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bab5 - minbiri dont surrender on the line
Posted: 2004-12-03 09:31am
by Enforcer Talen
Posted: 2004-12-03 12:16pm
by phongn
Yes, it is, but you really need to learn how to describe things better
Posted: 2004-12-03 12:27pm
by Enforcer Talen
I thot any bab5 fan knew what minbiri on the line meant =p
Posted: 2004-12-03 01:04pm
by Prozac the Robert
Spoiler: (only from chapter 2 though, so not too bad I hope.)
By the way, my name is Susan Ivanova, and I have one question to ask you. A simple enough question, really.
"Captain, what do you want?"
Made me laugh in a shocked kind of way. Definitely plan to keep reading this.
Posted: 2004-12-03 01:33pm
by Enforcer Talen
he's an awesome writer. I had about 10 pages of superb quotes like that -
and that intro of 'what do you want' was such an attention grabber.
evil invonava
the twists are surprising.
Posted: 2004-12-03 02:05pm
by Prozac the Robert
Yeh, still reading it now, although I guess I'll stop for some food at some point...
Posted: 2004-12-03 02:07pm
by starfury
awesome fic, I had it twice already.
Posted: 2004-12-03 03:03pm
by Enforcer Talen
reading it for the second time.
Id make a deal with the shadows so fast, lol.
Posted: 2004-12-03 09:49pm
by Temjin
Holy shit....
I'm only on chapter 3 of part II in the first volume, and it's really good so far.
Posted: 2004-12-03 10:57pm
by Enforcer Talen
it stays at that level or gets better.
volume 5 has some surprises tho
*spoilers*
at some point, I want to count up the number of planets destroyed. earth, mars, epsilon erindai, minbir, centauri, and zhadum dont even begin to start the count.