Godforsaken Future - updated 10/31/2015
Posted: 2010-12-13 05:57pm
Hello, I'm a rare poster and sometime lurker, my main forum is on good ole AH.com.
Anyway, I got to work posting this story back there and after getting some decent feedback I've realized that I'm not a totally horrible writer. So I've decided to post it here.
I've got 10 episodes/updates so far(11 if you count each part of number ten as a separate episode). Before posting them here I've gone back and started cleaning up the updates and making some minor changes based upon some criticisms I got on AH.com, as such I will be posting each currently finished update at least once a day until I get caught up to the most recent one, after which you should expect them every week to a week and a half. For those of you who like it and don't want to wait so long, I'll be posting new episodes on http://www.alternatehistory.com/ first and foremost, so they should get the updates a tad bit faster, you'll just have to sign up to read them(that particular forum is for members only).
Those of you familiar with the stuff over there may notice some similarities to Swarm on the Somme, which I freely admit I drew some inspiration from. It however is something separately all its own, and as it progresses those differences are going to become considerably more noticeable.
A word of warning, as is hinted at by the title, this story is going to be quite grimdark, with lots of very nice (and not so nice) people dying in all sorts of unpleasant ways, if this is not your kind of thing then here are some kitties in stead:
For the rest of you I present:
Godforsaken Future
"Abandon all hope ye who enter here."
-Dante's Inferno
Episode 1
-Unknown Location, Unknown Time
For countless eons The Mind had grown and evolved, developing newer abilities and constructs to serve its purposes. At first it was just a small organism on an insignificant planet floating through space. However, when it absorbed its first sample of biomass it had grown to a new level of consciousness and became stronger. It had incorporated new genetic distinctiveness and started to learn what attributes it had and wondered what uses they would have.
Eventually it managed to absorb more samples and grow even further, absorbing more traits, and gaining more strength. After some time it had absorbed all of the biomass from its local environment and then from the entire planet. By then it had learned to sense the presence of other samples and had enough strength to sense them not only on its own planet but on others in distant star systems. Over time it had spread to those other worlds, copying itself and sending those Selves off to absorb more biomass and more distinctiveness.
Finally it had absorbed all that there was to absorb within its own galaxy, and still it hungered to find more. Searching and searching it managed to reach its sense tendrils out to find a distant glimmer on the edge of another galaxy.
The distance was so great that it could hardly tell there was anything there, but The Mind could feel something, and that was all that was needed. It had been forced to sacrifice a number of Selves to establish a one sided connection at such a distance, but the distance was bridged and another Self was sent. The planet was lush and heavily populated, and there were many intelligent samples there as well as primitive ones
Like many intelligent samples but not all, these had fought back, and at first it was a challenge, and just as all before them had, these too succumbed to the unstoppable power of The Mind. Thus a foothold had been established in this galaxy. Then more sense tendrils were sent out to find yet another planet to consume, and again another was found, this one was not too far from the first world and so the transit was far easier, so this Self was able to expend little enough of its energy reserves to bridge the distance that there was little danger to its own existence, and the star it orbited only expended somewhat of its energy in the process. A new Self was created and sent through the portal, ready to assimilate another world.
-1:03 PM April 12, 1986 15 kilometers southwest of Shamal, Paktia Province, Afghanistan
If anyone had been within the line of sight of the portal location when it opened, they would have born witness to a bright white light and a loud noise much like that of wind rushing by. This hypothetical observer would have then seen a similarly bright white shockwave expanding out from the center of the portal location which quickly dissipated after expanding as far as fifty meters out. Finally this observer would see something very odd. Where once there had been nothing but a few trees and rocks, there now sat... something.
***
Asa was just about to dismount his horse to get a drink when he saw a bright flash accompanied by a strange noise just over the hill to his east. His hands tensed on the reigns of his horse, preparing to turn and flee, surely it was a Russian plane, attacking Mujahideen rebels, but as the seconds passed his worry became less so. He heard no popping sound of gunfire, no low dissipating rumble that followed any time one of those planes passed, and no smoke rising up from behind the hill to indicate a fire or explosion.
Not so fearful now, Asa became curious. Perhaps there was something there of value, something that the Americans would reward him for telling them of. They had been generous to others, supplying missiles and weapons and other things, perhaps he would be rewarded by showing them this, whatever it was. One of those fancy rifles they carry would be nice he thought as he fingered the sling of his own, it was an ancient weapon, salvaged from the dead body of a dead Waziri fighter.
Its age showed quite clearly, with bits of rust on its barrel and trigger guard, the wood from its stock was splintered and worn. Most of the others had teased him about it, saying that it was not but a piece of junk, his brother Jawid would always ask him if he intended to use it to club someone to death with. Some of the Americans back at the encampment had seemed to know something about it, they had called it a “lee enfeed” whatever that name meant.
Coaxing his mount up to a quick trot, Asa approached the hill. As he neared the top he dismounted and walked the rest of the way, he moved slowly and quietly, and unslung his weapon. Although he was not afraid, he did not know what he would find on the other side of the hill and he did not want to take any chances. Lowering himself to a crouch, and then to a crawl, Asa was in a prone position by the time he reached the top where he slowly peered over the top of the hill.
What he there saw mystified him, it looked very strange and he had never seen anything like it. A few hundred yards away from him sat some kind of large... thing. That was all he could think to call it. It seemed to be the size of a very large tree with what appeared to be some kind of massive roots at the bottom, or perhaps they were legs, he couldn't tell. The main part of it in the center looked like a goat's heart, except in stead of being dark red, this thing was a slight greenish brown color, and its exterior looked kind of hard like the outside of a scorpion rather than the meaty texture of a heart.
The ground surrounding the thing was all scorched like it had been burned, yet he saw no fire or craters from a bomb. There were also a couple burnt trees, and what looked like the body of a dead bear. Growing more curious, Asa climbed over the top of the hill and slowly approached the strange object below. As he approached, it did nothing but sit there in silence, seemingly as lifeless as the dead bear on the ground next to it.
***
This Self found itself bewildered and confused, the transit had been an unsettling experience, with all of its senses disrupted violently in the process. After a few minutes the disorientation began to dissipate, and it began to get a sense for its surroundings. It could discern the body of a moderately sized sample lying on the ground near it, clearly having been caught up in the energy release of the portal opening. There also appeared to be a couple larger samples also in close proximity, however these appeared to be rooted into the ground unlike the other sample which simply lay atop it.
The disorientation it felt was still quite thick, for this Self did not notice the still living sample approaching it until it was almost close enough to touch. A couple more seconds confirmed that this in fact was an intelligent sample, The Mind sensed that it held some kind of device, and even with it's hampered senses, The Mind could still sense that the mental capacity of this sample was sufficient to be considered intelligent.
Unfortunately in this bewildered state this Self could sense little else beyond this. So it continued to allow the sample to approach it, when it got just a bit closer The Mind would use it to be led to its origin where it was highly likely that there would be more samples.
A few seconds later as the sample slowed its approach, The Mind lashed out with one of its appendages.
***
It happened so fast Asa had no time to react. In the blink of an eye one of the roots at the bottom of the thing had shot out and latched onto his left arm. His rifle went off, but harmlessly into the ground as the root jerked his arm to the side and he tripped and fell to his knees. Asa cried out in fear as much as in pain as he felt his skin get punctured by something sharp that he couldn't see. He struggled to draw his arm free from the grasp of the creature but it was no use, its grip felt as strong as steel, and each time he tried to pull free it shot a bolt of excruciating pain through his arm into his shoulder.
Panicking, Asa struggled to aim his rifle with one arm, but he merely heard a disheartening click when he pulled the trigger. That's when he realized that he forgot to load another bullet after the last time he fired. So he tried desperately to work the bolt on his rifle in spite of the unbearable pain in his other arm. After what seemed like an eternity he managed to successfully load another bullet, but just as he was about to fire on the creature, it released its grip.
Too scared to even wonder why it had released him, Asa quickly stumbled to his feet and ran as fast as he could back the way he had come. Opting to cradle his injured arm, he dropped his rifle before he hit his first stride. So intent was he on escaping that Asa did not notice the strange brownish red growth on his left forearm. All he wanted to do was get back to his encampment, get back home away from this creature, he wanted to get back to the rest of his tribe.
***
The Mind observed the sample scurry away in what was clearly a frightened reaction to what had just happened. It was pleased, although many different kinds of samples had a potential to react to the same situation in different ways, The Mind had concluded that in all likelihood this sample as with most before it would become frightened by the experience and head back to a location where more of its kind waited, most likely for protection, and maybe also for help with its injury.
Although the senses of this self had been hampered, it was able to track this sample using a piece of growth medium. When the sample had stopped moving and the growth medium gave The Mind the sensation of being surrounded by other intelligent samples, The Mind activated the only construct that it had brought with it through the portal, a guardian. And while it was busy absorbing the surrounding biomass, the guardian construct headed out to the origin of the intelligent sample.
Anyway, I got to work posting this story back there and after getting some decent feedback I've realized that I'm not a totally horrible writer. So I've decided to post it here.
I've got 10 episodes/updates so far(11 if you count each part of number ten as a separate episode). Before posting them here I've gone back and started cleaning up the updates and making some minor changes based upon some criticisms I got on AH.com, as such I will be posting each currently finished update at least once a day until I get caught up to the most recent one, after which you should expect them every week to a week and a half. For those of you who like it and don't want to wait so long, I'll be posting new episodes on http://www.alternatehistory.com/ first and foremost, so they should get the updates a tad bit faster, you'll just have to sign up to read them(that particular forum is for members only).
Those of you familiar with the stuff over there may notice some similarities to Swarm on the Somme, which I freely admit I drew some inspiration from. It however is something separately all its own, and as it progresses those differences are going to become considerably more noticeable.
A word of warning, as is hinted at by the title, this story is going to be quite grimdark, with lots of very nice (and not so nice) people dying in all sorts of unpleasant ways, if this is not your kind of thing then here are some kitties in stead:
For the rest of you I present:
Godforsaken Future
"Abandon all hope ye who enter here."
-Dante's Inferno
Episode 1
-Unknown Location, Unknown Time
For countless eons The Mind had grown and evolved, developing newer abilities and constructs to serve its purposes. At first it was just a small organism on an insignificant planet floating through space. However, when it absorbed its first sample of biomass it had grown to a new level of consciousness and became stronger. It had incorporated new genetic distinctiveness and started to learn what attributes it had and wondered what uses they would have.
Eventually it managed to absorb more samples and grow even further, absorbing more traits, and gaining more strength. After some time it had absorbed all of the biomass from its local environment and then from the entire planet. By then it had learned to sense the presence of other samples and had enough strength to sense them not only on its own planet but on others in distant star systems. Over time it had spread to those other worlds, copying itself and sending those Selves off to absorb more biomass and more distinctiveness.
Finally it had absorbed all that there was to absorb within its own galaxy, and still it hungered to find more. Searching and searching it managed to reach its sense tendrils out to find a distant glimmer on the edge of another galaxy.
The distance was so great that it could hardly tell there was anything there, but The Mind could feel something, and that was all that was needed. It had been forced to sacrifice a number of Selves to establish a one sided connection at such a distance, but the distance was bridged and another Self was sent. The planet was lush and heavily populated, and there were many intelligent samples there as well as primitive ones
Like many intelligent samples but not all, these had fought back, and at first it was a challenge, and just as all before them had, these too succumbed to the unstoppable power of The Mind. Thus a foothold had been established in this galaxy. Then more sense tendrils were sent out to find yet another planet to consume, and again another was found, this one was not too far from the first world and so the transit was far easier, so this Self was able to expend little enough of its energy reserves to bridge the distance that there was little danger to its own existence, and the star it orbited only expended somewhat of its energy in the process. A new Self was created and sent through the portal, ready to assimilate another world.
-1:03 PM April 12, 1986 15 kilometers southwest of Shamal, Paktia Province, Afghanistan
If anyone had been within the line of sight of the portal location when it opened, they would have born witness to a bright white light and a loud noise much like that of wind rushing by. This hypothetical observer would have then seen a similarly bright white shockwave expanding out from the center of the portal location which quickly dissipated after expanding as far as fifty meters out. Finally this observer would see something very odd. Where once there had been nothing but a few trees and rocks, there now sat... something.
***
Asa was just about to dismount his horse to get a drink when he saw a bright flash accompanied by a strange noise just over the hill to his east. His hands tensed on the reigns of his horse, preparing to turn and flee, surely it was a Russian plane, attacking Mujahideen rebels, but as the seconds passed his worry became less so. He heard no popping sound of gunfire, no low dissipating rumble that followed any time one of those planes passed, and no smoke rising up from behind the hill to indicate a fire or explosion.
Not so fearful now, Asa became curious. Perhaps there was something there of value, something that the Americans would reward him for telling them of. They had been generous to others, supplying missiles and weapons and other things, perhaps he would be rewarded by showing them this, whatever it was. One of those fancy rifles they carry would be nice he thought as he fingered the sling of his own, it was an ancient weapon, salvaged from the dead body of a dead Waziri fighter.
Its age showed quite clearly, with bits of rust on its barrel and trigger guard, the wood from its stock was splintered and worn. Most of the others had teased him about it, saying that it was not but a piece of junk, his brother Jawid would always ask him if he intended to use it to club someone to death with. Some of the Americans back at the encampment had seemed to know something about it, they had called it a “lee enfeed” whatever that name meant.
Coaxing his mount up to a quick trot, Asa approached the hill. As he neared the top he dismounted and walked the rest of the way, he moved slowly and quietly, and unslung his weapon. Although he was not afraid, he did not know what he would find on the other side of the hill and he did not want to take any chances. Lowering himself to a crouch, and then to a crawl, Asa was in a prone position by the time he reached the top where he slowly peered over the top of the hill.
What he there saw mystified him, it looked very strange and he had never seen anything like it. A few hundred yards away from him sat some kind of large... thing. That was all he could think to call it. It seemed to be the size of a very large tree with what appeared to be some kind of massive roots at the bottom, or perhaps they were legs, he couldn't tell. The main part of it in the center looked like a goat's heart, except in stead of being dark red, this thing was a slight greenish brown color, and its exterior looked kind of hard like the outside of a scorpion rather than the meaty texture of a heart.
The ground surrounding the thing was all scorched like it had been burned, yet he saw no fire or craters from a bomb. There were also a couple burnt trees, and what looked like the body of a dead bear. Growing more curious, Asa climbed over the top of the hill and slowly approached the strange object below. As he approached, it did nothing but sit there in silence, seemingly as lifeless as the dead bear on the ground next to it.
***
This Self found itself bewildered and confused, the transit had been an unsettling experience, with all of its senses disrupted violently in the process. After a few minutes the disorientation began to dissipate, and it began to get a sense for its surroundings. It could discern the body of a moderately sized sample lying on the ground near it, clearly having been caught up in the energy release of the portal opening. There also appeared to be a couple larger samples also in close proximity, however these appeared to be rooted into the ground unlike the other sample which simply lay atop it.
The disorientation it felt was still quite thick, for this Self did not notice the still living sample approaching it until it was almost close enough to touch. A couple more seconds confirmed that this in fact was an intelligent sample, The Mind sensed that it held some kind of device, and even with it's hampered senses, The Mind could still sense that the mental capacity of this sample was sufficient to be considered intelligent.
Unfortunately in this bewildered state this Self could sense little else beyond this. So it continued to allow the sample to approach it, when it got just a bit closer The Mind would use it to be led to its origin where it was highly likely that there would be more samples.
A few seconds later as the sample slowed its approach, The Mind lashed out with one of its appendages.
***
It happened so fast Asa had no time to react. In the blink of an eye one of the roots at the bottom of the thing had shot out and latched onto his left arm. His rifle went off, but harmlessly into the ground as the root jerked his arm to the side and he tripped and fell to his knees. Asa cried out in fear as much as in pain as he felt his skin get punctured by something sharp that he couldn't see. He struggled to draw his arm free from the grasp of the creature but it was no use, its grip felt as strong as steel, and each time he tried to pull free it shot a bolt of excruciating pain through his arm into his shoulder.
Panicking, Asa struggled to aim his rifle with one arm, but he merely heard a disheartening click when he pulled the trigger. That's when he realized that he forgot to load another bullet after the last time he fired. So he tried desperately to work the bolt on his rifle in spite of the unbearable pain in his other arm. After what seemed like an eternity he managed to successfully load another bullet, but just as he was about to fire on the creature, it released its grip.
Too scared to even wonder why it had released him, Asa quickly stumbled to his feet and ran as fast as he could back the way he had come. Opting to cradle his injured arm, he dropped his rifle before he hit his first stride. So intent was he on escaping that Asa did not notice the strange brownish red growth on his left forearm. All he wanted to do was get back to his encampment, get back home away from this creature, he wanted to get back to the rest of his tribe.
***
The Mind observed the sample scurry away in what was clearly a frightened reaction to what had just happened. It was pleased, although many different kinds of samples had a potential to react to the same situation in different ways, The Mind had concluded that in all likelihood this sample as with most before it would become frightened by the experience and head back to a location where more of its kind waited, most likely for protection, and maybe also for help with its injury.
Although the senses of this self had been hampered, it was able to track this sample using a piece of growth medium. When the sample had stopped moving and the growth medium gave The Mind the sensation of being surrounded by other intelligent samples, The Mind activated the only construct that it had brought with it through the portal, a guardian. And while it was busy absorbing the surrounding biomass, the guardian construct headed out to the origin of the intelligent sample.