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Siege Breaker

Posted: 2010-07-16 01:23pm
by Just a Crazy-Man
Siege Breaker

By: Me.

Summary: This is the story of the battle of the Cylon homeworld base on the 'The Thirteen' Story.

Note: I have terrible grammar. But I do my best with what I got. But I got a lot of work to do. Sorry if I wasted anyone's time with this junk of mine.

My Story Link: +http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6096589/1/Siege_Breaker

Re: Siege Breaker

Posted: 2010-07-16 02:04pm
by Mayabird
For one thing, we like for people to post their stories here, not just link to somewhere else.

For another thing, you won't be winning any friends here with terrible grammar. If you know you have a problem, fix it.

Re: Siege Breaker

Posted: 2010-07-16 02:29pm
by Lucifer1
He's... trying :? to fix his grammer.

Re: Siege Breaker

Posted: 2010-07-16 03:08pm
by Just a Crazy-Man
Lucifer1 wrote:He's... trying :? to fix his grammar.
Am...Am.

No Will....

Is currently fixing the grammar problem.

That sounds better.