Cowboy Bebop: Living Music

Post by **Kuja** » 2002-11-05 12:52pm

OK, I did a little editing to the end. Shoud be satisfactory and clear in meaning now.

Kelly Antilles · Post by **Kelly Antilles** » 2002-11-05 12:55pm

I'm still a bit confused as to the look on whose face and whether or not the proposal was for real.

Post by **Kuja** » 2002-11-05 12:59pm

How about now?

Kelly Antilles · Post by **Kelly Antilles** » 2002-11-05 01:01pm

Much better!

Post by **Kuja** » 2002-11-05 01:05pm

OK *whew* Glad I got it right.

Post by **Mr Bean** » 2002-11-05 02:02pm

.....
Temped... Nope, No winning comments from me, I'm going to quietly snigger over here in the background but I won't think of interuppting the "moment" you two are having

Kelly Antilles · Post by **Kelly Antilles** » 2002-11-05 03:13pm

*thwaps Bean*

Post by **Kuja** » 2002-11-05 03:13pm

Why, thank you Bean.

Post by **Mr Bean** » 2002-11-05 03:20pm

*thwaps Bean*

Missed

Kelly Antilles · Post by **Kelly Antilles** » 2002-11-05 03:54pm

You know... I'm beginning to wonder what Iggy's going to pull out in order to get Spike. This has me very curious.

Post by **Kuja** » 2002-11-05 03:57pm

Kelly Antilles wrote:You know... I'm beginning to wonder what Iggy's going to pull out in order to get Spike. This has me very curious.

Post by **haas mark** » 2002-11-05 04:16pm

Iggy: Very cool. Can't wait for next chapter!

Post by **Kuja** » 2002-11-06 08:10pm

Post by **haas mark** » 2002-11-06 08:12pm

Those last few lines confused me a bit...but I liked it! Oooh....suspense....Can't wait til next chapter!

OOh! 1st post, for once!

Kelly Antilles · Post by **Kelly Antilles** » 2002-11-06 08:17pm

*heh* Good one. Spike's gonna be PISSED!

Post by **Kuja** » 2002-11-06 08:19pm

Uh, Kelly? Spike's the one talking. "I win" is the message to convey TO Adam.

Post by **haas mark** » 2002-11-06 08:19pm

IG-88E wrote:Uh, Kelly? Spike's the one talking. "I win" is the message to convey TO Adam.

Thanks for clarifying that....I wasn't sure about those lines right there...

Kelly Antilles · Post by **Kelly Antilles** » 2002-11-06 08:20pm

*reads back over it* Ok, verilon got me confused. Now I get it.

Post by **Kuja** » 2002-11-06 08:20pm

did a little editing for clarification.

Post by **haas mark** » 2002-11-06 08:22pm

Sounds good. I likes.

Post by **Mr Bean** » 2002-11-06 08:58pm

Can't Phase Spike can we?

Post by **Kuja** » 2002-11-06 09:02pm

It sounded clear to me, but not to other people.

Post by **Kuja** » 2002-11-07 04:02pm

Post by **haas mark** » 2002-11-07 04:06pm

OMG....gave me the chills reading that....

I like that SO much....it was incredibly powerful....

Is there going to be another chapter...? If so, I would like to see how things play out between Spike and Adam's mother...

Kelly Antilles · Post by **Kelly Antilles** » 2002-11-07 04:06pm

*sniff* Way cool.