Strangely enough...I've seen that in someone's sig elsewhere..."Get everybody and their stuff together. Okay, 3, 2, 1, let's jam."
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Very cool! Can't wait for next part!
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need you ask??IG-88E wrote:VERY well done. Would that I could play the t-bone that well, but I'm a bit out of practice.Kelly Antilles wrote: ANd you will REALLY like the 'bone solo in this
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Damn...Kelly got to first post before I wsa done reading...grr...
Oh, well...LOVED IT!!! Very end was very appropriate. I have a question though: you really like that word "Now" to start sentences, dontcha? I know I have a bit of a thing for usong a word or phrase too often in a certain amount of time, but its your fic, so I'll leave it at that.
Oh, well...LOVED IT!!! Very end was very appropriate. I have a question though: you really like that word "Now" to start sentences, dontcha? I know I have a bit of a thing for usong a word or phrase too often in a certain amount of time, but its your fic, so I'll leave it at that.
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Ah, I see. It was just two sentences in a row that bugged me. I do the same thing, using 'next' or 'then.'IG-88E wrote:When I'm talking to a crowd, I often use a cue word like 'now' or 'okay' to catch their attention. I find it to work consistantly, and keeps their attention on the stage, here it should be.
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Grr....Kelly Antilles wrote:Of course I did. We're each others groopie.verilon wrote:Damn...Kelly got to first post before I wsa done reading...grr...
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Well...I got first post on the second chapter, so NYEAH!!
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Unfortunately, I really don't have someone to say that about...*sigh* And no, Iggy you don't necessarily count...yet....not until I get a few more chapters posted...IG-88E wrote:Kelly Antilles wrote:Of course I did. We're each others groopie.verilon wrote:Damn...Kelly got to first post before I wsa done reading...grr...
True! Very true!
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