Chronicles of the Labyrinth: Stone of Covenant (Death Gate)
Posted: 2013-04-28 09:26pm
This is an old, old fic that I never got around to translating, because of assorted stuff. It has all my usual problems and then some that I have grown out of over the years.
However, since recent conversations have resurrected my old interest in the Death Gate setting and what little DG fanfic exists is a) slash, b) shit or c) both, I decided to go ahead and post this.
Constructive criticism appreciated. Flames too (the winter is cold). Indifference accepted.
So without further addo:
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Chronicles of the Labyrinth I
Stone of the Covenant
Chapter 1 - Ghosts of nightmares past.
While the earth drank the blood of the slain chaodyn and some of his own, the young man used what little magic he had left to patch his wounds and those of the dog that had appeared from nowhere and saved his life. His body needed, demanded a healing trance, but he couldn't afford it. Not now. The threshold of the Last Gate stood perhaps five hundred steps away. Deliverance was at hand, flanked by the unscalable mountains that marked the outer boundaries of the Labyrinth.
Drowsy because of the loss of blood, he started walking towards the gate. Against all odds, he had earned his chance to leave the prison and even the Labyrinth respected some rules. Magic had created this hellish prison and spells granted it sentience. The magic of the Sartan, the mighty sorcerers who had shattered the ancient world to defeat the Patryn, their mortal enemies. And in their vicious self-righteousness, the destroyers of world had devised something worse than death for their humbled foes, a prison like no other that had ever existed.
Thus was born the Labyrinth. A correctional facility, the Sartan had said before leaving the Patryn to their fates. A place of harsh testing.
A slaughterhouse was more like it. A realm of madness and death that the Patryn had had to conquer inch by bloody inch, always kept teetering on the edge of disaster. But there was method to the madness, rules to the slaughter. The Labyrinth was cruel and took delight in the taking of life, but it always gave a chance. Just one, just enough to give its prisoners enough hope to keep struggling. But even that had been enough.
After a dozen generations of travel and suffering, the first of the Patryn had finally reached the Last Gate and now faced the last challenge of the Labyrinth. Most had fallen. But some like him had prevailed.
Little was known of what might await beyond. Rumour spoke of a land of safety ruled by the Powerful One, first of the Patryn who had escaped the prison and the only one who had dared to return to aid others... The man's train of thought was broken when a tree root that hadn't been there the moment before tripped him. He collapsed on his knees and found himself too weak to stand with the gate still a hundred steps away.
The dog that had advanced at his side in silence nuzzled his side and barked, as if urging him on. The man clenched his teeth and kept moving. He was still alive and even if he was too weak to walk, he could still crawl. And so he continued, driven by a single minded refusal to give up, and crossed the arch, dripping blood from his wounds and almost too weak to realize it.
Death awaited him in the other side, a tall, dark figure standing against the light that poured through the gate from the Land Beyond. Death approached and lifted the man with firm hands, ignoring the growling of the dog. Instead of cold oblivion, warmth flooded the man's body, strength returned to his limbs and clarity pierced the cloud of delirium that had fogged his mind. Instead of Death, an old Patryn held him, older than any he had ever met or even heard of.
"Be welcome, my son. I am Xar, lord of the Nexus. You have defeated it, won a great victory. This is the Land Beyond and here you shall find rest and safety," said the old man, his words laced with pride and the echoes of a power greater than any other. "Tell me, my son. What is your name?"
"I am Haplo," muttered the younger man, trying to understand the words of his elder. "Rest? Safety?"
"Yes, yes. Come, my son, and see your new home. Come with me."
With Xar's support, Haplo walked up a nearby hill and from the top he saw the Nexus. A green land of forests and meadows under a twilight sky. And in the center of it all stood something that Haplo recognized thanks to the oldest legends as a city, all graceful spires and towers made of marble and crystal. It was the first genuinely beautiful thing he had ever seen in his life and he knew that he could find peace here. For the first time in his life, he cried in joy.
"The Sartan made this land for us. Heaven after hell to soothe our fury and doom the few survivors to submissive decadence, my son," growled Xar with words full of hatred. "But I have a plan. If you obey me and never forget we shall have our revenge. The Sartan are our enemies. That is what we must never forget."
And suddenly Haplo found himself paralyzed and the land of the Nexus changed. The plants withered and died off. An army of Patryn, grim faced and heavily armed, marched through the wasteland. Hundreds, thousands, millions, all following the plans of the lord of the Nexus. All ready, all willing, all eager to transform the entire universe in a battlefield full of bleached bones and carrion eaters.
But the Patryn disappeared and blood flooded the Nexus, flowing out of the Last Gate. Only the shining city stood unchanged in the center of the horror, until a great horde formed by all the monsters of the Labyrinth destroyed its walls and turned its light into black smoke. And, as it burned, the Nexus turned into a graveyard in which the corpse of every Patryn that had ever lived were devoured by the vermin.
"You forgot," said Xar's hate-filled voice to his side. "I told you to remember, my son. But you forgot. Worse. You allied with a Sartan. You betrayed me. Betrayed us all. You let me die. You took from us the chance to rule the universe. And then you doomed us to an eternity of hell in the Labyrinth."
As he talked, Xar's body had turned into dust and his eyes had started glowing red like hellfire. A skeletal arm drew a rune and suddenly Haplo felt himself being burned to death. And even as he died, Haplo could not escape from the baleful gaze of the man who had been adoptive father, Lord and Master. As darkness claimed him, he heard the voice for the last time.
"Never forget, Haplo, that it is your fault, now and forever. Nothing you do, nothing you say shall ever change it."
And Haplo woke up, body covered in sweat and tense like a bowstring. He woke up Marit, his companion, when he stood up.
"Another nightmare? Xar again?"
Not trusting his voice, Haplo merely nodded.
"It has been four cycles now, curse it! I have told you, how our minds were connected back then. I felt how he understood it all, in the end. What you were fighting for. His mistakes. His shortcomings. He forgave you. Why can't you accept it?"
"I know it. I saw his corpse, remember? I never saw him so at peace while he lived. But the fact remains. I betrayed my Lord."
Marit frowned, unsure of what to do. They had discussed this topic on and off, ever since the nightmares started, some three cycles back. No magic healing, no traditional Patryn remedy, no Sartan medical treatment had worked. Joining the rescue parties had brought him a measure of serenity, but the guilt still haunted him no matter how much he risked to save others from the claws of the Labyrinth and bring them to the relative safety of the Nexus. Not even the sincere love he felt for their eight children, both the adopted and natural, and her was enough to exorcise the spectres that haunted him. As soon as he closed his eyes, the torture began anew.
"And I betrayed you. And he betrayed us both. We were all a little mad in those final days. But it had to be done or the serpents would have won and, in the end, things didn't go as badly as they could," she said, rising from the bed and hugging him. Softly, she whispered to his ear. "I will not let you break the first vow of our marriage. My life for your life, remember? I don't know how much time life might grant us, but however much or little it is we must use it well. Not all is pain. Not all is regret. Not all is hate. Not even in the Labyrinth. We have more than earned our slice of happiness. Come join me, husband."
And Marit took Haplo back to the bed and almost against his will, they reformed the greater circle of their dual self and in a joyous celebration of heat, lust and mutual completeness, they howled their passion to the uncaring universe. They fell asleep much later with the fading glow of their heart-runes as the only sign of the intimacy they had experienced. Haplo didn't experience any more nightmares for the rest of that night.
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"I think that the rascals are starting to believe that you don't send them over to my place so that uncle Alfred can tell them tales of Arianus," commented Alfred Montbank the next day, in manner of greeting, when they met in the park behind the couple's residence. The Sartan had his characteristic gentle smile and was feeding bread to a small flock of sparrows that had somehow come to the Nexus with the Chelestran Sartan.
"Why do you say that?"
"Charo asked me if quote you were making another baby unquote. For the record, she says that she wants another sister. Can't you teach your kids some sense of propiety?"
Haplo was a bit taken aback. Son of a couple of Patryn runners who had raised him, which was unusual even for Patryn standards, he had learned the 'facts of life' early on, but he could accept that what he had known might not be the best for his children. If nothing else, he would try to spare them the literal rod. He had learned the runes under threat of pain, because that had been necessity, but that was not the case anymore. Nevertheless, hearing a Sartan -even Alfred- criticize the way he was raising his children...
"Never mind that, you two," cut Marit. "It won't be long now. We should get going."
Both men nodded and together they went towards the center of the city. There stood a gleaming tower of silver and crystal, identical to the building that had served as Xar's palace before the serpents destroyed it, which had been rebuilt and rebaptized with the new name of Hall of the Covenant.
However, since recent conversations have resurrected my old interest in the Death Gate setting and what little DG fanfic exists is a) slash, b) shit or c) both, I decided to go ahead and post this.
Constructive criticism appreciated. Flames too (the winter is cold). Indifference accepted.
So without further addo:
-----
Chronicles of the Labyrinth I
Stone of the Covenant
Chapter 1 - Ghosts of nightmares past.
While the earth drank the blood of the slain chaodyn and some of his own, the young man used what little magic he had left to patch his wounds and those of the dog that had appeared from nowhere and saved his life. His body needed, demanded a healing trance, but he couldn't afford it. Not now. The threshold of the Last Gate stood perhaps five hundred steps away. Deliverance was at hand, flanked by the unscalable mountains that marked the outer boundaries of the Labyrinth.
Drowsy because of the loss of blood, he started walking towards the gate. Against all odds, he had earned his chance to leave the prison and even the Labyrinth respected some rules. Magic had created this hellish prison and spells granted it sentience. The magic of the Sartan, the mighty sorcerers who had shattered the ancient world to defeat the Patryn, their mortal enemies. And in their vicious self-righteousness, the destroyers of world had devised something worse than death for their humbled foes, a prison like no other that had ever existed.
Thus was born the Labyrinth. A correctional facility, the Sartan had said before leaving the Patryn to their fates. A place of harsh testing.
A slaughterhouse was more like it. A realm of madness and death that the Patryn had had to conquer inch by bloody inch, always kept teetering on the edge of disaster. But there was method to the madness, rules to the slaughter. The Labyrinth was cruel and took delight in the taking of life, but it always gave a chance. Just one, just enough to give its prisoners enough hope to keep struggling. But even that had been enough.
After a dozen generations of travel and suffering, the first of the Patryn had finally reached the Last Gate and now faced the last challenge of the Labyrinth. Most had fallen. But some like him had prevailed.
Little was known of what might await beyond. Rumour spoke of a land of safety ruled by the Powerful One, first of the Patryn who had escaped the prison and the only one who had dared to return to aid others... The man's train of thought was broken when a tree root that hadn't been there the moment before tripped him. He collapsed on his knees and found himself too weak to stand with the gate still a hundred steps away.
The dog that had advanced at his side in silence nuzzled his side and barked, as if urging him on. The man clenched his teeth and kept moving. He was still alive and even if he was too weak to walk, he could still crawl. And so he continued, driven by a single minded refusal to give up, and crossed the arch, dripping blood from his wounds and almost too weak to realize it.
Death awaited him in the other side, a tall, dark figure standing against the light that poured through the gate from the Land Beyond. Death approached and lifted the man with firm hands, ignoring the growling of the dog. Instead of cold oblivion, warmth flooded the man's body, strength returned to his limbs and clarity pierced the cloud of delirium that had fogged his mind. Instead of Death, an old Patryn held him, older than any he had ever met or even heard of.
"Be welcome, my son. I am Xar, lord of the Nexus. You have defeated it, won a great victory. This is the Land Beyond and here you shall find rest and safety," said the old man, his words laced with pride and the echoes of a power greater than any other. "Tell me, my son. What is your name?"
"I am Haplo," muttered the younger man, trying to understand the words of his elder. "Rest? Safety?"
"Yes, yes. Come, my son, and see your new home. Come with me."
With Xar's support, Haplo walked up a nearby hill and from the top he saw the Nexus. A green land of forests and meadows under a twilight sky. And in the center of it all stood something that Haplo recognized thanks to the oldest legends as a city, all graceful spires and towers made of marble and crystal. It was the first genuinely beautiful thing he had ever seen in his life and he knew that he could find peace here. For the first time in his life, he cried in joy.
"The Sartan made this land for us. Heaven after hell to soothe our fury and doom the few survivors to submissive decadence, my son," growled Xar with words full of hatred. "But I have a plan. If you obey me and never forget we shall have our revenge. The Sartan are our enemies. That is what we must never forget."
And suddenly Haplo found himself paralyzed and the land of the Nexus changed. The plants withered and died off. An army of Patryn, grim faced and heavily armed, marched through the wasteland. Hundreds, thousands, millions, all following the plans of the lord of the Nexus. All ready, all willing, all eager to transform the entire universe in a battlefield full of bleached bones and carrion eaters.
But the Patryn disappeared and blood flooded the Nexus, flowing out of the Last Gate. Only the shining city stood unchanged in the center of the horror, until a great horde formed by all the monsters of the Labyrinth destroyed its walls and turned its light into black smoke. And, as it burned, the Nexus turned into a graveyard in which the corpse of every Patryn that had ever lived were devoured by the vermin.
"You forgot," said Xar's hate-filled voice to his side. "I told you to remember, my son. But you forgot. Worse. You allied with a Sartan. You betrayed me. Betrayed us all. You let me die. You took from us the chance to rule the universe. And then you doomed us to an eternity of hell in the Labyrinth."
As he talked, Xar's body had turned into dust and his eyes had started glowing red like hellfire. A skeletal arm drew a rune and suddenly Haplo felt himself being burned to death. And even as he died, Haplo could not escape from the baleful gaze of the man who had been adoptive father, Lord and Master. As darkness claimed him, he heard the voice for the last time.
"Never forget, Haplo, that it is your fault, now and forever. Nothing you do, nothing you say shall ever change it."
And Haplo woke up, body covered in sweat and tense like a bowstring. He woke up Marit, his companion, when he stood up.
"Another nightmare? Xar again?"
Not trusting his voice, Haplo merely nodded.
"It has been four cycles now, curse it! I have told you, how our minds were connected back then. I felt how he understood it all, in the end. What you were fighting for. His mistakes. His shortcomings. He forgave you. Why can't you accept it?"
"I know it. I saw his corpse, remember? I never saw him so at peace while he lived. But the fact remains. I betrayed my Lord."
Marit frowned, unsure of what to do. They had discussed this topic on and off, ever since the nightmares started, some three cycles back. No magic healing, no traditional Patryn remedy, no Sartan medical treatment had worked. Joining the rescue parties had brought him a measure of serenity, but the guilt still haunted him no matter how much he risked to save others from the claws of the Labyrinth and bring them to the relative safety of the Nexus. Not even the sincere love he felt for their eight children, both the adopted and natural, and her was enough to exorcise the spectres that haunted him. As soon as he closed his eyes, the torture began anew.
"And I betrayed you. And he betrayed us both. We were all a little mad in those final days. But it had to be done or the serpents would have won and, in the end, things didn't go as badly as they could," she said, rising from the bed and hugging him. Softly, she whispered to his ear. "I will not let you break the first vow of our marriage. My life for your life, remember? I don't know how much time life might grant us, but however much or little it is we must use it well. Not all is pain. Not all is regret. Not all is hate. Not even in the Labyrinth. We have more than earned our slice of happiness. Come join me, husband."
And Marit took Haplo back to the bed and almost against his will, they reformed the greater circle of their dual self and in a joyous celebration of heat, lust and mutual completeness, they howled their passion to the uncaring universe. They fell asleep much later with the fading glow of their heart-runes as the only sign of the intimacy they had experienced. Haplo didn't experience any more nightmares for the rest of that night.
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"I think that the rascals are starting to believe that you don't send them over to my place so that uncle Alfred can tell them tales of Arianus," commented Alfred Montbank the next day, in manner of greeting, when they met in the park behind the couple's residence. The Sartan had his characteristic gentle smile and was feeding bread to a small flock of sparrows that had somehow come to the Nexus with the Chelestran Sartan.
"Why do you say that?"
"Charo asked me if quote you were making another baby unquote. For the record, she says that she wants another sister. Can't you teach your kids some sense of propiety?"
Haplo was a bit taken aback. Son of a couple of Patryn runners who had raised him, which was unusual even for Patryn standards, he had learned the 'facts of life' early on, but he could accept that what he had known might not be the best for his children. If nothing else, he would try to spare them the literal rod. He had learned the runes under threat of pain, because that had been necessity, but that was not the case anymore. Nevertheless, hearing a Sartan -even Alfred- criticize the way he was raising his children...
"Never mind that, you two," cut Marit. "It won't be long now. We should get going."
Both men nodded and together they went towards the center of the city. There stood a gleaming tower of silver and crystal, identical to the building that had served as Xar's palace before the serpents destroyed it, which had been rebuilt and rebaptized with the new name of Hall of the Covenant.