Battle of the Hymn. (a second look.)

Lonestar · Post by **Lonestar** » 2004-09-22 07:20pm

Or, as we do it on the HIzzile:

* leaves note on RI's Hat that says "I'm gay bite the back of my neck"

darthdavid · Post by **darthdavid** » 2004-09-22 07:22pm

*Leaves not on both of your backs saying "I hate Rhinos." and watches as the rhino from johnny bravo beats the shit out of you.*

Post by **RogueIce** » 2004-09-22 08:57pm

consequences wrote:*appears out of the foreground behind RogueIce*

Ahem.

*disappears back into foregound before he can turn, leaving a sign on Ice's back, saying 'Kick me, I'm socially inept'*

You, sir, are far less stealthy than you think.

*grins as consequences "sneaks" away with the sign he thought posted on RI's back in fact posted on his own*

Knife, you should be honored. Three Warwolves spamming up your thread.

Knife · Post by **Knife** » 2004-09-25 11:55pm

So, what do you guys want next?

Agent Fisher · Post by **Agent Fisher** » 2004-09-26 12:13am

I think you need to have another massive group of morlocks attack.

I really dont know, just keep the story going. hey, maybe those medieval guys will start trouble.

Either way, i would like to be seen.

Knife · Post by **Knife** » 2004-09-26 12:16am

Agent Fisher wrote:I think you need to have another massive group of morlocks attack.

I really dont know, just keep the story going. hey, maybe those medieval guys will start trouble.

Either way, i would like to be seen.

Honestly, I was going to have another big battle next. Thats the problem. That would be three big battle chapters in a row. That is kind of harsh, so I have stopped and I am thinking of an other chapter that is less on battle and more on characters.

Thats why you don't have a new chapter yet.

Agent Fisher · Post by **Agent Fisher** » 2004-09-26 12:19am

Knife wrote:
Agent Fisher wrote:I think you need to have another massive group of morlocks attack.

I really dont know, just keep the story going. hey, maybe those medieval guys will start trouble.

Either way, i would like to be seen.
Honestly, I was going to have another big battle next. Thats the problem. That would be three big battle chapters in a row. That is kind of harsh, so I have stopped and I am thinking of an other chapter that is less on battle and more on characters.

Thats why you don't have a new chapter yet.

PUT ME IN!!

darthdavid · Post by **darthdavid** » 2004-09-26 12:24am

Agent Fisher wrote:PUT ME IN!!

Sounds like a scene out of a porno...

Post by **RogueIce** » 2004-09-26 12:26am

Hot kinky sex scene?

Hmm... Maybe something with families and friends dealing with the loss of their friends?

darthdavid · Post by **darthdavid** » 2004-09-26 12:29am

RogueIce wrote:Hot kinky sex scene?

Hmm... Maybe something with families and friends dealing with the loss of their friends?

Could have some humor in there. I know put talon karrade in there somewhere. That should be funny.

Knife · Post by **Knife** » 2004-09-26 12:30am

Fisher and David wrote:Want to die in the next chapter, please!

I'm on it.

I've put you in. But I understand. I got plans for ya.

Agent Fisher · Post by **Agent Fisher** » 2004-09-26 12:30am

darthdavid wrote:
Agent Fisher wrote:PUT ME IN!!
Sounds like a scene out of a porno...

SICK AND WRONG!!!!! But you are right.

Agent Fisher · Post by **Agent Fisher** » 2004-09-26 12:32am

Knife wrote:
Fisher and David wrote:Want to die in the next chapter, please!
I'm on it.

I dont really want to die. But if I must, I want to go done taking as many bastards as i can.

darthdavid · Post by **darthdavid** » 2004-09-26 12:37am

I want to die by doing something stupid. Like pointing a bow the wrong way when firing it...

Temjin · Post by **Temjin** » 2004-09-26 12:44am

Knife wrote:Honestly, I was going to have another big battle next. Thats the problem. That would be three big battle chapters in a row. That is kind of harsh, so I have stopped and I am thinking of an other chapter that is less on battle and more on characters.

Thats why you don't have a new chapter yet.

Holding off on having a battle for the next chapter of two would be a good idea, in my opinion at least.

You write great battles. But if there's too many of them in a story, the story can get boring quickly, even if they're written very well.

Knife · Post by **Knife** » 2004-09-26 01:01am

Temjin wrote:
Holding off on having a battle for the next chapter of two would be a good idea, in my opinion at least.

You write great battles. But if there's too many of them in a story, the story can get boring quickly, even if they're written very well.

I'm working on a political intrigue type thing. Not my forte' but I'm working on it. Thanks for the compliment, though.

If anything, you, Darth Davie, and Roguie (various incarnations

) have made it worth while, oh and the master himself, Strav.

Temjin · Post by **Temjin** » 2004-09-26 01:03am

I'm glad I could help.

Agent Fisher · Post by **Agent Fisher** » 2004-09-26 01:08am

Knife wrote:
Temjin wrote:
Holding off on having a battle for the next chapter of two would be a good idea, in my opinion at least.

You write great battles. But if there's too many of them in a story, the story can get boring quickly, even if they're written very well.
I'm working on a political intrigue type thing. Not my forte' but I'm working on it. Thanks for the compliment, though.

If anything, you, Darth Davie, and Roguie (various incarnations ) have made it worth while, oh and the master himself, Strav.

what about me?

Knife · Post by **Knife** » 2004-09-26 01:13am

Agent Fisher wrote:
what about me?

Bah, you too, since I put you in Strav's lance.

As I dashed for the tower stair, I heard Stravo order half his men to the north ladders, as I commanded, and then he and Temjin, Fisher and David raced behind us. I paused momentarily at the base of the tower and grabbed a spear off the rack, as did Rogue, and then dashed up the stairs to help my Sergeant Lonestar against the giant Morlock and any who dared come over the wall.

Note, Fisher.

Agent Fisher · Post by **Agent Fisher** » 2004-09-26 01:17am

Knife wrote:
Agent Fisher wrote:
what about me?
Bah, you too, since I put you in Strav's lance.

As I dashed for the tower stair, I heard Stravo order half his men to the north ladders, as I commanded, and then he and Temjin, Fisher and David raced behind us. I paused momentarily at the base of the tower and grabbed a spear off the rack, as did Rogue, and then dashed up the stairs to help my Sergeant Lonestar against the giant Morlock and any who dared come over the wall.

Note, Fisher.

oh didnt notice that.

I figured i would have been in the Nightwatch. oh well.

Knife · Post by **Knife** » 2004-09-26 01:18am

No offense, but the Watch is the Mess. Home Guard is the prevelent SDnetters in the story.

Agent Fisher · Post by **Agent Fisher** » 2004-09-26 01:20am

Knife wrote:No offense, but the Watch is the Mess. Home Guard is the prevelent SDnetters in the story.

oh, okay. that makes sense. But does the mess have 300 members?

Knife · Post by **Knife** » 2004-09-26 01:29am

Agent Fisher wrote:
Knife wrote:No offense, but the Watch is the Mess. Home Guard is the prevelent SDnetters in the story.
oh, okay. that makes sense. But does the mess have 300 members?

No, but I dare you to find a mentioned member of the Watch that isn't a Mess member.

Temjin · Post by **Temjin** » 2004-09-26 02:24am

Knife wrote:No, but I dare you to find a mentioned member of the Watch that isn't a Mess member.

I'll take that dare:

Knife, in Chapter One wrote: Her look turned more serious now, “Ryan is applying to the Watch soon.” She said in plain concern.

Ryan was my son. My second son. His older brother was already an apprentice in Shepp’s Smith. He seemed bound to become a great tradesman and craftsman. Ryan, my youngest son, turned more militaristic. At the age of eighteen, he was of age and free to apply if he wished.

Your point still stands though.

consequences · Post by **consequences** » 2004-09-26 08:13am

Knife wrote:So, what do you guys want next?

IC: "Ale and Whores!"

OOC: A stirring portrayal of Political Intrigue and Strategic Cunning based upon The Book of Five Rings, The Art of war, and The Prince, which leaves us dumbfounded at the insights and subtle manuevers you weave into your narrative, and... ah, screw it, Ale and Whores!