Don't push your luck.Zed Snardbody wrote:If I keep saying there to short can we keep the good turn around time? Or are you going to throw something at me?

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Well, if the Alliance needs a fresh source of commerce raiders, or extra guards to scare the Cardassians, they just might get the whole Klingon Empire coming in. The Duros family and Martok might agree upon this.. . . as well as two Klingons and an Orion.
The fic is about what will become called the Winter War of '53 (or the War of Liberation if you're a Bajoran). It will end when the war ends and I show some immediate post-armistice celebrations. Plus I'll throw in an epilogue that will shed light on how the timeline progresses from here.Trogdor wrote:Amazing how everybody except "Bloody" Elijah got the shaft that chapter.
A question, Steve. How much of your alt history do you plan on covering in this fic? Till the Cardassian Union as we know it is no more? Till the end of the Dominion Wars? Or until the Federation finally collapses under the weight of their communist practices?
So far I've had three in mind.Trogdor wrote:Ah, I see. Thanks.
Of course, if you ever felt the urge to write another fic continuing your alt history, I don't think the rest of the board would object.
I, personally, like idea 3 and the Draka Joke equally.Steve wrote:So far I've had three in mind.Trogdor wrote:Ah, I see. Thanks.
Of course, if you ever felt the urge to write another fic continuing your alt history, I don't think the rest of the board would object.
"The Anatomy of a Peace" - "Anatomy of a War"'s direct sequel, detailing the peace negotiations after the armistice and all the politics involved. Not likely to be written considering my epilogue plan for "Anatomy of a War".
Idea 2 would come two years before "Anatomy". I have multiple titles in mind - "The Wrath of Paradise" and "To Die As I Have Lived" are the leading competitors - and the story would entail the end of the Clan War with the invasion of Strana Mechty and the suicidal, hopeless and unified Clan defense of their capitol world. It'd be a short story unless I also chose to follow the post-war period and how the Clan worlds are reformed and rebuilt following the annihilation of the Clans.
Idea 3 was inspired by reading SM Stirling's "Island in the Sea of Time" books (I read 'em because of Marina's "Shang Scenario" set in that universe). It would be set over ten years after "Anatomy", with Sharon Carter and Kristina Ivanova among the characters. The basic idea is that an IU jump capable colony ship of 50,000 suffers a misjump and ends up crashlanding on a primitive world where they have to survive.
That's it for now. At times I've joked with Shep about "Alt-Drakafic", which would be set half a century after "Anatomy" with a war between the Alliance and the space-faring Dominate of Draka.
What about the Plymouth war and the Fed civil war? That should be an interesting read, featuring an opponent that is actually competent, and is somewhat of a challenge given that the Alliance is fighting on two fronts. You'd have those large space battles you were bragging about.Steve wrote:So far I've had three in mind.Trogdor wrote:Ah, I see. Thanks.
Of course, if you ever felt the urge to write another fic continuing your alt history, I don't think the rest of the board would object.
"The Anatomy of a Peace" - "Anatomy of a War"'s direct sequel, detailing the peace negotiations after the armistice and all the politics involved. Not likely to be written considering my epilogue plan for "Anatomy of a War".
Idea 2 would come two years before "Anatomy". I have multiple titles in mind - "The Wrath of Paradise" and "To Die As I Have Lived" are the leading competitors - and the story would entail the end of the Clan War with the invasion of Strana Mechty and the suicidal, hopeless and unified Clan defense of their capitol world. It'd be a short story unless I also chose to follow the post-war period and how the Clan worlds are reformed and rebuilt following the annihilation of the Clans.
Idea 3 was inspired by reading SM Stirling's "Island in the Sea of Time" books (I read 'em because of Marina's "Shang Scenario" set in that universe). It would be set over ten years after "Anatomy", with Sharon Carter and Kristina Ivanova among the characters. The basic idea is that an IU jump capable colony ship of 50,000 suffers a misjump and ends up crashlanding on a primitive world where they have to survive.
That's it for now. At times I've joked with Shep about "Alt-Drakafic", which would be set half a century after "Anatomy" with a war between the Alliance and the space-faring Dominate of Draka.
You mean the Plymouth War and Dominion War, since they're fought concurrently. The First Federation Civil War won't be until 2166 GST, I think. Maybe '64 at the earliest.fgalkin wrote: What about the Plymouth war and the Fed civil war? That should be an interesting read, featuring an opponent that is actually competent, and is somewhat of a challenge given that the Alliance is fighting on two fronts. You'd have those large space battles you were bragging about.![]()
Plus, it would have The Road to Hell characters in it.
Have a very nice day.
-fgalkin
Yeah, that's what I meant. All the dates and events got me confusedSteve wrote:You mean the Plymouth War and Dominion War, since they're fought concurrently. The First Federation Civil War won't be until 2166 GST, I think. Maybe '64 at the earliest.fgalkin wrote: What about the Plymouth war and the Fed civil war? That should be an interesting read, featuring an opponent that is actually competent, and is somewhat of a challenge given that the Alliance is fighting on two fronts. You'd have those large space battles you were bragging about.![]()
Plus, it would have The Road to Hell characters in it.
Have a very nice day.
-fgalkin
Still, that'd be something. And you can insert some Anatomy characters as well.
The Battle of Alpha Paternis could probably be it's own story.....
And, eh, the only RtH character seen so far would probably be Sara Proctor. And she's not exactly going to be fighting personally, except perhaps in the early phase of the Plymouth War, when IIRC I had her acting as a privateer.
Mine eyes have seen the glory
Of the coming of the Lord!
He is trampling out the vintage
Where the grapes of wrath are stored!
He hath loosed the fateful lightning
Of His terrible swift sword!
His truth is marching on!
Glory! Glory! Hallelujah!
Glory! Glory! Hallelujah!
Glory! Glory! Hallelujah!
His truth is marching on.
I have seen Him in the watchfires
Of a hundred circling camps!
They have builded Him an altar
In the evening dews and damps!
I can read His righteous sentence
By the dim and flaring lamps!
His day is marching on!
Glory! Glory! Hallelujah!
Glory! Glory! Hallelujah!
Glory! Glory! Hallelujah!
His truth is marching on.
In the beauty of the lilies
Christ was born across the sea!
With a glory in His bosom
That transfigures you and me!
As He died to make men holy
Let us die to make men free!
While God is marching on!
Glory! Glory! Hallelujah!
Glory! Glory! Hallelujah!
Glory! Glory! Hallelujah!
His truth is marching on.
Good luck, and don't strain yourself on our account. We can wait for the updates, your health and your home are much more important than this fic.Steve wrote:Due to pressing problems (health and financial), I will be offline for a while (several weeks possibly), and unless I get an update done by Friday morning, it's likely to be a while before this is concluded. While offline, however, I will try to finish as much of the story as possible, so long as my current neurological condition (potential neuropathy) cooperates.
Sorry, everyone. I will say that I am grateful to have gotten so many good fans. I never expected this work would get such a huge following.
Second that, bud.darthdavid wrote:I wish you the best of luck. And don't sweat the fic, focus on getting well.
Steve wrote:Seated in the commander's position in the turret of the M3-3A3 flamethrower tank "Trogdor"