The Tragedy of Kaya Suln

Lusankya · Post by **Lusankya** » 2005-06-03 12:10pm

The ending will make more sense when she wakes up next chapter.

Crazedwraith · Post by **Crazedwraith** » 2005-06-03 12:28pm

Very nice. The imagery and describtion of the force itself is well done, as is the peek inside Palpy's head.

Lord Revan · Post by **Lord Revan** » 2005-06-03 12:44pm

Lusankya it would nice get descpition of what Kay Suln look like (while she's probaly based on you, there are people (like me) who haven't seen you in real life and so can't form picture of a charecter based on you (the Charecter of Jaden Katarn in my fic is based on me but is also descripted in the fic).

otherwise it good

and will she be alive 2.5 into clone wars (she's the character I was planing on using in cameo role in my PSW fic (if you don't mind))

Lusankya · Post by **Lusankya** » 2005-06-03 01:03pm

Damn. I hate describing the appearance of characters. Especially the main one.

Shroom Man 777 · Post by **Shroom Man 777** » 2005-06-03 01:19pm

Revan, check the Photo thread in the Art forum. Lus posted a pic of hers a few months back.

Lord Revan · Post by **Lord Revan** » 2005-06-03 02:06pm

Shroom Man 777 wrote:Revan, check the Photo thread in the Art forum. Lus posted a pic of hers a few months back.

no scale, I can't tell her height from those pictures.

Damn. I hate describing the appearance of characters. Especially the main one.

I hate too, just put she's as tall as this canon character or bit shorter then that charecter (at least that's how I decripted Jaden).

Crazedwraith · Post by **Crazedwraith** » 2005-06-05 06:29am

Ive just had a terrible thought in regards to your sig, Lusankya.

This whole tragedy business, its not the sordid tale of poor Kayla's Unrequited love for Palpatine, culminating in a graphic description of their one night stand and Kayla's execution by Clonetroopers in the morning?

Shroom Man 777 · Post by **Shroom Man 777** » 2005-06-05 06:30am

Eeeeewwww!!!

...

*punches wraith*

Lusankya · Post by **Lusankya** » 2005-06-05 07:41am

Whoever said that the love was going to be unrequited?

Ace Pace · Post by **Ace Pace** » 2005-06-05 10:47am

Lusankya wrote:Whoever said that the love was going to be unrequited?

Everyone..please notice she did not deny a single thing CrazedWraith suggested....

now everyone with me...

*PUKES*

Lusankya · Post by **Lusankya** » 2005-06-05 10:59am

Ace Pace wrote:
Lusankya wrote:Whoever said that the love was going to be unrequited?

Everyone..please notice she did not deny a single thing CrazedWraith suggested....

Excuse me! I did so! He said it would be unrequited love!