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Dark Knight Of The Soul: EU-KOTOR (Mandalorian Wars)

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This is a WIP fanfic I've been working on (on and off, here and there.) It's set during the early Mandalorian Wars so its an EU fanfiction. It's mostly about Revan and Malak with the goal of staying as close to canon as possible.

I don't have a title for it yet so maybe someone could suggest one as I post more. I would also appreciate any CC. I'm thick skinned (a necessary attribute I would imagine for SD.net) so feel free to tell me it sucks balls I should never attempt to write anything again (a reason why would be appreciated of course.) One thing I could use help on is making my work less dialogue heavy. I have a really hard time with describing things (and a terrible fear of infodumps) so my writing features a lot more talking then it probably should.

Since I edit as I go and I'm always revising I'll probably be updating frequently so I'll list version numbers with each chapter.

Chapter One (1.1) - What Can You Know?

Coruscant - Early 3963 BBY

All our knowledge begins with the senses, proceeds then to the understanding, and ends with reason. There is nothing higher than reason

- Immanuel Kant

"A Jedi seeks knowledge, because only through knowledge, can a Jedi make an informed and dispassionate decision, a rational decision. It is because of this that I say, all ignorance is evil." Master Dorak paced in front of the holodisplay, making occasional gestures towards the information displayed on the screen. "Just over three decades ago, one of the most promising of our number fell to the Dark Side because of his ignorance and when he fell, he nearly dragged the galaxy with him." A high-resolution image of a tall man with dark hair kept into a ponytail appeared on the display. Exar Kun, late Dark Lord of the Sith and fallen Jedi. "Exar Kun was ignorant of the dark side's corruption, ignorant of the damage it would cause. He believed he could create a golden age of power and prosperity." Master Dorak shook his head sadly. "In his ignorance, he became evil; in his ignorance, he killed millions."

Master Dorak opened his mouth to continue speaking, but just then, a robed figure stepped out of the darkness of the classroom and stepped partially in the way of the holodisplay. Silhouetted by the light behind him, the robed figure turned to Master Dorak and bowed slightly in respect for the higher-ranking Jedi.

"Master Dorak, if you do not mind, I have a question to pose." The voice was smooth and monotone. The speaker kept the pitch and volume of his voice under constant control.
"Of course Knight Kaviss, your contributions to these discussions are always welcome." There was a shadow of irritation through the Force, which suggested something contrary. The younger Jedi grinned at that.

"Thank you Master Dorak." The Jedi Knight turned towards the class of assembled padawans, still little more than a silhouette to their eyes. The padawans could sense him though, a beacon in the Force. "Master Dorak claims that it is Exar Kun's ignorance that perpetuated his fall and I agree with Master Dorak." Kaviss paused, letting his statement sink in, deliberately letting the padawans form conclusions about what he was going to say. "However, my question is not about Exar Kun's ignorance so much as I am curious as to its source. Why was Exar Kun ignorant? Would he not have been educated on the dangers of the dark side, like any Jedi? He would have been warned repeatedly that the dark side is dangerous and to be avoided. In light of this, I have to ask, how was Exar Kun ignorant? Perhaps Master Dorak has the answer?"

"I would suggest that it was Exar Kun's own disregard for the tutorship of his Jedi Masters that made him ignorant. One cannot learn unless they are willing to." Master Dorak replied.
"You propose it to be a defect in character then? A valid point; you could argue that ethical behavior comes only from a virtuous character. If Exar Kun was not virtuous in nature, then he would be more susceptible to the lure of the dark side; however." Kaviss trailed off, feeling the rising questions in the assembled padawans. He decided let them stew for a few moments. He could feel their curiosity, floating about the room and against his senses in the Force. They were impatient.

"However?" Master Dorak probed. Apparently, he was impatient for an answer as well.

"However, to claim that Exar Kun had a deficiency of character is an assumption. It demands an explanation for this supposed deficiency and for that matter, where it came from. Was it a natural facet of Exar Kun's own persona? Or was it in the environment he grew up in?" It was the ages old nature versus nurture question. "Master Dorak has yet to clarify which of these factors are to be the culprits, or perhaps maybe, it is both?"

"Obviously, I do not know with any certainty; it was only a suggestion in any case. No one can accurately explain why Exar Kun was so ignorant of the dark side's corruption." There was just a hint of irritation in Dorak's voice.

"I have an idea, if you do not mind hearing it." Kaviss said.

"By all means, go ahead." Dorak replied.

"Thank you, Master Dorak." Kaviss said with a nod. Turning back to the padawans he addressed them. "I have a question for all of you; it's a yes or no question, so all you need to do is raise your hand. How many of you have broken a bone, any bone?" There was a group of raised hands among the padawans, about half the class. "Very good, now, I want someone that has never broken a bone to explain to me what it feels like." Naturally, this caused a number of confused mutters from the class. How could someone that had never broken a bone explain what it felt like?

"Knight Kaviss? I do not understand." One of the front row padawans said.

"Of course you don't, because you are asking yourself how someone can explain something they had never experienced. Intellectually, you are aware that breaking a bone is a negative experience. You do not need to experience it to come to conclusion that it would be painful. You can draw a conclusion based on already established facts. However, you cannot explain how it feels, because you do not know it from first hand experience. True knowledge begins with direct experience."

"Knight Kaviss, are you saying that Exar Kun was ignorant of the Dark Side because he never had direct experience with it?" That was a padawan in the second to front row. A pale skinned girl maybe in her early teens. Kaviss grinned again, even though no one could see it.

"I could be saying that, but I won't be sure until I receive an answer from Master Dorak." Kaviss turned towards the Master. "When you said that Exar Kun was ignorant of the Dark side, in which way were you defining knowledge?"

"Am I correct in assuming that you are referring to the difference between empirical knowledge and rationalism?"

"Correct enough for the purposes this discussion."

"Very well." Dorak cleared his throat. "I would say that Exar Kun was ignorant on both an empirical and rational level. He had never directly experienced the Dark Side, and he rejected the warnings of his masters. He refused to listen and learn. He represents the danger in rejecting the corruption of the Dark Side as a threat."

"How could Exar Kun feel threatened by the Dark Side if he never truly experienced it? Understanding that a broken bone is harmful is not the same as having a healthy fear of the Dark Side. The Dark Side is intangible, mysterious. We speak of its dangers, and rightly so but I would argue that the Dark Side is not something that can be truly feared and understood unless one experiences it directly." That produced a flurry of shocked faces in the dim light of the holoprojector. Kaviss wanted to laugh as he imagined the thoughts scurrying about the minds of the padawans.

"That is a very interesting point you make Knight Kaviss; however, if you don't mind I do have a lecture to finish and while this discussion is certainly... provoking, I do not feel it is appropriate at this time." Dorak sounded completely in control, but Kaviss could feel the disgruntlement. Now the Master would be busy the rest of the day firmly assuring his young pupils that Kaviss had not been suggesting that the Dark Side be directly experienced.

Kaviss was chuckling as he left.
***
"Was that necessary?" Master Dorak was not bothering to hide his frustration as he walked with Kaviss, the two of them strolled through the thousand fountains. Their boots echoing on the stone pathways, barely audible next to the constant noise of the waterfalls. A myriad of flora and fauna, taken from various worlds across the galaxy covered the organic inspired landscape of the Jedi Temple's most famous meditation hall. The goal was to imitate a natural environment on the city world of Coruscant, no small task.

"Of course it was. Didn't you see their faces? They were thinking." Kaviss replied. "The discussion forced your pupils to think and apply critical faculties which aren't emphasized nearly enough during one of the most important developmental periods for the average humanoid. Come now Master, you shouldn't be surprised." Master Dorak sighed and stopped walking.

"The disappointing thing is the simple fact that I am not surprised. You are unorthodox and you challenge the decisions of the Council at every turn. Don't get me wrong, you were once a pupil of mine and I respect your reasons for believing the way you do, but those padawans were not prepared to hear what you had to say."

"All I did was challenge your statement regarding ignorance. Any indirect conclusions drawn from the discussion would be just that, indirect conclusions." Kaviss moved and stood in front of Dorak, holding out his arms in a gesture of apology. "If I overstepped my bounds, I apologize, but surely Jedi teachings are strong enough to hold up to my earnest and dare I say, necessary cultivation of young minds."

"In theory, but the Order is... fragile right now, you know that. There are all these factions vying for a voice, demanding a change to the rules." Dorak shook his head. "The Council is still fairly new and they feel threatened by the lack of cohesion. People like you, radical voices that challenge the wave of conservative thinking. That bothers them."

"Because of Exar Kun, because of fear." Kaviss did not attempt to hide the contempt in his voice.

"Of course it is because of fear! Since you seem so confident of your grasp of epistemology perhaps you would like to explain to me how it is that you knowi that there is no reason for fear. After all you never 'directly' experienced the horrors of Exar Kun and you never 'directly' saw what he did so clearly you are in a better position to judge what the Council should feel as a result of Sith War." Dorak spit the words like acid and that was something indeed. Kaviss had never met a Jedi more difficult to upset then Master Dorak." My own words, spat back at me and rightfully so.

Kaviss opened his mouth, but then stopped. He had deserved that, but he would not take back what he had said. Fear and hesitation, however justified, were not mindsets conducive to success. Moreover, what was success? Success is the retaking of Republic territory and the destruction of the Mandalorian Clans as a threat.

"You make a point Master Dorak, a clever point; however, your point does not change the situation. It does it make fear and indecision any more valid than before. It only makes them more understandable."
"Yes, I thought you might see it that way." Master Dorak turned and glanced up at a nearby waterfall, seemingly watching as the water slid down a carved slope designed to imitate a true geological feature. "I did study the reports you know, from the front lines."

"Oh?" Kaviss asked, surprised at the sudden change in subject.

"Three invasion corridors attacked overnight." Dorak sighed and shook his head sadly. "And for what? A misguided warrior ethos that brings only destruction with it."

"They are violent savages; what does the Council expect will happen? That they will be defeated by the Republic alone?" Kaviss shook his head. "The Mandalorians are warriors, to the core they are professional soldiers."

"The Republic is not without its defenses."

"Inadequate defenses, if the disaster of the False War is to be any indicator. Mandalore made fools of some of the brightest minds in the Republic Navy."

"Maybe he will make fools of us all." Dorak muttered. Kaviss looked at him in surprise and received a blank stare in response. "Maybe, he will even make a fool of you." Kaviss could barely hear those last words. "But I digress. I am tired. I will speak with you later." Dorak gave Kaviss a nod and left him standing there alone on the walkway.
***
"Something must be done about this Mandalorian menace!" Senator Akarius Vallin shouted towards the thousands of senators assembled for the session. "They have raced down three invasion corridors in what seems like overnight. They must be stopped and only by declaring a true state of emergency can the proper resources be allocated to stem the barbarians."

Kaviss, listened with distracted interest as the Galactic Defense Party, argued granting greater authority to the Joint Chiefs of Staff, the cobbled together coalition of Republic Command. It was a haphazard merging of local fleets with the regular Republic Army and Navy. The command structure was an absolute mess. Planetary militias would be integrated into standing army units, often at random, based on what planets sent forces to the war effort and when. Command consisted of desk Admirals more attuned to politics than war, while field generals were forced to coordinate, often poorly, with the Rear Admirals along the front lines.

In contrast, the Mandalorians were unified behind one man and a highly professional and organized system. The irony was that the Republic forces outnumbered them by several magnitudes. Incompetence and a lack of proper organization was killing the war.

"The situation does not warrant such centralized control!" That was Senator Keida Eris from the powerful Mid Rim system of Antara . Racist against aliens and fiercely independent, the Antaran Confederation no doubt disliked the idea of their precious fleets falling under the direct control of the Joint Chiefs. Senator Eris did not seem to suffer too badly from her world's xenophobic overtones, which Kaviss could appreciate, among other things about the beautiful Senator. The Mandalorians ravage the Outer Rim and yet these Senators bicker over irrelevant power plays. It was really a pity that Senator Eris had to be on the wrong side of the political spectrum. That didn't stop her from inviting you out to dinner. "Something that worries me." Kaviss muttered to himself. He turned back to his gaze of the Senate Chamber as one of the floating senatorial pods drifted outward so that a new voice could address the issue.

"I am inclined to agree with Antara's position. The Mandalorians can be defeated with the forces already deployed in the field. A State of Emergency would only propagate unrest and fear among the masses." It was the Senator from Corellia, typical of the fiercely nationalist system to side with other fiercely nationalist systems, common good be damned.

"How can you stand there for hours and not get bored to death?" The question and voice belonged to Kaviss' best friend and fellow Jedi Knight, Alek Squinquargesimus. A giant of a man with a giant last name, Kaviss felt that Alek's size was fitting. He was as cumbersome as his impossible to pronounce home village. Alek tended to tower over most people and indeed, he gave the appearance of towering over Kaviss, although the two were closer in height that most people realized. Alek just had this way of looking like a giant

"Its politics Alek; you have no idea how entertaining it is to read the faces of these senators, to listen to the brief whispers of thought that float through the air." Kaviss grinned. He loved these games, loved the challenge of navigating through the word maze these senators spun. No other group in the galaxy was adept at spewing verbal banthashit as these people.

"If you say so." Alek muttered, doubtfully. Alek had never displayed any interest in politics, which suited Kaviss fine. Alek was not suited for reading people. Not that this was so much about reading people as more about shifting through all the garbage the senators were spewing and trying to find the rare gems if truth beneath.

"The session should be over soon and then we can―"

"―when are you going to take an apprentice?"

"What kind of random question is that?" Kaviss demanded. "And how does that relate at all with what we were just talking about?"

"It's a valid question I've been meaning to ask and I figured now would be good a time as any." Alek replied, shrugging as if it was a small issue. "You have been a Knight for five years now and yet in none of those five years have you decided to take an apprentice."

"Your point being?"

"When are you going to take a Padawan?"

"I don't know Alek, when I find the right one I guess. My standards are high."

"You mean strange. Your standards are strange, not high."

"Whatever you say Alek." Kaviss paused and leaned back towards the window, watching as the senators began to file out of the massive chamber. The last of the Senators had given their closing arguments for the day and nothing more would happen until the senate reconvened to vote. Normally the voting would have taken place now, but the arguments had dragged on too long.

"You know they have a nickname for you now?"

"Oh, what is it?" Kaviss never watched the holonet. The media was too full of biased nonsense.
"The Revanchist, of all things, due to your aggressive policy of retaking captured systems from the Mandalorians."

"Well, I suppose that at least leaves little doubt at where I stand." Kaviss murmured in response. Labels could be useful, if properly applied.

"The Council is going to have a fit you know." Alek warned, but Kaviss waved his hand dismissively.
"Let the old bastards stew; their opinion is becoming increasingly meaningless to me anyways. They tell me we need to asses the situation, as if there was anything to asses!" Kaviss shook his head. "They are paralyzed by indecision, chained by the past."

"Exar Kun." Alek offered.

"He put the fear of the light into them and even now it still holds them in a vice grip."
"I heard about your stunt with Master Dorak's class." Alek chuckled. "Figures you would be the one to ruin his class."

"I didn't ruin anything; I encouraged his students to think for themselves. The Order could use some independent thinking." Kaviss turned away from the window and stared towards the hallway that circled around the rotunda. "Padawans need to come to their own conclusions about the galaxy and the Force. Getting dogma spoon fed to them helps no one." It was getting darker out, with Coruscant's dwarf sun casting dim shadows across the sparkling cityscape.

"That's dangerous thinking." Alek muttered, following behind.

"Dangerous thinking is the best kind of thinking." Kaviss replied. Raising up his wrist he checked his chrono. It was getting late. "I have to go."

"Why? What's happening tonight?" Alek asked.

"I'm having dinner with Senator Keida Eris of Antara."

"Isn't that the beautiful blond lady that always shouts at the Senators of the Galactic Defense Party?" Kaviss grinned at Alek's description.

"The one and only. I'm going to convince her to switch sides and throw Antares support behind the GDP."

"And you will do this how?" Alek asked.

"I haven't a clue. She picked this very expensive restaurant, ridiculously expensive." Kaviss frowned as he considered how many credits this was likely to cost him. It was not as if Jedi just carried around credits to throw away like trash, well most Jedi did not. Some of the richer dynasties were sufficiently wealthy. Kaviss should know; he had borrowed money from one of those richer dynasties.
"Do you even know this woman aside from her reputation?" Kaviss responded to a question like that with the expression it deserved, a flat frown.

"Stupid question." Alek muttered

"We've met, spoken to each other at several senatorial functions, at length. You could say we are friends of a sort, star-crossed politically hostile friends. Due to my 'hardline' position on security, I have become something of a known political force. Why else would they be giving me nicknames?"

"Going out to dinner still seems rather personal."

"I suppose it is. It was not my idea mind you. She was the one who asked me if I was available and I could hardly refuse no could I?"

"No, you really couldn't." Alek replied.

"Exactly, I suspect she noticed that I am beginning to gain considerable political support in high circles. I wonder if she expects to sway me to her side."

"The Independence Party?" Alek asked.

"That's the one she's part of; its lead by Corellia of course, naturally. With both Corellia and Antara having rebellious streaks in them, it makes sense for the two to be political bedfellows."

"And your goal is to convince her that it is in Antares' best interests to support the Galactic Defense Party?"

"Precisely."
***
Kaviss felt out of place. It was his dark brown robes. They very plain and the high-class restaurant that he was in was most decidedly the opposite of plain. It was extravagance and luxury personified into a building. From where he sat, Kaviss could see the vast expanse of Coruscant below; an endless city of glittering lights that shined against the dark sky. It was such a strong contrast from where he had come from. Here in Coruscant, everything that was worth seeing shined or glittered. In a way it was ironic, because Coruscant was a barren rock beneath all that glitter. The ecosystem of this world had been devastated long ago, so now it was all artificial. The very air he breathed and enjoyed was processed. It was a wonder that it did not glitter as well.

Kaviss also felt out of place when he considered the company he was keeping as she sat across from him. Keida apparently had some desire to make Kaviss feel more awkward then he already did. Her black dress, a luxurious item of nanosilk and glittering sparkles, had apparently been designed by someone who's sense of modesty was a quite bit different from anything Kaviss was aware of.

"Master Kaviss, I am so glad you could meet me like this." Keida said, smiling. She had done her hair up in elaborate pile of golden curls that still allowed blond ringlets to fall just short of her bare shoulders. Kaviss could have sworn she had spent hours arranging that hair.

"I'm not a Master, just a Knight." Kaviss corrected her and not for the first time. He thought she might have done it on purpose.

"My apologies Knight Kaviss." She smiled again, lighting up her face. Keida was one of those women that would look pretty doing anything. Smiling, scowling, frowning, glaring, shouting, crying, grinning. Name the expression and she would still look good.

"No, no, there is no need to apologize. It's a common mistake." Kaviss tugged at his menu―a small flexible datapad―with the Force and snatched it to his hands. Keida's eyes flashed briefly at the stunt and Kaviss could feel a slight blip of unease flowing from her presence in the Force. "Many people have a number of misconceptions about Jedi." That unease wavered, moving back and forth between curiosity and suspicion. That was just fine with Kaviss. The idea was to keep her guessing. About what?

"I would recommend the Corellian Special, its one of the best platters this establishment serves." The Senator offered.

"Corellian you say? I wouldn't know, I've never been to a place this expensive in my life."
"It wasn't a burden to pay for was it?" It was almost quaint. The Senator sounded concerned. She looked concerned. The Force told Kaviss that she was not.

"No; we Jedi are a big happy, sharing family." That was a load of banthashit. Begging the Draay Estate for money had been one of the most embarrassing moments of Kaviss' life.

"I'm glad to know that this caused no stress on your part." Was that smugness he felt? He wanted to roll his eyes at senators and their vast wealth, at Keida and her vast wealth. "To be fair, I have been interested in your arguments for quite some time now. Those relating to the Mandalorian threat have piqued my interest."

"Couldn't you have simply watched them on the holonet? I am a Jedi, not a politician. What I say in public is no different than what I say in private." That was another load of banthashit, but she had to know that.

"Perhaps that is so, but you intrigue me Knight Kaviss. Perhaps because you are always hiding under that hood; perhaps because you had never said on the holonet why you support the hardline approach. You only tell the public why it should be done. Even during our previous talks, you have always skirted around the issue. I know Jedi aren't the easiest people to make friends with, but you. I can pin down nothing about you."

"I spent the first five years of my life in some of the worst places imaginable. In places like that, the strong crush the weak on a daily basis. Perhaps this offends me; perhaps it upsets me when I see the Mandalorians moving unchecked through Republic space. Perhaps, I feel we should present a united front against such aggression."

"Your anger and drive is personal then." Keida noted, but Kaviss was already shaking his head, having heard the thought form in her head before she had spoken it.

"No, this isn't about me, this is about justice. This is about defending the Republic from one of the savage and violent cultures in the galaxy." Only careful control kept the anger from his voice. Unlike most Jedi, he did not suppress his negative emotions. He did not embrace them either―for obvious reasons―but he did not feel that holding them down would accomplish anything. He let them run their course, but did not let them control him. Denial of one's emotions helped no one.

"You have voiced your disapproval of my political stance before. Tell me again, but why?" Keida was eying him with an unreadable expression. However, through the Force, Kaviss could read her easily enough. She was still curious.

"I do not believe it is helpful." It was diplomatic as Kaviss would be on his opinion concerning her position.

"Have you considered that it is not my position so much as it is the position of my constituents? I am an elected official after all." She really did sound like she was trying to defend herself.

"Then I suggest you educate your constituents on the more violent aspects of this growing conflict." Kaviss said, in harsher tones then he intended. Keida cocked her head to the side, as if she was listening to something. It was the gesture people made when they had something to say, but were not sure how to say it. "The Mandalorians will not stop at the Outer Rim, or the Mid Rim, they will burn a path all the way to Coruscant if they can."

"You sound so certain." She paused and looked down at her own menu. "In any case, we can continue these discussions after we eat. I'm hungry." She looked at him and popped that smile again. "The Corellian special is a rather large serving." She looked up at him. "Would you like to share?" At her suggestion, Kaviss narrowed his eyes suspiciously.

"Share? If that's the case than you can pay for it and I can return the money I had to borrow."

"I thought the Jedi shared everything."

"I lied. I had to ask for credits from a friend in the Draay Family."

"The Jedi family dynasty here on Coruscant?"

"The one and only. Despite the Order's new focus on living simple lives free of possessions, such sentiments don't tend to stick when you are rich."She made a noise in response to that, an amused sound. Maybe she thought it was funny? Kaviss certainly did not.

Keida pulled a credit chip from… somewhere, and inserted it into her menu. Kaviss' eyes nearly boggled as he saw the number flash across the screen. That was ridiculous! He could have fed himself for a standard month, maybe longer, on such a sum.

"Next time you and I eat together, I will expect you to pay." There will be a next time? Kaviss hoped so; he could happily spend time with this woman.

"If I am going to be paying then I hope you like regular food, common food. The kinds of foods that poor bastards like me eat."

"You could save up the money the Order gives you." Keida replied.

"And starve just to please you?" Kaviss grinned. "I'm not that desperate, not yet anyways."

"You could at least show me your face, maybe try and look like you belong. I've been getting stares since I first sat down." In other words, she was telling him he stood out. Kaviss agreed with her.
Kaviss kept his face hidden for several reasons. Mostly because he liked to be able to move around freely with his hood down and not get swarmed by holonet reporters. He supposed it would not hurt to show his face at this place. Not even the reporters could afford this exercise in decadence. With a flick of the Force, he knocked his hood back, revealing his face to Keida.

"Hmm, it's almost a pity." She murmured as she stared at him. She was tapping a glittery nail against the tip of her chin, looking over him like Kaviss would look at an expensive piece of merchandise that he wasn't sure he liked or not.

"What is?"

"You have the face and the hair of a holovid actor, complete with the most stunning green eyes I've ever seen, yet you hide it under a hood all day."

"The less people know what I look like, the easier it is to avoid holonet reporters."

"Wouldn't someone like you want to be noticed by the reporters? Considering your aggressive political tendencies." Kaviss was shaking his head again. She did not understand, but then, he had not expected her to.

"None of this is about me; it's about what is best for the Republic. Who I am, is not important; however, my message is important. The Mandalorians must be stopped. If people start to focus on me, then they would forget my message."

"Your message doesn't sound―ah here is the food." An actual, living waitress, dressed almost as absurdly as Keida, arrived with a large platter of salad, some meat that Kaviss couldn't identify, and various side dishes. As his nose picked up the spicy smell rising from the meat, his stomach rumbled in anticipation.

"What kind of meat is that?" He asked.

"Smoked nerf. The salad is made from greens imported all the way from Corellia." Keida replied.
"Because importing lettuce from a location thousands of light years away, makes it taste better." Kaviss shook his head. The money people would waste was beyond his ability to understand. He had been born on a miserable world in the Unknown Regions, and had never seen so much as a credit until Master Kreia had rescued him.

"It's a failing of the rich. We need to find ways to waste our vast mounts of wealth." Keida said with a grin. Kaviss did not share her amusement and he made sure she realized it, compressing his lips into a flat line. As she involuntarily winced, Kaviss idly wondered if he was a bad Jedi for expressing his displeasure in such a way. "I am sorry, that was uncalled of me." She said. "I forgot that you came from a―"

"―it is nothing." Kaviss said, waving a hand dismissively, stopping her before she could blunder a second time. Came from what? A broken world? Yes, I did. Don't bring it up.

"No, it isn't 'nothing.' I said something offensive and I shouldn't have." To Kaviss' surprise, the regret was genuine. Perhaps not all politicians were complete slime balls. Not that he would have ever categorized Keida as a slime ball. That term just did not fit her. A fine oil, scented of course. That was a more appropriate comparison.

"I thank you for your apology. In any case, I'm hungry, so unless you have any religious preferences you wish to observe before you eat, I'm going to dig in." Kaviss snatched up his fork and knife and was about to slice into the nerf when he felt it. Something was wrong. Quietly, he set his utensils down and instinctively glanced over towards a table across the floor.

There was a woman, looking like someone Kaviss would expect for a patron of this place. She had dark black hair, wore fancy red nanosilk dress if heavier than normal, and had huge brown eyes. Mentally, Kaviss filed her appearance away for future reference. Everything looked normal, except something was wrong. The Force was telling him that not all was right. She is alone. Now that was odd, although not a valid enough reason for Kaviss to bother her.

"Is something wrong?" Keida asked.

"There could be. I sense something." Kaviss' shoulders itched. He wanted to stand and glance around at the danger racing from behind him. Except there was nothing save for the woman at the other table. What was the problem then?

"You sense something? What does that mean?"

"It means that—" Kaviss stopped and closed his mouth. How could he possibly explain this to someone that had no knowledge of any kind of what the Force was? Another issue to where the definition of knowledge rears its head. If he wasn't sensing a disturbance in the Force, Kaviss might have chuckled. "It means that something is wrong or at least the Force is disturbed by something. It is nothing major, just like an itch on my shoulder. Something is out of place and to be honest it might not even be here at the restaurant." Kaviss sighed. "Forget about it."

"Very well." Keida replied. She was looking at him strangely, but then who could blame her?
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Re: Untitled SW Fanfic: EU-KOTOR (Early Mandalorian Wars)

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Chapter Two - Doubt (Version 1.0)

I had therefore to remove knowledge, in order to make room for belief.
- Immanuel Kant

"Zoom in here, on his face. Yes, yes, very good!" Zarik Charr, scrambled about the system of holo-projectors, hastily giving orders to the techs working on pre-production clips for Coruscant's nightline news feature. "This is excellent; we are the only ones with an actual clip of his face!" Zarik clapped his pudgy hands in glee. Coru-NewsCorp's ratings would skyrocket on the holonet after this footage was broadcast. "Make sure you get his eyes! His eyes! And blast it, can't we get the sound quality any better? I want to hear what they are saying!"

"We didn't interview them though. The Senator could sue us for that." One of the techs said doubtfully.
"Did I ask for your opinion?" Zarik snapped. "Get on with it!"

"I did rather well didn't I?" Charlettas Korr smiled and tugged at her red dress, curling her full lips into a sneer. "He looked at me once and I thought for sure he was about to walk over and ask what I was doing—damn Jedi and their senses—but he didn't. He talked with her until the early hours of the morning and never looked over at me again."

"You did marvelous my dear, absolutely marvelous. As soon as the techs are finished, we should have this on the midday news." Zarik was rubbing his hands together in anticipation. None of the other news agencies had managed to get a look at the Revanchist's face; the man was notoriously private, but Zarik's genius had landed him the prize that all the major channels had been desperately after. Thinking on how amazing he was, made Zarik want to clap his hands again. The nerves in his wrists and fingers quivered with the idea.

The Revanchist sat at a table with the well known Senator from Antara, eating and conversing. It was a curious occurrence, at least in Zarik's mind. Politics being such a money maker, he was fully aware of the political associations of the Revanchist and Antara's Senator. Why would two political enemies be engaged in such a private discourse? A secret relationship? Hidden alliances? Zarik had no idea, but that hardly mattered because he didn't have to know. All he had to do was make light of it on the holonet and the millions of viewers would do the rest for him. Rumor would give birth to dozens of children and those children would give birth to their own children and so on, until the original story had been mangled and twisted into utter nonsense. And Zarik was going to make a fortune off of it all.
* * *
Kaviss was not used to failure; he was used to success. Tonight had been a failure. Keida had not wavered in her opinion, fear of her constitutes made sure of that. If Kaviss had been feeling vindictive he supposed he could of accused her of being weak in the face of an impending crisis, but Kaviss found it impossible to hold any negative feelings towards the woman. Keida had that particular power over men that even years of Jedi control couldn't ignore. At least the night had not been a complete failure. They had another dinner planned next standard week. Kaviss was fine with that.

Alone in the temple's practice yard, he was standing still in the center of a large training mat. It was in the early morning, but Kaviss had needed some way to work his frustrations out and slicing up saber training droids was always a good way to do so.

Snap hiss.

A blue blade flashed out suddenly, stabbing towards Kaviss as one of the training droids jumped out from the darkness. Moving on instinct alone, Kaviss leapt aside, falling into a roll, deftly moving out of the droid's range. A sudden flash of images flickered in his mind's eye, telling Kaviss what would happen next. A second droid was rushing towards Kaviss from behind, even as the first one rushed towards his left.

With a pump of his legs and a boost of the Force, Kaviss burst into the air and flipped over the first droid, his blue saber flashing out in midair to knock aside a stab towards his midsection. With reflexes only a machine had, the droid whirled around and attempted to slam its durasteel fist into Kaviss' gut the moment the Jedi landed. Having already seen the move, Kaviss, slashed across with his saber, slicing off the droid's hand in a shower of sparks. He would have continued to slice the machine up, but droid number two stopped him with its sudden arrival. In response, Kaviss dodged backwards, using the Force to enhance his distance, evading a slash at his torso.

Having put space between the droids, Kaviss threw his saber at droid number two, while he rushed droid number one, moving to slam the machine with a kick to its photoreceptors. That didn't go as planned when both droids opened with a flash of blaster fire from their built in stunners. Without his saber in hand, Kaviss held up his palms and reflected the bolts with the Force alone, directing them back towards the droids even while he used the Force to summon his deactivated saber from its spot on the floor where it had been knocked aside.

Kaviss had built the droids for his personal use, although Alek used them often enough as well. The catch was that he had to repair them using his own resources, which could get tiresome at times. The problem of how he would repair them after this session vanished from his thoughts as they both rushed at him. Droid number one with its missing left hand had switched into a Makashi form, while droid number two was putting its metal mass to its advantage, using the powerful Djem So form.

Kaviss closed his eyes and rushed forward to meet them, bringing up his saber in a defensive routine, using the Force to guide his movements, deflecting the sudden furious flurry of blows. If he had his eyes open, he could have seen the flares of light that lit up the training room like lightning. Instead, his physical sight showed only darkness. He was relying on his metaphysical sight; warning him of the sudden fluctuations in energy from the Force invisible droids, guiding his saber, knocking away blows that would have overcome him otherwise.

Spinning his saber into a line of defense, Kaviss began to move back, looking for an opening. Normally, his favored tactic was to combine elements from Soresu and Makashi, using the precise and economical movements of both forms to tire his enemy out before striking for the weak spots. Soresu provided the tight defense, while Makashi offered a set of deadly offensive maneuvers. In most situations, it provided a formidable combination, a combination worthy of a master. Should a deficiency arise, Alek's Djem So, could fill the gap. The two of them always worked together anyways. Not tonight though and Kaviss had a problem.

Droids did not grow tired. Droids did not make mistakes. Kaviss would have to adapt and use less familiar tactics. Of course, that was the point of all this anyways. Kaviss savored the challenge, the test of skill.

He threw his body forward into a series of powerful swings, using his significant mass and size to fall into a basic djem-so attack routine in an attempt to bash through the weakened defense of droid number one. The machine's makashi programming attempted to compensate for the powerful blows by using the droid's superior mass to augment the otherwise kinetically weak makashi defense.

There was a shriek and flash of light as Kaviss knocked away a deflecting strike, sliding his saber down in a spray of sparks, slicing off the droid's second hand, sending its training saber flying. Kaviss had only a split moment, whirling around to face the second droid, just barely defecting a stab towards his side. Applying too much pressure, Kaviss overextended his arm. The droid, seizing the brief advantage, slammed its durasteel shoulder into Kaviss' side, knocking him backwards. That hurt.

Using the Force to control his saber, Kaviss telekinetically knocked aside an overhead strike, rolling away and whirling around to catch the saber as it fell. He wasn't accustomed to djem-so movements, resulting in his mistake. For all of its power, djem-so still required measured levels of pressure, something that Kaviss needed practice in. It was something the droid noticed as it quickly flew into a flurry of powerful blows made up of wide swings. The rapid sequence of blows and parries lit up the room, casting brief shadows as Kaviss and the droid dueled. Focus... utilize soresu defense, wait for the weak spot and then strike with makashi.

The difficulty of course, was in finding a mistake.

Droids didn't make mistakes. Droids would act within their programming. For now, a solid defense was Kaviss' best option. His face tightened as the droid shoved him back, his strict soresu movements flashing to keep the droid's saber away. I wonder…

Kaviss fell into a second series of djem so attacks, halting the droid's advance. As the two of them stood there, blades flashing-connecting, Kaviss flicked a slider on his saber and dodged to the side as his saber instantly shortened in length, avoiding a blocking strike by the droid. As his blade passed, Kaviss flicked the slider again, extending the blade back to normal length. Sparks and molten chunks of durasteel sprayed off the suddenly headless droid as Kaviss completed his swing.

There was a loud crashing sound as the droid collapsed in a heap at Kaviss' feet.

Droids didn't make mistakes, but droids couldn't think past their programming. Kaviss had never programmed his training droids with Trakata. His lightsaber possessed a unique feature that he hadn't programmed his droids for, the first being the omniphase capability. Dual phase sabers were rare, but Kaviss had yet to find another Jedi with a lightsaber that could phase along a gradient instead of just two predefined settings. Master Kreia was a master of trakata and had trained Kaviss in its use which resulted in his desire for an omniphase saber.

He could kill with ease, with his lightsaber.

He stood there, staring at his humming blue lightsaber as the droids smoldered, stood there and asked the same question he always did whenever he considered his weapon.

Why did Jedi carry lightsabers?

It sounded like an absurd question; Jedi carried lightsabers because that's what Jedi did, no one questioned things like that. It was all so circular.

So, Kaviss would ask again.

Why did Jedi—a group dedicated to doing no harm, a group dedicated to peace and civilization—why did Jedi carry one of the most lethal weapons in the galaxy? A weapon that with but a simple tap could kill.

It was because the Jedi needed to defend themselves. That is what people would say.

A stun pike wouldn't work either? What about training sabers? Those could defect blaster bolts and could be used to stun; they wouldn't kill with a tap though. It would be difficult for a Jedi to kill with a training saber, but wasn't that the point? Jedi weren't supposed to kill, not unless all other options had been tried—and tried very hard!—but a saber? It was so easy to kill with a lightsaber, so easy to maim, to destroy.

Perhaps the Jedi were not keepers of the peace. Perhaps that was a lie they told themselves, among a great many others. Master Kreia had raised Kaviss to question everything and question he did.
Everything was to be doubted. That's what Kreia had told him, repeatedly. Truth? The truth is real, but I dare any one of us to find it. Even as you doubt everyone else, don't forget. Doubt me as well.
***
Morning found Kaviss in meditation, alone in silence, alone in his thoughts and alone in his past. He had not yet slept, but such issues were trivial for a Jedi, not when the Force was right at Kaviss' fingertips.

The gentle sounds of water filled the air as they resonated from the various fountains in the Room of a Thousand Fountains. Kaviss came here often. He did a lot of thinking; it seemed that his mind was always bursting with questions and doubts. Maybe they would call him the Doubting Jedi? In this respect, Kaviss envied Alek. For all the fact that Kaviss was stronger in the Force, Alek was not plagued by doubt. Alek was a man firm in his convictions.

"You have a unique gift and curse. You have the trait of genius and that will follow you wherever you go, whatever you believe. In everything you are told and in everything you see, the inner critic within you will question."

"Is this a bad thing?"

"No, but it is a dangerous thing."

"Dangerous indeed." Kaviss whispered. To be a Jedi was to trust in the Force to guide one's decisions and feelings. The Order did not train Jedi to act in an intellectual fashion, they were trained to have a faith in a power higher than they were. Kaviss had no such faith. In his eyes, the Force was ever a tool. A field of energy that he could manipulate as a result of possessing the correct genetics. To trust in it for guidance and sacrifice his intellect, it was something Kaviss could not—would not—do.

Kaviss stood from his seat and checked his chrono, noting with surprise that it was almost noon. He had been mediating for hours it seemed. It was easy to lose track of the time when you were in deep meditation. Temporal and physical concerns vanished in such a state. Even the familiar illusion of self could disappear if one delved deep enough. Kaviss had accomplished this several times. It was a strange sensation not to have any sensations. A paradox created by the limitations of the human mind.

Perhaps an example of the limitations of human intellect as well?

Kaviss shook his head and dismissed such thoughts. If he could not rely on his reason, then he could rely on nothing at all. Even faith in the Force required one to reason that faith in the Force was preferred over faith in the intellect, a contradiction. Through my intellect, I learn that faith in my feelings is to be preferred over faith in my intellect. However, if faith in my feelings is to be preferred over faith in my intellect, then should I not ignore what my intellect tells me and ergo not place faith my in feelings? However, if I do not place faith in my feelings and instead place faith in my intellect, than should I not act on my reason and place faith in my feelings?

His intellect did not tell him to use his feelings. As for his feelings… they told him to trust in his intelligence. He was not the only Jedi that believed in such things either. His old master, Dorak, was also a believer in the intellect. Kaviss could respect that, even if he had issues with the rest of Dorak's beliefs.

"There you are." Alek said from behind. Kaviss was not surprised. He had felt Alek's presence approaching for several minutes now.

"Here I am indeed." Kaviss replied, turning around. "What is it?" Instead of answering, Alek simply stared at him.

"When was the last time you slept?"

"Over twenty four hours ago. Does it show?

"You look like you smeared makeup under your eyes and your robes are rumpled. How long did dinner last?"

"Until the early hours of the morning. I couldn't convince her of anything, so I came here, sliced up my training droids and then decided to mediate."

"Sounds like a full day." Alek grinned. "So, how was it?"

"Dinner? Ridiculous, completely ridiculous. You wouldn't believe how much smoked nerf from Corellia costs." Kaviss replied as the two of them walked along the path leaving the gardens. "Thankfully, I managed to convince her to pay."

"You can't do that!" Alek protested.

"And why not? We shared a single meal; I sure as hell wasn't going to pay for something if she was willing. Now, I can pay back that coreslime Lucien Draay and his overly rich family." A thought occurred to Kaviss. "Aren't you friends with his murdering ex-Padawan?" Alek was shaking his head.
"Well I'm friends with him yes… but he's not a murderer. It's all a big misunderstanding and I'm sure it will be cleared up."

"Because he rescued you from Mandalorians?" Alek had gone on an expedition with a number of Kaviss' more enthusiastic "followers" and had managed to do a wonderful job of getting themselves captured by Mandalorians. The Council had had a field day with that, worsening their already low opinion of Kaviss.

"He's a good Jedi, Kaviss. Somehow, I just didn't see anything related to the dark side within him."
"Whatever; he is of little consequence to me in any case." Kaviss went over a mental checklist, making note of the great many things he needed to do. One in particular came to mind. "We planned to head to Cathar right?" He asked Alek.

"Uh, yes." Alek shook his head and muttered something under his breath, to low for Kaviss to hear. "Although you haven't told me why."

"Oh don't worry. I have very good reasons on why we should go to Cathar. In fact I say we should leave by tomorrow."

"Tomorrow? Isn't that kind of short notice?"

"What? How hard is to procure a transport? Just because Cathar is an Outer Rim world doesn't mean it's not assessable. We will be back before the week is over, trust me." Kaviss grinned. "Well we had better be back before the week is over, otherwise I'd miss my next date with Senator Elaine and we can't have that now can we?" Alek chuckled.

"Hardly."

Kaviss was about to reply when suddenly, he stopped. "I haven't even checked the holonet yet!"
"For what?" Alek asked.
"The vote! Today was the vote on declaring a State of Emergency." Kaviss hurried out of the gardens with Alek close in tow. He received a few glances as he rushed down the halls of the Jedi Temple, but was otherwise ignored until he reached the door to his room.

Master Kavar stood outside.

"Master Kavar? Always a pleasure to see you but–" Kaviss started to say, but Kavar held up a hand.
"I wanted to talk to you first since you and I have tended to get along and this could be an issue." Kavar said the words in a tone of voice that immediately told Kaviss that something was wrong.
"Is something wrong Master Kavar?"

"No, not officially, but I think you should take a look at noon's newscast on the holonet." The vote? Kaviss' first thought was that it had gone bad for the GDP, but that couldn't be it. Kavar would not have been so solemn if that was the case. He stepped inside his room and quickly switched on his holoreciever.

"What do you think Master Kavar is so upset about?" Alek asked, falling into the room's only chair.
"I have no idea, but I'm about to find out." Kaviss muttered in response, flashing through the holonet channels. There was the usual mess of nonsense, one of the reasons he hardly listened to the media, but nothing on the vote. As far as he could tell they were still deliberating. What had Kavar been talking about?

Then he saw it.

"The Revanchist and Senator Keida Eris of Antara were seen early this morning at a high class restaurant in Upper Coruscant, in what appears to be a friendly dinner, or perhaps more? See the closeup holos of the Revanchist's face, brought to you by Coru-Newscorp!" Kaviss' face flashed onto the screen, along with images of him talking to Keida.

"How?" He trailed off as the truth hit him. The disturbance he had felt, the danger. He had assumed it would be physical, a threat to on his life. The Force didn't work that way though, it would whisper of all dangers, all truths. "I was blind!" He hissed.

"What are you talking about?" Alek asked. Kaviss him heard from rise from the chair and suddenly his face was beside Kaviss', watching the holonet. "Oh wow." He whispered.

"Yes, yes! Wow!" Kaviss threw up his hands and clicked the receiver off. "The Force was warning me, warning me! And I ignored it." There was frustration, burning like a fire in his chest. Fearfully, he slammed it down. Acknowledging the existence of negative feelings was one thing, but sometimes it was better just to deny them. Eat my own words...

"As I said, I wanted to speak to you first before the others did. The council will not be happy." Kavar had stepped inside. "Jedi are supposed to keep a minor profile, to stay out of the public eye, especially in times like this. Your actions have not helped the situation although to be fair to you, he couldn't know this would happen."

"That's just it!" Kaviss growled. "How could they know where to find us? How did they know what restaurant?" He began to pace. "They knew exactly where I would be and had the money ready to book a table at one of the most expensive places to eat in Coruscant. They knew everything they needed to know."

"You think someone told them?" Alek was frowning and no wonder. "But who could have–" he closed his mouth as the answer became clear.

"Keida." Kaviss whispered. "Either Keida or someone on her staff." He shook his head. "But why?"

"Image is everything in politics." Kavar said. "You are a known supporter of the GDP and Keida is a leading member of the opposing party. The two of you sharing a private dinner at such an expensive place speaks of a great many things."

"Things that might make my allies in the GDP wary of associating with me." Kaviss clenched his fists. He had been played, played like a fool with a bad sabbac hand. Wasn't he supposed to be a genius, a veritable prodigy? He took a deep breath and forced down his anger. "Master Kavar, I must thank you for bringing this to my attention before the other masters do. At the very least, I will have something to tell them in response, an explanation." Kaviss cared little about what the Council thought of him, but he was still a Jedi and consequences were consequences.

"Just remember; don't take this personally." Kavar warned. "Keida is a politician and she is doing what politicians do very well, deceive. Even Jedi are not infallible."

"Oh I completely agree, Master Kavar." Kaviss said as a smile began to form on his face. If the bitch was going to make him look the fool, then he was sure as hell going to return the favor.
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How far is this going to go? Is it Mandalorian wars only, or will it extend further into the early years of the Second sith War before Revan is betrayed?

Anyway, I like it, it is interesting to say the least. I'll admit that it took me longer to realize that Kaviss was Revan than it should have, though I'm sure that's not the story's fault. I'm looking forward to seeing more.
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I'm not sure yet, I may go all the way up to Malak's betrayal or just split it in two, with this one ending at Malachor V and the other one taking place after that.
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I have to give some serious credit to Darth Wong for his awesome page on strategy on the main site, because the following chapter pretty much exists because of it.

Chapter Three - Rules of War (Version 1.0)

Early 3963 BBY – One week later in orbit over Dxun.

Ten soldiers wisely led will beat a hundred without a head.
- Euripides

Thousands of ships littered the space above Dxun, massive monoliths of durasteel and millions of hardened warriors. They glistened in the light of Onderon's sun, the photons reflecting off the layers of armor, scattering through the vacuum. There was no other fleet like it in the entire galaxy, nothing so grand, so dignified in purpose. It was life and it was glory.

Moreover, history would remember it as the creation, the life, of Mandalore the Ultimate, the man that would bring the Republic to its knees. This was his glory, his immortality. The weakling Republic did not understand. They did not understand war, not as Mandalore did. He knew war, he was war. He was a god, a titan, a king, a force of nature. He was all these things, but he was missing the most important thing of all.

A challenge.

The Republic had proven no challenge to his tactics or his plans. His men easily crushed all resistance. How was a god expected to prove his worth against mere mortals? The Republic shied away from war, saw it as abhorrent, crippled by the weakling morality of the nerf herd. Mandalore was the Master and the Republic was the herd. To be the Master was to break all bonds, to go beyond all codes, to create purpose and life within one's self. That was what it was to be the Master. And the herd? The herd relied on the morality of the many, the ethics of a nerf. Like nerf they would follow each other as one, as a mindless mass of the inferior. Perhaps, among them, there were Masters, but they would be hidden among the herd, among the weakness that crippled them.

Mandalore would liberate them through the fire of the turbolaser cannon, the smoldering heat of the nuclear warhead and the unflinching determination of his warriors.

"If only they were worthy." A whisper through his helmet, spoken to his most trusted officer, Cassius Fett.

"Drive them into a corner and perhaps they will be. Kill their civilians, rape their worlds, spill the blood of billions and watch the galaxy tremble. Then, perhaps, they shall be worthy." Cassius leveled each word like a blaster bolt; his tone never changed but his tone never had to change. His words were always explosive bursts of meaning. Cassius spoke the truth as he saw it and let others form their own conclusions. Mandalore admired that in an officer. If one could not understand, then that was their failing.

"If there is anything left after the fires we will unleash, then perhaps they will fight back with worth. They will lose, like a caged kinrath that fights till the end, but at least they might provide us with some sport."

"One can only hope." Cassius didn't sound very hopeful, not that anyone but Mandalore would have noticed.

"Mandalore does not hope, I know." He chuckled and turned his back from the bridge viewscreen. Behind him on the holoprojector was a complex three-dimensional image of Republic space. "Tell me Cassius, of what do you think of my plan?" He motioned towards the holoprojector as it began to flash lines of attack into Republic space, lines of attack that Mandalore had developed.

"It is a bold maneuver, striking so far into their space, so fast." Cassius pointed a finger. "I do appreciate the concept of continuing three lanes of attack and the converging at the Mid Rim; however, your strategy hinges on the Republic's inability to create a cohesive defense."

"You believe they will? They are disorganized, a mess of system militias under the command of a council of flag officers." Mandalore barked a laugh. "Who ever heard of such nonsense?"

"Only a fool develops a strategy that hinges on the folly of his enemies." No one could ever claim Cassius was not blunt. "Your strategy is dangerous and could become Pyhrric if the Republic mounts a successful counter offensive on even one of the invasion corridors."

"And if they are unable to?"

"Then you will open a direct line to the core worlds."

"And force the kinrath into the corner." Mandalore steepled his gauntleted hands in anticipation. He had planned his invasion, this war, on the keystone that the Republic's response would not be cohesive. There was an irony in this. The Republic had the men and the ships to repel the Mandalorians. Their numbers dwarfed those of Mandalore's by many magnitudes; however, numbers were useless if not properly used.

"Are you sure of your objectives?" Cassius asked. "To drive them into a corner, or defeat them quickly?"

"Both can be accomplished at the same time without a division of goals."

The first rule of war, know your objectives. Mandalore knew exactly what he wanted and how to get it. The Republic lacked any such certainly in their actions. They had a vague idea that they wanted to drive his warriors away, but they lacked any cohesion in working towards a series of realistic goals. They floundered, unsure of what to do.

"And if they realize what you are trying to do?" The question was mechanical. Cassius wasn't asking the question because he wanted an answer. He was helping Mandalore reassure himself. "You have deceived them so far; will they make the same mistake twice?"

"The Republic lacks the strategic model to understand my plans; they don't even understand my motivations." Mandalore brushed the worry aside.

The second rule of war, deceive your enemy. Mandalore had staged the False War as a diversion, hiding his true strength while drawing the Republic away, lulling them into complacency. Then he had struck overnight along three attack corridors.

No mercy, no hesitation.

"Motivation." Cassius was pacing around the holoprojector. "They do not know your motivation, but do you know theirs?" He leaned his face through the projection, the blue and red lights reflecting off his yellow armor. "Do they defend one unified home, or many homes?"

"They are fractured; they lack cohesion. They defend many homes, many lands, not one."

The third rule of war, know your enemy. War was not about seeking the enemy out, something that would no doubt draw the ire of his warriors if they knew he felt that way. No, war was about winning. Mandalore had deceived the Republic, giving him time to identify the weak points in the Republic system. He had observed holonet reports of the Senatorial debates, listened to them as they argued with each other. Mandalore had discovered the cracks in the Republic.

Know your enemy's strengths and know his weakness. Mandalore had found them and as a result had developed a strategic model for dealing with the Republic's larger fleets.

A model grounded in the logic that the Republic could not function as a single unit in the most critical moments. Mandalore had attacked three corridors because he had known that the Republic would not be able to respond to them. A careful analysis of the debates in the Senate showed that domestic priorities took place over sound strategy.

The representatives from each of the three corridors of systems that Mandalore had attacked would be arguing that they should be the ones to receive aid. The flag officers, grounded in politics, had yet to organize a cohesive response, because they could not make up their minds about which systems to focus on.

"You have identified their weakness, but have you developed a sufficient concentration of resources to exploiting those goals?"

"I have devoted all efforts to continuous attacks on key Republic worlds and systems. The systems with names; the systems with power."

Fourth rule of war, force concentration. Once objectives are established and prioritized, then a sound general will concentrate all of his forces on establishing those objectives. Mandalore had discovered a weakness in the Republic psychology and sociological makeup. As a result, he applied the principle of force concentration on this weak spot. They had the greater numbers, but they lacked a concentration in both a physical and mental framework.

Cassius stepped back from the projector and walked back around to where Mandalore could see him. "You are sure of victory; you have followed the rules. The Republic has not followed the rules."
The Republic did not have a clear goal.

The Republic had failed to deceive him, had failed to even make the attempt.

The Republic did not know him.

The Republic had not concentrated its forces.

The Republic did not know the rules of war and because of this, Mandalore would crush them. Cassius suddenly leaned forward, his helmet all but touching Mandalore's.

"However, always remember. There are no rules of war."
***
Canderous Ordo watched in silence as the men under his command preformed their daily drills and training sets. Through his bravery and skill, Mandalore had awarded him the rank of Commander and Rally Leader. His job was to see that the warriors of Clan Ordo were up to task and preformed as Mandalore desired. He took his job very seriously, as any good Mandalorian would. Weakness and sloppiness could not be tolerated. Open that door and suddenly you would find a force no more worthy than the pathetic Republic.

Except, Mandalore had opened that door.

On each of the worlds they had captured, Mandalore had ordered thousands of citizens force pressed into the Mandalorian ranks. None of them were true warriors; they were terrified civilians forced to fight. They were sloppy, weak and worthless as anything besides fodder for Republic gun emplacements.

Canderous had been annoyed, and rightfully so, when he had learned he would be forced to incorporate a cohort of the useless nerfs into his command. However, like any proper Mandalorian, he had adapted to the situation. He had organized the nerfs into their own front line units. They would advance first into enemy fire as a distraction, giving Canderous time effectively use his own men without wasting them on frontal assaults. In this way, Canderous would kill two mynocks with one blaster bolt. Get rid of these useless nerfs and use them effectively as a disposable buffer.

He could even use them to deceive Republic lines.

A unit of the nerfs, presented as a genuine attack force to draw away a Republic position. The Republic soldiers would easily smash though the nerfs. They would feel victorious, believing the Mandalorians were not as dangers and fearsome as everyone believed. Then Canderous, having lured them away from their formation, their lines, would pounce on them while they were exposed. It was speculation only, but what was battle planning of not educated speculation?

Fifth rule of war, no battle plan survives first contact. A true warrior can adapt to the circumstances as they change. A true warrior always understands that the lines on a holoprojector are nothing more than a guess at what may happen. A true warrior will prepare for the worst and fight for the best, adapting to whatever comes at him.

The Republic had shown no ability to adapt, to make sacrifices. They expected the best and fought for the worst. False warriors ran the Republic, for all of its sophisticated and advanced military hardware and vast navies, and false warriors could not win this war.

"Commander Ordo!" a voice cracked over Canderous' intercom, his helmsman.

"What is it?" Canderous demanded.

"Mandalore as sent out a fleet wide alert; we are to jump for Serreco immediately."

"Ah, finally. Send out an order to all Ordo vessels to prepare for the Serreco jump." Canderous barked.

"Yes sir!" The helmsman responded, signing off.

After the Republic's primary task force had been humiliated in the Vanqo system, they had run so far with tail between legs, that they ended up resupplying and regrouping at the Core world of Ralltir. That had left the outer edges of the Mid Rim open to invasion, defended as they were by thin sector fleets. Everyone had fully expected Mandalore to strike at key Mid Rim worlds, except he had not. The reasoning at not been clear until only recently.

One of the Republic's Rear Admirals was apparently smarter than the rest of his ilk. The retreat to Ralltir had been a ploy, a trap to try to get Mandalore to overextend his reach. A sizable Republic task force had gathered in orbit over the backwater world of Serreco, waiting to strike at Mandalore when he invaded the Mid Rim.

"But the fools violated the third rule of war. They do not know Mandalore." The Republic had not realized that Mandalore would notice such a simple ploy and so Mandalore had decided to strike at Serreco itself. Serreco was a strategically insignificant target, on the maps at least. "No battle plan survives first contact." The lines had changed and Mandalore had adapted, like a True Warrior. The Republic would not know what had hit them.

Canderous was laughing as his ship jumped into hyperspace.
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Minor nitpick:
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Anyway, the first thought I had reading this was "And so it begins." Then reading about Mandalore's plan, it was really easy to see how Revan is going to wipe the floor with him, which is addressed in the games, but it was nice to see it here. This really looks like it has a lot of potential.
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Darth Paxis wrote:Minor nitpick:
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Anyway, the first thought I had reading this was "And so it begins." Then reading about Mandalore's plan, it was really easy to see how Revan is going to wipe the floor with him, which is addressed in the games, but it was nice to see it here. This really looks like it has a lot of potential.
Thank you for catching that typo *goes to correct it* and I am glad you liked the build up feel. The premise is that Mandalore is winning because the Republic doesn't know what to do, which I did kind of borrow from both the feel of John Jackson Miller's comics and the description of the Republic command structure in the Old Republic Campaign Guide.
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Note: The Battle of Serroco was covered by JJM in the KOTOR comics and I'm most certainly not going to attempt to recreate it here (and do an infinitely poorer job than a professional like John Jackson Miller.) The following is my version, similar, but my own.

In many ways this chapter was fairly exciting since I've never written a space battle before and if any forum is capable of telling me how much it sucks (or doesn't *hopeful*) it would be this one, which is cool because criticism is awesome.

This was in fact originally part of the the previous chapter I just posted, but I decided to split them in two and post them separately. This one took a little longer since I did some cleanup before hand (although one of these days I'll go through line by line with a red pen... someday.)

Chapter Four – Battle of Serroco (Version 1.0)

Early 3963 – Serroco System

Deus lo vult! "God wills it!"

- Crusader war cry

"Do you really think this will work?" Lieutenant Carth Onasi, asked his commander and mentor, Admiral Saul Karath.

"Maybe, maybe not." Karath grunted. He was in one of his thinking poses, rubbing the scrub at his chin.

"You don't sound very hopeful." Carth pulled at the collar of his orange flight jacket. The damn thing could get itchy as hell sometimes.

"This is war, hope is for fools. The only thing that matters in war is strategy and tactics. Hope is good only as a source of morale for the noncoms and enlisted men." The two of them were speaking in low tones on the bridge of the Swiftsure Karath's command ship, a massive three kilometer wide Inexpugnable class capital ship. In orbit over the blue and green ball that was Serroco, it drifted in loose formation with the rest of the fleet. Bridge crew moved about some console to console, checking systems and preparing to jump into hyperspace at a moment's notice. They kept a wide berth around Admiral Karath. Everyone could tell he was in a foul mood.

"Officers need morale too." Carth muttered under his breath.

"They do, but the enlisted men cannot know that. In our eyes, victory must always bee assured. Officers are officers because they realize that there is nothing about war being hopeful about. Morale is for the lower ranks, the men not trained to think, but to obey. You and I, we are officers; we see the risks, know the costs. An officer has no room for doubts or to worry over his own morale. He may do so in private, but never in front of the men.

"Yes sir." Carth said, still worried. Morale was horrible and with the Republic becoming humiliated at every turn, it was only getting worse. The men needed a victory, something to show them that victory was even possible.

"This wouldn't have happened if the Senate was unified in its actions."
"Sir?" Carth blinked at the sudden change in topic.

"The Senate; they are the reason we have done so poorly. They pressure the admirals on Coruscant to support some world or another, stretching our lines thin and allowing the Mandalorians free reign in our space." He slammed a fist into his palm. "They place domestic priority over military concerns, idiots! This is a war and wars are not fought by committee, they are fought by a chain of command using sound strategy and tactics." He began to pace along the bridge, drawing the attention of the other bridge crew. "How am I expected to fight like this?"

"You did manage to convince them to set up a fleet here." Carth offered.

"A surprise to be sure." Karath muttered in reply. "No one cares about Serroco, but when I pitched the idea to the Joint Chiefs as a way to draw Mandalore in and crush him while protecting several key worlds at the same time... they were more than happy to give me the command." He chuckled. "I made sure to list Antara and a few other important names in my list, even though Antara is too deep into the Mid Rim for Mandalore to strike."

"Antara is one of the leading systems of the Independence Party, correct?" Carth only had a vague notion of politics. Telos was an important world, but it was hardly a political heavyweight and even if it was, no one was going to tell a junior officer anything.

"Antara is a thorn in the side of any competent general. She and Corellia possess considerable defense fleets and control the actions of systems with fleets that could relieve us on key fronts, but that would require their defense fleets to come under the direct command of the Joint Chiefs, which they won't do."

Carth frowned. "But why not simply make a compromise? Have their fleets under the control of their respective military officers and simply have them work with the Joint Chiefs."

"Because this is a war; the Joint Chiefs want complete control over all military assets, as it should be. The Independence Party refuses to go along with the idea and they control the Senate right now. The Galactic Defense Party is struggling to gain support among the undecided blocks and gain a majority and force the Chancellor to declare a State of Emergency, which would give him the power to draft any fleet he chooses." The Admiral shook his head. "Of course, the Chancellor is from Corellia!" He started to laugh. "Ah, a great joke is not? Politics will kill this war." His expression turned grim. "And Mandalore knows it."

"What happened?" Carth asked. "How... how did it come to this? The Republic fought off the Sith during the war not even forty years ago. We fought hard, and we won!" He clenched his fists in anger. Anger at what politics were doing to this war. He hadn't signed on and left his wife and son alone to fight a war killed by men and women that had never seen so much as a blaster bolt.

"Jedi." The Admiral barked the word almost like a curse, or a prayer. Carth couldn't tell.

"Jedi?"

"Jedi, yes." He nodded his head. "When the Jedi tell you that you are facing a great enemy, no one disagrees, no one argues. Senators that would otherwise disagree fall silent and everyone unites... because the Jedi said so…"

"…Except the Jedi have refused to help us." Carth finished for him.

"Yes, and because of that, the Senate is splintered, fractured by domestic and electorate concerns. How pathetic are–"

"–Admiral! I'm picking up hyperspace contacts, ships dropping out of hyperspace at the edge of the system!?" The helmsman said.

"Identify them!" The Admiral barked.

"Yes sir!" The Helmsman paused. "Sir... there are several thousand of them! Mandalorians, thousands of Mandalorian ships."

Admiral Karath paled.
***
"Leaving hyperspace!" The helmsman shouted as Mandalore's personal Dreadnought dropped into realspace.

"Contact count." Mandalore ordered.

"Thousands in a loose formation over the planet."

"Hmm... what to do." Mandalore would have scratched his chin, if he actually had a rounded one. Taungs had sharp reptilian facial features unlike the human primates. "Tell the fleet to stay just outside of Republic weapons range." He turned to Cassius. "Order tactical to prepare the warheads for fire, tell them to aim straight for the planet and ignore the Republic ships."

"You plan on burning this world?" Cassius asked.

"The Republic built their bases next to civilian centers." Mandalore pointed towards a display of Serroco's geographical features. "Look at that, millions of civilians, massive urban centers with Republic bases."

"They do not believe we will do what is necessary for victory." It was not a question, but a statement.

"They do not know me." Mandalore threw back his head and laughed, his helmet synthesizing his voice, giving it a machine like quality. Sometimes he certainly felt like a machine. A machine that created life within himself. "Tell me Cassius, what was the yield on those warheads?" He already knew the answer, but he wanted to hear it again.

"Mid megaton ranges."

"I like the sound of that; explosions are fun to watch." He rubbed his palms together. "Tactical!"

"Sir!"

"Fire all warheads. All of them!" He would purify the Republic and cleanse them of their misconceptions and their ignorance. Through the fire of fusion, atoms smashing together to release titanic levels of energy, he would save them.
***
"What are they doing?" Saul muttered to himself, although he was sure Onasi heard. The surprise Mandalorian fleet had not attacked, giving Saul time to organize his battle group into a defensive cluster. At first glance it seemed as if he had gotten lucky, but Saul Karath didn't believe in luck. The Mandalorians were up to something.

But what?

"Maybe they want us to attack them?" Onasi offered. Saul turned to him and shook his head.

"Hardly, they would have to believe we are complete fools. Although who's to say we aren't." He murmured that last bit, but of course Onasi heard him again, raising his brows.

What to do?

That was just it; Saul wasn't sure what to do. This Mandalore, this mysterious masked figure had been anything but predicable. The False War had been brilliantly engineered. It had felt like a real war, had looked like a real war. It had never been a real war. Mandalore had been testing the Republic, learning about his foe. Saul Karath could admire a strategic genius, even if he was on the other side. It was why Saul was wary. What was the bastard Mandalorian up to now? Whatever it was, it wouldn't be simple.

He started to pace around the bridge, glancing at consoles that he didn't need to see, looking over the shoulders of his bridge crew.

Damn it! What was Mandalore doing?

"Admiral, they are firing warheads! Targeting systems show them as heading directly towards us!"

He had his answer.

Saul smiled, his lips quickly curling into a sneer. Mandalore was attempting to use the superior range of his warheads to avoid the overwhelming numbers of the Republic fleet.

"Tactical, bring the countermeasures online; I want those deflectors up!" Saul ordered. The warheads would damage the deflectors, but not enough for serious concern. Mandalore would be forced to enter into the ranges of the Republic's superior firepower and numbers.

"Deflectors up... sir?" The Tactics officer sounded surprised. "Sir!" Now he sounded horrified.

"What is it?" Saul snapped. The Tactics officer turned to face him, his face pale.

"The warheads, they are bypassing us! They... they are heading straight for the planet."

"For the planet but...why?" Saul trailed off. He already knew the answer. He knew all too well, all too fucking well.

Millions...
***
"There is an old story on one of the backwater worlds at the edges of the galaxy." Mandalore was saying as the warheads bypassed the Republic ships. "About these two nations at war with each other. This was before even primitive chemical based slug-throwers, back when people fought with sword, spear and axe. According to the story, the leader of the smaller nation, swept down into the lowlands with his small army and rounded up all of his people that had offered to surrender to the armies of the larger nation. "Then, he imprisoned them and waited for the armies of the greater nation to arrive. When they did he had all of those people staked on the fields, left to die slow deaths in agony. When the armies of the mightier nation arrived, they were so horrified by what they saw, that they ran away." Mandalore turned to Cassius. "Do you know why?"

"Because the leader of the smaller nation brought the fight to a level that the mighty could not follow. He showed he was willing to do anything to win, to be victorious."

"Yes, he did and today, so shall I."
***
Saul Karath watched in horror as the first warhead exploded in a massive conflagration of energy, vaporizing a chunk of Serroco's surface. In an instant, in a second, in a split moment, millions died in the fires of fusion.

"Sir! Initial scans detected zinc and cobalt dust inside the warhead." Tactical said fevreshy.

"Particle scattering?" Saul couldn't believe it. Not only was the warhead loaded with a multi-megaton bomb, but the Mandalorians had packed it full of metallic dust. Every explosion would kill everything and render the surrounding area lifeless.

Another warhead exploded, this time at the largest population center on the planet.

Millions...

"How many warheads are there?" Onasi was asking Tactical.

"Thirty accounted for, two... no three have impacted!"

Millions...

"Admiral, we have to do something!" Onasi was suddenly in his face. "Launch the fighters, intercept the remaining warheads, or at least prevent another volley!"

"Yes... yes!" Saul turned to tactical. "Order all of the fighter wings, all of them, all of them! Intercept as many of the warheads as you can. Scatter the battle group, and prepare to advance into weapons range. I'm going to bring our superior firepower to–"

"Admiral... fleet operations are breaking apart!" Tactical sounded frantic, worse than before.

"What?"

"The fleet is in disarray, several groups have broken from the cluster, and they are heading straight towards the Mandalorian line!"

"Order them back!" Saul shouted. "I will not have my own men disobey orders! Order them back!"
***
"Mandalore, the Republic fleet is in disarray; several of their battle groups have broken cluster and are moving towards us at max sublight." Tactical was calm, confident. There was nothing like the sheer terror of your enemy, the deaths of millions, to remind a man, a god, that none could stand in his way.

"I am a god and I will this." Mandalore whispered. "Tactical, order our groups to fall back when attacked by the Republic forces, I want to draw as many groups out of the cluster as possible. If this Admiral cannot keep his command intact, then he does not deserve victory." A holodisplay of the Republic fleet movement's appeared in front of Mandalore's spot on the bridge. A glowing display of blue lines and red ship markers, it lit up the dim bridge, casting long shadows on the crew. "In the darkness, just aside the light, I will kill them all." Mandalore muttered. "Is this not glorious, Cassius? They flounder, they scatter, like children!" He threw his head back again and laughed, laughed as hard as he ever had. He loved to laugh; laughter was good for the soul.

"Would you say their tactics are dishonorable?" Cassius asked suddenly. Mandalore stopped laughing and glanced over at his brother, his most valued officer.

"Of course it is dishonorable! Civilians next to warriors, as if we would spare them!" It was for the benefit of the bridge crew, because Mandalore had discovered long ago, that he did not care about honor. Honor was a worthless prize, something good only to impress others. Victory, now that was what mattered!

"Dishonorable indeed." Mandalore would have bet half his fleet that Cassius was smiling beneath his helmet.

"Mandalore! The Republic forces have engaged our left group; they are falling back, as you commanded." Tactical reported.

"Good, very good!" Mandalore walked to front of the bridge, his boots making a thunk thunk sound on the durasteel floor. It was hard to get visuals in space, but from where Mandalore stood, he could see the sudden flashes from his left wing as they engaged the enraged Republic vessels. This battle would not be a perfect analogy to old story, but the moral of the story still applied. A shocked force made stupid decisions.

"Another group has broken off! The Republic cluster is beginning to break apart completely. They are failing to prioritize targets."

"And so, they fracture. They do not fight as one, but as so many shocked, scared and angry soldiers." Mandalore whispered, too low for even Cassius to hear. Louder, he spoke to Tactical. "How many warheads got through to the surface?"

"Twenty five of them! Causalities expected to be several hundred million based on demographics."

"Several hundred million! Did you hear that Cassius? I am the architect, the engineer, of millions deaths in a matter minutes. My name will echo in history from this! Tactical, order out all the basilisk wings, have all ships move in to attack. No mercy, no prisoners. Kill them all!"
***
Canderous adjusted the seat on his basilisk and quickly went over a systems check. You could never be too careful when riding on the back of a wardroid in the vacuum. A fool could get killed for his carelessness that way.

"All squadron leaders, report!" He ordered into his comm unit.

"Dragon Leader reporting!"

"Mynock Leader reporting!"

"Krayt Leader reporting!"

Canderous personally commanded four wings of twenty five basilisk wardroids. A hundred true warriors all.

"Mandalore has ordered us to engage the Republic fighter wings and keep them for harassing the dreadnoughts. They have hundreds of Aurek Tactical Strikefighters and outnumber us by several magnitudes."

"Maybe it will be a fair fight then, sir!" Dragon leader joked. The other squadrons laughed at the absurd comment. Canderous ignored them; he had no time for humor or games.

"Remember, Aurek fighters are heavier then our wardroids; they have bigger guns and proton torpedoes. Move fast and use your superior maneuverability to avoid them. Attack in loose packs and then break apart. Because they have greater firepower and numbers, we have to force them to scatter into small groups of one or two fighters, where our basilisks will have the advantage due to their greater speed and mobility. Understood?"

"Yes Commander!" The squad leaders shouted in unison.

"Then launch!" Canderous ordered. The shuttle-bay crew scattered from the hanger as the forcefield disengaged, sucking out precious oxygen into the icy vacuum. Pulled in by the air rushing outward, Canderous and his hundred riders flew out with it, engines igniting the sudden and abrupt silence of space.

Thousands of capital ships were engaged in fierce combat, filling space with massive turbolaser explosions. Deflectors lit up like miniature suns, dissipating weapons fire. In the background of it all, the formerly blue and green Serroco smoldered red and black, having been baptized by nuclear fire.

It was glorious.

"Move to maximum combat speed!" The wardoid's dampening fields quickly moved to compensate as they advanced to thousands of Gs, flashing through space as little more than signals on a tactical screen.

"Commander! Orders?”

"Dragon Leader, take up the right! Krayt Leader, take up the left! Mynock, you're with me." There was a chorus of acknowledgement as the formation moved to comply with Canderous' commands. A sudden flash of light appeared on his tactical display. Then, a few hundred flashes of light. "Republic fighters dead ahead, prepare to engage!"

Canderous couldn't hear it, but he could see it. Suddenly space became crowded with the sizzling and flashing lights of thousands of orange and green turbolaser bolts. Hundreds of Aurek fighters silently screamed into vew, flashing by Canderous. One appeared on his scopes. "Target acquired!" His thumbs slammed down on the triggers, spurting a rapid sequence of turbolaster blasts. Several missed, but the rest impacted onto the larger fighter's armor. For several moments, space was filled with light enough for a small star before vanishing back into darkness. Bubble deflectors shuddered under the sudden impacts of debris as Canderous flashed through the remains of the aurek fighter.

"Contact down!" Canderous shouted as he swept his basilisk into a sudden drop, falling just above another aurek fighter. Applying the boosters, he quickly accelerated and latched out with the droid's claws, literally landing onto the fighter's back. Inside the canopy he could see the Republic pilot looking up in shock as Canderous lashed out at him. The transparesteel glass, strong as it was, could not withstand the vicious impact of the basilisk's claws as it ripped into the canopy, destroying the fragile atmosphere inside.

The pilot couldn't even scream as he died.

“Dragon Squadron reporting! We have another incoming wing of Republic fighters, orders sir?”

“Move to engage, Mynock Squadron will support you; the rest of us, will finish the first wave and then move to join you.”

“Yes Commander!” Dragon Leader reported. Canderous watched on his tactical screen has half of his warriors veered off to intercept the incoming wave. It was a good ploy on the Republic's part, splitting his forces in two like that. He would have to defeat the first wave quickly to avoid a divide and conquer stratagem becoming reality.

He smiled, either way it would be one of the best times of his life.
***
Thousands of flashing lights blinked on the holoprojector as Saul frantically looked for a way to extract what was left of his fleet out of this mess. The Mandalorians fought like disciplined savages; they fought like the monsters they were. His fleet, shaken, confused and frighten had fallen into disarray. A thousand ships had already been lost. A thousand! Their hulls drifted in the vacuum of space, a collection of ruined husks of what used to be the workplaces of thousands of fine officers and soldiers.

Mandalore's plan was clear to Saul now, ingenious as it was. Mandalore understood the Republic; he understood that the Republic was fractured and divided. Even in its military, it was scattered and incoherent. An enemy that did not fight as one could not win and Mandalore had taken advantage of this weakness. This attack, the sudden shock of millions dead, had been too much for Saul's inexperienced fleet. They had reacted, violently and in anger. Mandalore had played them like a master, luring them by ordering his wings to fall back, drawing them away from a solid force concentration.

"Then he destroyed them." Saul whispered.

"Admiral, another group has fallen and most of our fighters are gone. I'm getting reports of hundreds of ships retreating. The cluster is gone!" Tactical was hysterical by now. Saul couldn't blame him; he couldn't blame anyone but himself.

He slammed his fist down on the command console in front of him. This wouldn't have happened if his fleet had maintained discipline! That was just it; his fleet had been cobbled together from three different sector fleets and a few planetary militias. He didn't have the charisma to turn such a varied force into a single, operating battle group. He knew the strategy, he knew the tactics, but he didn't have the voice and the presence to implement them.

He was a craftsman missing his tools.

"Admiral... what are we going to do?" Onasi, thank the Force, was still composed. The man was a good soldier, a good officer.

"Retreat... that is what we will do." Saul wanted to scream in frustration at the idea, but consequences were consequences. "This world is lost, a fiery graveyard for millions of smoldering spirits." He turned to Tactical. "Send out a fleet wide retreat, I repeat, send out a fleet wide retreat."

"What will you tell Command?"

"That I failed. What else would I tell them?" Saul replied, watching as his fleet died a silent death in the vacuum of space, on the backdrop of a burning world.

Millions...

No, I did not make this up. Mandalorians do actually fly in the vacuum on the back of droids with no canopy. Its crazy and ridiculous, but then the Mandalorians are crazy and ridiculous so what the hell?

Incidentally, I based this chapter on Ceasar's defeat at Gergovia, in which his men broke ranks, costing him the battle.
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the mmo confirmed that the sith emporer corrupted revan. are you going to use that?
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Darth Yan wrote:the mmo confirmed that the sith emporer corrupted revan. are you going to use that?
The same Sith Emperor that drove Revan to nearly conquer the Republic in order to stop him?
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they changed his mo quite a lot. the sith emporer corrupted him, and ordered him to create a vanguard. revan did so, but became greedy for power, so he decided to conquer it all for himself. he just wanted to rule. however, he knew that if he wrecked too much there was no way he'd survive his master's wrath. so he kept it intact purely to save his own ass. He was trying to stop them, but only because he didn't want them taking over his turf and enacting revenge for betraying them. honestly, I applaud it, since it reveals how revan became powerful without being a total gary stu, and it de stufifies him IMMENSELY. Also, Bastila definately had kids and it's implied that Revan and bastila did the dirty.
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I'll probably throw the Emperor in there somehow. It is kind of hard though since the writer that gave the interview about the Sith Emperor than retracted a few of his statements and now its anyone's guess as to what exactly happened.
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First thing I noticed was 'Knight Kaviss', since you're looking to work within the EU this is may be in error. According to the EU Obi-wan wasn't promoted to Master until Depa Billaba was rendered incapacitated in Shatterpoint, this is important because in Attack of the Clones Yoda refers to Obi-Wan as 'Master Kenobi' or at least in the presence of younglings and Padawan. We can see this again in Revenge of the Sith when the younglings call Anakin 'Master' as well. To my knowledge I've never heard anyone refer to someone as 'Knight XXXXX', I might be wrong though.
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General Schatten wrote:First thing I noticed was 'Knight Kaviss', since you're looking to work within the EU this is may be in error. According to the EU Obi-wan wasn't promoted to Master until Depa Billaba was rendered incapacitated in Shatterpoint, this is important because in Attack of the Clones Yoda refers to Obi-Wan as 'Master Kenobi' or at least in the presence of younglings and Padawan. We can see this again in Revenge of the Sith when the younglings call Anakin 'Master' as well. To my knowledge I've never heard anyone refer to someone as 'Knight XXXXX', I might be wrong though.
Maybe it has to do with having a Padawan. In AotC Obi-Wan was still Anakin's Master, and the Clone Wars retcon gives us Ashoka for Anakin for when RotS rolls around. So maybe Kaviss is still reffered to as Knight simply because he doesn't have a Padawan. Of course since this is KotOR era the traditions might just be different, does anyone know if anyone is referred to as Knight in either the games or the comics?
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