DrakaFic: The Great Patriotic War : Beginnings
Posted: 2004-06-26 01:17am
The Great Patriotic War: Beginnings
(if you can come up with a better title, I'm all ears)
Joint Fanfic in the Draka Universe created by S.M. Stirling
by Mark Sheppard and Vegard Valberg
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[Ossetian Military Highway, Soviet Georgia - May 22, 1940, 0400 Hours]
Centurion Eric von Shrakenburg watched as the ground slowly rose up to meet him
as he swayed in his parachute. Before he had dropped too low below the horizon, he
had been able to see the lights of what appeared to be a village in the distance, some
ten klicks away from their landing site.
There had been no signs of untoward movement at all; by Freya, it looked like they'd be
able to pull this one off, dropping two entire Airborne Legions onto the vital mountain pass
that the Ossetian Military Highway ran through, so that the Russian forces in Georgia would
be isolated and destroyed by the Drakan armored spearheads rumbling past the now
destroyed border outposts from what had been known as Turkey in the west and from
the valleys of Armenia in the east.
Suddenly, Eric saw something gleaming in the moonlight, and wondered what it was. For
a few moments, he wondered what the hell it was, and then his brain clicked. He frantically
began to try and shift his weight across the parachute so he wouldn't fall onto it; he was
still sinking at a very fast clip.
A single strangled cry of "Schiesse!" was all he managed to get out before he was on top
of it, and then his world exploded in pain and he blacked out.
[10 minutes later]
"I've found the Centurion!" shouted Senior Decurion McWhirter as he cleared away the
brush surrounding the battered body of the young Shrakenburg lad. McWhirter tried
not to grimace as he saw what was left of the young man's right foot.
"Damned Slavs," cursed the Decurion, as he remembered the way the damned Pashtuns
in Afghanistan loved to string piano wire across main highways at night, waiting for a hapless
Draka to drive by and then loot their vehicle.
[The town of Nizhniy Unal, 17 miles northwest of the Drop Zone]
A racuous celebration was currently underway in the drab town of Nizhniy Unal, a few dozen
buildings that existed merely because of the Ossetian Military Highway. The workers who
maintained the highway and kept it clear of snow in the winter months had to have places
to live in, so all amongst the breadth of the innumerable military highways across the
Soviet Union, there were such towns like this.
A rotund middle aged man wearing a shabby fitting suit, looking much like a haberdasher,
except for the Party emblem on his collar, climbed to the top of a platform that had been
built the night before for the celebration, and took a deep breath.
"Thirty thousand kilometers of piano wire, comrades! We have strung up thirty thousand
kilometers of thin, near invisible piano wire covering the glens and openings of our great
state!"
"This is a momentous achievement, comrades! By order of Comrade Krasnov we are
issuing to you a gift of liquour, tobacco and chocolate!"
Even as the party boss was finishing his speech, Red Army quartermasters were bringing
in baskets filled with all sorts of material from cheap tins containing vodka to expensive
chocolate treats in fine cardboard boxes.
"LONG LIVE THE MOTHERLAND! LONG LIVE COMRADE KRASNOV!" cried out the
man. Without missing a beat, the crowd returned the roar at gale strength.
"ALL STRENGTH AND GLORY TO THE GREAT KRASNOV!" shouted the man,
and the shout was returned as well, as the people rejoiced in the bounty before
them.
As the man stepped down from the platform, he walked through the crowd, towards
the local party headquarters, where he had important business to take care of. Of course,
he hadn't mentioned that the reason for handing out this bounty had less to do with
the desire to reward Soviet Citizens, and more with the fact that they either had to
distribute the contents of the warehouses to the people, or else the Draka would have
them as they marched forth. The only other alternative was to destroy them.
Some had spoken for burning them, but already scorched earth was being implemented
on a large scale, so there was nothing really to lose by making the civilians more
comfortable while they waited for evacuation; or some said, prepared themselves to
be drafted en masse, depending on how the fighting went.
Opening the door to the Party HQ, he saw that the regional party leader, Georgiy
Mikhailovich Dratvin, was there. Oh shit, he thought. Had he done something
bad? Forgotten to praise Krasnov enough?
And then he noticed that it was very warm inside the offices. Much warmer than the
season could account for. The reason became apparent almost immediately as
he watched a MGB man in his bluecap walking by with a armfull of papers, towards
the fireplace, where a blazing fire was going.
Gathered around the fireplace were a dozen or so party men, MVD men, and a
bluecap or two, all throwing papers onto the fire, which was roaring like a beast,
throwing half-burnt pieces of paper into the chimney as the flames devoured
the painstakingly assembled dossiers which they had spent so much time on.
Looking around, the party hack swallowed nervously, he was a balding middle aged
man with a paunch, quite not the New Socialist Man of the papers, and he was afraid,
oh god yes, afraid. The only thing keeping him from going to pieces right then and
there was that everyone in this town was looking towards him, the local party boss,
for support.
One of the MGB men was on the phone, talking intently, and covering the mouth piece
with his hand to keep snatches of conversation from reaching the others.
All the party hack could think of was how he'd have to have a word with the women at the
telephone exchange later about what they had 'accidentally' overheard. Then the
bluecap slammed the phone down, his hand trembling softly. He walked over to
Dratvin and whispered into the Regional boss' ear.
Dratvin's eyes widened ever so slightly, and with a quaver in his voice, he spoke
to the assembled party men and security directorate personnel. "It's begun,
it's really begun..." he managed to choke out before he stopped for a moment
to compose himself.
When he had composed himself enough, he resumed speaking. "The Grand Struggle
for which the Motherland has prepared for these last twenty years has arrived! May the
spirit of Lenin and the hand of Krasnov guide us through these tumultous days ahead
of us!"
(if you can come up with a better title, I'm all ears)
Joint Fanfic in the Draka Universe created by S.M. Stirling
by Mark Sheppard and Vegard Valberg
********************************
[Ossetian Military Highway, Soviet Georgia - May 22, 1940, 0400 Hours]
Centurion Eric von Shrakenburg watched as the ground slowly rose up to meet him
as he swayed in his parachute. Before he had dropped too low below the horizon, he
had been able to see the lights of what appeared to be a village in the distance, some
ten klicks away from their landing site.
There had been no signs of untoward movement at all; by Freya, it looked like they'd be
able to pull this one off, dropping two entire Airborne Legions onto the vital mountain pass
that the Ossetian Military Highway ran through, so that the Russian forces in Georgia would
be isolated and destroyed by the Drakan armored spearheads rumbling past the now
destroyed border outposts from what had been known as Turkey in the west and from
the valleys of Armenia in the east.
Suddenly, Eric saw something gleaming in the moonlight, and wondered what it was. For
a few moments, he wondered what the hell it was, and then his brain clicked. He frantically
began to try and shift his weight across the parachute so he wouldn't fall onto it; he was
still sinking at a very fast clip.
A single strangled cry of "Schiesse!" was all he managed to get out before he was on top
of it, and then his world exploded in pain and he blacked out.
[10 minutes later]
"I've found the Centurion!" shouted Senior Decurion McWhirter as he cleared away the
brush surrounding the battered body of the young Shrakenburg lad. McWhirter tried
not to grimace as he saw what was left of the young man's right foot.
"Damned Slavs," cursed the Decurion, as he remembered the way the damned Pashtuns
in Afghanistan loved to string piano wire across main highways at night, waiting for a hapless
Draka to drive by and then loot their vehicle.
[The town of Nizhniy Unal, 17 miles northwest of the Drop Zone]
A racuous celebration was currently underway in the drab town of Nizhniy Unal, a few dozen
buildings that existed merely because of the Ossetian Military Highway. The workers who
maintained the highway and kept it clear of snow in the winter months had to have places
to live in, so all amongst the breadth of the innumerable military highways across the
Soviet Union, there were such towns like this.
A rotund middle aged man wearing a shabby fitting suit, looking much like a haberdasher,
except for the Party emblem on his collar, climbed to the top of a platform that had been
built the night before for the celebration, and took a deep breath.
"Thirty thousand kilometers of piano wire, comrades! We have strung up thirty thousand
kilometers of thin, near invisible piano wire covering the glens and openings of our great
state!"
"This is a momentous achievement, comrades! By order of Comrade Krasnov we are
issuing to you a gift of liquour, tobacco and chocolate!"
Even as the party boss was finishing his speech, Red Army quartermasters were bringing
in baskets filled with all sorts of material from cheap tins containing vodka to expensive
chocolate treats in fine cardboard boxes.
"LONG LIVE THE MOTHERLAND! LONG LIVE COMRADE KRASNOV!" cried out the
man. Without missing a beat, the crowd returned the roar at gale strength.
"ALL STRENGTH AND GLORY TO THE GREAT KRASNOV!" shouted the man,
and the shout was returned as well, as the people rejoiced in the bounty before
them.
As the man stepped down from the platform, he walked through the crowd, towards
the local party headquarters, where he had important business to take care of. Of course,
he hadn't mentioned that the reason for handing out this bounty had less to do with
the desire to reward Soviet Citizens, and more with the fact that they either had to
distribute the contents of the warehouses to the people, or else the Draka would have
them as they marched forth. The only other alternative was to destroy them.
Some had spoken for burning them, but already scorched earth was being implemented
on a large scale, so there was nothing really to lose by making the civilians more
comfortable while they waited for evacuation; or some said, prepared themselves to
be drafted en masse, depending on how the fighting went.
Opening the door to the Party HQ, he saw that the regional party leader, Georgiy
Mikhailovich Dratvin, was there. Oh shit, he thought. Had he done something
bad? Forgotten to praise Krasnov enough?
And then he noticed that it was very warm inside the offices. Much warmer than the
season could account for. The reason became apparent almost immediately as
he watched a MGB man in his bluecap walking by with a armfull of papers, towards
the fireplace, where a blazing fire was going.
Gathered around the fireplace were a dozen or so party men, MVD men, and a
bluecap or two, all throwing papers onto the fire, which was roaring like a beast,
throwing half-burnt pieces of paper into the chimney as the flames devoured
the painstakingly assembled dossiers which they had spent so much time on.
Looking around, the party hack swallowed nervously, he was a balding middle aged
man with a paunch, quite not the New Socialist Man of the papers, and he was afraid,
oh god yes, afraid. The only thing keeping him from going to pieces right then and
there was that everyone in this town was looking towards him, the local party boss,
for support.
One of the MGB men was on the phone, talking intently, and covering the mouth piece
with his hand to keep snatches of conversation from reaching the others.
All the party hack could think of was how he'd have to have a word with the women at the
telephone exchange later about what they had 'accidentally' overheard. Then the
bluecap slammed the phone down, his hand trembling softly. He walked over to
Dratvin and whispered into the Regional boss' ear.
Dratvin's eyes widened ever so slightly, and with a quaver in his voice, he spoke
to the assembled party men and security directorate personnel. "It's begun,
it's really begun..." he managed to choke out before he stopped for a moment
to compose himself.
When he had composed himself enough, he resumed speaking. "The Grand Struggle
for which the Motherland has prepared for these last twenty years has arrived! May the
spirit of Lenin and the hand of Krasnov guide us through these tumultous days ahead
of us!"