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Post by **Dalton** » 2002-09-18 07:45pm

I think that title is great

Good story.

Anarchist Bunny · Post by **Anarchist Bunny** » 2002-09-18 08:24pm

Just got an idea, John Clark can be an assassin sent by DS to kill wong.

But he accidently steps in to my room where I was smokin' the mariju.... I mean I was eating medical herbs, and the smoke caused him to get high... errr healed, and uh he falls out.

Post by **NecronLord** » 2002-09-19 12:12pm

hey he used my title

excellent

wheres the in story babe Im meant to get

Cpt_Frank · Post by **Cpt_Frank** » 2002-09-19 01:32pm

Hey Bean this (first) avatar was by far the best you ever had.
Hey Ossus you HAVE an avatar!
Damn as soon as I take a day off the board undergoes a REVOLUTION!!!!

Post by **Mr Bean** » 2002-09-19 01:50pm

Yes yes it does

Master of Ossus · Post by **Master of Ossus** » 2002-09-19 08:05pm

Cpt_Frank wrote:Hey Bean this (first) avatar was by far the best you ever had.
Hey Ossus you HAVE an avatar!
Damn as soon as I take a day off the board undergoes a REVOLUTION!!!!

Yeah, Bean threatened to switch my avatar over to an embarrassing picture of me saying that there were 50 comics--which was greater than my IQ, so I got an avatar under duress. I don't know why Bean switched back, but I like that picture better than the others, so I won't complain.

Grand Admiral Thrawn · Post by **Grand Admiral Thrawn** » 2002-09-20 05:51pm

Dalton wrote:I think that title is great

Good story.

*holds out fresh donuts*

GSD award story?

Straha · Post by **Straha** » 2002-09-24 08:16pm

When is the next chapter???

Oh and the thing that would make this better than any other fanfic would be a MONKEY.

Admiral Griffith · Post by **Admiral Griffith** » 2002-09-24 08:32pm

Grand Admiral Thrawn wrote:In the (hopefully) near future, I shall be writing a SD fanfic. It shall include:

1. It will be like FF. Swords, Magic spells, etc.

2. ASVS, SD.net and possibly SB shall be countries. Smaller websites shall be cities.

3. The main plot shall be about DarkStar.

4. It will certainly include:

Mike Wong
Aron Kerkhof
Wayne Poe
GAT
Kynes
Dalton
Iceberg
SirNitram
TOWNMNS
Elim Garak
Ka'na'di

If you want to be included, ask.

Sounds cool. Mind if I join? I could represent TA(?)

Perhaps I could be one of these:
Big freken useless image deleted~Mr Bean

Cal Wright · Post by **Cal Wright** » 2002-09-24 10:15pm

Hey, toss me in as some silly bastard, or a weapons maker maybe. Yeah!

Post by **NecronLord** » 2002-09-25 06:48am

More more, we want more!!!

Grand Admiral Thrawn · Post by **Grand Admiral Thrawn** » 2002-10-04 05:49pm

Sorry about the huge delay in next chapter. I haven't had any time to right. I try to get the next one up soon.

Post by **Kuja** » 2002-10-04 05:59pm

Hey GAT? You want an assassin in your story? I'd enjoy hunting down User099. *evil laugh*

Post by **NecronLord** » 2002-10-05 02:40pm

bump.

Captain Cyran · Post by **Captain Cyran** » 2002-10-13 05:31pm

Come on GAT, Now that I'm in the story I REALLY wanna see the next chapter.

Grand Admiral Thrawn · Post by **Grand Admiral Thrawn** » 2002-10-18 04:15pm

Quick chapter. Bigger one comming up.

"Poor bastard," MoO said solemnly. "We must return quickly. Trekkies rarely leave their dead."

"Go," Dalton responded. "I'm not returning to SD with you. When the Trekkies return I shall follow them and find who has sent them."

"But what if they find you?" asked Cyran. "If we all go, they wouldn't-"

"GO!" commanded Dalton. "If we all go, do you know what will happen?"

Cyran shook his head.

"I'll tell you what will happen," Dalton began. "WE GET CAUGHT AND DIE YOU IDIOT!"

"He's right," MoO said. "Now we must return immediately. Trolls often return to where they attack."

As Dalton rode off, MoO and Cyran prepared to return. MoO laid down his sword as he picked up the now limp body of Straha and placed it on his sword. He turned to pick up his sword.

And a wall of Trekkie archers surrounded him.

MoO froze. He saw Cyran do the same. He swore under his breath. They'd been waiting for someone to find Straha. If he tried to grab his sword, all he'd get was a chest of arrows. MoO prepared to leap. If he died, he would take a few of them with him. He targeted a Trekkie whose size and armor revealed him to be the Captain. He held a bow with an arrow. The Captain prepared to release the arrow, and MoO was ready to grab his sword.

And the Captain's body fell headless. The arrow flew off, missing MoO by millimeters, and striking Cyran in the shoulder.

MoO saw a Flame Warrior in shining armor behind the fallen body. This mysterious Warsie wasted no time and began slicing at Trekkies left and right. MoO grabbed his sword and attacked as well. He stabbed one, decapitated another. The rest ran.

MoO turned to the Warrior. "Thank you for saving us. But who are you?"

"I," the Warsie began, "am Aron Kerkhof, troll slayer."

"Ugh!" cried Cyran.

MoO had forgotten about his wounded companion. He and Aron quickly ran over. Cyran's shoulder was bleeding heavily.

"Ouch, bad wound," Aron cringed. He lifted up Cyran and through him over his shoulder. "I was watching you. I heard something about going to Star Destroyer?"

MoO nodded. "Yes. And we must hurry. Cyran looks pretty hurt."

Cyran awoke in pain. He glanced at his shoulder, where the pain originated from, and saw it bandaged.

"Wha-what happened?" He said, sitting up.

MoO saw him move and rushed over. "After you passed out, Aron and I had to rush you back to Star Destroyer. Now, if you are well enough to walk, we must go to see Lord Wong."

Cyran nodded and slowly rose to his feet. 2000AD led them to Lord Wong's chambers. They all went on their knees.

"Rise my friends. Tell your tale."

Once they told their tale, Lord Wong said, "Leave us Cyran. Your role in this war is done." When Cyran left Lord Wong continued, "Now MoO, come. I shall hold a meeting of the Moderators."

They went into a secret chamber. There, a table held the Mods of Star Destroyer. David the monkey, eating a banana. Pablo, twiddling his mustache and muttering things in Russian.

"Sit MoO. There is much to discuss. Much has changed since you left," Lord Wong began, "I have banned Dark Star. His stupidity shall no longer plague our forums." MoO smiled, but it faded when he saw Lord Wong's expression. "This is not all good news. Now Dark Star is focusing his eye on ASVS. His strengths grows as flocks of idiotic Trekkies head to his lair. Soon, ASVS will be attacked. I have foreseen it."

"What can we do Lord Wong?" MoO asked.

"That's why I asked you here. You must journey to the great land of Saxton and get a copy of the SWTC. I shall help in the fight against the Trekkies. When you retrieve it, head to ASVS and help the Flame Warriors there. As soon as I am ready, I shall join you."

Before MoO could utter a reply, Sea Skimmer rushed in. He carried double crossbows, a long sword and a short sword, a small knife. He carried Dalton who was unconscious on his shoulder. Sea Skimmer laid him on the table. Dalton stirred and his eyes opened.

"Uh, hi Lord Wong. It was terrible the Trekkie land was. No donuts as far as the eye could see. And it was Dark Star who killed Straha. No wonder he was so beat up."

"Are you well enough Dalton?" Lord Wong asked. When he nodded, he continued, "then you must go with them to Saxton. Sea Skimmer, MoO, Kerkhof and Crayz9000 shall go with you."

"And if Dark Star attacks ASVS before we return?" Crayz asked

"Well Crayz," Lord Wong began, "you'd better hurry to make sure that doesn't happen."

And after a quick salute, the five set off.

Post by **Kuja** » 2002-10-18 04:20pm

Cool! Can I be part of the attack force?

Cpt_Frank · Post by **Cpt_Frank** » 2002-10-18 04:21pm

Where am I?

2000AD · Post by **2000AD** » 2002-10-18 04:39pm

Good thing: i'm Lord Wong's personal messenger/assisstant.

Bad thing: Now that GAT has posted a new chapter i am with out a doubt the tardiest fanfic writer. Doh! Time to get a move on.

Post by **Mr Bean** » 2002-10-18 04:45pm

Yes you are indeed AD

Get back to work!

And glad to hear a longer one is in the works

Grand Admiral Thrawn · Post by **Grand Admiral Thrawn** » 2002-10-18 04:49pm

Cpt_Frank wrote:Where am I?

ASVS. Showing NecronLord his new hot best friends.

Cpt_Frank · Post by **Cpt_Frank** » 2002-10-19 03:58am

Good

HemlockGrey · Post by **HemlockGrey** » 2002-10-19 10:47am

Whenever I see 'Cy' I think it's going to finish with 'ril' but I'm always wrong. Dammit.

Post by **NecronLord** » 2002-10-19 11:28am

Grand Admiral Thrawn wrote:
Cpt_Frank wrote:Where am I?

ASVS. Showing NecronLord his new hot best friends.

*squints*

I don't trust you Frank...

*squints some more*

Admiral Drason · Post by **Admiral Drason** » 2002-10-19 11:34am

This is the best story if ever read GAT

. you should put in a poem like in Lord of the rings. like this, in the land of Dark Star where trekkies lie.

StarDestroyer.Net BBS

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