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LoG Chap 1: The asskicking has officially begun!

Posted: 2003-09-24 10:30pm
by Steve
http://stgjr.racknine.net/misc/logchap1.zip

Let the ass-kicking officially begin! :twisted:

*kicks on the music*

"Don't want no revenge!
Ain't no payback time!
It ain't called getting even!
Here comes the Reckoning Day!"


Fan feedback in this thread will be most appreciated. :)

Posted: 2003-09-25 02:37am
by Peregrin Toker
Looks interesting!! I'll read it soon.

Posted: 2003-09-25 12:45pm
by Dalton
Kick-ASS!

Muhahah! That was fuckin' cool. I like how my character axed people to death.

Er...that didn't sound right. :)

Posted: 2003-09-25 05:23pm
by Posbi
Yep, that simply rocked. Looking forward to more. 8)

Posted: 2003-09-25 10:25pm
by phongn
More fanfic!

Posted: 2003-09-27 01:37am
by Coalition
Looks very good. If I may, a couple requests:

For a rescue saying:

"Come with me if you want to live."

For a saying at the end:

"I live for the one, I kill for the one. Semper Fi"

Or watch the Goreans try to kidnap a T-X.

Okay, so the last one might be a little silly.

Still though, a very good beginning.

Posted: 2003-09-27 02:14pm
by Peregrin Toker
Very good what has happened so far... it at least has proved that Gor can be used for something else as paperweights.