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The Ship
Posted: 2002-10-10 02:01pm
by MKSheppard
[CH 1 REMOVED]
Posted: 2002-10-10 02:42pm
by Kuja
I see Kelly's getting another 15 seconds of fame...LOL.
Good opening!
Posted: 2002-10-10 02:50pm
by Kelly Antilles
Well... how interesting.
How did you know I was in medical?
Your writing style is very nice, Shep. I like it alot.
Posted: 2002-10-10 02:56pm
by MKSheppard
Kelly Antilles wrote:Well... how interesting.
How did you know I was in medical?
Well, with a title like "Official SD Net Mom"........you know.....
Posted: 2002-10-10 03:08pm
by Mr Bean
Heh I think Kelly is going for *Most likey to be seen in a fanfic
Posted: 2002-10-10 03:14pm
by Mr Bean
As for the acutal story I say
Entaur Adiun!
CTHULHU!
The relevant intresting part of the story
Posted: 2002-10-10 03:18pm
by Kuja
Antorbok, magormer, Ulyaoth!
Tier, pargon, redgormer, Xel'otath!
Aretek, nethlek, Chat'urga!
Zantak, tier, pargon, Mantorok!
there's some funky yelling for you....
Posted: 2002-10-10 03:18pm
by Knife
So far I like.
Posted: 2002-10-10 03:22pm
by Singular Quartet
Sicking an Elder God on the Enterprise? I am suprised daily by the amount of evil in the world. Keep it up
Posted: 2002-10-12 04:16pm
by NecronLord
Posted: 2002-10-12 04:30pm
by Mr Bean
At least there are no Zombies Groaning stumbling around yelling Huunger! braiiins! Mmmm Braiiins yet
Posted: 2002-10-12 04:33pm
by MKSheppard
[CH 2 Removed]
Posted: 2002-10-12 05:03pm
by Kelly Antilles
Interesting second chapter.
Posted: 2002-10-12 05:13pm
by Kuja
Whoa. Damn.
Posted: 2002-10-13 08:06am
by 2000AD
oh com on now! Starfleet putting on bio-suits before they beam down? Everyone knows they just go down in normal clothing and hope their transporter's bio-foilter will get rid of anything they pick up.
Posted: 2002-10-13 09:33am
by Stormbringer
2000AD wrote:oh com on now! Starfleet putting on bio-suits before they beam down? Everyone knows they just go down in normal clothing and hope their transporter's bio-foilter will get rid of anything they pick up.
Cut him some slack for that. They were beaming down into a know biohazard zone.
Posted: 2002-10-13 10:28am
by Mr Bean
Hmm so wreak of an ISD, An Elder God
....
*Looks around for 50 foot tall Stay Puff Marshmellow Man
Posted: 2002-10-13 11:59pm
by Shinova
Anyone else notice that Ray Cav guy in the story is one of SD.net's?
Or am I wrong?
Posted: 2002-10-14 02:41am
by NecronLord
You are right.
This kind of reminds me of my equally cruel C'tan vs Feds thread.
Posted: 2002-10-14 03:09am
by Sea Skimmer
Sounds like a Hive Virus..
Posted: 2002-10-14 10:27am
by MKSheppard
2000AD wrote:oh com on now! Starfleet putting on bio-suits before they beam down? Everyone knows they just go down in normal clothing and hope their transporter's bio-foilter will get rid of anything they pick up.
I recall seeing them in Bio-suits during a TNG episode, so a pox on you!
Posted: 2002-10-14 04:08pm
by Soontir C'boath
DAAAAAANG .....what will be found on that imperator???!!!!!!
Cyaround,
Jason
P.S.- This kix @$$ I WANT MORE!
Posted: 2002-10-14 04:16pm
by 2000AD
MKSheppard wrote:2000AD wrote:oh com on now! Starfleet putting on bio-suits before they beam down? Everyone knows they just go down in normal clothing and hope their transporter's bio-foilter will get rid of anything they pick up.
I recall seeing them in Bio-suits during a TNG episode, so a pox on you!
Can't say i've seen that one but then again i don't watch as much Trekl as i used to.
Posted: 2002-10-14 08:19pm
by Singular Quartet
MKSheppard wrote:2000AD wrote:oh com on now! Starfleet putting on bio-suits before they beam down? Everyone knows they just go down in normal clothing and hope their transporter's bio-foilter will get rid of anything they pick up.
I recall seeing them in Bio-suits during a TNG episode, so a pox on you!
They do. They were shown in First Contact, when they go out onto the hull to kill the Borg playing with the primary deflector.
Posted: 2002-10-14 10:40pm
by Kuja
*snort* Uh, you don't think they put those on to deal with the lack of oxygen, did you? Nawwww......