Should I rewrite Imperial Phoenix and reissue it as IP Gold?

MKSheppard · Post by **MKSheppard** » 2003-01-08 12:49pm

My LOTR rant got me to thinking about a project that had been on my
backburner for quite a while - working over IP from the beginning and
rewriting it to shorten it, tighten it up, and overall, to improve it, because
that was my first major foray into fanfiction, and I'm always a bit embarrassed
that people nominate it for awards when IMHO, there are better written
fics out there.

Should I start working on IP Gold?

Ted · Post by **Ted** » 2003-01-08 12:52pm

I say do it. There are places where IP can be fixed up, made to flow much better.

Post by **The Yosemite Bear** » 2003-01-08 01:17pm

Just aslong as the directers cut does not exceeed fist of the Empire in length.

Col. Crackpot · Post by **Col. Crackpot** » 2003-01-08 03:04pm

go for it man, i really liked that fic

The Yosemite Bear wrote:Just aslong as the directers cut does not exceeed fist of the Empire in length.

now that you mention it fist of the empire part III was never finished, and that was some damn good stuff! methinks the lovely marina o'leary should be kindly persuaded/bribed into finishing part III , being that it started off pretty badass with Kirk's ISD and the fleet of Husnok ships kicking some serious ass.

Cpt_Frank · Post by **Cpt_Frank** » 2003-01-08 04:02pm

Do it, I luv IP and it was the first crossover I ever read (even before Conquest!)

Stravo · Post by **Stravo** » 2003-01-08 04:10pm

DO NOT I REPEAT DO NOT KILL MIKE_6002 in your fanfic, its exactly what he wants and don't give that little syncophant the satisfaction. Let him languish in the mediocrity that he has been living in!!

DON'T DO IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Setzer · Post by **Setzer** » 2003-01-09 09:29am

If you think your work could be better, then a rewrite is laudable. BTW, Sheppard, could I have a cameo? Maybe as a "Barbaric" Feddie who later defects?

Bob McDob · Post by **Bob McDob** » 2003-01-16 01:21am

Will it cost as much as the original with 30% more content?

Post by **The Yosemite Bear** » 2003-01-16 02:12am

Will it include Deleted Scenes, Bonus movies, Director's Commentary, & Bloopers es well.

Col. Crackpot · Post by **Col. Crackpot** » 2003-01-16 07:11am

The Yosemite Bear wrote:Will it include Deleted Scenes, Bonus movies, Director's Commentary, & Bloopers es well.

bloopers? lol *picturing irate director mark sheppard acting like a ballet instructor* " CUT! no no no no dammit no! You call that an ackbar slash! watch me! full forward thrust, hard turn to port, roll FIRE! it's not that hard people!"

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Should I rewrite Imperial Phoenix and reissue it as IP Gold?

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Should I rewrite Imperial Phoenix and reissue it as IP Gold?

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