Star Crossed Fanfic

Dartzap · Post by **Dartzap** » 2004-06-11 02:38pm

Gary bought him to Palpatine, so we always have time travel, or perhaps cloning as options here, if it is indeed Maul

Post by **NecronLord** » 2004-06-11 02:39pm

2000AD wrote:Wouldn't Maul still have been taken out by Obi Wans cheap shot?

Depends on Gary's powers. Take Q esque powers...

Back in time to Naboo.

Zip both parts of him out of the pit as they drop out of sight, and let the Imperials aboard the doomball, er Death Star stitch him back together (I suspect they could do that, or give him mechanical prostetic legs.)

Dartzap · Post by **Dartzap** » 2004-06-11 02:41pm

Ever read o rheared of a parody called Star Bores?

The Moon Of Doom, Goes Kaboom!

Crazedwraith · Post by **Crazedwraith** » 2004-06-11 02:52pm

Nice chapter Stravo but the cleaned up version stops when the mmetrons conside their f... And then it cuts off.

EDIT: Or not I just checked again, my comp must have been screwed or something. Excellant and mysterois chapter Stravo.

Trytostaydead · Post by **Trytostaydead** » 2004-06-11 05:28pm

great job Stravo! Good to see another fanfic! Hurry up though, I wanna see more Thrawn badassness!

Captain Cyran · Post by **Captain Cyran** » 2004-06-11 06:10pm

SO MANY STORY THREADS! AHHHH!!! I can't keep it all together... damn.

Good chapter Stravo, didn't seem as good as many of the others but it probably has more to do with me not reading StarCrossed in a long time and your lack of time than anything else.

Darth Phoenix · Post by **Darth Phoenix** » 2004-06-11 07:40pm

This was just excelent Stravo. I wish i could write like you.
Anyway i hope the next chapter doesn't take to long.

Post by **Mr Bean** » 2004-06-11 07:52pm

Gahhh.... Starcrossed goodness mmmm

Prozac the Robert · Post by **Prozac the Robert** » 2004-06-11 08:33pm

Thank you Stravo, it's good.

darthdavid · Post by **darthdavid** » 2004-06-11 10:01pm

And the lord said LET THERE BE STARCROSSED!!! and there was starcrossed. And it was goood.

Comosicus · Post by **Comosicus** » 2004-06-12 06:42am

I was almost on the point to miss this update. Good job Stravo. You still keep the tension rising.

Shroom Man 777 · Post by **Shroom Man 777** » 2004-06-12 07:51am

And now Vader is gonna kick ass!!!

Stravo, you rock!

Anarchist Bunny · Post by **Anarchist Bunny** » 2004-06-12 02:38pm

Finally, a chapter where a guy isn't running towards an elevator.

Thirdfain · Post by **Thirdfain** » 2004-06-12 02:42pm

WOOT!

More starcrossed!

BTW, this is by far the finest fanfiction I've ever read. Of course, most FF is poorly written crap, but still... truly fantastic, with gripping characters, excellent portrayals of old favorites, and a truly monumental story line.

Any idea how long, in pages, this would be if it were in book form?

Dartzap · Post by **Dartzap** » 2004-06-12 03:22pm

almost a thousnad i think

Dartzap · Post by **Dartzap** » 2004-06-12 03:23pm

DOH!

flippin Double post

Stravo · Post by **Stravo** » 2004-06-12 04:31pm

Double post taken care of. As to number of pages. Each chapter averages about 20 pages. 70 Chapters. Yeesh.

Thanks for the kind words. I just set out to write a story the way I want to see one. With intelligent villains, daring heroes and epic storylines without fucking reset buttons.

Also re the apprentice's identity there have been a few hints thrown in to give you a good idea of who he/she is.

Post by **NecronLord** » 2004-06-12 05:05pm

Stravo wrote:Also re the apprentice's identity there have been a few hints thrown in to give you a good idea of who he/she is.

If you want to be really weird, you could make it Kirk's son.

Pu-239 · Post by **Pu-239** » 2004-06-12 06:01pm

double bladed lightsaber hilt

Hm... I would think Maul, but who has a "white smile"?

Darth Yoshi · Post by **Darth Yoshi** » 2004-06-12 07:04pm

For some reason this chap seemed short to me. Could simply be withdrawal symptoms, though.

Keep it coming, Stravo.

Post by **Vympel** » 2004-06-12 10:58pm

Stravo, I hope you've remembered Thrawn's trusty Noghri Assassin-Bodyguard when/if the time comes to defend the Grand-Admiral's person from ... undersireable elements in his command.

As to the possible Darth Maul ... we know that both Vader and Luke can kick his arse

Isolder74 · Post by **Isolder74** » 2004-06-12 11:12pm

Excellent Chapter!

I wish I had this kind of a following with my story.

Well we all can dream.

Write away Stravo!

Stravo · Post by **Stravo** » 2004-06-13 01:08am

Vympel wrote:Stravo, I hope you've remembered Thrawn's trusty Noghri Assassin-Bodyguard when/if the time comes to defend the Grand-Admiral's person from ... undersireable elements in his command.

I assume Thrawn had his Noghri assasins already at his side by the ROTJ era? I've been keeping them under wraps in case I'm wrong about this. But imagine this: Kahn's supermen vs. Noghri assasins duking it out in the corridors of the Executor. An image that I've been toying with in my head for some time.

Shroom Man 777 · Post by **Shroom Man 777** » 2004-06-13 01:28am

These bodyguard assassin guys could also explain why Thrawn knew what Khan was doing. An Ace up Thrawn's sleeve.

Post by **Vympel** » 2004-06-13 02:19am

Hmmm. Actually, the Noghri could be problematic. They were supremely loyal to Lord Vader (to the extent that they honored Leia as "the Lady Vader"- too bad they never met Luke, that would've been cool ...), and IIRC in Heir to the Empire it seemed that Thrawn took up Vader's mantle of being their patron.

But-

Who says Vader didn't bring his Noghri along?