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SW fanfic: Too Little Time for Goodbyes
Posted: 2002-09-25 09:42am
by Kelly Antilles
Here's another one of my fics. This one is about Pash Cracken and why he and his father don't seem to get along so well.
http://www.angelfire.com/hi4/kantilles/ ... eTime.html
I hope you enjoy. (and any comments would be greatly appreciated.)
Posted: 2002-09-26 07:18pm
by Kuja
That's really something. You're a good writer, kelly.
Posted: 2002-09-26 08:34pm
by Dalton
Very nice. Great foreshadowing. I like the subtleness with which you reveal what Pash seems to be (or am I wrong?).
Posted: 2002-09-26 08:44pm
by Kelly Antilles
Well, what is it you think I'm foreshadowing?
Posted: 2002-09-26 09:01pm
by Dalton
Kelly Antilles wrote:Well, what is it you think I'm foreshadowing?
Correction: I thought you were foreshadowing a later revelation, that Pash was either 1. a genetically-modified clone or 2. artificially conceived.
Posted: 2002-09-26 09:02pm
by Kelly Antilles
No, just the reason he doesn't get along with his father is because of what happened to his mother.
Posted: 2002-09-26 09:04pm
by Dalton
Kelly Antilles wrote:No, just the reason he doesn't get along with his father is because of what happened to his mother.
I realized that at the end of the story, but I was just thinking about how Airen said that Pash was "like a clone of her" and she replied "that he is".
Posted: 2002-09-26 09:09pm
by Kelly Antilles
Ah yes. I can see that being taken in that manner.
Posted: 2002-09-26 09:16pm
by Dalton
Kelly Antilles wrote:Ah yes. I can see that being taken in that manner.
Or you could say you were being clever and subtle
Do you have any other work? You're very good.
Posted: 2002-09-26 09:21pm
by Kelly Antilles
http://www.angelfire.com/hi4/kantilles/library.html
These are most of my stories so far. I have a few I need to put up there and I have a couple of Cowboy Bebop fics I've been working on that I'm going to put up too.
Thanks for the compliments.
Posted: 2002-09-26 09:25pm
by Dalton
Bebop??? Sweeeeeeeet
Posted: 2002-09-26 09:27pm
by Kelly Antilles
Yeah... I've put the guys in the GFFA. I think you might appreciate it. You and Bean.
Posted: 2002-09-26 09:39pm
by Dalton
Kelly Antilles wrote:Yeah... I've put the guys in the GFFA. I think you might appreciate it. You and Bean.
GFFA? Not entirely sure what that is. But I still look forward to it
Posted: 2002-09-27 09:10am
by Kelly Antilles
OMG, I can't believe you guys don't know what GFFA is?
GFFA=Galaxy Far, Far Away.
Posted: 2002-09-29 06:09pm
by Kuja
Ah, never hear that one before. But if you're writing a CB and SW crossover, I will DEFINATELY read it!
Posted: 2002-09-29 06:40pm
by Dalton
Kelly Antilles wrote:OMG, I can't believe you guys don't know what GFFA is?
GFFA=Galaxy Far, Far Away.
Sorry, new one on me
I'm not really a creature of the pure-SW fanfic community.