seem to be taken away from him (his father, and in a way Dercius as well, sa the 'truth' takes away that comforting 'uncle Dercius' illusion and leaves him with nothing except vengeance.) This also makes it far superior to your usual 'GRIMDARK' IMHO.




Page 209
A chain-blade was a different thing, of course: ten times as heavy and slow as a coup-epee, and the clash-torsion of the chewing teeth was an often random factor. But Dercius had retrained his swordsmanship in the nuances of the chainsword on admission to the Patricians. A duel, chainsword to chainsword, was rare these days, but not unheard of. The secrets were wrist strength, momentum and the calculated use of reversal in chain direction to deflect the opponent and open a space.

There was no feinting with a weapon as heavy as a chainsword. Only swing and re-address.
Chainsword duelling and the differences between other edged weapons. Basically its more like a heavy bludgeon or an axe than it is an actual sword in most ways, and there's very little finesse. The fact that 'chainsword duels' are rare is also interesting, as it suggests its primary role may indeed not be as an effective weapon, but more as a psychological tool (given that Commissars and Space Marines often use them, that makes sense in the same way bolters have a psychological element to them purportedly.)

Also, as I've noted before chainblades must be ludicrously heavy, although I think I overestimated it before. Duelling epees I've noticed are up to 700-800 grams, but usually between 300-450 grams. Which acutally makes this SLIGHTLY less insane as a Chainsword is 'only' 3-5 kg rather than the 5-10 kg I estimated before, and fits better with the FFG '6 kg' chainsword. Although in a way thats still pretty crazy, since we're still saying each duellist can lift the equivalent (or more) of a heavy two handed sword one handed, which indicates 'considerably better than average' strength in the same way Bragg does.




Page 210-211
He had failed. Failed his honour and his father. Dercius was too big, too formidable a presence in his mind to be defeated. Uncle Dercius, the huge man, the laughing, scolding, charismatic giant who had strode into his life from time to time on Manzipor, full of tales and jokes and wonderful gifts.

Dercius, who had carved toy frigates for him, told him the names of the stars, sat him on his knee and presented him with ork tooth souvenirs.

Dercius, who, with the aid of awning rods, had taught him to fence on the sundecks over the cataracts. Gaunt remembered the little twist-thrust that always left him sitting on his backside, rubbing a bruised shoulder. Deft with an epee, impossible with a chainsword.

Or perhaps not. Trailing blood and tattered clothes and flesh, Gaunt twisted, light as a child, and thrust with a weapon not designed to be thrust.
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“You are avenged, father,” Ibram Gaunt tried to say to the evening sky..
Again this reinforces that note of tragic in this whole scene, because Gaunt is killing someone who quite clearly cares about him, over something decades in the past (or rather the betrayal, but I'm not sure that's any better.), involving the loss of someone ELSE who cared about him.




Page 213
When the Absalom had put in at one of the huge beachhead hexathedrals strung out like beads across the Menazoid Clasp, there had been a bewildering mass of regiments and armoured units assembling to deploy at the Menazoid target zones
Hexathredrals were mentioned in Conquest of OBzidion from the old Inferno magazine. Given the origins of the first two books, the inclusion of such should not be surprising. They were prefab planetary asault platforms used to deploy dropships rapidly from orbit and deliver troops to the planet, serving as hospital, supply depot, and barracks for the troops 'for an entire army' (Suggesting perhaps tens or hundreds of thousands fo men, at least.) Also had a underside-mounted bombardment cannon for.. of ocurse.. bombardment purposes.

Here, though, they seem to be deployed as troop staging areas, to assemble and redeploy the troops for the bigger conflict. Whether they are in orbit above the planet or not is up for debate, but their inclusion is still pretty cool IMHO.




Page 214
After a week and a half of levy organisation, resupply and tactical processing at the hexathedrals, the Ghosts had been selected to participate in the assault on Menazoid Epsilon, advancing before an armoured host of forty thousand vehicles from the Lattaru Gundogs, Ketzok 17th, Samothrace 4th, 5th and 15th, Borkellid Hellhounds, Cadian Armoured 3rd and Sarpoy Mechanised Cavalry. With the Tanith First in the field would be eight Mordian and four Pragar regiments, the Afghali Ravagers 1st and 3rd, six battalions of Oudinot Irregulars — and the Vitrian Dragoons.
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The fact that the Jantine Patricians were also part of the first wave, and that Lord General Dravere was in over all charge of the Epsilon theatre...
The forces to be deployed on Menazoid Epsilon. not a huge chunk of the Guard's force, but 40K vehicles is pretty impressive all told. ASsuming just 2-4 men per vehicle thats at least 80-120 thousand men (ignoring sponson gunners or troops carried.) for tanks and such. Spread over 8 regiments or so thats 5000 vehicles per regiment, which is alot, but it makes me wonder if perhaps some or most of that is support vheicles. If not, its a heavily mechanised force by Guard standards, and the infantry only adds more troops. 12,000 for the Jantine and Tanith, If we figure the Dragoons are 3000, and the rest are around 3-4 thousand (14 regiments) that would be between 42,000-56,000 men. If it were 6,000 per regiment we could be talking over 100,000 men.

and this is largely 'secondary' deployments by Crusade standards IIRC. :P




Page 215
The lord general’s strategists had planned out six dispersal sites for the main landing along a hundred and twenty kilometre belt of lowlands adjacent to a hill range designated Shrine Target Primaris on all field charts and signals. Four more dispersal sites were spread across a massive salt basin below Shrine Target Secundus, a line of steeple-cliffs fifteen hundred kilometres to the west, and three more were placed to assault Shrine Target Tertius on a wide oceanic peninsula two thousand kilometres to the south.
Dravere's deployment plans. Whilst we don't know all the details, it seems it takes between a day or two for them to reach the locations described, Figure 2 days you get btween 30 and 42 km/hr average speed, twice that for one day, and 2/3 that for 3 days (lowest limit as per Defixio.) We know its a combination of Russes and other vheicles (Hellhounds, artillery, etc.) so we should probably take it as example of average travel speeds. At worst, its no better than Defixio. Although the hint that Russes might pull 60-80 km/hr off road in echo of the 2nd edition Chaos Codex is rather interesting to me, I'll admit :d

Even if the speeds are off, it gives us a good idea of the operational ranges of the forces ih the 1500-2000 km vehicle endurance, which fits with what we know from other sources, although I'll admit I might be reading the context wrong (it seems to me like he's deploying the forces against the secondary and tertiary targets 1500-2000 km away, but I might be reading that wrong.)

Each of the six dispersal sites seems to be scattered amongst 20-25 km or so.




Page 215
The waves of landing ships came in under cover of pre-dawn light...
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As the sun came up, pale and weak, the lightening sky was thick with ships… the heavyweight troop-carriers, glossy like beetles, the smaller munitions and supply lifters moving in pairs and trios, the quick, cross-cutting threads of fighter escort and ground cover. Some orbital bombardment — jagging fire-ripples of orbit-to-surface missiles and the occasional careful stamp of a massive beam weapon — softened the empty highlands above the seething dispersal fields.
The drop deployment of the troops and the dropships used. The munitions nad supply lifters are smaller, but that may reflect the fact they have a more 'sustained' role than others (they probably keep constantly resupplying) as well as the fact drop ships here have to carry men and vehicles both.

Also the use of orbital bombardment to support the assault (or at least a preliminary bombardment.) mostly missiles, but sometimes beam weapons.




Page 216
The noise, the vibration, the petrochemical smell, was intense and fierce.
indicating many, if not most, of the Guard vehicles are petrochem fuelled. Hardly surprising, but it would indicate once again that Promethium (if that is the fuel being used here) is petrochemical in nature. Of course what Promethium is always varies from author to author. I mean Abnett had promethium fuel aboard starships in a solid form in 'know no fear' :P




Page 216
Further down the field, Devourer drop-ships slackened their metal jaws and disgorged the infantry. The Ghosts came out blinking, in platoon formation...
Devourer class dropships also are something derived from 'Conquest of Obzidion' alongside the Hexathredrals. As one can see they are quite large and also quite heavily armed. Also capable of carrying vehicles.




Page 216-217
Two kilometres back below them, on the busy dispersal field, burners flared and several of the massive drop-ships rose..
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Three kilometres distant, Gaunt could see through his scope two regiments of Mordian Iron Guard forming up as they advanced from their landing points. Another two kilometres beyond them, the Vitrian Dragoons were advancing from their first staging.
Distances between deployment zones between individual regiments. Each staging area seems to be further subdivided then into separate regimental drop points, form which they deploy and advance in a dispersed manner.




Page 217
They began to see the towers: forty-metre tall, irregular piles of jagged rock rising out of the bracken every five hundred metres or so. Gaunt quickly passed the news on to command, and heard similar reports on the vox-caster’s cross-channel traffic. There were lines of these towers all across the highland landscape. They looked like they had been piled from flat slabs, wide at the base, narrowing as they rose and then wider and flat again at the top.
These towers become important later on, so we note the size and dimensions, although we don't quite know the diameters.



Page 218
Lord General Dravere’s Command Leviathan, a vast armoured, trundling fortress the size of a small city...
Dravere has a Leviathan.




Page 219
Vast, mouldering structures of inexplicable ancient design dominated the northern uplands, arranged in patterns that could only be appreciated from high orbit.
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Dravere had heard talk of simply obliterating Epsilon from orbit, but had fiercely vetoed the navy plan. He wanted Epsilon taken on the ground, so that they might capture and examine whatever it was here the enemy held in such regard. That was the authorised explanation for this assault.
Dravere's ulterior motives are at work here, of course, which turns what otherwise might be an easily resolved, and intelligently handled operation into a pointless ground conflict costing lives. But that's part of Dravere's character as this passage demosntrates - he'll spend lives if he feels he needs to, especially to advance himself. Which again only underscores that what is regarded as 'pracitcla' in the guard is variable, but this sort of thing is probably not condoned (at least by the Crusade, if for no other reason it wastes valuable resources on personal aggrandizement. Even the Munitorum would frown on that.) so Dravere like commanders are seen as poor leaders by Guard standards, arguably.




Page 219
Dravere pulled on a lever to rotate his command hammock, speed-reading the deposition reports from the repeater plates that hung around his station. He linked in with the Command Globes of Marshal Sendak and Marshal Tarantine, who were overseeing the assaults on target locations Secundus and Tertius respectively.
Dravere and his subordinate leaders of the other assaults all have LEviathans it seems, and also 'Command Globes', whic hseems to reference the displays and controls surrounding them in a nearly 'globelike' manner conveying the information of the entire assault to him from various sources. Meaning he is receiving both visual, audio, and other data transmitted from other forces.





Page 220
The afternoon was half gone, and the first day with it. Dravere was unhappy that fighting had not yet begun at any of the three battle fronts, but he was gratified in the knowledge that he had supervised the landing of an expeditionary force of this size, divided between three targets, in less than a single day. He knew of few Imperial Guard commanders who could have done the same in treble that time.
If Dravere has any upsides, it migth be this. Of course we're relying on the veracity of his statmeents regarding other commanders, and just because he thinks he's the best doesn't mean others couldn't achieve this (He does have an inflated opinion of himself, after all.) Its still pretty impressive, landing tens or hundreds of thousands of men and vehicles in less than a day (8-12 hours or less), even if they haven't deployed. If we believe him, Guard officers in the Crusade owuld take 3x that time to deploy from orbit.





Page 220
He selected other plates and surveyed the disposition of the army under his direct command, the Primaris invasion. The infantry regiments were down and advancing strongly from the dispersal sites, and the motorised armour were disembarking from their landing craft into the lower valleys
Again Dravere is getting information relayed about the dispositions of his troops to his Command Leviathan, which includes both the infantry forces and the vehicles, suggesting they are perhaps being tracked by their vox (beacons or suchnot. we know the tech exists and has been mentioned in the Cain novels.)

Also 'motorised' armour, which suggests that most of the vehicles are wheeled and perhaps not that heavily protected (although the 'armour' belies that.) Maybe it means wheeled vehicles or halftracks or such? They seem to have alot of those in this book. Either way motorised as well as mechanised forces deploy, which again reflects the sheer number of vehicles present in this deployment.





Page 220
He knew this gambit would cost him, but he had lives enough to pay. The lives of the fifty thousand infantry under his command here on Epsilon. He considered them a down-payment on his apotheosis.
Dravere claims he has 50K infantry, which means my previous estimates were excessive by half or a factor of two. It clearly doesn't include the armour forces, of course. Then again its also possible he means only the forces under his direct command, and not those deployed ot the other Marshals assaulting the secondary and tertiary goals.,

Also it reflects again Dravere's attritionalist mindset, especially for his own ends. Not exactly Munitorum-approved policy, once again.




Page 221
Chatter and industry filled the command globe beyond the circular guard rail surrounding his hammock-pit. Navy officers and Munitorium aides mixed with Guard tactical officials and members of his own staff, manning the artificers and codifiers, processing, analysing and charting movement on the huge hololithic deployment map, a three-dimensional light-shape projecting down from the domed roof.
The crew and such operating the 'command and control' elements of Dravere's LEviathan, again reflecting the way the forces on planet are being tracked and deployed. Of course it is a Leviathan and they're supposed to be like this, so that the highest echelons have it is perhaps not terribly surprising.




Page 227
Scout Trooper Thark was the first to spot it. He voxed back to the command group: a dome, a massive, bulbous dome swelling from the living rock of the cliff face, impossibly carved from granite.
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It was like some vast stone onion, a thousand metres in diameter, sunk into the stepped rock wall around it, the surface inscribed with billions of obscure sigils and marks.

Thark was also the first to die. A storm of autocannon round whipped up the slope, exploding bracken into dust, spitting up soil and punching him into four or five bloody parts. At the cue, other weapon placements in the steppe alcoves of the facing cliff opened fire, raining las-fire, bullets and curls of plasma down at the Ghosts.

The answering fire laced a spider’s web of las-light, tracer lines and firewash between the sides of the valley.
The dome is 1000 m in diameter, and the stepped areas (wehre the gunfire emerges) come from around it (or possibly behind it, depending on how you interpret it.) It might be only 500 m or so depending on interpretation, and of course we don't quite know how far away the Ghosts are once the gunfire starts. Call it possibly 500-1000 m range for lasfire and support weapons.

Also a burst of gunfire (one second) dissects a human body. Figure it basically blows his torso apart, but without knowing how many shots its hard to ascribe more than 'one second burst' to it or the properties of the autocannon.




Page 228-229
The lines of towers, just ragged rows of stone spines a moment before, exploded into life and became a fence, a raging energy field forty metres tall.
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Each tower connected blue and white brambles of curling energy with its neighbour. Any man or machine caught in the line between towers was, in two heartbeats, burned or exploded or ripped into pieces. The rest were penned between the sudden barriers...
...
Teleported into place by sciences too dark and heretical for a sane mind to understand, these squads of soldiers instantly deployed heavy weapons on tripods and laid down fire on the penned aggressors beneath them.
Lead by Obliterators. Its called 'dark sciences' but I'm not sure whether its science or sorcery. Given chaos it coudl be either, its still an impressive feat in terms of tactics and capability. Some sort of warp (sorcerous?) shields for protection and to break up the Imperial forces, and heavy weapons on the high ground for anti-tank and antipersonnel fire down onto those trapped. The obliterators are really just the icing on the cake. Very nasty, virus laden icing.



Page 229
A cannon round punched through the turret and exploded Sendak and his gunner. The severed vox-horn clattered across the deck, still clutched by the marshal’s severed hand.

A second later, the tank flipped over as a frag-rocket blew out its starboard track, skirt and wheelbase. As it landed,, turret-down, in the mud, it detonated from within, blowing apart the Leman Russ next to it.
Cannon round of unknown type penetrates through and blows apart two people (no idea how to quantify even now, still won't bother.) except its perhaps single digit MJ if it were explosive. Frag rocket (which I erroneously called a grenade) blows out a track and flips the tank over somehow (I'm guessing it landed closed to the ground and provided upwards force) and the tank detonates as it lands on its turret. I figure it just flipped over, it wasn't sent flying into the air and then landed turret down. How/why the thing dtonated internally is up for debate, but it doesn't always happen. A Leman Russ in Gunheads for example fell 200 metres and landed turret down and was still intact and didn't blow up, so its not a definite thing (or it just depends on the Russ variant.) And at least in this caes it could be argued that teh tank survived until something blew up inside it :D

THere is of course, the question WHY they used a frag rocket on a tank, even if just to cripple it, but flipping the tank implies its ludicrously powerful at that. I'd just guess maybe tens of kilos


Page 229-230
Every opening in the stepped structure which rose above the Tanith Ghosts along the far side of the cliff around that gross, inscribed dome seemed to be spitting fire. Las-fire, bolter rounds, the heavier sparks of cannon fire, and other exotic bursts, odd bullets that buzzed like insects and flew slowly and lazily.

Corbec ran the line of the platoons which had reached the crest, his great rich voice bawling them into cover and return-fire stances. There was little natural cover up here except the natural curl of the hill brow, and odd arrangements of ancient stones which poked like rotten, discoloured teeth from the bracken.
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“Dash! Down! Crawl! Look!” Corbec bellowed, repeating the training chant they had first heard on the Founding Fields of lost Tanith. “Take your sight and aim! Spraying and praying is not good enough!”
Again the implied range around the km or so diameter dome would be around 500-1000 metres or so for small arms, although I admit that's not 100% conclusive given the context. Also Corbec yells out a bit of Tanith training, although whether that was militia or Guard training we don't know.




Page 230
Gaunt yelled to Corbec over the firing of ten thousand sidearms and the scream of rockets.
Implied scope of the battle. There's 2000 ghosts, so that implies the enemy has them outnumbered 4:1, if true.




Page 231
Mkoll had tapped plasteel rooter pins into the stonework at the top of the shaft and played a length of cable around them and down into the darkness.
Plasteel 'pins' hammered into stone. Seems like plasteel really has 'steel like' properties, or at least of some sort of durable metal.



Page 232
They wore combat armour in the red and black liveries of the Imperial Crusade staff, elite bodyguard troops for the officer cadre. Reflective visor masks hid their faces.
More full body armour including helmets, this time elite troops (guards) of the Crusade staff. Not storm troopers, since they clearly don't have Hellguns.



Page 234
Lord General Dravere didn’t want to hear. He was still staring at the repeater plates which hung in front of him, showing the total, desperate carnage that had befallen Marshal Sendak’s advance on Target Secundus. Even now, plates were fizzing out to blankness or growing dim and fading.
Again getting data from other sources to Dravere's Leviathan, realtime data at that.




PAge 235-236
Death flurried down over the Tanith ranks from the stepped arches of the necropolis. A blizzard of las-shot showered down, along with the arcing stings of arcane electrical weapons. The air hummed, too, with the whine of the slower metal projectile-casters the enemy were using. Barb-like bullets, slow moving enough to be seen, buzzed down at them like glittering hornets. Where they hit flesh, they did untold explosive damage. Corbec saw men rupture and come apart as the barbed rounds hit.

Others were maimed by shrapnel as the vile shells hit stone or metal beside them and shattered.
Mention of the electircal weapons (still not sure what they are) and we get the buzz-barb bomb things that seem to be like frag grenades or primitive bolters. I call them such because of their tendency to seemingly blow people apart messily.



Page 236
..a bulb of dull metal with forward-pointing, overlaid leaves of razor-sharp alloy. The blackened, fused remains of a glass cartridge at the base showed its method of propulsion. Shot from simple tube-launchers, Corbec decided, the propellant igniting as the firing pin shattered the glass capsule. He turned it over in one hand, protected by the edge of his stealth cape. Evil and ingenious, the barb’s leaves were scored to ease impact-shatter — either against a hard surface to produce a cloud of shrapnel, or against bone as it chewed through tissue to effect the worst wounds possible. The leaves were slightly spiralled too, suggesting that the launcher’s rifling set them spinning as they fired. Corbec decided he had never seen a more savage, calculated, more grotesque instrument of death and pain.
the barb-bomb thingies up close. Again its nasty and very frag-oriented, but seems ingenius if a bit magical.




Page 236-237
He shot a stare at Mahan, who was encoding the information on his data-slate.
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“Target Tertius is routed,” Mahan said grimly, scribing as he spoke and relaying the data in stuttered code-bursts through the handset of the vox-caster.
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Corbec grabbed the slate and studied the scrolling text Mahan was direct-receiving from High Command. There were flickering, indistinct images captured from Sendak’s last transmission. He saw the towers erupt into life, laying down their destructive fences, saw the forces of the enemy manifest on the tower tops.
Again an example of other kinds of data than just audio being relayed about the Guard via vox. This time its not just a Leviathan, (or command Chimera, in the case of the Cain novels) buta backpack vox which downloads the data into slates for review. Also, given that Sendak was in a Leman Russ tank when he got fragged, it indicates his Russ can record and transmit visual data. Presumably infantry could do so as well, as well as receive.

It also demonstrates that, like in the Cain novels, dataslates are useful for more than just storing maps and briefing/historical information of various kinds for review.



Page 237
He keyed his microbead to open traffic and bellowed an order.
“Any Ghosts within twenty metres of a tower! Use any and all available munitions to destroy those towers! Do it, for the love of us all!”
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Two hundred metres away, a little way down a slope in the hill, Sergeant Varl’s platoon reacted fastest, turning their rocket launchers on the nearest two towers and toppling them in earthy crumps of dirt and flame. Folore and Lerod’s platoon’s quickly followed suit to the left of Corbec’s position.
We know that each 'tower' is 40 metres tall. If we assume each tower is 1/20th or 1/10th its height in diameter (2-4 m) Figure at least a few kg of TNT for cratering rock up to 10+ kg. Of course if its bigger then the yields also become graater. Note its a platoon taking down TWO towers (in Varl's case) and they probably don't have very many missile launchers per platoon (5 squads, and at least some of them will have meltas and flamers or sniper rifles) so figure maybe 2 missile launchers. We dont knwo what kind of warheads thay are, unfortunately.





Page 238
A barbed round found him as he exposed his head and shoulders over the cover, and tore everything above his waist into bloody spatters. The comms unit on his back exploded.
Again the barb rounds display bolter-like behaviour.



Page 239
He pulled a compress from his field kit and slapped it over the wound in his side, and then gulped down a handful of fat counter-pain tablets from his medical pouch with three swigs from his water flask while reciting a portion of the Litany for Merciful Healing.
..
A week’s worth of dose, and he’d use it in an hour if he had to. He would fight until pain and death clawed through the analgesic barriers and stopped him.
Corbec's personal medical gear. Includes at least a week of analgesics.



Page 240
...keyed his microbead.

“Corbec to all the Ghosts of Tanith…
Which implies that the ghosts are, at least now, all equipped with micro beads. So they're either assigned them on a case by case basis, or for some reason they were given them after Fortis Binary.



Page 240
Trooper Defraytes, Flense’s vox-officer, stood to attention by him and held out the handset plate on which the assimilated data of Command flickered like an endless litany.
....
Flense took it, pressing his signet ring against the reader plate so that it would decode. The knurled face of the ring turned and stabbed a stream of light into the slate’s code-socket. Magenta clearance, for his eyes only.
Another case of a Guard vox unit seeming to relay data from one source to another (not just audio data, otherwise it might just say something like 'transmissions' or such, rather than a more genrealized data, but this isn't 100% positive either.) In any case the vox transmissions sometimes need a decoding, and hence the rings.



PAge 241
Gaunt tore the lamp pack off the muzzle of his lasgun and tossed it away. Dorden was at his side, handing him another.

“Eight left,”
...
A Guard-issue lamp-pack was meant to last six hundred hours. In less than two, they had exhausted the best part of twenty between them. It was as if the dark down in the underworld of the necropolis ate up the light. Gaunt shuddered. If this place could leach power from energetic sources like lamp-packs, he dared not think what it might be doing to their human frames.
As noted last time 600 hours is probably insane as battery life goes for a flashlight. Impressive, but insane, as I'm pretty sure RL flashlights only go like less than a day (compared to a month). We saw similar in the Night Lords novels (rechargable too), but we've also known far more 'modern' types of lights with only around 5 hour lifespans in FFG, so its far from absolute, but its still an indication of some of the kinds of useful shit the Guard can get hold of.

There's also the power capacity issue to deal with. We learn later that the draining effect works on other items, including lasguns. At this point it doesnt seem to have totally drained them yet, but we can make a comparison between lasgun power packs nad the flashlight batteires.There are eight ghosts plust Gaunt (Dorden may or may not be carrying a flashlight despite not having a lasgun, we don't know, and if not him Larkin has a bolt action rifle and doesnt seem to have a lasweapon. Domor may or may not either, since he only has a laspistol) plus Fereyd and his three bodyguards. So that would be at least 12-13 flashlights maybe, with 7-8 left over. Meaning between one and two used per trooper in two hours.

Now the actual wattage of the light is up for debate (ignoring inefficiencies and such) here we have a 3 watt light. Whilst here its a gun light (more akin to what they're using) and its only one watt. This light is also one watt. There is also This and this flashlight, which are half-watt and have up to 18 hour lifespans, which would seem to fit better. On the far end there's also a possible 5 watt light.

I'll opt more for half wat and single watt lights to be more conservative. Moreover, Half watt is the smallest I could find. That doesnt mean there aren't any lower, they don't seem to be as common, but I'll assume a quarter watt somehow works just to be further conservative (not much sure how far you could push that - quarter watt may even be too dim.) At 600 hours and between .25 watt and 1 watt each flashlight pack is worth .54 and 2.16 MJ of energy apiece for a single flashlight. Assuming that this represented the sum total of power for a lasgun powerpack (ignoring laspistols, which also get mentioned later.) and they were totally drained by that point (and it carries between 50-150 shots) you get between 3.6-10.8 kj per shot, up to 14.4 and 43.2 kj per shot per powerpack. And if its two packs it oculd be almost double that. And that's still conservative because at this point there is no indication that the powerpacks run out, as they haven't reached their destination yet and have to engage in some prolonged firefights along the way.





Page 243
“It is standard Imperial practice for a warmaster to establish a covert network to observe all of his command. Macaroth is cautious, a son of the Emperor in instinct. And glory knows, he’s got a lot of shadows to fear. Slaydo’s choice wasn’t popular. Many resent him, Dravere most of all. Power corrupts, and the temptation of power corrupts even more. Men are just men, and they are fallible. I’ve been part of the network assigned by Macaroth to keep watch and check on his Crusade’s officers. Dravere is a proud man, Bram, he will not suffer this slight.”
Given how political the Sabbat Worlds Crusade is, nevermind other crusades (Jericho Reach comes to mind) having an 'in house' spy ring to watch your back probably is a good idea for any Warmaster, if for no other reason it prevents a rival from usurping you like Dravere tries to do. It just reflects some of the key problems with the structure and nature of the Guard, it encourages a fair bit of political BS beacuse of its decentralized, varied nature.




Page246
He was dying. The rifle round, fired at such close range, had destroyed his neck, left shoulder and collarbone, left cheek and throat. Without the supporting web of the medical bay and the Emperor’s grace, he would already be cold.
Heldane again. That he survived close range hit from the bolt action rifle (shot by Larkin) is probably amazing, but the damage is pretty impressive. And since that was a bolt action rifle of lower tech (and presumably inferior) to Guard issue, a Guard projectile weapon would be capable of at least as much, if not more damage. (and presumably the same for a lasweapon.)



Page 246
...he could see the winking, pumping mechanisms on their brass trolleys and racks that were keeping him alive. He could see the dark fluids of his own body cycling in and out of centrifuge scrubs, squirting down ridged plastic tubes supported by aluminium frames. Every twenty seconds, a delicate silvered scorpion-form device screwed into the bones of his face bathed his open wound with a mist of disinfectant spray from its hooked tail.
Heldane's life support gear. All very gothic looking.





Page 247
He understood, as he was sure the Emperor himself did not understand, the miraculous division between the Light of mankind and the Darkness of the foe. It was a distinction so obvious and yet so overlooked. Like any true son of the Imperium of Man, he would fight with all his soul and vigour against the blackness, but he would not do so standing in the harshness of the pure white. There was a shadow between them, a greyness, that was his to inhabit.

The Emperor, and his heir Macaroth, were oblivious to the distinction and that was what made them weak. Dravere saw it, and that is why Heldane bent his entire force of will to support the lord general. What did he care if the weapon they hunted for was made by, or polluted by, Chaos? It would still work against the Darkness.

If man was to survive, he must adjust his aspect and enter the shadow. Ninety years as an Inquisitor had shown Heldane that much at least. The political and governing instincts of mankind had to shift away from the stale Throne of Earth. The blackness without was too deep, too negative for such complacency.
Remember what I said about Heldane being (extra) heretical? I think I was understating the matter given the whole 'I understand more than Big E, who coincidentally I just thanked for making sure I survived a point blank gunshot to the neck.') He seems to be something between a hardcore Xanthite and and a Recongregator. Or just bugfuck insane.
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Last update for First and Only. It was a pleasure to reread and even more enjoyable the second time, but all good things come to an end, and we must move on.



Page 248-249
Creating a pawn was not easy. It involved a complex focussing of pain and a training of response, so that the pawn-mind became as a lock shaped to fit Heldane’s psychic key. The process could be done rudely with the mind, but was better affected through surgery and the exquisite use of blades.

Heldane enjoyed his work. Through the correct application of pain and the subtle adjustment of mind response, he could fashion any man into a slave, a psychic puppet through whose ears and eyes he could sense — and through whose limbs he could act.

Heldane used the mirror to summon his pawn. He focused until the face appeared in the mirror, filmy and hazed. The pawn would do his bidding.
...
Through the pawn, he would see everything. It was as good as being there himself. As he had promised Dravere, his pawn was with Gaunt now. He sensed everything the pawn could...
Heldane discusses the creation of the 'pawns', by which I assume he refers to the sorts of puppet he used to try and kill Gaunt with before. Rather not like 'waring' in the extent it requires rather extensive and brutal torture to inflict. That alone (and the mirror) are interesting, as it plays into quite possibly the 'symbolism' aspect of the warp and psychic powers to achieve the effects, perhaps.

The other thing about it is what benefits the pawn provides - at least as far as sensory stuff goes.




Page 250
... Baru who had lost a knee to a las-round and was fallen in the open, crawling and gasping.
...
He hissed to Dorden, who was just finishing field-dressing Baru’s knee.
Baru lost a 'knee' to lasfire, but not in the sense the knee was blown out/off. Badly burnt, fused, cauterised, or perhaps shattered, but by all indications its intact. figure 10-15 cm diameter (100-200 sq cm surface area at least) and 3rd degree burns we get 5-10 kj at least, and quite probably several times that (on more than one side, more severe burns if cauterization, etc.) Even if the leg is blwon off, single digit Kj could cover that depending on how the laser works. The more thermal it is, the higher the yield probably is (at the expense of efficiency or a different damage mechanism, anyhow.)



Page 251
Gaunt made sure that the dead were stripped of all plasma ammo packs.
I'm pretty sure this is a typo and meant to refer to lasgun ammo packs, but who can tell. Maybe some power packs are plasma based :P




Page 255
Commissar Gaunt had remarked to him that the unique shifting forests of Tanith had taught the Ghosts a valuable lesson in navigation. He conjectured that was what made them so sure and able when it came to reconnaissance and covert insertion.
...
It had been second nature to him, an instinct thing, to find his way through the shifting trees, locating paths and tracks which came and went as the fibrous evergreens stalked the sun. It had been his life to track the cuchlain herds for pelts and horn, no matter how they used the nal to obscure themselves.

Mkoll was a hunter, utterly attuned to the facts of his environs, utterly aware of how to read solid truth from ephemerally-shifting inconsequence. Since Gaunt had first remarked upon this natural skill, a skill shared by all Tanith but distilled in him and the men of his platoon...

...
..there was something down here that reminded him very strongly of lost Tanith.
They're deep inside a chaos tainted necropolis on a Chaos tainted moon, which suggests that the Ghosts navigational abilities, and probably the shifting forest sof Tanith, may have had a touch of the warp about them, and theira bility to navigate may also be some sort of latent or minor psychic talent. Mkoll's comments seem to reinforce this as well, as he comments as well on the way the tunnel seems solid/static and yet something about it shifts or distorts (either illusion, or manipulation of dimensions/angles, or whatever.) However or whatever it is, the Ghosts native abilities allow them to see through it.

In a sense it does make sense, given that there are plenty of regiment types that seem to be raised because of speical qualities like that (Greater, ogryn like strength from the Kanak skulltakers for example., or enhanced reflexes or night vision...)




Page 257
..Caffran hissed for quiet. He had been carrying the team’s compact vox-set ever since Domor had been injured, and had plugged the wire of his microbead earpiece into it to monitor the traffic. The set was nothing like as powerful as the heavy vox-casters carried by platoon comm-officers like Raglon and Mkann, and its limited range was stunted further by the depth of the rock they were under.
Caffran has a micro-bead, again reinforcing that the Ghosts in general have them as routine at this point. It also plugs into the vox set, which is more compact and less powerful than the dedicated ones carried by other comm officers.




Page 258
Caffran handed him the foil from the field-caster that he had just printed out.
...
Gaunt handed Caffran a pre-prepared message foil.
..
Caffran fed the foil into the vox-set, let the machine read it and assemble it and then flicked the “send” switch, marked by a glowing rune at the edge of the set’s compact fascia.
Message foils get 'read' to send or receive data (printed out or scanned.) Some sort of fax ability I suppose. It indicates there are at least some functions in the bigger vox sets that are partly computerized or shit (the send/receive functions at least.)



Page 259
The Jantine units, supported by light artillery and heavy weapons in the valley depths, swung up around the rise Blane’s men commanded in a double curl, like the arms of a throat-tore, extending overlapping fans of las fire in disciplined, double-burst shots. The rain of shots, nearly fifteen hundred every twenty seconds, spat over the Ghosts’ heads or thumped into the sloping soil, puffing up clods of smoky dust and igniting numerous brush fires through the cloaking bracken.
Jantine tactics against Blane's platoon (again 50 men.) THey seem to have 'two round burst' modes on their lasweapons. ASsuming that double bursts fire from every gun we're probably talking 70 men, every twenty seconds. Whether they're advancing or not we don't know, but its not accurate fire (as we learn.) Also the Jantine have light artillery as well as heavy weapons.



Page 259-260
The warrior-caste of Jant were heavy troops, their silver and purple combat armour made for assault, rather than speed or stealth.

They were storm-troopers, not skirmishers; the Tanith were the light, agile, stealthy ones. But for all that, the drilled brilliance of the Jantine was frightening. They used every ounce of skill and every stitch of cover to bring the long claw of their attack up and around to throttle the Ghosts’ seventh platoon.

Blane had fought the temptation to return fire when the Jantine first addressed them. They had nothing to match the range of the Jantine heavy weapons and Blane told himself that the las-fire fusillade was as much a psychological threat as anything.
Jantine wear 'assault' armour, rather than speed or stealth (reflecintg perhaps being heavier and more durable than any armour the tanith wear.) Indicates that its less protective than the tanith equivalents. They're also described as 'storm troopers', whether this is literally true (despite the absence of hellguns) or its just a descriptor is up for debate. We also dont know what Jantine body armor is (flak or carapace) although the 'storm trooper/assault' angle might suggest carapace.

Also reiteration that they're just firing to suppress rather than firing for effect. Lasguns (unsurprisingly) outranged by heavy weapons, or at least Ghost and Jantine lasguns seem to be.
The other tactics are interesting. They make extensive use of cover whilst advancing



Page 260
His fifty men were deployed along the ridge line in a straggled stitch of natural foxholes that the Ghosts had augmented with entrenching tools and sacking made of stealth cloaks and sleeping rolls, lashed into bags and filled with dust and soil. Blane made his command instructions clear: fix blades, set weapons to single shot, hold fire and wait for his signal.
..
For the first ten minutes, their line was silent as las-fire crackled up at them and the air sifted with white smoke plumes and drifting dust. Light calibre field shells fluttered down, along with a few rocket-propelled grenades, most falling way short and creating new foxholes on the slope. Blane first thought they were aiming astray until he saw the pattern. The field guns were digging cover-holes and craters in the flank of the hillside for the Jantine infantry to advance into. Already, to his west, Jantine squads had crossed from their advance and dug in to a line of fresh shell holes a hundred metres short of the Ghosts’ line. Immediately, the field guns adjusted their range and began digging the next line for advance.
Mortars and RPGs seem to be the Jantine heavy weapons. They use both to create cover for men, which suggests at least a metre or two diameter craters, in turn suggesting fairly powerful explosives (and again the use of cover.) Implied range from Ghosts is merely a hundred metres, although I kind of have doubts about this as it would suggest they're WELL within range (given various sources about lasgun range.) Also Ghosts have set for single shot.




Page 261
The first las-rounds were now crossing overhead and if the Jantine guns were reaching them it meant one reassuring fact: the Jantine were in range.
..
Blane tapped his microbead link, selecting the open command channel. He spoke in Tanith battle-cant: “Select targets carefully. Not a wasted shot now. Fire at will.” The Ghosts opened fire. Streams of single-shot cover fire whipped down from their hidden positions into the advancing fans of the Jantine. In the first salvo alone, Blane saw ten or more of the Jantine jerk and fall. Their rate of fire increased. The wave punctured the Jantine ranks in three dozen places and made the incoming rain of fire hesitate and stutter.
..
The infantry duel began: two lines of dug-in troopers answering each other volley for volley up and down a steeply angled and thickly covered slope. The very air became warm and electric-dry with the ozone stench of las-fire. It was evenly pitched, with the Tanith enjoying the greater angle of coverage and the greater protection the hill afforded. But, unlike the Jantine, they were not resupplied every minute by lines of reinforcement.
..
Even firing off a well-placed round every six seconds, and scoring a kill one out of four shots, Blane felt they were helpless. They could not retreat, neither could they advance in a charge to use the ground to their advantage.
Blane's use of comms again suggests everyone in his platoon has micro-beads. Secondly we've got ten minutes of fire. Every 20 seconds suggests 30 volleys in 10 minutes, at 1500 each is 45,000 shots. For betwene 750-1000 troopers that is between 45-60 shots. Presumably there is no reloading, but who knows.

We also get mention of ghosts single shot rates of fire and implied accuracy (which we may figure are at least typical for Tanith if not Guard standard at an unspecified range.) At least a minute of such fire too. The interesting thing is that 1 in 4 shots being a kill shot may not reflect accuracy so much as accuracy and the protectiveness of the Jantine armour - its supposed to be more durable, and its possible that you either have to aim for a weak point, or it may take up to 4 hits to ensure a kill just as much as '25% accuracy.)

Single shot sustained ROF is also 10 shots per minute, which I suspect reflects the sustained ROF (M-16 suppoedly has 12-15 rpm sustained, but 45-60 rpm semi-auto.) which again may speak to Ghost rifle performance and/or cooling systems (either the rifle heats up rapidly because of a lousy cooling system, or it has more powerful shots that heat up the rifle more rapidly, much like Krieg lasweapons.)




PAge 261-262
The Jantine had more options, but the one they decided to use amazed Blane. After a full thirty minutes of fire exchange, the Patricians charged. En masse. Close on a thousand heavy troopers, bayonets fixed to muzzle-clips, rose as one from the bracken-choked foxholes and stormed up the slope towards his platoon.

Blane gasped and his first thought was that madness had gripped the Jantine command. And a sort of madness had, but one that would surely win the day. The fifty guns of the Ghosts had more targets then they could pick. Dozens, hundreds of Jantine never made it up the slope, their twitching thrashing or limp bodies collapsing brokenly into the ochre undergrowth. But there was no way Blane’s men could cut them all down before they reached the hill line.
...
...he understood the tactic: superior numbers, total loyalty and an unquenchable thirst for victory.

The Jantine Commander had deployed his troops as expendable, using their sheer weight to soak up the Ghosts’ fire and overwhelm them.

Three hundred Jantine Patricians were dead before the charge made it into Tanith lines. Dead to the Tanith guns, the slope of the hill, the angles of death. But that still left close on seven hundred of them to meet head on in screaming waves at the ditch line of the slit-trenches.
Jantine and Ghosts exchange 30 minutes worth of fire. If we figure the Jantine are still keeping up their 1500 every 20 seconds thats 90 volleys, which is between 135-180 shots (750-1000 men) inferred. and implies the Jantine carry at least 4-5 power packs (they fired for 10 minutes before, and now its 40 minutes, and they still haven't run short on ammo. Either their power packs carry more than 45-60 shots, or they have more than 4 packs, and given evidence either is likely)

On the Ghost sides of things, 30 minutes with one shot every six seconds is 300 shots per trooper. Which if we figure between 4-6 packs is 50-75 shots per power pack, and thats still a lower limit because the Ghosts aren't out of ammo, either.

Now firepower aside, there's tactics. Blane is suprrised that the Jantine just charge and considers it madness when they have other options, but then recognizes that it will still grant success as outnumbered as the Ghosts are. Even heavy infantry like the Jantine, it suggests, will not deliberately choose attritional warfare and human wave charges unless ordered to (meaning that unless you have an idiot like Dravere or a madman like Heldane in charge, they won't do it, and other forces like the Ghosts won't expect them too.) Attrition warfare it seems are not 'typical' Crusade tactics unless forced upon them, in other words.

Likewise the Jantine's 'assault' role, coupled with their pride/ego and their loyalty/aggression make them well suited for such an assault. Not unlike the Kriegers.

Lastly, there's the implied range issue. 300 Jantine die before the charge hits home, and assuming the rate of fire stays the same (1 shot per 6 sconds, and 1 shot in 4 being a kill shot). If each man kills an average of 6 men (50 troops) thats 144 seconds spent. Assuming a running speed between 2-5 m/s roughly we're talking a distance of between 288m and 720m implied here. This does assume, however, that the Ghosts do not switch to full auto (which might alter things) and a few other factors, but there is no mention of that and the Ghosts don't use it close in either (they may not even have enough ammo for that after 30+ minutes of firing.)

Incidentally if they killed 300 Jantine that menas 1200 more shots were fired at least, which is 24 more shots, which would suggest at least an additional powerpack or more per 'shot'




Page 262
A las-round punched through his cloth-armoured sleeve and scorched the flesh of one arm.
Suggesting at least part of the Jantine uniform is cloth, but also still 'armored' (flak cloth?) or perhaps that they have two separate sets of armor, one of which is the cloth/uniform that doubles as body armor.


Page 262
Twice he had to fire his rifle point-blank to loosen a corpse stuck on his blade.
Apparnetly the lasfire imparts neough momentum somehow to knock a dead body off the rifle (or at least to loosen it) Probably explosive-vaporization, or at least blowing more holes in it to loosen the knife, but the KE implied could be considerable, especially given how ridiculously huge some bayonets get (like the one cubit Tanith warknives...)



Page 262-263
But they were light troops, dressed in thin fabrics, utterly unmatching the physical strength and resilience of his hard-armoured Jantine. His men had the discipline of the military academies of Jant in their blood, the fierce will to win. That was what made them Patricians, what made them as feared by others of the Imperial Guard as the Guards feared the Adeptus Astartes.
apparently the Ghosts wear no armour, while the Jantine are 'hard armoured' suggesting again some sort of rigid armor (As well as the cloth stuff.) Flak plate or carapace. And again the ghosts aren't suited to close up fighting agianst heavily armed and armoured infantry like the Jantine. Purportedly their training and aggression again makes them 'feared' much like the Astartes, suggesting that they (or heavy infantry in general) are a Astartes analogue in the 'terrorize the fuck into compliance' aspect of warfare. Although it can be said the Guard's 'doctrine' as such focuses heavily on such tactics on the offensive - overwhelming power/numbers/firepower to rapidly crush or defeat the enemy (or force them into surrender.)



Page 263
..Symber shot three of Coline’s killers until a loose las-shot took the top of his head off and dropped his twitching body
Jantine las-shot partly removes head of trooper, at least single digit kj.



Page 264
..Major Brochuss fired his las-gun and let the shot blow the stumbling Ghost off his blade
Again implying that a single las-shot has enough momentum to push a Ghost (at least mostly) off a knife blade, if not a corpse. If he's still alive it may be that its the whole 'Pain laser' PEP effect I alluded to earlier. IF that isn't the case (or can't cover this) we might figure that a 20-30 cm bayonet and a 60 kg male might poing to a momentum imparted of 12-18 kg*m/s (about equal to a full power rifle round.) Assuming explosive vaporization and a 'velocity' of around 2000 m/s (a bit faster than the speed of sound in water.) we're talking 6-9 grams of flesh evaporated. Which is between 15-22.5 kj to vaporize. Momentum-wise the KE would be 12-18 kj, so we could probably say, something like double digit kj, which is roughly consistent with a single las-shot by other sources. If we figure a 70 kg guy and its a half metre bayonet like a Tanith at same assumptions it would be 35 kg*m/s (momentum of a .50 BMG round roughly), 17.5 grams of flesh vaporized (~40-45 kj per shot) and 35 kj of ke by momentum and my assumed velocity.

Its nowhere near a 'precise' number (because velocity could vary quite a bit) but I'm not too worried because as velocity goes down mass goes up if the momentum stays the same. (EG a 500 m/s 'exhaust' velocity at 12 kg*m/s means 24 grams of flesh vaporized, which works out to 50-60 kj, whilst the KE from momentum is 'only' 3 kj. Velocity of 3000 m/s and 12 kg*m/s is 'only' 4 grams vaporized - 9 or 10 kj 'only', but the KE is still 18 kj, still within the double digit kj range.)

Of course, if the las shot is NOT imparting explosive momentum the way I infer, or if it is more due to pain laser effect, or just 'lazer bullets' or osmething weird, this probably is not applicable :D



Page 207
..Heldane absently recognised the malicious thought in Dravere’s blunt intellect. Dravere utterly misunderstood his place in the drama. He thought himself a leader, a manipulator, a commander. But in truth, he was nothing more than another pawn — and just as expendable.
Earlier I'd intended to include a quote of Heldane saying he served Dravere, but after this there was no point, since its clear Heldane is using Dravere. Which I find more believable than the idea that Dravere could get an Inquisitor in his contorl. Althought he man is arrogant enough to think he could.



Page 267
...Flense had six hundred and twelve men left, forty of that number so seriously injured they had been retreated to the field hospitals far back at the deployment fields. Fifty Tanith, fighting to the last, had taken over a third of his regiment.
That could mean the Ghosts managed to kill or cripple up to 388 people before dying. The question is how many were during the charge, and how many before (we know it was at least 300, but not how much so.) Also 40 more wounded, which may add to the 'shots fired' and time. With the 'one killshot every twenty four seconds' would be 7-8 men on average for the platoon, whilst adding the 490 others would add 8-9 total. 168-216 seconds, which based on previous assumptions works out to between 336-1080 m. Similar assumptions/constraints before apply, so one should not take this as a perfectly accurate estimate of range.





Page 268
..He drew off his glove and held out his hand to Flense. The colonel removed his own gauntlet and they shook..
Jantine wear gauntlets. Implies full body armour like the Vitrians.



Page 270
..to cover Bragg while he moved the hefty autocannon up into a position to fire.

...
Then Bragg opened up, shuddering the entire chamber with his heavy, rapid blasts. The close air was suddenly thick with cordite smoke and spent fycelene.

Also described as a 'massive' autocannon earlier. aside from the fact he's hefting it one-handed, the main difference is that it seems to involve both fyceline and cordite. One presumably is the propellant (My bet is on the former), and the other is some explosive element to the shells (which I'll bet is the fyceline. The exploding shells are supposed to be lost tech per the munitorum manual but meh.



Page 272
He could hear laser blasts, the rasp of meltas, the occasional fizz of rockets, and knew that Colonel Corbec’s despicable Ghosts had engaged ahead.
Ghosts have meltas again.



PAge 272
Brochuss tapped his microbead link. “A tricky play, my brave boys."
..
Most of the Patricians had raised their blast-cowls because of the heat, but now they snapped the visors back down in place, covering their faces with the diamond eye-slit visages of war. Their battle hymn moved to the channels of their microbeads, resounding in the ears of every man present.
..
Brochuss slid down his own blast-cowl so that the hymn swam in his earpiece and around the close, hot-metal confines of his battledress helmet.
Jantine all have micro beads. also like the Vitrians they use full-faced helmets (although they call them 'blast cowls') with the only difference being the color/composition of the eye slits.



Page 272-273
...Pharant exchanged his heavy stubber and ammunition webbing for his commander’s rifle.
..
Brochuss arranged the heavy webbing around his waist and shoulders with deft assistance from Pharant, settling the weighty pouches with their drum-ammo feeders against his back and thighs.

Then he braced the huge stubber in his gloved fists, right hand around the trigger grip, the skeleton stock under his right armpit, his left hand holding the lateral brace so that he could sweep the barrel freely. His right thumb hit the switch that cycled the ammo-advance. The belt feed chattered fat, ugly cartridges into place and the water-cooled barrel began to steam and hiss gently.
Jantine man-portable heavy stubber as a support weapon usable by a single individual. This *probably* means its not .50 cal BMG type, but one can never be completely sure of such either, as the Jantine are pretty bulky dudes. Its belt fed (but with ammo drums). I find the 'water cooled' aspect interesting because as I understand it such weapons were too bulky to be man portable. So either we're again talking 'extreme strength' or perhaps they've devised some way to make it effectively man portable. Maybe they stuck suspensors on the stubber, or something.



Page 274
Zoren had ordered his men to set las-weapons for maximum discharge. He hoped Colonel-Commissar Gaunt would forgive the extravagance, but the Jantine heavy troops wore notoriously thick armour.
The fact they need to use max power settings to reliably penetrate Jantine armour may argue its either really durable flak, or possibly carapace. We knwo from (again) Rebel winter that close ranged, max power lasfire can penetrate through carapace (or at least Vostroyan Carapace.)



Page 275
..he squeezed the trigger of the smoking, hissing stubber on full rapid.

Brochuss personally killed forty-four Vitrian Dragoons...
Vitrian armour doesn't seem to stand up to heavy stubber fire, although the number of shots needed to pierce isnt known.


Page 275
His autocannon was close to overheating when he was killed by a Vitrian sergeant called Zogat.

His armoured torso pulverised by Zogat’s marksmanship, Brochuss toppled into the flecked mica sand of the valley floor...
Now its describeda s an autocannon. Anyhow a max power lasgun shot, through armour, pulverizses Brochuss' torso . If we figure a 20x20 cm area and 50-125 J per sq cm (assuming just bad burns) would be 20-50 kj at least. If its 400 j per sq cm we get 160 kj per shot. Even a slight increase in area (say 25-30 cm diameter) would be between 190-300 kj per shot, easily.
Putting a nasty hole in the torso would probably require at least 100 kj in a single pulse, although putting one through the body would require even more energy, probably.. hundreds of kj again.

Either way, double digit kj seems to be the LOW end for max power shots, whilst triple digit seems quite liekly (although to be fair 'half charge' would imply its 1/2 the power, unless 'half' meant midway, which is also possible so double digit kj may not be unreasonable either.

Another possibility, of course, is that lasfire may be variable in performance. It may not 'drill' in a straight line. They may be able to achiev a shotgun like 'area' effect (like in Legion its certainly implied) which may achieve any number of effects, as it has been noted (CF atomic rockets sidearm page) that closely spaced shots (a few cm apart) can 'tear' tissues between them, which can increase the damage effectiveness (if you space the shots a few cm apart in a 'burst' or 'cone', you could tear tissues between the pulses/shots to improve the effectivenss and hole.) We might get evne double digit kj from that, possibly, and whether or not it trades depth can depend on other paramters.



Page 275-276
..Gaunt slid around and set his lasgun to full auto, bombarding the torrent of foe with a vivid cascade of phosphorescent bolts. He heard Rawne scream something unintelligible.

Baru, one of his finest, as good a scout and stealther as Mkoll, pride of the Tanith. Pulling back into cover to exchange ammo clips, Gaunt glanced back at the wet ruin that had been his favoured scout. Claws of misery dug into him. For the first time since Khedd, the commissar tasted the acrid futility of war. A soldier dies, and it is the responsibility of his commander to rise above the loss and focus. But Baru: sharp, witty Baru, a favourite of the men, the clown and joker, the invisible stealther, the truest of true. Gaunt found he could not look at the corpse, at the torn mess that had once been a man he called friend and whom he trusted beyond simple trust.
First the technical bit. Gaunt drains his powerpack on full auto in a short period fo time - a few seconds at most in context, and even if he has only a few shots (lets say 1/2 to 1/3 the pack) we're talking machine-gun/assault rifle rates of fire probably.

Now, that out of the way, we see yet again Gaunt's issues with 'losing' something he values. It isn't so much Baru specifically, but Baru is symbolic of every Ghost, to him. Every loss is just a bit more taken away from Gaunt, and in a way brings him close to that dreaded failure of his promise. To bring the ghosts through no matter what, to see that at least some (if not all) survive the Crusade and find a new home. Gaunt will fight against every lose, he will avenge every loss, with every fibre of his being, because for him it is, and always will be, personal. As an aside, he performs funeral rites over Baru in another scene, which reinforces his views and feelings about the Ghosts.




Page 277
Gaunt slipped his data-slate out of his pocket and thought to consult his portable geo-compass, but Mkoll’s instinct was far more reliable than the little purring dial. The commissar looked at the slate, winding the decoded information across the little plate with a touch of the thumb wheel.
data slate has a compass function as well, it seems. Or a built in compass.



Page 278
"This area hasn’t been traversed in a long while, and I’d guess those patterns are imprints in the dust made by energies or force screens. Like a storm shield, maybe. We know the enemy here has some serious crap at their disposal.”
Chaos troops might have storm shields or portable forcefields. This is considered 'serious' tech crap.




Page 279-280
He stopped after each footfall to retune the clicking, pulsing sweeper, listening with experience-attuned ears to every hiss and murmur of the set.
..
“There are… cones of energy radiating from the floor at irregular intervals,” Domor whispered over the microbead intercom. “Who knows what and for why, but I’m betting it wouldn’t be a good idea to interrupt one.”
..
Domor was safely negotiating the invisible obstacles, but his safety line was trailing behind him in a far more economical course between the sweeper and his team. Any moment, and its dragging weight might intersect with an unseen energy cone.
Domor is doing the minesweeping thing. the thing about this I find is.. it strongly suggests its alot more than just magnetic, what with all those 'energy field' triggers.. I mean if its triggered by a safety line - unless that line is magnetic somehow, there has to be more to the detection and trigger mechanisms.

Also, Domor has a micro bead, which again suggests all the Ghosts do by now.



Page 282
A means at last, with all confidence, to overthrow Macaroth and the stagnating Imperial rule he espoused. It would make Dravere warmaster, and Dravere would in turn be his instrument. All the while mankind fought the dark with light, he was doomed to eventual defeat. The grey, thought Heldane, the secret weapons of the grey, those things that the hard-liners of the Imperium were too afraid to use, the devices and possibilities that lay in the blurred moral fogs beyond the simple and the just. That is how he would lead mankind out of the dark and into true ascendancy, crushing the perverse alien menaces of the galaxy and all those loyal to the old ways alike.

Of course, if Dravere used this weapon and seized control of the Crusade, used it to push the campaign on to undreamed-of victory, then the High Lords of Terra would be bound to castigate him and declare him treasonous. But they wouldn’t know until it was done. And then, in the light of those victories, how could they gainsay his decision?
More of Heldane's off-the-deep end radical heresy madness. One really must wonder how he thought this was sensible and sane, but then again by the end of Eisenhorn Heldane was hardly the most rational of sorts, was he? There's not really any other way to go but down.




Page282-283
The floor underfoot was chased with silver, richly inscribed with impossibly complex algorithmic paradoxes, a thousand to a square metre. Heldane expanded his mind in a heartbeat and read them all… solved them all.

Bounding eagerly beyond this trifle...
...
The secrets of its process and purpose were contained within those million and half algorithms etched into the wide floor.
Apparently Heldane is intelligent or psychic enough to solve a bunch of 'complex algorithmic paradoxes' in a fairly brief period of time (seconds or minutes), and more specificially a million and a half of them, to figure out what the code and what the STC is for.



Page 283
A machine, a vast device made of brilliant white ceramics, silver piping, chromium chambers.

A Standard Template Constructor. Intact.

The secrets of originating technology had been lost to mankind for so long. Since the Dark Ages, the Imperium, even the Adeptus Mechanicus could only manufacture things they had learned by recovering the processes of the ancient STC systems. From scraps and remnants of shattered STC systems on a thousand dead worlds, the Imperium had slowly relearned the secrets of construction, of tanks and machines and laser weapons. Every last fragment was priceless.
To find a dedicated Constructor intact was a find made once a generation, a find from which the entire Imperium benefited.

But to find one like this intact was surely without precedent.
The holy grail of the quest, an STC. Whilst I won't belabour what an STC is given the obvious description abov,e the idea that the STC finds might happen once a generation is pretty bizarre given that recent fluff (and even old fluff) have made it pretty clear noone has ever found an intact one. Or if they do its kept very secret.



Page 283
Menazoid Epsilon had been an arsenal world, manufacturing the ultimate weapon known to those lost ages.

..

The Men of Iron. A rumour so old it was a myth, and myth from the oldest times, before the Age of Strife, from the Dark Age of Technology, when mankind had reached a state of glory as the masters of a techno-automatic Empire, the race that had perfected the Standard Template Construct.

They created the Men of Iron, mechanical beings of power and sentience but no human soul.
Heretical devices in the eyes of the Imperium. War with the self-aware Men of Iron had led to the fall of that distant Empire and, if the old, deeply arcane records Heldane had been privy to were correct, that was why the Imperium had outlawed any soulless mechanical intelligence. But as servants, implacable warriors — what could not be achieved with Men of Iron at your side?

And here, at the untouched heart of the ancient arsenal world, was the STC system to make such Men of Iron.
So not only STC, but a ROBOT fabrication STC. We're hitting on two mythologies here for the price of one. Although I admit Heldane's idea make smore snese than the separatist Droid army (maybe because a 40K robot would be bigger and nastier.)

Oh and the whole 'AI is heresy' thing.. except when it isn't (Architect of fate...)


Page 284-285
"I don’t pretend to understand the technology, but I know that’s an intact Standard Template weapons maker. And I know that’s as unheard of as a well-manicured ork.”

Fereyd laughed. “Sixty years ago on Geyluss Auspix, a rat-water world a long way from nothing in Pleigo Sutarnus, a team of Imperial scouts found an intact STC in the ruins of a pyramid city in a jungle basin. Intact. You know what it made? It was the Standard Template Constructor for a type of steel blade, an alloy of folded steel composite that was sharper and lighter and tougher than anything we’ve had before. Thirty whole Chapters of the great Astartes are now using blades of the new pattern. The scouts became heroes. I believe each was given a world of his own. It was regarded as the greatest technological advance of the century, the greatest discovery, the most perfect and valuable STC recovery in living memory.”

“That made knives, Bram… knives, daggers, bayonets, swords. It made blades and it was the greatest discovery in memory. "
So again supposedly the Imperium has found intact STC.. at least for minor shit. In this case a better knife, which from the description sounds like some sort of fancy DAMASCUS STEEL type weapon ro some similar shit (you know all the folding is better stuff.) Whether or not it can be made mono edged and what kind of STEEL it is (anything corresponding to real life, or something magical, or ADAMANTIUM steel) we don't know. ITs implied that the weapons may be fairly widespread, and not just amongst the Space Marines.



Page 285
" Iron Men; the old myth, one of the tales of the Great Old Wars.”
The GREAT OLD WARs.



Page 285-286
“I know my responsibilities, Fereyd. I dedicate my life to the service of the Imperium, and if a device like this exists then it’s my duty to secure it in the name of our beloved Emperor. And you gave me the job of finding it, after all.”
...
"We share a discovery like this and you trot out some feeble moral line about lives? That’s called hypocrisy, you know. You’re a killer, slaved to the greatest killing engine in the known galaxy. That’s your work, your life, to end others. To destroy. And you do it with relish. Now we find something that will do it a billion times better than you, and you start to have qualms? What is it? Professional jealousy?"
...
“You know me better. Don’t mock me. I’m surprised at your glee. I’ve known the Princeps of Imperial Titans who delight in their bloodshed, and who nevertheless regard the vast power at their disposal with caution. Give any man the power of a god, and you better hope he’s got the wisdom and morals of a god to match. There’s nothing feeble about my moral line. I value life. That is why I fight to protect it. I mourn every man I lose and every sacrifice I make. One life or a billion, they’re all lives.”
..
“It’s just a matter of proportion, of scale. Why slog in the mud with your men for months to win a world I can take with Iron Men… and not spill a drop of blood?”

“Not a drop? Not ours, maybe. There is no greater heresy than the thinking machines of the Iron Age. Would you unleash such a heresy again? Would you trust these… things not to turn on us as they did before? It is the oldest of laws. Mankind must never again place his fate in the hands of his creations, no matter how clever. I trust flesh and blood, not iron.”
Gaunt and Fereyd have a little discussion that reavels more about Gaunt's motivations and intentions, particularily towards his responsibilities, and Fereyd has some good points about the 'hypocrisy' regarding the Guard and the value in saving lives but I don't think its that simple. Its easy to say 'unthinking reactionary dogma' or something or make allusions to Dune's Butlerian Jihad, but that assumes the situations are parallel, and they aren't. Not quite. Gaunt's point about power is a good one, because in 40K power is ALWAYS a tricky thing. As is knowledge, and shit like that, because of the warp.

The big thing that always complicates things like this, and the whole 'easy win by robot doom army' is of course Chaos. Or magic. Because that magic has a significant, tangible impact on the reality of the galaxy in myriad forms. And as we see in this book, as we've seen in Dark Adeptus with the AI-Daemon/chaos forge world, nothing is truly safe from the warp, not even technology (unless its tau tech, but I digress.) In some things because of magic, squishy organics may actually be better than technology. Not always, and not absolutely so, but sometimes. The other aspect about this is that, story wise, it's meant to show Gaunt's faith in humanity and its potential, particularily that of his Ghosts. He is still an optimist to an extent despite everything he's suffered and been through, and that optimism is what helps him carry through on his own promise regarding the Ghosts, I think.

Besides, later we learn he HAS a warning that letting anyone have this would be a Bad Idea, and that is bound to shape his thinking (nevermind dealing with people like Dravere, etc.) are going to make him definitely think its 'too muhc power in one person's hands.'

It probably doesn't have a simple answer, and I am not totally convinced Gaunt isn't completely right in his thinking (nor is Fereyd) but ultimately its a side issue because he's trying to justify an action he knows he has to take to avert disaster, and morality takes a side issue to necessity. Its still kind of interesting to speculate on, because it could be argued either 'human arrogance' or 'power of the warp' either way. :P



Page 286
“You’ve really taken your poor orphan Ghosts into your heart, haven’t you, Bram? The concern doesn’t suit you.”

“Maybe I sympathise. Orphans stick with orphans.”
Which nicely indicates just what sort of bond Gaunt and the Ghosts have, and from Gaunt's POV why. At least he's honest (and aware) of it. The man will be a good commissar, but when it comes to the Ghosts he'll forever also be emotionally biased.



Page 289
The buzzing, horribly slow round crossed the bright space of the Edicule and hit Fereyd’s face on the bridge of the nose. Everything of Imperial Tactician Wheyland above the sternum explosively evaporated in a mist of blood and bone chips.
More old-style buzz bomb bolter roundage.



Page 289
Larkin howled as he fell, shot through the forearm by a las-round from one of the elite troopers flanking the Tactician.
LAs shot 'through' the arm from Tactician Guard lasgun.


Page 289
Another of Fereyd’s troopers fell, blasted backwards by a trio of shots to his chest. He jerked back, arms and legs extended, and died.
Again implying either lasweaposn have a PEP style effect or they impart considerable knockback momentum.


Page 289
Gaunt squeezed the trigger again, but his lasgun just retched and fizzed. The energy draining effect of the catacombs, which had sapped their lamp packs, had wasted ammo charges too. His weapon was spent.
By the time thy reach the end of their travels to the STC, at least some lasguns (gaunt's) have fizzled out. Its hard to quantify this at this moment because they had multiple fights, drained powerpacks on top of the fizzing effect. Without knowing how many shots everyone used and how long they waited its hard to gauge all this with total certainty. I won't do math at this point because more remains to be addressed but we can definitely say (at least) that the lasgun powerpacks lasted far longer than the flashlights apparently did.

The interetsing thing is that they don't notice this until they arrive (4 hours after noticing the effect on lamp packs.)


Page 289-290
The remaining bodyguard lurched forward to blast Gaunt, helpless on the floor — and dropped with a laser-blasted hole burnt clean through his skull. His body smashed back hard against the side of the STC machine and slid down, leaving a streak of blood down the chased silver facing.
..
..Dorden sat half-raised with Domor’s laspistol in his hand.
We dont know how big a hole, but it didn't blast the head apart, and the guy was helmeted, so we can at leats figure 15-20 cm diameter hole, maybe 1-2 cm diameter. Doesnt seem to be cauterized. But its also got considerable momentum. From a laspistol implied, no less (arguments there still pertain.)

call it between 47-126 sq cm for flash burns, if we go 30-50 j per sq cm its between 1.4 and 6.3 kj for thermal effects alone. Single digit kj should easily drill a hole through the head about that size (at least a few kj), whethe rot not it overpenetrates and to what degree, and what effect the helmet has, we can't measure, but it ensures it is a lower limit estimate nonetheless.



PAge 290
..Larkin said, getting up, clutching his seared arm.
Assuming half the arm got seared or that it went 'thorugh' the arm lengthwise (call it 2 cm diameter) and 10 cm long we're talking maybe 50-60 sq cm at least. For 3rd degree burns we're talking 2.5-3 KJ.



Page 290-293
These things are heresies, Rawne! Foul heresies! And if that wasn’t enough, they’ve been sleeping here on a Chaos-polluted world for thousands of years! Do any of us really want to find out how that’s altered their thinking?”
..
“You mean this whole thing could be corrupted?”

“You’d have to be the blindest fool in creation to want to find out, wouldn’t you?”
...
There was something wrong with the new-born. It was malformed, grotesque compared to the perfect anatomical symmetry of the other Iron Men. A good head taller, it was hunched, blackened, one arm far longer than the over, draped and massive, the other hideously vestigial and twisted.

Corrupt horns sprouted from its over-long skull and its eyes shone a deadened yellow. Oil like stringy pus wept from the eye sockets. It shambled, unsteady. Its exposed teeth and jaws clacked and mashed idiotically.
So the STC prize on the chaos corrupted world turns out to be.. chaos corrupted and turning out chaos corrupted robots. How totally unexpected, am I right? On the other hand it does sort of drive home quite possibly why AI and robots are something of a no no in 40K. they quite possibly are, at least Imperial tech wise, much more easily corrupted. Or at least indicative that potentially anything can be corrupted.




Page 293-294
Two las-rounds punched into the new-born and made it stagger backwards. Caffran was trying his best, but the dully reflective carapace of the new-born shrugged off all but the kinetic
force of the shots.
Lasbolts having 'kinetic force' to stagger our doombot. I doubt its literal 'kinetic' anything, but it may be a reflection fo some 'particle beam' element, or perhaps the explosive vaporization again. Though I suppose it could be evidence of 'lazer bullets' type energy weapons - one has to admit that the Ghost novels depictions of lasweapons tend to be amongst the most atypical (either particle or projectile weaponry often seems ot mesh beter.)



Page 295
It had taken them close on four hours to find and fight their way in; four hours from the bottom of the chimney shaft on the hillside to the doors of the Edicule.
..
Gaunt knew he had to factor in more time, so in the end he had Rawne set the tube-charge relays for four and three-quarter standard hours.
..
Most of their weapons had been dumped, as the power cells were now dead. There was no point carrying the excess weight.
..
..with Mkoll, whose lasrifle had about a dozen gradually dissipating shots left in its dying clip.
Time ot revise my earlier evaluations of lamp pack vs lasgun, this time to try and be more comprehensive. We know that they expended between 28-40 powerpacks (estimated) within 4-8 hours. Within that approximate same timeframe the lasgun powerpacks are mostly (or nearly all) drained. We dont know how many the Ghosts normally carry, but we can figure at least 4-6 as 'average' for troopers depending on source (although the evidence before with Blane's platoon suggests it might be more.) Lets figure between 4 and 10 powerpacks, with between 50-150 shots per powerpack. With 10-13 people using powerpacks, we might figure 2-3 powerpacks in under 4-8 hours per person.

going by the earlier .25 watt to 1 watt estimate, we get between 540 kj and 2.16 MJ per lamp pack. which is between 1.08 MJ to 1.62 MJ and 4.32 and 6.48 MJ respectively.

4 packs/50 shots per pack is 200 shots, 10 packs/50 shots is 500 shots, whilst 10 shots at 150 is 1500 shots and 4 packs/150 shots is 600 shots.

On the low end you get between 720-1800 joules per shot (108-270 kj per pack) whilst at 1.62 MJ total (162-405 kj per pack) 1.08-2.7 kj per pack. 50 shots of course would be 3x the aforementioned numbers, but be still in the single digit outputs. Total pack outputs would be the same.

At 4.32-6.48 MJ, you get between 432 kj and 1.08 MJ per pack, and 648-1.62 MJ per pack respectively. Per shot its 2.88 kj and 7.2 kj per shot, and 4.32-10.8 kj per shot. And again, 50 shots per pack would be triple the above figures.

Overall again we're getting at least single/double digit kj per shot, and its still conservative for a number of reasons - the ratio of powerpack usage may be higher, the powerpacks for lasguns were expended in combat as well as being drained (which will increase the figures somewhat), as well as the whole timeframe (lasguns weren't completely drained in 2 hours or 4 hours, despite 20 powerpacks being drained in a couple hours as previously noted.) and of course if the 'wattage' of the lights are higher than I assume the outputs could be greater.

And as noted, the powerpacks took far longer than the lamp packs for the drain to be noticed (on the other hand, humans getting tired took even longer to take effect, although the reasons of ushc can be explained a number of ways since humans are not batteries.) The differneces between laspistol and lasguns (also commented on here) must be noted.


Page 296
. Gaunt felt fatigue growing in his limbs, realising now more than ever that the energy-leaching affected more than lamp packs and las-gun charges. If he was weary, he dreaded to think what Domor was like.
Again the lasguns and lamp packs are being drained, as is the fatigue after 8 hours. Its hard to calc, but if we figure 8-16 hours (a single day) before getting tired, and 10-100 watts power output, call it between .288-2.88 MJ for 8 hours, and twice that for 16 hours. If we figure 4-10 lasgun power packs it works out to between 28-288 kj per pack at 10 packs per person, and 72-720 kj for 4 packs. 16 hours is of course twice that. That leads again to single digit (or less in the case of a 28 kj powerpack) to double digit kj per shot.




Page 267
“You’ve done all I could have asked of you, Caffran. You and the others. First and Only, best of warriors. If I die in this pit, I’ll die happy knowing I got as many of you out as possible.” He made to shake the man’s hand. But Caffran seemed overwhelmed by the gesture and moved away.
This is again Gaunt's dedication to 'saving' the Ghosts, no matter what, even at the cost of his own life. He's a man who has lost much if not all that is precious to him, and is determiend to hold onto at least one thing. He's an orphan, as he himself said, who sympathizes with orphans and will try to spare them a smuch of the pain as he himself has endured.




Page 299-300
“Dercius. You mean Dercius! Sacred Feth, but isn’t that done with? I know the Jantine have never liked admitting they had a coward on their spotless honour role, but this is taking things too far! Dercius, General Dercius, Emperor rot his filthy soul, left my father and his unit to die on Kentaur. He ran away and left them. When I executed Dercius on Khedd all those years ago, it was a battlefield punishment, as is my right to administer as an Imperial Commissar!"
.
"You sent my father to hell in disgrace and all my lands and titles were stripped from me. Even my family name. That went too. I was forced to battle my way up and into the service as a footslogger. Prove my worth, make my own name. My life has been one long, hellish struggle against infamy thanks to you.”
Oh the irony! Gaunt kills Dercius for 'killing' his father and the shit it put him through, and now Flense wants to kill Gaunt for doing the exact same thing. Give Gaunt credit, he knows when Flense admits that he cannot reason with the man and only death (one or the other) will resolve it, so he clearly recognizes that similarity. I wonder if he realises the irony and how much more trouble vengeance caused here than it solved?

In this moment its also quite easy to feel some pity for Flense and Brochuss.. they've been used by Heldane and Dravere, they've been cast into the position of villains which has brought them to ruin.. and their leader was subjected to much the same thing Gaunt was, by Gaunt's own hand. Again its a tragedy of sorts, but one that feels appropriate and fits with the overall book.



Page 302
Drained of power by the cavern, Flense’s pistol had only grazed him, as it had only grazed Gaunt’s chest when he had thrown himself at Flense.
About 8 hours or so to nearly completely drain a laspistol powerpack. Even assuming it was 1/10th the lamp packs capacity (at quarter watt output we're talking 540 kj, which would be 54 kj powerpacks) it would still be 1.8-2.7 kj per shot at least, and 108-216 kj per pack is 3.6-5.4 kj per shot, or 7.2-10.8 kj respectivley. If half MJ per power pack the outputs are 18-27 kj per shot, and if we go with 1-2 MJ per powerpack it would be between 36-54 KJ (for 1 MJ) and 72-108 kj per shot. Single to double digit kj at least again, and this time for laspistols, not rifles.




Page 302
Imperial forces pulled away from the vanquished moon and returned to their support ships in high orbit.
Again the naval forces are in high orbit, which means the bobmardment probably was carried off there



Page 308
“But remember this, Ibram. It’s not always as obvious as it seems. Winning is everything, but the trick is to know where the winning really is. Hell, killing the enemy is the job of the regular trooper. The task of a commissar is more subtle.”

“Finding how to win?”

“Or what to win. Or what kind of win will really count in the long term. You have to use everything you have, every insight, every angle. Never, ever be a slave to simple tactical directives. The officer cadre are about as sharp as an ork’s arse sometimes. We’re political animals, Ibram.
Through us, if we do our job properly, the black and white of war is tempered. We are the interpreters of combat, the translators. We give meaning to war, subtlety, purpose even. Killing is the most abhorrent, mindless profession known to man. Our role is to fashion the killing machine of the human species into a positive force. For the Emperor’s sake. For the sake of our own consciences.”
I must say that this scene is a bit ironic when you take it into context of Gaunt's killing Dercius, and the subsequent consequences it created with the Jantine (Flense and his need for revenge.) IF Gaunt had followed this advice rather than abusing his authority for personal reasons, he wouldn't have killed Dercius, and Flense (and the Jantine) would not have hated him so passionately in a way that would hinder his efforts against the STC.

That said it describes quite nicely what I perceive a proper Commissar is about, especailly in context with Cain's POV (which dovetails nicely here.) A good Commissar is not an inflexible, mindless fanatic. He has intellect, discretion, and judgement, and he uses those as much or more than he uses his weapons to achieve his ends. He is a psychologist and a manipulator for the good of the Guard and the Imperium. He cannot afford simple absolutes of 'black' or 'white'. He must think in complex terms, look beyond the immediate battle, and decide what is TRULY important, and you need a flexible mind to do that, not one, as Oktar says 'enslaved to tactical directives' or the rules/orders.

To be fair the whole 'war is abhorrent, we turn it into a positive force' is not neccesarily part of that (the one part I slightly disagree with Oktar on), but I do think its a good way of achieving the 'psychological/manipulator' end of a Commissar's role, and at least indicates the men have some value.



Page 310
His face was handsome and aquiline. Gaunt was surprised to find compassion there, pain, fatigue, understanding. The face was cold white, the flesh pale, but somehow there was a warmth and a light.

“I am Defay,” the Inquisitor said in a low, resonating voice.
Abnett really does the 'kindly inquisitor' as well as he does the asshole Inquisitor. This guy is a nice contrast to Heldane in all regards, I think.



Page 312-314
“I don’t want to see things, Ibram, but still I do. In my head. Sometimes wonderful things. Sometimes awful things. I see what people show me. Minds are like books.”
..

Gaunt managed to whisper: “What do you want from me? What?”

“Your life.” A feathery, inhuman voice.
...
“What do you want to know?” the horror asked, suddenly, calculatingly

...
“What does ‘feth’ mean?” she replied plainly.
Gaunt hesitated. He had no idea what the word meant or why he had used it.
...
“The Warp knows you, Ibram Gaunt.”
..
“Remember this! Ibram! Ibram! Please! So many will die if you don’t! So many, so very many!”
..
“Worlds will die! A warmaster will die! Don’t let any of them have it! Any of them! It is not a matter of the wrong hands! All will be wrong hands! No one has the right to use it! Destroy it! Ibram! Please!”
Again the 'Warp knows' Gaunt, although which part of the warp isn't defined. I suspect it may refer to both sides, but the sides this girl represents is the more benevolent one, rather than the Chaos Gods. The sides of Order and perhaps the God Emperor, seeking to use Gaunt as an agent. I mean the Chaos Gods wouldn't want Gaunt to destroy an intact, Chaos corrupted STC. Chaos would want him to make MORE chaos bots.

What's more Gaunt is quite clearly an agent of fate (knowing what 'feth' is before he even meets the Ghosts.)

It also seems that Gaunt gained quite a bit of information from this witch. Just how much he knows, and whether it was more than just the truth about Dercius, or the future pertianing to Fortis Binary and Menazoid Epsilon, we don't know. Its quite possible Gaunt was told more about his future (or warned) and we just didn't find out or get told yet.

Part of me wonders if maybe this is Saint Sabbat reaching out through a vessel and grooming Gaunt as one of her champions. It would sort of fit with the theme of the series, I think. I mean Slaydo, whom Gaunt was allied with/to, quite often believed he was guided/inspired by the Saint, so why not others?
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Had a free moment, decided to start up Ghostmaker.

Ghostmaker is the second novel in the Gaunt's Ghosts series. Like the first, it seems that it was compiled largely from Inferno Short Stories Abnett did. However, unlike the first book, these stories are not really strung together into any coherent, larger story. RAther, they are presented more like an anthology, with little vignette-like story focusing on one (or sometimes several) Ghosts such as Corbec, Mkoll, Larkin, Rawne, etc. Also, unlike the first book, Gaunt is not as prominent as he was (although he's still very much visible.) because the first book was 'his' story. This novel is the Ghost's actual introduction - where we discover the death of their world, where we learn more about many of the characters who at various points play a prominent role in this story.

Each story is very self contained, and focuses on the character, introducing something of their pasts, their motivations, etc. so they become more than just secondary characters. We don't learn about EVERY ghost of course, more will be introduced along the line. That's actually one of the more interesting aspects of the Ghost's series. significant characters can - and will - die, often when you least expect it and in unpredictable manner. Its kind of harsh, and I know I dislike having characters I like die, but in another way it really drives home the 'horrible' nature of war in the 41st Millenium. There are no character shields, no predictions or guarantees for anyone (except perhaps, maybe Gaunt.) Old characters will die, new characters will be introduced, and sometimes even those new characters die. I hate it, and yet I like it, because it adds to the tension and drama of the story, and it makes it feel more 'real' and harsh and even grim.


And for reference purposes, the Old thread is here


Page 10
His men stood ready in fire-teams, fifteen hundred strong, dressed in the black capes and dull body-armour uniform that was their signature. Some stood at eyeholes in the dyke, guns fixed.
Theere are 1500 Ghosts now (preusmably after first and Only to some extent) and either they always had body armour and we never had it described such (flak cloth or fabric armour perhaps) or they recently acquired it (which also is stealthed like their clothes.)



Page 13
“Strange place this, this Tanith. So they say.” He rubbed his chin. “They say the forests move. Change. The trees apparently… uhm… shift. According to the pilot, you can get lost in the woods in a matter of minutes.”
Sym’s voice dropped to a whisper. “They say it’s a touch of Chaos! Can you believe that? They say Tanith has a touch of Chaos, being this close to the Edge, you see.”
We got intimations of this in 'First and Only', but now its explicitly mentioned that the Ghosts 'talents' for navigating their woods (and the woods themselves) are a result of the Warp. apparently something about being close to the edge of the galaxy is s upposed to be transforming/mutating like that.



PAge 14
..the huge black shadows of the bulk transports, whale-mouths and belly ramps open, squatting in fire-blackened craters of earth, ready to eat up the men and the machines of the new regiments of Tanith. His regiments, he reminded himself, the first Imperial Guard regiments to be founded on this enigmatic, sparsely populated frontier world.
Tanith's 3 regiments are all under Gaunt, and they combine troops as well as vehicles.


Page 15
On either side of him, the rows of three-man tents stretched away in ordered files, and guardsmen in brand new uniforms sat around, cleaning kit, stripping guns, eating, dicing, smoking, sleeping.
Six thousand men, all told, mostly infantry but some artillery and armoured crews, three whole regiments and men of Tanith all.
If you figure one regiment is for artillery and armour you might get 2 infantry of 2500 apiece, and one of 1000 for the vehicles. On the other hand if they're one of each (Artillery, infantry, and armour) then you might have 4000 infantry or so and 1000 or so for the others (as an example.)
As an aside, I suspect this represents one way in which you might get 'combined arms' formations at a founding. If multiple regiments of different types are raised at the same time, especially under a single individual (like Gaunt) you can play the 'mix and match' game more easily with detachments. Heck its fairly interesting that Gaunt as a mere 'colonel' commands 3 regiments. I wonder if its due to his special dual-status that the rules can be more easily bent.
Also if we figure this is a 10% tithe, of the PDF (or equivaelnt) it probably means Tanith's military is somehwere on the order of 60,000. IF they have between 1-10 million (which is 'sparesely populated' by certain Ipmerial definitions) That militia would be between 1/15th and 1/150th the total population numbers.



Page 16
"That’s the job. To serve the Emperor in his wars, over the stars and far away. Best get used to the idea.”
Probably a Sharpe reference, or maybe just a british military one. 'Over the Hills and Far away' is a signature tune of the Richard Sharpe series, particularly the movies.



Page 17
And the troops hadn’t been that impressive either. Pale, dark-haired, undernourished-looking somehow, haggard in plain black fatigues, each with a piebald camo-cloak swept over the shoulder opposite the one to which their lasgun was slung. Not to mention the damn earstuds and hoops, the facial tattoos, the unkempt hair, the lilting, sing-song accents.
..
“They are resolute and cunning,”
..
“Tanith breeds indefatigable men. And our particular strengths are in scouting and stealth. As you might expect on a world whose moving forests blur the topography with bewildering speed, the Tanith have an unerring sense of place and direction. They do not get lost. They perceive what others miss.”
The Tanith troops in appearance and character. Basically Celtic Ninjas, I suppose, if we want to go for broad simple generalizations (which some do. SPACE FEUDALISM 4 EVAH) or maybe just commandos. Either way they are sneaky and wear black. Also we get mention of their 'never get lost' and 'perceive what others miss' feature, which is interesting in light of the rumours pertaining to the nature of the planet and its forests. This actually becomes important in tevery novel - we saw it with Mkoll in First and Only (in the tunnels under Menazoid Epsilon, which were chaos tainted) and in plenty of other cases where warp-oriented stuff is concerned in this book and onwards. It seems that the Tanith too were 'exposed' to Chaos in some fashion and it left a sort of mark on them when it comes to perceptions.



Page 19
“The nearest edge of the warzone is meant to be eighty days from here! How can this be?”
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“We broke them at Balhaut, but they splintered. Deep intelligence and the scout squadrons suggested they were running scared, but it was always possible that some of their larger components would scatter inwards, looping towards us, rather than running for the back end of the Sabbat Worlds and away.”
The warzone's edge is 'eighty days' from Tanith. We dont know the exact distance except its prtty damn far away, so I'd guess maybe at least 100 LY or so, possibly 200. That still only comes out to a few hundred c. EVen if we go with the 1000 LY implication from the last book, we're still tlaking only a few hundred or a few thousand, which is consistent with Eisenorn and Ravenor. It could be that, with a war in progress and things not stabilized, the region's warp routes are less predictable (and stable/fast.) Further, the widespread turmoil that must be created in the warp by the ongoing conflict (thoughts and emotions remember) are bound to make things even more unpredictable. And of course, it snever straight line.



PAge 19
"On his damn deathbed, Slaydo was quite precise about this! Picket fleets were meant to guard all the warpgates towards territories like Tanith, particularly when we’re still at founding and vulnerable like this! "
Macaroth's impatience basically lead to Tanith being lost, because he left the paths into Tanith undefended. And Gaunt (And the Ghosts, obviousy) are pissed. What's interesting is that they say warp 'gates' here, but I suspect they mean warp routes. Although its possible they control gates/portals of some kind within the system - such would be key strategic assets


PAge 19-20
“An hour ago, our ships in orbit detected a massive enemy armada coming in-system. It is no exaggeration to say that Tanith has just hours of life left to it.”
..
" Half of our force is already stowed in the troop carriers upstairs and the other half is penned in transit. We couldn’t turn them around and get them unlimbered and dug in in under two full days. "
..
"The rest of you: the carrier ships will leave orbit in one hour or at the point of attack, whichever comes first. "
..
“We’re abandoning Tanith?” a Munitorium aide said, disbelief in his thin voice.
“Tanith is already dead. We can die with it, or we can salvage as many fighting men as we can and re-deploy them somewhere they will actually do some good."
and the fateful decision made. We dont know the size or composition of the Chaos fleet, But tanith has 'hours' to live.

At the worst, its less than two days, but the context is strongly a couple hours tops. two days at one AU wouldn't be much, a few gees sustained accel and a few thousand km/s tops. If it were billions of km (10+ AU) we'd be talking tens of gees and 5-6% of c tops. If its 2 hours we're talking over 1200 gees and nearly 14% of c travel speed. 10 AU at that time would be more subjective (high relativity from a good 70-90% of c top speed) but it would be high thousands/low tens of thousands easily (Sabbat Martyr calcs). I'm banking omre on hundreds of gees, mayba few thousand


Page 20
The orbital bombardment blew white-hot holes out of the ancient forests, melted the high walls, splintered the towers, and shattered the paved yards.
Effects of orbital bombardment. Not very planet killing yet.


PAge 21-22
The aide seemed to reach for him, clawing at his tunic. For a second, Gaunt though Sym was trying to pull himself up so that Gaunt could carry him.
Then Sym’s torso exploded in a red mist and Gaunt was thrown back off his feet.
At the head of the stairs, the grotesque shock troops of Chaos bayed and advanced. Sym had seen them over Gaunt’s shoulder, had pulled himself up and round to shield Gaunt with his own body.
Gaunt got to his feet. His first shot burst the horned skull of the nearest beast. His second and third tore apart the body of another. His fourth, fifth and sixth gutted two more and sent them spinning back into their comrades behind on the steps.
We dont know how many shots, and how many troops, but it takes a couple of seconds tops. Probably not much more than a squad, since he shoots 7 of them (at most) before they arrive and he isn't shot in return. Call it between 100-1000 shots. or 2-3 seconds. If we figure a 30x30 cm front and back and 30x20 on both sides of the torso on both sides, 400 j per sq cm to 'blow' apart which is 1.2 MJ. 40x40 and 40x20 would be 4800 sq cm and 1.92 MJ 1200-1920 J at least, and 12-19.2 KJ on the other end.
Alternatley 1 MJ or so for a grenade level damage roughly100 you get between 1-10 KJ that way :P
Overall call it roughly single/double digit kj per 'bolt' at least, or an implied minimum of 30-50 kw, 40-60 kw, and 64-96 kw respectively sustained. In both cases its quite possibly severla times greater than what I estimate too. double to triple digit kw sustained firepower.


Page 22-23
Left to die, the forests burned.
Gaunt fell against a bulkhead and clawed his way to a porthole. Just like in his dreams — fire, like a flower. Blossoming. Pale, greenish fire, scuttling like it was alive. Eating the world, the whole world.
Ibram Gaunt gazed into his reflection, his own lean, pale, bloody face. Trees, blazing like the heart of a star, rushed past behind his eyes.
Implying the planet burned while Gaunt watched.



Page 23
Three great troop carriers, their ash-grey, crenellated hulls vaulted like monstrous cathedrals, and the long, muscular escort frigate Navarre, spined and blistered with lance weapons and turrets, hooked and angular like a woodwasp, two kilometres long.
Navarre and troopships.


Page 23
Sporadic reports had come in of a thirty-six hour deep-space engagement of capital ships near the Circudus.
36 hr space battle.


Page 23
Gaunt’s ruthless retreat had salvaged three and a half thousand fighting men, just over half of the Tanith regiments, and most of their equipment.
Initial composition of Tanith force.



Page 24
He looked across the cabin and saw his own reflection in the vast bay port. Two metres twenty of solid bone and sinew, the narrow, dangerous face that so well matched his name, the cropped blond hair.
Gaunt. Abnett loves tall people in his novels. :P


Page 25
One was tall, taller and older than Gaunt and built heavily, if a little paunchy. His arms were like hams and were decorated with blue spirals. His beard was shaggy, and his eyes might once have twinkled.
Corbec is even taller than Gaunt. considering Bragg dwarfs him, that makes you wonder just how huge he is. Shit like this can make you believe Tanith has some sort of chaos mutating aspect to it. Corbec is, like Gaunt, more of a 'background' character usually in these stories, he features fairly significantly in all of them, but has no one story signature to him (the way RAwne, Caffran, Bragg, Dorden or Larkin do.)


Page 25
“Our world died, Colonel-Commissar Gaunt,” Corbec said, the title bringing Gaunt’s head up sharp. “We saw it flame out from the windows of our transports. You should have let us stand and fight. We would have died for Tanith.”
Tanith was apparently destroyed as they watch. That implies a matter of hours (which consistent with above) Assuming 1e9 megatons again and 100 ships in a 8 hour (or less) timeframe, is 347 megatons per second on average. If it was 10 ships and 2 hours, we're talking 13.9 Gigatons/second. Call it roughly megaton to gigaton range firepower, again.


Page 27-29
The men looked like world-killers in their ornate battledress: crested, enamelled scarlet and silver warsuits built by the artisans of Sloka to inspire terror in the enemy.
..
"Suggested you might need a covert scouting force seeing as how your boys’ scarlet armour stands out like a baboon’s arse.”
..
" The Tanith are light infantry, you’re armoured and heavy. Let us lead through and then follow us in support when we’ve secured a beachhead. Bring up some support weapons.”
10th Royal sloka. Like the Jantine and the Volpone they seem to have full body rigid armour of some kind (at least thats what I infer 'heavily armoured' and 'warsuit' to mean.)


Page 29
Thoren waved up an aide who flipped up a map-projector, and displayed a fuzzy image of the deadzone.
Map projector



Page 31
Gaunt blasted with his bolter, blowing two cultists apart and destroying a doorway.
bolter again.


Page 31
A little further on, a huge man, a gentle giant called Bragg, was shouldering the heavy bolter and taking down walls and columns. The big weapon had originally been pintle-mounted on a sled, but Bragg had torn it off its mount and slung it up like a rifle. Gaunt had never seen a heavy bolter carried by an unarmoured man before. The Tanith called Bragg “Try Again” Bragg. He was a terrible shot, admittedly, but with firepower like that he could afford to be sloppy.
Bragg, wielding a pintle mounted heavy bolter like a rifle. another reason to believe the Tanith might have some warp influence to them.


Page 32
Forgal began to crawl forward. A lucky shot vaporised the top of his head.
We dont know what the weapon is, but its either a projectile or lasweapon perhaps, single digit kj if so. Unless its literally vaping, then it could be MJ.

Page 35
As a commissar, a political officer, charged with morale and propaganda, he could turn a good, pompous phrase. But as a colonel, he felt a duty of truth to his men. And the truth was, he knew little of what to expect. It would be bitter, he knew that much, though the commissar part of him spared the men that thought. Gaunt spoke of courage and glory in general, uplifting terms, talking softly and firmly as his mentor, Commissar-General Oktar, had taught him all those years ago when he was just a raw cadet with the Hyrkans. “Save the yelling and screaming for battle, Ibram. Before that comes, build their morale with gentle encouragement. Make it look like you haven’t a care in the world.”
Gaunt is tied between his dual roles, a conflict which becomes prominent (for himself and others) as the series progresses. Indeed many believe (not without reason) that his association with the Tanith colours his perceptions, which leads to the assignment of Hark later in the series. In any case it shows Gaunt's leadership qualities and his roles as a commissar to good effect agian.


Page 36
Gaunt prided himself on knowing not only the names of all his men, but a little about each of them too. A private joke here, a common interest there. Oktar’s way, tried and tested, Emperor rest his soul these long years. Gaunt tried to memorise each muddy, smiling face as he passed along. He knew his soul would be damned the day he was told Trooper so-and-so had fallen and he couldn’t bring the man’s face to mind. “The dead will always haunt you,” Oktar had told him, “so make certain the ghosts are friendly.”
Gaunt again on his commissarial roles. Very much of the 'lead and inspire' camp like Cain rather than the 'shoot and terorrize'. It's another one of those 'balance' things that really make the story enjoyable.


Page 37
Almost twice a man’s height, frighteningly broad, armour the colour of rusty blood, crested by recurve brass antlers. The face was a graven death’s head. Daemon. Chaos Warrior. World Eater.
World eater CSM. Given the comparison (assuming its literal) the dude must be 3-3.5 metres tall.


Page 38
...the ten-vehicle forward portion of a heavy column of eighty flame-and-feather painted Basilisk tanks of the “Serpents”, the Ketzok 17th Armoured Regiment, sent in to support the frontal push of the Royal Volpone 50th, the so-called “Bluebloods”. The Ketzok had the firepower to flatten a city, but caught on a strangled trackway
Size and firepowe rof an artillery regiment. Assuming they carry 40 rounds apiece and 5x that number in reloads (16,000 rounds) and we assume a 10 km diameter city, I figure its around a 150-200 m diameter 'blast area' If twice that number (32,000 rounds) it would be 100 m or so. Just at a guess I'd wager several hundred to several thousand kilos of TNT apiecem as an order of magnitude estimate (Even if its 10x less than I noted, its more imrepssive) based on estimated blast radius. Casualty/kill radius (100/50 metres) is roughly simialr for a 155mm shell, which probably roughly correlates. Even assuming 1000 shells per gun (lets call it 100,000 just to be generous) thats still a 30-40 m kill radius at least. We'd be talking 10-20 kg of TNT per shell probably. Considering a Basilisk weighs some 20-38 kg it wouldn't be impossible as the bare minimum.



Page 39
..he cranked round the autocannon mounted on his vehicle’s rear and angled it at the nearest monster.
..
..Ortiz trained his mounted gun on the World Eater and fired. He shot long at first, but corrected before the monster could turn. The creature didn’t seem to feel the first hits. Ortiz clenched the trigger and streamed the heavy tracer fire at the red spectre. At last the figure shuddered, convulsed and then blew apart.
Ortiz cursed. The World Eaters soaked up the sort of punishment that would kill a Leman Russ. He realised his ammo drum was almost empty.
Giant monster World Eater mutants seem to absorb Dreadnought/Terminator level punishments (IF we assume they're literally comparable to a Leman Russ, given their berserker naturea nd obvious size/mass mutations thats not improbable.) Apparently also an autocannon fo unknown calibre, expending nearly all its ammo, can take out a Leman Russ as well.



Page 40
The blow didn’t fall. The monster rocked, two or three times, swayed for a moment. And exploded.
Rocket laucnher (or several) seem to blow apart a giant world Eater. Probably many times greater evne than the firepower to take out a normal CSM.


Page 40
Another was flamed repeatedly as he ripped apart the wreck of a Basilisk with his steel hands. The flames touched off the tank’s magazine and the marine was incinerated with his victims. His hideous roar lingered long after the white-hot flames had consumed him.
Basiliks tank ammo incinerates crew and one of hte CSM.s It seems likely literal incineration given the 'consume' bit. with crew of 4 and say a 250 kg Space Marine we're talking maybe 500 or so kg burnt Assuming water boiled away at least (268 kj to 2.5 MJ) that would be 138 MJ to 1.25 GJ. Assuming 40 shells (again)1 that would be at least 3.5 MJ to 32 MJ per shell, at least.


Page 40
..he remaining World Eaters died. One was punctured dozens of times by lasgun fire and fell face down into the mire.
Dozens of Lasgun shots take down super-world Eater. Space MArines can be killed by sustained lasfire under the right circumstances. heck you'd only need a squad (or just a fireteam) on full auto to probably do it in a few seconds, tops. A single clip could probably do it too.


Page 41
He was nearly two and half metres tall and arrogantly powerful, with the big, blunt, bland features and languid, hooded eyes of the aristocracy. Gilbear wore the grey and gold uniform of the Royal Volpone 50th, the so-called Bluebloods..
Gilbear, volpone Major. Another Space-Marine sized person. I told you Abnett likes tall fuckers.


Page 41-42
Outside, on the lawn, a squad of Blueblood elite in full battle dress were executing a precision synchronised drill with chainswords.
'elite' bluebloods, probably storm troopers, practicing with chainswords.


Page 42-43
“Our beloved overlord does not look kindly on the favourites of his predecessor. Especially as Slaydo granted Gaunt and a handful of others the settlement rights of the first world they conquered. He and his Tanith rabble are an embarrassment to the new regime. But that serves us well. They will fight hard because they have everything to prove, and everything to win.”
Crusade politics. Given Gaunt loyally served MAcaroth in First and Only, this seems like poor reward. But then again the New Warmaster will have his own priorities and shit. Such is politics.


PAge 43
His men were riding on the flanks of the great war machines, a dozen or more per vehicle, joking with the Serpent crews, exchanging drinks and smokes, some cleaning weapons or even snoozing as the lurch of the metal beasts allowed.
Ghosts hitching a ride on basilisks. Not the most ideal way of transport, especially in a warzone, but compared to alking its better. Of course, you never saw anything like this at Taros (its perfectly okay to WALK in open desert, but heaven forbid those poor soldiers ride.)


Page 43
“Right down the river’s floodplain to the gates of Voltis. He thinks we can take the city where fifty thousand of his Bluebloods have failed.”
Sturm has 50,000 men (the 'he' gaunt refers to.) Whether this is just the 50th or several regiments together we don't know, but it strongly implied to be the 50th alone.


Page 46
Brin Milo cowered in the shadow of a medical Chimera..
Med chimera.


Page 47
The boy had already set up the field-map, a glass plate in a metal frame mounted like an easel on a brass tripod. Gaunt cranked the knurled lever on the side and the glass slowly lit with bluish light. He dropped in a ceramic slide engraved with the local geography and then angled the screen to show the assembled men: Corbec, Rawne, Cluggan, Orcha and the other officers.
Guard field map chart slide.


Page 48
"At the far end, Voltis City, the old Capital of Voltemand. Thirty metre curtain walls of basalt."
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"Host from off-planet seized it at day one as their main stronghold. The Volpone 50th have spent six weeks trying to crack it, but the bastards we met today show the kind of force they’ve been up against. "
The size of the walls in the fortress, and the fact the 50th (the 50K men) are one and the same.


Page 48
"One man in every ten will be carrying as much high explosive as he can. Squad leaders should select any man with demol experience. We provide cover for these demolition specialists to allow them to set charges that will take out sections of wall or gates."
Probably means fewer than 100 kg of demo explosives.


Page 48
“I’ve spoken to the Blueblood colonel. He has seven thousand men in motorised units ready to advance and take advantage of any opening we can make. They will be monitoring on channel eighty."
Motorized Volpone. Thats at least 700 vehicles. Whether its part of the larger regiment or not, I don't know.



Page 49
Gaunt adjusted his nightscope and panned it round, seeing features in the darkness as a green negative. The watergate was thirty metres across and forty tall, the mouth of a great chute and adjoining system that returned water to the Bokore once it had driven the mills inside the city.
the watergate. Also Gaunt has a 'nightscope' which I take to have night vision capability.



Page 49-50
e dragged the canvas cover off one of the two huge weapons he had lugged on his shoulders from Pavis Crossroads. The polished metal of the missile launcher had been dulled down with smears of Mirewood mud.
“Try Again” Bragg was a spectacularly lousy shot. But the watergate was a big target, and the missile rack held four melta-missiles.
The night exploded. Three missiles went straight up the throat of the chute. The force of the heat-blast sent stone debris, metal shards, water vapour and body parts out in a radius of fifty yards. The fourth vaporised a chunk of wall, and brought down a small avalanche of basalt chunks. For a moment the heat was so intense that Gaunt’s nightscope read nothing but emerald glare. Then it showed him the chiselled mouth of the watergate had become a bubbling, blazing wound in the huge wall, a ragged, slumping incision in the sheer basalt.
..
The Ghosts charged the watergate. Orcha led the first squad up the sloping drain-away under the molten arch of ruptured stone.
..
He and three of his men swung flamers in wide arcs, scorching and scouring up unto the darkness of the echoing chute. Behind them, Corbec brought in fire teams with lasguns who darted down into the side passages and cisterns of the watergate..
Several interesting tidbits in this.
First missile laucher with multiple reloads held, and using melta missiles. also Gaunt's nightscope again which is more obviously night vision and possibly with thermal as well.
Now, the calcs. Earlier I'd figured that the wall was a foot or two thick, but we really don't know that. I'll assume thick as a single brick (about 8-10 cm, or fist sized thickness.) I'll still assume several metres diamater, as several people can walk through and its implied they can pass through side by side (as noted above). And since its a melta, and given the effects I'll assume 'melting' Assuming stone. around 930 kg melted would be 1.8 GJ for a single missle. Thats roughly 'melta' magnitude, so its not improbable Call it high MJ/low GJ perhaps.
On the other hand we could estimate that the missiles are apparently blasting a ~50 yard (40-50 m) either collectively or individually. Figure 30-40 m diameter at least, up to 100 m diamter for each missile. I figure at least 1-100 kg of TNT equivalent for 'blast radius' effects, although It coudl be an order of magnitude higher for 'lethal to people'
Also again the Ghosts use 'fire teams', albeit of unknown size.

Page 50
In the front rank was Bragg, his empty launcher discarded in favour of the heavy bolter that he had liberated from its mounting back on Blackshard and now lugged around like a smaller man might heft a heavy rifle.
Bragg's pintle heavy bolter again.


Page 51
An assault cannon raged out of the darkness of a side chute. Brith, Orcha and two others disintegrated instantly into red mist and flesh pulp.
..
“Smell that? Burning ceramite. I’d wager they’ve got an overheat jam.”
...
...the two cultists who were struggling to unjam the assault cannon.
Man-portable, tripod (probably) mounted assault cannon and its damage effects iwthin a short period of time (seconds.) Apparently the barrels are ceramite.


PAge 51
“Enemy fire!” Caffran yelled into his bead.
Caffran using micro-bead again.


Page 52
Las and bolt fire slammed back at the Ghosts, dropping several of them. The charging Guardsmen met the cultist force head on in a tight, tall sub-chute, no wider than two men abreast. Bodies exploded, blasted at close range. Bayonets and blades sliced and jabbed. Corbec was in the thick of it.
Lasgun and bolter fire used, 'bodies epxloded' We dont know if both or just one are doing it, but I'm guessing in context its both, although if the lasguns are diong it I'm betting its on full auto and the bolters aren't (either that or they're either very powerful lasguns or very weak bolters.)
Assuming a 20x20 cm area for 3rd degree burns we're talking at least 20 kj. If we are talking about 'flaying' injuries (400 j per sq cm) we're talking 160 kj. If we figure several shots I'd figure we're talking double digit kjs to blow fairly sizable craters (several grams per bolt at least, and probably at least 4-6 bolts.) but that's just an approximation. And if they're not bolters.. well.. it doesn't matter :P


Page 54
More, heavy fire came their way. Forbin lost his left arm and then the side of his head.
..
They were well equipped, with bolters and lasguns, and armoured.
Again firepower of cultists, but we dont know if its las or bolter fire doing this.


Page 55
The blast was so loud, it almost went beyond sound. The Shockwave mashed into them, chopping the water like a white squall. A kilometre away, a hundred metre section of the curtain wall blew out, ripping a vast wound in the city’s flank, burning, raw, exposed.
..
"The old bastard got his boys into the sanitation outfalls and they managed to dump all of their high-ex into a treatment cistern under the walls."
blowing a 100 metre' section of wall, which as noted before is perhaps 30-40 m tall, and probably roughly that thick, we get a reasonable likelihood of it being craterd. Figure 180 tons for granite at 100 m diameter. If we figure thats 100 kilos, you get roughly 1.8 tons per kilo, which is phenomenally powerful (of course without knowing the kinds of demo we can't say how impressive that is. They could be meltabombs or plasma explosives after all, like Bragg's rocket launcher. If they are distrubted explosives.
Demo charges weigh 1 kg as per FFG, although melta bombs are 12 kg. If we figure the fit somewhere betwene that we get 100 and 8 charges. Figure 22-23 m radius for melta charges, and 10-12 m radius for individuall bombs. Individual charges might be 10-23 tons of TNT equivalent, whilst indivudal ones would be 'only' 180 kilos apiece :P Figure as an order of magnitude estimat eits likely for explosives of unknonw type, but its also possilbe I'm understating the quantities used. Possibly overstating, but I doubt many troopers could carry hundreds of kilos of explosive easily.


Page 60
The commissar was dressed as he had first met him, fifty days before, in high-waisted dress breeches with leather braces, a sleeveless undershirt and jack boots.
We dont know quite where Blackshard or Nameth are (the previous two destinations) but if we figure at least 30-50 LY, we get at least 220c and 365c, and those are definite lower limits. Depending on how you interpret the maps (or at least the best I could find) in the Sabbat Worlds Crusade guide, it could be muhc longer. As I've noted I think the Sabbat Worlds region is a sector, but that has never been absolutely definite either.


Page 63
Before him, block-mounted, sat a cogitator, a vox-uplink and a flat-screen mimeograph. A tech-priest had spent over an hour diligently intoning prayers of function as he made the sacred machines ready. They were still propped in their half-open wrought-iron casings to protect against the damp, and thick power feeds snaked off from them and ran from clip supports on the rafters, out of a socket-shutter and off to the distant generator. Lights and light images shimmered and flickered on glass plates glossed by condensation. Setting dials throbbed a dull orange. The vox-link made a low-level serpent hiss as it rose and fell through frequencies.
Gaunt leaned forward and idly surveyed the latest information and tactical data coming through from the orbital fleet and other units. A skein of coded runes crossed and blinked on the dark glass.
Gaunt's electronic equipment, apparently for monitoring the larger scale picture of battles (vox uplink to other battlegrounds and orbital shit) a tac-net interface, I suppose one could call it, only gothicified. And 'portable' by Guard standards, though its no data slate either lol.

Page 67
His lower legs were already double-wrapped with chain-cloth to protect against the shredding thorns.

Page 69
..raised his lasgun. There was dust on the exchanger and he wiped it off.
Probably guessing its some sort of cooling unit (as in heat exchanger.) suggesting it may be air cooled.


Page 71
The voice crackled out of the corpse’s intercom.
..
He made a quick adjustment to the intercom at his collar and then reached down to Dewr’s, switching it off.
The Tanith scouts have intercoms. One has to wonder why they are so loud though, given the importance of stealth (and why they're so active, even Mkoll's) if they're audible enough to give away locations.


Page 72-73
The Chaos dreadnought came to a halt on its great hydraulic feet, sighing and hissing.
..
It was four metres tall, wider than three men, blackened and scorched as if it had walked through hell and back. All signs of paint or insignia had been burnt off, to bare metal in some places.
..
It was blind. Mkoll could see that at a glance. The wounds of the Adeptus Astartes were deep and fearful across its visor. Its optical units had been blown away in some great act. Mkoll knew the semi-circle of burnt metal Dewr had found was from the recess socket of one of its eyes.
The Chaos Dreadnought seems to have taken superficial damage, mostly to its sensors, but otherwise seems largely intact.


Page 73
Another step. Another hiss of pistons and a growl of motivator. Another thump of footfall, and other rain of darts. It was only three metres from them now...
..
he dreadnought swung and targeted the source of the scream as rapidly as the plants around them did. Poison needles spat into a body that had, mere microseconds before, been incinerated by a belching plasma gun.
Plasma cannon froma dreadnought 'incinerates' body. If we're thinkng 'burnt' its single/double digit MJ. If its crmation we're talking hundreds or thousands of megajoules. The interesting thing about this passage isn't so much what the exact yield is, but it implies a fairly exact velocity for the bolt, 3 metres or so covered in 'mirroseconds' would suggest a velocity of hundreds if not thousands of km/s, depending on how many microseconds. If we assume 2 microseconds for example the velocity would be 1500 km/s.


Page 74-75
Mkoll adjusted his gun and set it on the ground.
..
The dreadnought crunched into the clearing. Its left foot clinked against something in the dust. It bent to retrieve it.
Mkoll’s lasgun.
The dreadnought raised it in its bionic claws, holding the gun up to its already ruptured frontal armour as if to sniff or taste it.
Mkoll started to run.
By his estimation, there were five seconds before the lasgun magazine overloaded as he had set it. He threw himself flat as it went off.
...
They found the dreadnought broken open in the blackened clearing. The overload had not killed it, but it had split its armour as the towering machine had strode forward. Poison darts had done the rest, puncturing and killing the now-vulnerable once-man inside. Mkoll could see where the maddened Chaos beast-machine had strode arrogantly on for a few heavy steps after the puny laser blast. Then it had toppled, poisoned, dead.
The 'forced overload' trick, as we witnessed in the Eisenhorn short story where he lost his hand on Sameter. This time its powerful enough to blast open a Dreadnought from relatively close range (less than a metre away), allowing poison needles inside to kill the occupant. This does, of course, assume the Dreadnought is undamaged (and it may be the armour is weakened) but we don't know that based on the evidence we're given.
The simple assumption would be that the explosion is comparable to a grenade or tube charge (40K version of a stick of dynamite, I think), because its an explosive. That's not unreasonable, given the damage to the target and the fact that for the power pack to do damage it would have to have similar energy density potential to chemical explosives. That would suggest between 800-2000 kj for 'stick of dynamite' analogue (it varies somewhat.) and around a megajoule for a grenade (although 40K grenades can go betwene half a kilo, to the kg grenades from the munitorum manual, so it could be the yield could be twice that.) We also know in latter novels that Merrt had a lasgun that discharges its powerpack all at once and had an effect similar to a tube charge, which woudl corroborate the above.
Now if we try to figure out how much it might take to penetrate the Dradnoughts armour, that requires certain assumptions, like thickness of the hull. We know its thicker than both Power armour and terminator armour (probably at least 4 inches thikc, as power armour is at least an inch or two thick, Termiantor armour is even thicker.) WE also know various sources imply Dreadnoughts are as powerful as tanks, so we might infer similar armour thicknesses to a tank or IFV (like a chimera.) Chimeras have between 100-150mm of armour, and the Russ has between 100-200 mm (depending on location.) so that seems a reasonable approximation. Assuming iron construction.
Under Mike's Explosives page we're given rules of thumb for calculating blasting through iron. (For the record, Gelignite comes in several varieites, but the one commonly used seems to be roughly 50-60% the power of TNT per kg.) 10-20 cm is between 1/3 and 1/6th of a foot, roughly. and for the formula Mike provided you get between 11.56 pounds and 44.9 pounds of gelignite to blast a 10-20 cm deep hole in iron. Or about 2-3 kg of TNT-equivalent at least, to 10-12 kg of TNT for the other end of my estimated thicknesss. That said, it may depend on method and as Mike's page notes there can be vairation in efficiency depending on the method, but it sstill within the order of magntiude of the previous estimates. Playing around with the ADC formulae I figure it coudl be less (if I did the math right) between around 1-1,5 MJ or so to crater iron to the estimated depths (or at least on the high end) which would be roughly the 'grenade/TNT' level.)
Overall I think one or two MJ is likely, since its an order of magnitude estimate anyhow. If the energy intput is lower (although it probably can't be too much lower than I estimated) the per shot yield goes down, whilst if the powerpack yield is greater, it goes up. Assuming between 50-150 shots per pack you get between 6.67 kj (for 150 shots at 1 MJ powerpack) to 40 kj (for 50 shots out of a 2 MJ powerpack.) Which agian fits into that high single/low double digit kj range for lasfire per-shot.
As an aside Mkoll also gets some 10-20 metres away (5 seconds or so) before it goes off. That might imply a couple kg of TNT or so, tops (at least for 'safe' distance.) probably less than 10 kg, although I'd probably call that generally excessive, but it can broadly confirm the yields above.

As a further aside: This is 'Mkoll's story. Mkoll becomes one of those characters who is major through much of the series, although unlike some he doesn't seem to exhibit as much direct development as most other characters do. He remains essentially the same, a Tanith super scout ninja amongst Tanith scout ninjas, and only a few do better.


PAge 77-78
His stomach somersaulted as the troop-ship plunged out of the sky, and every bone in his body shook as the impossibly steep descent vibrated the sixty-tonne vessel like a child’s rattle.
..
You’ll be incinerated in a hypervelocity crash-landing any second now.
sixty ton drop ship/shuttle carrying Gaunt and some ghosts apparently travelling at some sort of hypervelocity. and will possibly crash at hypervelocity.


Page 78
...reconstituted freeze-dried ready-pulped food rations..
This is, by IG food standards, probably high quality. I mean the odds of corpse meat in it are very very low for one thing.


Page 78
The frigate’s bridge was Kreff’s favourite place in the universe. It was hushed like a chapel and always serene, even though it controlled a starship capable of crossing parsecs in a blink, a starship with the firepower to roast cities.
Frigate can cross 'parsecs' in a blink (of an eye?) and 'roast' cities (in an unspeicifed timeframe.) Whether or not the latter is an upper limit and the actual parameters can be debated, but the implied warp (presumably) speed is interesting. Assuming a 'blink' is about a second or so and we figure 1-2 parsecs (3-7 LY) we'd get speeds of tens of millions of c easily. Even if it were minutes or hours we'd still be talking hundreds of thousands or millions of c. Which is.. possible, but it wuold require explanation since we know they do not routinely travel this fast. We know that high hundreds/low millions is not unheard of, but the warp is frankly not predictable enough for that. So if it is valid (it may be hyperbole after all, and 'blink' is not exactly a precisely defined measurement either.) it may simply reflect an 'upper limit' travel speed (EG if everything is going well for the ship) which is not impossible or inconsistent with at least certain kinds of fluff. Its just... not a typical warp speed either.



Page 78
mperial starships hung in the blackness between it and him: some vast, grey and vaulted like cathedrals twenty kilometres long, some bloated like oceanic titans; others long, lean and angular like his own frigate. They floated in the sea of space and tiny black dots, thousands upon thousands of dots, tumbled out of them, fluttering down towards the ripe planet.
Kreff knew the dots were troop-ships: each speck was a two-hundred tonne dropcraft loaded with combat-ready troops.
200 ton dropships, which is interesting given gaunt had a 60 ton one. One presumes it can carry several times more men. Figure maybe 75-90 troops if we scale by mass linearly.


Page 79
He’d been almost afraid of them at first, alarmed by their fierce physicality. Kreff knew war as a silent, detached, long-distance discipline, a chess-game measured in thousands of kilometres and degrees of orbit. They knew war as a bloody, wearying, frenzied, close-up blur.
Differences between space and ground warfare for the Imperium.


Page 80
He glanced about, down the hold of the troopship where another twenty-five Guardsmen sat rigid..
Carries at least 25 troopers. Several squads, plus the pilot/copilot and Gaunt and Milo.


Page 84
Bragg’s huge face swam up in front of Milo’s, upside down.
“Hang on, Brinny-boy,” Bragg said softly. “Soon have you down.” He started rattling the restraints and slamming the lock handle back and forth.
The restraints abruptly stopped restraining and Milo uttered a little yelp as he dropped two and a half metres onto the sloping roof of the troop-ship.
The interior of the troop ship is at least 2.5 - probably 3 - metres 'tall' at least. Bragg seems to occupy a good chunk of that. Considering he was bigger than Corbec, that says something. He's probably at least 2.5 M tall himself, perhaps close to 2.75m. Probably alot smaller than three metres though, so he's not TALLER than a Space Marine (or at least, not taller than them all.) He's like the Tanith version of a goliath.
Oh and that means they survived the collision. Which means that either the shuttle survived a hypervelocity impact (possible givent he context, but not certain) which would require AG fields to have those inside do so, or it really wasn't hypervelocity at the end and Milo just feared that (which is also possible.)


Page 86-87
Out of this he slid a topolabe from its cushioned slot and held it up by the knurled handgrip. The small brass machine whirred and the concentric dials span and clicked as the gravimetric gyros turned in the glass bubble of inert gas.
After a moment, the machine chimed and published a readout on a back-lit blue display.
“We’re in a forest caldera called K7-75, about forty kilometres north north east of the Nero city perimeter."
..
"There’s dense forest for at least eight kilometres in any direction, and this sinkhole’s about a kilometre deep."
Topolabe. Some sort of electronic navigational tool.


page 87
“If you lashed ’em both to a frame,” Bragg put in thoughtfully, “I could drag ’em along. Better me than four other boys.”
Implying Bragg is at least as strong as four men.


Page 88
The commissar checked the topolabe again, scanning for closer detail.
“Interesting,” he murmured. “About four kilometres east there’s some kind of structure. Maybe an old farming complex or something. "
topolabe again.


Page 89
Suth had the squad’s melta, and seared them a path.
Again Pre-Honour Guard Tanith had meltas as well as flamers. Apparently at the squad level or so. As well as snipers (Larkin in Corbec's case.)


Page 89
A combined force of Royal Volpone 50th and Raymian 13th and 16th had driven a steel fist into the ore-smelter heartland of the hive, meeting the enemy’s main motorised units in an armoured battle in the vast, echoing barns of the starship yards and dry-docks.
Implied all the regiments involved are armoured/mechanised/motorised (the enemy also having motorised units.) Also ground based starship yards.


Page 89
Trooper Raglon answered on the bead-link. “Marauder flights are all out of action, sir. Fleet Command recalled them because of the storm. The Chaos effects are screwing their guidance.”
..
Forget the aircraft, that nightmare was screwing with his guidance. This close to a manifestation of Chaos, his senses were whirling. His balance was shot and he felt nauseous, with a throbbing pain in his temple. Terror dimpled his skin and ached in his marrow. He dared not think about what was out there, waiting for him.
And he knew his men were the same. There had been a dozen spontaneous nosebleeds already, and several men had convulsed, vomiting.
And this is why you need psykers to counter Chaos. It doesnt always matter that the cultists may not be as well trained, or numerous as the Imperial side, when they can bring magic shit like this to bear you can be in trouble. Not only is it denying air cover to the forces on the ground (and preventing reinforcement from orbit) but its fucking with those troops already on the ground physically and mentally.


Page 90
The Fleet Command channel repeated its overriding directive: unless the enemy psykers could be neutralised, the Fleet couldn’t land any more reinforcements, any more of the five million Imperial Guard troops still waiting in troop-ships in orbit. Or deploy air-cover.
As noted before, the storm is hampering invasion efforts rather severely. Also there are 5 million guard total to deploy, and given the implied thousands already, there were perhaps tens or hundreds of thousands in the initial deployment. We know 'hundreds' landed and at least 10K were deployed, which would imply at least a platoon sized deploy ment (25-50 men per ship, which is 50-100,000 minimum, perhaps twice that from the 'thousands' of drop ships implied.)


Page 91
.. his fire-team sheltered in doorways as heavy stub gun fire raked up and down...
..
“A little Mad Magic on that stubber.”
..
He took out his nightscope, a little heat-sensitive spotter he’d used back home poaching larisel out in the woods at night. He trained it up the hall, found a hub of heat emanating from the wall.
Most would have aimed for that, thinking it the body heat of the gunner. Larkin knew better. The source was the muzzle heat of the big cannon. That put the gunner about sixty centimetres behind it, to the left.
..
Larkin punched a single shot up the stairwell and through the wall.
..
..ast the landing where the cult soldier lay dead across his stub gun, head half gone.
Larkin the sniper at work. Its interesting that he seems to use a 'non-regulation' scope for his long las, suggesting that not all such rifles have infrared scopes. We know that they have them in some regiments (and have the option of them) but like with everything this is an evident case by case basis. Of course its also interesting that the Tanith have them naturally, although apparently not available to everyone.

Also a bipod/tripod heavy stubber manned by a single person. Its at least 60 cm long as well, which would make it a rather small machine gun (M60's for example are slightly over a metre long, and M240s are even longer.) 60 cm would make it approximately a very compact assault rifle. :P
Anyhow, Larkin's las-shot blows away half the head. Whether it was a glancing or direct hit, overpenetrated, or if he was using hotshot or not is entirely up for debate (it can be argued either way) but its effective anyhow.


Page 93
Corbec was sure: his life was over when Larkin started shooting. Driven over the edge by what he had seen nailed along the wall, Larkin just went crazy; mindless, oblivious to the otherwise transfixing image of Chaos in that old tenement. Larkin simply opened fire and kept firing. “Larkin! Larkin!” Corbec hissed.
The little man’s howl was drying away into a hoarse whisper. A repetitive clicking came from the lasgun in his hands, the power cell exhausted.
Larkin drains his powerpack in an implied fairly short period of time, matter of seconds tops. What's more this is a long las, and they're not supposed to have full auto settings. According to FFg (and uplifting primer) they do have fewer shots 20 shots for hotshot packs per the primer, and 40 (non hotshot, but still more powerful than regular lasguns) in FFG. Either way we're talking an implied high rate of fire, whether it is semi-auto or full auto or single shot or what. Maybe Larkin just is fast on the trigger.


Page 94-95
The trooper triggered the flame cannon and a volcanic spear of liquid fire spat into the dense undergrowth. Maintaining the spurt, like a horizontal fountain of fire, Brostin swept it left and right.
The trees, horsetails and giant ferns ahead flared and blazed, some of them igniting as if their sap was petrol, some wilting and withering like dust. In twenty seconds, a wall of jungle had been scorched aside and they had a clear view sixty metres into an artificially cleared area.
Tanith flamer in action. Implied duration of at least 20 seconds for the fuel supply, and an implied range of around 60 metres, which is quite good for a flamethrower (, as per here) The duration is also quite good given that link, as there is no indication thta the flamer is even out of fuel after that. That flamer had a 11 kg or so fuel capacity used in 10-20 seconds... so I expect a Guard one is at least the same (although since many flamer operators like Brostin tend to be burly and muscular, he could carry more fuel, although not significantly more.) Its also impressive given their dramatically greater effects.



Page 95
“An Imperial installation. Three armoured, modular cabins, two larger hardened shelters… they’ve all had the insignia spray-painted out. Communicator-array and up-link mast for a voxcaster, that’s probably what’s jamming us… perimeter defence net… slaved servitors mounted into autoloader bolt cannons. You must have tripped a sensor as you came in, major. "
Imperial installation/base of some kind.


Page 96-97
"He requests we… activate the main batteries and present on a target he has acquired.”
..
“Doesn’t this idiot know anything about Naval tactics?” he chuckled. “Fleet weapons will only engage a surface target from orbit before troop deployment. Once the ground forces are in, air-strikes are the responsibility of the attack squadrons.”
Kreff nodded. “Which are grounded due to the psychic storm, sir. The colonel is aware it is counter to usual tactics, as orbital bombardment is not known for its… um… finesse. However, he claims this is a critical situation… and he can supply us with pinpoint co-ordinates.”
..
"Communications: patch me to Fleet Command. I wish to advise them of our next action. Fire control, energise the main batteries… I have a firing solution here. All stations, this is the captain… rig for main weapon firing.”
Commentary on Navy tactics in planetary invasion scenarios. Bombardment is prelimianry before deployment, but unusual (unheard of) during. It seems to likely be a collateral damage/accuracy issue, but it can be done (at least in these circumstances) when precise coordinates can and are provided. We do know of similar cases of tactical bombardments 'during' a conflict, its not always before, and doesnt even always seem to require precise data, but like everything it has to be handled on a case by case basis, because it probably varies dramatically from region to region and ship to ship. some ships may simply have better ground bombardment capabilities than others.



Page 104
“Is there no medicine you can take?”
“I had tablets. But I forget to take them.” He took a little wooden pill-box from his jacket, opened the lid and showed her it was empty. “Or I forget when I run out.”
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The IG provides Larkin medicine he needs. How kind :P




Page 104
Smoke obscured the sky, las-fire filled the air like bright sleet. Two or more kilometres away, he saw the pair of enormous storming ramps that the sappers of the Imperial Guard had raised against the walls. Huge embankments of piled earth and concrete rubble almost a kilometre long, rising high and broad enough to deliver armoured vehicles to the top of the wall. Heavy fighting within blooms of flame lit the ramps.
Below, nearer, the men on the ground looked like insect dots. Thousands, churning in trenches, spilling out across the chewed and cratered mess of the battlefront to assault the forbidding walls.
Given the ramp length it may imply that the Guard and chaos forces are exchanging lasfire at a distance of over km, but that's not sure. Larkin is far enough away from the ground that people look like dots.



Page 106
" A friend of mine, Cluggan, a sergeant, he was a bit of a military historian. He said that at the Battle of Sarolo, angels appeared over the lines just before dawn and inspired the Imperial forces to victory.”
“Were they visions, do you think? Mass hallucinations brought on by fatigue and fear?”
..
“And what were those angels?”
“Manifestations of the Emperor’s will, come to vitalise his loyal forces.”
“Is that what you think?”
“It’s what I’d like to think.”
“And the alternative?”
“Hnh! Group madness! The meddling of psykers! Lies constructed by relieved men after the fact! What you said… mass hallucinations.”
“And if it was any or all of those things, does that make it any less important? Whatever they saw or thought they saw, it inspired them to victory at Sarolo. If an angel isn’t really an angel but has the inspirational effect of one, does that make it worthless?”
Are the Angels real or not? Does it matter if they are? That's always one of the intriguing aspects of the 'magic is real' aspect of 40K - you can literally say this kind of shit may be a hallucination or it may be real. and even if its a hallucination, the way that thought and emotion influence the warp can grant hallucinations a measure of reality.
As an aside this is Larkin' story. We get our introduction to Larkin's characters early in the book: Crazy, somewhat cowardly, a bit unreliable (as this story indicates.) But as this story ALSO indicates, there is an underlying steel to the man, and over time, the things he faces bring it out of him, so that he passes the trials and emerges much stronger for them. One such trial will occur after Necropolis.


Page 108
"That firefight in the canal. Close quarters. Lopra dead, head blown off; Castin disembowelled; Hech, Grosd, the others, the screaming, the misty smoke of burning blood. Corbec bellowing for reinforcements, daggers of light cutting the air."
We dont know how his head was blown off, but it was by some sort of gunfire, presumably. Possibly lasfire as hinted at by the last passage. If so, single/double digit kj likely.
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Re: The Sabbat Worlds Crusade novel analysis/discussion thre

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At the worst, its less than two days, but the context is strongly a couple hours tops. two days at one AU wouldn't be much, a few gees sustained accel and a few thousand km/s tops. If it were billions of km (10+ AU) we'd be talking tens of gees and 5-6% of c tops. If its 2 hours we're talking over 1200 gees and nearly 14% of c travel speed. 10 AU at that time would be more subjective (high relativity from a good 70-90% of c top speed) but it would be high thousands/low tens of thousands easily (Sabbat Martyr calcs). I'm banking omre on hundreds of gees, mayba few thousand
If you get to Salvation's Reach, you might be able to get some better calcs as Abnett spells out the actual distances and times some more.

Basically, the novel involves a space battle wherein the Chaos fleet shows up 3 AU (actual specified distance in-novel) from the Imperial fleet. The Imperial fleet may not necessarily be in the center of the system, of course - But the interesting bit is that very quickly the range gets down to "just" half a million kilometers, in a time period that definitely doesn't take days and likely not even an hour.

Then there's a specific sequence wherein the distance between Gaun't ship and the Chaos fleet is in the region of half a million kilometers. A ten minute interval (we know this because Gaunt's shipmaster is defining burn times) elapses before the Chaos ship essentially closes this distance and they get into much more close-ranged fighting. Probably not quite as fast as the Chaos fleet covering the 3 AU distance so quickly; but the Chaos fleet by this point was under fire and they could have been decelerating.
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