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WH40K: Suffer Not The Alien

Posted: 2005-01-21 03:57pm
by Companion Cube
Warning: Abandoned Fic!

Note: Found this lying around on the HD and decided to post it after reading through for nostalgia's sake. I've posted the prologue, the first chapter and the plot outline I wrote beforehand.

Disclaimer: All italicised sections at the beginning of each chapter are property of Games Workshop, appearing in the Warhammer 40,000 rulebook, Codex Tyranids, and other sources. © copyright Games Workshop Ltd 2000-2004


Suffer not the Alien, Prologue

...to be a man in such times is to be one amongst untold billions. It is to live in the cruelest and most bloody regime imaginable. This is a tale of those times. Forget the power of technology, science and common humanity. Forget the promise of progress and understanding, for there is no peace amongst the stars! There is only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods. But the universe is a big place, and whatever happens...... you will not be missed!




6.150.997. M41, Saragamine system, Ultima Segmentum, the Imperium of Man.

Week One.

Adept-Cadet Abidan cursed as his robes dragged through yet another puddle in the condensation-drenched corridor within the bowels of Prosperity, the largest human habitation on the Emperor-forsaken world of Abundentia.
Life on the run-down little colony planet was rarely anything less than miserable, and the only excitement of life here was the sort that came from discovering that one of the planet’s multitudinous species of fly had laid its eggs beneath your skin. Or the excitement that came from knowing you were over half an hour late for an appointment with the planetary governor.

It wasn’t really his fault though, the Adept-Cadet groused. On his journey towards the Administratum building at the heart of Prosperity’s main enviro-dome, he’d come across one of the city’s inhabitants blaspheming against a malfunctioning air recirc unit, and had needed time to both chastise the insolent peasant and to repair the device in question. Surely as a priest-in-training of the Adeptus Mechanicus, he could not afford to ignore such things!

As he exited the corridor, he emerged into the main causeway running across the two-kilometre dome, turning his head upwards to marvel at the construction of the monumental edifice that so dwarfed the largely squalid buildings built within it.
The dome, identical in design if not in size to all on the surface of Abundentia, was a necessity of life on a deathworld. From the higher floors of the Administratum building, you could see over the thirty metre-thick permacrete skirt that surrounded the dome and into the Jungle beyond; a verdant green hell interrupted by occasional splashes of gaudy colour. Each leaf of which seemed to conceal some variation on the “covered in venomous spines” theme.

Abundentia had been established some centuries earlier by a Magos Biologis explorator team, who had been delighted by the rich variety of plant and animal life, choosing to ignore the fact that the planet’s ecology was constantly engaged in more bloodshed than the first twelve Black Crusades put together.

And so, the deathworld’s thirteen million colonists huddled together under their environment domes, hermetically sealed against the murderous plant and animal life outside.

As Adept-Cadet Abidan hurried to his appointment, Administrator Felix Engel was not having a good day either. Not only was that Imperator-damned Mechanicus drone late for their appointment, but he’d recently received a message via the astropath relay, informing that Abundentia’s planetary tithe grade may be subject to change soon, moving from Solutio Tertius to Solutio Prima- An increased strain on an already impoverished world.
The next item on his litany of More Than Minor Irritations was the imminent arrival of an Imperial Guard regiment from Silvanos III, apparently the result of a two-century old request from the last surviving Biologis personnel for some military assistance in purging some of the more insidious life-forms making their homes immediately outside the domes.
Grimacing in irritation, he leaned back and stared through the milky glass of his office skylight, where, hundreds of metres above, through a hanging maze of pipes, scaffolding and gantries, the indistinct form of a cargo blimp could be seen, bringing its cargo from the hydroponic combines to the south. With the setting of the sun, the steam produced by the colony’s ancient air conditioning units was collecting amongst hidden nooks and crannies far above was condensing, to fall in a greasy rain on the hab-blocks arranged in featureless, haphazard rows around the central square, its perimeter manned by the headquarters of the Administratum, Ministorum, and the city’s Arbites precinct house.

Administrator Engel sighed, and bent once more towards his desk. No, tonight was not going to be a good night. And the future did not look appreciably brighter.

Week Two

Above the strategically unimportant colony-world of Abundentia, the planet was seeing more space traffic than it had during any period since its founding. The epicentre of this flurry of activity was His Imperial Majesty’s Ship Saint Veran, its cargo the five thousand men of the 3rd Silvanos Light Infantry. A constant flow of transport shuttles streamed down to the planet’s humid surface and returned to repeat the journey, ferrying the men and machines coming to belatedly answer the plea of the world’s unfortunate settlers.

Within the bucking cargo compartment of the lander, Trooper Vehm struggled heroically to keep down the rations he’d unwisely wolfed earlier in the landfall operation, while his neighbours busied themselves with either checking their kit or leaning away from the nauseous-looking soldier. Across from him, Trooper Hasiz winced in sympathy and went back to cradling his lasgun.

Ahead of them in the dropship’s cockpit, the pilot shifted uncomfortably in his pressure suit and whispered the litany of Turbulence as he prepared to approach Abundentia’s only spaceport, a few permacrete landing pads and a control tower, all within a walled enclosure clinging to the side of Prosperity like a leprous growth.

On the ground at the landing pad, Commissar Hasse, newly arrived with the Silvanos, eyed the cloud-filled skies above dubiously. The briefing he’d received en route had mentioned any number of dangerous flying xenos populating the planet, and he had no desire to take casualties before the regiment was even assembled properly. Even as he peered upwards, a constant stream of men marched along the thoroughfare leading through the fortified base of the dome into the interior.

Week Three

In the soundless void far beyond the Saragamine system, the Hivefleet floated inexorably. To the Imperium, it was a splinter fleet of Hive Fleet Leviathan, which had recently begun plaguing Ork holdings elsewhere in the Ultima Segmentum. To the trillions of organisms to which it was home, it was the All.

Posted: 2005-01-21 03:58pm
by Companion Cube
Disclaimer: All italicised sections at the beginning of each chapter are property of Games Workshop, appearing in the Warhammer 40,000 rulebook, Codex Tyranids, and other sources. © copyright Games Workshop Ltd 2000-2004


Suffer Not The Alien, Chapter One

While vile aliens’ hearts still beat, there can be no respite
While faithless traitors still live, there can be no forgiveness
While the enemies of the Emperor still draw breath, there can be no peace.


6.150.997. M41, Saragamine system, Ultima Segmentum, the Imperium of Man.


Week Fifteen

Trooper McIlheny gritted his teeth as he squeezed the trigger on the .50 autocannon, spitting tracer at the nightmare shape lurking in the woods. The creature had been the first Tyranid to be sighted by Prosperity’s impromptu guard force, formerly the 3rd Silvanos Light Infantry. It had been a mere five weeks since the Hive Fleet had arrived in orbit, since the Shadow in the Warp had driven the astropaths insane and the Saint Veran had been hunted down and destroyed as it tried to flee the system.
Now the few hundred Silvanos that remained were cut off completely from the rest of the Imperium, with no hope for relief.

None of this was on McIlheny’s mind as the ammo drum ran dry and the Mantis killer slunk back into the jungle, seemingly unperturbed by the assault.

The invasion had come at the worst possible time for the Guard; they had recently been deployed across the planet to clear out safe zones around each major hab-dome, with a view to exterminating any dangerous wildlife (any wildlife in this case) within several miles of any human habitation.
Thus far, they had managed a good start, clearing out acres of thick jungle with Hellhound-mounted incinerators and hundreds of tonnes worth of fyceline dropped from Vulture gunships staging from Prosperity spaceport.

Posted: 2005-01-21 04:01pm
by Companion Cube
Prologue: Random colonists, focus on crappy conditions living on deathworld colony, think up a suitably morbid name…Tyranids invade, and everything gets actively worse, IG posted there as glorified exterminators now have to deal with full-scale planetary invasion.
• Colonists live in large dome-like habitats to keep nasties out.
• IG heavily equipped with Flamers, sentinels (woot!) with flamers, etc. Lots o’ good stuff.
• IG do not arrive on planet now (dealt with in CH2), so focus only on colonists and IG onboard transports (Hesperia, Saint Veran)
• Perhaps have a paragraph on Tyranids Hivefleet (check Codex for possible suggestions/locations) floating through space, “Oh no!” etc.



Chapter 1 Preface:
“You will not be missed” section, beginning of WH40K Rulebook.(
To be a man in such times is to be one amongst untold billions. It is to live in the cruelest and most bloody regime imaginable. This is a tale of those times. Forget the power of technology, science and common humanity. Forget the promise of progress and understanding, for there is no peace amongst the stars! There is only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods. But the universe is a big place, and whatever happens...... you will not be missed!
)


Events:

• Introduced to random IG fighting a losing battle on Abundantia in the (Saragamine) system in the Segmentum (Pacificus/Tempestus/Obscurus/Whatever)
• Enemy? Tyranids (Simplifies characterisation, Con: Biotech) Necrons? (Too much work) Chaos? (Little too Gordon Rennie-like, but could work)
• PLOT: Get the hell out alive. That is all.
• Tyranid Motivation: They want to eat everything.
• IG REG? Just make one up. (Newly raised regiment)
• Location on planet? IG are barracked at planetary capital, rest of habitats too small to house an extra five thousand Imperial Guard.
• Support? Garrison trapped on planet by Shadow in the Warp. (I.E all astropaths dead/insane.) No supporting forces available, transports in orbit destroyed by Hivefleet before warning could be sent. Imperium at large doesn’t know, probably wouldn’t give a shit in any case. This is all Past Tense! Remember, stuff like the Tyranids beginning attack, Shadow and transports being fragged happened a week earlier.
• Characters? Hard-bitten Inquisition type person around, (why is he here? Perhaps hitching a ride on IG transports.) various Administratum people, soon to die, various civilians (majority long dead.) Psychotic preachers and commissars. (Lots of potential for interesting monologues here!) Random Adeptus Arbites people, maybe?
• World? Mining planet, or perhaps verdant jungle deathworld (Good angle!) Shitloads of creepy-crawlies in the trees to eat Tyranids- IG there for a training operation/ to clear out hostile life forms for colonists.


Chapter 2 Preface:
“Blood of the Alien” section, WH40K Rulebook.
(“Yes it is true what you may have heard whispered amongst back alleys betwixt the night and the nether night! Why not say it aloud for all to hear.
Let the fools doubt and sneer, for it matters not. Be proud of your humanity and keep it unsullied and blessed.
This is as my master told it to me and now I tell it to thee.
There are a billion names of damnation!
A billion kinds of things that slither and slime and defile the land and sea and wind.
Each thing is a kind of sin spawned by great evil. And that evil is very sinful there are many of these damned things and their power is great.
As the purpose it the purpose of all things in nature to increase, so it is with the damned.
They would we joined them or die and so they seek to overcome us.
In alien forms they assault us. In sleep they come to us and spread fear and doubt amongst us.
They would corrupt out hearts and see us damned too. Trust them not nor suffer them to live.
For each alien destroyed in a soul freed from eternal bondage.
Each mortal alien soul extinguished is a human soul raised to glory. Thus our destiny is written in the blood of the alien.
With sword and spear destroy the alien.
With cannon shot and gun blast smash the alien.
With lasers and searing promethium scatter the aliens to the stars.
With tooth and fist and hammer blow…with axe and shell and virus-bombs…with guided missile and thermal mines…
KILL THEM ... KILL THEM ... KILL THEM ALL!
)

Events:
• Kind of like a prologue, deals with IG arriving on planet.
• Deals with initial Tyranids attack, colonists heading for shelter. (Not hard, Bugs don’t land nearby in force, for some reason.)
• Rest of cities on planet crushed by overwhelming amounts of bugs coming from Mycetic spores, Shitloads of explosive, corrosive, necrotic spores, etc.
• Transports vaped.
• IG huddle in enviro-domes, wait for inevitable Tyranid attack and pray. A lot.

Chapter 3 Preface:
“Still draw breath” section, unknown source.
(
“While obscene heretics’ hearts still beat, there can be no respite.
While faithless traitors still live, there can be no forgiveness.
While the enemies of the Emperor still draw breath, there can be no peace.”
)

Events:
• Big climactic battle! Shit flies everywhere, thousands die and blood goes all over the upholstery.
• Brave last stand of random IG in an atmosphere processor. (Obvious homage!) Or perhaps just a water purifier.
• Millions of Tyranids dead. (Hooray for fully-automatic firepower!)
• Last IG go down singing the Emperor’s praises.
• Epilogue: When more IG arrive, find that planet has been stripped bare and Hivefleet (just a splinter of the real Fleet.) has long moved on.
Commander of new IG regiment proposes sending down troops to investigate. Vetoed by Admiral in charge, planet is left quarantines and re
Timeline:
• Week 2: IG arrive
• Week 10: Move into action, all dispersed
• Week 11: Shadow in the Warp, first landings
• Week 15: Lictors playing around outside Prosperity.
• Week ?:Classified as a dead world, Pop. Zero.

Posted: 2005-01-24 07:40am
by Coalition
I like. The whole planet is doomed anyway, so you get to see people die well. Gives a good mindset of the Imperial forces, as they retreat around the power centers to keep their weapons charged, plus they have to hoard food to make sure it lasts, vs the civilians panicking and getting in the way.

Some civilians become the people you wish were going to live, others you are mad, because they just won't die, and keep shoving others to die for them.

Very good start. Needs more chapters.