Incompertus Terra
Posted: 2006-12-08 11:17am
Hi friends, this is a fanfic I started writing in during my hour break between class. This is my first attempt write anything fiction so please do not get your hopes up. In all honestly, I never really intended to put this online, but I figure someone out there might enjoy it. Also while I do not consider myself a write by any means, I do like to think of myself as a story teller (I enjoy telling stories to my little cousins when I go visit them) so when reading please think less about individual errors and details and more about the over all story.
None of this is my own, I take no credit for any of this subject material and do no really care if someone else uses it or copies it, or what ever.
I would like to thank the makers and writer behind Tie Fighter for making my favorite video game ever.
edit: Ok friends I looked around and have no clue how to center the text blow, so if someone would like to help a dumb coonass out I would really appreciate it.
A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away…
Star Wars
Prelude to the Future
It is a bright time for the Galactic Empire. Over a remote forest moon Imperial forces are gathering, led by none other then the Emperor himself to undertake the final destruction of the fledgling Rebellion.
On the other side of known space; the traitorous Grand Admiral Zaarin, leader of a failed coupe attempt against the Emperor is once again on the run after destroying a significant portion of the Empire’s advance starfighter production facilities. Zaarin’s latest victory came with a surprise attack on an Imperial research facility housing the secret Vorknkx cloaking project known as To-phalion Station. Despite a heroic defense lead by Tan Maarek Stele’s Alpha Squadron, Zaarin was able to capture the corvette Vorknkx.
Currently, an Imperial Navy taskforce under the command of newly appointed Grand Admiral Thrawn has hunted down what remains of the rogue Imperial force in a remote sector on the border of Wild Space using a tracking device hidden on the Vorknkx.
“Excellent, the fool is taking the bait.” A faint smile edged across the red eyed aliens face. Observing this, Captain Raavin could not help being pleased with himself and his crew. This was the first time that had seen a candid smile on the Grand Admiral’s face in his many years of service, sure, there were past smiles, but they were all calculated and cold, much as the Grand Admiral himself. Raavin had been fortunate enough to be Thrawn’s second in command as captain of his flagship for the last three years. Originally tasked to pacify the Pakuuni system, its overall goal changed shortly after, when news of the Emperor’s Day coupe led to the force being reassigned to uncover and destroy the perpetrators.
“Yes sir. It appears that Zaarin is still onboard the Glory preparing to abandon ship, Alpha One acknowledges that he was not present on one of the evacuating shuttles.”
“Good. That leaves him with only one other means of escape. Have Alpha squadron regroup with the strike force and continue the attack on the Glory.”
Turing to relay the order, Raavin was immediately interrupted by Thrawn. “Wait, delay that; notify our forces to disable the Star Destroyer. We shall need information in conspirators in order to root out other traitors.”
******
“Copy order, Alpha One out,” damn, thought Maarek Stele. “I always wanted to play a part in destroying something the size of an ISD. Alpha Two, target nearest fighter and attack. It looks like we have to finish up all the dirty work while the gunboats get all the fun.”
“Roger that Alpha Leader.”
The Tie Avenger continued on its current path, locked on to one of the former Grand Admiral’s few remaining operational Tie Defenders. Maarek could feel the fear in the doomed pilot’s thoughts has he drove his Tie into the small space between the massive wedged Star Destroyer and the attacking Strike Cruisers. “Target locked, firing concussion missile.” A slight vibration shuttered through the cockpit as a missile rocketed out of the compact fighter almost instantly, weaving and turning as it homed onto the panicked fighter before vaporizing its shields and causing damage to the fighter’s weak fuselage. “Target hit! Proceeding to fire cannons”
“Too late Maarek!” blasted Colt, Alpha Two’s pilot as a debris cloud formed where the Defender once was.
“Damn, that was mine! Oh, and that’s Tan Stele to you!” Maarek replied, pleased at seeing his friend’s rapid improvement in the art of starfighter combat, but now was not the time to think of such thoughts. In the corner of his brain Maarek could feel a tingling, something was about to go drastically wrong. Could this be a message from the force? Sure he had been told by the priests of the Order that he was more then just a little force sensitive, hell, he was one of the Emperor’s leading operatives; The Emperor’s Reach, but he had never experience a sensation even remotely like this before. Sure he had some abilities other than uncanny reflexes and amazing luck, but nothing that he would consider to be more then limited skill in the Force. Of course he wouldn’t dare tell the Prophets that. He would continue to play along and listened to the prophets aboard the Order’s modified frigate Osprey, but he never thought he would be able to…
****** ISD Grey Wolf
“Sir, gunboats Tau and Rou have arrived and are proceeding to disable the Glory, reporting little in the way of fighter resistance thanks to Alpha squad,” said captain Raavin, standing in the center of the Grey Wolf’s bridge. Below him, he could see the countless officers and technicians working diligently to perform each order given to them through the chain of command. Directly in front out in the distance stood the formidable Glory, with turbolaser’s ablaze firing for this life against his proud strike force, but alas, all once formidable things must come to an end and this is one of those times. Zaarin’s crew, while traitors have put up quite an admirable fight.
“Good. Captain, order the…”
“Sir! The Interdictor Corvus has just lost shields and more enemy reinforcements have arrived, im counting two Carrack-class light cruisers, one Victory, and a number of what appears to be non-imperial cruisers, fighter craft, and assault transports such as T-Wings, R-41’s and Muurian transports!” shouted an officer.
A slight ridge appeared on Thrawn’s brow, “Move the Grey Wolf in place to protect her. Then have the Divine Wind intersect those fighters! Then once Zaarin’s reinforcements have committed to their formation, have the Interdictor Twister as well as task force beta jump in behind them as a precaution and engage operation gamma three. It appears our good Admiral is throwing in all his reserves. Good, less to find later.”
While this interchange was taking place, a man wearing a grey Moff uniform slowly emerged onto the command deck from the side entrance. “This better work Thrawn, the Emperor would not be pleased to lose both the cloaking devise and Zaarin at once.”
“You have doubts in my ability my good Moff Doss?”
“No, you must have me mistaken. I would never doubt someone with your high esteem,” smiled the young Moff, “I was just attempting to remind you the importance of this mission.” Moff Delose Doss had only recently transferred aboard the task force before serving as the regional governor of Arteria. He had been given this job by the Emperor himself in order to oversee any political problems that might arise with the locals during the extermination of the traitors in rim and wild space. His real reason for being though was only known to a select few in the command staff; once Thrawn’s initial mission was complete he was to be the supreme governor of all regions pacified in order to prepare the region for an unknown threat. This bit of information though was obviously kept secret in order not to needlessly offend the locals until Grand Admiral Demetrius Zaarin’s forces were eliminated.
****** ISD Glory
The space around the Imperial Star Destroyer mrk II Glory was alive with the glowing green beams of turbolaser fire and eerie blue light of ion cannons frantically firing back in forth, its broad triangular hull showing the obvious signs of battle scaring. The gunners aboard the Glory were fighting for the more then their lives now, after seeing the blue ion bolts, knowing fully well the amount of pain and torment that would surly befell them by the imperial interrogators if captured.
“Admiral, our reinforcements have arrived; moving to attack the Corvus”
Zaarin could not help but smile, all is not lost he thought as he glanced down at a near by display panel confirming the information he had just heard, “Good prepare the Vorknkx for an emergency evacuation. I am on my way there now.”
Outside the Star Destroyer, the Strike Cruisers Daring and Ebolo where converging on the new arrivals, leaving the seemly doomed destroyer it the hands of the Assault Gunboats. Targeting the frigate Harasser, they released a coordinate barrage of Turbolaser fire upon the frigate from both sides, causing catastrophic damage to its shields. Moving in to help their wounded comrades, a pair of Carrack light cruisers lunging in to position themselves between the attackers and the reeling Harasser. At the same time a squadron R-51’s moved to outflank oncoming Tie Interceptors in order to give a wide birth the T-Wings who where attacking the gunboats with their enormous missile payload.
“Alpha Two this is Alpha One, watch out for those fraggin cannons and don’t get in the way of those Strike Cruisers, evasive maneuvers! We have to get out of here and protect the Corvus from those assault transports, leave the T-Wings to the Interceptors. Divert weapon’s power to engines and go to max speed!”
Almost as soon as the words left his mouth, buzzers and lights started to flash all throughout the cockpit. “Colt! I’ve got a missile locked on my ass, going to try to evade it, cover me and see if you can get a shot on the damn thing!”
“Copy Mr. Tan Stele sire!”
“Tan is enough thank you very much!” Smirked Maarek as he weaved his Avenger to a hard port. Using all his combined knowledge and skill in the Force to avoid the missile, he diverted power from his shields in order to up his thrust. Suddenly an explosion rocked the small craft as a lucky shot from his wingman laid waste to the missile.
“Nice shot Alpha Two! Thanks a lot Colt.”
“Not a problem buddy, ok time to take out those transports im locking on to Omega Two, you take Four”
The pair of Avengers dodge in and out fire as they moved closer to their pray. The Muurian transports were large and heavy armored compared to any Tie, but hopelessly sluggish when stacked next to the Avengers. As laser fire racked the side of the transports, explosions erupted above the necked hull of the Corvus as Alpha group managed to destroy or force into retreat close to one third of the assault group in less then a minute.
*****Vorknkx
“Damnit!” sneered Zaarin bracing himself against the nearby wall. He had almost fallen from that last torpedo hit. Hatred grew inside him as he contemplated how the Emperor dared send a blue skinned alien posing as a Grand Admiral of all things to defeat him. Was it enough that the old man spent valuable resources and time devoted to the ways of old wizards? Thrawn, he was trash! A nonhuman barely fit to wax his boot in the ideals of the New Order. Oh the shame to be brought down by one of them and an Empire no better then the kriffing alien loving rebellion. No he thought, this can not happen now, not when he was on the verge of gaining the ultimate tactical advantage, a working cloak! “You must activate the cloaking device at once!” he screamed over the com to the bridge.
“Admiral Zaarin,” cried a young ensign over the com, “the device is very unstable, we don’t know the consequence of activating it while engaging the hyperdrive, much less on the edge of two interdiction fields!”
“We have no choice! Start the initiation process immediately,” Zaarin gritted not attempting to hide his contempt at the ensign for stating the obvious.
“We are now currently cloaked sir. They appear to not be able to obtain a sensor or visual lock, but the power on the ship is finite it will no be able to hold it for much longer.”
“Very well, prepare to engage the hyperdrive,” sighed Zaarin as he finally made his way to the bridge and his command chair, located in the center of a fairly crammed bridge in the frontal portion of the ship, commonly referred to as the “hammer’s head”.
“Engaging hyperdrive”
Good, thought Zaarin. “Once again I have been able to evade Thrawn’s grasp,” he mumbled, “I knew I would be able to beat that…”
Then all went black on the corellian corvette Vorknkx.
****** ISD Grey Wolf
“Gunboat Tau Two reporting that the Glory disabled, and what appears to be the corvette Vorknkx leaving the hanger… Wait now it is gone, it appears to have cloaked.
“Good,” said Thrawn, “My final plan is coming into play. Let’s see how far he gets when he tries to engage the hyperdrive.”
“Sir, where the corvette should have been is now well I don’t know!”
“What? Report commander!” cried captain Raavin, looking feverishly down at the lower control stations then immediately out the view port when he noticed frightened stares. “What the frag is that!” Pointing at the large dark blue vortex located near where the Glory and half of his task force once was.
“Im not sure sir, sensors can’t make sense of any of the readings it must be some kind of subspace disruption caused by the Vorknkx attempting to enter hyperspace, all we do know for sure is that its expanding at an ever increasing rate and appears to be pulling everything in its void…” the obviously nervous commander replied.
“Contact the Interdictors have them drop their fields and prepare to go to enact emergency hyperdrive procedures!” interjected Thrawn in a cool commanding voice.
“Too late sir it’s…” And suddenly the mighty Imperial Star Destroyer started to vibrate and buckle and it turned to and fro inside the vortex.
None of this is my own, I take no credit for any of this subject material and do no really care if someone else uses it or copies it, or what ever.
I would like to thank the makers and writer behind Tie Fighter for making my favorite video game ever.
edit: Ok friends I looked around and have no clue how to center the text blow, so if someone would like to help a dumb coonass out I would really appreciate it.
A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away…
Star Wars
Prelude to the Future
It is a bright time for the Galactic Empire. Over a remote forest moon Imperial forces are gathering, led by none other then the Emperor himself to undertake the final destruction of the fledgling Rebellion.
On the other side of known space; the traitorous Grand Admiral Zaarin, leader of a failed coupe attempt against the Emperor is once again on the run after destroying a significant portion of the Empire’s advance starfighter production facilities. Zaarin’s latest victory came with a surprise attack on an Imperial research facility housing the secret Vorknkx cloaking project known as To-phalion Station. Despite a heroic defense lead by Tan Maarek Stele’s Alpha Squadron, Zaarin was able to capture the corvette Vorknkx.
Currently, an Imperial Navy taskforce under the command of newly appointed Grand Admiral Thrawn has hunted down what remains of the rogue Imperial force in a remote sector on the border of Wild Space using a tracking device hidden on the Vorknkx.
“Excellent, the fool is taking the bait.” A faint smile edged across the red eyed aliens face. Observing this, Captain Raavin could not help being pleased with himself and his crew. This was the first time that had seen a candid smile on the Grand Admiral’s face in his many years of service, sure, there were past smiles, but they were all calculated and cold, much as the Grand Admiral himself. Raavin had been fortunate enough to be Thrawn’s second in command as captain of his flagship for the last three years. Originally tasked to pacify the Pakuuni system, its overall goal changed shortly after, when news of the Emperor’s Day coupe led to the force being reassigned to uncover and destroy the perpetrators.
“Yes sir. It appears that Zaarin is still onboard the Glory preparing to abandon ship, Alpha One acknowledges that he was not present on one of the evacuating shuttles.”
“Good. That leaves him with only one other means of escape. Have Alpha squadron regroup with the strike force and continue the attack on the Glory.”
Turing to relay the order, Raavin was immediately interrupted by Thrawn. “Wait, delay that; notify our forces to disable the Star Destroyer. We shall need information in conspirators in order to root out other traitors.”
******
“Copy order, Alpha One out,” damn, thought Maarek Stele. “I always wanted to play a part in destroying something the size of an ISD. Alpha Two, target nearest fighter and attack. It looks like we have to finish up all the dirty work while the gunboats get all the fun.”
“Roger that Alpha Leader.”
The Tie Avenger continued on its current path, locked on to one of the former Grand Admiral’s few remaining operational Tie Defenders. Maarek could feel the fear in the doomed pilot’s thoughts has he drove his Tie into the small space between the massive wedged Star Destroyer and the attacking Strike Cruisers. “Target locked, firing concussion missile.” A slight vibration shuttered through the cockpit as a missile rocketed out of the compact fighter almost instantly, weaving and turning as it homed onto the panicked fighter before vaporizing its shields and causing damage to the fighter’s weak fuselage. “Target hit! Proceeding to fire cannons”
“Too late Maarek!” blasted Colt, Alpha Two’s pilot as a debris cloud formed where the Defender once was.
“Damn, that was mine! Oh, and that’s Tan Stele to you!” Maarek replied, pleased at seeing his friend’s rapid improvement in the art of starfighter combat, but now was not the time to think of such thoughts. In the corner of his brain Maarek could feel a tingling, something was about to go drastically wrong. Could this be a message from the force? Sure he had been told by the priests of the Order that he was more then just a little force sensitive, hell, he was one of the Emperor’s leading operatives; The Emperor’s Reach, but he had never experience a sensation even remotely like this before. Sure he had some abilities other than uncanny reflexes and amazing luck, but nothing that he would consider to be more then limited skill in the Force. Of course he wouldn’t dare tell the Prophets that. He would continue to play along and listened to the prophets aboard the Order’s modified frigate Osprey, but he never thought he would be able to…
****** ISD Grey Wolf
“Sir, gunboats Tau and Rou have arrived and are proceeding to disable the Glory, reporting little in the way of fighter resistance thanks to Alpha squad,” said captain Raavin, standing in the center of the Grey Wolf’s bridge. Below him, he could see the countless officers and technicians working diligently to perform each order given to them through the chain of command. Directly in front out in the distance stood the formidable Glory, with turbolaser’s ablaze firing for this life against his proud strike force, but alas, all once formidable things must come to an end and this is one of those times. Zaarin’s crew, while traitors have put up quite an admirable fight.
“Good. Captain, order the…”
“Sir! The Interdictor Corvus has just lost shields and more enemy reinforcements have arrived, im counting two Carrack-class light cruisers, one Victory, and a number of what appears to be non-imperial cruisers, fighter craft, and assault transports such as T-Wings, R-41’s and Muurian transports!” shouted an officer.
A slight ridge appeared on Thrawn’s brow, “Move the Grey Wolf in place to protect her. Then have the Divine Wind intersect those fighters! Then once Zaarin’s reinforcements have committed to their formation, have the Interdictor Twister as well as task force beta jump in behind them as a precaution and engage operation gamma three. It appears our good Admiral is throwing in all his reserves. Good, less to find later.”
While this interchange was taking place, a man wearing a grey Moff uniform slowly emerged onto the command deck from the side entrance. “This better work Thrawn, the Emperor would not be pleased to lose both the cloaking devise and Zaarin at once.”
“You have doubts in my ability my good Moff Doss?”
“No, you must have me mistaken. I would never doubt someone with your high esteem,” smiled the young Moff, “I was just attempting to remind you the importance of this mission.” Moff Delose Doss had only recently transferred aboard the task force before serving as the regional governor of Arteria. He had been given this job by the Emperor himself in order to oversee any political problems that might arise with the locals during the extermination of the traitors in rim and wild space. His real reason for being though was only known to a select few in the command staff; once Thrawn’s initial mission was complete he was to be the supreme governor of all regions pacified in order to prepare the region for an unknown threat. This bit of information though was obviously kept secret in order not to needlessly offend the locals until Grand Admiral Demetrius Zaarin’s forces were eliminated.
****** ISD Glory
The space around the Imperial Star Destroyer mrk II Glory was alive with the glowing green beams of turbolaser fire and eerie blue light of ion cannons frantically firing back in forth, its broad triangular hull showing the obvious signs of battle scaring. The gunners aboard the Glory were fighting for the more then their lives now, after seeing the blue ion bolts, knowing fully well the amount of pain and torment that would surly befell them by the imperial interrogators if captured.
“Admiral, our reinforcements have arrived; moving to attack the Corvus”
Zaarin could not help but smile, all is not lost he thought as he glanced down at a near by display panel confirming the information he had just heard, “Good prepare the Vorknkx for an emergency evacuation. I am on my way there now.”
Outside the Star Destroyer, the Strike Cruisers Daring and Ebolo where converging on the new arrivals, leaving the seemly doomed destroyer it the hands of the Assault Gunboats. Targeting the frigate Harasser, they released a coordinate barrage of Turbolaser fire upon the frigate from both sides, causing catastrophic damage to its shields. Moving in to help their wounded comrades, a pair of Carrack light cruisers lunging in to position themselves between the attackers and the reeling Harasser. At the same time a squadron R-51’s moved to outflank oncoming Tie Interceptors in order to give a wide birth the T-Wings who where attacking the gunboats with their enormous missile payload.
“Alpha Two this is Alpha One, watch out for those fraggin cannons and don’t get in the way of those Strike Cruisers, evasive maneuvers! We have to get out of here and protect the Corvus from those assault transports, leave the T-Wings to the Interceptors. Divert weapon’s power to engines and go to max speed!”
Almost as soon as the words left his mouth, buzzers and lights started to flash all throughout the cockpit. “Colt! I’ve got a missile locked on my ass, going to try to evade it, cover me and see if you can get a shot on the damn thing!”
“Copy Mr. Tan Stele sire!”
“Tan is enough thank you very much!” Smirked Maarek as he weaved his Avenger to a hard port. Using all his combined knowledge and skill in the Force to avoid the missile, he diverted power from his shields in order to up his thrust. Suddenly an explosion rocked the small craft as a lucky shot from his wingman laid waste to the missile.
“Nice shot Alpha Two! Thanks a lot Colt.”
“Not a problem buddy, ok time to take out those transports im locking on to Omega Two, you take Four”
The pair of Avengers dodge in and out fire as they moved closer to their pray. The Muurian transports were large and heavy armored compared to any Tie, but hopelessly sluggish when stacked next to the Avengers. As laser fire racked the side of the transports, explosions erupted above the necked hull of the Corvus as Alpha group managed to destroy or force into retreat close to one third of the assault group in less then a minute.
*****Vorknkx
“Damnit!” sneered Zaarin bracing himself against the nearby wall. He had almost fallen from that last torpedo hit. Hatred grew inside him as he contemplated how the Emperor dared send a blue skinned alien posing as a Grand Admiral of all things to defeat him. Was it enough that the old man spent valuable resources and time devoted to the ways of old wizards? Thrawn, he was trash! A nonhuman barely fit to wax his boot in the ideals of the New Order. Oh the shame to be brought down by one of them and an Empire no better then the kriffing alien loving rebellion. No he thought, this can not happen now, not when he was on the verge of gaining the ultimate tactical advantage, a working cloak! “You must activate the cloaking device at once!” he screamed over the com to the bridge.
“Admiral Zaarin,” cried a young ensign over the com, “the device is very unstable, we don’t know the consequence of activating it while engaging the hyperdrive, much less on the edge of two interdiction fields!”
“We have no choice! Start the initiation process immediately,” Zaarin gritted not attempting to hide his contempt at the ensign for stating the obvious.
“We are now currently cloaked sir. They appear to not be able to obtain a sensor or visual lock, but the power on the ship is finite it will no be able to hold it for much longer.”
“Very well, prepare to engage the hyperdrive,” sighed Zaarin as he finally made his way to the bridge and his command chair, located in the center of a fairly crammed bridge in the frontal portion of the ship, commonly referred to as the “hammer’s head”.
“Engaging hyperdrive”
Good, thought Zaarin. “Once again I have been able to evade Thrawn’s grasp,” he mumbled, “I knew I would be able to beat that…”
Then all went black on the corellian corvette Vorknkx.
****** ISD Grey Wolf
“Gunboat Tau Two reporting that the Glory disabled, and what appears to be the corvette Vorknkx leaving the hanger… Wait now it is gone, it appears to have cloaked.
“Good,” said Thrawn, “My final plan is coming into play. Let’s see how far he gets when he tries to engage the hyperdrive.”
“Sir, where the corvette should have been is now well I don’t know!”
“What? Report commander!” cried captain Raavin, looking feverishly down at the lower control stations then immediately out the view port when he noticed frightened stares. “What the frag is that!” Pointing at the large dark blue vortex located near where the Glory and half of his task force once was.
“Im not sure sir, sensors can’t make sense of any of the readings it must be some kind of subspace disruption caused by the Vorknkx attempting to enter hyperspace, all we do know for sure is that its expanding at an ever increasing rate and appears to be pulling everything in its void…” the obviously nervous commander replied.
“Contact the Interdictors have them drop their fields and prepare to go to enact emergency hyperdrive procedures!” interjected Thrawn in a cool commanding voice.
“Too late sir it’s…” And suddenly the mighty Imperial Star Destroyer started to vibrate and buckle and it turned to and fro inside the vortex.