Gandalf does poetry. Mk3.

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Gandalf does poetry. Mk3.

Post by Gandalf »

I wrote:Your heart
It stands proud and true
Malice in it has no part
Good is all it can do
Brightly it shines like a blazing fire
Drawing those around it near
Showing off it's true desires
And we'll have nothing more to fear
This one is a little more pleasant than my last ones.

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That we dying younger hiding from the police man over there
Just for breathing in the air they wanna leave me in the chair
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Post by Shroom Man 777 »

Nice, nice. Giving it to someone?
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Post by Gandalf »

Shroom Man 777 wrote:Nice, nice. Giving it to someone?
Nope, just started writing and that was what came out.
"Oh no, oh yeah, tell me how can it be so fair
That we dying younger hiding from the police man over there
Just for breathing in the air they wanna leave me in the chair
Electric shocking body rocking beat streeting me to death"

- A.B. Original, Report to the Mist

"I think it’s the duty of the comedian to find out where the line is drawn and cross it deliberately."
- George Carlin
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Post by Spice Runner »

Reminds me of a line from a movie. I think it was, "What evil lurks in the minds of men?" In this case 'minds' could be substituted with 'hearts'.
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Post by Lindar »

*grins* Not bad at all. *hopes you write more*
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