Stars of Iron, a Stargate-Draka X-over, vol. 2

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Stars of Iron, a Stargate-Draka X-over, vol. 2

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I'll continue posting updates to the interlude stories in the old Snakepit thread, but I'm creating a new main thread for the new installment of the main story.


Stars of Iron



Prologue





Eons had passed since living beings had last visited that particular star system. It was merely one of many in that region of space, much closer to the galactic core than Earth was. Countless stars could be seen by the naked eye from the surface of its planetary bodies - those that did have a solid surface, at least - at night, their sheer density making the local nights as brilliant as full moon on Earth, a spectacular light display of bright pinpoints and diffuse glowing nebulae and a huge glowing cloud that was the galactic core itself, lit from within by the colossal energies it contained.
An eternity ago, the ancient civilization that seeded the galaxy with a network of connected stargates and engineered habitable worlds had taken advantage of the energy and resource rich region of space to fuel the industrial machine that produced the massive roving world-shapers. Thanks to the myriad burning starforges, planets and asteroids showed an abundance of stable superheavy elements unmatched in the more distant reaches of the galaxy, elements that enabled the gate-builders civilization to thrive and sustained its needs over the thousand centuries it lasted at its height, until they, too floundered and fell into almost oblivion, remembered as tales and fragmentary stories and leftover wonders, save a handful of younger civilizations that nevertheless managed to rival its power, if not sheer expanse.
Thousands of years after the last gate-builders had left the stage their accomplishments were still remembered in the memories of those species that stood as equals at their side.
And despite the march of time and the upheavals it brought along, some testimonials of the Gate-builders glory remained intact and untouched by the new masters of the Milky Way, protected by time and secrecy and lost in the sheer vastness of space.

Few Asgards still knew about the seemingly unimportant star system where representatives of the Great Four had once congregated under the patronage of the Gate-builders. The place was left alone after the demise of its owners and the great alliance withered away.
There was an almost taboo associated with it, the symbol of past greatness now abandoned and useless, even the technology it contained grown mundane next to the other great races’ own accomplishments. No Asgard had had an interest in it for millennias. None except one, that is, and then Loki had only viewed the old facility as a curiosity, until it provided an answer to a particular consequence of his on-and-off meddling with the evolution of a world whose importance was easily overlooked - by his own race as well as the tyrannical Goa’uld. Well, at least nobody else looked over his shoulder to prevent his behind-the-scene meddling. And there was no trace of it. If the Supreme Council ever sniffed around he could deny any intervention - after all it wasn’t the first human planet to reach a post-industrial level.
If they investigated deeper, then they might wonder about some discrepancies, but no concrete evidence there either.
At least until it came to his blatant and direct intervention in the New America’s case. Towing a human colony ship to the other side of the galaxy was breaking every rule abut non-intervention and in a manner that left little doubt if anyone bothered to look into it. Fortunately, the whole Asgard species had been so giddy with Loki’s out of the blue solution to the Replicator threat, literally saved from the brink of extinction at the last moment, that the Supreme Council had swallowed his explanation hook, line and sinker. Commander Thor’s inner suspicions couldn’t prevail against the wave of popular gratitude for their savior, specially after his own resurrection from backup mindstate was only possible thanks to the victory Loki had brought on a trinium platter.

Between this and the need to rebuild the shattered Ida home galaxy, nobody would expend the effort to check Loki’s statements.
And assuming the most probable computed scenarios panned out as expected, by the time anyone ever got wind of his little fate-pushing in the Milky Way it would be too late to do anything but watch the fireworks. It was a brilliant plan. In a few decades, the Goa’uld would be caught between hammer and anvil. Whether it was hammer or anvil that survived the ensuing shock didn’t matter as long as the Goa’uld upstarts were reduced to paste in the middle.
Loki rather looked forward to that. What were decades or even centuries to a being like him ? There still was the nagging problem of his species genetic decay, but in the worst case scenario he was prepared to simply shed off biological existence and continue living as an uploaded mind.
In any case, now he had ample time to tinker. Maybe even take a little jaunt out in the neighbouring galaxies where Ancient facilities were rumored to still exist.


Far below the lofty machinations of ancient alien beings, a starship hung over a dead planet in orbit of that unremarkable star. The ship itself represented the pinnacle of its creators’ prowess as well as their salvation, liberty’s own liferaft fleeing the wreck of Earth’s freedom, bound for a star four lightyears away from Sol, a journey that should have taken the next fourty years spent with most of the crew in cryogenic storage.
Thats plan had gone overboard.


General Frederick Lafarge’s personal diary
Date of entry 28th October 2010 (Earth reckoning)



I shouldn’t even be writing this now. I’m looking at the date displayed by the mission computer, and I can’t help wondering if this is some kind of dream I’m having while my body’s frozen. Even though this should be impossible, impossible seems a valid adjective for the situation as I discovered it upon my premature thawing. It felt as if no time had passed since I went into cold storage but at least the unexpected developments kept me from dwelling in reflections about the war and how it could all have been different. If only. The words are still there and painful as ever, but I keep telling myself we should all look forward. No point looking back now. Especially not now, when the answer to the centuries-old question of makind just received an answer, as enigmatic as it came : we are not alone.
Whatever happened to the New America can’t have been a natural occurrence. Not with an obviously artificial structure waiting at the other end. Who built it ? Is it the same people who have somehow hijacked our journey ? Did they bring us here on purpose ? Why ? Is it a gift or a curse ?
So many questions and so many new perspectives. Faster than light travel at least. Captain Galloway’s crew checked as soon as they managed to get a location fix, we are still in the Milky Way, and the elapsed time according to astrometric data is exactly what the onboard clock says.
In the Milky Way but far from Sol. According to the plot we’re much closer to the galactic core, on the opposite side of Earth itself and apparently the relative motion is quite stable. Which means we can’t directly observe the Solar System (the core’s in the way) and the reverse is true.

And it means one important thing : whatever we do here, the Snakes won’t know.
Yet now we know FTL travel can be done. And the sheer size of that construction out there is pretty telling. If we ever manage to master the principles that made it all possible, then we’ll be able to build an army to crush the Snakes one day… and they won’t even know it until it happens.
That’s one possibility. By the time we’re able to do that, who knows, maybe they’ll have been left alone for so long that they’ll have duelled each other to extinction. That would be quite fitting a fate.
But that’s for a distant future (besides, I wonder what they’re going to think when the New America disappears from their scopes !). In the immediate time we need to survive and rebuild a working cilivization. And grow in numbers before we can ever hope to accomplish much besides.

I have the premonition that whatever we find on this floating island in space will be key to everything.
There is life over there, or at least an environment that’s conducive to life. A nitrogen-oxygen atmosphere, water vapor clouds. Which incidently hide much of the external surface, the pictures only show sea and glimpses of dry land and radar scans are blocked by the transparent dome - a wonder in itself given its sheer size and the material strength it presupposes.
The probe managed to get very close to the edge of the… dish ? saucer ? disk ? It’s more like a flower without the petals. As close as a hundred meters and no hostile reaction was registered coming from the alien facility. No reaction at all that we could discern in any case.
The vertical edge below the clear dome looks like a giant cliff of the same burnished grey metal seen everywhere else. It goes for three kilometers before the surface curves inward towards the stalk giving it the shape of a shallow cup, and there are abstract geometric patterns. What looks like a huge rosace on the curving underside, and matched entrelacs on the vertical band. It looks pretty, but whether it’s purely for aesthetics or there’s a more practical reason, we have no idea. There are all sorts of grooves and ridges and unconnected polygonal shapes that may or may not be doors.
The first probe is still taking high resolution pictures of the surface, focusing on the sideband since that’s where hangars doors or access hatches are most likely to be found. Three more probes was dispatched two hours ago in order to speed up the process.
I took the decision to wake up more crews as well. There’s an asteroid belt and several rocky moons in the system and we need to ascertain the resources we can access.
On the plus side, we have enough antimatter to last a century and more if we’re careful. Assuming we settle here, of course. And this decision depends on whether we can gain access to the alien station and live on it.



Uncharted star system
2010, November 2nd



It was an ugly and utilitarian contraption, a soda-can shaped pressurized compartment on top of a clump of spherical propellant tanks, and a cryogenic engine nested at the end. One of the New America’s small runabouts, designed to carry small numbers of personnel or cargo between orbiting starships. Not a heavy lift vehicle and not for endo-atmospheric use owing to its complete lack of aerodynamic considerations and paltry liquid fuel engines, the craft was attached to the hull of the ADSF Barcelona, one of the antimatter-powered parasite cruisers that formed the colony ship’s strike wing. She was named after the martyr Spanish city whose inhabitants had rebelled against Draka rule after the Eurasian War, only to be crushed by a Snake fission bomb. One atrocity amongst many in the dark years that followed the end of the war, as the Domination raped and pillaged Europe herself and drove her populations under the hated Yoke.
The name would always be remembered, as many others. The Snakes had killed or enslaved countless millions and maybe worse even, their twisted society was ensuring that no trace of the cultures and civilizations they had conquered would remain. Cultural genocide, erasing the memory of the people they fed to the Yoke so their descendants would never remember how their ancestors had lived free and the accomplishments of murdered nations. Even the language spoken by their parents they would forget, replaced by the Domination’s English, butchered and warped beyond recognition, a tongue as barbaric and ugly as the black soul of its practitioners. The Alliance refugees fully intended to carry that memory.

The Barcelona had undocked from her mothership thirty hours ago, after her crew was fully awoken and briefed. She was carrying six additional passengers and now they were crammed inside the runabout’s tight confines, strapped in zero-gee frames and clad in vacuum-rated Fleet suits.
Maneuvering from the New America’s geostationary orbit towards the alien platform holding position at the top of it’s thousands-kilometers long stalk had taken the best part of the past thirty hours. It could have been done much faster - but nobody wanted to light a full-power antimatter exhaust plume in such relatively close proximity to the colony ship, thus the cruiser’s bridge crew had taken their time and followed the plan drawn up by the New America’s command staff before their departure.
In addition, they didn’t want to spook any defense protocols the huge construct might have in place. So, a slow approach it was. It also gave the away team ample time to digest the data accumulated so far.
That thing was huge. It was built of unknown materials. One of the probe had latched on the hull and done a surface analysis. Its results were puzzling and that was the understatement of the month : diamond didn’t cut the unknown alloy, the sampling blade barely managed to scrape the surface and what it got was merely space grime deposited by particle winds and micrometeorite impacts.
And a rough-and-dirty calculation, based on the local star’s characteristics, suggested the station/beanstalk had been collecting space dust for millennia. Hundreds of millennia.
This just didn’t seem possible, and a more detailed analysis was sorely needed. And it was just the start.

The small craft shuddered as its mooring clamps were released and the small maneuvering thrusters puffed vapor, jolting it clear out of the cruiser’s frame. Seconds ticked by as it drifted away and once a safe distance was attained it rotated in place to align its axis with the computed approach vector that would lead it to the station looming a hundred klicks away.
Behind the front-mounted hatch and docking apparatus, Flight Lt O’Hare reviewed the parameters displayed on the collapsible flat screen displays. Vector, thrust, engine parameters were all in the green and no additional input would be necessary until they reached the end of their outbound trip. A braking sequence was already programmed to bring the craft to a relative halt near the station’s side, and then careful manual input would allow her to bring the runabout in the immediate vicinity of their target, a small section of wall tentatively identified as an entry hatch on the probes’ downloaded imagery.
Satisfied, she squirmed a little in her front-mounted acceleration frame to make herself more comfortable and craned her neck around to look at her passengers. Like her they wore their helmets with the faceplate open, since the compartment was pressurized. She met the blue gaze of the team’s commanding officer, seeking mere confirmation that everything was fine - so far. Of course, it was psychological, the repeater screens on the back of the acceleration frames showed the essential parameters of the craft. Nevertheless, they all had to be feeling a measure of apprehension. Who knew if some ancient defense system wouldn’t flash-fry them all on the way ?

“We’ve got the final go-ahead from Mission Control, Colonel. Course is set and autonav is engaged. ETA two hours” she rattled off in her professional, bored-unflappable-pilot’s voice.
“I can see that, Lieutnant. I’m sure we’re going to be fine.”
O’Hare nodded at the Colonel’s bright eager smile. The other woman seemed to be filled with expectations, and that was understandable enough given her background. A brilliant physicist and engineer, she had been a key member of the team who had designed the colony ship’s antimatter drive and among the New America’s passengers she was probably one of the most likely to make something of the alien systems.
The other members of the ad hoc team she didn’t know as well, and she tried to discern a reaction on the next passenger’s face. The man strapped at the scientist’s right met Rosie’s gaze with a stony stare of his own. White-streaked brown hair and grey eyes, hard-lined features, the kind of cold look that wouldn’t seem out of place on a Draka’s face, minus the eerie aura of amorality usually associated with the Snakes.
He had been introduced by Lafarge himself as a Major O’Neill during the mission briefing, without any mention of his past service record or technical specialty and O’Hare strongly suspected he was OSS. It would make sense and explain his relative familiarity with the General, an ex-OSS man himself.
Rosie’s gaze then drifted beyond, down the middle narrow passage between the two rows of passenger frames, but she could barely glimpse the last two members of the entry team obscured as the were behind the two officers. They were Fleet Marines, with Space Recon badges on the sleeves of their armored space suits. Muscle and life insurance, albeit both had various technical skills as well as a matter of course since everyone on the New America had at least a degree, everyone save the young children anyway, and half the colonists had a doctorate, many owning more than one. Their weapons were slung in cargo nets overhead, securely strapped to prevent them from escaping in micro-gravity as were the rest f the team’s impedimenta.

The main burn countdown reached zero on the displays and the runabout’s rear engine came to life, cryogenic hydrogen and oxygen reacting inside its combustion chamber and the passengers felt themselves pushed gently against their restraining frames. The acceleration was low at first, then became stronger as the craft cleared Barcelona’s immediate perimeter and its engine reached full power without any risk of damaging panels and antennas on the cruiser’s surface.
External cameras showed the receding hull behind, the looming mass of the alien station ahead and the spherical expanse of its anchoring planet below.
“Mission Control, Bravo-Three is on the way” O’Hare announced on the general frequency, using the runabout’s registry code.
“Understood Bravo-Three” it was the General’s firm, authoritative voice “we’ll be following you. Good luck, Colonel. Lafarge out.”
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This is great.

Finally we get O’Neill


Please do not make a timejump, as the social implications of recently assimilated Alliance citizens by the Domination (should the alliance manage to gain contact) would stand as a good parallel with the Jaffa in a distorted sort of way, especially should O’Neill meet and convince Teal’C to defect again.
I do hope the alliance tries to run a covert interference in the wars between slavers just like the Tok’ra, trying to free slaves from both while making sure both sides gain maximum casualties.
(so a closer link between the possible 3-way-aliance should jaffa, tokra and alliance get together)

That is, if you have not already written or are dead set to make this a story far in the future.

At any rate it’s nice to get away from the snakes once in a while.
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so, Jackson is a snake, O'neill is OSS, and I'm guessing that the Colonel next to him is Carter?

From what I can surmise, Loki's plan is to have both the Americans and the Draka build up, the latter crushing the snake-heads and then the American cavalry riding in to free the galaxy?

I'm going to love seeing that bite him in the ass.
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I'm hoping that we get to see sam carter appear in this she would certainly qualify for a spot on the new america
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And now we have the other side, probing, looking, and hopefully learning. They just need explosive population growth, and lot of industry, and they might be able to challenge the Draka.

Of course by that time, the Draka might have found other sources of industry, additional worlds, and have been breeding themselves as well, so things will get interesting. Anubis might have fun reading the newspaper about the two sides.
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Oooh, this is gonna be a nice change in pace.

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Great to see O'Neil make an appearance. Though I'm wondering if he'll be less joking and more pass the C4 because of how things have gone.

Also would Carter even be in the air force? I mean with no stargate program she was suppose to be an Astronaut, at least according to Continuum that's how things were suppose to go, but I don't know how different things would be with the Alliance's space program and all.
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The massive Alliance space program means extensive recruitment into the astronaut corps, and it's going to be easier to get in. Therefore, it's reasonable for Carter to be part of the military side of the New America expedition.
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It's not dead.
:)


******

The transit was unremarkable. It wasn’t anything the runabout’s passengers hadn’t experienced before, although this time the boredom was lifted by the particular nature of their destination and the requirements of their mission. Indeed the mass of pictures and readouts accumulated by the probes and the small spacecraft’s external sensors were enough to keep the crew occupied, although the two Marines made a show of sitting as straight as they could and listening to upbeat music in the mercifully closed confines of their helmets.
O’Hare had soothing classical tunes playing in her ear as she shared her attention between routine monitoring of the runabout’s systems and observation of the giant space station using the camera controls. As far as she knew, the pair of officers behind did the same, the Colonel visibly engrossed in her perscomp’s display.
And there was no reaction to their approach, soething O’Hare found herself thankful for - fretting that a most likely “reaction” could well consist in a well-aimed disintegrator ray or similarly unpleasant phenomenon.

Right on schedule the small capsule did an about-turn, pointing its rear engine forward to prepare for the braking, and after a perfunctionary checklist the pilot gave the computer her go-ahead. A faint vibration and pressure built-up, sustained for exactly the same time as the initial boost, and the runabout ended in a relative hover a hundred meters from the metal cliff now blotting half the sky, seeming to stretch up, down and sideways to infinity - but it was an illusion. The details could now be made out with the naked eye from the handful of viewports, or without any magnification on the cameras.
Curving ridges and geometric shapes blended into larger motifs with fractal regularity, a mathematical harmony that was probably designed to be readily appreciated by any sentient species, or so Carter felt. At least the alien geometry resonated in the human mind in a way that was both soothing and majestic and familiar. Well, she mused, it seemed that ancient aliens minds didn’t fit with Lovecraft’s depictions, although one had to be demented anyway to willingly choose emigration to Snakeland. No wonder he had imagined alien intelligence as something escaped from mad nightmares !
“There’s our destination” she reached forward and pointed at the main viewscreen, catching O’Hare’s attention. Set inside one of the smaller repeating motifs in a shallow recess was an opening of sorts, or at least something that looked like one, a two-panelled rectangular door made of the same material as the rest of the wall. Others like it were scattered on the surface, farther away, and this one seemed as good a place as any to try gaining access to the interior.
“Can you move us closer, L-T ?”
“Aye, Colonel Carter”
Short careful bursts from the maneuvering thrusters brought the capsule close enough to touch the station’s hull under manual control, the female pilot half-consciously trying to minimize the amount of burnt propellants she was spewing in such close proximity to the unknown titanic construct, even though she mentally scolded her apprehension. After all, the station had been hanging in space for thousands of years, and had likely withstood much worse than a few puffs of chemical smoke.

“Mission Control, Bravo Three is on-station next to the designated access. We’re ready to EVA”
“Bravo-Three, understood. Knock at the door whenever you’re ready, Mission Control out”

“LT, please depressurize, everyone, check your seals.”

“Crew compartment depressurized”
The firve crews were now in vacuum inside the small craft, its atmosphere pumped back into the air tanks at the back. They could have simply vented out, but there was no need to waste.
Familiar sensations. Muted vibrations conducted from the spaceframe through the suits, nothing audible save the mens’ own breathing and faint machinery noises from their built-in life-support systems, and the filtered voices coming through the radios.
In total silence, the front-mounted main hatch irised open, revealing the opposite door to direct eyeball observation, a scant two meters away from the motionless runabout’s nose. Two meters of space separating man from his greatest discovery to date, O’Hare thought, as the pair of Marines floated ahead, first to exit the relative safety of the flimsy aluminium walls into the void. The pair moved with trained precision, pushing themselves towards the alien wall - or floor, or ceiling, in zero gee such distinctions were eminently relative - in a bracketing pattern, one each side of the putative doorway. Each trailed a thin line, one end fastened securely to their transport, and they made contact.
Nothing happened as human hands touched the station for the first time in millenia.
“It’s safe, I think - no measurable change in emissions” Carter declared, eyeing the sensor take on her perscomp.

“Open Sesame !”
The Colonel arched an eyebrow, the effect throughly missed under the reflective visor of her helmet. Nevertheless, the OSS officer felt his superior’s stare on him.
“Well, I had to try it” he shrugged, the motion less than noticeable under the spacesuit.
“Would have been too easy.”
Thousands of kilometers away, Lafarge snorted. Typical O’Neill, making contact with mankind’s greatest discovery and finding a fitting wisecrack.
“Anyway, we’d have a better chance trying this” Carter pointed to a recess on the right side of the door. Right side, that is, with the dome being the “up” direction. Inside the recess was a lever sized for a human hand, currently flat against its cradle. As if to reinforce the logical conclusion, there were indications in alien script, blocky shapes that had to be letters or symbols. It didn’t take much imagination to deduce the writings meant something akin to “Open-Close”.
O’Neill removed a sticky pad from a container on his suit. Whoever the station’s builders were, their thoughtfulness hadn’t apparently extended to providing handholds for zero-gee work. If he tried to pull the lever without anchoring himself he would accomplish nothing but swing his own body around. The sticky pad was nothing but a handle with a flat adhesive surface on one side. Although very simple in idea, designing an adhesive that worked in vacuum and extreme temperatures on any surface was a remarkable achievement in itself.
He peeled the protective film and applied the sticky face to the unknown material, counterbalancing his push with a burst of his suit thrusters. A light pressure was all it took normally for the pad to take hold. He allowed the glue to consolidate for the recommended fifteen seconds, then gave a firm tug. It held, and he addressed a mental blessing to the engineers who had invented the space adhesive.
Thus anchored, O’Neill managed to pull the recessed lever. The mechanism yielded smoothly and without a hitch like a well-oiled one, belying the fact that it had been exposed to space for an insanely long time, and the explorers were rewarded by the panels silently parting away to reveal a dark chamber beyond. A second later, the darkness was banished as interior lights came on. It was evidently an airlock, with another set of doors on the far wall, about four meters deep, enough to hold all five me and women of the exploration crew.

More of the alien lettering around the far door controls. More elaborate than a simple metal lever : instead backlit crystalline buttons and a small screen coming alive with schematics.
It was the only adornment in an otherwise bare naked room. The walls were smooth here with a metallic bronze sheen, only broken by flush-mounted light fixtures emitting a warm glow and scattered thin gratings.
It didn’t look dangerous. Nevertheless the Major’s gloved hand prevented Colonel Carter from moving beyond the threshold as she intended to, even as the pair of Marines left their flanking overwatch and repeated their “in first go the expendables” routine.
No deadly trap activated as the two men crossed the threshold. No hidden rayguns, no impaling spikes, no cooking hard radiation.
The sudden and unpredictable artificial gravity field did elicit a pair of surprised exclamations though as the spacemen entered the chamber and found themselves falling towards the floor. Fortunately, they were already in the correct orientation and their surprise didn’t prevent them from landing on their feet, not particularly gracefully but safely.
They made a few tentative steps under the gaze of their superior officers, gauging the strength of the local gravity as well as checking their suit reading.
Their report was laconic enough.
“Sir, Ma’am, it feels and reads like one gee”
It was enough to make the Navy scientist giddy and she didn’t wait to share her sentiment on the circuit.
“Carter to Mission Control, there’s artificial gravity inside the station ! It’s amazing ! We’re in some sort of airlock, and the systems appear powered and functional. I think we might be able to use it and enter the station proper”
The reply from the New America’s bridge came a second later.
“Understood Colonel. If you think you can do this, then by all means try, but be careful. If you close the external doors you may be cut from communication, so think about that before going further.”

It was a good point, Carter reflected. There was no knowing if the alien material would allow radio waves through.
“L-T, you’re going to stay outside. I’ll try to operate the controls and close the external doors. If five minutes pass and either they don’t open again or we’re cut from radio contact, try using the manual release” she pointed to the handle O’Neill had used.
“And if it doesn’t work, well, use your judgment or defer to Mission Control’s orders.”
“Aye, Ma’am.”
Actually, staying outside of a potential trap very much appealed to Rosie O’Hare. She had no intention of becoming a dead hero.
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Yay, an update! So, who built the construct - the Ancients?
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Yes! I was hoping this hadn't died.

I really hope its somebody besides the Ancients. They just ended up being so meh to me.

Though I wonder who does live on the other side of the galaxy.
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Madzcat wrote:Yes! I was hoping this hadn't died.

I really hope its somebody besides the Ancients. They just ended up being so meh to me.

Though I wonder who does live on the other side of the galaxy.

Well... it was the Ancients :mrgreen:
But it dates back to when they were a (relatively) young civ. Not the jaded, degenerate, Star Trek Federation-dimwitted ones of Atlantis, but those who sent starships to seed stargates in all corners of the galaxy. Before 99,9% died of the Plague and the survivors became pussies.

Small, but rapid update.

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The buttons had to follow a logical order, Carter reflected as she gazed at the inner lock controls. And so she pressed the first one. The small luminous glyph inscribed on the crystalline surface was perfectly arcane, but its meaning became clear a fraction of a second later, when the outer doors closed, trapping the four-man party inside the airlock.
The radio came alive almost immediately after, with O’Hare’s voice calling.
“Colonel, the, uh, doors just closed !”
Thanks for telling me, Lieutnant Obvious, the physicist rolled her eyes. At least they could communicate through the exotic metal without substantial signal attenuation. It was one less concern for the expedition.
“I’m aware of that, L-T. Keep in contact, I’m going to see if I can pressurize and open the inner doors.”
The next button did nothing. At least it seemed so, until the environmental sensors aboard the spacesuits started to pick up a change in their surroundigs. The omnipresent vacuum was receding - gas was pouring out of the gratings.
“I guess the builders of this station really were logical” one of the Marines offered a comment, the first one since they’d left.
O’Neill and Carter nodded.
“So far so good”
“Pressure rising steadily” Carter added as a running commentary, mostly for Mission Control’s benefit, although their suit telemetry was transmitting everything back to the mothership. “Almost pure nitrogen though. No oxygen in the mix. Traces of argon and helium”
“Makes sense, somehow. Oxygen’s corrosive, nitrogen’s not. If I were the builders of this station and wanted to leave it mothballed I’d pump it full of non-reactive gas too”
“Pressure’s stable at 1020 Hpa. Earth-like”

“Okay… one button left to push”
Restraining the trepidation she was feeling, the scientist activated the last control, praying the mysterious alien mechanisms wouldn’t betray her.
The didn’t. There was a noise of locks disengaging, then the two panels slid aside with a hiss that was perfectly audible in the new atmosphere.
The first meters of a corridor were visible in the light coming from the airlock. After that it was pure blackness.
“Okaaaaay, not what I expected” Carter dropped, disappointment coloring her voice.
One of the Fleet Marines took a step forward and craned his neck, swiveling his head from side to side as if to listen better, then swept the darkness with the flashlight attached under the barrel of his flechette rifle and peered down the sight.
“Got anything, soldier ?” O’Neill was tense, hand on the butt of his holstered pistol, a heavy duty thing designed to punch through Draka space armor at close-range.
“No Sir. Nothing moving, as far as I can see it’s just a corridor. No weird alien monster with dripping fangs… and if it were invisible I’d still get a radar and sonar return to shoot it”
The officers ignored the faint snickers coming from the other Marine. Besides, the humor wasn’t unwelcome and took away some of the tension hovering around the team.
“Well, you go ahead Marine. If you get eaten by a space monster, we’ll try to kill it before it dies of food poisoning.”
“Works for me Sir.”


As it happened, there was no hidden space monster hidden behind the narrow gratings adorning the corridor walls, and no surprise spung from the next set of air-tight doors. The metallic surfaces were smooth and unadorned save for scattered indications in the blocky letters which had to constitute the station builders’ alphabet, and those were probably direction signs from their placement and repetitive nature. One set was repeated at regular intervals, following the general direction of the corridor towards the center of the vast construction. Others were set at intersections or above panels that were perhaps maintenance accessways. All in all the facility, what little was seen, was fitting with the logic expected from a technological civilization.
Still, everything was powered down, the only active mechanisms so far had been the airlock controls, which were probably operating on a standalone power source, but Carter was persuaded that more of the station’s systems were still under power. The internal temperature sat at a few degrees above zero celsius, which was unlikely unless some form of environmental control was active. And there was the issue of gravity, uniformly stable at one Earth gravity… which was a remarkable coincidence in itself.
“So, what do you think the local denizens looked like ?” O’Neill asked Carter. But the question was clearly one every member of the expedition had in mind.
The blonde female switched her attention away from her perscomp screen.
“Close enough to us. The way they designed their controls, the gravity we’re under, the air pressure, the size of things - I’d say humanoid, bipedal oxygen breathers.”
“Maybe we’ll find some of them, frozen just like we were ?”
“Now that would be another can of worms.”

The team had moved inwards for a little over two hundred meters, through an additional two sets of doors. Those were a different design from the airlock’s, with a locking mechanism in the middle that looked very much like a windstar compass with more of the alien script around the circumference. Some fumbling had been needed but the Marines had found how to operate it manually after a few minutes of experimentation. The locks were evidently meant to be powered, but they’d been (sensibly) designed with a fallback mode as well. Rotating the star-shaped rings disengaged the internal locking bars, cracking the panels open and allowing one to pull them apart with sheer muscle power.
Following the main corridor the explorers eventually reached a larger space, and made their first notable discovery.
The room they entered was much longer than it was wide in the illumination provided by their suit-mounted lights, its length perpendicular to to axis they had followed. The foursome spread out slightly, playing the beams of their searchlights across the darkness. They were standing on a platform running the length of the room. Another twin platform faced them across a four-meter wide chasm. Stepping closer, O’Neill made out what laid at the bottom of the trench, and signalled Carter with a hand. Moving up to his side, the scientist got a mental jolt of excitation at the sight.
“So, Colonel - are you seeing the same thing as me ?” the grey-haired Major asked in a level tone.
His fellow officer stared down, then aside, following the linear shapes on the trench floor where they vanished away in darkness.
Her mind digested the sight, and then she answered.
“Nothing looks more like a pair of maglev tracks than... a pair of maglev tracks” She felt herself grinning with irrepressible glee. “And I’m willing to bet those tracks go all the way around the periphery of the station
O’Neill completed her thoughts.
“I think we just found the local subway.” He sighed. “Some things are the same everywhere in the universe, it seems.”




General Frederick Lafarge’s personal diary
Date of entry 5th November 2010 (Earth reckoning)



Following the success of Colonel Carter’s mission, I have sent five more teams down to the station. They have cracked open three more external locks in the process.
What they have found so far confirms the preliminary observations : there is a maglev ring with boarding stations at regular intervals. Like the rest, it is unpowered and inactive. So far all the rooms and spaces our teams were able to explore showed the same state.
Colonel Carter speculates that a control room must exist somewhere, which makes sense, but we haven’t found it so far. None of the rooms the teams have managed to explore so far contain anything looking like like it in any case.
Of course, this station’s a huge place and we’ve only barely scratched the surface. We’ll be sending more teams as fast as we can thaw the men out. As long as the station remained in its current low-powered state, my staff is confident the teams aren’t too much at risk, and I agree : unpowered mechanisms cannot harm them unwittingly.
We have to determine whether this station can be rendered habitable and safe, and whether it can sustain the whole population of the New America.
If not, we’ll be in trouble. None of the planets in this system are inhabitable, the closest star system is three LY away and we cannot determine if it contains life-supporting planets with shipborne instruments.
Despite all this, I’m remaining confident. Confident in the skill and ingenuity of the New America’s crew. And also, confident that whoever sent us here did so in the knowledge that we could make the best out of the opportunity.
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Sounds like they're going to have more then enough space to fully thrive and expand.

It will be interesting to see how different their tech becomes to the Snake's since they'll have so much Ancient technology to help them along. Hmm.. Alliance battleships powered by ZPM's against Snake tin cans powered by naquadah generators. :mrgreen:
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Madzcat wrote:Sounds like they're going to have more then enough space to fully thrive and expand.

It will be interesting to see how different their tech becomes to the Snake's since they'll have so much Ancient technology to help them along. Hmm.. Alliance battleships powered by ZPM's against Snake tin cans powered by naquadah generators. :mrgreen:
Well... ZPMs were later tech. But what they're going to have around will still be a massive kick-up tech-wise.

The future of the Goa'uld empire is growing darker, but they don't know it. :cool:



Samothrace System
December 6th, 2010


“Colonel, evacuation is complete. All personnel have left the station, your team is the only one remaining on board. Airlocks have been sealed and the Barcelona’s moving away right now. Will notify when she’s safely out of sight, over”
“Understood General. I’m waiting for your go ahead.” Samantha Carter sounded cooler than she felt, butterflies were furballing inside her stomach and her impatience was killing her as much as she dreaded a catastrophic outcome.
Soon would come the culmination of a month of effort by hundreds of Alliance men and women. Since the day her team had cracked open the antique station, exploration by teams moving through the maze of passages and corridors inside the titanic construct had barely scratched a percent of its total volume. But logic and persistence had driven them straight to the station’s heart, following the neat clear route provided by the maglev transit system. The entry team had discovered the outermost ring first, and further exploration had uncovered a junction station where it connected to a radial line heading to the center. Subsequent efforts had focused on following the neatly laid-out axis of penetration, only pausing to crack open the massive pressure doors sealing the tunnel at regular intervals, a safety feature undoubtedly part of the mothballing scheme that had left the facility intact throughout the passing millennia.

At the same time, the Alliance crew had taken every opportunity to increase their understanding of the builders’ logic, codes and language. Every inscription was photographed, tagged and catalogued, maps were drawn, conjectures raised. Each small discovery raised new questions in turn.
Aboard the mothership, a transcription effort was underway using the data gathered by the explorers. The New America project had started its life as a hard science endeavor - a thing of physicists, mathematicians and engineers, shrouded in the deepest secret. Although it had grown to encompass more personnel and more disciplines as it crept closer to its ultimate goal, the criteria governing the recruitment and gathering of intelligences had still continued to lean heavily to the hard science area. In short, the colony ship had departed a Draka-dominated Solar System, it was filled with engineers of all stripes, from nuclear power generation to environmental systems and tailored ecologies, with a sprinkling of military personnel who were more often than not specialized in relevant technical fields.
There was a comparative dearth of people with a significant background in Humanities and social sciences. Not that there weren’t - enough wives had a degree in, say, History or Literature, gained before they married, had children, and moved out to the Asteroid Belt.
There were also a few generalist teachers to look after the young ones.
But there was no such thing as a Ph.D in Linguistics aboard.
To be fair, the initial plan hadn’t call for one, and the databanks contained most of the relevant knowledge in electronic form, readily available whenever the not-fledging-anymore colony could spare the effort for such intellectual luxury.

Therefore, the Rosetta team, as they’d taken to calling themselves with a hefty amount of self-derision, was composed of an OSS code-breaker, a Fleet Signal Intelligence specialist, and a Navy commander’s wife who happened to speak seven languages in addition to Latin and Greek and served as a language teacher before the Exodus for the Project’s youth.
Together, Lefarge hoped, they would combine analytical skills and flair for languages to make sense of the unknown alien speech.
So far, they’d managed to confirm the builders’ tongue was alphabet-based with a numerical system similar to their own, and had started to classify words into families. They were also making educated guesses on grammar, and their current theory pointed to a system of declinations similar to Latin, in principle at least.
It was a start and the more data was made available, the more they could refine their conclusions.

Otherwise the original denizens of the station had stayed as much a mystery as before, albeit shrouded in a strange veil of familiarity. No picture of them had been found. The explored spaces were devoid of representations, the only adornments appearing to be abstract motifs echoing those on the vast exterior hull. Blank walls dominated throughout, even in the areas that were assumed to have been public, deeper inside the station, as opposed to the area close to the exterior which was now assumed to be little-used maintenance and support access for the dark inactive machinery sitting silent and enigmatic, their unfamiliar shapes providing no clue to their function.

Other areas had seemed a lot more familiar in layout and function when teams had branched out from the maglev stations to explore their immediate surroundings. Once the surprise had worn off from suddenly stepping into wide open areas as opposed to the closed confines of corridors and maglev tunnels the explorers had found what were undeniably habitation quarters, wide curving “streets” overlooked by apartment balconies and gossamer metal platforms and adornments whose function could only be guessed.
Opening some of the doors had revealed spacious living rooms and perfectly preserved, if sparse, furniture whose form and function was immediately understandable and leant even more credence to the theory that whoever the facility’s builders were, they had a lot in common with humans.
But all was clinically sterile and impersonal. Not a single thing that might look like a piece of personal belonging, not a living microbe on the dustless surfaces. The ornamental flower gardens were filled with cold and sterile dust, soil long gone to powder along with the remnants of the plantlife they had been holding whenever the place was last inhabited. Fossilized stems and leaves that crumbled to nothingness under the touch of a warm glove. Ashes and ghosts everywhere. Not even a ghost town. It was as if the inhabitants had dutifully packed away every last trace of their presence and allowed the place to enter a state of eternal limbo. Which was exactly what must have happened as far as the explorers could guess. Everything pointed to an orderly, unhurried evacuation intended to preserve the possibility of returning one day.

Eventually they had reached the central region of the huge station, past the line’s terminus. By then the translation team had been confident enough in their nascent grasp of the alien language that they had pinpointed a particular letter configuration as linked to the concept of control and command, almost a hunch, but Carter’s team had doggedly followed the hunch past closed doors and rappelled down pitch black vertical elevator shafts several levels down, even closer to the central axis.
And they had reached a last set of massive doors sealed shut and no manual emergency control had been visible. But it hadn’t mattered. Long dormant systems had sensed the first Marine approaching the gate and blue-white ambient light had come alive in the access corridor. Unbeknownst to them, the four humans were scanned by biosensors hidden behind the walls, sensors advanced enough that even vacuum hardsuits wouldn’t have blocked their keen sight. The lighter ship-duty uniforms and oxygen mask every team had taken to using instead of the bulkier spacesuits inside the station were no concealment to the ancient scanners.
As those relayed their findings to the eon-old custodian system, the crystalline processor nodes recognized their long wait as over, for the beings they’d waited for with infinite patience had finally returned. Or at least, beings whose structure, layout and pathways were sufficiently similar that they shared a direct lineage from the beings who had first designed and programmed them.
And so the machine custodian did what it was built for. It opened the gates before the putative reclaimers. The next and final step would be theirs to take.

It all had been an hour ago. The thick armored panels had swivelled out in silence, preceded by a musical chime, and the team had stepped through in the hope that their expectations would be met at last. They found themselves in a wide spherical chamber, four stepped levels arrayed from the equator down, each sporting workstations - a molded seat and a set of controls of sorts - all dark and unpowered ; the central area empty under a glittering crystalline protrusion that screamed holographic projector to Carter - opposite the entrance, a jutting platform held another seat, throne-like in its bare metallic sheen.
It all seemed so logical, so recognizable as something humans with such a technological mastery would create that Carter’s imagination immediately pictured the “control center” in livelier days, ranks of… people, she couldn’t imagine them otherwise, manning those stations under the watchful and serene gaze of the being sitting on the lone chair, monitoring the myriad data such a place would generate - grand dreams of resurrecting that picture except with the men and women of the Alliance as operators. A shiver of excitation, hope and awe had run along her spine and she could feel her companions shared a measure of her awe. They were simply better at hiding it.
Although Major O’Neill did voice a part of his feelings.
“I wonder if the people who ran this place had big honking guns too ? Because I’d have some if I were them… oh yes” he trailed down as his gaze swept the room from one end to another.
“Maybe they were the peaceful, pacifistic, ‘diplomacy can solve everything’ types ?” one of the Marines snickered.
O’Neill made a spitting sound. “Not in the kind of universe that spawned the fucking Snakes, son.”
Nods answered him from the two soldiers. Mere mention of the Drakas always seemed to drop the atmosphere’s temperature by a few degrees - that or inflame it altogether.
“Well Sir, I hope we find out whatever technology’s hidden in those walls and use it one day to kick the Snakes’ slimy butts.”
“Amen to that. Even if I’m long dead when it happens.”

Further talk of the arch-enemy was interrupted by Carter’s cry and the soldiers pivoted with trained instinct to the source of the sound, weapons ready to blast any threat to their charge with an alacrity that was as much the result of training as deeply-ingrained male instinct to protect the females of the tribe. But there was no danger. Only surprise and wonderment as they registered what had caused the scientist to sound off.
Set in the wall section behind the command chair was a square panel, its rim glowing a thin pulsing blue line. Inside the smooth dark grey slab was the embossed imprint of a hand. A thumbed, five fingered hand, its slightly oversized shaped providing an invitation to press a live one on its surface and see what would happen.
Which was exactly what Carter tried to do, until O’Neill’s caught up with her and prevented her from proceeding with her idea.
“Ma’am, I think we should consult with the General before trying anything… reckless”
She froze, processed the suggestion and sensibly pulled her arm back from the waiting panel.
“I… yes, you’re right. It might be dangerous. Better take precautions.”


“So that’s it General” she finished explaining to the command staff aboard the colony ship. The radio link was crisp and clear thanks to the relays installed along the axis of exploration, bringing out every pause and every inflection faithfully. “It’s our best bet. Everything so far has appeared logical enough. This has to be it - the control room we were looking for, and the panel just has to be a switch, I’d bet my life on it.”
The General’s voice came back seconds later, heavy and brooding, weighing the pros and cons as he set to take a decision that might seal the fate of the entire expedition.
“You make a convincing argument Colonel and, personally, I think you’re right - or I’m hoping for it. And there’s something else too you should know - Commander Galloway has completed his astrometrics survey and his conclusions are… well I’ll let him explain the highlights to you Colonel Carter.”
“Colonel, Major, I don’t want to weight on your decision” the starship commander began with as much levity as he could muster to ease the finality of his message “but as you know I’ve been tasked with surveying the region of space we find ourselves in the middle of. I have compiled hundreds of hours of instrument time and cross-checked my conclusions with my fellows. I’ll forward the detailed data to you Colonelbut in short, the system we’re currently in sits in a very energetic region of space due to its proximity with the galactic core. We have a very hot nebula corewards, containing several supernova residues, black holes and even neutron stars in the vicinity - all mere lightyears from our position. The local star’s own particle wind creates a bubble of relative safety, but if we were to cross the heliosphere to reach one of the surrounding systems… even the New America’s radiation and particle shielding would be overwhelmed. The crew would experience irreversible cellular degradation even in cold sleep. We’d be all dead on arrival.”
He paused to let the facts sink in then resumed.
“Basically, we’re stuck here. We can’t leave the system - not with the ships we have anyway. So you better succeed at reactivating this station… hoping it is indeed supportive of human life. Because even here we’re taking four times the ambient level of stellar radiation we’d be taking in the Solar System.”
“Thanks Commander. I really feel better now” Carter let a smile audible enough on the link color her tart reply.
“For all our sakes Colonel, for all our sakes.”



“Understood General. I’m waiting for your go ahead.”

It was four more hours before every member of the colony save Carter’s team was safely out of sight, aboard one of the ships holding orbit on the other side of the planet where they would be shielded from any… complication. Hopefully.
“Every man and ship accounted for, you are clear to proceed Colonel. Whenever you’re ready.”
“I’m as ready as I can be General. See you a in a moment, over.” she finished on an optimistic tone.


With an intake of breath, she pressed her ungloved right hand on the waiting imprint. An instant of nothing, then - light, glowing through the flesh of her hand for an instant, just before it was eclipsed by every workstation lighting up along with the ceiling-mounted projector. In the empty space at the middle of the chamber a vast three-dimensional display flickered to life, showing the station’s outline, its connecting stem and the planet below and the surrounding star system in multicolored glory, the sheer scope breathtaking, but nothing compared to the rest - all around the periphery of the chamber’s curving walls a similar event happened, blank dark walls seemingly vanished to be replaced by a view of the exterior space as if the bulk of the construct had suddenly turned invisible.
Carter wasn’t sure whether she imagined or actually felt the faint vibration of machinery coming to life deep inside the bowels of the station. But the hiss of rushing air was all too real and she glanced at her suit-mounted environmental display.
Yes.
The oxygen level was rising.
Freedom Station was waking up from its long slumber.
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Oh goody, another update!
One of the Fleet Marines took a step forward and craned his neck, swiveling his head from side to side as if to listen better, then swept the darkness with the flashlight attached under the barrel of his flechette rifle and peered down the sight.
I can't help but think that quite a few flechettes would be needed to put down a Drakensis. Also, no night vision or thermal sights?
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So now I'm wondering if that throne like chair is like the ancient control chair on Destiny.
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[R_H] wrote:Oh goody, another update!
One of the Fleet Marines took a step forward and craned his neck, swiveling his head from side to side as if to listen better, then swept the darkness with the flashlight attached under the barrel of his flechette rifle and peered down the sight.
I can't help but think that quite a few flechettes would be needed to put down a Drakensis. Also, no night vision or thermal sights?
Yes they do have NV and IR. It's not one of those "advanced and futuristic" settings where elite commandos go exploring dark tunnels with nothing but a flashlight (Doom, I'm looking at you !). To expand on, they have visible light and IR torchlights, and the Marine suits also have radar and ultrasonic scanners. But looking down a beam of light is such an instinctive human gesture.
And some of those flechettes have miniature HEAT warheads :-)
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Chapter 1


Samothrace System
December 15th, 2010



“General, welcome aboard Freedom Station !”
Words, so ordinary, so banal. The event was anything but. Not were the people doing the welcoming ordinary by any measure, but even their career and accomplishments paled before the place he was setting foot in, past the Alliance-standard airlock assembly that protruded out of the access point, the very same one that had first allowed entry into the alien facility. While eminently functional and simple to operate, the size and layout of the pressure door frame were not compatible with the standardized airlock design implemented on every Alliance spaceship or station, which relied on a mechanical latch to ensure the tightness of the seal. Therefore and in order to avoid a bothersome spacewalk every time one wanted to enter or exit the giant floating building, a clear sleeve of heavy duty polymer was anchored around the exterior set of doors with space glue. It was ended on the other extremity by a lightweight lock assembly and a brace of girders provided the necessary rigidity. It had taken eight hours of work by a small team of zero-gee work specialists, but now shuttles and runabouts could directly transfer their passengers without the need for them to don vacsuits. In fact, the New America herself could technically latch one of its extensible access tubes on, but so far the leader of the expedition was content to let the colony ship hang in the planet’s shadow.
Sooner or later, he reflected, it would come to that. The bulk of the crew was still frozen, but the prospects of them not remaining in that state for much longer were good. The reports from the exploration teams were positive enough. But they left many questions unanswered and he needed to see it all with his own eyes.
Well, maybe Colonel Carter would be able to answer some of those questions. He stepped forward and answered her salute formally, hand to temple, his legs straight enough despite the challenge of Earth-level gravity.
He let a few seconds pass before he added anything. The pull of gravity, the crisp air, fresh and pure as if he were standing on top of a glacier instead of being inside a giant pressurize metal can floating in space, the neutrally pleasant temperature, all the sensory input seemed to belie the fact that he was standing inside an artificial environment. Especially one that had been standing empty and unused for literally longer than recorded human history - although this last fact might come under scrutiny in light of the… history presented by the station.

“Colonel Carter” he said. “Congratulations on your work, first.”
The blonde scientist made a self-deprecating gesture, smiling tightly.
“I’m not alone, and everything I did, a monkey could have done it really”
Her attempt at modesty was sabotaged by the man standing close to her side, who held himself in a more relaxed way, apparently not intimidated the slightest way by the presence of a four-star general in front of him. A general he knew well enough that his attitude wouldn’t be misconstrued as a sign of disrespect.
“Gee, thanks Ma’am. Glad you value my skills”
The sarcastic remark was taken with good grace. After weeks of working together the scientist had gotten used to the soldier-spook’s steel-cutting wit and self-deprecating remarks. And apparently Lefarge had some prior experience of it, too, as his amused snort showed.
The Marine guards remained stone-faced, doing their best to blend in the background and look like fixtures until they were needed to kill something. They were the only ones still wearing full hardsuits, albeit with the facemask removed. In addition to their personal gear and weapons they also carried emergency survival equipment, first of all two inflatable survival bubbles in case of a decompression, fire or any other condition that could render the immediate surroundings uninhabitable. Those could keep up to four people alive and safe for 24 hours before rescue.
Beyond the open airlock was the same corridor first explored by Carter and her team, but its light fixtures were now operating, their radiance evidently subdued but enough to make out the details, or rather, the lack of details on the walls. Smooth grey metal with bronze reflections, a black polished floor that amazingly wasn’t slippy despite its glass-like finish. Lefarge could see a number of side doors and hatches at various heights, all of them sporting stenciled labels in the ubiquitous ancient script.
One of the apertures was open as the group walked past and the General glimpsed a narrow room filled with colored piping and luminous… devices emitting a low hum that reminded him of a high voltage cabinet. Two engineers were inside, taking pictures and readings and absorbed enough by their task that they missed the passage of the officers entirely.

Carter commented. “We’re trying to catalogue the station’s systems, make sense of the various piping and wiring. It’s… not easy.”
“Why ?”
“Well, most of those things are totally unfamiliar. We’re dealing with such a technological gap, we have almost no reference and most of the time we’re simply making guesses, and not very educated guesses at that.”
“That bad ?”
She nodded as she walked, her hands making gestures to put emphasis on her words.
“Oh, some things are self-explanatory, like the maglev system. Other things we get their function, but how they work might as well be magic.” She called up an example from memory. “Like their life support systems. You see, we found one of the air recyclers easily by following a fresh air vent. Got sensor readings on both ends, CO2 going in, O2 coming out, filtered, clean and sterile. We managed to open the casing and thread thing sensors inside, expecting to see reactant tanks, filters, more piping, everything you’d expect from an air recycler”
“And ?” The General’s eyes met hers as they continued walking side by side.
“And nothing of sorts. Well, piping yes. In fact the whole thing’s apparently a pipe air goes through and… something happens to it, but it doesn’t involve any chemical reaction, nothing visible.”
“Some kind of ionic process ?”
Carter shook her head. “No… but something definitely happens. There are solid state devices all around the section of piping, with those crystalline logic controls we’re finding everywhere. Somehow, those things manipulate matter directly at the atomic level, breaking and rearranging molecules on the go. How they’re doing it… I haven’t the faintest idea.”
“It sounds a bit like our matter transmutation, Colonel”
“In a machine the size of a domestic fridge, Sir ? Atomic transmutation takes kilometer-sized particle accelerators as far as we know it. No, this is much, much more advanced.”

It took them a few more minutes to reach the first maglev station, past airtight doors that now opened automatically before them and closed again after their passage.
Both Carter and O’Neill had a not-so-subtle “you’re going to be impressed” air on their faces as the group neared the last set of doors, the ultimate separator between the maintenance zone and the public areas that began at the outer maglev ring.
And it was like stepping in another world.
No more drab metal walls. There was a sharp intake of breath and a muttered “Holy Mother of God” as the General took in the vista spread before his eyes. It was an illusion, it had to be, his intellect reacted, but the sight before him did not belong to the inside of a space station, even a gigantic one. He found himself standing on a platform, a narrow-looking one at that, at least in comparison with the sprawling panorama surrounding it.
The dark, dead walls and ceiling the first explorers had found under their flashlights were no more. Now the maglev trench and its parallel boarding platforms appeared to float in the air above a mountain range of snow-capped peaks, glacial valleys and green pine forests stretching from horizon to horizon under a clear blue sky dotted with puffy white clouds. It was an illusion, he repeated to himself, it had to be. He took a step closer to where the wall should be and extended a hand. His fingers met an invisible but unyielding surface, smooth as glass but devoid of any betraying reflection. He pulled back his fingers and looked closer, trying to discern something, smudge marks, anything to show there was something solid.
Nothing. A perfect illusion, his point of view changing as he moved sideways, his eyes abused by the artificial depth of field. His sight told him that he was indeed standing over those mountains, but he knew they were just a projection… weren’t they ? He touched the screen again, amazement on his face, then turned back with a more collected look.
“Your reports weren’t doing it justice, Colonel. This is… amazing. A perfect tridimensional surround display… this is far above our tri-D technology, even the cutting edge military version. If this is the start, where does it end ?”
“Honestly, I have no idea Sir. But you might want to take a look at the center” she said with a grin. She had gone through the same amazing process of discovery after power was restaured throughout the city-station. And while she had had more time to get used to the sights, she was far from jaded yet.

She watched as her commander followed her invitation, and made another “Oh !” face again. It might not look as dignified as an officer general ought to appear, but he had every excuse, and after all they were inside the greatest discovery of human history. Nobody could be held at fault for looking impressed. Besides, she thought with a sobering pang, they all could use some uplifting experiences. A decade may have passed in real terms, but for the cold sleepers the war and defeats were still a fresh open wound in memory.
In any case, the General had the same reaction towards the force field isolating the live maglev track as everyone else. He peered at the faint immaterial gold-hued screen, poked it tentatively then brought up his finger for examination. No pain and no harm done. The whole hand followed, flat on the slippery repulsive screen, moving it as if cleaning a window, trying to get a grip at how it behaved, rapped it with a closed fist and found it rebounding away.
“Might as well be magic.”
“Heh, sufficiently advanced technology, as they say.”
“Any idea how resilient it is ?”
O’Neill answered this. In a way. The Marines were expecting his gesture and didn’t budge, Carter made a “not again, you barbarian” semi-scandalized face, and their commander’s eyebrows shot up in alarm, then settled again when nothing catastrophic followed the little experiment.
An experiment that consisted in firing a pistol bullet straight at the forcefield, which reacted locally with a flashing ripple and nothing else, save a low clatter as the flattened bullet fell on the floor.
“That’s… a little reckless even for you, O’Neill” Lefarge observed with a frown, to which a shrug answered.
“I tried punching and kicking it first. Figured it was safe.”
Behind the tranquil-looking Major, the blonde physicist rolled her eyes.
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The trigger-happy Major’s demonstration, and any argument that may have followed, were interrupted by the timely arrival of a mag-train, its motion silent and smooth as only magnetic suspension and drive could be. Instantly recognizable as a mass transit instrument, two interlinked cars joined by a flexible connection, silver hulls and glass panels, the interior brightly illuminated. Sparse seating, no handle bars, the most glaring difference with an Earth-built tube. Either the ancient denizens had great sense of balance or there was something else - the thing seemed to decelerate and presumably accelerate faster than a normal train.
Side dors slid open automatically and corresponding sections of the safety force field vanished to allow access, and the Earth-born leader stepped inside, leaving the station’s immaculate vistas behind.
By comparison, the stark but soothing off-white surfaces of the car were rather pedestrian. The holographic displays hovering in the air below the roof were not. While they certainly fulfilled the same function as the printed ones back on Earth, namely displaying navigation and line information, the way they did it still induced wonderment.

A moment later the doors closed and the station started to move around the mag-cars. At least that was the illusion his abused senses presented Lefarge with. The car was moving - but it did so without the slightest felt sensation. There was none of the unbalancing acceleration one was accustomed to in Earth transports, nothing. It felt as if the train wasn’t moving at all, yet it was picking up speed at a good rate.
“I understand now why there are no handles in this crate…” he said to no one in particular, though he was answered by his female guide.
“We were all surprised the first time.The technology behind it must be -”
“Far above ours, I get it” amusement, patient sufferance and wonderment were all present in the General’s tone. He was already resigned at the prospect of hearing that particular spiel a lot more. “At least we’re evolved enough to know it’s not magic or gods doing it like that movie with the primitive tribesman in the New York metro !”
The humorous reference to a pre-war blockbuster comedy sent a mental image of the little group wearing feathers and painted tribal markings and gaping at the magical moving metal chariot, and grins appeared over every face. Until the men got their mind invaded by the picture of Colonel Carter wearing nothing but a banana skirt and their deeply ingrained sense of propriety reasserted itself with a vengeance and a few barely concealed winces.
It wasn’t the sort of thing a decent man contemplated about a lady and a superior officer to boot. Both Marines stamped on their imagination. The General thought of his wife. O’Neill allowed the charming image to linger in glorious detail before their arrival at the next station distracted his mind.

Oblivious to her companions’ mental struggle, Carter resumed her running commentary.
“The average interval between stations on the ring lines amounts to roughly 800 meters and ten seconds of travel time -”
“Ten seconds ?” the General’s tone was one of mild shock. ‘But that’s an average speed of…”
The physicist answered before he could finish the calculation.
“288 kilometers per hour, yes. Average. Which means a higher peak speed and a rate of acceleration and deceleration that would be entirely unhealthy in any circumstance.”
He let the facts soak in then almost blanched.
“Dear God, I hope these ancient mechanisms won’t fail for lack of maintenance !”
“So do I, Sir. Logically the designers must have included failsafes and self-checking routines though.”

Three more stations went past, each sporting a different view although all were mountains of sorts, of various sizes and shapes and color and times, showing autumnal red and gold or lively spring greens in addition to wintery whites. Forests, prairies and glaciers, all true to life and teeming with life too, at least moving specks that looked like birds and others scattered on the virtual grounds. There wasn’t enough time for a close look.
“… and we’ve started to call it the Mountain Line since all the stops share that theme.”
“What about the rest ?” Lefarge gestured to the closest holomap displaying the orbital city’s spiderweb-like transportation network. The lines’ geometry wasn’t exactly regular - while the rings were more or less perfectly circular, the radials were neither straight nor evenly spaced and some sported side branches to fill out the wider exterior areas.
“All have a unique theme it seems, usually natural scenery -”
“I take it those sceneries are from… different planets ?”
Carter nodded affirmatively. “As far as I can see, yes. And in case you’re wondering, Earth is among them”
Her little bombshell had the expected effect.
What ? Are you sure of that ?”
“I saw it myself Sir.” O’Neill interjected “Inside one of the habitat section. A big great holowall with old Earth as if viewed from high orbit. Except it’s a really old view, with jungle instead of desert in the Sahara”
The General’s eyes went to Carter as if to demand a confirmation. She provided it.
“As the Major says, Sir. Earth as it was millions of years ago.”
“Too far to see any dinosaurs though.” O’Neill added with a look of wistful regret.
“Now why didn’t you report this before ?” the colony’s commander added a moment later.
The reply came with a disarming smile from the blonde woman.
“I thought it warranted more than a dry electronic report Sir.”

The radial line they switched to five minutes later was the aptly-nicknamed Volcano Line, with spectacular and sometimes frightfully close displays of raging geysers of lava and flowing rivers of molten rock under darkened skies ; black tormented plains of solidified magma in chaotic jagged piles or smooth-flowing paste ; and in places the display designers had added sound as well, roaring crashes and subterranean breaths filtered just enough to allow conversation and not deafen waiting passengers.
The variety and scope of the displays brought more questions, and answers whose scope defied human imagination.
“Just how many hours of recording does this represent now ?”
Carter took a breath before answering, as if to underline the magnitude of the answer.
“We’re probably talking years of recording for some scenes, with a level of detail that’s simply frightening in order to create those perfect illusions. I don’t know, assuming every holowall shows a different view… I guess it would take petabytes of data storage.”
Lefarge whistled softly. “Petabytes of storage… just for their equivalent of wallpaper ? Just who were these people ?”
“People so advanced…” Carter began “… they make us look like chimps in comparison” O’Neill ended without missing a beat.
“I see I wasn’t wrong putting you two on the same team.”
Both officers grinned in unison.

As expected, “Earth Village” was a sight to see. Situated three stations from Volcano Line’s innermost terminus, the self-contained habitat was as close to an outdoor environment as could be expected inside a gigantic metal can, starting with an access street off the maglev stop whose wallscreens mimicked lush gardens - a sensory experience enhanced by the fragrance of greenery and flowers distilled into the air and the chirping of birds over the rush of wind in branches and leaves. A thought flashed inside the General’s mind. The fucking Snakes would love this. Then he consciously corrected himself. We’re not Snakes but it doesn’t mean we can’t enjoy beauty too - and we aren’t hiding the ugliness of our character under pretty appearances either. And I’m certainly not going to let the bastards spoil this, even through their mere memory.

The entry way opened mid-height into a wide circular atrium, extending vertically for a hundred meters up- and downwards in a terraced fashion, leaving the narrower bottom portion occupied by a small pond of clear water into which ran the small waterfalls running downwards from the top in zig-zagging patterns. Long dried and petrified arboreal skeletons also hinted at widespread greenery arrangements all around the levels.
“Whoever likes gardening will have their work cut out for them” Carter observed. “At least once Life Sciences checks it all out for suitability”
“We’ll grow veggies first rather than ornamental plants then” Lefarge answered. “About that, any progress on the dome ?”
Carter shook her head in negation. “Access is still blocked, but we’re getting hints that something’s happening out there. Atmosphere’s changing according to spectral measurements and the probes also caught movements on the surface, what might be machinery at work under the cloud layer. Unfortunately the dome’s material’s interfering with scans so we’re mostly guessing. Me, I think the station’s automated systems are restoring the dome’s environment for human presence or something like that.”
Her admission elicited a grinning smile from her commander.
“So what it takes is a millions year old alien space station to reduce our genius scientist to guesses and vague conjectures.” He was rewarded by Carter’s sheepish face.
“Anyway Sir, should you want to look straight up… “ she bounced back, moving toward the edge of the platform they were standing on, and the General followed her. Craning his neck he caught the object of interest at once - filling what passed as the atrium’s ceiling was a football stadium sized holowall displaying Earth in all the home planet’s glory, pristine and untouched by Man’s hand. The continents were instantly recognizable with the tip of South America and a green Antarctica that clearly drove home the notion that this Earth was from a long, long ago past.

The vision threatened to bring along a wave of longing and nostalgia which he fought back dutifully, staring at the blue, white and green colors of mankind’s cradle hovering above and looking as real as the real thing. Yes, Earth was a jewel, but a jewel presently sullied and polluted by the cancerous Domination. The worst thing was knowing there still had to be free men and women fighting against the Yoke, with no hope beyond hurting the Snakes enough before the Redoubts died out.
He was mercifully pulled away from those depressing thoughts by the Colonel’s resumed account of things delivered in a continually “wow isn’t it amazing ?” tone.
“…all checks out. Life support’s all good, the New America’s crew could move in the station tomorrow with room to spare, see Earth Village alone can hold two thousand easily and it’s just one of the ninety or so similar habitation quarters indicated on the station’s schematics, not even including the actual dome which could conceivably hold a lot more and...”
“I get it, there’s room for everyone. But can we trust this place to hold together for several lifetimes ? We don’t have any control on its inner workings, what if tomorrow some alien computer decides we’ve overstayed its welcome ?”
The deflated look on Carter’s face only lasted for a couple heartbeats. Clearly it was a possibility that had crossed her mind before, and her reply was as far from mathematical certainty as could be.
“Well… we have to have faith.”
“Alleluia !” O’Neill kept his skepticism at a mutter. Yet loud enough to be heard.
“Major ? You have a suggestion ?”
He nodded emphatically.
“Yes Sir. We find that central computer, strap a nuke on it and blackmail it in case it goes all uppity on us meatbags !” he delivered in a deadpan tone.
“Riiight. Bringing a nuke aboard’s the last thing I’d do lest the station feels threatened, Major.”
“Just keeping options open.”


“… And that’s the ‘Knowledge Room’ as we call it.”
“I see”
Another trip trough the maglev system had brought the group to another highlight. One of the most promising ones, too judging by the activity inside. While most areas they had visited so far were largely devoid of human presence, the core sector was understandably at the heart of the exploration effort and the present room laid a mere two levels and one section from the Control Center. A faceted circle in horizontal layout with a tall domed ceiling, the sides were filled with display terminals set in the walls, the absence of depth a notable change from the omnipresent holowalls. The controls were highly reminiscent of the workstations in the Control Center, and all were currently occupied by a New America crewmember tinkering and taking notes of the changes each input created.
But the truly spectacular sight was taking the entire center of the room. Another volumetric hologram generated by a central pedestal, the controls for which were operated by a small man with Asian features. The name tag on his chest was superfluous.
“Doctor Nagami” Lefarge called, simultaneously gesturing for everyone to stand down from attention and resume their work.
“General” the man replied, bowing as was his cultural custom, rooted in old Japan and kept faithfully alive by the New Edo colonists on Luna. “Your presence here honors us.”
“I had to see it for myself, Doctor” a nod answering the bow “How’s your work progressing ?” he pointed at the arcane light sculpture filling the empty space.
“Ah, allow me to show you General” the Japanese-accented computer expert put his hands back on the control surface. “Let’s begin with…” he fiddled a short instant and the hologram reconfigured in the blink of an eye.
“Do you recognize those ?” he pointed at one of the multicolored clumps orbiting silently over their heads.

Lefarge peered in. It looked like a planet and a moon doing circles around it. The other shapes were similar albeit with more spheres… Realization struck at once.
“Hydrogen”
“Indeed General.” Nagami was practically beaming. “And every element besides, including a few superheavy ones we never managed to create in high energy physics experiments” he pointed to a complicated and large atom floating amidst the others. Without waiting for a comment the doctor changed the display again, focusing on a single element.
“Hydrogen, the simplest of all” The hugely magnified atom was now flanked by placards of text in alien script. “With all the relevant data, although we haven’t entirely cracked yet what is what.”
“But that’s not all !” the exclamation was followed by yet another reordering of the holo. Figures and more text. Basic geometry, Lefarge understood. Areas and volumes with formulas. More complex shapes and increasingly arcane high level geometries.
“Like a textbook” he commented.
“Yes, yes ! All laid out in logical fashion once you understand how the interface works. Took a lot of trial and error, but safe.”
Another switch.
“Galaxy map !”
That was obvious enough. The Milky Way in detailed volumetric glory, illuminating the room with golden light.
“I can zoom in !”
A sector of the cosmos expanded. Individual clusters became visible, then single stars, then a star system. “The Solar System !” The enthusiastic doctor wasn’t leaving his visitor any time to speak first. But then Lefarge was content enough just looking at the show for now. The view was understandably not entirely at scale - the Sun in the center and the planets in orbit were much larger for the sake of facilitated vision.
Cartouches of text sided each celestial body, but there was something else to the now familiar alien characters near Earth. A set of unknown symbols, seven of them.
“What are those ?” Lefarge pointed at the strange cartouche.
Nagami made a minute shrug.
“I don’t know General. I found similar inscriptions next to planets in other star system, but there are so many of those I’m afraid I have only scratched the surface.”
“Only planets ?”
“Indeed General. Planets and moons of size and composition similar to Earth.”
“Interesting.”
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So they just found all the gate addresses for the whole galaxy?

This could get very interesting.
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They have the gate addresses, but no DHD (yet).

I'm sure there's one buried on the station somewhere. When they find it, and how long it takes them to figure it out, is another story.
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Freedom Station, Samothrace System
December 23th, 2010



It wasn’t Earth Village, but it was otherwise similar in design. This habitat was closer from the core, and Lefarge had selected it as much for the proximity with the station’s most crucial systems as for the fact that its ceiling did not sport a virtual recreation of Earth along with the sorrowful memories it evoked. Others hadn’t shared this sensitivity and gladly moved in, but their commander had settled for more neutral quarters. The planet adorning the virtual sky was a gaseous giant reminiscent of Saturn with its spectacular and colorful rings and close orbiting moons and the display was truly vertigo-inducing if one gazed too long. Nobody knew where in the Universe this collection of orbital bodies laid or what its original name was, but it didn’t matter. To its prospective denizens it was home.
Frederick Lefarge hadn’t picked the apartments he was occupying - or rather sleeping in when he wasn’t inspecting some part of the city-station or dealing with the myriad tasks involved in setting up a colony or shuttling back and forth to the New America.
The choice had been Marya’s. His sister, who had spent longer than a decade under the Yoke, owned by one of the most prominent Snakes at that, and the cruel irony of fate had made it so that he, as an OSS agent escaping the Domination’s boot falling over India, had unwittingly shot Yolande Ingolfsson’s lover. A lover whose clone was borne in Marya’s womb. The sister of the assassin bearing the dead one’s unnatural progeny as well as the secret weapon that would have spelled the doom of adoptive mother and child… had it only remained a secret a little longer.
And Cindy, his own wife, pushed into abominable self-inflicted torture to save their children by a Yolande Ingolfsson acting out of vengeance against him, out there in the cold void between planets.

Yet both had lived, survived the Snake’s bite, and were with him now. It had meant a lot to him in those dark days when the free Alliance had crumbled, but he hadn’t escaped survivor’s guilt either. He’d escaped with his family. Many others weren’t so fortunate.
In any case, Marya had taken the outlandish news in stride after her thawing. Maybe she was inured to surprise after everything she’d experienced. Certainly she had a strong mind. Stronger than his, he believed. And she decided to scout out a new home for the family before Cindy and the kids were brought back to life in turn. So when the reunited Lefarges left the colony ship, Marya was there to greet them and guide them to a place they could call home.
And it certainly deserved the title, taking half the uppermost level of the habitat with vast patios and balconies overlooking the rest, right under the virtual sky. The kids had their own room to rest and experiment with the interactive wallscreen display on their free time. Their father had been leery of reviving them so early - Marya had found the words to persuade him. They were yound adults with extensive education. They could carry their weight on Freedom Station, she’d said. He knew that, of course. She only needed to overcome his fatherly anxiety.
And the girls were not dead weights, they’d volunteered on their first day for agricultural duty inside the Dome.
It was therefore with more than purely professional interest that the General turned to the woman sitting among the other assembled department heads in the improvised conference room. Grey-haired and willowy, dusky skin and regular features revealing her mixed Indian and South-American heritage, Doctor Isabel Prabhinder was the ship’s foremost expert on Life Sciences and Biosphere Systems and the agricultural projects fell under her authority.
Feeding the colonists was the priority number one concern. The ship’s stores wouldn’t hold forever and the sooner they got crops going the better he would feel.

“Now that everyone’s here, let’s not waste time. Isabel” all the men and women inside the room were long acquaintances, and stood on a first-name basis in such a semi-private setting “let’s hear you first.”
The Doctor leant forward on the table even as her colleagues reclined in the ancient, but devilishly comfortable chairs, and spread her hands to bracket the flat perscomp laying before her. The touch screen was displaying the salient points of her expose, not that she actually needed the crutch.
“Well” she intoned, a faint trace of accent coloring her soprano “I’m pleased with the results so far. The microbial seeding is successful so far in very sample culture, so the first step towards tailoring an Earth-compatible ecosystem, even a simplified one, is done. As you know, when the Dome became accessible two weeks ago it was a sterile environment, albeit with all the chemical prerequisites to amino-based life and well-balanced soils. It also appears that the automatic reclamation process has included a mechanical component, with dredging of the waterways and fine ploughing of the flatlands. A good thing, that, after millennias the superficial layer must have become as compact as concrete and tough as the underlying rocky foundation.”
“Did we find the machinery that did all this ?” Lefarge interjected.
“We didn’t see anything moving when we finally entered, but we did find tracks and followed them. We found two very large gates in the rim, which must open to hangars of sorts, but we had no luck trying to open them. Anyway, the central island and the rim shores were utterly devoid of life, as were the sea and lakes. In a way that was disappointing, but we’re getting the benefit of a blank slate we an tailor to our needs.”
“How long then before we can eat fresh bread ?” the question brought hungry thoughts all around. Ship rations were palatable enough, but real food was something everyone looked forward to.
“Give me six months if all goes well. With a stable maintained climate we could get two grain crops per year although I’d recommend avoiding soil exhaustion. Fresh vegetables, earlier than that. Our fast-growing fruit trees should yield produce in a year hence. In short, I’m optimistic that we’ll be able to feed ourselves long before the New America’s reserves run out. That’s assuming environmental conditions inside the Dome stay constant, and not taking into account the habitats and their culture beds.”
“That’s outstanding, Isabel. I hope it pans out, that would sure lift a huge burden off our shoulders.”

After a breath, the General straightened on his seat and looked down the length of the table.
“Sam” he addressed the blonde woman who spearheaded the exploration and discovery aspect of things. As her name was called she leant forward and brushed away a strand of hair unconsciously. “How far along are you on the control systems ?”
“Making progress Sir” her military formatting stubbornly prevented her from addressing Lefarge by his first name “with the basic vocabulary translated, understanding what the various displays are all about became easier, but so far we’re mostly making observations. I wouldn’t dare change the settings on things like life support !”
“No need to” the General’s frowned a little more than was normal and pinched his nose, the following subject being a teensy bit awkward “Did you find out how to modify those environment holos…?”
That mention made everyone around the table dip their head slightly and look elsewhere, a few judiciously raised hands concealing restrained smirks.
The question’s recipient blushed in assaulted modesty. As the crewmen surveyed more sectors of the station, they had stumbled on places where the omnipresent holowalls were showing scenes considerably more risqué than volcanoes and exploding supernovae.

Eight days before the meeting an exploration team had called in to report a major discovery - no immediate danger, they’d told Carter on the radio, but it warranted attention by some higher-ups. So she had made her way down three levels, flanked by O’Neill who insisted on being protective, and across two mag-lines into a newly-opened inter-habitat passage and then happened upon the two-man team. She’d recognized the two Space Forcers and answered their nervous salute, and naturally asked what it was all about. She couldn’t spot anything abnormal in the wide sinuous corridor. Given its location it probably wasn’t a very busy one even at the height of the station’s past occupancy, with a rather unsurprising if perfectly charming virtual scenery. A mid-sized clearing with forest on all sides, a small waterfall on her right was feeding a clear little pond with grassy banks and moss-covered polished rocks and sunlight playing a myriad reflection. There was the murmur of rushing water and the rustle of leaves in a light breeze and a pleasant chirping of birds, all in all a very welcoming place but hardly cause for her immediate presence.
“Ah, Ma’am…” the first crewman began, clearly at odds with the apparent serenity of the place “it’s, well -” his partner cut him with a side look “Ma’am, we just saw people in there.”
“People ?” Carter was unable to contain a rush of excitement. “In the holo ?”
Both men nodded.
“Where are they… what did they look like ?” she was looking in every direction, searching for a hint or trace of the apparitions.
The second crewman pointed at the waterfall. “They climbed on that rocky outcrop and disappeared behind it, about five minutes ago but we heard their voices again… Ah, and they looked human just like you and me Ma’am” he finally delivered the breaking news, leaving her momentarily speechless as the meaning of the words sank in.
“Human - but then - I mean,” she spoke for herself as much as for her companions “it fits with everything else but…” he eyes were wide and she put her hand on her mouth prior to speaking again, leaving the hand cradling the side of her face “are you sure...?”
The crewman nodded, then froze instead of answering at once, shifting his head as if to listen better. Carter followed his example, focusing her ears in the same general direction, and she heard them. Voices, unmistakingly human-sounding even if the words didn’t mean anything. Shouted words and exclamations of… joy, excitement ?
Her raised hand fell down along her side. Them. Hopping down to the level of the pool with agile steps, a small group of humanoids - entirely human-like in their exterior appearance, healthy-looking, well groomed state precluding the notion that they were prehistoric, cave-dwelling creatures - entered the water again with a flurry of splashes.
Men and women, good-looking, and naked.
“Oh my” was all the Colonel could say for a while.

After the initial shock, surprise and elation - the greatest discovery of human history, again - at finding confirmation that the original occupants of the station were indeed human-looking, more cases were spotted across the facility’s organized maze of internal streets, public areas and even private housing units. They were mostly transient, whenever some of these beings found themselves in the scope of the scanning apparatus which had recorded the scenes, and in most cases fully clothed in a variety of styles and colors. Yet, in a few number of instances, but those balanced their scarcity with their unpredictability, the figures were naked. Which was awkward enough.
In one case though, the New America’s crew witnessing the scene were subjected to a very passionate love-making session involving a teenage-looking couple in a flower-strewn meadow.
Oh well, at least these people were straight, Lefarge had sighed when shown the helmet-camera recording. But still, we can’t allow kids to see this. Something has to be done.
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Ahhh, the Dominion has all the fun, so naturally the "Freedom-loving" Alliance escapees are repressed prudes by comparison. :P
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KlavoHunter wrote:Ahhh, the Dominion has all the fun, so naturally the "Freedom-loving" Alliance escapees are repressed prudes by comparison. :P
As a society, they are. Well, more like 50s era America/Europe as canonically told.
Not that every single individual's a prude of course.


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Freedom Station, Samothrace System
December 24th, 2010



A sea of faces greeted Frederick Lefarge when he stepped through the door and walked on the stage up to the lectern. Finding this amphitheater a few days beforehand was a very timely occurrence, of course such a thing wasn’t much of a surprise any more. The similarity between the New America’s colonists and the long-departed builders of the station went a long way towards explaining why things looked the way they were despite being made by aliens. Like the bathrooms. Or the cooking implements found in the homes, perfectly stacked in magnetic drawers without a single grain of dust. Drawers that also worked as washers thanks to some technological wizardry nobody had an understanding of.
About four thousand men and women were present, ranging from twenty-somethings to white-haired ones although the latter were not as prevalent. New America was always meant to contain a majority of passengers in their breeding age. There weren’t any children either, which made for a strange Christmas eve, but those were still deemed better in coldsleep while the adults made sure the new home was ready. And everyone knew that kids running around unknown and potentially dangerous surroundings were a recipe for disaster.
Skin tones spanned from milky to dark brown with a large helping of olive and caramel, representing the variety of people that used to form the Alliance. Men and women in roughly equal proportions. Little knots and groups, brought together by prior history and affinities. What lacked in variety was the clothing. All wore the issued utility suit, a sturdy, comfortable and protective garment meant for in-atmosphere duty. Providing isolation from temperature contrasts and protection from scrapes and cuts, fireproof and self-cleaning, the suits were intended to last decades - until the fledging colony could make new clothes.
Name patches, specialty badges and service colors were the only variations.
Every revived colonist was here save those on-duty aboard the ships. A retransmission was set up for them.

A rumble of applause started as the General took his place behind the lectern. It contained workstation controls linked to the vast wallscreen behind him, and Carter had managed to set a snowy forest scene as background, choosing from the built-in gallery.
The acclamation picked up as all four thousand crewmen joined in until the vast chamber resonated with rythmical clapping and Lefarge felt a knot forming in his throat in response, the repressed feelings and the weight of past events rushing to the surface. He caught Cindy and Marya in the front rank and met their eyes, finding quiet pride on his wife’s features and contained assurance on his sister’s.
He blinked once then twice, took a sharp breath, swept the assembly under his gaze and composed his face in a serene and voluntary facade. His arms rose in answer to the clamor, hands motioning to stop and listen - it took almost a minute for the applause to die down at last.
All were then silent and looking at his person. Waiting to hear his words. The first general address of a new era. Lefarge expected that future historians (if the colony survived long enough) would hail the coming speech as the founding one of a new society. He snorted inwardly. I’ll keep it short and to the point and do the schoolkids of two centuries hence a favor.

“My fellow colonists” he commenced. “Free men and women, escaped from the clutches of tyranny unprecedented in History. We all know how much we lost, how much the last war cost us. The Draka think they have won, that they’re the uncontested masters of all Creation. No doubt they expect us to be dead after the New America disappeared from their scopes. Well, we are very much alive. More, a higher force took pity on us. An instrument of God’s Will or the Providence, we don’t know. Maybe whoever brought us all here shares a connection to the beings who created this place long ago. Their inheritance is ours now. Through their knowledge and our ingenuity we will build a new society and hold high the torch of Freedom unextinguished.”
A few “Yeah !” and “Hear that, Snakes !” were shouted enthusiastically. Lefarge nodded and continued.
“We have found a shelter, a new home. It, and the wonders it contains are a gift, a marvelous gift. We have to show ourselved worthy of it. More importantly, we must not repeat the mistakes of the past. Never again shall we let the seed of oppression grow and fester. We owe this to our brothers and sisters left on Earth, we owe it to every last victim of the Draka, every last rebel impaled on a stake while our former countries sat in the distance, watching and doing nothing to crush the Snakes before it grew too strong. “
Murmurs and growls of “never again” rose up from the public. This lesson was well learnt among that crowd.

He went on after a good breath.
“We will survive. We will thrive. We will uncover the secrets hidden behind our mysterious displacement and its destination. And with God’s help we will build an army, an army of Freedom to smash the Yoke and cleanse the universe of the Domination’s stain !” he hammered out, punctuating his last sentence with a pumping of his fist on the lectern, face set strong and resolute.
The crowd’s reaction was matching. As soon as he finished a rolling roar of approval drowned the chamber. Cries and shouts of revenge and curses against the Snakes mixed with more basic yells and stamping feet ; high fives and fraternal hugs and grinning faces, joyous faces. They were looking forward to success, to life, to justice brought in the universe. They were a people, his people and they had a mission.
As the clamor died out, the General concluded.
“Merry Christmas, my fellow Samothracians !”
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Re: Stars of Iron, a Stargate-Draka X-over, vol. 2

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I' so eager to see story turns out, I'm following it on two websites!
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