War of Two Galaxies Updated (still rated PG)

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Darth Phoenix
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Post by Darth Phoenix »

While i don't mind that you level the empire and the federation power to make a more interesting story i think you give the feds to much power.
It is easier to just downgrade the Imps power.
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Post by Ace Pace »

huge problems of scale I see here :P

how the heck does a single installation make such a huge ship?

oh and the "sympathic" dialouge of the feds is mostly out of character.

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