I somehow missed the Christmas update, so I just now read that plus this ending.
Wow. That's all I can say right now.
Thank you. Reading this was a well-needed break from studying for finals.
Battle of the Hymn. (a second look.)
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SDNW4 Nation: The Refuge And, on Nova Terra, Al-Stan the Totally and Completely Honest and Legitimate Weapons Dealer and Used Starship Salesman slept on a bed made of money, with a blaster under his pillow and his sombrero pulled over his face. This is to say, he slept very well indeed.
SDNW4 Nation: The Refuge And, on Nova Terra, Al-Stan the Totally and Completely Honest and Legitimate Weapons Dealer and Used Starship Salesman slept on a bed made of money, with a blaster under his pillow and his sombrero pulled over his face. This is to say, he slept very well indeed.
Mayabird wrote:I somehow missed the Christmas update, so I just now read that plus this ending.
Wow. That's all I can say right now.
Thank you. Reading this was a well-needed break from studying for finals.
You welcome, my dear.They say, "the tree of liberty must be watered with the blood of tyrants and patriots." I suppose it never occurred to them that they are the tyrants, not the patriots. Those weapons are not being used to fight some kind of tyranny; they are bringing them to an event where people are getting together to talk. -Mike Wong
But as far as board culture in general, I do think that young male overaggression is a contributing factor to the general atmosphere of hostility. It's not SOS and the Mess throwing hand grenades all over the forum- Red
But as far as board culture in general, I do think that young male overaggression is a contributing factor to the general atmosphere of hostility. It's not SOS and the Mess throwing hand grenades all over the forum- Red
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Doh! Ment to put you in there with Wilkens.consequences wrote:Damnit, I demand the death scene you promised me when the Special Edition comes out.
Bah, I lost a couple of my notes, so winged it a bit with some of the wrap up. Sorry.
They say, "the tree of liberty must be watered with the blood of tyrants and patriots." I suppose it never occurred to them that they are the tyrants, not the patriots. Those weapons are not being used to fight some kind of tyranny; they are bringing them to an event where people are getting together to talk. -Mike Wong
But as far as board culture in general, I do think that young male overaggression is a contributing factor to the general atmosphere of hostility. It's not SOS and the Mess throwing hand grenades all over the forum- Red
But as far as board culture in general, I do think that young male overaggression is a contributing factor to the general atmosphere of hostility. It's not SOS and the Mess throwing hand grenades all over the forum- Red
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Since SD High got put in the Completed or Cleaned Up Fanfics despite being a Denizenfic and this actually got completed, I vote that "Battle of the Hymn" be placed in the C&C also.
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SDNW4 Nation: The Refuge And, on Nova Terra, Al-Stan the Totally and Completely Honest and Legitimate Weapons Dealer and Used Starship Salesman slept on a bed made of money, with a blaster under his pillow and his sombrero pulled over his face. This is to say, he slept very well indeed.
SDNW4 Nation: The Refuge And, on Nova Terra, Al-Stan the Totally and Completely Honest and Legitimate Weapons Dealer and Used Starship Salesman slept on a bed made of money, with a blaster under his pillow and his sombrero pulled over his face. This is to say, he slept very well indeed.
I need to shop around and see if anyone wants to go through it for a quick edit. I go through the individual chapters myself a half dozen times before posting for obvious typo's and shit, but I'm sure there are still a bunch in there.Mayabird wrote:Since SD High got put in the Completed or Cleaned Up Fanfics despite being a Denizenfic and this actually got completed, I vote that "Battle of the Hymn" be placed in the C&C also.
They say, "the tree of liberty must be watered with the blood of tyrants and patriots." I suppose it never occurred to them that they are the tyrants, not the patriots. Those weapons are not being used to fight some kind of tyranny; they are bringing them to an event where people are getting together to talk. -Mike Wong
But as far as board culture in general, I do think that young male overaggression is a contributing factor to the general atmosphere of hostility. It's not SOS and the Mess throwing hand grenades all over the forum- Red
But as far as board culture in general, I do think that young male overaggression is a contributing factor to the general atmosphere of hostility. It's not SOS and the Mess throwing hand grenades all over the forum- Red
Did I live or die, just out of curiosity?
This is the price of war,
We rise with noble intentions,
And we risk all that is pure..." - Angela & Jeff van Dyck, Forever (Rome: Total War)
"On and on, through the years,
The war continues on..." - Angela & Jeff van Dyck, We Are All One (Medieval 2: Total War)
"Courage is not the absence of fear, but rather the judgment that something else is more important than fear." - Ambrose Redmoon
"You either die a hero, or you live long enough to see yourself become the villain." - Harvey Dent, The Dark Knight
I did initially write a list of those who died in the epilouge, but it looked clunky and odd so I deleted it and re wrote it.RogueIce wrote:Did I live or die, just out of curiosity?
You can look at it one of two ways; one, if I didn't actaully say your dead, your not. Or two, for the flow of the story, and the fact that it's first person, I only mention the dead people I actually see, so you could be dead and I didn't witness it or you could still be kicking.
I purposely mentioned that Lonestar made it through all right for ulterior motives and purposely mentioned the dead the way I did for credibility in the story. Someone had to die, it makes it better if major or importent people die.
Nobody would care if a bunch of PFC's got killed, but wipe out the CMS and the president,
They say, "the tree of liberty must be watered with the blood of tyrants and patriots." I suppose it never occurred to them that they are the tyrants, not the patriots. Those weapons are not being used to fight some kind of tyranny; they are bringing them to an event where people are getting together to talk. -Mike Wong
But as far as board culture in general, I do think that young male overaggression is a contributing factor to the general atmosphere of hostility. It's not SOS and the Mess throwing hand grenades all over the forum- Red
But as far as board culture in general, I do think that young male overaggression is a contributing factor to the general atmosphere of hostility. It's not SOS and the Mess throwing hand grenades all over the forum- Red
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Is it bad that I didn't notice I was dead until now? Anyway thanks for giving me the glorious last death, kinda brings a tear to my lifeless eyes . Awesome story man, just awesome.
. Awesome story man, just awesome.
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MEMBER of the Anti-PETA Anti-Facist LEAGUE
"I put no stock in religion. By the word religion I have seen the lunacy of fanatics of every denomination be called the will of god. I have seen too much religion in the eyes of too many murderers. Holiness is in right action, and courage on behalf of those who cannot defend themselves, and goodness. "
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CmdrWilkens wrote:Is it bad that I didn't notice I was dead until now? Anyway thanks for giving me the glorious last death, kinda brings a tear to my lifeless eyes
Your welcome, I forgot about consequences horible death, but I remembered what you wanted.
Sergeant.They say, "the tree of liberty must be watered with the blood of tyrants and patriots." I suppose it never occurred to them that they are the tyrants, not the patriots. Those weapons are not being used to fight some kind of tyranny; they are bringing them to an event where people are getting together to talk. -Mike Wong
But as far as board culture in general, I do think that young male overaggression is a contributing factor to the general atmosphere of hostility. It's not SOS and the Mess throwing hand grenades all over the forum- Red
But as far as board culture in general, I do think that young male overaggression is a contributing factor to the general atmosphere of hostility. It's not SOS and the Mess throwing hand grenades all over the forum- Red
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*shrug*
Lonestar and I babbled about some idea's once. He actually wrote an origin on himself based on Battle of the Hymn. Obiviously, there are quite a few things implied in the story that could be used as a basis for another, just the fact of being in a new world and all that, not to mention the Citadel, but at this point in time, I don't think I'll write anything in it.
sorry.
Lonestar and I babbled about some idea's once. He actually wrote an origin on himself based on Battle of the Hymn. Obiviously, there are quite a few things implied in the story that could be used as a basis for another, just the fact of being in a new world and all that, not to mention the Citadel, but at this point in time, I don't think I'll write anything in it.
sorry.
They say, "the tree of liberty must be watered with the blood of tyrants and patriots." I suppose it never occurred to them that they are the tyrants, not the patriots. Those weapons are not being used to fight some kind of tyranny; they are bringing them to an event where people are getting together to talk. -Mike Wong
But as far as board culture in general, I do think that young male overaggression is a contributing factor to the general atmosphere of hostility. It's not SOS and the Mess throwing hand grenades all over the forum- Red
But as far as board culture in general, I do think that young male overaggression is a contributing factor to the general atmosphere of hostility. It's not SOS and the Mess throwing hand grenades all over the forum- Red
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Why thank you. Make sure to join with Mayabird and who ever else for the CC forum. I'm also shopping for some one to go through and do a typo edit for me for what ever I missed.Col. Crackpot wrote:holy crap! how did i miss this? Great work Knife!
They say, "the tree of liberty must be watered with the blood of tyrants and patriots." I suppose it never occurred to them that they are the tyrants, not the patriots. Those weapons are not being used to fight some kind of tyranny; they are bringing them to an event where people are getting together to talk. -Mike Wong
But as far as board culture in general, I do think that young male overaggression is a contributing factor to the general atmosphere of hostility. It's not SOS and the Mess throwing hand grenades all over the forum- Red
But as far as board culture in general, I do think that young male overaggression is a contributing factor to the general atmosphere of hostility. It's not SOS and the Mess throwing hand grenades all over the forum- Red
I think that since this tale has actually ended unlike many of the fics in the Completed Section and is quite excellent if I may say so we should be adding it to the Completed and Cleaned Fics section shortly - unless anyone objects of course.
If anyone is going to go through and fix typos just let me know and I'll either wait for that work to be completed or simply substitute the corrected chapters as they come along.
If anyone is going to go through and fix typos just let me know and I'll either wait for that work to be completed or simply substitute the corrected chapters as they come along.
Wherever you go, there you are.
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Good ending, Knife.
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