Story help wanted
Posted: 2005-02-08 03:12pm
Short Story Series: Wanderers - A Hypocrites' War
I wrote this either in a fit of brilliance or sheer insanity last ... (*checks watch*) really early this morning. Not being a very good judge of my own work (that and I haven't written anything of note in a while), I wanted the opinion of others. Personally, I find it a painful read and I could probably add much more to it.
I wrote this either in a fit of brilliance or sheer insanity last ... (*checks watch*) really early this morning. Not being a very good judge of my own work (that and I haven't written anything of note in a while), I wanted the opinion of others. Personally, I find it a painful read and I could probably add much more to it.