A Orange Star: More Powerful then the Death Star Fanfic

[Youngla0450]

This forum will be about a Orange Star, a more powerful and advanced version of the Death Star. Comments are welcomed. The story will be as detailed, organized, and clarified as possible. I hope you like it!

[Youngla0450]

This story is about the ORANGE STAR, the most powerful space-station/super-weapon in the Universe, more so then the glorious, yet failed, Death Star. The Orange Star had all the powers and capabalites of the Death Star, but yet it was on a more powerful and more advanced stage, thus making it the most prestigious station. The Orange Star's origins, construction, and details will be explored in this story, in a detailed, organized, and clarified manner, to hopefully mold the story into one of great proportion.

-Youngla0450

[MrCIA]

Perhaps you should actually post something for us to read. Something about money and mouth comes to mind.

[The Vortex Empire]

Well, taking what we can see from this preview...

Retarded title, stupid name for a ship (what the fuck did they do, paint a bigger death star orange?), wanked out death star. I'm not looking forward to this.

[Enigma]

The Orks painted a Death Star because they think it'll make it more powerful and more shooty.

[Mayabird]

When you have an actual story, post the story. Don't spam up my forum too.
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