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I started this as just the first 2 pages, and then I got carried away. Sorry for the censors, but I posted them on a pussier forum and had to edit out the stronger words, and I don't want to upload the originals. Hope you enjoy the tale of the massively undersized Clone Wars!

EDIT: Censors are off for the first part.

























To be continued...

That was profoundly stupid

On that note, more humor.

Did you draw this or are you just writing over the real dialog of some comic? If you drew it, well done but even for humor it's totally out of character.

That's kind of the point.

That is awesome.

I thought it was pretty damned funny, actually.

I'm a complete asshole about this kind of stuff but your lettering needs work. Always center-justify the text in the speech bubbles, and fill out the space in them. Right now it just looks ugly the way you have the columns of text left-justified in the middle of the speech bubbles.

It's a fairly minor issure, but it just irritates the FUCK out of me when I see it.

The writing is pretty good, not terribly in character, but it is still funny.

Did you draw this or are you just writing over the real dialog of some comic? If you drew it, well done but even for humor it's totally out of character.

As Shroom Man so eloquently pointed out, that IS the humour.

I'm a complete asshole about this kind of stuff but your lettering needs work. Always center-justify the text in the speech bubbles, and fill out the space in them. Right now it just looks ugly the way you have the columns of text left-justified in the middle of the speech bubbles.

It's a fairly minor issure, but it just irritates the FUCK out of me when I see it.

Yeah, that's the problem with paint I'll use Picture It! from now on. Thanks for the feedback.

Thank you to everyone else for your comments, and here is part deux:

















Yeah, that writing is awful. I'll remedy that for later 'comics'

Oh my fucking god! Keep this stuff coming!

Darth Raptor wrote:Oh my fucking god! Keep this stuff coming!

And upload the uncensored version.

Yes sir!

"Yeah, all five hundred of them. I fuckin' hate EU minimalism."

"You're kind of rude for a clone"
"You're kind of effeminate for a Jedi."

GOLD!

Repost the others without edited text, plz!

Thanks all

Part 1 is now uncensored.

Comedy. Gold.

The awesome continues.

The sound you may or may not hear is the sound of me gasping for breath.

After nearly laughing my lungs out.

I'm always up for a good "Your Momma" joke now and then.

Very well done indeed.

Fuckin awesome. Turns the nice Clone Wars comic into hilarity.

"That's stupid. Jango didn't love the Republic. I fucking hate these comics."

And I <3 that ARC Trooper.

ASS Trooper

The greatest Star Wars character ever. Unnamed ASS Trooper.

I just thought of a great name for him... ASS Trooper Alpha-34. Can anyone get the Internet joke in his name?

General Schatten wrote:I just thought of a great name for him... ASS Trooper Alpha-34. Can anyone get the Internet joke in his name?

...
no, I cannot.

Anywho, those are great! keep'm coming!