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Gandalf does poetry. Mk3.
Posted: 2004-11-17 10:54pm
by Gandalf
I wrote:Your heart
It stands proud and true
Malice in it has no part
Good is all it can do
Brightly it shines like a blazing fire
Drawing those around it near
Showing off it's true desires
And we'll have nothing more to fear
This one is a little more pleasant than my last ones.
Thoughts? Comments?
Posted: 2004-11-18 04:49am
by Shroom Man 777
Nice, nice. Giving it to someone?
Posted: 2004-11-18 06:24am
by Gandalf
Shroom Man 777 wrote:Nice, nice. Giving it to someone?
Nope, just started writing and that was what came out.
Posted: 2004-11-18 11:31am
by Spice Runner
Reminds me of a line from a movie. I think it was, "What evil lurks in the minds of men?" In this case 'minds' could be substituted with 'hearts'.
Posted: 2004-11-18 04:07pm
by Lindar
*grins* Not bad at all. *hopes you write more*