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Need a proofreader.

Posted: 2010-07-12 03:37pm
by Enigma
I've got a ST\Bolo fanfic that I am trying to write and have a sizeable amount written down on paper and 774 words of that already typed up. But before I can post it I'd like some one or two to read it over and provide some suggestions as to improve on it.

The premise of this fanfic is a prelude to a series of ST\Bolo that I want to write. It is about the creation of ST version of a Bolo and the need for them. This prelude isn't to be that long (I estimate when the dust settles it would be around 10,000 words) and will mostly be interactions with the starbase crew and the admiral behind the project to build the Bolo. There will be combat but that will be the climax of the story. In later ST\Bolo stories I plan to have combats to have a more prominent role.

Any takers to be my proofreader? I just need one or two. There is no rush to have it done just as long as it gets proofread. :)

Re: Need a proofreader.

Posted: 2010-07-12 03:57pm
by Boombaye
I know plentya Star Wars. Care to intro me on Bolo? I might be interested.

Re: Need a proofreader.

Posted: 2010-07-12 04:04pm
by Dave
Boombaye wrote:I know plentya Star Wars. Care to intro me on Bolo? I might be interested.
Bolo_(tank)
It's a self-aware tank the size of a house.

And I'd be up for proofreading.

Re: Need a proofreader.

Posted: 2010-07-12 10:30pm
by Enigma
Dave wrote:
Boombaye wrote:I know plentya Star Wars. Care to intro me on Bolo? I might be interested.
Bolo_(tank)
It's a self-aware tank the size of a house.

And I'd be up for proofreading.
I'll PM you soon. :)

Anyone else interested?

Re: Need a proofreader.

Posted: 2010-07-13 12:37am
by Boombaye
Dunno too much about Bolo, but I could proofread for errors and such.

Re: Need a proofreader.

Posted: 2010-07-13 01:33am
by Enigma
Boombaye wrote:Dunno too much about Bolo, but I could proofread for errors and such.
No problem. I'm going to PM both you and Dave in a second with further details and the first half of the first chapter of the fanfic.

Re: Need a proofreader.

Posted: 2010-07-14 05:39pm
by CaptainChewbacca
I'm a sucker for good bolo fic. I'll help.

Re: Need a proofreader.

Posted: 2010-08-08 01:10am
by Enigma
Sorry if I'm necroing but I need one more proofreader. I've got two but I need a third as a tie-breaker. I'd prefer a volunteer with some fanfic writing experience but anyone is welcome. Any takers to be the third proofreader?

Re: Need a proofreader.

Posted: 2010-08-08 05:32am
by Eleventh Century Remnant
If you can put up with me, I'll do it.

Re: Need a proofreader.

Posted: 2010-08-08 08:23am
by Enigma
Eleventh Century Remnant wrote:If you can put up with me, I'll do it.

No problem. I'll pm you the first chapter.